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b845b7 No.330 [Open Thread]>>430 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

Rate my updated /pol/ required reading.
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b845b7 No.362

>>361

Agreed. Finished it recently, the parallels were quite worrying.

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b845b7 No.364

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You REALLY need this book in pic related. It is a MUST read. Unlike most books on the subject, whether redpill or kike shit, they mostly talk about history only. This book talks in GREAT detail about the mechanics of National Socialism.

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b845b7 No.365>>367

Should add Growth of the Soil by Knut Hamsun, Journey to the End of the Night by Louis Ferdinand Celiné and Thus Spoke Zarathustra by Nietzsche

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b845b7 No.367

>>365

>Thus Spoke Zarathustra by Nietzsche

A bit useless if you don't have a solid background in philosophy though.

I would add The Culture of Critique series, and a race realist book like Race Evolution and Behavior by Rushton, or the more recent A Troublesome Inheritance by Wade

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b845b7 No.430

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>>330 (OP)

>Egils saga by Egil

It's actually written by Snorri Sturluson.

t. descendant of both of them.

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d5437a No.428 [Open Thread][Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

Sup /pen/ I dropped the /pol/-/new/ novella yesterday for all to read.

http://8ch.net/pol/res/2569046.html#2575975

The thread has the novella and two shorties posted there.

Also it is published on http://www.lulu.com/shop/cr-mcmahon/the-hand-that-holds-the-world/ebook/product-22264177.html

If you want a free epub or read only file or .mobi send me an email at crmcmahon614@gmail.com

Some feed back on it would be great.

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b7fa1e No.386 [Open Thread]>>422 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

So is there going to be a zine or what?

I'll write a short story for it.

If it's full of faggot ass poetry count me out.

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b7fa1e No.409

>>407

Yeah start a thread

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b7fa1e No.416>>417

It would be interesting to make 1/2 sheet zines of single stories. My town has a few of pic related, and I'd like to contribute some material.

Stuff that wouldn't be outright labeled "Nazi" or anything. More short children's stories with traditional tones, and truth presented in a reader-friendly way.

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b7fa1e No.417>>418

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>>416

>1/2

*1 or 2

forgot pic

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b7fa1e No.418

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>>417

dunno why that was pic for ants

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b7fa1e No.422

>>386 (OP)

>Poetry

>faggot ass

Pick one. Also, read real poetry, poetry with meter and not postmodernist free verse garbage. Poetry is (was) a form higher than prose (which didn't exist until, IIRC, eighteen or nineteen hundred). To contemn/shun poetry is to contemn/shun your heritage, faggot.

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1d7216 No.341 [Open Thread][Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

I've written a piece trying to explain the problems of mass immigration in terms of football clubs. Aimed at left wingers and football fans in particular.

Criticism is welcome

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1d7216 No.353

>>352

Nice.

Be sure to update Brit/pol/ with this as I'm pretty forgetful.

Hope it takes off.

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1d7216 No.354>>355 >>415

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1d7216 No.355

>>354

Looks good.

Had any takers?

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1d7216 No.359

You write quite eloquently and it flows well. I feel your points are quite solid, and even as a non-Briton I could pick up most of what you were saying.

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1d7216 No.415

>>354

There's a spelling error in the article, towards the beginning. "whether or note"

It is a pretty good article, though

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fe5bc7 No.411 [Open Thread]>>414 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

Hey guys, I'm going to be releasing a book via PDFs here on 8ch, and wanted to know what would be the best way to release it.

The official page is 8ch.net/tab/

(will never do anything more "official" than this)

>I will be uploading the first 5 pilot chapters and will release one new chapter every week. Weeks that have a short chapter will have more than one chapter released.

Any suggestions?

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fe5bc7 No.412

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How about releasing it via PDF on 8chan, and you can upload the first 5 pilot chapters then one every week after that.

You could even release more than one chapter, if the chapter that week is short.

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fe5bc7 No.413

If you are going to publish it for an ebook don't post it here until it is published.

