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0564cc  No.338[Reply]

For seven years our empires favourite son

has turned from the light of our sovereign goals

two hundred years work has become undone

the forces are mighty under traitor control

half of the legions

third of the guard

uncounted regions

no person unscarred

a deadly path home

no resolution

the void they roam

no absolution

at Saturn a monstrous fleet

our brothers surrender their lives

and suffer certain defeat

by the thousands they died

the fateful news relayed

the traitors are coming

their fleet is barely delayed

no victory forthcoming

from above Emperor's speech

defend the palace

of our lord's fury teach

hearts formed of malice

from orbit canons reach

and scar the holy surface

end this madness the subjects beseech

of all the cruelty this is the furthest

the forces of greed have corrupted their souls

the enemy has landed

and the virtues they used to extol

now lie abandoned

the Primarchs they stand and with us hold the line

side by side Astartes and man

sworn by oath, loyalty enshrined

with our bodies we form a dam

fifty-five days

no ammo, no food

commanders survey

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0564cc  No.339

>>338

>Some 40k poetry

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a6e348  No.48[Reply]

PDF made from the thread that got lots of attention on /gamergate/ and /po/. Interesting stuff. Definitely thought-provoking, even if you don't agree with the conclusions.

I'd like to see an expanded commentary on this with additional links to further reading on some of the subjects the OP alludes to.

Here is the post, with a few edits for clarification and one of the best comments in the /pol/ thread included; along with the sources.

IF we ever have a journal or anything like that I think we should include this article along with some analysis and further links provided by other anons.
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a6e348  No.49

File: 1423380319824.pdf (778.4 KB, geopolitics_censorship_gam….pdf)

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a6e348  No.337

This is a pretty good PDF.

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7e422e  No.322[Reply]

Nzolo, whats your say on my newest poetry?

Feedback on my poem?

Genuine

Give me the sweet green exception
of your genuine red affection
not the chalked up, blacked out alienation
far below our crowded white sunny sky sensation
where planes fly and our infatuation never dies
which where way above in the dark abyss
across the ocean of time, love is just a myth
I have to say hell no, fuck yes,
fathom the aesthetics from which you are blessed
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7e422e  No.326

>>322
I would have to hear it, I can't get any rhythm from reading it.

Besides that, and I mean this with respect, what the fuck are you on about? It reads like a schizophrenic's manifesto.
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7e422e  No.327

>>326
Does it really? How so?
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7e422e  No.328

>>324
Such as what?
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7e422e  No.329

>>322
I like it, anon.
But try to carve out a bit more of a rhythm.
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7e422e  No.331

>>327
My understanding of the poem is this. It's a confused profession of some bastard of adoration and lust for some other - never defined nor articulated, like the first stanza zooming about in its caprice. All of this urge directed towards some person that we are assured is 'genuine' and worthy of the 'best' treatment, I presume, despite that treatment not being the most noble in the first place.

Now, am I off the mark, or is this poem really a Frankenstein's monster of traditional, virtuous love and misguided modern "love"? The lack of discernible rhythm helps to exude that vibe of a fickle narrator. This is why it reads like a schizo's manifesto, or perhaps more strikingly, the midnight text messages I receive from my junkie friends. It's all over the place, like a budding, awkward teenage writer's first poem for his secret crush.

It shows great promise, but it is simply unrefined and immature in its structure and motive. Practise and read more, learn more about the ways of the world, and make sure that your next inspiration is more of a tour de force, and not like this tour de farce.
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4afd2a  No.320[Reply]

Hey, /pen/, im trying to write a sci-fi story based in the far future. I dont really want to go into what the story is about, but i plan to have it heavily based around internet messages and chats.

Normally when i write, its poetry (and pretty shitty free verse at that), and i have never written a full story before. How the hall do i make the online dialogue nice, and not super shitty? Any advice would be greatly appreciated.
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4afd2a  No.321

Write something and we will tell you what you can do to improve it.
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1fcf31  No.313[Reply]

Greetings!

I have something to share with you.
Would you mind giving this a quick glance and tell me what you think?
I hope creating a new thread for this was acceptable.

