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b90aa9 No.204 [Open thread]

"Truly," Said the sage, "In a boundless field, all possibilities must at last manifest themselves. Only an immeasurable distance of space and time keeps us from them."

One disciple spoke: “Oh sage, how shall we overcome such an insuperable obstacle?"
But already the sage had retreated into his cave. He would not speak again for a long time—perhaps longer than the interval within which his followers could hear or understand the answer to their questions.
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b90aa9 No.209

Honji asked his disciple: "What is the one thing that cannot be taken from you?" In that moment, the disciple was enlightened.
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b90aa9 No.210

The burglar robs the hermit of all his food bowl and his robe. The hermit strokes his beard and wishes that he could give more to the burglar (so pure is his heart).

The next night, the burglar returns and takes things from the hermit that the hermit did not even know he had.
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b90aa9 No.211

The cat dreamt that the dog devoured him.

Later, the cat told the dog about his dream. The dog scoffed and told the cat that it was absurd.

Your knowledge of cats should make it easy for you to predict what the cat did next.
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b90aa9 No.213

From the ancient legend, nothing survives but images: a man, a monster, the rolling ocean, the wide blue sky.

It would be too much to ask for anything more.
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b90aa9 No.222

>>211
I don't get it.
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0c196d No.178 [Open thread]

http://pastebin.com/b1Wb4w70

/rg/ anon here, I wrote something about racemixing.

I was kind of going for a mythic/biblical parable tone here, but I feel like it shifts between mythic poetry (e.g., Beowulf, the Tain, Iliad etc.) and religious myth, which are actually important to keep separate.

Also I'm not a very good writer because I don't write often.
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0c196d No.217

This is actually quite good. You do well with the tone, though there are some missteps here and there.
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0c196d No.221

Pretty cool.

Isn't there already a biblical passage on miscegenation though?
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d7cff1 No.189 [Open thread]

>I've been writing a novel, and found it to be complicated for writing it in one book. I literarly ended up with 30 MCs, I actually filtered out 50 side charectars in order to minimize the charectars the reader will need to know of.

>This is a quick prologue for the story. I'm not going to use it anymore tough because it makes the stories more complicated than actually simplifying them.


>The novels are made in non episodic order, The only charectar to show up in all of them. Is a messanger called the "Stranger". Whom only shows up to give a hospitality and a gift to the MC. Only to end the chapter with "Fate will find it's way."


In the world of this realm, with the fall of the ancient world, the civilizations accepted defeat, but did not accept vanishing.
Rome has united its last members to group together in to a united union of Hydro. Ruling over Europe and its resources. It's one if not the most glorious and admiring civilizations of any kind, ruling with a major boarding school in Fondorum.
In the south continent of Africa: the tribes, ruled under the Semite's of Carthage and united to become what's known as Petra under the books of our writers. The empire of Petra ruled by the word of Baal, and it's advancement on technology has developed oil based vehicles, leading to what is common to us as the industrial age.
In north Asia, the tribes denied any conquest by any rule: kings, and emperors have fallen there by both men and cold climates. The tribes believed to be barbaric and ruthless, are also known to all to be the most advanced in terms of electricity, and survival. It's easy to believe they will kill you on sight, but if you're brave enough to go alone…
And last one's are the old ancient standing empires of Asia, The emperors have fallen many times, yet kept there dynasties and are holding one of the most dictated unions the world has ever seen. Called by Hydro, as Flama for they are ruled by fire and metal, and those who question them will be easily disappeared. And reappear for one last time in a low some blood bathing execution.
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d7cff1 No.192

Interesting idea /pen/ite might I suggest that you make a book covering each civilization and work torwards having the main characters end up at the goal/conflict through each book and have them meet up in the last one.

Also if I may ask what is the goal and or conflict in the series?
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d7cff1 No.195

>>192
The overall conflict & goal is a battle on resources during a global famine. It's uncertain what caused it.

>Sounds like a great idea. I'll try it out.
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533353 No.167 [Open thread]

The bike messenger parked his bike on the busy sidewalk outside a small office building and walked inside, a fat manila envelope in his hand. Ballcap pulled low and mirrored aviators covering his eyes, his only real distinguishing facial feature was the jet black beard he'd grown.

