/cyoa/ - Choose Your Own Adventure

>Here Forever

Fuck this world and everything it stands for. Only issue is the fact that it's still a computer simulation and will eventually end. At the very least computer AI can dictate that our perceived time is much slower compared to the outside world, so even a single minute could feel like years to us.

>Unknowing

This is the best, while Free Thinking is less cruel, it's not nearly as fun and if I am going to be there forever, I want the world to feel as real as possible.

>Beast folk - Kitsune

Always been partial to it

>Gender

Futa. If I am going to get dropped into fantasy land forever, I'm going to take my one opportunity to experience the full package. As for other character customization. I would be a silver haired Kitsune, human looking except for fox ears and tails and a more button nose and wisker like lines on my face. Green slit eyes and fangs. C cup breasts and a bubble butt, 6 inch dick, internal balls and standing about 6 foot.

>Class

Spell Blade, DPS

Drawbacks

Eager to please. This is going to be my bane, but it fits my play style.

Special Interests. My exiled brother has submitted to the corruption and wants me to join him in his corruption, so that we may corrupt the entire Kitsune nation.

Full sized party required. I think this would probably end up happening regardless, so it's fine.

Show off. I think this fits in well with my character. A bit Chuuni never hurt anyone.

Boons

Convenient backstory

I am the Princess of the Kitsune tribe of Beastkin. As heir to the throne, my brother was jealous and decided that he would get rid of me. The potion that he poured into my drink was suppose to make me fall into eternal slumber, turns out he picked the wrong potion from the alchemist and I grew a dick. My brother fled into the corrupted lands and to avenge our family honor for this shame he has caused, I joined the Adventures Guild toPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

>>12864

It's not a Tok CYOA though

Question, can I create my own companions? While some of the available ones are god-tier, most of the others are just shit, especially the Armor Smiths.

>>13454

Go for it. You are free.

>>13454

You could. Or you can choose from other people that have made a character i this thread.

>>13166

age: legal

hair: long

build: feminine

height: tall (5'9")

weight; toned-slim

bust: stacked

hips: slender

butt: average

skin: cream

style: casual or sportwear

housing: suburia

employement: scientist

parental Relationship: supporting

outer demeanor: friendly

inner personality: optimistic

sex drive: average

temperament: acceptance

major transformation: (12 points +1exhibitionism +1 wholesome)

-exhibitionism level 1

-cumslut level 1 (-1)

hypnotised level 1 (-1)

-freeuse level1 (-1)

-submission level 2 (-3)

-domination level 1 (-1)

-masochism level 1 (-1)

-wholesome level 1

special transformations: switch, masochist sub, free slut

minor transformation:

-deredere (-1)

-sham confidence (free)

-comedian (-1)

-hypersensitive (free)

-knocked-up notion (-1)

-sensory overload every time she ear me saying "cute" (-1)

delivering the dose: pavlovian

>Age

Illegal (6)

>Hair

Medium

>Build

Childish

>Height

Pygmy (3'5")

>Weight

Anorexic (35 lbs)

>Bust

Washboard

>Hips

Boxy

>Butt

Flat

>Skin Tone

Ivory

>Style

Casual

>Housing

Suburbia

>Employment

Artist

>Parental Relationship

Single Parent (1 free point to Major: Hypnotized)

>Outer Demeanor

Friendly (1 free point to Major: Exhibitionist)

>Inner Demeanor

Insecure (Free Minor Trait: Low Standards)

>Sex Drive

Innocent (Free Minor Trait: Pure)

>Temperament

Acceptance

Hypnotized 2 (10), Free Use 1 (9), Wholesome 3 (3)

Eggheaded (2), Low Standards (FREE), Pure (FREE)

Maidenhood (1), Drought (0)

Pavlovian

Time for my new daughter-wife

>Age: 18

>Hair: Rapunzel

>Build: Feminine

>Height: 4'5"

>Weight: Chubby

>Bust: Huge

>Hips: Childbearing

>Butt: Couch Cushions

>Skin Tone: Cream

>Style: Prim & Proper

>Housing: Penthouse

>Employment: Artist

>Parental Relationship: Supporting (+1 Wholesome)