I'm doing the same for my novella.

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fe5bc7 No.414

>>411 (OP)

you plan on keeping the same trip for the whole time?

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d90e97 No.382 [Open Thread][Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

First three chapters of my neocon novella:

http://pastebin.com/LtuVxJFY

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d90e97 No.383

>pepe

lol

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34b9b1 No.381 [Open Thread][Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

Or,

Framing Economic Thought: Global Control by Monetary Means

Originally

Austrian-Keynesian Dialectic: Economics as Psyops, taken from a thread on /32/ here

>>>/32/1459

This anon delved into the reasoning behind economic theory and the popularly touted thoughts commonly known to any student of commerce. It becomes clear via their reasoning that a glaring hole is left in each adversarial school of thought: the purpose and place of usury in the economic system. Anon goes on to detail the shortcomings of the varying economic "options" presented to the common man, and how, in the absence of a rational and moral stance on usury, he is manipulated to believe in the false worth of an economic system doomed to inevitable decay at the expense of his creditors.

A captivating and essential read for every man's understanding of debt, economic theory, and the criminal scum who to this day hold the world at large.

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34b9b1 No.421

Now my head has cancer.

Thanks OP.

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081857 No.285 [Open Thread]>>378 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

ITT: We post some of our favorite posts on /pol/

And board owner, there needs to be an apostrophe in the name of the board you fucking faggot
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081857 No.370

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081857 No.371

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Every time I come to the top of the page, I'm forced down to the bottom. What the fuck?

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081857 No.378>>379

>>285 (OP)

>capping your own posts

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081857 No.379

>>378

Just realised that, kek

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a844d0 No.267 [Open Thread]>>279 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

Anyone interested in writing movie scripts or story boards? This could be scripts written for real actors (dystopian diverse future, what if the Nazis had won? Or showing today's progressive society tongue in cheek)

Pic not related.

Or be written for a compiled YouTube video with a script.

I am sure there could be 8chan collaboration to produce videos
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a844d0 No.271

I am a director/cinematographer and I would love to be of help in a /pol/ production. However it would be rather difficult since I'm in a small European country where there are pretty much zero /pol/acks.
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a844d0 No.273>>377

Well, I have the ideas, but I've no experience in the industry or in writing scripts at all. I have the interest for it, however.

I can write normal novel-style writing well though.
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a844d0 No.279>>375

>>267 (OP)
I'm majoring in Film/Video, so I've had some experience with scriptwriting. Plus, friends and I used to make home videos all the time.
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a844d0 No.375

>>279

>>279

Same with me, but I have writer's block right now. There are so many concepts in my head, but I can't get them written down.

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a844d0 No.377

>>273

Same for me. Tried writing a script once and it didn't turn out so great.

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c78748 No.358 [Open Thread][Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

Hello /pen/! I'm reading pic related and even though I'm not too far in, I've been thinking about some things, specifically things that come about in Part 1 Section 2, "The Big Secret of Dealing With People".

In the book, the author comments that "The desire for a feeling of importance is one of the chief distinguishing differences between mankind and animals." You'll have no argument from me on that point. However, my primary question is dealing with application and utilization of that point. I know that with many of the people I have dealt with, that they would see the attempt at flattery and piling on of "importance" as a sham and might distrust the individual who tried to do as much.

Therefore, my questions are as follows:

1. Are the majority of people receptive to this type of attention/compliment/flattery?

2. How is one able to tell if an individual might be receptive to such forms of flattery? Repeated encounters? Using a few and gauging reaction? Both? Something else?

3. The book does not talk about individuals with Autism/Aspergers. Does anyone have experience with people on the spectrum and how these sorts of tactics affect those people?

4. Are folks in certain professions more susceptible to these types of flattery? I would imagine that an artist may be more receptive as compared to a given physicist due to (what I think, anyway) a person with a different type of mindset gravitating towards these professions.

Any thoughts? Comments? Thanks.

