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33e281  No.246[Reply]

My post from a thread on /pol/, expanded a bit. It is on natural law and how the White race and other human races fit into that law, as well as the Creativity movement.

Here's a pastebin link, I don't have Office.

http://pastebin.com/40dr4gZG
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33e281  No.248

>>246

Bumping 4 views ;_;
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33e281  No.268

>>246

Harsh, but well written.
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a681e2  No.251[Reply]

It would be really helpful for parents if you could post moral stories..
So much of the kids books is about tolerance and non violence.


It would be helpful to have stories that encourage loyalty and tribalism. Stories that explain nat soc and the evils of usury (and feminism, etc etc). Sometimes violence has been historically necessary.



We need stories that encourage gender roles.

Stories that combat all modern brain washing. Stories (some) might even have broad appeal.


We need kids to be suspicious, especially of liberals/prove, non whites, gov tyranny…..

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a681e2  No.262

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Check out some of these stories
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a681e2  No.263

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a681e2  No.264

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a681e2  No.265

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a681e2  No.266

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28e0a6  No.144[Reply]

Board owner here, I'm thinking of contacting the Daily Stormer and making them aware that this board exists, and it means we could potentially write articles for them if they like some of the work.
How would people feel about this?
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28e0a6  No.228

>>144
I don't like their writing much, but if you think it is worth it go ahead.
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28e0a6  No.230

It's up to you boss,personally I don't think we should become affiliated with any one site.or at least any one site that may attract UNwanted attention or cause people to overlook us because of that affiliation
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28e0a6  No.247

Sounds good to me. They can lurk here for ideas and/or people can contact them with ideas, if this is something D/S is interested in.
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28e0a6  No.255

Anglin is a bit of a spaz, I don't know if I'd want to seriously associate with him. I'd gladly write shit-talking troll pieces for him, though. Both MyPostingCareer and /duck/ seem to like my work.
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28e0a6  No.261

If the board owner does not want to be associated with again, he can still make him aware.
Again is often asking for original content.

The writers can be anon and not associated with pen

I encourage u to contact him
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35fcbe  No.241[Reply]

Perhaps we could collaborate, and put our collective knowledge of the internet and general internet raid techniques into a piece of writing? After all, you all know how much leftists love referring to Alinsky's work. Why not have our own instruction manuals? I dare say we can not only gather a bunch of proper and useful old info, but even include the techniques we've pioneered.
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35fcbe  No.260

This is not a halfbad idea OP,we'll need a pastebin or something.manipulation should probably be included as well.
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5aa5e1  No.25[Reply]

Not a good writer? Not even a writer? Same here. Welcome to the club.

The truth is, it doesn't matter how "good" you are. Because even if you never write a publishable work, fiction is an invaluable tool for mental development and self-improvement.

(bumping with pdf)
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5aa5e1  No.99

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>>25
practice makes perfect. it's also a lot of fun when you've had a couple. check em.
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5aa5e1  No.164

>>26
Extremely strong writing here and from what I've read it's the best submission so far on the board. I'd recommend to read this to all.
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5aa5e1  No.193

>>164
fuck me this guy is good
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5aa5e1  No.249

>>25
Another good exercise is to extrapolate sentences or ideas to try to improve your vocabulary.

For example:
The fox jumped over the dog.
>Panting in the heat of the day, the scarlet fox hurled itself into the air over the canine that so fought to keep him from his quarry.
Shit like that.
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5aa5e1  No.250

>>249
Or at least to get you into the mode or bringing more words to bear from your repertoire.
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c6e130  No.165[Reply]

By all means, save it into a word document. These long posts are provoked by a natural response in you to something, and the ideas that flow from you are, as is understandable, pure and natural. You are not sitting down and putting forward something contrived, you are not pulling intellectual straws in order to find some motivation to write something: it is precisely when you are goaded into writing a long post you are conscious of the fact that there is a character limit. You therefore have to restrict the grandeur of your reply, and you have to summarize a horde of thoughts into three or so paragraphs that fit this character limit. You have perhaps even become quite skilled at doing this: you have found yourself able to write stirring posts, utilizing just the correct image, just the correct formatting, with just the right message, and you have been quite pleased with yourself, having received positive replies from people who have enjoyed it.

But you are actually castrating yourself in a way that is destructive. Consider not abandoning the post after submitting it on one of the boards, but instead save it into a word document and, girded by your natural fervor to respond to whatever had provoked you, turn this post into an essay, a treatise, even a story.

