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dd0172  No.437[Reply]

Anyone doing National November Writing Month?

www.nanowrimo.org

I'm hoping that at least I will be able to write a garbled but interesting mess with enough wine and barbiturates.

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aa516e  No.44[Reply]

Hey there /pen/,/pol/,and whoever else is here,let's get a poetry thread going.

we'll take it whether you wrote it yourself or if it's a personal favorite of yours.

It's an amazement to me
How those who claim prejudice
Are oft those who are most prejudiced

Forcing their views upon society
Persecution their creed;
Stealing our livelyhoods

Attempting to crush our beliefs
To crush our rights
And yet they wonder why we despise them
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aa516e  No.380

File: 1434708051528.jpg (24.69 KB, 550x535, 110:107, sad-frog.jpg)

Dover Beach

BY MATTHEW ARNOLD

The sea is calm tonight.

The tide is full, the moon lies fair

Upon the straits; on the French coast the light

Gleams and is gone; the cliffs of England stand,

Glimmering and vast, out in the tranquil bay.

Come to the window, sweet is the night-air!

Only, from the long line of spray

Where the sea meets the moon-blanched land,

Listen! you hear the grating roar

Of pebbles which the waves draw back, and fling,

At their return, up the high strand,

Begin, and cease, and then again begin,

With tremulous cadence slow, and bring

The eternal note of sadness in.

Sophocles long ago

Heard it on the Ægean, and it brought

Into his mind the turbid ebb and flow

Of human misery; we

Find also in the sound a thought,

Hearing it by this distant northern sea.

The Sea of Faith

Was once, too, at the full, and round earth’s shore

Lay like the folds of a bright girdle furled.

But now I only hear

Its melancholy, long, withdrawing roar,

Retreating, to the breath

Of the night-wind, down the vast edges drear

And naked shingles of the world.

Ah, love, let us be true

To one another! for the world, which seems

To lie before us like a land of dreams,

So various, so beautiful, so new,

Hath really neither joy, nor love, nor light,

Nor certitude, nor peace, nor help for pain;

And we are here as on a darkling plain

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aa516e  No.384

I wrote an imagist poem riffing off an Ezra Pound one I really like.

In a Station of the Metro (2013)

Only one clear face

In all the dark

People all around

Only one of mine

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aa516e  No.429

With all the bravado I might muster

I repel the beast,

and so disgust her

My principal cause befouls her nature,

lays waste to her den,

in this, I hate her

The indignation runs red hot

despite all her efforts,

she forgets me not

After all I've done to light her day

she paints it black,

to scurry away;

rejects me but knows not what I offer,

such is the pleasure

of a scornful daughter.

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aa516e  No.431

File: 1442267542153.jpg (27.98 KB, 180x245, 36:49, black flowers please.jpg)

Oh when I saw you standing there

Wild flowers dying in your hair

Child of harvest time, coughing up must

Black flowers' dull perfume trailing in dust

Hoisting dull pennants to the spike of that hill

Your smile started bleeding and then the mill

Shearing and sharing your love and your rage

Whilst hawk's head descending spewed out a new age

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aa516e  No.435

Prison Love

Deb the Dank was the rankest of skanks in the houscow,

She stabbed and she stole, she lied and she told,

few in the lockup liked her.

Pinky the slink (a dyke we think) dwelt in the clink with Debbie. One day white power sent her to the shower with a message for Deb the dank. They scrubbed and they rubbed (which Pinky quite loved) but in the end out came the shank.

Poor little Pinky had to lick out Deb's skinky, foul taste of a turd surprised the jailbird and left poor Pinky in tears. Deb had more planned, made a fist of her hand and confirmed all of Pinky's worst fears. Much more than salad would be tossed.

Then Deb the coward, she slipped in the shower – now who would be bossed?

Deb the dank would die as she lived, by the end of her shiv – with no one but Pinky to thank.

– Result of a 5 minute poetry exercise based around trying to conjure a Dr. Seuss feel. Random words I drew were Shank/Shiv and theme 'Love'.