He smiled at the receptionist and flirted with her for a moment before holding up the envelope and asking which office it needed to be delivered to. She informed him it was the small law firm upstairs to his left and he smiled again, thanked her, and went upstairs to drop it through their mail slot.

Then he stepped into the bathroom at the end of the hall, went into the large handicapped stall at the end, and opened the window. It was a privacy window, allowing light but no means of seeing inside, and the last time he'd been in the building, he'd used a knife and a screw driver to make it capable of opening since it had been screwed shut and painted over years ago.

Now it opened easily, and he swung it open it open and looked outside. Perfect, just the way he'd remembered it. He studied the movement of the flag on the pole across the street and checked the wind speed and direction on his smart phone's weather app and nodded.

Then he slid off his unobtrusive looking backpack, set it on the back of the toilet, unzipped it, and went to work.

The Nemesis Arms Vanquish is a sniper-grade .308-caliber rifle that breaks down and fits into a backpack without losing its zero, or point of aim. He pulled out the rifle, extended the collapsible stock, snapped the bipod into place, then attached the barrel and screwed on the securing collar. Next, he threaded the silencer he'd made from a Mag-lite flashlight onto the end of the barrel, inserted a magazine, and worked the bolt, chambering a round.

Now he just had to wait fifteen more minutes.

Twelve minutes later, his target rolled up to the courthouse across the street and stepped out of his old Crown Vic. The man was a judge who typically handled divorce and custody cases, and he was full-blown feminists and social justice warrior who used his gavel and the power of the court to fuck men over every single time. He'd recently been in the news for giving sole custody of two children to their mother, who was an unemployed crackhead, and arbitrary denying the father any right to even see his own children, despite having to pay both child support and alimony. When the 'bike messengerPost too long. Click here to view the full text.
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533353 No.168

The same day, another man sat in his car, smoking his third cigarette in as many minutes and taking a swig from his water bottle as he waited nervously. This was the fourth time he'd done this, and he was keyed up every single time.

There. He put down his small pair of binoculars (if anyone asked, he was bird watching and had the bird guidebook to prove it.), glanced around for witnesses, and saw there none.

Then he brushed aside the newspaper on the passenger seat, revealing what he'd hidden beneath: his grandfather's Mauser c96 pistol. He opened the end of the wooden stock/holster and withdraw the pistol, attached the stock to turn it into a compact carbine, and shouldered it, aiming through his passenger window.

The young couple, a black man in a basketball jersey and backwards ball cap, and an overweight white woman in a spaghetti strap top and yoga pants, walked down the sidewalk blissfully unaware that a hundred yards away someone was staring at them with murderous intent.

He lined up the sights, heart pounding, forced himself not to hyperventilate, and jerked the trigger twice in rapid succession before he realized he'd left the safety on. Dammit, slow down! He snapped the safety off, sighted more carefully, and forced himself to slowly squeeze the trigger.

BANG! BANG!

The nigger went down with two shots to the chest and his coal-burning girlfriend shrieked, too stupid to duck or run away. Two more shots rang out and she collapsed to join her boyfriend in an expanding pool of blood.

He opened a ziploc bag with six pieces of spent .30 Carbine brass he'd picked up off the floor at a local gun range and dumped them out the window; hopefully the cops would look for someone with an M1 Carbine instead of a Mauser broomhandle, and the two extra rounds might cause them to waste time trying to find where the other bullets went so they could recover them.
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533353 No.176

Why should we care for this bike messenger at the start? What's in it for us?
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533353 No.182

>>176
Dead niggers.
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cb0b9c No.128 [Open thread]

If /pol/ is serious about starting a literary publication, I recommend "Instauration" as the sort of thing we should be shooting for.

This was a high-quality, pro-white magazine that published regular issues for 20+ years and had a fairly wide circulation (although you could waste days trying to find a reference to it in the MSM). It was smart and incisive, covered a wide range of topics and had a darkly humorous editorial tone. It might be best described as a combination of the Occidental Quarterly and National Lampoon.

Best of all, every issue is available on PDF for free: http://instaurationonline.com/

Pic related.
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ae9017 No.64 [Open thread]

Please require the content to be under a creative commons license, requiring attribution and derivatives or no derivatives. That way the material can be redistributed for maximum impact.
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ae9017 No.69

Explain this to me
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ae9017 No.79

>>69
Not much to explain. It means that if you want to submit your work into the project, you license the work so that other people can republish it without permission, so long as they attribute the author properly.