>Outer Demeanour: Friendly (+1 Exhibitionism)

>Inner Personality: Insecure (+1 Low Standards)

>Sex Drive: Average (+1 Hypersensitivity)

>Temperament: Acceptance

>Major Transformation (12pts)

<Exhibitionism lvl 1 (free)

<Hypnotised lvl 3 (-6pts)

<Wholesome lvl 1 (free)

(lvl 3 hypnotism seems OP, you can use it to induce any other Major Transformation)

>Minor Transformation (6pts)

<Deredere (-1pts)

<Low Standards (free)

<Lactation (-1pts)

<Tented (-1pts)

<Hypersensitive (free)

<Waterfall (-1pts)

<Restrained (-1pts)

<Dakimakura (-1pts)

0pts

>Dosage: Pavlovian

While the pavlovian dosage does seem a little slow it's the most risk free option I can see there. As I mentioned above the hypnotism transformation is pretty much gamebreakingly OP, once you've bought level 3 every other transformation is something you can implement with a click of your fingers (or whatever her trigger is). If OP is the author then that's something to consider for V2.0 (if that's planned) although, given the low nPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

Stats:

>Me: Strength 2, Endurance 2, Intelligence 14, Dexterity 15, Nimbleness 8, Wealth 7, Wisdom 15, Diplomacy 10, Charisma 10

>Archnemesis: Strength 11, Endurance 9, Intelligence 9, Dexterity 5, Nimbleness 6, Wealth 11, Wisdom 8, Diplomacy 6, Charisma 11

Homeland:

>Me: The Tower That Could Have Been (2S, 1E, 5I, 5D, 2N, 3WE, 3WI, 3DI, 3CH)

>Archnemesis: Valmezian Empire (5S, 1E, 5I, 3D, 1N, 4WE, 3WI, 1DI, 4CH)

Reason:

>Me: Justice (5 WI, 5DI), Battle (5WI, 5CH)

>Archnemesis: Glory (5WE, 5DI), Battle (5WI, 5CH)

Titles (Start with 3 RP):

>Me (Spellcraft): Tactician (-3 RP, 1E, 1I, 1D), Deadeye (-3 RP, 3D), Acrobat (-3 RP, 3N), Miragecrafter (-2 RP, 1I, 2D), Sleuth (-3 RP, 1I, 2N), Tinkerer (-4 RP, 4D), Enigma (-4 RP, 6I), Overcomer (-1 RP, 1N), 5 Titles not of Specialization (4WE, 2WI, 2DI, 2CH)

>Archnemesis (Vigor): Elementalist (+2 RP, 3I), Titan (+3 RP, 2S, 1E), Aegis (+4 RP, 3E, 1N), Warhorse (+5 RP, 1E, 3N), Legend (+6 RP, 3S, 2E, 1D), 2 Titles of Specialization (2WE, 2CH)

Champions (start with 5 AP):

>Me: Veveve (Enigma, Miragecrafter, Evoker, free), Gart (Deadeye, Twinhandle, Trickster, -3 AP), Ilidar (Mender, Tactician, Miragecrafter, -2 AP), Bastara (Titan, Bulwark, Direfist, -3 AP), Lesseli (Elementalist, Grimcaller, Mender, -2 AP)

>Archnemesis: Ender (Evoker, Beastwhisperer, Berserker, free), Min'ara (Tactician, Sleuth, Sniper, +2 AP), Even (Tinkerer, Deadeye, Acrobat, +1 AP), Zarisi (Aegis, Bulwark, Slayer, +1 AP), Tirens (Trickster, Acrobat, Sleuth, +1 AP), Enemy (+1 all battle stats for Archnemesis)

I really enjoyed this one. Good job, OP.

