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f75751 No.386299 [Last50 Posts]

It doesn't matter what others think of your reading choices, as long as you love to read.

This board has amazing writefags, and OC is the lifeblood of the board, however, some people long to see stories about their waifus that writefags don't normally do.

In the same spirit as a Drawthread, this is for Violated Heroes to request stories they'd like to see written, or for new and old writefags to link their work for critique, or for others to enjoy.Shilling is encouraged!

If you have large amounts of text, or are running an update to stories, please consider posting it all to a pastebin and posting here when it is updated or finished.

Please keep things on topic. It's fine to talk about stories, characters, plots, etc, but keep the blog-posting out of here.

Thread 1: https://archive.is/eT2UX

Thread 2: https://archive.is/zZyJk

Thread 3: https://archive.is/yUCIq

Thread 4: https://archive.is/5e1Qr

Thread 5: https://archive.is/vWMc9

Thread 6: https://archive.is/O2ckz

Thread 7: https://archive.is/B7Hfg

Thread 8: https://archive.is/dxA9v

Thread 9: http://archive.is/SgT2c

Thread 10: http://archive.is/5V6OG

Thread 11: http://archive.is/76I5P

Thread 12: https://archive.is/6Cfze

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9842d7 No.386361

File: 7014192234f37a4⋯.png (1.8 MB,690x1017,230:339,dragoncorehexer.png)

First Tanuki free post. This dragon girl from Yugioh seems pretty interesting. She has fought so many (literal) dragons that she turned into a dragon girl. I wonder what kind of story you could make out of her? I'm not much of a write fag myself besides a few poems I wrote years ago. I'm merely throwing this into the pot for inspiration.

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ed4454 No.386377

>>386361

Female paladin that is getting a slowburn monsterization? Like, she defeats the dragons and that unleashes like a little explosion of energy that gets past her armor's enchantments against it. Eventually she just ends up raping her squire and starting a lair of her own.

Just spitballing here, might actually write a story about that, because I like slowburn transformations.

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19033b No.386380

>>386377

Bumping this idea

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34d19f No.386393

File: 7845b1e40eff12c⋯.png (157.58 KB,1200x3254,600:1627,pmc5.png)

File: 99f91abd8e59681⋯.png (132.44 KB,1095x2059,1095:2059,pmc4.png)

File: 196f162122c9033⋯.png (149.34 KB,1553x1843,1553:1843,pmc3.png)

File: a1e9a4c600d3746⋯.png (389.52 KB,1639x4848,1639:4848,pmc2.png)

File: d1f21f595618be0⋯.png (113.36 KB,1616x1593,1616:1593,pmc1.png)

It's something I thought of for a while now, but would a modern day setting with monster girls have squads like the anon from pics related doing the exact same shit but with runaway sons instead?

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96bd5c No.386405

I need some mad comfy good feels

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5bf397 No.386410

>>386393

Even if those are indeed real, I pray something like that never happens in a world of monstergirls. It shouldnt happen

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75e95c No.386421

>>386393

This would be less private contractor work, and more RWDS stuff. Not happy ending things.

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ba1fa7 No.386449

>>386393

Glad this shit isnt real, he wrote pretty convincingly though

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34d19f No.386481

>>386421

>>386410

I thought it might have some decent hijinks potential. My bad, fellas.

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19033b No.386488

>>386393

Jesus Christ that is vile

However, a sterilized version of this with mg squads retrieving their clients’ sons or prospective husbands from either their own domiciles or (in the case of rebellious sons) secret handholding clubs has some potential.

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b6d7ce No.386509

>>386488

The idea of a highly secretive club where tired husbands/boyfriends just hold hands or play patty-cake is hilarious to me.

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498024 No.386625

File: a1e568f9b29848e⋯.png (63.26 KB,310x229,310:229,that_was_fucking_gay_shit.png)

>>386509

>handholding and playing patty cake with other dudes

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27a4a8 No.386702

>>386299

Bump with cross-posting from the Greentext Thread:

Superheroine bunnygirl falls in love with a not-so-villanous villian (Saturday Morning Cartoon style).

. https://pastebin.com/a8ukwH4a

I hope you like it, even though I could've done better in terms of Saturday Morning Cartoon atmosphere.

Oh yeah, I'd like to write an ending too, but which one do you like best?

Villain end: The Count Vice introduce his new Evil Partner in crime: Lethal Lazuli.

Hero end: Lago Lazuli teams up with the unexpected Count Valor.

Neutral end: MG North's newest super couple is a little odd. But they're madly in love, that's for sure.

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f02714 No.386737

I have an idea for a lion girl story with parts being them meeting in highschool and married life after. What's the best way to get to all points. Should I do a flashback to how they met or just do a time skip at a few points?

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2c4e7c No.386746

>>386625

Personally, I just think it's funny that there are entire secret societies dedicated to handholding because their waifus won't do it.

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058f6d No.386749

>>386737

As you didn't give much information, I'll just say in just a general sense you should keep a story chronological unless you have very good reason not to. Else you risk either confusing readers or pissing them off.

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bcc5f4 No.386751

Any word on these two stories prompts from the previous thread?

>Dragon waifu's father was killed by a dude and she goes to kill said dude only to find he's survived by a son and has to decide how to deal with that situation.

and

>David Lynch style murder mystery with quirky townfolk and weird happenings in some small mountain town featuring some monstergirls.

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19033b No.386766

>>386746

I was thinking something more along the lines of “Rebellious son runs away from arranged marriage with Demon to go desperately assert his freedom by holding a bunch of girls’ hands in Europe like a MANWHORE.”

Instead of being brainwashed into compliance upon return, he just gets raped into submission by his now-slightly-more-yandere-and-justifiably-so bride to be.

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b6d7ce No.386776

File: bc3140eeedbdbab⋯.jpg (62.33 KB,953x730,953:730,Dang it.jpg)

>>386625

Shit, i forgot to add "with human women". I only now realize that it makes it sound gay as fuck.

Fuck me, that's awful.

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34d19f No.386792

>>386766

I was kinda thinking something along the lines of "Rebellious son runs away from home in order to join a chaste temple in bumfuck nowhere" or boys getting radicalized by nearby palladin sects or something. Or actual kidnapping by isolated San Francisco-esque mini towns where the victims get stockholmed and force-fed soylent.

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053d57 No.387110

Just remembering the Transylvanna, and Most Wanted stories in hopes the writefags remember and continue the stories, or somebody else maybe takes inspiration.

https://pastebin.com/CJmpNTbr/

https://pastebin.com/PmMTK21h/

They seemed like good holiday times…

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08ec77 No.387287

I wrote a story based around a homebrew version of MGE mixed with some of my own shit.

https://pastebin.com/3QRviKYr pls enjoy

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7db575 No.387339

>>387110

>local man BTFOs orgasm denial fetishists out of sheer rage

Based

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b01759 No.387356

>>387287

Someone watched Troy before writing this

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6d7f85 No.387366

Here's a short valentines day writefag involving a qt3.14 Jinko

https://pastebin.com/nxVgnyCS

Haven't finished any writefags a lot lately

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08c80c No.387382

>>387366

This is good shit, minisatan. I like how the jinko decided to take the gentler approach. And thanks to the mc for asking the real questions.

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34d19f No.387674

File: 624c980d78c320a⋯.jpg (129.83 KB,1000x1000,1:1,panda pussy.jpg)

Are there any stories or greentexts involing Ren Xiongmao's? I got a mad case of panda fever that won't stop.

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b8ad1a No.387711

>>386393

not mg related but do you have more of those contractor stories? theyre entertaining as all fuck

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19033b No.387761

>>387674

I remember one from the hellhole that was the old MGEwiki’s fanfic section. Plot was basically:

>local village is negotiating with nearby demon realm for trade

>one of the villagers at negotiations is an awkward farmer’s son

>Ren Xiongmao is one of the mg negotiators

>she starts flustering the farmboy, who can’t handle it and has to leave

>hijinx ensue and the village gets invaded by order and demon realm forces simultaneously

>Farmboy is lost in the confusion, found by the same Ren Xiongmao, and proactive dated

It’s probably lost in the ether somewhere, but it was one of the better stories in a sea of cringe.

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34d19f No.387766

>>387711

Only ones I know exist. Sorry, pal.

>>387761

>Getting pre-consent sexed in the middle of a battlezone

Ambassadors are truly next level

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42537e No.387768

File: 1941cd702aa4b59⋯.jpg (4.09 MB,3035x4299,3035:4299,MKR_3000_wow.jpg)

>>387766

>pre-consent sex

Is that what the feminists are calling it now.

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76fd86 No.387769

Do any of you have advice as how to be a writefag?

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cb1780 No.387771

>>387769

Write. No seriously, just write. It may be utter trash, but you’ll get better and better at it with time. Write something, anything at least once a day

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36abee No.387772

>>387768

>Is that what the feminists are calling it now.

Only when it's muds.

>>387769

>write

>proof-read at least once after you're done with it

>read stuff you like and try to analyze what makes you like it

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36abee No.387773

>>387768

Also, sauce. IQDB didn't work.

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08c80c No.387774

>>387773

I only do this beause you understood I was joking. Remove spaces. Standard warnings apply.

http s://ww w.pixiv .net/member_illust.php?mode=m edium&illust_id=73302979

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36abee No.387786

>>387774

Thanks.

Also, removing the https://www. is enough to remove the hyperlink, you can just post it like pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=73302979

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34b716 No.387791

>>386377

https://pastebin.com/SBg7pA8J

I made a first bit of writing on this idea, mostly introducing the squire and the knight. I'm currently keeping the fights between the paladin and the dragons vague, as they don't really matter.

What do you guys think, anything I should change?

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e79a4b No.387792

>>387791

Nice! Though how do male harems work here, other than being in suspended animation for the daughters.

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f947d1 No.387793

>>387792

>Though how do male harems work here

They don't.

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e761b9 No.387794

Hey, do any of you guys buy those monster girl books on Amazon? Any of them worth it?

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34d19f No.387795

>>387794

I got them. They're worth getting into in my opinion.

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34b716 No.387796

>>387793

>>387792

They really don't. Dragons are kind of defaulting to worst girls in this, so you don't feel bad about them dying in large amounts. I'm planning on making Elloy, as an ex-paladin, more monogamic.

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e761b9 No.387797

>>387769

read stories you enjoy to get a sense of "style" I like Brandon Sanderson books,(though he lately got bullied into accepting homos. I prefer his old school Mormon "nope" stance, but as far as I can tell he only has one homo in all of his books and he's a nobody character with no stake in anything and no POV)

I wrote a lot before I showed anyone my stories, because most of them are bad. You'll suck at first, but you need to get past that to get good. Also don't try for an epic fantasy as your first story. I mean you can, but you won't finish it, and it will discourage you. Write short stories first, 20 pages max. Just getting done with it will make you happy and you'll be more likely to start another one. Its easier to write six 10,000 word stories over one 60,000 word story

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e761b9 No.387798

>>387795

which ones specifically? If any of you have one on there, shill it to me, and I might buy it

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34d19f No.387799

>>387798

Both encyclopedias. You'd get some updated art on Gargoyle and Red Oni and I like the translations a bit better than the web ones. There's also some lore if you're into that but if that's not enough you might wanna skip.

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e761b9 No.387800

>>387799

oh, I have those. I meant the books written by fans. The novels.

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533194 No.387802

>>387769

>>387772

on top of revising, don't immediately go back and revise something, let the story sit for a few days before you go back over it

that way your mind wont gloss over everything you just wrote since it's still fresh in your memory, you'll catch spelling/grammar mistakes easier doing that

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e761b9 No.387804

>>386481

Its a good idea, its just… those were so horrific. So horrific in fact it makes professional kidnappers look like heroes

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533194 No.387808

I swear I'm not dead you guys.

https://pastebin.com/1k5BtFEp

Also, I would have written and posted this a week ago, but some dumb shit happened at work which made me lose the motivation to write it for a few days, and by the time I got my motivation back, it was a few days before Valentine's Day and I didn't want to rush things.

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8ece3f No.387831

>>387808

Now this was fucking QUALITY, m8. Keep it up.

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b8ad1a No.387847

>>386751

bumping for first one

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fcbeef No.387880

>>386361

Out of all the yugioh cards you could have waifu'd, you chose a shitty level 8 vanilla tuner. For shame dude, for shame.

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9a133b No.387936

>>387366

C-Cute

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76fd86 No.387948

File: d96d69926afc426⋯.jpg (173.91 KB,640x640,1:1,explore-alberta-1.jpg)

Well, I tried my hand at some writefaggotry, I don't know what I was doing honeslty.

Here it is

https://pastebin.com/9gu74rfL

I probably shouldn't have made my first story end in a cliff hanger but oh well

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9842d7 No.387952

File: eab362be1596609⋯.jpg (692.17 KB,701x1038,701:1038,7elemental_hero_stratos_by….jpg)

File: a83ac5191d91aae⋯.jpg (902.15 KB,813x1185,271:395,ghostrick_angel_of_mischie….jpg)

File: b8c44fac61a91a3⋯.png (739.18 KB,475x696,475:696,GalateatheOrcustAutomaton-….png)

File: a28f91492c10f7f⋯.jpg (3.83 MB,3624x2500,906:625,2498246 - Andrew_(artist) ….jpg)

File: 2b31cbdea5a02e8⋯.png (1.7 MB,692x1012,173:253,summonsorceress.png)

>>387880

It's because she has a relevant back story. she's a trade in target at least. I am aware of many yugioh waifus of which the majority fall under the dark mage category. Here are a few examples of ones that don't with the exception of summon sorceress perhaps someone could write a story about one of those?