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df2032  No.336[Reply]

The man to Pity and Hate, a portrait of a wretched soul.

http://pastebin.com/m3mZ0cis
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df2032  No.433

Good content, many nice turns-of-phrase, but you need an editor–many sentences lack punctuation or have incorrect punctuation in them. You need to read it over before publishing it and squash the typos. Also, The Man is a bit one dimensional.

But overall, I like it.

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df2032  No.434

>>336

The first sentence is already awful. Don't begin a story with "this is a story about…" That's a really good way to bore a reader from the very beginning.

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0f9d0f  No.8[Reply]

Here is the strawpoll with the current suggestions for the magazine names: http://strawpoll.me/3562537
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0f9d0f  No.410

I like the word Contrarian, gives our writers plausible deniability, also it kinda embodies chan culture.

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0f9d0f  No.424

>>8

>>203

>>410

What about Contrarian Logos, or ContraLogos?

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0f9d0f  No.425

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>>424

Or maybe just "Counterlogic"?

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0f9d0f  No.426

>>425

Counterpen?

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0f9d0f  No.432

>>8

I think Anathema magazine would rule, the definition pretty much fits us.

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File: 1429136582210.png (1.76 MB, 1812x1483, 1812:1483, pollit.png)

b845b7  No.330[Reply]

Rate my updated /pol/ required reading.
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b845b7  No.362

>>361

Agreed. Finished it recently, the parallels were quite worrying.

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b845b7  No.364

File: 1432576212055.jpg (11.07 KB, 200x300, 2:3, hitlers-revolution.jpg)

You REALLY need this book in pic related. It is a MUST read. Unlike most books on the subject, whether redpill or kike shit, they mostly talk about history only. This book talks in GREAT detail about the mechanics of National Socialism.

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b845b7  No.365

Should add Growth of the Soil by Knut Hamsun, Journey to the End of the Night by Louis Ferdinand Celiné and Thus Spoke Zarathustra by Nietzsche

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b845b7  No.367

>>365

>Thus Spoke Zarathustra by Nietzsche

A bit useless if you don't have a solid background in philosophy though.

I would add The Culture of Critique series, and a race realist book like Race Evolution and Behavior by Rushton, or the more recent A Troublesome Inheritance by Wade

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b845b7  No.430

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>>330

>Egils saga by Egil

It's actually written by Snorri Sturluson.

t. descendant of both of them.

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d5437a  No.428[Reply]

Sup /pen/ I dropped the /pol/-/new/ novella yesterday for all to read.

http://8ch.net/pol/res/2569046.html#2575975

The thread has the novella and two shorties posted there.

Also it is published on http://www.lulu.com/shop/cr-mcmahon/the-hand-that-holds-the-world/ebook/product-22264177.html

If you want a free epub or read only file or .mobi send me an email at crmcmahon614@gmail.com

Some feed back on it would be great.

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File: 1434715857331.jpg (360.28 KB, 2114x1631, 302:233, 1258389711024.jpg)

b7fa1e  No.386[Reply]

So is there going to be a zine or what?

I'll write a short story for it.

If it's full of faggot ass poetry count me out.

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b7fa1e  No.409

>>407

Yeah start a thread

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b7fa1e  No.416

It would be interesting to make 1/2 sheet zines of single stories. My town has a few of pic related, and I'd like to contribute some material.

Stuff that wouldn't be outright labeled "Nazi" or anything. More short children's stories with traditional tones, and truth presented in a reader-friendly way.

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b7fa1e  No.417

File: 1435263336359.jpg (7.05 KB, 151x90, 151:90, little free library.jpg)

>>416

>1/2

*1 or 2

forgot pic

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b7fa1e  No.418

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>>417

dunno why that was pic for ants

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b7fa1e  No.422

>>386

>Poetry

>faggot ass

Pick one. Also, read real poetry, poetry with meter and not postmodernist free verse garbage. Poetry is (was) a form higher than prose (which didn't exist until, IIRC, eighteen or nineteen hundred). To contemn/shun poetry is to contemn/shun your heritage, faggot.