Me: 8, 15, 15, 15, 15, 4, 9, 12, 15

Ekala, Summit of Progress

Homeland, Justice

Trickster, Tactician, Sleuth, Beastwhisperer, Tinkerer, Dreadsoul, Slayer, Titan, Acrobat, Aegis, Overcomer

Even, King Aluzar, Zarisi, Tirens, Azumias, Veveve, "Me"

Nemesis: 15, 8, 15, 6, 6, 14, 16, 8, 6

Sinara, the Empyrean Academy

Battle, Justice

Elementalist, Mender, Miragecrafter, Evoker, Grimcaller, Enigma, Direfist, Twinhandle, Legend, Berserker, Overwhelmer

Lesseli, Ilidar, Bastara, Min'ara, Ender

Poor Gart and his crew dont get to join in.

Homeland

Me: Nugh, the City of Lights (2 Str, 3 End, 2 Int, 4 Dex, 4 Nim, 5 Wlth, 2 Wis, 1 Dip, 4 Cha)

Nemesis: Armored Citadel of Rudana (4 Str, 6 End, 1 Int, 3 Dex, 1 Nim, 4 Wlth, 3 Wis, 2 Dip, 3 Cha)

Reason

Me: Battle & Duty (+5 Wis, +5 Wlth +10 Cha)

Nemesis: Homeland & Battle (+5 Dip, +5 Wis, +10 Cha)

Titles

Me

Slayer (+2 Str, +1 Nim) -3

Acrobat (+3 Nim) -3

Twinhandle (+1 Str, +1 Dex, +2 Nim) -4

Tactician (+1 End, +1 Int, +1 Dex) -2

Sleuth (+1 Int, +2 Nim) -2

Titan (+2 Str, +1 End) -3

Dreadsoul (+2 Str, +2 Int, +2 Dex) -4

Berserker (+6 Str) -5

Overcomer (+3 Nim) -3

5 non-specialist titles, +10 non-combat stats (+8 Wis, +7 Dip)

Nemesis

Slayer (+2 Str, +1 Nim) +3

Titan (+2 Str, +1 End) +2

Sniper (+2 Dex +1 Nim) +3

Trickster (+2 Dex +1 Nim) +2

Aegis (+3 End, +1 Nim) +5

Legend (+3 Str, +2 End, +1 Dex) +7

Warhorse (+1 End, +3 Nim) +4

4 Specialist titles, +8 non-combat stats (+4 Wlth, +4 Wis)

End Stats:

Me

15 Str, 5 End, 6 Int, 7 Dex, 15 Nim

10 Wlth, 15 Wis, 8 Dip, 14 Cha

Nemesis

11 Str, 13 End, 1 Int, 8 Dex, 8 Nim

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>>10928

>>Body

>Wife Defective, Daughter Perfect

>>Hygiene

>Wife Defective, Daughter Perfect

>>Intelligence

>Wife Defective, Daughter Perfect

>>Social Skills

>Wife Defective, Daughter Perfect

>>Sex Life

>Wife Perfect, Daughter Defective

>>Devotion

>Wife Perfect, Daughter Defective

>>Interests

>Wife Perfect, Daughter Defective

><SPECIAL SCENARIOS

>Everyone's Best Fried

>Sugar Momma

>>10928

I do not accept your offer

>>11295

Body

Wife-Perfect/Daughter-Defective, Honest being young looking will be an initial downside, but by the time she's 40 she will be thankful for it. Sucks about her insecurities

Hygiene

Wife-Defective/Daughter-Perfect. This is more for the sake of the daughter's downside being pretty rough. I can put up with a germaphobe.

Intelligence

Wife-Defective/Daughter-Perfect. Also again this is pretty rough for the daughter if she was defective. On the other hand the wife isn't really that bad at the very least if she's that much smarter we can be assured some horrible financial difficulty won't happen at home or something.

Social Skills

Wife-Defective/Daughter-Perfect. Ehhh, I don't really like to go party or do may social events anyway.

Sex Life

Wife-Defective/Daughter-Perfect. Honestly this is pretty rough if daughter is defective. Being pregnant in high school can destroy your future. Putting up with the wife who still even shares most of my fetishes is an easy trade off.