>>387808

What kind of dumb shit happened at work? Is there something you would like to talk about? /monster/ has your back anon. Enough good writefags have already killed themselves because they realized their waifus in their stories wouldn't real.

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bcc5f4 No.388012

>>387847

I came up with another story prompt that I'm sure /monster/ will hate. Basically, sometime in the mid to late 1800's there is a fellow who is a Van Helsing like character with the personality of One Punch Man's Sataima. He's been tasked by the church to rid the world of abominations and that's pretty much all he does 24/7. Essentially he's the reason why monstergirls don't exist in any capacity in our current universe. I had a whole montage in my mind of him traveling across the world and dispatching monstergirls of all kinds in a variety of gruesome ways with an aurora of callous indifference.

To cater to the /monster/ audience this would have to be a prelude of sorts since I don't think anyone would care that much for a story about a guy who only goes around killing monstergirls rather than loving them. To make it work, it would have to lead into some kind of ancestry gag wherein some distant offspring of monsters long since slain attempt to take revenge on the decendant that killed thier ancestors and it'd devovle into some comedy/harem antics of some sort I think.

Unlike the "you killed my father!" dragon lady prompt which would be more dramatic this would be more of an excuse for a gags and such. My humor is rather dark so I figure the prelude may be too uncomfortable for some to indulge in but I like the concept of dealing with uncomfortable situations laid at your feat by ancestors you never knew..

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76fd86 No.388027

>>387948

I updated this little project of mine

https://pastebin.com/9gu74rfL

If any of you could give some feed back I would very much appreciate it.

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3c103c No.388074

>>388027

>Adolph Himmler

Pfff

I'm interested though, please continue.

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3c103c No.388075

>>388027

Regarding the setting, the guy has a car and driver's license but he's using a spear, and has no such thing as a gun, or a phone? Did he lose them?

Also, might wanna check the punctuation and pacing on some of the lines.

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76fd86 No.388095

>>388027

welp, I wrote another update It takes a while to write doesn't it?

https://pastebin.com/9gu74rfL

>>388075

Thanks. I haven't edited the older parts yet but I've tried to have better grammar in this new one, by which I mean I looked up grammar and used the first thing I saw as a guide.

>>388074

I was looking for names that meant wolf and I saw 'adolf" and 'adolph'

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cb1780 No.388101

>>388095

I think he assumed you put Hitler’s and Heinrich Himmler’s names together

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997595 No.388121

>>388095

>Negro Vikings

Well that got really weird really quickly

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b01759 No.388138

>>388027

>Adolph Himmler

We must secure the existence of our waifus and a future for awoo children

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2cd4ab No.388193

File: 7e82c9738cfae73⋯.jpg (445.79 KB,700x1004,175:251,__dhampir_and_vampire_mons….jpg)

>>388138

What would be Hitlers favourite monster?

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e79a4b No.388199

>>388193

Danukis

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34d19f No.388205

>>388193

Kobolds

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9842d7 No.388269

>>388193

Dragons, most likely. They give off an extreme amount of pride and are not afraid to be nationalistic. Also, most of them are white. I can see Hitler respecting other monsters as well. An example of another one is the titania. Also I can see him respecting most of the monsters from Zipangu, like the Ochimusha and Ryu as in real life, he respected the japanese.

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19033b No.388294

File: a163285caf1b4b4⋯.jpeg (33.65 KB,600x600,1:1,4DF75B44-19B3-4AF7-916B-7….jpeg)

>>388193

Well I’m inclined to say Jinkos based on his love of tigers

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ba11a7 No.388299

>>388193

A Heil-Hound.

Or, on a more serious note, a Leanan Sidhe.

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8eafd7 No.388303

>>388193

I think Eva Braum would be an Angel for him. Though I now wonder what the other guys would have gotten

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533194 No.388304

>>388303

eagle harpies

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76fd86 No.388313

Another update. I think this is the larged update yet.

https://pastebin.com/9gu74rfL

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26a504 No.388314

>>388313

I am 100% confident that unless you write some corny bullshit to get out of that cliffhanger, you have written yourself into a corner.

That, or muhfuggen wizard is actually the MC.

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76fd86 No.388318

>>388314

>you have written yourself into a corner.

Nuh-uh

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a54625 No.388328

File: 3ad8a9ca716ba52⋯.jpg (809.98 KB,848x1200,53:75,harpie.jpg)

>>387952

I still like Harpies, I think they're probably one of the things that got me in to monstergirls.

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9842d7 No.388383

>>388328

Do you play harpies in yugioh? Have you considered any other monster girl archtypes?

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e79a4b No.388390

>>388294

*Adolf is hitting it from behind*

<"MY TRANSMISSION IS BROKEN!"

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4d313c No.388397

https://pastebin.com/nsRERK8s

Based on an idea I've had for a little while but couldn't find the motivation to put together until now

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4fac0e No.388398

>>388390

king tiger girl when?

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9842d7 No.388399

File: 1da82a2a3089836⋯.jpg (535.76 KB,850x991,850:991,sample_86304ec4be909b5e376….jpg)

File: ed59f2cc8c437b5⋯.jpg (45.18 KB,474x670,237:335,th.jpg)

>>388390

>>388398

graf zeppelin comes to mind, even if she is a boat girl.

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76fd86 No.388404

File: e80a04e60cfc709⋯.jpg (159.19 KB,875x913,875:913,ice_mage_by_adlovett-d4zjf….jpg)

>>388313

Well, I wrote some corny bullshit, enjoy

https://pastebin.com/9gu74rfL

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e3ab0e No.388411

>>388390

>*Adolf is hitting it from behind*

>what’s a greentext

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349384 No.388414

>>388411

Yeah! What the hell is green text??? They have nothing like this on Tumblr or Reddit. it's crazy!

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b32361 No.388417

>>388414

Ironic shitposting is still shitposting.

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19033b No.388418

>>388404

Well that was not the direction I expected this to go

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76fd86 No.388504

>>388418

He's not dead yet

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ba11a7 No.388538

Had an idea about big story about a anti-monster society getting screwed up when one of the daughters of their elites turns out to be a lilim daughter of the demon queen with her magic sealed. The event that reveals this and breaks the seal results in several conversions and at least one alping.

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26217a No.388583

Lots of jealous Monster s writing stories here. I always see something like "boobs that would make a succubus jealous" or so and so thing would put a succubus to shame

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6d8ae0 No.388584

>>388583

Especially since it's the cowgirls who have the mega-milkers

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76fd86 No.388602

File: bcf4652400a0e24⋯.jpg (52.61 KB,480x480,1:1,Wolves.jpg)

>>388404

I don't know what I was thinking with this update.https://pastebin.com/9gu74rfL

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f603b1 No.388710

https://pastebin.com/2vEerc7k

Thoughts on my story? Leave feedback as needed.

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e4dff0 No.388751

>>388710

Pretty good. I hope you update soon.

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2cd4ab No.388777

File: da9a2ef48629820⋯.png (3.57 MB,1875x2500,3:4,__original_drawn_by_sogaya….png)

Guys i am looking for a story named Pretty boy

Its about a male companion and a kitsune. Can somebody give me a link?

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753087 No.388781

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2cd4ab No.388792

File: f5e29c91c4df556⋯.jpg (256.38 KB,921x1280,921:1280,f5e29c91c4df556a0c309e592c….jpg)

>>388781

Oh my god, thank you

Windows deleted all of my shit now i have to download all the shit that was lost.

Ammit bless (You)

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fca88a No.388821

>>388710

Interesting story, I'll be waiting for updates as well

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cfebe7 No.388827

>>388710

Some dialogue and words (like "traitor) repeat a bit too often, sometimes even in the same paragraph. The switch from first person to third person is also a tad weird but not bad.

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c5c697 No.388904

File: db8ebc419c33e9a⋯.gif (2.51 MB,286x180,143:90,Really disbelief doubt.gif)

>>388853

Did not care for tbh. Too much gay shit.

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fca88a No.388905

>>388853

gay/10

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b9e3cb No.388920

>>388904

>>388905

Kinda the point. It's supposed to be shit shock humor.

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fca88a No.388925

https://pastebin.com/wPBG9EkT

In the previous thread someone asked for a dragon femdom story.

I wrote something back in that thread but I didn't know anymore where to go with that story so I decided to start again from scratch.

Feedback is always appreciated

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9842d7 No.388966

File: ef9a02a3d831036⋯.png (Spoiler Image,759.62 KB,1024x576,16:9,Bg_hood_1.png)

File: 37085fbca1f8a68⋯.jpg (Spoiler Image,46.03 KB,564x900,47:75,3f24b0f26613fbef26bd0c1e92….jpg)

File: 210c9cf2d9c77a2⋯.jpg (Spoiler Image,167.36 KB,751x1063,751:1063,a7233bf95eae0fde8bfed89d86….jpg)

File: f63c28273c418ec⋯.png (Spoiler Image,1.06 MB,1024x576,16:9,Bg_yorktown_1.png)

File: 73905dd0b2d258d⋯.jpeg (Spoiler Image,24.19 KB,480x480,1:1,4daac9ea859b4c9597684aa12….jpeg)

>>388399

Speaking of boat girls, I wrote this small short story. It's kind of sad so I will be spoilering it.

Imagine looking into your ship's eyes as she is sinking, desperately trying to hold on, it's too heavy and as she starts to pull you down you hear her start to gasp for air. You know you can't hold her up, you know this is your last moments together, but you can't bring yourself to let go. One of your other boat girls knows that if you keep holding on to her, you will die too… She does what she does not want to do. She pulls you away from your sinking boat girl. You struggle, kick, and scream orders at her to stop what she is doing but she defies them. She doesn’t want to lose you any more than you want to lose your sinking ship girl. As you are finally forced away from her you see her fall off into the cold black abyss of the ocean. You attempt to jump in after her, but your other boat girls stop you. You know it is too late. With tears in your eyes you embrace one of your other boat girls and blame yourself for her death. c-cupids exist for a reason, r-right guys?

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52a04d No.388998

File: ee9b0b93022b1b4⋯.png (286.9 KB,1000x669,1000:669,aiko viccy.png)

Hello hi etc

Benefactors

https://pastebin.com/t1GzDd8a

Tags: MGE, Salamander, Bicorn, Yuri, FFM

Synopsis: A bicorn and a knight go into an abandoned castle in search of what their contractor demanded. In their search, they find a salamander down on her luck looking to beat them to what loot they must be after.

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2b1d7a No.389054

YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
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0288c0 No.389211

File: d95cad313e3f6a2⋯.png (1.06 MB,980x1500,49:75,1437280342325-2.png)

Could anyone point me to the stories with the CEO anon and the snek girl? Take a smol tsun snek as payment

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76fd86 No.389346

File: e4ccea850ff7903⋯.png (472.31 KB,513x369,57:41,2f8fc2713173d8fde9f13f4341….png)

>>388602

Well, it's been a few days but I finally got around to righting another update, I think this will be the ending of my first story. So what did you guys think? I hope it entertained you if nothing else.

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84a482 No.389351

anyone here happen to have the one pastebin about the veteran and the catgirl and chesire?

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ad4e09 No.389390

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49c751 No.389405

>>389390

>>389351

Holy shit I remember this author and their stories. All of them are so fucking good but they always end up not finished. Like the veteran one doesn’t reveal stuff about what happened to him and where his wife went. It’s like their good but there’s never a resolution, every story ends on a cliffhanger that by going by when the stories were made are never going to be finished and satisfied. Is there any other place where the author put their stories, somewhere they might have finished them?

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e249f1 No.389556

Does anybody have a link to that story about an either hellhound or manticore pov that works in the mafia or something like that and buys a shota who is blind? I've been having a really hard time finding it.

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0288c0 No.389566

File: 502e08c18573e67⋯.png (884.24 KB,1161x1920,387:640,75fe6d8e2edc1dbf940c791a35….png)

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4fe89d No.389667

Reading all these makes me want to try to write one up. But I've never posted a story before so it'd probably be trash.

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d9ef14 No.389668

>>389667

Do it. Write it down, then edit it to fix mistakes and inconsistencies.

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4fe89d No.389669

>>389668

Well alright. I got an idea in my head I'll type it out when I get home. If I have the willpower I'll put it up on a pastebin.

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83e710 No.389710

Are there any good, preferably non-lewd stories involving a griffon?

Also, I recall reading a story a year, year and a half or so ago about a space junker that gets captured by pirates led by a hellhound; I believe it was posted directly to a thread, no pastebin, but I cannot for the life of me find it.

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e3ab0e No.389889

>>389710

There was a short story about a thief trying to steal from a griffon’s hoard, but I don’t have the pastebin bookmarked.

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bcc5f4 No.390268

>>389710

>>389889

I had a moment of panic thinking I'd spelled griffin wrong multiple times in my story. Turns out it has multiple different spellings so we're both right.

I've posted my story a few different times across the write thread whenever I updated it. The previous thread should have the most up to date version. Ctrl+F griffin and you'll find it. I recommend the .pdf since that should have the most grammatical fixes and of course overall better presentation. If you've already read it, I hope you enjoyed it.

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9a133b No.390536

>>388710

stop teasing and update soon

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e46236 No.390604

>>388925

dead link.