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1d7216  No.341[Reply]

I've written a piece trying to explain the problems of mass immigration in terms of football clubs. Aimed at left wingers and football fans in particular.

Criticism is welcome

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1d7216  No.353

>>352

Nice.

Be sure to update Brit/pol/ with this as I'm pretty forgetful.

Hope it takes off.

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1d7216  No.354

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1d7216  No.355

>>354

Looks good.

Had any takers?

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1d7216  No.359

You write quite eloquently and it flows well. I feel your points are quite solid, and even as a non-Briton I could pick up most of what you were saying.

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1d7216  No.415

>>354

There's a spelling error in the article, towards the beginning. "whether or note"

It is a pretty good article, though

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fe5bc7  No.411[Reply]

Hey guys, I'm going to be releasing a book via PDFs here on 8ch, and wanted to know what would be the best way to release it.

The official page is 8ch.net/tab/

(will never do anything more "official" than this)

>I will be uploading the first 5 pilot chapters and will release one new chapter every week. Weeks that have a short chapter will have more than one chapter released.

Any suggestions?

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fe5bc7  No.412

File: 1434752559677.gif (1.71 MB, 500x500, 1:1, 1433864755020.gif)

How about releasing it via PDF on 8chan, and you can upload the first 5 pilot chapters then one every week after that.

You could even release more than one chapter, if the chapter that week is short.

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fe5bc7  No.413

If you are going to publish it for an ebook don't post it here until it is published.

I'm doing the same for my novella.

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fe5bc7  No.414

>>411

you plan on keeping the same trip for the whole time?

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d90e97  No.382[Reply]

First three chapters of my neocon novella:

http://pastebin.com/LtuVxJFY

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d90e97  No.383

>pepe

lol

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File: 1434708877083.pdf (160.31 KB, Austrian-Keynesian Dialect….pdf)

34b9b1  No.381[Reply]

Or,

Framing Economic Thought: Global Control by Monetary Means

Originally

Austrian-Keynesian Dialectic: Economics as Psyops, taken from a thread on /32/ here

>>>/32/1459

This anon delved into the reasoning behind economic theory and the popularly touted thoughts commonly known to any student of commerce. It becomes clear via their reasoning that a glaring hole is left in each adversarial school of thought: the purpose and place of usury in the economic system. Anon goes on to detail the shortcomings of the varying economic "options" presented to the common man, and how, in the absence of a rational and moral stance on usury, he is manipulated to believe in the false worth of an economic system doomed to inevitable decay at the expense of his creditors.

A captivating and essential read for every man's understanding of debt, economic theory, and the criminal scum who to this day hold the world at large.

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34b9b1  No.421

File: 1436077241215.jpg (1.26 MB, 1764x875, 252:125, Zimbabwe_$100_trillion_200….jpg)

Now my head has cancer.

Thanks OP.

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081857  No.285[Reply]

ITT: We post some of our favorite posts on /pol/

And board owner, there needs to be an apostrophe in the name of the board you fucking faggot
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081857  No.370

File: 1433641044422.jpg (365.78 KB, 1402x775, 1402:775, generationalshift.jpg)

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081857  No.371

File: 1433641155798.png (79.79 KB, 1784x641, 1784:641, basedjap.png)

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081857  No.376

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Every time I come to the top of the page, I'm forced down to the bottom. What the fuck?

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081857  No.378

>>285

>capping your own posts

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081857  No.379

>>378

Just realised that, kek

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a844d0  No.267[Reply]

Anyone interested in writing movie scripts or story boards? This could be scripts written for real actors (dystopian diverse future, what if the Nazis had won? Or showing today's progressive society tongue in cheek)

Pic not related.

Or be written for a compiled YouTube video with a script.