Devotion

Wife-Perfect/Daugher-defective. Well if she's Ph'd I don't see why she can't be the breadwinner. Seems great! I'll let my Wife deal with the rebellious daughter.

Interests

Wife-Perfect/Daughter-defective. Ehh the daugher can like whatever she likes, I'll get my Wife to cosplay with me.

I get Sugar Momma. Not bad!

>>13104

This right here tbh.

Body: Def Wife, Per Daught

Hygiene: PW, DD

Intelligence: DW, PD

Social: DW, PD

Sex Life: DW, PD

Devotion: PW, DD

Interests: PW, DD

Just cheat on the wife to make up for shit looks and sex, enough to make living with her bearable, and good daughter.

>>10310

I'd rather kill myself than live in this world.

Magitech is probably my favorite setting in any media, no exception here, really liked this one

Let me give a look on the Introduction first, it was straightforward and simple, like a introduction should be, but Hanna opening up and telling her traumas was kinda weird, especially in this world were people seem to not get attached to others, and cause she is a tsundere

Engineering

<Name your Slayer

cannot think of anything for now, but my name generator app proposed Karma, i think its cool,i will keep it

>Evolution

permanent power increase? sign me in, and as a bonus(or drawback) ESDF will watch over me.

this is essential for a long term strategy

>Blademaster

if ESDF wasn't wiped out yet, that means they already got enough defenses, and the only way of winning a war is attacking, so i will be the one who will do that

this make any battle that isn't long range so much easier that my kill count will go through the roof

>Ghost step

mobility will be the second core of my build(the first being murdering stuff) so the speed increase will be helpful

but the main thing here are those bursts of speed, making any maneuver way more effective and deadly

>Heavy impact(Technopathy)

even if i'm super fast and skilled, that is completely useless if i cannot hurt the enemy

this will make sure i can hurt any of them and even split some in half

>Advanced flight(Hazard)

more mobility is always welcome, not sure how this would interact with Ghost step, but even in worst of the cases, this will help a lot

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>>10747

Don't bother with suicide, I'm sure they'll enslave your soul too. Just use your garbage to break free of their retardery and crush them for their insolence.

>>13400

Fair. Seeing humans stoop so low makes me think the outsiders were probably onto something. I wouldn't mind becoming one of the fallen heroes myself it it meant being Goo proof to ESDF. Spite is one hell of a drug.

>>13271

you don't understand, you need to go back.

>>13270

>>13275

Considering you said "incel" I'd reckon you ought to go back. Maybe take him with you, I don't know, I didn't read that closely. Can't read posts from people from elsewhere, they're always shit and gay. Makes my eyes hurt.

>>6862

Not everyone worships dick only the chick, and what's wrong with that? That's the way it's supposed to be, the only good place for a woman is in the home at the call of her man

>>6862

So you're not a fan of maledom. Ok then.

Me, I'm not a fan of femdom. And guess what? I seem to see it prevalent everywhere (or rather, in way more CYOAs than I like).

The actual state of the things, of course, is that neither "maledom only" and "femdom only" are prevalent, most CYOAs tend do allow it either way; but things we find repulsive are easier to remember (and thus quickly become annoying) than those we're fine with. And also that "dom/sub" positions are extremes, while most CYOA authors tend to either "play the middle ground" or "cover as wide range as possible".

>character is a mary sue except for some unrelated quirk that won't ever come up like: doesnt like garlic bread

>Options don't interact with each other

>Whoever made it has a preference for high strength/agility/intelligence and it clearly bleeds through and makes all other choices unviable

>>1737

Is right, first time I got here I tought it would be like the books

>>13307

It's less about "delusions" and more about them going through very bad stuff (as in, their lives are fucked up) and seeking escapism in a made up "husbando". And apparently you're the only one who can really do anything about it. Which makes having to choose one a dick move at best cuz the other five will be "left for dead"

>>13340

Holy shit, sick burn dude. That'l teach me to have opinions on CYOAS and post my comments about them on the CYOA board. What the hell was I thinking? Truly I have been blind, but now I see.