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c78748 No.360

>3. The book does not talk about individuals with Autism/Aspergers. Does anyone have experience with people on the spectrum and how these sorts of tactics affect those people?

kek'd

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c78748 No.363

Read further, your questions are getting answered in the book.

It's not about giving poor compliments, flattery is exactly the way not to go (as you'll read later), but rather commenting on something you can truly, without inflation, see value in or appreciate - something that the other person is able to do, did, has, you'll read that if you read further.

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c78748 No.372

I would argue the following:

1)Yes, but to different degrees in different ways. A cynic or a person prone to paranoia would of course see a strong attempt as deliberate and disingenuous, while on the other hand, an egoist such as a salesman would be more likely to not notice the calculated nature of the attempt or not care.

2)On this, I would say appearance is a good first gauge. Perhaps not as refined a gauge as repeated encounters, or getting to know them a bit, but useful none the less.

3)We're basically talking about Spock on this one. They're going to want to feel that their logic is sound.

4)I would submit that there is a difference between professions insomuch as there is a difference of personality type between professions. Salesmen, politicians, preachers, etc, are in general insecure people and want very much to be liked and admired as people while doctors, soldiers, tradesmen, etc, in general want their skill or accomplishments to be admired.

My two cents on the topic.

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b22d67 No.112 [Open Thread]>>335 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

What do you think of my short story /pol/? Anything I need to change before entering it to every single short story competition on the web?

http://pastebin.com/hZ5f4Kpt
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b22d67 No.299

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>>151

This really is fantastic, more people should be reading this. This is an intelligent way to troll people, as the first half of the story appeals to everyopne including normies, and the rest is pure unadulterated trolling
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b22d67 No.306

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>>296
I take it you've never read first person reflective narrative before have you?
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b22d67 No.308

I made two stories like this. Much shorter, though.

http://pastebin.com/j8D34Liq
http://pastebin.com/f1hbGHVZ
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b22d67 No.335

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>>112 (OP)
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b22d67 No.357

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0564cc No.338 [Open Thread]>>339 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

For seven years our empires favourite son

has turned from the light of our sovereign goals

two hundred years work has become undone

the forces are mighty under traitor control

half of the legions

third of the guard

uncounted regions

no person unscarred

a deadly path home

no resolution

the void they roam

no absolution

at Saturn a monstrous fleet

our brothers surrender their lives

and suffer certain defeat

by the thousands they died

the fateful news relayed

the traitors are coming

their fleet is barely delayed

no victory forthcoming

from above Emperor's speech

defend the palace

of our lord's fury teach

hearts formed of malice

from orbit canons reach

and scar the holy surface

end this madness the subjects beseech

of all the cruelty this is the furthest

the forces of greed have corrupted their souls

the enemy has landed

and the virtues they used to extol

now lie abandoned

the Primarchs they stand and with us hold the line

side by side Astartes and man

sworn by oath, loyalty enshrined

with our bodies we form a dam

fifty-five days

no ammo, no food

commanders survey

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0564cc No.339

>>338 (OP)

>Some 40k poetry

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a6e348 No.48 [Open Thread][Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

PDF made from the thread that got lots of attention on /gamergate/ and /po/. Interesting stuff. Definitely thought-provoking, even if you don't agree with the conclusions.

I'd like to see an expanded commentary on this with additional links to further reading on some of the subjects the OP alludes to.

Here is the post, with a few edits for clarification and one of the best comments in the /pol/ thread included; along with the sources.

IF we ever have a journal or anything like that I think we should include this article along with some analysis and further links provided by other anons.
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a6e348 No.49

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a6e348 No.337

This is a pretty good PDF.

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7e422e No.322 [Open Thread]>>326 >>329 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

Nzolo, whats your say on my newest poetry?

Feedback on my poem?

Genuine

Give me the sweet green exception
of your genuine red affection
not the chalked up, blacked out alienation
far below our crowded white sunny sky sensation
where planes fly and our infatuation never dies
which where way above in the dark abyss
across the ocean of time, love is just a myth
I have to say hell no, fuck yes,
fathom the aesthetics from which you are blessed
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7e422e No.326>>327

>>322 (OP)
I would have to hear it, I can't get any rhythm from reading it.

