/cyoa/ - Choose Your Own Adventure

>>15102

A person, unless your obsession is the idea of waifus rather than a specific one. If your waifu is the literal personification of a concept then I could see an argument for either.

>>15673

But then they wouldn't be obsessed with the same person.

>>15675

Wrong. Each power costs one Power Point. It explicitly says so in the paragraph you skimmed over. Strength III would cost 3 points, one for each tier.

Obsession

Ideal – Perfection

Trials

Body - I am God

Perception – I am God

Peers- I am God

Shame - I am God

Health – I am God

Powers

Body - III Strength, III Speed, III Durability, III Endurance, III Regeneration, III Awareness, III Energy, III ESP, III Intelligence = II Technology, III Charisma, III Size

III Luck

Special: God can fly

I am God.

Yes!

Singular!

There is no other God but me!!!

> Obsession: An Idea

Total equality, existence without hierarchy or the need for anyone to subjugate anyone else. Liberation from identity to live for the relationship.

> Trials

< The Heart

Freedom from hierarchy and identity means giving up the need to see it from my own point of view. That means letting passion go, as anything I want will be opposed by someone else.

< The Body

A real understanding of the plurality of experience is marred by the fact that I only have one body. Giving that up means that every now and again I'll wake up in a new one, often varying widely in appearance, ability, etc. Preferences can influence it, so I can stay longer in bodies I like and shorter in those I don't, but even these preferences will dissolve with time and experience. Dying in one of them means dying for real, although I'm guaranteed to not die of some random disease the body I end up in has (I am not guaranteed to not feel pretty extreme discomfort from one however). I can choose where I'll wake up like this.

< Sex

Required by the previous, considering I can't choose the sex of the body I'll wake up in.

< The Mind

Waking up in different bodies and moving towards dissolving the ego boundary is good for the mind, but probably not in a way that's immediately obvious. Confusion is natural but possibly manageable. Similarly, my need to truly know the perspective of everyone is changed by only knowing one mind. My personality will be plastic.

< The Fame

Someone who has no set identity, no set body, no set personality is hard to pin down.

> Powers

< Intelligence 3

Without this I'm pretty much fucked. Charisma is probably better but no one will remember me anyway. With this I might be able to implement something useful. Since my mind changes often, the Post too long. Click here to view the full text.

>>15712

Interesting. Because things like skills and years of life become tradable commodities with those powers, they could be seen as part of your hoard for your perk.

>>15714

And this is the same thing on steroids. The question here is, with invest, what's the rate? Is it worth it to put a year of your life in investment and take it out a year later? How much more than a year will you have to replace that year you spent waiting? I suppose it doesn't matter if you can re-invest.

And let's say you go to an aging doctor and buy his medical knowledge for a few more years, then invest it. Take it out after (what, five years? a decade?) and you could cure cancer. Invest a neurologist's knowledge for a century and the secret to uploading consciousness is yours. Invest the knowledge of a particle physicist for a millennium or two and what, are you god now? Einstein is often quoted as saying the most powerful force in the universe is compound interest.

Deal/SkillPerm + Invest is OP tier. Everything else is flavor.

>>15704

This is clearly the superior build, event with 10 trillion debt which gives a lot more humans to extend your power to and faster rate with invest, the invest power alone is enough to become debt-free. Turn stones in into pure diamonds or other more valuable minerals. Turn your computer overnight into a super-super-super-super-super-computer. I wonder what will happen if you use it on yourself, pickpocket might become a useless perk.

With the deal/wager + large project powers you can have a lot of people give up their own agency while increasing their stats.

The snowball starts rolling.

>>15723

That's what I am getting at with investing in yourself, with 1000x+ rate. Picketing becomes obsolete with your xxxxIQ

>>15722

Hordekeeper handles the eternal youth just fine. Deal+Sleepless provides an unlimited, highly valued commodity to trade.

