Unless you train a LoRA on scripts and/or text session logs, I feel like the output of any models I've tried feels too generic, vague implications with no real direction, including your example. There are hundreds of files out there with much higher writing quality.
Maybe if you really want to lean in to the roleplay/interactive aspect and be an active part of the scene throughout, but for actual trancing its next to useless. There aren't enough examples in the training data for it to guide a session effectively, it will get stuck repeating the same sloppy flowery language loops chatbot AIs are bad for. (Their output really depends on the quality of your input)
Never seen an AI session log with structure, a proper induction, trigger implantation and testing. You can get a little guided visualization, but even that has it's issues. And I've tried, you have to handhold and re-gen responses so often, you're just roleplaying at that point. It can be fun messing around with DeepSeek, but its so obvious when people use AI to write scripts, they've never been effective for me, even when performed by competent hypnotists.
