/cyoa/ - Choose Your Own Adventure★

>>14391

>>14392

>>14393

>>14394

Companions are still largely pointless

Quests are still pointless

The angel is still pointless

The homestuck crossover is tacky but that setting's hope/rage aspects do make more sense than your creation/destruction ones. You should replace those.

Why are there so few evil companions? Most of these people seem to share almost the exact same code of ethics.

It would make more sense to make increasing your strength and speed divine powers instead of making you buy an aspect to increase them.

Stealing characters from other settings and then slightly tweaking them and presenting them as oc is very offputting.

Where's the voidship CYOA tho

Rolled 6, 6, 3 = 15 (3d6)

>>5678 (OP)

>normal mode (3:0:0:0)

As an aside: only fetish cyoas have this, when non-lewd cyoas have modes it's for different themes but the sexy cyoa culture has for some reason diverged to commonly have different 'difficulties', why do you think that is?

>Jetsun, still in love (prestige) (4:2:2:-3)

>Park (wealth) (7:0:3:-4)

>Sui (cuckoldress) (8:-1:0:1)

>Zhang (13:-3:0:-1)

I swear I don't have a type, I'm just building wealth and dumping virility and the korean girls are consistently the best option for that

>Isabel (raised her right, influence) (12:0:3:-5)

I'm thinking long term. I want to create a dynasty, so my heir is going to be a center player in this build

>dimbo (12:1:3:-4)

>Bisexual (dimbo influence/virility) (12:-1:3:-1)

>diabolical intelligence (isabel) (13:-2:3:-1)

>all my friends (park) (13:-1:3:-1)

>handpicked spouse (isabel) (13:2:1:-1)

>Couture investments (park) (12:2:3:-1)

>diabolical intelligence (zhang) (15:2:3:-3)

>all of my friends (isabel) (15:1:3:-1)

>leveraged buyout x2 (23:-1:-1:-1)

>high frequency trading (26:0:-3:-2)

>working from home (influence) (26:-2:0:-2)

>company jet (wealth) (23:0:0:0)

>conspicuous consumption

>>11587

is this a newer version?

>>11589

>small update.

>>11346 (OP)

>Background

Military, Navy

>Appearance

Somewhere between chubby and healthy

>Personality

Content, energetic, mean spirited, modest, flirty

>The cause

Tomb raid, my theory is that the artifacts chose to give her the ability to make the earth and everything on it to lose volume, although she isn't aware of it. Also the world loses volue at an unnoticale scale, so scientists all assume she's just growing.

>Growth traits

Emotional trigger mixed with arousing growth, whenever she gets aroused she grows, or rather the world shrinks

>New size

Greek imagination

>Size traits

One of a kind, conservative growth, she unconsciously decides that her clothes shouldn't shrink.

>Social reaction

Rejected and later segregated

>The meeting

Happily employed, escape from isolation

>Perks

Supernatural senses

>Drawbacks

Hunted

>Relationship

Equal partnership

Is there any point in investing into money perks and progress if you take the bicycle and plan to abandon earth ASAP? I have a feeling that the money's only good on earth and there's no point in letting earth progress if you're just gonna fuck off at the start of every week.

Also I thought this was going to end with the vacation narrator being evil or something. No one talks like that unless they're going to pull a big evil reveal at the end.

>>16485

>just gonna fuck off at the start of every week.

Accommodations level 0 lets you start every weak where you happen to be or at your house. You don't even need to start the week on Earth.

>going to end with the vacation narrator being evil

It did. At the beginning of page 2 another narrator tried to interfere, but was gotten rid of and probably killed. Then he started going crazier and breaking more rules. It is unlikely this is going to end well.

>>14606

>what do anons think

for you to define "pozzed" for one, heard that term thrown around without a solid definition

>lust

>suite

fun CYOA, good job fam.

>>14576 (OP)

Either the lust dungeon or the violence inn because they are probably the safest place to store my stuff

>Limbo.