>>15725

True, but hoardkeeper requires you to sleep on a pile of physical valuables to stop aging. It's nice to have a fallback should you not want to be tied to that. Also, "youth" and "years of life" are slightly different commodities. Years of life would be just that, how many years you have until your death by whatever means fate has in store for you, be it a natural death in your old age or getting street pizza'd by a bus with no brakes a decade from now. "Youth" covers your natural physical age. If you buy more years of life, then fate will work out that you simply live longer, even if it has to go reverse-Final-Destination and provide a string of coincidences to do it. With hoardkeeper's youth, you can still be killed if fate has you scheduled. So you'll also still want to be investing that time.

>>15358

Well I didn't ask for examples of other weird fetishes but thanks anyway.

>>15338

>>15349

>>15358

Considering almost all pictures show giantess, it's safe to say this CYOA is mainly meant for macrophilia/microphilia fetishists. However that doesn't mean only fetishists can find interest in it.

Just remove all pictures, or replace all the giant girls by trolls, dragons, actual kaijus, giant mecha, giant golems, living planets, lovecraft gods or any giant entities in mainstream works (and maybe rephrase a bit some texts too). You end up with a decent no-fetishist SFW "power oriented" CYOA (or actually, no more fetishist than any other CYOA, since anything can be a fetish).

>>15338

>what are you supposed to do with that power?

Play god, Build galaxies, civilisation however you see fit. Make an entirely edible star system for all I care. With all that power you could literally do anything.

>>15292

ascension: deity

vessel: superorganism

appearance:

gender look: androgynous

face type: anthropomorphic

body look: mixed -50% (intimidating and soothing)

eye number: 3

mouth number: one mouthed

dentition: teeth

skin: smooth, fur (legs, forearms, head),

physiology: biped

limbs: handA, pawA o(n lower body as legs), spear A, wingA

extras: longue tongue, retractable (spear A, armor, spike), multiple tails

synthesis: material synthesis (digestion, thermal, nuclear, omnivore), energetic synthesis (photosynthesis)

reproduction:

gender: hermaphrodite

birth type: viviparous

compatibility: omniprocreant, intermetric

birth dev: altricial

maturation: average growing

birth size: small newborn

interaction:

detection: emr vision, sound hearing, chemical detection

communication: physical voice, magical voice, universal language, omniglot

contact: perfect dexterity

sens enhancement: wide range,

special abilities: ageless, inner awareness, avatar, chromatomorph,lucky

competences:

physical skills: st lv2+1, sp lv2, int lv2, reg lv3+1, magic lv3, focus lv3, range lv3, weaponry lv3

resistances: acid, radiation

natural weapon: mystic eye

fluids effects: soporific, aphrodisiac, therapeuthic,nutricious

magical powers: kinesis (levitation, density manip), alchemy (momecular manip, atomic manip, nucleon manip), space time (space manip, time manip, gravity manip), ether (anti-magic, barrier, divination), miracle (healPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

>>15292

Trying for a non-fetish build, since that sort of thing doesn't really appeal to me.

>ASCENSION

Diminutive Level; Microorganism

Scale: 0.000075 AL

10 SP

40 MP

>VESSEL

Artificial; Mecha

Sleep Mode

Ageless

Nuclear

EMR Vision

Armor

Sound Hearing 50% off

Habitable 50% off

Electrosynthesis 50% off

1 Natural Weapon 50% off

1 Sense Enhancement 50% off

Perfect Dexterity 50% off

Inner Awareness 50% off

EMR Communication 50% off

+1 Speed

+1 Intelligence

No Gender (Mandatory)

8 BP

>APPEARANCE

Gender Looks: Feminine

Face Type: Anthropomorphic

Body Looks: Cute -1 BP

Eye Number: Paired

Mouth Number: One-Mouthed

Dentition: Teeth

Skin: Smooth, Fur, Cloth -2 BP (It looks and behaves perfectly like human skin, hair, and clothing, but it's all nanotechnology and metamaterial composites. The clothing is comfy, but the fabric is futuristic)

Physiology: Biped

Limbs: 2 hands, and 2 paws as legs -1 BP

>SYNTHESIS

Material Synthesis: Nuclear

Energetic Synthesis: Electrosynthesis -1 SP

>REPRODUCTION

Gender: No Gender

Birth Type: Viviparous

Compatibility: Interracial

Birth Development: Precocial

Prep:

>Messy sex mod

>Orgasmic multipler

>Luxury food codes

>BDSM codes

Crew

>Second Officer: Rodger Kean

>Engineer:Shaniah McBrider

>Doctor: Sarah Reese

>Navigator: Susan Conner

>Geologist: Samantha Dee

>Security Officer: James Braun

>>15035

>John Sommerset

RED FLAG RED FLAG

NO SPACE FOR YOU

>>15035

Invest it all.

Sally Greene

Alexis

Sally Norman

Sarah

Elisabeth Cooper

April Webb

Cassandra Fleur

>>15035

2500

partial body mod (9inches penis, balls, 34D boobs, vagina) -300

performance enhancer -400

orgasmic multiplier -300

luxury food codes -100

decadent dessert codes -100

erotic codes -400

B.D.S.M. codes -500

sexy clothing codes -300

Hollywood Library -100

crew:

second officer: sally greene

engineer: sally norman

doctor: sarah reese

Navigator: elizabeth cooper

geologist: april webb, Samantha dee

security officer: valery smith, sarah fox

This cyoa is way too fucking gay. Your choice for first officer are a dickgirl, a dude, a tranny (listed as female for some fucking reason), a girl that wants to stick shit up your ass and only one actual acceptable female. I didn't read further but I'm guessing it doesn't get better.

>>15391

body:

gender: futanari

height: 2.5 meters

physique: bulky

skin: grey

tusk: short

hair: red

hairstyle: long

age: Young

tits: large

ass: large

genitals: wide wet vagina and 20 cm penis

location: chengshi city

clan: picketfence (amuhcireb)

musk: elves, human, werekin

perversions: eye candy, measuring up, money maker, neat freak, pass it on, sexual Healing,

hunter: feri'feri

musk ork ox

intake: anal

>>15683

>unreadable, zie zer hir are not real words

It took me a while to figure out that these aren't typos but actually the way those snowflakes demand to be called

>>15662

I think you've misunderstood how combat works. You don't fight a series of rounds, either the heroine is defeated in the first round, or the hazard is. Cynieli kills you, taking 12 damage in the process. You don't get to roll again.

>>15665

I just realized that I was supposed to add 2 to all stats to Alice, because she is good aligned. So she barely succeeds her will check. This is the new unfortunate outcome for her.

Alice

Moves to: Room #1

Intelligence Check: 1d6+8=12 (Success)

Will Check: 1d6+12-1=14 (Success)

-9 Int, -4 Will, -2 Dex

Intelligence Check: 1d6-1=5 (Success)

+1 Will

Moves to: Room #4

Moves to: Room #6

Moves to: Throne Room

Alice kills me

Phylactery Intelligence Check: 1d6-1=1 (Fail)

Alice Captured

Alice get! It's too bad she is a bimbo now. I've ruined one of the best girls :X

>>15513

This was really good. I feel like with more units and a bit of balancing, an actual video game could be made of this.

>>15627

Definitely going to want to update my build >>10267. I can get enough points from the DLC to buy Planeswalker if I want it, but I'm still debating whether it might be better to put those points into something more useful for the main world instead.

>>15628

>>10267

Female

Fairy

>Mage

Elementalism (water)

High Elementalism (Wind)

Nature Magic

Shapeshift

Arcane Rituals

Arcanize

>Perks

Planeswalker

Silver Tongue

Magic Resistance

Magic Immunity

Elemental Resistance (Water)

Elemental Immunity

Perfect Body

Perfect Memory

Starting Gear

>Drawbacks

Increased Libido

Lightweight

<Reincarnation

<Oathbound

>Death

Rewind Time

Reset

>The World

Lewd Fauna

Lewd Flora

Lewd Traps

Monster Girls

Last Bastion

Slavery

Magocracy

Lewd Monsters

<Demonic Incursion

<Eldritch Cults

<Inquisition

<Faerie Courts

>Mission

Greatest Hero

>Companions

Bramble (ranged DPS)