I feel you hard, Lily. I want to turn down the offers for romance, pat her head, and say to arrange a group hang-out instead. I dunno if it's possible, but maybe we can all help each other a little.

Unless you plan to be a villain there is no reason not to pick Anti-Venom. I mean a weakness to anti-matter? Yeah you know what else has a weakness to anti-matter? Everyfukcingthing else. It like if I said I have weakness to being nuked in the face.

> Symbiote

Scorn: I'm a sucker for tech, and considering the bullshit that is Marvel Technology, I see Scorn and I making out like bandits before we dip for a bit.

> Abilities

Enhanced Shapeshifting: It's bullshit and can prove to be useful to counter harmful environments up to a certain point.

Resistant: Choosing Sound, the threat of fire can be easily dealt with via an inflamable, insulated skin.

[E] Resistant: Choosing Fire, all that stuff I said about inflamable skin? Disregard it.

[E] Tendrils: Wirecams or USB Cables or fun time stuff, shit's useful yo.

Regeneration: Absolutely necessary for what I'm planning.

> Buddies

Burglar: She's really useful and easy as all hell on the eyes, and maybe something a little more?

Reporter: Also extremely useful.

> Drawbacks

Menace!: Someone doesn't like me in the media apparently, but honestly, I'm not even trying to be all that visible.

Hunted: …what? You think that a techno-organic Symbiote was a natural mutation? A three-letter agency wants their toy back, and they're working with the Editor above to find me or my contacts.

> Plan

Really straight-forward to be quite honest, team up with Burglar to jack hi-tech stuff while getting Reporter-friend to keep her ear to the ground regarding anyone asking questions about me. After getting enough tech, start fabricating gadgets for Burglar-babe and Reporter-friend, keep them very well disguised while I work with Scorn to integrate the symbiote better into my human body, the endgame being that that Scorn would not be able to be torn off my body because its strands are everywhere in my body.

Only after a successful integration of the Symbiote do I begin planning to catch a ride off-world so I can find more glorious tech bullshit to merge with.

Symbiote: Scream

Clingy and female-restricted shapeshifting is fine. Anti-Venom is the objectively good choice, but someone else already did that and Scream will let me retire from super-shenanigans if I want. With Anti-Venom I'd dump the hero, keeping only the scientist companion.

Abilities: Resistant(Fire and Sonic), Regeneration, Invisible

Could be useful to my superhero companion to spy on badguys. I've already got a sonic weakness and it is horrible. Certain sounds and loud bass can fuck you up and sonic weapons are much harder to avoid than fire. Resistance or immunity to sonic is a must.

Companions: Hero, Scientist

The best guys. Superheros and scientists are awesome. Bro was tempting. Surrounding oneself with assholes is a mistake.

awful

>>13312

because it's clearly not a joke.

>>13309

isn't there like a 40 % chance i'll kill my dad in the anime if i'm the main character? in fact, wouldn't i get a hot chick? #2 it is.

bink because i was looking for this bread too

>>9654

ascended mortal (+40) , supreme being (-7), join a pantheon

power source : innate maximized (free), worship maximized, invocation, sacrifice maximized, souls maximized, artifact, temples maximized(free) . -3

domains : love(free) (friendship, familial, romance) and lust (free) (beauty, desire, pleasure), magic (divine spellcasting, metamagic, thwart anti-magic), creation (exnihilo, crafts, industrialization), technology (uplift, thwart anti-tech, mad science), psionics (psi power, mental protection, thwart anti-psi) -23 + order/light/war/knowledge with oldred renfay as companion

domain combos : magic and tech + magic and creation + tech and creation + psi and creation + creation and tech and psi + love and lust

greater power : create artifact rank2 (free)->rank3, creation rank2 (free)->rank3, divine spellcasting rank2 (free)->rank3, telepathy rank 1 (free)->rank2, telekinesis rank1 (free)->rank2, invulnerability rank3 (-3)->rankX, cursegiver rank1 (-1)->rank2, boongiver rank1 (-1)->rank2, teleportation rank1 (-1)->rank2