>Treehouse

>>14758

Me too bud, stole my post lol

Small suggestion: Since this is mostly a comfy CYOA, I think you should make it clear that you can't become permanently trapped or lost. For example, the torture for Lust says the winds might blow you away. I think it would be good to add a line that says something like "Getting blown away isn't that big a deal, but you'll probably have to wait an hour or so for someone to pick you up and take you back." Another thing is the description for Vlad. I'd make it clear that even if he does impale you, something will happen to make sure it doesn't last long, let alone for eternity. In the alternative afterlife section, it would be better if getting eaten by Anubis means you get reincarnated. I'd personally also like it if Cessation wasn't there at all, because I really don't like even the idea that souls could be destroyed. If I'm trying to have fun with CYOA-assisted imagination, it kind of ruins the mood for me to know that soul destruction or eternal suffering are even possible in this universe.

>>13432

I don't understand why you'd hearken back to Latin with your "i.e.", spend all that time writing all those words, reference complicated things like agency and yet completely fail to write out the word "though". There's evidence here that you've got more than two neurons, there's evidence that you're not just some knuckle-dragging nigger, yet you choose to use their butchery of the English language instead of writing three more letters and completing the fucking word.

I do not understand this strange accent of yours.

>>13636

Each drawback is worth THREE bonuses, one extra perk, or one level of penance/indulgence. You can buy a total of 8 more bonuses, or two bonuses and 2 Extras

>battle

Level 3 penance

Level 3 indulgence

>bonuses

Sex ratio (50/50)

HUD

Infinite canteen

Tech level (WW2)

Healing hands

7/10

>adjectives

Tall, muscular, fast, Herculean, dexterous, indefatigable, perceptive, precise, hardened, energetic.

>mess with

Repeat offender, double

This isn't a punishment at all!

Interesting

>>16211 (OP)

https://shamik.ooo/nya/740957?last=100#p864203

>>16368 (OP)

What's the name for the "Utilitarian" Interior aesthetic? I've seen it before, but I can't find more of it. And no, searching "Utilitarian decor" doesn't work.

>>16368 (OP)

Theme: Nostalgia

Ship: Time Warper

Interior: Worn In And Comfy

Facilities:

Plant Garden Tier I

Aquarium Tier I

Expanded Cabin Tier I

Medical Lab Tier I

Bathing Amenities Tier I

Library Tier I

Recreational (Games)

Crew Quarters (Human)

Training Complex Tier I

Special Ship Features:

Nanorobot A.R. Tier II

A.I. Companion Tier I

Phasal Transporter Tier I

Synthetic Android Tier II

A Loving Being (Pet Goldfish)

Wide Bridge Windows

Upgraded EVA Suit

Holographic Map

Wonders

Planetary Events

Natural Wonders

Alien Creatures

Stellar Phenomena

Earth

>>14212

Thank you, pal

>>14218

I went to high school in Kennewick WA, maybe we know each other

>>14316

"Medposting" has never been funny. It's just another unfunny forced meme in a line of unfunny forced memes.

>>14316

>not liking horse eyeballs

patrician taste

>>16406 (OP)

Pleasure world

Tropical/Oceanic

>The world is covered in Islands, with the tropics having the biggest and greatest number of islands.

Commercial Dockyards

Astropathic Relay

Archeotech Installation

Human Piracy

Eldar Waifu

>>16406 (OP)

>Planet type and environment

Agri world and Oceanic

The world is entirely water, with giant ship cities floating across the surface. Smaller skimmer ships dart around the ship cities collecting the nomnom algae that may not be super tasty but is super healthy and energy dense. A handful can keep a man feeling full for a whole day.

>features

resource surplus (duh)

military orbitals

Astartes homeworld (the Emperor's Platypi are masters of semi-aquatic combat)

>problems

piracy, errybody wants out nomnoms

>waifu

administrator waifu can help with the paperwork and is low maintenance