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d7cff1  No.189

>I've been writing a novel, and found it to be complicated for writing it in one book. I literarly ended up with 30 MCs, I actually filtered out 50 side charectars in order to minimize the charectars the reader will need to know of.

>This is a quick prologue for the story. I'm not going to use it anymore tough because it makes the stories more complicated than actually simplifying them.


>The novels are made in non episodic order, The only charectar to show up in all of them. Is a messanger called the "Stranger". Whom only shows up to give a hospitality and a gift to the MC. Only to end the chapter with "Fate will find it's way."


In the world of this realm, with the fall of the ancient world, the civilizations accepted defeat, but did not accept vanishing.
Rome has united its last members to group together in to a united union of Hydro. Ruling over Europe and its resources. It's one if not the most glorious and admiring civilizations of any kind, ruling with a major boarding school in Fondorum.
In the south continent of Africa: the tribes, ruled under the Semite's of Carthage and united to become what's known as Petra under the books of our writers. The empire of Petra ruled by the word of Baal, and it's advancement on technology has developed oil based vehicles, leading to what is common to us as the industrial age.
In north Asia, the tribes denied any conquest by any rule: kings, and emperors have fallen there by both men and cold climates. The tribes believed to be barbaric and ruthless, are also known to all to be the most advanced in terms of electricity, and survival. It's easy to believe they will kill you on sight, but if you're brave enough to go alone…
And last one's are the old ancient standing empires of Asia, The emperors have fallen many times, yet kept there dynasties and are holding one of the most dictated unions the world has ever seen. Called by Hydro, as Flama for they are ruled by fire and metal, and those who question them will be easily disappeared. And reappear for one last time in a low some blood bathing execution.
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d7cff1  No.192

Interesting idea /pen/ite might I suggest that you make a book covering each civilization and work torwards having the main characters end up at the goal/conflict through each book and have them meet up in the last one.

Also if I may ask what is the goal and or conflict in the series?
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d7cff1  No.195

>>192
The overall conflict & goal is a battle on resources during a global famine. It's uncertain what caused it.

>Sounds like a great idea. I'll try it out.
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