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9842d7 No.390607

File: 700f14270129e19⋯.png (691.18 KB,700x583,700:583,700f14270129e19ad0fb791ccb….png)

>This girl comes up to you on a comfy but hot Saturday evening while you are at a bar.

>"Hey kid, buy me a drink. You won't regret it."

>What do you do, /monster/?

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1aa128 No.390608

>>390604

Honestly the story was crap so I killed it

I have this issue with writing where I want to write whatever I'm writing in one go. For college assignments and whatnot this works fine but for stories they just end up being rushed

>>390607

Buy her a drink obviously.

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cd94a2 No.390614

>>390607

Onis like whiskey too, yeah?

She better not be a jack-swilling pleb, though.

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ce38b7 No.390671

>>390607

If she is going to drug and rayp me she ought to be buying, though I guess since it's for her she's going to get strong and do it anyways

>>390608

I would like to see it resurrected

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36abee No.390723

File: 451b1f113da9f00⋯.jpg (165.57 KB,800x1200,2:3,451b1f113da9f007fba7685d39….jpg)

got the idea from cleaning a rusty scissor with a rust remover spray

>you spray the dust remover all throughout the metal exterior

>her high pitched digital yelp breaks the silence

>one would think you would need to disable the circuits in order to clean better, without any interruption, and that is what mothers do to clean their daughters' insides

>your wife, however, refuses to do so

>she claims she doesn't like it, but, you being a human, she'd feel safer being able to tell instantly if you do anything wrong

>still, her lacks of commentary besides moans and cries makes you doubt her statements

>gently, you scrap the rust off

>next you clean it off with a rag

>the metal already looks shiny and clean

>you proceed further into her insides, gently cleaning her sensitive bits with care and an alcohol solution

>the first time you did this you thought you were sending her into a roller coaster of emotions

>as you got used to her you slowly learned that all those emotions were actually just pleasure

>as your cleaning goes on, the insides get cleaner, but the outside gets messier

>you apply the last bit of metal polish and look up at her face

>she can't resist any longer, and the sigh of her in this state never fails to make you want to indulge her

>you take her then and there, making full use of the wd-40 in her joints

>finally, she uses her legs to hold you in as you let yourself fall on top of her, basking in the afterglow and enjoying the faint vanilla scent coming from her insides

>you'll probably have to clean her again because of how messy it was

>and you wouldn't have it any other way

I don't want to fuck a scissor, I just want to clean an automaton in a lewd way.

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4fac29 No.390771

File: dfe170eef269276⋯.jpeg (88.76 KB,750x563,750:563,shonan-junai-gumi-21e28f7….jpeg)

Alright guys, take it ez on me. I finally got the time to sit down for an hour or two to put down my idea. It ain't much. It probably feels rushed, but this is my first time so please enjoy if you can.

https://pastebin.com/RDxp7xCK

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f6b247 No.390780

File: 898103663572985⋯.jpg (54.14 KB,500x500,1:1,POWER NUT.jpg)

>>390723

>I just want to clean an automaton in a lewd way

Gonna end up needing one of these along the way

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d9ef14 No.390799

>>390771

>Bentou is just blocks of ice

Got a kek out of me, I like it.

That said, you gotta work on spacing whole paragraphs from each other. The end of the story where his sis gets decked had me a bit confused on who was being decked at first. You're well on your way anon, just watch out for random meme arrows and asterisks for actions.

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e66e66 No.390811

>>390799

Thanks I'll take your advice to heart for sure. Just glad I got someone to chickle.

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872584 No.390851

File: 245419d5f0ca4c5⋯.png (630.28 KB,839x704,839:704,lesswip.png)

Victory and Defeat, chapter 12. Last chapter, missing a little epilogue. Derrota's story is now basically done.

https://pastebin.com/FW6k3At0

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906e63 No.391046

>>388781

good shit and cute

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039c15 No.391163

>>391046

Good, shit or cute? It can't be all three, Anon.

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2cbc3f No.391177

File: 613202ace39fd98⋯.gif (1.7 MB,350x340,35:34,613202ace39fd981f6141a538b….gif)

>>388781

I also enjoyed this, original story idea and solid writing.

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02ed3a No.391219

File: 24f3e61e6e75826⋯.png (1.36 MB,2000x2500,4:5,medusa.png)

https://pastebin.com/AQvVud8i

Here's my short medusa story. Havn't done in writing in a long time, and I wrote half of it on my tablet so there's probably some errors I didn't see.

Also looking for some more writing prompts

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c40c29 No.391243

YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.

>>391219

Nice story. Kind of left me wanting more.

How about giving this a shot?

>>389756

>>389763

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a27aa7 No.391267

File: 8dd6d5d1b17c06e⋯.gif (692.97 KB,582x250,291:125,EvenWarmheartedCicada-smal….gif)

https://pastebin.com/yizyJe1P

Ok guys here's the deal. I was just looking around some old computer stories I used to type up just for fun when I came across this one. It's got like 50000 or more words in it and this is just a 5000 word clipping from it.

I remember I was writing it out like a visual novel story where I'm typing up the common route and then was just gonna type up a route for each girl for the fun of it. It's taken heavy inspiration, if not just straight up ripped from Monster Musume and MGE but to suit my own plot I adjusted shit the way I wanted it.

If anyone actually says, "Hey, I'm interested in this. Put the rest of it on that pastebin so I can read about the other five girls and stuff man."

Then I'm definitely willing to do that, but I'm gunna read through and fix any grammer errors and shit first. If it sucks ass I'll just let it rot in my hardrive never to be seen again.

>tldr if you like it and want the 45000 other words let me know and I'll post it

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e46236 No.391272

>>390771

Really good twist at the end, good characterization. You seem talented enough to make another chapter of this.

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e46236 No.391273

>>391219

I do think you cut short the stalking phase a bit short for us yandere fans. Have you perchance written other medusa fics in the past?

>>391272

sage fail…doh

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02ed3a No.391274

>>391273

I have not written anything /monster/ related in the past. I've just been really into medusas recently.

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5fd5d0 No.391284

>>391267

I really enjoyed it. Would definitely read more of it if you decide to put it up.

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a27aa7 No.391285

>>391272

Hey thanks bro. I'll see if I can't make a part two.

>>391284

Glad to hear it man, really. Alright when I get home from work today I'll put the rest of it up.

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a17796 No.391287

>>391219

Cute. I liked how the serpants played a major role.

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a27aa7 No.391357

File: 2bc385c8addfccb⋯.gif (487.13 KB,500x218,250:109,original.gif)

>>391267

https://pastebin.com/yizyJe1P

Doin the pastebin again is probably retarded but who cares.

Alright after four hours of going through and fixing errors and other shit I posted everything I had typed up. Hell I might actually continue on with the story and update it now and then, readin it got me pumped up boys. I hope you all enjoy what I got so far, I'll post again when I finally finish this. Funny what you find at the bottom of your old documents folder.

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0fad5a No.391516

File: 0014ce526cde9cc⋯.webm (807.9 KB,320x240,4:3,Carrie.webm)

>>391357

Carrie is best girl. She's a bit shy, but I bet she's a freak in bed.

At least during the day…

more seriously, I do hope you continue

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a27aa7 No.391517

>>391516

That gif got me good. I'll try to type up a bunch this weekend. Maybe after I'm done just finishing off the common route I'll put a poll up to see what girl's route we should go down first. God I wish I could draw I woulda made this an actual VN.

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fca88a No.391646

>>391357

Prettygud/10

I do hope you're going to write a part where Ona apologizes to Zasha because that was just straight-up bitchy

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a27aa7 No.391647

>>391646

Preesh man. We'll see, they do hate eachother. Maybe Bull will fix it maybe he wont. I doubt Ona's orc warrior pride would allow herself to say she's wrong after all.

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a27aa7 No.391777

File: aa035a0395255db⋯.gif (2.15 MB,480x368,30:23,CommonJoyousHarvestmen-siz….gif)

https://pastebin.com/yizyJe1P

I finally Updated the story, haven't had any time between the 60 hours of OT , studies and gym. The common route is finished so I'm gunna start working on each girl's route. In fact I thought it'd be kind of fun to let anyone here who gives a shit about the story pick which route I was gunna write first.

https://www.strawpoll.me/17717261

Now I'm probably gunna just write fun and cutesy scenes for the routes so don't expect any 2deep4u feels or nail biting drama. I'm a hack and couldn't write that kind of shit up. It'll probably be more like an afterstory than anything of you think about it. I'll check the polls Friday and start writing whoever is top waifu.

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14af48 No.391783

>>391777

I voted Chelsea but deep down I want the Zasha route too…

Fuck, I want them all actually

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a27aa7 No.391786

>>391783

Don't sweat it man. I plan on doing them all, kind of like alternate time lines. If you guys like this stuff I don't mind to post all the ending as I finish each one's. I even have a secret one planned up. I'm real glad you liked it enough to vote though.

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0fad5a No.391794

>>391777

Nice digits.

I voted. I'm looking forward to the next bit.

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a27aa7 No.391797

>>391794

Thanks man, you guys turn this from me making this for shits and giggles to something I actually want to try amd make good.

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14af48 No.391810

>>391786

Gorgon route? :^)

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5fd5d0 No.391812

>>391777

To be honest I have no idea who to pick. Fuck you for writing too many likable characters. But seriously good job

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bb0ae0 No.391840

>>391810

that obvious huh?

>>391812

Ha thanks man.

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7c3291 No.391910

>>391777

Awesome stuff man, voted for the banshee, I'm a sucker for sad lonely girls.

>>391810

>>391840

I wonder how she we'll react to the (you), here's hoping she will spill her spaghetti HARD.

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a27aa7 No.391914

>>391910

me too

I have the beginning already thought out for that one but I wont spoil anything.

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69ef0d No.391917

>>391777

Ah fuck I accidentally voted Cindy, recount 1 please

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a27aa7 No.391920

>>391917

Don't have an account. But I'll take a vote off Cindy on Friday and vote for who you want. Who did you want?

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e46236 No.392022

>>390608

if you think it is crap, and don't know how to fix it, our writing will not improve until you get feedback.

>>391777

MC is over the top, but in a fun way. why do i think that this will wind up more interesting than most MG VNs on patreon?

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222793 No.392038

>>392022

I hope it'll live up to your expectations. I wish I could draw, I would have put it in VN format for everyone.

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02ed3a No.392081

File: 586dd799b370960⋯.png (2.06 MB,1600x2000,4:5,wife.png)

>>391219

Behold, more short stories I have written.

Mermaid story that was requested by a friend: https://pastebin.com/akt3UJNa

Anubis story: https://pastebin.com/pBd86gGb

I will warn that the anubis story includes light femdom elements and I've never really written a sex scene before this, but here it is.

Also updated the medusa story but I'm thinking about writing a lot more so I won't post it yet.

Also might work on a weresheep story from her point of view but I don't know if I'm feelin it. If someone says they're interested I'll probably go for it again.

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ff0a09 No.392088

>>392081

Neato, thanks anon!

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e79a4b No.392089

Could someone beta read this? I was told my series started from a boring place, so I thought this would be a better starting point.

https://pastebin.com/LuVXKine

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2cbc3f No.392090

File: 9261ae69ffc76f1⋯.jpg (49.73 KB,685x960,137:192,9261ae69ffc76f1e2f57d9d286….jpg)

>>392081

The medusa story was good anon. Keep up the work. As others said, neat use of head sneks.

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19033b No.392101

>>392081

Nice job on your first sex scene, that was pretty good

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69ef0d No.392103

File: e614d4e4acf5d81⋯.jpg (7.54 KB,239x211,239:211,Full Mast.jpg)

>>392081

> “Oh, I love it when you struggle~”

I think I like Anubis's now. Bless you anon, that tugged at my heart strings

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2cd4ab No.392119

File: 5113eae28d5c9df⋯.jpg (634.03 KB,2006x1080,1003:540,__grey_wolf_kemono_friends….jpg)

>>392089

I found no basic spelling mistakes other than "kina" insted of "kind of" but im sure that was intentional. I can't help more than this since im not a native english speaker nor do i know anything about writefagging.

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e79a4b No.392125

>>392119

I was more asking how to tell the story better, but okay.

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3937b0 No.392128

>>392119

lots of run-on sentences and awkeard sentence structure.

as an example, "I look at the picture on my nightstand looking back was my husband and I holding a trophy as the first cursed gun to ever win a match."

Would read a lot better if it were. "I looked over at the picture on my nightstand. Staring back at me was my husband and I holding a trophy. I was the first cursed gun to win a match."

but even that is kind of clunky. A bit more description and prose would go a long way.

"With a heavy sigh, I shifted in my bed, looking over at the picture on my nightstand. Staring back at me was my husband with a smiling face. And there I was, by his side as always holding a trophy. I was the first cursed gun to win a match."

Also, its just a general opinion of mine, but stay away from present-tense. That's really more for screenplays and scripts. Whenever I read it outside of those it just looks horribly unprofessional and reads awkwardly

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3937b0 No.392129

>>392128

I can't edit my post, but there should be a comma after "always" in my last example. Also awkward is spelled wrong in the first sentence.

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3feef0 No.392131

>>392081

>yes, yes I am

I like it.

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9f37ed No.392133

Finally was convinced to write and post. Just a super short story about a guy and his kitsune GF.

https://pastebin.com/ejWFawQy

Any feedback or suggestions would be appreciated

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a27aa7 No.392141

>>392133

Sick story man. I'd definitely read any others you made. Got a laugh and a warm feeling. That's a goody.