I am sure there could be 8chan collaboration to produce videos
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a844d0  No.271

I am a director/cinematographer and I would love to be of help in a /pol/ production. However it would be rather difficult since I'm in a small European country where there are pretty much zero /pol/acks.
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a844d0  No.273

Well, I have the ideas, but I've no experience in the industry or in writing scripts at all. I have the interest for it, however.

I can write normal novel-style writing well though.
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a844d0  No.279

>>267
I'm majoring in Film/Video, so I've had some experience with scriptwriting. Plus, friends and I used to make home videos all the time.
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a844d0  No.375

>>279

>>279

Same with me, but I have writer's block right now. There are so many concepts in my head, but I can't get them written down.

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a844d0  No.377

>>273

Same for me. Tried writing a script once and it didn't turn out so great.

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c78748  No.358[Reply]

Hello /pen/! I'm reading pic related and even though I'm not too far in, I've been thinking about some things, specifically things that come about in Part 1 Section 2, "The Big Secret of Dealing With People".

In the book, the author comments that "The desire for a feeling of importance is one of the chief distinguishing differences between mankind and animals." You'll have no argument from me on that point. However, my primary question is dealing with application and utilization of that point. I know that with many of the people I have dealt with, that they would see the attempt at flattery and piling on of "importance" as a sham and might distrust the individual who tried to do as much.

Therefore, my questions are as follows:

1. Are the majority of people receptive to this type of attention/compliment/flattery?

2. How is one able to tell if an individual might be receptive to such forms of flattery? Repeated encounters? Using a few and gauging reaction? Both? Something else?

3. The book does not talk about individuals with Autism/Aspergers. Does anyone have experience with people on the spectrum and how these sorts of tactics affect those people?

4. Are folks in certain professions more susceptible to these types of flattery? I would imagine that an artist may be more receptive as compared to a given physicist due to (what I think, anyway) a person with a different type of mindset gravitating towards these professions.

Any thoughts? Comments? Thanks.

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c78748  No.360

>3. The book does not talk about individuals with Autism/Aspergers. Does anyone have experience with people on the spectrum and how these sorts of tactics affect those people?

kek'd

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c78748  No.363

Read further, your questions are getting answered in the book.

It's not about giving poor compliments, flattery is exactly the way not to go (as you'll read later), but rather commenting on something you can truly, without inflation, see value in or appreciate - something that the other person is able to do, did, has, you'll read that if you read further.

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c78748  No.372

I would argue the following:

1)Yes, but to different degrees in different ways. A cynic or a person prone to paranoia would of course see a strong attempt as deliberate and disingenuous, while on the other hand, an egoist such as a salesman would be more likely to not notice the calculated nature of the attempt or not care.

2)On this, I would say appearance is a good first gauge. Perhaps not as refined a gauge as repeated encounters, or getting to know them a bit, but useful none the less.

3)We're basically talking about Spock on this one. They're going to want to feel that their logic is sound.

4)I would submit that there is a difference between professions insomuch as there is a difference of personality type between professions. Salesmen, politicians, preachers, etc, are in general insecure people and want very much to be liked and admired as people while doctors, soldiers, tradesmen, etc, in general want their skill or accomplishments to be admired.

My two cents on the topic.

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b22d67  No.112[Reply]

What do you think of my short story /pol/? Anything I need to change before entering it to every single short story competition on the web?

http://pastebin.com/hZ5f4Kpt
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b22d67  No.299

File: 1427977558586.jpg (42 KB, 800x553, 800:553, beach.jpg)

>>151

This really is fantastic, more people should be reading this. This is an intelligent way to troll people, as the first half of the story appeals to everyopne including normies, and the rest is pure unadulterated trolling
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b22d67  No.306

File: 1427991536336.jpg (52.44 KB, 500x731, 500:731, 24.jpg)

>>296
I take it you've never read first person reflective narrative before have you?
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b22d67  No.308

I made two stories like this. Much shorter, though.

http://pastebin.com/j8D34Liq
http://pastebin.com/f1hbGHVZ
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