So many of you actually do have very much to write about and say. It is not this that is troublesome, but it is solely unlocking your potential. Your potential must be unlocked through nature: trying to force a story when you have not been naturally inspired will lead to a decidedly unnatural tale that will likely be stilted and not live up to what you know you are capable of.

I propose therefore that you utilize your posts here as inspiration. You have no doubt become quite good at writing posts on the internet, and I am suggesting that you can turn these into longer works.
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c6e130  No.166

Many times I've found myself thinking exactly that.

Sticky plox
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c6e130  No.171

Stickied. PDF exists for a reason, so make use of it anons.
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c6e130  No.173

Great idea.
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c6e130  No.218

I did exactly that. I started writing a response to someone on /christian/ and then that response became several pages long, and then that turned into philosophy friday that I hold there.

It really is because someone ask a question that is so thought provoking it just is pulled out of you.
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c6e130  No.245

>Word document
Maybe if you're a massive jew, otherwise a text file or a libreoffice writer document.
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92cfda  No.238[Reply]

I guess this must be kind of a weird entry to /pen/, since a)the vast majority of you guys probably don't care about this subject, and b)it's not really an original work.

This is my unofficial translation of an official article on the racial purity of modern Greeks, written by a member of Golden Dawn and published on their newspaper and website. While they often publish lovely articles, I found this one is particular to be most interesting, not only for Greeks, but also for foreigners who question said purity using unintelligent "evidence".

It's my first try at translating anything. I didn't bother too much with edits, and so, normally, there should be a few grammatical errors in the text.


On a relevant note, I was thinking of translating this book that pretty much is Golden Dawn's "manifesto", written in 1997. Would you like to read something like that?


I'm sorry if this entry is not exactly /pen/ material.
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92cfda  No.240

It's ok we'll take all literature.and this could be cool.it is Greek to me so thanks for translating it.
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92cfda  No.243

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>>240
You're welcome.
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1a3b8e  No.231[Reply]

Hello, I've just repaired the /new/ board.

https://8ch.net/new/

If you would check it out, I would appreciate it; thank you
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1a3b8e  No.232

Nice. Would be cool if you could help promote our board on /new/, we can definitely help each other out.
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1a3b8e  No.233

>>232
Let's link to each other in our board announcements
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1a3b8e  No.235

>>233
Done
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b90aa9  No.204[Reply]

"Truly," Said the sage, "In a boundless field, all possibilities must at last manifest themselves. Only an immeasurable distance of space and time keeps us from them."

One disciple spoke: “Oh sage, how shall we overcome such an insuperable obstacle?"
But already the sage had retreated into his cave. He would not speak again for a long time—perhaps longer than the interval within which his followers could hear or understand the answer to their questions.
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b90aa9  No.209

Honji asked his disciple: "What is the one thing that cannot be taken from you?" In that moment, the disciple was enlightened.
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b90aa9  No.210

The burglar robs the hermit of all his food bowl and his robe. The hermit strokes his beard and wishes that he could give more to the burglar (so pure is his heart).

The next night, the burglar returns and takes things from the hermit that the hermit did not even know he had.
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b90aa9  No.211

The cat dreamt that the dog devoured him.

Later, the cat told the dog about his dream. The dog scoffed and told the cat that it was absurd.

Your knowledge of cats should make it easy for you to predict what the cat did next.
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b90aa9  No.213

From the ancient legend, nothing survives but images: a man, a monster, the rolling ocean, the wide blue sky.

It would be too much to ask for anything more.
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b90aa9  No.222

>>211
I don't get it.
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0c196d  No.178[Reply]

http://pastebin.com/b1Wb4w70

/rg/ anon here, I wrote something about racemixing.

I was kind of going for a mythic/biblical parable tone here, but I feel like it shifts between mythic poetry (e.g., Beowulf, the Tain, Iliad etc.) and religious myth, which are actually important to keep separate.

Also I'm not a very good writer because I don't write often.
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0c196d  No.217

This is actually quite good. You do well with the tone, though there are some missteps here and there.
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0c196d  No.221

Pretty cool.

Isn't there already a biblical passage on miscegenation though?
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d7cff1  No.189[Reply]

>I've been writing a novel, and found it to be complicated for writing it in one book. I literarly ended up with 30 MCs, I actually filtered out 50 side charectars in order to minimize the charectars the reader will need to know of.

>This is a quick prologue for the story. I'm not going to use it anymore tough because it makes the stories more complicated than actually simplifying them.