Elenwen (Melee DPS)

Iridi (Support Magic)

Cassandra (Anti-mage)

Patricia (healer)

Jeanette (tank)

>RivaPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

Race: Dranei (Should probably cost a bit more since they're superior physically and magically without any drawbacks)

Class: Mage

Talents: Arcane Rituals, Nature Magic

Perks: Gamer's Sight, Seeker's Map, Bag of Holding, Luck, Way Stones, Profession - Enchanting, Mount/Monstrous Mount - Gryphon, Legendary Weapon, Perfect Memory

Legendary Weapon: Spear of Jorun - This legendary artefact acts both as a polearm and a magical staff. Intricately crafted from the finest materials, it is surprisingly light for a weapon of its size. As a spear, its ornate double-edged blade is capable of penetrating armor far better than any mundane weapon, but its true power lies in its magical properties. In addition to acting as a focus for normal spellcasting, it can draw on the wielder's mana reserves to manipulate objects telekinetically or fire beams of raw arcane energy in the direction the spear is pointed. These powers can be manifested as powerful or weak as the wielder wishes, limited only by their total mana reserves. The butt of the spear is an intricately ornamented silver phallus which can be used as a blunt weapon or a dildo. The phallus responds to sexual stimulation and produces a metallic fluid upon ejaculating which will fully restore the user's mana when ingested or otherwise deposited into the body. However, fucking the dildo to completion is very physically tiring and takes time and concentration.

Drawbacks: None

Death: Plot Armor (Upgraded)

World: Lewd Traps (Oh myyy), Lewd Puzzles, Lewd Monsters

Mission: The Greatest Hero

Companions: Sinrith the Assassin, Sigrid the Berserker, Claire the Knight

Rival: Meredith

>>15647

Gender: Male. Should have specified that, I guess.

>>15647

>Race: Dranei (Should probably cost a bit more since they're superior physically and magically without any drawbacks)

Basically all the default races are straight upgrades over human, which is why they all have a 5 cost. Draenei don't have everything though. They have above average strength and mana reserves, but they don't have the extreme strength of an orc or an elf's special magical talent, for instance. Higher reserves is just 1/3rd of the overall picture (reserves, regeneration, usage).

>>15422

Except you, for resurrecting this shit thread. Honestly you make me want to spam the board to wipe this from the face of the earth.

>>2331

Brat. Old enough, but acts like a kid.

>>2368

For a better understanding.

College student

Shorty

Regular Weight

Bee stings

Average behind

Cute

Pixie cut

Pale

Sexual Predator

Erratically Dom

Possessive-Charismatic-Tomboy-Klutz-Pervert-Romantic-Mean Spirited-Needy-Hygiene Averse-Aggressive

Cuddling-Bondage-Pet Play-CFNM-Feet-Lewd Roleplay

Loves movies, Videogames, writing, hiking and cooking. Glasses, sickly,

>>5572

1. Skye the Squid.

2. Timeline 144

3. #635

>>5573

Taliana

Elise

>>2368

Age: Christmas Cake

Size: Equal Height

Build: Athletic

Breasts: Bee stings

Butt: Child Bearing

Face: Noble

Hair: Long and Straight

Skin: Pale

Sex Drive: Receptive

Romantic Attitude: Erratically Dom

Personality: Generous, Feminine, Bant-Master, Cunning, Motherly, Neat Freak

Fetishes: Cuddling x3, Toys, Bondage, Lewd Roleplay x3, Rape-Play x3

Hobbies: Video games, Hunting, Shooting, Computer, Cooking

Extra: Piercing (Belly Button), Glasses, Addict (Marijuana, Psilocybin Mushrooms)

>>15609

i can just tell how autistic you are.

>>15609

Would be better if it was more explicitly related to the image.

>>15622

I actually used Lightning McQueen.png intstead of Lightning.png by mistake but it was funny so I left it

>>15637

Fair enough

pornography cyoas are shit. Go back to reddit.