Besides that, and I mean this with respect, what the fuck are you on about? It reads like a schizophrenic's manifesto.
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7e422e No.327>>331

>>326
Does it really? How so?
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7e422e No.328

>>324
Such as what?
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7e422e No.329

>>322 (OP)
I like it, anon.
But try to carve out a bit more of a rhythm.
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7e422e No.331

>>327
My understanding of the poem is this. It's a confused profession of some bastard of adoration and lust for some other - never defined nor articulated, like the first stanza zooming about in its caprice. All of this urge directed towards some person that we are assured is 'genuine' and worthy of the 'best' treatment, I presume, despite that treatment not being the most noble in the first place.

Now, am I off the mark, or is this poem really a Frankenstein's monster of traditional, virtuous love and misguided modern "love"? The lack of discernible rhythm helps to exude that vibe of a fickle narrator. This is why it reads like a schizo's manifesto, or perhaps more strikingly, the midnight text messages I receive from my junkie friends. It's all over the place, like a budding, awkward teenage writer's first poem for his secret crush.

It shows great promise, but it is simply unrefined and immature in its structure and motive. Practise and read more, learn more about the ways of the world, and make sure that your next inspiration is more of a tour de force, and not like this tour de farce.
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1fcf31 No.313 [Open Thread][Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

Greetings!

I have something to share with you.
Would you mind giving this a quick glance and tell me what you think?
I hope creating a new thread for this was acceptable.

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Dear Allies,

After World War I, you nurtured the young Soviet Union and tried to internally poison and destroy post-WWI-Germany, which ultimatively led to the events of World War II. When one single man, tried to relieve the world of the Jewish plague. To finally restore order and peace to all lesser men around the globe, which were and will now forever be, thanks to you, pawns in the games of the Jews, you decided to stand by Great Britannia and her Empire of lies, instead of doing what was good and what was righteous. You then proceeded to side with Stalin and destroy Nazi Germany, the last bastion of hope for the Occident. Roosevelt led by greed and fear of losing influence over South-East Asia put an embargo of steel and oil and Japan, leaving them no other option, but to join the war and tricking the American citizens into yet supporting another war. After war, you came to realize where you had done wrong. The Soviets had occupied Europe and the Jew gleefully rubbed their hands, sensing the great wealth that could be gained, from simply supporting both sides with weapons. Yet, did you learn? When the Iron Curtain fell, instead of offering a helping hand to the crushed Russians and establishing lasting peace, you smugly looked the other way, hurting their pride even more. Russia extending its claws again, is solely your fault. Instead of seeing the threat that China became to be, even more so today, you nurtured a deeply corrupted and perverted nation, traded with them, built them up. Well, you see were that led you to. Lets face it, by killing this man you doomed us all. Picture very related. Do not call it a grave, it is the future you chose. You are welcome.

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1fcf31 No.315>>316

>>314
This is not perfect yet, I agree.
But "the allies" is the biggest generic term I could come up with, addressing every country not being Germany or sided with Germany.
Simply writing America wouldnt have been correct.
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1fcf31 No.316>>317

>>315
You misunderstand my main point: what on earth is the purpose of this? To dance over the finer points of geopolitical and economic history so that you could steal some moral high ground? Are you going to mail this into the oval office?
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1fcf31 No.317>>318

>>316
>You misunderstand my main point: what on earth is the purpose of this? To dance over the finer points of geopolitical and economic history so that you could steal some moral high ground? Are you going to mail this into the oval office?

That is an excellent idea!
The purpose of this text though, is simply to startle people and give me replies so we can work it trough.
That worked perfectly on pol, I consider this thing to be a success.
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1fcf31 No.318>>319

>>317
Let me get this straight. You're attention whoring?
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1fcf31 No.319

>>318
Right, making people think a little is attention whoring.
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