>The novels are made in non episodic order, The only charectar to show up in all of them. Is a messanger called the "Stranger". Whom only shows up to give a hospitality and a gift to the MC. Only to end the chapter with "Fate will find it's way."


In the world of this realm, with the fall of the ancient world, the civilizations accepted defeat, but did not accept vanishing.
Rome has united its last members to group together in to a united union of Hydro. Ruling over Europe and its resources. It's one if not the most glorious and admiring civilizations of any kind, ruling with a major boarding school in Fondorum.
In the south continent of Africa: the tribes, ruled under the Semite's of Carthage and united to become what's known as Petra under the books of our writers. The empire of Petra ruled by the word of Baal, and it's advancement on technology has developed oil based vehicles, leading to what is common to us as the industrial age.
In north Asia, the tribes denied any conquest by any rule: kings, and emperors have fallen there by both men and cold climates. The tribes believed to be barbaric and ruthless, are also known to all to be the most advanced in terms of electricity, and survival. It's easy to believe they will kill you on sight, but if you're brave enough to go alone…
And last one's are the old ancient standing empires of Asia, The emperors have fallen many times, yet kept there dynasties and are holding one of the most dictated unions the world has ever seen. Called by Hydro, as Flama for they are ruled by fire and metal, and those who question them will be easily disappeared. And reappear for one last time in a low some blood bathing execution.
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d7cff1  No.192

Interesting idea /pen/ite might I suggest that you make a book covering each civilization and work torwards having the main characters end up at the goal/conflict through each book and have them meet up in the last one.

Also if I may ask what is the goal and or conflict in the series?
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d7cff1  No.195

>>192
The overall conflict & goal is a battle on resources during a global famine. It's uncertain what caused it.

>Sounds like a great idea. I'll try it out.
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533353  No.167[Reply]

The bike messenger parked his bike on the busy sidewalk outside a small office building and walked inside, a fat manila envelope in his hand. Ballcap pulled low and mirrored aviators covering his eyes, his only real distinguishing facial feature was the jet black beard he'd grown.

He smiled at the receptionist and flirted with her for a moment before holding up the envelope and asking which office it needed to be delivered to. She informed him it was the small law firm upstairs to his left and he smiled again, thanked her, and went upstairs to drop it through their mail slot.

Then he stepped into the bathroom at the end of the hall, went into the large handicapped stall at the end, and opened the window. It was a privacy window, allowing light but no means of seeing inside, and the last time he'd been in the building, he'd used a knife and a screw driver to make it capable of opening since it had been screwed shut and painted over years ago.

Now it opened easily, and he swung it open it open and looked outside. Perfect, just the way he'd remembered it. He studied the movement of the flag on the pole across the street and checked the wind speed and direction on his smart phone's weather app and nodded.

Then he slid off his unobtrusive looking backpack, set it on the back of the toilet, unzipped it, and went to work.

The Nemesis Arms Vanquish is a sniper-grade .308-caliber rifle that breaks down and fits into a backpack without losing its zero, or point of aim. He pulled out the rifle, extended the collapsible stock, snapped the bipod into place, then attached the barrel and screwed on the securing collar. Next, he threaded the silencer he'd made from a Mag-lite flashlight onto the end of the barrel, inserted a magazine, and worked the bolt, chambering a round.

Now he just had to wait fifteen more minutes.

Twelve minutes later, his target rolled up to the courthouse across the street and stepped out of his old Crown Vic. The man was a judge who typically handled divorce and custody cases, and he was full-blown feminists and social justice warrior who used his gavel and the power of the court to fuck men over every single time. He'd recently been in the news for giving sole custody of two children to their mother, who was an unemployed crackhead, and arbitrary denying the father any right to even see his own children, despite having to pay both child support and alimony. When the 'bike messengerPost too long. Click here to view the full text.
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533353  No.168

The same day, another man sat in his car, smoking his third cigarette in as many minutes and taking a swig from his water bottle as he waited nervously. This was the fourth time he'd done this, and he was keyed up every single time.

There. He put down his small pair of binoculars (if anyone asked, he was bird watching and had the bird guidebook to prove it.), glanced around for witnesses, and saw there none.

Then he brushed aside the newspaper on the passenger seat, revealing what he'd hidden beneath: his grandfather's Mauser c96 pistol. He opened the end of the wooden stock/holster and withdraw the pistol, attached the stock to turn it into a compact carbine, and shouldered it, aiming through his passenger window.

The young couple, a black man in a basketball jersey and backwards ball cap, and an overweight white woman in a spaghetti strap top and yoga pants, walked down the sidewalk blissfully unaware that a hundred yards away someone was staring at them with murderous intent.