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Dear Allies,

After World War I, you nurtured the young Soviet Union and tried to internally poison and destroy post-WWI-Germany, which ultimatively led to the events of World War II. When one single man, tried to relieve the world of the Jewish plague. To finally restore order and peace to all lesser men around the globe, which were and will now forever be, thanks to you, pawns in the games of the Jews, you decided to stand by Great Britannia and her Empire of lies, instead of doing what was good and what was righteous. You then proceeded to side with Stalin and destroy Nazi Germany, the last bastion of hope for the Occident. Roosevelt led by greed and fear of losing influence over South-East Asia put an embargo of steel and oil and Japan, leaving them no other option, but to join the war and tricking the American citizens into yet supporting another war. After war, you came to realize where you had done wrong. The Soviets had occupied Europe and the Jew gleefully rubbed their hands, sensing the great wealth that could be gained, from simply supporting both sides with weapons. Yet, did you learn? When the Iron Curtain fell, instead of offering a helping hand to the crushed Russians and establishing lasting peace, you smugly looked the other way, hurting their pride even more. Russia extending its claws again, is solely your fault. Instead of seeing the threat that China became to be, even more so today, you nurtured a deeply corrupted and perverted nation, traded with them, built them up. Well, you see were that led you to. Lets face it, by killing this man you doomed us all. Picture very related. Do not call it a grave, it is the future you chose. You are welcome.

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1fcf31  No.315

>>314
This is not perfect yet, I agree.
But "the allies" is the biggest generic term I could come up with, addressing every country not being Germany or sided with Germany.
Simply writing America wouldnt have been correct.
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1fcf31  No.316

>>315
You misunderstand my main point: what on earth is the purpose of this? To dance over the finer points of geopolitical and economic history so that you could steal some moral high ground? Are you going to mail this into the oval office?
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1fcf31  No.317

>>316
>You misunderstand my main point: what on earth is the purpose of this? To dance over the finer points of geopolitical and economic history so that you could steal some moral high ground? Are you going to mail this into the oval office?

That is an excellent idea!
The purpose of this text though, is simply to startle people and give me replies so we can work it trough.
That worked perfectly on pol, I consider this thing to be a success.
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1fcf31  No.318

>>317
Let me get this straight. You're attention whoring?
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1fcf31  No.319

>>318
Right, making people think a little is attention whoring.
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e468fd  No.276[Reply]

Posted this on /pol/, first time writing poetry
pls no bully


the chaos of warring tribes
Came one great enemy to unitize
Each tribe held fast each tribe held firm
As great people weathered the storm
Of Roman armies marching forth
To face the might of a united north.
The Goth, German, Gaul, and Celt
Each of their blades the Roman felt
And as Europe's might descended forth
Great Rome fell before the North.

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e468fd  No.277

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>>276
Really good for a first poem. Keep it up.
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e468fd  No.297

Pretty good.

One critique is that you're inconsistent. You've got the rhyme down, but not the meter. That's okay, not every poem needs to be in meter. I believe it's good to study meter and grammar, and unless you really know what you're doing it's usually better to stick with tradition. Just think: how many postmodern poems were written in meter? Not very many. They reject what has proven itself to work very well.

>Years passed and kingdoms fell

>The years and ages passed away
>Many people still today

This, along with your use of fell, north, etc., is very repetitious. It's a bit of a crutch to start a stanza based in a new time with "years passed" or "days turned to months to years" that sort of thing.

Repetition can be used well but if it isn't it just makes the poem seem, well, not poetic, and can be monotonous. It can be hard to find ways to describe things without naming it directly, but it's important have that ability. Don't be overly vague though, that's probably worse haha.

Overall I agree with the cat above me: breddy gud 5/5. Practice, study meter, read poetry, and you can get better.
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e468fd  No.298

>>297

Oh and if it wasn't clear you need to write poetry too. That's really the most important part to getting better: developing your technical ability.

That is one thing I believe to be fundamentally wrong with postmodernism: that little value is placed on technical skill, and more on "how it makes you feeeel"; whether it can shock the reader, or make the reader happy. Art is more than a means to pleasure. It isn't just an expression of one man's emotions. I don't know what it is, but I know it's meant to be beautiful.
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e468fd  No.311

[quietly donates unique IP]
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5cf10e  No.23[Reply]

(Will bump with pdf)

So I've had a scifi/fantasy conspiracy novel floating around in my head for years. Last January I penned this chapter to use as a prologue. There's not much action but I felt that it was better than the other introductions/chapter one's that I tried.