>>15554

What do you mean this isn't reddit?

I mean, porn shit is 90% of the board, often the entirety of the front page. How can he go back to reddit if he is already there?

>>15590

>>15591

I fail to see the humor in saying this place is reddit when it isn't. Is it just to justify your own lousy carcass being here? That wouldn't be humorous but more a snarky defense mechanism. It still wouldn't be amusing.

Sorry If I kind of fucked up the order.

>>15502

Interesting read. I chose Inu to gather information on space travel.

>>15580

You mean to say, you blindly choose "Inu" and you happen to like some of the effects. That is this author's way. You're meant to blindly stumble into a non-choice and suffer for it.

Oh well

>>15582

I remember choosing in this CYOA blindly the first time and getting Itima, it was a bittersweet decision, on one hand they appear to be the most powerful of the stones, on the other you are forever a NEET

>>15555

Nice quads and good laughs nya~

>>15566

Yes please

>>15383

lage dick (13 inches)

sexual sustenance

sexual immortality

musculature

hyperfertility

pixieogamy

harem

pixies: titania, breena, carlina, ellette, gelsey, marigold, naida, rhoslyn, zuzanna, sebille, dariyah

mundane word+normality charm

dowry: treasure

>>15383

<Large dick 13 inches whew

>+2 Fairies

<Sexual Sustenance

<Sexual Immortality

<Ultra Boobs/Ass/Curvaceousness/Strength

<Hyper-fertility

<Stretchy

>-1 Fairy

<7 Fairies

Titania

Alvarie

Breena

Nadia

Rhoslyn

Dariyah

Zuzanna

Lamp

…

Nya~?

https://meguca.org/nya/catalog

do i have to play a blue haired black feminist by the name of tykeesha?

>>15412

Actual gayest fucking thing on this board.>>15412

>>15412

>LOOK!

>I put all my favourite games, tv shows, films, and comics in one CYOA!

>I think all these things are great by themselves, and therefore they must be even better in combination!

If this is your first project ignore the snark there OP, but even ignoring the subject matter some bad choices for an 8chan cyoa as have been covered already you've just set the scope of this far too wide, there isn't a story or setting here, there isn't even an interesting mechanic or concept here. Take a look at some of the other CYOAs on this board to get a better idea for your next attempt. If you can't be bothered with that then at least try to stay focused on a single thing for round 2.

The creator of this definitely has some creative skill, but the work itself is just so unfocused. Make it easy for yourself, pick one specific theme and stick to it. Tighter focus, better end result.

>>15412

This is actually the worst CYOA on this board, even below the cuckshit. I have made shitpost CYOAs better than this. Even the "which awoo wud u headpat" cyoa is better.

Pointers to the OP:

1) Focus on one thing and only one thing. If you'd picked *one* of these things and improved upon it, you'd have a passable CYOA

2) Try to follow the rough format of "Intro, things to buy, drawbacks/goals".

3) When creating fiction, consider your audience. You've posted this on 8chan, which is known for having sympathies with both Nazis and Confederates. You've made the implicit assumption that we'd want to go back and stop Nazis and Confederates, which makes us dislike your CYOA more. You belong somewhere more like reddit.

4) A "fuck it, make up your own shit" option is generally considered lazy and distasteful. It means that either you're not trying to balance at all or you're underestimating your audience's creativity.

5) Black background and white text is an OK start. You have at least succeeded in making your CYOA readable. That's not enough to earn points, but I didn't want you leaving thinking that this was worthy of being posted as a "this is how you should never do a cyoa" example.

>>15426

I must disagree, the creator has not displayed reasonable creative skill. They have a lot of development to go through.

>>12963

>>12964

Ridiculous. If every single thing on the planet was red, you'd get sick of red. Doesn't matter if you like it. A million shades of red are still red. When your choices are "choose something red, or don't choose anything" you're absolutely right - you're not being "force fed" anything, but your choices are RED OR NOTHING. If you're trying to say "there isn't even that many pornographic CYOAs" you're a fucking lunatic. They make up the majority of the front page the majority of the time.