He lined up the sights, heart pounding, forced himself not to hyperventilate, and jerked the trigger twice in rapid succession before he realized he'd left the safety on. Dammit, slow down! He snapped the safety off, sighted more carefully, and forced himself to slowly squeeze the trigger.

BANG! BANG!

The nigger went down with two shots to the chest and his coal-burning girlfriend shrieked, too stupid to duck or run away. Two more shots rang out and she collapsed to join her boyfriend in an expanding pool of blood.

He opened a ziploc bag with six pieces of spent .30 Carbine brass he'd picked up off the floor at a local gun range and dumped them out the window; hopefully the cops would look for someone with an M1 Carbine instead of a Mauser broomhandle, and the two extra rounds might cause them to waste time trying to find where the other bullets went so they could recover them.
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533353  No.176

Why should we care for this bike messenger at the start? What's in it for us?
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533353  No.182

>>176
Dead niggers.
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9ddcaf  No.148[Reply]

This is my first essay, or at least the first one I ever bothered to finish and upload.
It is pretty short, but I believe it's summing up the essence of its subject quite well, even if I preferred to not point any fingers towards specific groups in it, if you get what I mean.
Please, do tell me what you think of it how it/I can be improved.
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9ddcaf  No.153

>>152
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Regarding the lack of justification: that is an understandable point, however the target group that I would like to interest with my essay already knows most of the details regarding the context I present. What I wanted to achieve was to give the already conservative or conservative-leaning reader both a summary of what he may already know about the world of art and propaganda, and most importantly, a taste of what a new prototype of a conservative mindset regarding art should be. And naturally, I mostly aim to stimulate the emotion of the reader to get my point through.
And on the "verbose" part, well, as a non native-English speaker I wanted to experiment with the language. I'm still trying to find my fitting literary style and so some mistakes and linguistic exaggerations are bound to happen in the process.
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9ddcaf  No.154

>>153
I see. In that case, carry on, as I hope to see more in the future. This is very promising work.
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9ddcaf  No.157

This is too unstructured, wavering, and unclear. Much of it reads like a rant against predictable enemies, and the arguments aren't developed finely enough. A lot of information is thrown at the reader and they do not function well in terms of individual paragraphs, it all just seems to support a large rant. Your premise and beliefs are not in question, it is the form that matters. Give your essay time and space to relax, devote energies to expanding each individual argument, load them with sources that are cited and beyond the predictable and axiomatic ones: it's the inclusion of these specialized references that give you authority beyond the typical.

Overall, restructure your writing, cause each paragraph to be unified under a substantial idea that utilizes its own individual argument, and divide the force of your message through each of these arguments. While we have a general theme that permeates everything, it is, again, quite unstructured, wandering, and sounds more like a rant than anything. One has to search for what you are arguing against or arguing for, and it isn't as deliberate and clear as it could be.
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9ddcaf  No.174

I like the rhythym and enjoyed your thoughts. Well done.
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9ddcaf  No.179

>>157
Thanks for your input. I will eventually try and expand each argument and solidify the essay.

>>174
Thank you.
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cb0b9c  No.128[Reply]

If /pol/ is serious about starting a literary publication, I recommend "Instauration" as the sort of thing we should be shooting for.

This was a high-quality, pro-white magazine that published regular issues for 20+ years and had a fairly wide circulation (although you could waste days trying to find a reference to it in the MSM). It was smart and incisive, covered a wide range of topics and had a darkly humorous editorial tone. It might be best described as a combination of the Occidental Quarterly and National Lampoon.

Best of all, every issue is available on PDF for free: http://instaurationonline.com/

Pic related.
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ae9017  No.64[Reply]

Please require the content to be under a creative commons license, requiring attribution and derivatives or no derivatives. That way the material can be redistributed for maximum impact.
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ae9017  No.69

Explain this to me
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ae9017  No.79

>>69
Not much to explain. It means that if you want to submit your work into the project, you license the work so that other people can republish it without permission, so long as they attribute the author properly.

Derivative is more open-source, if you allowed derivatives, people could take your work and modify it. Very imageboard culture friendly, but maybe not good for the author. It could be optional.

Problem trying to solve: getting the work disseminated. If it can be republished without permission, its ideas can spread far and wide. This is always done informally on imageboards, but if you go outside an imageboard, its best to make it formal. If you give over the work to be published, you agree that others can republish it.

That's the suggestion as I see it.
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