The scope of the novel ballooned significantly since I started writing it, though progress has been slow since I maybe have 20 mins. a day to work on it. The premise of the entire story is this:

> Journalist unknowingly stumbles upon a massive scandal involving private military corporations and elements of the CIA

> Journalist craves attention and recognition, but gets more than she bargained for when these things do come
> Initially publishes a rather mundane story on her blog which is picked up by other media and later, a photograph she posted (provided by her source) becomes the focus of much scrutiny because it purportedly shows a convicted murderer – who is supposed to be in a military prison – as an employee of the company
> Strange things start happening almost immediately, and the person who broke the story disappears. The journalist herself becomes increasingly paranoid; it becomes more and more obvious that she is being watched and followed (and this is a deliberate strategy from the agencies and corporations harassing her; a tactic called “bumper locking”); trying to cause extreme fear and paranoia, and eventually a mental breakdown
> Blackstarr PMC is gradually implicated in a massive corruption scandal and many of their nefarious activities are revealed. Reporters start disappearing and important bankers/financial industry people start dying mysteriously
> The government and military-industrial complex, along with big pharma, are gradually implicated as well; as it is revealed that Blackstarr's behind-the scenes criminal operations and its practice of securing convicted criminals to work in important positions are merely part of a network of CIA front groups

The twist:
In a "conspiracy within a conspiracy," Blackstarr and its employees are actually (unbeknownst to them) the victims of a much larger secret experimentation program; unwittingly helping to beta-test pharmaceuticals and technology for use in applications relating tPost too long. Click here to view the full text.
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5cf10e  No.85

this is awesome! keep up the good work man
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5cf10e  No.108

You've certainly got skill, and the premise has potential. I hope you continue to work on this.
I hope to see some subtle parallels in this story that relate to the current state of affairs.
While there is room to refine your writing style, you're of to a good start. Perhaps once you've got the initial draft written you can go over it. It's already showing promise, and I find it compelling.

I enjoy your references to the board culture and general cynical outlook we have on here. It will go over most people's heads if they are not familiar with the references, but it reads well whether or not the references are understood. Readers here will appreciate the references.

>>76
I agree about "showing and not telling."
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5cf10e  No.163

I disagree with previous reviewers. This reads like young adult detective fiction. The narrative scope is extremely limited and linear, being almost completely nothing more than the main character's observations. The fact that there is next to nothing but dialogue and lacking themes, messages, or etc reveals the female sex of the author, and the seeming pro-SJW slant is unfavorable. This is not the kind of inspiring or well-written story that necessary.
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5cf10e  No.307

>>163
I completely agree with this post.
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5cf10e  No.309

>>163
I agree. I think the author should try to make the story a little bit more "big picture", so to speak.
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8f6830  No.199[Reply]

Once upon a time there was an ugly duckling. The ugly duckling was very ugly, causing normal people to be grossed out, but they still made friends with the ugly duckling, they just didn't want to fuck it. So the ugly duckling got mad and turned into an SJW who complained about beauty standards and how it was truly the beautiful duckling. This ugly duckling had deluded itself, and in turn deluded many other impressionable ugly ducklings to believe that being an ugly duckling was the thing the be, and that if you didn't like ugly ducklings you were a sexist homophobic patriarchy pig. How dare you not use xers deluded pronouns to address it as the beautiful duckling that it really was, you ducking shitlord. Then one day the normal ducklings got tired of this bitches shit and popped a cap in her ugly duckling ass. And no, this bitch was not a swan, just a fat slob.

The End.
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8f6830  No.288

>>199
That was amazin m8
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8f6830  No.291

>>199
ebin cheers
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8cee06  No.256[Reply]

So I'm writing a novel of sorts, trying to shoot for 1500 to 2000 words per chapter. I'm trying to be subtle with the /pol/ themes, so a publisher won't be scared of it. The story is about a disgraced ex-reporter hearing from his friend who was murdered in Mexico, prompting him to go and investigate his murder, as well as the conspiracy he was going after.

The first two chapters are done, I was hoping for constructive crit?
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8cee06  No.257

File: 1426737196769.pdf (103.03 KB, Chapter 2.pdf)

Also posting second chapter.
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8cee06  No.269

>>256
Surely, a proper critique would have to occur on the whole. Godspeed anon
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8cee06  No.274

>>269

Right now I'm kind of at a crossroads- how do I describe Eddie getting to Mexico? I don't know if I want to take him out of New York so quick, since I don't know if I've done enough to explain how miserable and overgrown the city is. That being said, there's not a lot that has to happen, other than him following James's posthumous instructions. Advice?
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8aae11  No.34[Reply]

Why hello thar, aspiring writers. I've spent the better part of my adult life writing short stories and such and finally got around to finishing my first novel last year. I'm hear to answer any questions you have on the gory reality of fiction writing.