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02ed3a No.392153

File: 1143e9facca0ea6⋯.jpg (37.93 KB,540x572,135:143,HELP.jpg)

>>392090

>>392088

>>392101

>>392103

>>392131

Glad people like it, I'll try to keep the good stuff going.

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a27aa7 No.392156

File: b2e1052123ef8b9⋯.jpg (699.83 KB,1124x1230,562:615,20190403_214355.jpg)

>>390771

>>391272

The sequal "only one guy who probably gave up all interest in seeing it after all this time" has asked for. Just a little after story. May or may not be good I used a few lunch breaks to type it and read over it.

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3f51e1 No.392162

I´d like to see a story with a "Going his Own Way" commentator getting proactively dated mid show.

>"ALL MAMONO ARE THOTS PRE SUFFRAGETTES!!! You think your waifu loves you? Wait until she gets voting rights! She´ll take you to Divorce Court faster than you can say "B… But my spirit mana…" "

>"Fools are falling head over heels for these bitches! They think "Finally, a woman with common sense! We don´t have to take our women´s rights, folks!", but´s that´s just the rub. They figured out the fastest way to strip a man from his resources a long time ago, and that´s chameleon… Wait, what´s that noise on my window? Hold on a sec…"

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02ed3a No.392464

File: 2ac7f37c1a255d8⋯.png (339.46 KB,982x1025,982:1025,2ac7f37c1a255d8288e3b10548….png)

>>392153

https://pastebin.com/aM1TwyXd

Here's the continuation of the medusa story for anyone who asked for it. Maybe I'll keep it going, not sure yet.

Feedback appreciated I suppose.

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299f85 No.392469

>>392156

Where's the pastebin, banchou-bro? You holding out on us?!

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a27aa7 No.392470

File: c4b848828704308⋯.jpg (14.27 KB,500x217,500:217,large.jpg)

>>392469

Holy shit brahsky I didn't even notice.

https://pastebin.com/gzEacC2V

Sorry to cock tease everyone like that.

>>391777

Bernadette won, I'll start workin on her route but I got shot in the leg so I might be a little destracted.

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c92aaf No.392472

>>392470

w-what

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a27aa7 No.392484

File: f5c81d2f5f677c7⋯.jpg (1.11 MB,2560x1440,16:9,20190405_202456.jpg)

>>392472

Now I have some good info about bein shot though. Thanks for reading my shit guys. I got a fracture in the femur from the bullet so I'll have to type shit on the phone since 90 degree angles suck right now. It'll be a bit slower cause of that.

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c92aaf No.392489

>>392484

ok take your time… baka

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299f85 No.392490

>>392484

Life imitates art, or something like that. Just don't die!

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8edd98 No.392492

File: c278ec18a2e7b4e⋯.jpg (198.4 KB,525x861,25:41,edf604b6cbe629718898ce5b9c….jpg)

>>392484

Did you accidentally shoot yourself setting your gun down?

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3794b6 No.392494

>>392484

man, /monster/ is one crazy place.

Praying for you anon. Hope you get better soon

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a27aa7 No.392495

File: 9a7d61c69a39f83⋯.jpeg (3.28 KB,152x158,76:79,download (1).jpeg)

>>392492

Niggers just are pussies that's all I'll say. Only get into a fistfight with other white guys. I'm lucky as hell though, clean fracture, missed anything important. Not trying to blog guys sorry.

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cb1780 No.392507

>>392484

Holy shit are you ok anon?

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623da3 No.392508

>>392495

>Writefag got shot by a nigger

Fucks sake niggers and kikes really are why we can't have nice things, even here.

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cb1780 No.392511

>>392508

Well what did you expect?

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2cbc3f No.392513

File: 9688c7fbd346cdc⋯.jpg (45.71 KB,680x383,680:383,9688c7fbd346cdcdb7d9cd2b6a….jpg)

>>392495

Damn son, heal up.

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a27aa7 No.392515

File: 54d33f8cd54a3fc⋯.png (301.07 KB,350x589,350:589,Crying2.png)

>>392507

>>392513

>>392508

Thanks guys. It's really wasn'r as bad as I thought it'd be you know? I mean it hurt like fuck but I was still able to keep calm and crack jokes. Panicing woulda bleed my ass out quicker after all. Does anyone have any pastebins or greentexts for monster girl nursing their potential husband back to health? Top points if they're: arachnie, Yuki-Onna, undead girl, harpy

I love Chrome

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0fad5a No.392530

>>392484

What caliber? I need to know for science.

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a27aa7 No.392532

File: ffa26f6af56e830⋯.png (1.42 MB,1194x1617,398:539,ffa.png)

>>392530

>Hi-Point. .40. (Imagine that) 20 dolla problem solva

The dumbass didn't know shit about guns, he pulled it out of his pants to show off how thug he was and it went off at my leg. He looked like he pissed himself and ran off. I could tell by his face and how he ran off afterwards he didn't even mean to shoot the damn thing. For real done blogging this time just a bit pissed and need to seethe at something sorry guys.

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2cbc3f No.392533

>>392532

Its fine considering the circumstantial circumstances

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3220bb No.392545

>>392515

Not an arachne, but I've got an Ushi-Oni one by Ace: https://pastebin.com/NMyy5fiN/

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a27aa7 No.392562

>>392545

That was nice, thanks man.

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0fad5a No.392573

>>392464

I'm enjoying it, and I want more matchmaking shenanigans.

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9842d7 No.392590

File: 8b7a1d900ee373e⋯.jpg (97.58 KB,500x627,500:627,8b7a1d900ee373e12e46caf69f….jpg)

>>392532

The best girl in that god forsaken game. She doesn't have any disgusting scenes, as far as I am aware.

>>392545

Nice story. I can't say I've ever been a large fan of spider girls but this was a pretty cute story. I recall reading this other story about a young man in Zipangu getting capture by an Ushi Oni. The only thing I can remember about it is both of the young man's parents were samurai and his mom gets turned into an Ushi Oni. Does anyone have this story?

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02ed3a No.392786

File: 2939e7c0585e7ef⋯.png (3.35 MB,1777x2300,1777:2300,Medusa.png)

>>392573

Glad you're enjoying it.

Here's the third version of the medusa story I've been writing.

https://pastebin.com/ZD9e5y0k

Feedback and comments appreciated as always

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299f85 No.392800

I've seen quite a few monstergirl stories in my time but even so I've found the Sabbath, or just lolis in general, to be quite underrepresented. When they are featured it's usually in humorous one offs or as side characters to the greater story. Does anyone have any stories that feature them as the main romantic interest? Or is this just one of those things that just doesn't have a lot of demand?

Or option C: I get off my ass and write my own story.

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1e0035 No.392802

>>392800

Why are loli monstergirls so underrepresented? Because they're lolis. Certain people get buttmad like crazy if you try and have a serious thread about them. They inevitably troll and call everyone pedos and cause the threads to spiral into shit slinging. You might be able to pull one off if you're very iron-fisted about shit posting and anti-pedo posting in the OP.

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1e0035 No.392803

>>392802

>>392800

There's also the fact that lolis are niche in an already niche genre (monstergirls). So that means an even smaller potential audience, to begin with. You could probably mostly get around this if the story is especially well written.

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1e0035 No.392805

>>392800

>>392802

For example:

I saw a Redcap appear in a CYOA story just recently, and someone started crying about it being a loli monstergirl instead of an adult-looking monstergirl variety.

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ecf6ea No.392818

>>392800

I got you fam: https://pastebin.com/nYAePkDg

shillin' my own work. Features loli Baphomet doctor healing a Dark Knight Anon.

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a27aa7 No.392846

>>392818

That was good stuff my man. Thanks for posting it.

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0ac34c No.392867

>>392818

Oh I remember this, this is really good Anon and I hope you write more stories about the sabbath, because lolis are definitely underrepresented.

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6e2886 No.392903

>>392786

actually good

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299f85 No.392907

>>392818

Much thanks for the story, anon!

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435f53 No.392908

>>392545

>>392562

Oh hey, that story. Man I haven't written anything but Wizardquest stuff in awhile, huh?

Let's see what it's in relation to-

>Gunshot wound

Holy fuck, glad to see you're okay tho. Only other medical related story I have the Code Wight, but I'm not certain it fits with what you're looking for. Get healed up soon, friendo.

>>392805

Which CYOA? I don't think I've had people cause a fuss about a loli character in one of those before…

>>392818

This thread is encouraged to shill, yo.

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e026d0 No.392959

>>392818

Good shit mate, hope to read more from you.

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081c49 No.393217

>>392818

Also good shit. I was never much of a fan for lolis but this one tickled me in a way. Also damn you for now having a damn fascination on those damned smug goats!

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02ed3a No.393231

File: 3e9e8eb0ce55a21⋯.png (999.07 KB,1161x1595,1161:1595,floof.png)

>>392786

Hello, here is more garbage I have written as I take a break from the medusa story.

https://pastebin.com/yzBkbY4v

Didn't use MGE as a base for once and wrote it from the kitsune's point of view.

I'll be getting back to finishing up Anon and Selene's story soon enough for any of you that care.

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e2208e No.393252

>>393231

m8 why not make an account for all these?

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ecf6ea No.393258

File: 51412e5e5851c3b⋯.jpg (1.32 MB,1291x1693,1291:1693,TelosAwoo by Negresco.jpg)

>>393231

fairly rough criticism spoilered:

You mentionned that this was written as a "break", and sadly, it shows. The story isn't bad, but it's bland, there is no surprise, nothing that makes it stand out. On the good points, I haven't noticed a single mistake, be it spelling or grammar, so that's actually great.

As a short story written to relax, it does its job and I'm sure some Anons just enjoy these kind of things, but I'm definitely more demanding.

>>392846

>>392867

>>392907

>>392959

>>393217

Huge thanks to all of you for reading and commenting, please don't hesitate to tell me what parts you liked best or even the weaker ones, you guys are amazing and I wish you the best.

Funnily enough I actually don't like the Baphs that much, so while I will write more about Sabbath and lolis, I don't think SmugGoats will be part of it.

In fact, my next work will feature a (loli)DarkElf, it should be done before the week-end.

Have a great one, monster-fuckers.

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02ed3a No.393261

>>393252

I have them saved elsewhere, but I can make an account to help other people keep track of my work.

>>393258

I honestly debated posting it in the first place, as it was just supposed to be a cute little thing and some practice before I get into the heavier shit in my main project.

I'll keep what you said in mind the next time I work on a shorter story.

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ecf6ea No.393263

>>393261

Don't worry about it, writing like we do here should be a hobby one does for fun.

You can concern yourself with top quality when you plan on publishing stories more seriously.

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02ed3a No.393265

>>393263

I'm really just happy people actually read what I write! I can't get my friends to read my more serious writings which is pretty disheartening. Especially when you worked on it for like a year. /blogpost

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df0d52 No.393269

File: 62b932053a8a22b⋯.jpg (40.13 KB,600x690,20:23,cb6.jpg)

>>393258

I will say this, while eternal loli™ is nice and all, blood related incest is still fucked.

Futhermore dicking the blood related loli-aged loli is /gas/-tier.

Not telling you what to do, just a reminder.

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ecf6ea No.393270

>>393269

I see, you are a man of culture as well.

Have no fear, my set of rules is kinda loose as I'd write about a lot of weird shit, but I'd never writefag about: incest or underaged children. So yeah… /monster/ core values, no /d/ or /chaos/.

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1cc4cf No.393318

what ever happened to my boi bromont, haven't read his shit in years but I cant seem to track down his pastebin or whatevs

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9a133b No.393422

>>392786

The yandere subtones where left hanging

The mc just went with the flow with little resistance in my opinion.

But I liked nevertheless

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6eb4b4 No.393487

Hello everyone. >>388238 here, two months on-and-off, I finally fucking conquered my laziness, and got that larger project of mine done. Time for some green-skinned-space-babe-babymaking!

https://pastebin.com/LuTAw03e

I don't care how bad any mistakes are or if things are inconsistent, I thank Mama Reitia that I actually finished this project this time!

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a27aa7 No.393489

File: c0d57fe05678442⋯.png (567.98 KB,741x1222,57:94,1412580964845.png)

Hey fuckers I wrote this up on my phone and read over it a couple times and I got something half complete on the back burner but jesus fuck typing on your phone sucks man. I'm gunna see the doc tomorrow and if the news on the fracture is good I'll sit at my computer and finish the Bernadette story.

https://pastebin.com/pBB37eFh

>>393487

Here's your theme bro

https://youtu.be/tbMMx3-VoMc

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6eb4b4 No.393508

>>393489

get a targus bluetooth keyboard, it's much better for phone typing.

>that vid

yes.

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cb1780 No.393532

>>393487

It was pretty good anon. My only complaint is that this nihilus character seemed overly vague, as well as their reasons for being afraid of him and russet leaving. Their reaction when the video hit the news seemed over the top because we didn’t know why he had so many powerful enemies. We knew he had served in the navy for a brief while and did operations against pirates but that seems to be the extent of it.dont get me wrong I liked it, the ending just felt a little hamfisted

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2cd4ab No.393548

File: 46ccaa4a87c219f⋯.gif (2.47 MB,200x200,1:1,Nut meltdown.gif)

>>393487

>Egg-laying

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e88c51 No.393594

>>393532

I thought I had made it apparent with the breadcrumbs I've scatted throughout the story that Russet personally pissed off an abusive asshole dictator who has a soviet-tier hard-on for military equipment and force.. It honestly makes me regret not keeping something I cut in the end: Where Russet reveals his Navy experience is in fact as a teenage conscript of the Nihilus Legion.