Derivative is more open-source, if you allowed derivatives, people could take your work and modify it. Very imageboard culture friendly, but maybe not good for the author. It could be optional.

Problem trying to solve: getting the work disseminated. If it can be republished without permission, its ideas can spread far and wide. This is always done informally on imageboards, but if you go outside an imageboard, its best to make it formal. If you give over the work to be published, you agree that others can republish it.

That's the suggestion as I see it.
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d1b055 No.98 [Open thread]

posting some trash i wrote a while ago. reminder that you can write total bullshit and still have fun.
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97b61a No.70 [Open thread]

My surrounds? An empty room. One would call it empty, if that one where to visit and not live a grinding routine, day in night out, all inside this room. A service to the One.
All Must Serve.
The grinding of routine goes much deeper than moving one's to morph pixels into what looks realer than reality. A trench embedded in my consciousness from before the time the proteins in my parents body's began to form what would be me. In essences I am exactly what they made me, and I am One.
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7c107b No.54 [Open thread]

Three years have passed since the death of his persona, but his name is still surrounded by the wall of lies and blatant aspersion.

You may call him a troll,
you may call him a fool,
you may call him a little kid seeking for attention,
you may think that you're more than a tool and a cattle waiting to be butchered and eaten,

you should know that you're absolutely wrong about him and about yourselves.

Sorry, but Quentin have never trolled anyone. He was dead serious. Like a daredevil, he really walked the walk. His endless admirers and successors shall keep his legacy alive.

It was an honor to have fought on his side along with hundreds of other Diamond Dogs members, and we shall continue our good fight.

And he wrote a note for people like you; Selfish, ignorant, self indulgent people like you.

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7c107b No.55

It was the best of chans, it was the worst of chans, it was the age of lulz, it was the age of faggotry, it was the epoch of bump, it was the epoch of sage, it was the season of anonymity, it was the season of tripfagging, it was the spring of effortposts, it was the winter of shitposting, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were all going direct the other way–in short, the period was so far like the present period, that some of its noisiest authorities insisted on its being received, for good or for evil, in the superlative degree of comparison only.

There were a midget with massive balls and no legs on the throne of 8chan; there were a cuck with no balls and long legs on the throne of 4chan. In both countries it was clearer than crystal to the lords of the State preserves of ad space and moneyz, that things in general were settled for ever…(USER WAS BANNED FOR BEING A SHITPOSTING FAGGOT)
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7c107b No.56

>>54
Okay, I'll bite. Give me a bit of time; I should currently not be on here…
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7c107b No.57

test
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7c107b No.58

>I always feel like I have horrendous mistakes in my writing that I have failed to spot and correct…

I am writing here as not to recount, as not to retell, and in full honesty as not even to console myself, if perhaps only upon paper, but as rather to anchor this event to reality, as to determine whether I have perhaps dreamt this baffling encounter. This evening was rather groggy and not to mention foggy, in relative terms it was reminiscent of a previous night’s stew: not cold, not warm, but rather caught in an unsettling limbo that served only to demulsify and create an unpleasant viscosity within the stew, bringing one to question if it had been decanted out of a sewer. Yes, the walk home from the customs office felt as if I had gone for a swim in my wife’s stale stew, inhaling with every breaststroke. My miserable march through the alleyways would not go unnoticed. As if punishment for some horrendous sin long but forgotten except in the eyes of a malevolent god, a torrential downpour began with no forewarning prompting me to scurry from cover to cover in good style with a mouse frantically dashing between the safety of couches and dressers in the presence of a lustful housecat. Indeed, it was a disgusting brackish that hit me, for the fumes and chemicals that had bellowed out of the manufactories were now observing what had once fascinated Newton. Much to my demise, it would not be the last thing to hit me…
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3e8477 No.1 [Open thread]

Welcome to /pen/.
I've recently taken the decision to make this a place for discussing literature and posting your own work, instead of only user created content.
Stuff to post:
>Your own work, fiction or non-fiction
>'Required reading' lists
>Reading club ideas
>Writing club ideas
>Reviews

>b..but how's this different to /lit/

As before, the board is aiming to be centered around politics, but this rule isn't absolute.
Keep it civil and post new works into their own threads, if possible.
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