favored race : animinks (human like being who have the ears/tail/claws/fang of an animal, sometime they can even have scales/fur/feather on some body parts) average physique (high with oldred renfay as companion), average mind, high technology level, high magic affinity, high psionic affinity

priestood : no special requirement

how stingy ? : common / how demanding ? : spell

angels : gender(50% female, 40% male, 10%futa), appearance (beautiful), free will. Greater power : invulnerability rank1 (-1), divine blast rank1 (-1), creation rank1 (-1)

objectives : paragon, unite the pantheons

drawbacks : objectives +2

companions (10 charismas) : mychael(-2), yiing(-1), oldred renfay(-4), selera(-1), samael(-1), gabriel(-1)

lewd dlc : sex ritual maximized (-2)/hostmatron angel (-1), cosmic she-pantheon (-5)/lewd light power(-1), lewd order power (-1)

favored race dlc :

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Origin: Departed Soul (+12)

Divine Tier: Supreme Being (-7)

Path: Solo

Power Sources

Innate: Maximized

Worship: Shunned (+1)

Invocation: Normal

Sacrifice: Maximized

Souls: Shunned (+1)

Artifacts: Shunned (+1)

Temples: Shunned (+1)

Domains

Knowledge: Know Secrets, Hidden Knowledge (-2)

Darkness: Trickery, Void, Self (-3)

Greater Powers

Invulnerability Rank X (3)

Teleportation Rank X (3)

Superstrength Rank 2 (1)

Superspeed Rank 2 (1)

Divine Spellcasting Rank X (3)

Anti-Power Rank X (3)

Glorious Presence Rank 2 (1)

Know Secrets, Rank 3 (free)

Drawbacks

No Favored Race (+2)

No Angels (+3)

Hostile Pantheon (+4)

I'll probably wander the multiverse collecting knowledge and looking for interesting things. I don't have any worshipers or collect any souls, I try to stay as low profile as possible and keep on the move.

>>13207

>Based on my build

>it looks horrible when properly tessellated

Granted, it looked horrible to begin with, but damn

>>13207

I'm very impressed with what you managed to do with it, complaints about the map aside. You took my very badly thought out build and made something actually coherent out of it, so thank you.

>>13249

how professional

I find it odd that rabbits of all breed would have such long gestation periods. Otters having such greater reproductive abilities seems strange to me.

When I get some time with a spreadsheet I'll play out the simulation mode as that sounds fun

>>13169

Mode:

Reality

Communities:

Senzen Kingdom:

Half Income from produce*

Double income from selling breeds

12 buildings

Cannot build any extra buildings

Jobs:

Cartography:

60 G

Free Map*

Motivation:

Riches:

All produce earns +2G

All breeds sold earn +2G

Items:

Ivory Liquor*

Interests:

Vices:

All breeds will trust you more

Produce output -2G

Breed cost -2G

Rest*:

+2 Trust for breeds not assigned to a specific task

Knowledge*:

Increase trust by 2

Buildings:

12 freebies from communities

Wall

Home

10 Ponds (+60 aquatic space)

Breeds:

Aquatic:

60 Otters (Base price 3, Reduce by 2 for Interests: Vices, Final price 1G each)

Total price: 60

Devil Breed:

Lust Devil:

Double the children

Half the time of pregnancy

Sold progeny +1G

The Plan:

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>>13169

Community: serrania (1extra job, 1extra interest)

job: cartography (60G, map), delving(40G, revelatory mirror)

motivation: friendship : the girl is a silver dragon breed

(100G)

items: map (free), old weaponry, ivory liquor (free)

interests:

-half-breeds (maturity 2 years earlier, +1 trust)

-knowledge (+2 trust)

-fighting (+1 trained breed's trust)