Another flaw in this story, is that I feel I should've dropped more hints that Russet is being a deliberately unreliable narrator. I'm not sure how I would've done that though.

>>393548

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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cb1780 No.393616

>>393594

I got that he was some kind of dictator or pirate lord, but I didn’t understand why they were so scared of him, I don’t recall anything that indicated how powerful he really was or anything showing how ruthless he was willing to be that would explain why they were so terrified of him.

Maybe it was just cause I was a bit short on sleep I didn’t notice but that’s what it seemed like.

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8759ad No.393685

File: 06d2f9e5b5ba1d5⋯.jpg (185.79 KB,971x1376,971:1376,TelosXenoBladeC2 NkeToumi.jpg)

>>393258

As promised: https://pastebin.com/WuX9qCp8 Anon is a slave to a beautiful and greedy Dark Elf, but said greed is eventually punished.

Contains a loli-fied Dark Elf getting the dicking of her long-life and enjoying it thoroughly

I hope you'll enjoy it, as always, please do voice your opinion so I can improve.

Have a great one, waifus watch over you.

Tiny-bonus blogpost: The DElf's design and name are an obvious reference to pic related. Also, holy fuck, I re-wrote the first 3 pages at least 5 timesin the hope of giving to story it's own little dynamism, all of that only to not leave a good moment to add a blow-job scene I really wanted to write (because loli bj's are my fetish. Might just edit it in later.

>>393548

>Egg-laying

Just in time for Easter?

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83e710 No.393789

>>390268

Finally got around to finishing it. It was good, but I did notice some grammatical errors in it, especially in the last chapter. Are there any plans to continue it? Seems like an odd place to end the story.

Also, I would love if someone could help me out with my other inquiry >>389710

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02ed3a No.393841

File: 67e5eed32584100⋯.png (1.58 MB,1080x1920,9:16,1541725487464-d.png)

>>393231

Finally finished the medusa story.

https://pastebin.com/3qwprXHc

Hope you guys like it!

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bcc5f4 No.393843

>>393789

>plans to continue

I would like to finish it since it is my first proper written story. I have a few different ways I could take the story but I need to go over my outline and refine it some more since I want a good ending even if it isn't necessarily a happy one. Glad you liked it.

I remember fixing a lot of the grammatical issues in the latest chapter recently but I haven't bothered updating the .pdf yet. I'll showcase those fixes with the release of the next chapter…whenever that is

>space junker hellhound

Does not ring a bell but it sound like it might be cool.

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72ff1d No.393900

File: fa0118f8705f735⋯.png (1.35 MB,1450x1215,290:243,Victoria5 (lowres) - .less.png)

Hello. Finished writing the epilogue of Victory and Defeat, which marks the end of both Victoria and Derrota's stories. Hard to believe All's Fair in Love and War started back in '16. Because it's the end of the story, I'll post again the starting chapters of both stories.

Victory and Defeat, Chapter 13

https://pastebin.com/MagfDDeL

Victory and Defeat, Chapter 1

https://pastebin.com/4awWVGgZ

All's Fair in Love and War, Chapter 1

https://pastebin.com/Raf2qHXL

In theory, I'm done writing. I'd still want to rewrite Victoria's story, but it's not as critical as finishing an incomplete story.

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9e84be No.393959

Hey.

Would the board be interested in soft-KC-canon stories about a band of knights hunting monsters in their pre-Demon Lord forms? I could properly try and tie it in to canon if possible.

I'd really like to write for this place again but I'm not really of a mind to write full-on smut.

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9e84be No.393961

>>393959

To expand on this a little bit, I'm thinking of a setting wherein some monsters have reverted back to their monstrous forms and are causing trouble, and either the towns or the husbands themselves are hiring a group of professional monster hunters from the pre-Demon Lord days to capture the girls for treatment. That basic concept could be taken into a number of different settings, I think - just give me a monster and a setting idea and I'm good to go.

The sexual stuff would probably stay at a minimum though, so I'd really like to gauge reaction to this.

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26b4ba No.393967

>>393961

I'd say go for it, always good to have more OC on here, as long as it isn't some /chaos/ bullshit

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849380 No.393973

File: d8c0fa9b4c6018c⋯.png (63.72 KB,468x576,13:16,white power symbol.png)

>>393841

Disgustingly saccharine, disturbingly wholesome, and dangerously cheesy…I like it.

The first few paragraphs remind me of something I wrote in the greentext threads.

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be4fa6 No.393980

>>393841

Also good story. Medusas are underrated within the lamia catergory of Mge stories and this was really comfy to read.

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48869b No.394051

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849380 No.394099

>>393789

>>389710

I remember that story anon. It had a space-cop/AI duo who are captured by MG space pirates who use our space cop hero as some twisted reverse harem, with the hellhound captain as the main love interest. AI is killed off in the last part that appeared here, but I don't recall the writer continuing from that point.

>>387674

You're giving me some good ideas Anon.

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51b5f7 No.394129

>>394051

https://pastebin.com/u/RSanon

Dude wrote a fuck ton of stuff back when, but I haven't seen them around for a few years now :(

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c3ccca No.394137

>>393900

>In theory, I'm done writing.

I'll really miss your work. Stick around at least. Hopefully your muse will return, if not for /monster/ content than for something else.

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13a0ab No.394240

>>393900

It's been fun Los! I'm happy that you've stuck with us this long, and thank you for your contribution. The last three years have really flown by.

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3794b6 No.394258

>>393318

he's in the thread with the guy who wrote a book

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f31655 No.394274

File: 3cc1d9ed5d32276⋯.jpg (134.54 KB,1024x746,512:373,land raider.jpg)

Couple ideas I've been thinking about.

>Machine Spirit of a tank that's in love with an IG operator, but has trouble conveying this.

>Monster mom dealing with autistic son not being able to handle physical contact(or dad with autistic daughter)

>Young warrior tries to avenge his barbarian father, who died at the hands of the local vampire, but get's beaten repeatedly and receives escalating and embarrassing punishments.

>Future setting where Humanity forms a collation with monster races and each star trek-Esq ship is captained by a human and an alien wife.

<The wife is actually the entire ship.

>Lich runs a modern-day apothecary that helps people with various problems

.

>A long form story about monster girl fantasy.

>Starts with the hero betraying humanity, joining the Demon Queen, and killing off his party.

>His adoptive brother, who was more civic minded, leads the counter attack and instigates social reforms to counter monsters.

>One of these would be an order of knights drawing recruits from refugee men in exchange for giving their families shelter.

>They'd all carry around a book where they'd meticulously document the threat.

I've been reading up a little on Rome.

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1946a2 No.394277

>>393318

I don't keep track of pastebins or folders or anything like that. I know there's a couple anons that do, but I've got no way to point you in their general direction. I've quit threads/stories for a while now, so there's nothing new to add, and you haven't missed anything.

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d447a6 No.394278

>>394274

Why "kill off" that party when you can marry them off to monstergirls most befitting their #1 sexual/romantic preferences? One must consider all the potential angles after all? Why fight when you can win without firing a single shot?

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6ee4c4 No.394288

>>394278

Because if they're dyed-in-the-wool Orderlings, they'd attack him en masse as soon as they realize his defection? He probably doesn't get a choice.

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19033b No.394304

>>394288

That doesn’t eliminate his non-lethal methods of elimination. Hell, if his new demon lord gf has a demon silver weapon of any sort laying around, he could just use that. Or he could use the rest of her court staff to ambush them all at once and immediately subdue them.

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19033b No.394306

>>394274

>monster mom dealing with autistic son

Well there’s always mindflayers as a last-ditch option, but I assume she’d try anything else before that.

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109169 No.394372

Marine Anon, gonna give another shot at writing again, all advice or criticism is welcome.

>be me, 0621 instructor standing at the top of hands and knees.

>Smoking a cigarette while watching all the junior Marines complain while crawling up hill.

>It's not that fucking hard, it's only 4 miles, you mostly walk up the hills anyway.

>It's not that fucking cold, no you can't wear your sweat top tomorrow.

>It's not that fucking early, 0530 wake up call is the norm in the Maine corps.

>How does each new group of Marines get lazier then the last?

>I look down at everyone struggling up the lose sand, sinking deeper with each step.

>I hate every single on of you so fucking much and it's the first day of class.

>Still gotta pick leadership though, I'll probably pick the PT stud as the the guide.

>I'll free ball the rest or something, I'm sure the motivated few will stand out.

>The first one to get up here is a zombie girl, PFC Cartwright, she gave a weak rah before putting her hands on her head.

>Wasn't aware the undead could sweat or breathe heavy, good to know.

Cartwright, what's your PFT? You're not that tall so you lose some points there.

>Between the heavy breathing she said she gets like 10 pull ups, 19 something 3 mile and max crunches.

>God damn, that almost impressed me, but being as short and skinny as she was, it wasn't unbelievable.

Alright, you made the cut. You're guide, now that doesn't mean it's set in stone. I'll switch you out in a heart beat if you aren't squared away.

>Give her a short brief on what the position means, being the example for everything, PT, studies, personal standers, all that.

>I didn't expect to much, she was probably gonna be switched out in the first few weeks.

>Still, she did stand a bit taller after she got the position.

>Said that is the first leadership role she's ever gotten. Said she won't let me down.

>I had my doubt about the last part, but, I was happy to know she'd take it seriously.

>I had to keep my eye on her, if she manged not to be a total fuck up, she might get meritorious Lance.

>Hell, shes even running back down to encourage the fat bodies.

>Maybe this class won't be that bad after all.

>Another cigarettes later everyone slowly makes it up, that last being a red oni girl.

>She's drenched in sweat and breathing so heavy she just might fucking die.

>Itsalwaystheoni.jpg

>I asked her name, because looking at her, I know for a fact she's gonna fail weigh ins.

>PVT Maxim, a Marine brat, I heard her brag about her Warren officer dad a few times.

>You'd think she would be in better shape, but I guess not.

>I stand back up, flick the butt of my last cigarette before facing my TSOC.

>I let them rest for awhile, telling Cartwright to stick with Maxim to make sure she doesn't actually die.

Alright, now for the run back, no one better fall out. This is almost all down hill so just keep up with me and it should be easy.

>With that I turn and start to run, everyone following me down the sharp decline back to barracks.

>I decided to cut them some slack and kept it at an easy cool down pace.

>No one else falls out, Maxim is pushed to her limits by my guide and nearly passes out when we stop.

>All in all, pretty good PT for the first day.

Okay, it's 0655 right now I want you formed up and ready to step at 0745, fall out.

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02ed3a No.394529

File: f52e51beab143d5⋯.jpg (3.63 MB,4141x3638,4141:3638,qt angel.jpg)

>>393980

>>393973

Glad you both liked it.

https://pastebin.com/ihUPfGH2

Wrote a short story to try and pull myself out of writers block, not really sure what I want to do new after having dropped like five ideas within two weeks. The tones gonna be a lot different than my previous writings, hope you guys like it.

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addcc5 No.394551

>>394529

god I love .Less's art

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1aa128 No.394590

File: 40e731de516eb18⋯.jpg (59.27 KB,682x599,682:599,succubutt infiltration.jpg)

Are there any stories of monstergirls using magical sleep/hypnosis/mind control while pro-actively dating their future husbands?

Seems like something that has plenty of potential: medieval fantasy setting, anon the military commander is preparing to counter an incoming mamono invasion, gets lewd dreams while in reality he's being violated by a succubus every night as anon becomes less and less willing to properly counter the invasion and instead ensures that his army will fall with as few casualties on both sides as possible. I think a succubus would be pervert for the story. Magic and the ability to fly should greatly help with infiltrating anon's quarters. First she would make sure he stays asleep using her magic. Then she'd straddle Anon and make him dream in which she'd appear and introduce herself. Kissing, etc would mostly reflect and various other lewd acts would mostly reflect what is actually happening in real life. I'm rambling, maybe I'm just a pervert who likes the idea of a cute sweetheart violating me in my sleep, I dunno.

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e1648e No.394599

>>394590

>I think a succubus would be pervert for the story

The unintentional pun. But yeah, seconding this

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e709ce No.394601

>>394590

Nightmares enter the dreams of the man they are interested in.

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f90504 No.394602

File: 8b28b7c60ca9f7f⋯.jpg (237.25 KB,1000x1000,1:1,image.jpg)

File: 8b6dea45a8e4bcc⋯.jpg (60.8 KB,605x559,605:559,image.jpg)

File: 0e2ce2b76571591⋯.jpg (1.98 MB,4592x5872,287:367,image.jpg)

File: c828e3ff148ec77⋯.jpg (442.95 KB,2000x2000,1:1,image.jpg)

File: 554142c9e3fa239⋯.jpg (319.47 KB,1435x1023,1435:1023,image.jpg)

>>394274

>autistic son not being able to handle physical contact

Why'd you have to remind me of me, anon?

Nothing's actually happened to me that would cause it, but I can't help but immediately dodge any sudden attempt at physical contact, including handshakes, hugs, and kisses.

Can't stop me from romanticising spontaneous physical displays of affection, though.

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b0c746 No.394680

Figure I'll just post the pastebin link since it's where I'll be posting all the silly shit i type up. Be warned they aren't long stories, just brief moments that were too good for me to not write down while I could.

https://pastebin.com/u/MaximumFluff

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3a63f3 No.394735

>>394372

>0621

>Be commo pog

>Am faggot

Why are Soldiers always stealing my waifus?!?!