You can read the beginning of said novel at: 112029.net
Some of my short fiction is available at: astropulp.blogspot.com

Fire away!
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8aae11  No.40

>>38

I exist. I'm sorry that upsets you.

No, I'm not.
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8aae11  No.43

>>38
Projection
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8aae11  No.60

>>37
Do you have anything to say to a poet or is poetry deader than dead now
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8aae11  No.63

>>60

Poetry didn't die, but the market for professional poets is miniscule. In the US, you have the national poet laureate, currently Charles Wright, a position so esteemed it pays a measly $35k. Many states have their own poet laureates, but these are often honorary positions that confer little benefit beyond name recognition.

That said, it's stupidly easy to get your poetry published in anthologies. Mind, you won't be paid for your work, but it'll appear in print. Also, participating in poetry readings is a great way to meet people in the literary industry, particularly those who run journals in which you can publish your work.
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8aae11  No.272

Have you ever had anything published by an actual publisher?

and have you ever considered just writing YA
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33e281  No.246[Reply]

My post from a thread on /pol/, expanded a bit. It is on natural law and how the White race and other human races fit into that law, as well as the Creativity movement.

Here's a pastebin link, I don't have Office.

http://pastebin.com/40dr4gZG
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33e281  No.248

>>246

Bumping 4 views ;_;
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33e281  No.268

>>246

Harsh, but well written.
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a681e2  No.251[Reply]

It would be really helpful for parents if you could post moral stories..
So much of the kids books is about tolerance and non violence.


It would be helpful to have stories that encourage loyalty and tribalism. Stories that explain nat soc and the evils of usury (and feminism, etc etc). Sometimes violence has been historically necessary.



We need stories that encourage gender roles.

Stories that combat all modern brain washing. Stories (some) might even have broad appeal.


We need kids to be suspicious, especially of liberals/prove, non whites, gov tyranny…..

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a681e2  No.262

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Check out some of these stories
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a681e2  No.263

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a681e2  No.264

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a681e2  No.265

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a681e2  No.266

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28e0a6  No.144[Reply]

Board owner here, I'm thinking of contacting the Daily Stormer and making them aware that this board exists, and it means we could potentially write articles for them if they like some of the work.
How would people feel about this?
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28e0a6  No.228

>>144
I don't like their writing much, but if you think it is worth it go ahead.
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28e0a6  No.230

It's up to you boss,personally I don't think we should become affiliated with any one site.or at least any one site that may attract UNwanted attention or cause people to overlook us because of that affiliation
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28e0a6  No.247

Sounds good to me. They can lurk here for ideas and/or people can contact them with ideas, if this is something D/S is interested in.
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28e0a6  No.255

Anglin is a bit of a spaz, I don't know if I'd want to seriously associate with him. I'd gladly write shit-talking troll pieces for him, though. Both MyPostingCareer and /duck/ seem to like my work.
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28e0a6  No.261

If the board owner does not want to be associated with again, he can still make him aware.
Again is often asking for original content.

The writers can be anon and not associated with pen

I encourage u to contact him
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35fcbe  No.241[Reply]

Perhaps we could collaborate, and put our collective knowledge of the internet and general internet raid techniques into a piece of writing? After all, you all know how much leftists love referring to Alinsky's work. Why not have our own instruction manuals? I dare say we can not only gather a bunch of proper and useful old info, but even include the techniques we've pioneered.
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35fcbe  No.260

This is not a halfbad idea OP,we'll need a pastebin or something.manipulation should probably be included as well.
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5aa5e1  No.25[Reply]

Not a good writer? Not even a writer? Same here. Welcome to the club.

The truth is, it doesn't matter how "good" you are. Because even if you never write a publishable work, fiction is an invaluable tool for mental development and self-improvement.

(bumping with pdf)
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5aa5e1  No.99

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>>25
practice makes perfect. it's also a lot of fun when you've had a couple. check em.
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5aa5e1  No.164

>>26
Extremely strong writing here and from what I've read it's the best submission so far on the board. I'd recommend to read this to all.
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5aa5e1  No.193

>>164
fuck me this guy is good
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5aa5e1  No.249

>>25
Another good exercise is to extrapolate sentences or ideas to try to improve your vocabulary.

For example:
The fox jumped over the dog.
>Panting in the heat of the day, the scarlet fox hurled itself into the air over the canine that so fought to keep him from his quarry.
Shit like that.
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5aa5e1  No.250

>>249
Or at least to get you into the mode or bringing more words to bear from your repertoire.
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