-farming (+1 produce output, +1 produce cost)

buildings: (100+40=140G)

barn (6 mammal breeds) (-4,5G) : cow (-0,5G), goat (-0G), stallion(-0,5G), fox(-2G), rabbit(-0G), rabbit(-0G) (assigned to tavern)

pond (6 aquatic breeds) (-4,5G) : otter (-1) (assigned to tavern), frog (-1,5G) (assigned to brothel), salmon(-1G), squid(-1G), kraken (-7G)

garden (6 vegetal breeds) (-2,25G) : seaweed (-0G), lilly (-0G), berry bush (-2G), cactus(-1G), alraune(-3G), black lotus (-8)

aviary (6 avian breeds) (-2,25G) : chicken (-1G), magpie (-0G), sparrow (-0G), owl (-2G)

crypt (5 incorporeal breeds) (-3,75G) : jelly (-2G), jelly(-2G) (assigned to brothel), silver slime (-4G)

arcaneum (5 anthropic breeds) (-3,75G) : fairy (-2G), goblin (-2G) (assigned to tavern), green oni (-4G), gargoyle (-3G), succubus (-5G) (assigned to brothel)

tower (4 draconic breeds) (-3G) : salamander(-4,5G), hydra (-10G), royal dragon (-10G)

home: tavern (+2G/assigned breed) (-3,75G)

brothel (+4G/assigned breed) (-6G)

farm: Walls (-11,25G), marketplace (+50% tavern and brothel income) (-15G)

Greed devil

Disaster : collector (i have the old weaponry so i don’t need to worry about this)

i will upgrade my farm with what i earn from years to years

>>13080

Waifu CYOAs are shit. They're plainly just simplifications of the "companions" section of CYOAs which I might add generally are also simple and worthless. I know I generally don't even bother looking at those (and I normally don't bother reading these either). Those normally have at least ten girls though, this has only two and neither are particularly interesting or useful.

>>13083

Minion is a fine word. Normalfags and hypersensitive niggers might immediately think of those cancer spongebobs but the word is perfectly adequate. That's like saying you shouldn't call your servants "servants" because phone games, "thralls" because warcraft, "pawns" because games and "slaves" because niggers. I'm particularly fond of "thralls" myself, but I like to rotate my titles.

>>13085

>Minion is a fine word. Normalfags and hypersensitive niggers might immediately think of those cancer spongebobs but the word is perfectly adequate. That's like saying you shouldn't call your servants "servants" because phone games, "thralls" because warcraft, "pawns" because games and "slaves" because niggers. I'm particularly fond of "thralls" myself, but I like to rotate my titles.

The problem isn't the word itself. The problem is that there is no reference point to narrow down what the player is supposed to be thinking of. So when the word 'refugee' or 'minion' is the only thing you have to go on you have a problem since the person reading it is has no easy pathway to understand what the story teller means but is forced to consider stupid possibilities instead. You want the player to have an easy time imagining things, not a hard time. So you need to eliminate stupid possibilities.

Even just an image to denote what is actually being talked about or a short description is enough to remove the confusion. There is no problem with describing something that calls on some fantasy or another world as long as it is consistent with the world being described. A goblin like thrall or a hobbit servant, you will probably be thinking of Lord of the Rings or WoW. That's not a problem if it fits the world. I have a clear image of what a hobbit servant is. I don't know what a "servant" is. There needs to be context.

Snow Miser seems pretty chill.

>>13085

>>13083

>>13089

>>13105

>>13081

>>13082

Thank you all for your feedback.

I didn't want to be too autistic about the world setting. But I suppose as a consequence, being too vague leaves too much unexplained.

>reddit-tier cuck psyop

That certainly wasn't the intention. When I was writing this, I was thinking about a close friend who I think also deserves companionship.

I am also not polygamist. So the idea was to match two guys who are compatible as friends with two girls who are compatible as sisters.

I think it goes well within the "spirit of Christmas" to share joy in the holidays with you and your kin, but I think I can see how the writing can be interpreted differently.

It's true that "refugee" without much context can spark images of sand niggers being given a free lunch, but what I had in mind were benign -albeit somewhat odd- beings from alternate realms that found their way to Earth through dimensional tears after they were forced out by [insert evil and/or hungry things here].

Merry Christmas, and happy new waifus>>13082

>>9441

>Haven't seen sister in a decade

>Don't even know if she's alive or dead

Shit man, I don't know that feel but it hurts anyway.