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3a63f3 No.394736

>>394372

Oh, god I read this trash after commenting, so I had to comment again to let you know this is trash. Exactly no one cares that you fumbled your way through boot. We all did, faggot, that's why we all know it isn't special and no one gives a shit. Pick something else to talk about. You just sound retarded.

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d447a6 No.394762

>>393973

Anyone who says that wholesomeness and cheese are just objectively bad are not worth paying attention to. Nihilism has no place here!

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0288c0 No.394769

>>394736

>We all did

What are you, part of some 3rd world country?

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8a8757 No.394778

>>394736

Why are fags better at American imperialism than DA TROOPS?

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a2a6d7 No.394934

>>394736

>We all did

Nigger the last time I checked this was Reddit you cock sucking homo.

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9a133b No.394935

>>394680

This was fucking cute.

I love this kind of short stories

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5245be No.394937

>>394680

Ah so you're the one who wrote the shedding story. But all in all I'd enjoyed reading it. I like the slice of life aspect between the MC and MG waifu.

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a8dafa No.394962

Does anyone have a copy of "Open (kunoichi, MGEverse, lewd)" by HumbleSacrifice?

https://pastebin.com/qvFsaU1i/

That's the link, but the guy nagasaki'd his pastebin and all his stories.

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6f2d84 No.395301

>>394962

Why did he do that? That story and the one with the spider are very good

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5aa928 No.395307

>>395301

Authors have a tendency to throw petulant shitfits at the slightest provocation.

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5aa928 No.395310

Writing prompt I plan on maybe using later for a multi-part piece. Putting it here so I don't forget.

The crew (mix of monster and human) of a small freighter find a strange life pod broadcasting a faint signal in dead space. Inside they find a single half-dead man with extensive bionics.

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adfda4 No.395472

>>394129

He recently posted a new story.

https://pastebin.com/qW8RDKeY

Wonder if he's still around then?

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9f494d No.395490

>>395472

>Orgasm denialfags BTFO

Based

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e2791a No.395492

>>395301

Did he had a cave spider story? (guy trying to set up bombs for the detonation of a cave full of spiders, but got proactive'd in the end)

Damn, i've been searching for that one-shot for so long, didn't know it may have been there

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c894a8 No.395498

>>395472

Well, fuck. It's been nearly three years. Good to know he's still kicking. Thanks for the heads up.

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76fd86 No.395512

File: b672ea3a71f8dd8⋯.png (7.95 KB,490x60,49:6,Huh.PNG)

>>387948

1,150 people looked at my shitty writing?

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bcc5f4 No.395514

>>395512

I've been told bots troll paste-bin. Organically you can expect at least 100 or so folks at most from /monster/ unless there's someone spreading your content outside the board.

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e3ab0e No.395535

File: 40017e20393617f⋯.jpeg (166.39 KB,751x607,751:607,7F593365-5166-4547-A8D6-2….jpeg)

>>395472

>just get into It’s Not the Fall That Kills You

>last chapter is nearing 4 years ago with no ending

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435f53 No.395632

File: d285b067a718342⋯.png (2.69 MB,1041x1383,347:461,WQCoversmall.jpg.png)

Hey everyone! I know I've been mostly in my corner doing my current CYOA, but I finally got the edits done for Wizardquest 1 and published it! If y'all read it before or wanted to read it, here's a much, much easier to read version than the initial version. Thanks to y'all who participated in the past and helped this happen.

The ebook is on amazon if you want to pick it up while the hardback I'm still waiting on the proof copy before I can start selling, etc.

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07RLHMFJV

shilling over, thanks.

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d447a6 No.395667

>>395632

That's a nice looking cover, and 80 percent of the buy decision is based on the cover so kudos on knowing where to expend your resources in the indie pub game.

Assuming it has done its job admirably, there's the last 20 percent, the pitch, the words on the back cover and/or the inside the front cover. Sell me my dude, because a few pew pew faggy 'umie mages about to get beaten down hardcore by a sexy Minotaur lady has my interest, can ya complete the "circuit" as it were and attract my attention though? I hope you deem it worthy of an attempt.

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f8c72f No.395735

>>395632

>>395667

I am interested in a pitch as well. I'm curious about the way the game plays, dice system, mechanics, etc. How does it compare to D&D 2e, 5e, GURPS or any other popular system?

I don't think I could get a game together but I love collecting table top systems

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cb1780 No.395737

>>395667

>>395735

Are you two new or do you just have difficulty reading? This is an ebook of the CYOA Ace did years ago. It’s not an rpg manual. And if you want the pitch or blurb or summary or whatever you call it on the back there is a brief description you can read if you would click on the link to the ebook.

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f8c72f No.395740

>>395737

Nah, just brain damage. My bad.

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b82c9c No.395772

>>395667

Very well Hero. As the other guy said, it is a clean up and printing of the first CYOA i ran here in… fuck it was 2015.

Wizardquest is a story of a man who reached the age of thirty as a virgin and became a Wizard with great powers. Content to stay at home and shitweave, he is forced to go on a quest when a hero breaks his communion glass. The outside world is dangerous however as it is filled with Monstergirls who would love nothing more than to rape him- and thus rob him of his magic forever.

The journey takes him far farther than he could imagine in this rich adventure filled with vibrant characters, a driving story, and rich humor.

Hailed by some as "The progenitor of a new kind of fantasy novel: Low Brow Fantasy" this story digs into some potty humor from our erstwhile hero, yet somehow it manages to fit will and give more life to the setting.

So please, consider purchasing this novel which clocks in at an impressive size that will leave you entertained for quite some time! Artwork included at the back of the book showing off many of the characters.

Okay, how's that?

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f25fd4 No.395777

>>395492

>>395307

Yep hw made that one. This is not acceptable! Did he really just say "fuck it" and burned all his work or was it just a mistake?

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f8c72f No.395781

File: 0c3357873dec533⋯.jpg (133.13 KB,494x500,247:250,eat da rainbow.jpg)

>>395772

You've sold me on it

Will pick it up when I have the chance to read

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d447a6 No.395803

>>395772

Pretty good given the target audience. Get/keep magic powers or get laid roughly by sexy sexy monstergirls. Tough call. Don't ask for people to consider things though. Not a good marketing tactic. Find a better way to put that one.

Sounds kinda like an old raunchy pulp fiction piece as well. That's a good thing. Those bad boys sold like hotcakes back in their day. They're better than the BS coming out of the mainstream now by several country miles that's for sure.

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974d79 No.395813

>>395632

I recently read wizardquest and illusionquest on tft. Good stuff. Will most likely buy a hardback when it becomes available.

Do you plan to release the other stories as books as well?

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b29344 No.395848

>>395803

Aight! Ill drop the humility. Buy my book :^)

>>395813

Thanks! I need to figure out how to price the hardback because its expensive to print. I'll have more info wednesday. Also, I'll eventually do the rest, but it takes me forever to edit and I'd like to put out a small short story anthology including the epilogue. I didn't have space for it, sadly. Thanks for reading though! Please leave a review. :^)

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bcc5f4 No.395888

>>395632

>120+ chapters

>7 dollary doos

That's a lot of content packed in there. I went ahead and purchased a copy. Once I've read enough of it to give it a proper take I'll give you the fairest review I can manage.

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435f53 No.395897

>>395888

Thanks trips hitler

Leave a review too :^) Though apparently the reviews don't show for people who don't shop amazon for other stuff which is weird but makes sense.

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f8c72f No.395911

File: 00e8a69655defe8⋯.jpg (132.52 KB,590x590,1:1,00e8a69655defe8eff2d967025….jpg)

>>394529

Hi, I'm back to show you all more of my cheesy schlock. Hope you enjoy it.

https://pastebin.com/CmqRRdE2

Feedback is appreciated and all that.

Should I actually name the MC? I'm not sure you can connect as much to a character I name 'Anon'

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21d6a6 No.396586

Cross-posting here since the Hellhound thread seems dead:

The Mad Dog of The Apocalypse

A hellhound stalked John Milcorren. He knew running would accomplish nothing. He would never make it to town, no matter how fast his horse could carry him.

Less Than An Hour Earlier

From his soft leather chair, John first noticed the destruction as a shadow from the corner of his eye, a soft and sudden dimming of daylight. Darkness had begun to eclipse the skyline visible from his cabin window. A smudge of black haze in the distance marred the beautiful spring mid-morning, stretching from fine points on the ground, houses probably, to a single broad swath in the sky. The town, a few distant miles away, burned.

With luck, it would be only a spreading fire. Perhaps the result of some crone’s careless housekeeping or cooking had started it, or perhaps an errant coal kicked too far from the hearth or a lamp knocked into dry bedding. In that case, people, buildings, and possessions could be saved with enough swiftly delivered of manpower and technique. A simple fire held neither intelligence nor animosity. The alternative, much as he despaired to consider it, meant a far greater and more meaningful loss, and could only be quelled by the ultimately futile response of the Lord’s Hussars from another few miles to the north. Were that the case, as quick as they were, they would arrive to find the town’s militia slaughtered almost to a man. The Eastern Barbarian Tribesmen were not keen on taking prisoners… Only plunder.

As John pulled his crutch to his side with one hand, he positioned his wooden leg in front of him, ready to squarely carry the burden of his weight. The real one, the one it was meant to replace, had been taken from him last year which hastened his departure from military life. He set his crutch firmly onto the floor like an old wizard pounding his staff. Pushing against the armrest with his right hand, and pulling on his crutch with the other, he stood. He could still do that, at least. He was not an old man by any stretch of the imagination, but the war with the Tribesmen, and against the Varigath Warband before that, and a dozen other skirmishes along the borderland of the Empire had all robbed him of any sense youthfulness among other things. Constant warfare from the dawn of his youth had chewed him up and spit him out. He had been like lamb entering a meat grinder. He had come out as pulverized mutton with a wooden leg, some medals, and a small pension.

Collecting his well-worn arming-sword and shield from the mantle above his hearth, John strapped the kit to his back and made his way out his cabin door, securing it behind him. He saddled up to his sturdy but small draught-horse Tess, taking care to position himself in the stirrups without dislodging or otherwise misaligning his wooden leg. His first stop would be to his small homestead’s well where he kept an old wooden bucket. It might be useful in the hopeful event that he needed to join the townsfolk in quashing a simple fire. His sword and shield would only be cold comforts in the event of Barbarians or other Tribesmen. With a crutch under one arm, he couldn’t possibly wield both at once. Worse yet, years of continuous training had gone fallow over the past year in favor of chopping wood and hauling grain. His armaments would reassure him, but were capable of little else in his weathered hands.

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93653a No.396587

Still, in that event, his best chance of survival would be joining the townsfolk in their pitiful resistance. His home could be clearly seen from the town, just as he could clearly see the town burn in the distance. Staying at his homestead while the town withstood attack would leave him vulnerable and alone, a surest death as if he had fallen on his own sword. But that was not his reason in going. He did not fear death. No… Many days he welcomed it. He took perverse pleasure in reliving fantasies day after day of dying in battle, heroically on his feet. It was sweet fantasy a world apart from his present hell of dying one piece at a time. He would to defend the town because it was expected of him as a Soldier, not because of any safety it brought, and always in the hopes that his fantasies could be made reality.

Scarcely a minute into his journey along the road to town and he slowed his steed’s gallop to a trot, then halted her altogether. A veteran’s intuition from a short lifetime of constant battle had begun to nag at him. It came on softly at first, then stronger and stronger, until he had finally stopped to assess the situation. Realization had hit him like a battering ram. Were it a fire alone, there would be even-toned shouting and little else. Were it wild tribes of men or foreign invaders, there would screams of rage and panicked wailing. What John heard on the wind, he would never forget: shouts, pleading, growls, moans, and sick, twisted laughter. Momano had taken the town.

Worse than any other foe, he feared the momano. Though he cared little for his life any longer, he would prefer to keep his soul, which would surely be forfeit if he fell at their hands. And what he had seen, what they had done to his friend, how those memories hounded him constantly, all weighed heavy on his mind. Just the thought of seeing momano again started his his hands to shaking, swaying Tess’s reigns like they were caught in the midst of a soft breeze.

Just about the only enemy he had tangled with that hadn’t robbed a piece of him had been the momano… Although they had tried harder than any of the others. The difference had been that they had the unnerving tendency to capture their enemies alive, often as willing as not, through either brute force, corruption of the mind, or both. There had been a time when John had a hardy constitution, far more than most men, both mentally and physically.

RAW Paste Data

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93653a No.396588

>>396587

Six Years Ago

John felt the barb pierce his side. It didn’t hurt, and he didn’t expect it to. It had been described as a firm pressure at the site of the wound that drove a man mad with lust. He knew now the truth in those words. It had been errantly flung along with a dozen others by single large manticore warrior, no doubt hoping to claim a few more of his fleeing men. He could perhaps resist the barb’s effects long enough to reach his retreating unit’s rally-point. Had he been a normal man, or had he been the sole focus of the barb’s owner, he would not have held out any hope of making it home that day.

But his dearest friend Michael, and immediate subordinate, would not be so lucky. Not only had he taken a barb too, but the manticore warrior had found its target in him. Like a shark picking out a single fish from a school, she pursued him with the intensity of a starving predator. His friend would make the ultimate sacrifice for God and Empire.

It’s attention solely on Michael, the tall manticore tackled the man to the ground and began tearing into his armor with its claws and tail, driving no less than half a dozen spines in the man’s chest in the process. He tried to pull his friend free but he could not be budged under the beast’s grip. There was no hope for the man. The manticore’s tail was already in place, ravishing his friend to the sound of his own screams. He would be taken back to the beast’s lair, food for the growing life that Michael himself was unwillingly siring inside the hellion’s womb at this very moment.

John’s sword heavy in his hand, he considered dispatching his friend for the preservation of his soul and honor, and to deny the beast her offspring. It was his duty, his requirement after all. He sheathed the weapon instead, knowing well enough the task’s impossibility. The manticore warrior would never permit it, for one. Not only had she effectively obstructed Michael from any angle of effective dispatch, but she would almost certainly block such an attack. For another, it would only get them both killed, whether or not he was successful. The beast would see him as a threat to her prey and react immediately. It was also no secret that men taken by momano ended their lives in blinding ecstasy, as was obviously the case with his dear friend. Better to die that way, John reasoned, than by the cold steel of a friend’s sword. Of course, the most important reason John refused to act was simple selfishness. He could not bring himself to raise a hand against his friend, no matter the consequences.

Instead, he ran to the rally-point, unnoticed, he hoped, by the ravaging monstrosities strewn about the battlefield. He was not alone among the survivors. His whole unit had either routed with him or been set-upon like his dear friend, soon to be captured and devoured. This had been their best possible outcome in the face of stumbling into a surprise mamono attack. They were unprepared for such a fight, and the mamono had been all but unstoppable since their new commander had been appointed.

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7976f3 No.396596

>>396586

>dead thread

>thread hit bump limit back in December

You could always start a new thread with your story. I'm guessing you are new here?

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93653a No.396598

>>396596

Yup.

I will do that. Thank you. How do you tell if it hit the bump limit?

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1172f7 No.396599

>>396598

Bump limit's 400 posts on this board.

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e9817c No.396640

>>395911

Good stuff, anon. It’s cute and a just sad enough to accentuate the cuteness.

Also that ending made me laugh for about 5 minutes like a retard

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98431f No.396690

File: 99f1820480fe314⋯.jpg (200.05 KB,462x500,231:250,1410219845695.jpg)

>>396640

Glad you like it, part two should be coming out soon, probably tomorrow.

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59d3be No.396781

https://pastebin.com/T7mYkj0p/-'Don't be afraid'

https://pastebin.com/G8xcUyW0/-'The Witch of Hithercombeshire'

by HumbleSacrifice/-Sacrifice-

If anyone has a copy of these archived somewhere, I'd really, really, really appreciate it

Not really sure of my drawfag skills, but I could offer an (eventual) request as thanks

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59d3be No.396782

>>396781

https://pastebin.com/T7mYkj0p/

Don't be afraid

https://pastebin.com/G8xcUyW0/

The witch of Hithercombeshire

My retarded ass can't do one thing right, damn

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ae1e60 No.396925

>>394129

Speaking of, does anyonyone have a copy of the files for the side stories he wrote for mgq?

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908ab4 No.397025

>>395911

Part two

https://pastebin.com/3kGvPRpY

More of Anon trying to be a good dad while finding love again.

Feedback is appreciated as always.

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0fad5a No.397031

>>397025

This story makes me smile. Please keep going.

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849380 No.397037

>>397025

>Line 1: Emily had given me space last night

Emily rose from the dead just give her ex-husband some sleep space? How would Gwen feel about that?

>“Oh! I understand now. Could you draw me?” She asked sheepishly.

You cheeky! :^)

>Line 125: while Gwen and Married caught up.

Welp, Anon already got married to Gwen. That was fast!

Facetiousness aside, this is good stuff like always, though I'm hoping we will get some sexual healing in the next part. I hate seeing both Anon's and Gwen's relationship being stuck in a rut.

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02ed3a No.397041

File: 1fdd55f6a0aa336⋯.jpg (1017.99 KB,850x1201,850:1201,1461538035463-3.jpg)

>>397037

I'll fix those mistakes, thought I caught all of them earlier.

Good things for them soon, gotta get through a tiny bit more drama.

Glad people are enjoying it.

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28288a No.397048

File: 7a8a12317321d4f⋯.jpg (29.33 KB,419x280,419:280,2c4h15.jpg)

File: ea9360ebf9d6a03⋯.jpg (28.9 KB,625x261,625:261,ea9360ebf9d6a03c84288c25d1….jpg)

>>397041

You are a quality individual. If you run out of ideas id like to see more of the side characters from the medusa story.

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02ed3a No.397125

File: 71ee8843d228cc4⋯.png (176.51 KB,693x674,693:674,71ee8843d228cc4e1524362d5e….png)

>Wrote 20 pages in one day without even realizing it

I should take a break, huh?

>>397048

>>397031

Thanks for the kind words.

Part three soon– maybe Friday.

Also I'm tempted to write a short story about one of the side couples in Selene's story, but I'd probably want a name for the "Anon" of that story.

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b10b23 No.397177

>>397125

hey anon, I just went through and read your other stories in this thread. I just wanted to say you're pretty damn talented and I'm really looking forward to part 3. The way you write comfy material warms my heart :)

selfish request, I know, but I'd love another Anubis story once you're done with your current project(s)

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02ed3a No.397278

File: 44e2d4245d61aac⋯.jpg (99.96 KB,850x638,425:319,A CUTE.jpg)

>>397125

Hey, here's part three.

https://pastebin.com/pva0LfMD

It went through A LOT of revisions in a very short time. Hopefully it meets expectations still.

At least one more part after this

I kinda tried some weird literary elements here but I hope it pays off and paints a good word picture

>>397177

I want to write another Anubis story but I'm not exactly sure what to be honest

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02ed3a No.397336

File: 45845978522b6d1⋯.jpg (151.78 KB,1000x1000,1:1,dragoncardboardcastle.jpg)

>>397278

I don't sleep.

Here's part four of the Bridgett saga.

https://pastebin.com/trkm6mzq

I hope this is a worthwhile and lewd enough pay off to begin the closure of this project.

I do have plans for a fifth part that wraps up a few things and gives a look into their future.

Feedback is appreciated as always.

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3ecd26 No.397339

>>397336

“What’s going on, Anon?” Bridgett asked.

Pretty sure that should be Gwen

Wholesome as fuck otherwise man.

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0f5578 No.397348

>>397278

>>397336

This is such a sweet little series. I spotted a few minor errors but aside from that I think it does what you want it to do. I want weresheep fugg too but I don’t think you’re out to write sex scenes and I respect that choice.

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28288a No.397350

File: f0da78e8a495ed7⋯.png (Spoiler Image,1.23 MB,800x1200,2:3,beep.png)

>>397336

pic related

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5accb6 No.397358

>>395911

it's nice, but isn't it a little unrealistic to be dating and living with a girl for several years but not have sex yet? unless they're intentionally waiting for marriage or something religious like that.

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b5c712 No.397379

File: 9881cc8513397d8⋯.png (204.32 KB,1255x844,1255:844,jalm1.png)

>>397339

Whoops, fixed that

>>397348

I debated including it but I was trying to push myself outside my comfort zone with this project so I decided to go ahead and try it.

>>397350

Hell yeah

>>397358

I don't believe it was stated how long they were living together. But I'm gonna hand-wave it and say they were waiting.

If it was then I'm a big dumb idiot

Thanks again for the continual support. I have a long weekend so I'll try to push the final chapter by Monday.

Also looking for suggestions/requests for more projects after this one

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2cd4ab No.397395

File: 6c98e806c3dd233⋯.png (328.36 KB,1193x1033,1193:1033,Sleep is for the weak.png)

>>397336

>I don't sleep

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ba416e No.397458

>>397379

How about a radical feminist being turned into a kikimora and her conflicts between her values as a random and her values/urges as a mamono?

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ba416e No.397459

>>397458

*radfem

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4fac0e No.397490

>>397379

>>397458

we need more stories of morally depraved people like feminists or gays or psychopaths transforming into mamono and slowly healing.

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76fd86 No.397492

>>397458

>>397490

feminists would sooner kill themselves than admit they're wrong about even the slightest thing

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d447a6 No.397512

>>397492

Now that I think about it, such an ideological abomination couldn't ever really gain traction in a world where monstergirls exist.

They'd try perhaps and cry about muh victimization/exploitation/etc, but then some random mamono would just say "but I'm happy with my man" in some context and blow em' off. The more "dominant" types might even punch em' in the face as damnit a good man in their eyes is hard to find and they'll be damned if they let these dumb bitches try and spawn any competition!

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83e405 No.397516

File: 2bc1e9029c31aa7⋯.jpg (1.05 MB,2755x3250,551:650,1501189522322.jpg)

>>397512

This feels relevant

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908ab4 No.397521

>>397458

Not sure if I can do it JUSTICE, but I'll put it on the list and see if I can come up with something.

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e709ce No.397531

File: c96d9b9e555b0fa⋯.jpg (992.71 KB,1280x1004,320:251,1351614739069.jpg)

>>397516

>men (plural)

>mating season

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7be7b5 No.397535

>>397531

I'm pretty sure she's using the universal third person to indicate one man in the general sense rather than one particular man. To be fair, as grammatically constructed it doesn't specifically limit the subject to one single man, but it doesn't strictly specify multiple subjects either. To parse this in normal conversation you'd have to rely on context to infer a more specific meaning, although the speaker could be speaking vaguely on purpose. The translated encyclopedia entry uses a similar formulation when describing a Jinko's "heat":

> They are self-disciplined and always seek to improve themselves, so they are not seen as wild and sexually uninhibited like other monsters. Normally they don't attack human men.

> However during mating season it's another story. When in heat their monster blood awakens, and their bodies flush. The lust is so powerful that even with their willpower they can't control it, and *they aggressively seek men* with the intent to indulge in pleasure.

Obviously here at /monster/ we (correctly) interpret this to mean that each Jinko (they) seeks out a specific husband from the human population (men):

> there are many Jinkos and many men, each Jinko seeks out a single man

Sadly, due to the imprecise wording a deluded heretic could read that line as:

> there are many Jinkos and many men, each Jinko seeks out a many men

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868800 No.397537

>>397531

>getting anally annihilated over a good shitpost drawing

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2cd4ab No.397568

File: 0643072cf7f5111⋯.jpg (55.35 KB,500x618,250:309,look at this silly fuck.jpg)

>>397531

Calm your man tits and learn some english.

Misunderstanding sentences just to get triggerd is SJW-tier autism.

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e709ce No.397581

>>397535

>>397537

>>397568

I believe the correct wording to avoid the misunderstanding would be consistency.

>"You made it illegal for a man to have sex with me"

>"You made it illegal for men to have with us"

Either would preserve the meaning in both cases while cutting out any implication of degenerate 3dpd and non-monster girl sexual activity.

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849380 No.397587

File: 1e93cb4f3d317aa⋯.png (313.19 KB,500x462,250:231,1e93cb4f3d317aa7a055dd7128….png)

>>397568

>>397336

>I don't sleep

Please sleep Anon! It's good for your metal health and writing capabilities. Great job as always! Bridgett a cute!

>>397535

>>397568

>Confusion over noun cases

I have to agree with >>397531 anon. Many good English teachers, or any language teacher for that matter, should teach parallelization for this very reason.

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9e1449 No.397593

>>397531

I don't necessarily agree with this Anon. The comic does not necessarily imply that the Pajeet Cat is a slut. If you did not have a gf and someone made hetero intercourse illegal, even if you only ever wanted just one girl for the rest of your life, you might still say 'women can't have sex with me' because you don't have a single female in mind at the moment. At the moment, you are singular, but your target could be any one of numerous women, all of whom are affected equally with respect to you.

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d447a6 No.397648

>>397568

For some reason I'm imagining that pic as a smug catgirl lamia. Just throwing ideas at the wall here folks, take em' and use em' if ya see fit to do so.

Damn, so many fetishes fulfilled there…

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4fac0e No.397655

>>397648

possibly the clothing and headpieve remind you of a lamia drawing?

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3456ae No.397762

File: dda0d23ad452400⋯.jpeg (2.25 MB,2000x2800,5:7,dda0d23ad4524008e4da6cefb….jpeg)

File: 6e640b0c0bd5667⋯.png (3.47 MB,3113x2780,3113:2780,THE CUTEST.png)

Part five!

https://pastebin.com/TvhkpBQd

Sorry I was a day late!

I hope this is a satisfying ending to my little story.

Thank you again for the support as I went.

Hoping for feedback as I go into my next project!

>>397395

I wish caffeine helped

>>397587

I can finally sleep now that it is complete

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a36238 No.397768

>>397762

>Mhm, I took Bridgett in after her village was attacked.

Only big mistake I noticed. Very good ending though. All your stories are so comfy, I hope to see more from you in the future.

How do you write so quickly without getting writer's block?

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3456ae No.397777

File: 4bb9a8dc5067deb⋯.jpg (321.4 KB,900x625,36:25,IMG_20190509_141329.jpg)

>>397768

I fixed the error. Every major error I've made has been name related, I think.

I'm glad you liked it, though!

>Spoiler

I actually got really horrible writer's block trying to finish up this last part. I managed to just sit down and scrap three drafts before finding one I was happy enough with.

I just get into the zone and spend every free moment writing or at least trying to. Though, I struggle a lot whenever I'm not in that zone.

Hopefully I can force myself to take a break before getting back into it

Probably not though

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3aaf04 No.397787

File: 2f660e1a9ee814e⋯.jpg (149.72 KB,960x912,20:19,holocaust nigga.jpg)

>>397777

Thanks for stopping atomic death holocaust gigga nigga 9000 for us anon.

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435f53 No.397859

File: a525ff7875e17d0⋯.jpg (4.54 MB,5312x2988,16:9,20190529_124113.jpg)

Hey everyone! The proof copy came in looking good! Which means you too can get a copy of the hit sensation, Wizardquest! Copies are made print on demand, so just let me know if you want one!

If interested in the hardback, please email deleorianpress@gmail.com for information on pricing and shipping.

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9a133b No.397871

File: 462cc6a72e65f25⋯.jpeg (11.5 KB,237x179,237:179,462cc6a72e65f2504181719c9….jpeg)

>>397859

congratulations anon

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41d510 No.397873

>>397762

I really like this story. Hitting muh feels in all the right spots.

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ec889a No.398037

>>386702

Yo nigga if you're still going to finish this I'm voting for hero end

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a2f772 No.398061

Does anyone happen to have -sacrifice-'s pastes saved? I came back after a year hiatus due to having found a job and just now I saw he deleted them all months ago.

I'm in particular looking for that story of the kunoichi sent by the demon lord who falls in love with a knight. It was very cute. The link was https://pastebin.com/qvFsaU1i/ (i think?) but it was deleted sadly.

Thanks in advance.

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d6bb5b No.398074

What would be the best mamono for a story in where a male protagonist has to earn his waifu by constantly being thrown into horrible battle after horrible battle? I keep trying to think of one but this is more of a /comfy/ setting than it is a dark one in where it can take an insane amount of hard work to get a happy ending. Been itching to write a story like that in where the protagonist could legitimately fail for a while now, but I can't seem to get it started as I can't quite get the premises down.

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e5a71d No.398081

>>398074

Holy shit, faggot, I've written a hellhound story like this and am posting it right now. Dude literally had to fight constantly while his waifu chased after him from one battle to the next. He lost limbs, motherfucker. Do you read?

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d6bb5b No.398084

>>398081

Nigger I can't be expected to read every bit of writefaggotry there is. Besides I was thinking more along the lines of matchlock or flintlock fantasy rather than basic sword and board.

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316d95 No.398092

>>398061

I don't know what the deal is but he apparently nuked ALL HIS WORK. Damn shame too cause he made some great stuff

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e6000a No.398139

>>398061

>>398092

Bump

Also looking for Sacrifice's pastes too

https://pastebin.com/T7mYkj0p

"Don't Be Afraid" (Spider oneshot, guy recives orders for bombing a cave full of spiders, (monogamic) spooky struggle-snuggles)

https://pastebin.com/G8xcUyW0

"The Witch of Hithercombeshire" (Lamia oneshot, soldier gets ordered to s/lay an alleged witch, which caused permanent rain in the area)

Sorry for being a faggot with the requests, just hoping someone with an archive will see

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02ed3a No.398141

Is it common for /monster/ writers to just delete all their work?

Also I'm getting horrible writers block now and still requesting writing prompts to hopefully help me get something going soon.

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868800 No.398142

>>398141

Don't think it's /monster/ writefags … I think it's more MG writefags in general. I doubt that the autism that any /monster/ writefag has would let them delete anything, but this is a speculative asspull much like my writefagging

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cb1780 No.398144

>>398142

>>398141

If they use pastebin they’ll auto delete. Unless you’re using a paid account anything more than ten pastes will be cleared out if they haven’t had any views recently.

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4abfba No.398147

>>398144

is there any sort of paste bin arichive?

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2fad58 No.398149

File: b1232fadb972ed1⋯.jpg (168.72 KB,1280x825,256:165,ilassa_nice_car.jpg)

Any good Lilim stories out there Does this one have a story?

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02ed3a No.398159

>>398144

Is there an alternative to patebin that doesn't delete old pastes?

Like >>398142 said my autism makes me want to keep it all up at once without having to worry about it being deleted.

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533194 No.398178

>>398159

there's pbworks, but that autodeletes your entire profile unless you log in at least once a year or so

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4abfba No.398180

>>398159

jewgle drive or mega

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d6bb5b No.398181

>>398180

Jewgle might be getting hit with an antitrust soon so I'm not sure if that's a good idea

Sauce: https://www.wsj.com/articles/JUSTICE-department-is-preparing-antitrust-investigation-of-google-11559348795

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868800 No.398182

>>398159

Aside from being justifiably autistic and backing up everything on multiple sources AND making what is essentially a lifetime commitment to shitposting about turborapists? remember: you're here forever ever

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435f53 No.398191

>Lilim

>Good

Well… I suppose if you want one written by a major limfag, there's the All's Fair in Love and War series by Losenis

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=alls-fair-in-love-and-war

then there's this which is a 2 part story.

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=understanding

I know nothing about carlims

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02ed3a No.398192

I guess I'll just keep everything as PDFs on my physical drives and maybe an online space or two. If anyone wants formatted PDFs of any of my shit just let me know and I'll throw it somewhere for download.

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ad642c No.398292

>>398141

How about DOTR arriving right at the start of America in the Pacific theatre, where a whitehorn comed across a freezing soldier separated from his patrol in the Alutian campaign?

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28288a No.398295

>>398149

your in luck, this is an old favorite of mine, one of the most wholesome stories

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=long-distance-seduction-chapter-1

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a156a2 No.398334

>>398144

pastebin pastes last forever don’t they?

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cb1780 No.398349

>>398334

If you only have a free account with pastebin you’re given a max of 10 pastes that never delete. Any pastes more than that and they’ll auto delete if they haven’t been viewed/accessed after a while

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02ed3a No.398355

File: 9be08feffcec6ef⋯.jpg (44.74 KB,1061x200,1061:200,Thing.JPG)

>>398349

Saw this on their FAQ. Looks like we're safe for now.

You may have their "up to 10 private pastes on free" confused for this.

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28288a No.398392

File: bd9ed03135bd6cd⋯.jpg (35.73 KB,530x321,530:321,palantir-1303341905.jpg)

>>397762

>be me, loser highschool anon

>growin up in a demon realm is pretty tough

>its not a question of if you get jumped by a monster, its when

>If yous was from where I was from, youd be fuckin ded.

>if you wanna succeed you gotta be meaner than the rest of em, so ya dont get married to no weakling monster

>so here I am when this mousey little bitch of weresheep tries to pawn off her sweater on me.

>tells me she wove it from her own wool, but its mostly made out of love, and maybe a few tears

>says that last part all quiet like, though she was talkin all quiet anyway.

>ya think im some kinda retard?

>tell her that unless shes got the Demon Queen's very own obsidian scimitar tucked somewhere up in that mess of tit hair, to piss off and go stuff it too

>Uh huh now she thinks the whole cryin act is gonna work on me

>loose that loser like airline luggage

>as Im walking down the hall somethin big clamps the fuck the down on my shoulder

>clutching most of my left side are three big fuckin pig stickers of claws, each of em doused in what must be a gallon of pink fingernail polish, with little red hearts at each base

>oh fuck me its Brigitte, the biggest and most ill tempered dragon in all the senior class

>one time she destroyed the whole science building cuz some Onis were picking on her friends

>then some how got off cuz her mom works in the government or some bull

>I guess I should be happy she wants something of me then

< Anon, you're going to go back down that hall and apologize to my sister right?

>Uh huh (her sister?? how the hell does that work?)

< And your going to put on the sweater she spent so much time making, and your going to give her a hug as thanks right?

>…

>warmth growing on the back of my neck

>hey ha, yeah whatever you say boss

>claw releases you

<Ill be seeing you around anon. I guess I should tell you from experience, its really hard to hug a weresheep just once…

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02ed3a No.398401

File: ca6dd05161e1692⋯.gif (15.79 KB,320x288,10:9,P E R F E C T.gif)

>>398392

>Someone actually wrote a GT based on my writing

I've made it as a writer, thanks Anon.

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849380 No.398461

File: 5fff116806cd8f5⋯.jpg (118.9 KB,840x954,140:159,Bridgett receiving call fr….jpg)

>>398401

>>398392

Two can play at this game! Thanks Medusa-fag for the story. You're stories are always top-tier!

>Be redcap, 5rd grader

>Known throughout school as best bully

>No one can bully like you, not even Neko Nagataro-san down the hall

>You get it from your mother

>No one is safe

>Everyday, you see your favorite targets the sheepish, sleepy-eyed, always quiet twins, Ross and Samantha

>Wedgies, whip-cream rude awakenings, static shock hand shakes, and all kinds of teasing galore!

>You continue doing this during the semester, but they don't seem to be upset or care to acknowledge you and your gang as a threat

>You gotta step-up your game

>Today is the day you will do you ultimate act; dying Samantha's wool with rainbow-color dye and giving Ross and his secret crush's couple's fruit juice

>(Non-permanent dye - While you may be a bully, you are not a bitch. You have redcap standards and mamono principles to uphold.)

>Sitting, swinging your legs carefree in class, waiting for the excusably tardy students to come in.

>Ross and Samantha walk hand-in-hand with the smuggest faces you have ever seen

>WTF! Their faces can't be this smug!

>You and try you're best to out-smug the twins and prep your bullying

Ah! Our two favorite fluff balls decided to come a little earlier than expected. Are they wanting their super special treatment that badly?

<Samantha: Yeah! We wanted to share the pain cuz mom has always told sharing is caring.

<Ross: We brought our dear Onee-chan for the day for that reason. Red-san, meet Bridgett. Her name means "fire".

>Onee-chan? Fire?

>Your smug demeanor morphs into fearful awe as a big, tall, fit teenage dragon-girl marches up behind the twins, fire and brimstone in her eyes, apocalyptic wrath in her mouth.

>now_you_fucked_up.webm, [settings] loop=true

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953323 No.398462

>>398461

>5rd grader

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849380 No.398463

>>398462

I write like a "5rd grader". Thanks for pointing that out! I originally wrote "3rd grader" instead, but later, I thought the characters being closer to puberty made more sense for one of the lines. Alas, I am not a clever man and deserved to be bullied.

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02ed3a No.398465

>>398461

>>398463

I love it. Good stuff, Anon.

I've scrapped like 3 projects, after about 20 pages each, so far but I think I've finally got something I'll work on and be happy with.

I'll return to the Selene and Bridgett characters eventually to write about side characters.

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953323 No.398467

File: f21096de0f12f9c⋯.jpg (22.13 KB,1058x1058,1:1,57511878_129899004772459_1….jpg)

>>398463

No need to overthink it. Just thought it would be fun to point out a little typo. Nonetheless, a good story.

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871335 No.398473

File: fcc579ea5b53e97⋯.png (320.55 KB,424x493,424:493,1544747402815.png)

Writing prompt: Dude falls in coma, but instead of waking up on the Zombie Apocalypse, he wakes up on the day after Rape Day.

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ad642c No.398475

>>398473

Seconded

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3aaf04 No.398487

>>398473

so 28 days later but it's the rape-ocalypse?

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435f53 No.398573

>>398473

Resonant Drunk kind of did something like this, though it's not directly afterward but instead they've been around for a little bit when he awakens. It's got a raiju so it's good stuff.

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=a-spark-of-inspiration

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ad642c No.398619

>>398573

Wow. I'm genuinely impressed with that from what I've read so far.

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addcc5 No.398634

File: d4d2c54d4f07ce6⋯.png (229.67 KB,570x460,57:46,15201327149922.png)

>>398573

Fuck, that was good stuff

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e3ab0e No.398729

Have the stories of >>318503 been pastebin'd yet? There's still some time to do so before the thread expires if not.

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e9817c No.398735

>>398473

You know, that leads to the question of how mamono would deal with a single man in a coma.

Would someone “stake a claim” on him? Or would they just wait until he wakes up, however long that may be?

Also I just had an idea:

>anon gets into an accident, coma ensues

>DOTR happens, doctors decide to use him to conduct an experiment

>they get a nightmare to enter his coma dreams, to see if he can be woken up from the inside

>while it initially doesn’t help him wake up, it does let her act as a courier between anon’s conscious mind and the outside world

>love ensues

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2b6a6a No.398741

>"Is Sir familiar with ‘Thomas the Tank Engine?”

Holy fuck my sides

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adb360 No.398790

>>398735

I didn't know I wanted this

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d447a6 No.398902

>>398735

That… actually sounds like a potentially sweet/awesome story.

He's in a coma, and while he cannot awaken from it right away, he's in lucid dream territory in this regard (i.e. knows he's in a coma and that all he sees is but a dream) and then learns that he can still affect the outside/real world with the help of this "Nightmare" monstergirl (Who, in a very good way, subverts expectations by being quite literally the perfect waifu for him).

In the end, a scientific/metaphysical/magical/etc… breakthrough regarding the nature of consciousness/comas is made, he wakes up in the arms of his Nightmare lover/wife, and they both go on to live happily ever after. It was a long and hard road, but in the end they both truly earned their happy ending.

Sounds like a good story to me folks.

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4f92f2 No.399044

File: 26bea4b29e57300⋯.png (156.05 KB,900x700,9:7,Day 9 - Demon.png)

Recently signed a contract with my demon classmate, although I'm not quite sure what that means at all, I just kind of rolled with it thinking it was a game.

For all I know, she's been bringing me homemade food during lunchtime, so maybe she's just practicing her cooking and I'm the taster. She must feel very proud of her skills, since she really seemed depressed that one time I gave her a negative review. Every single lunch after that one has been better than the last one, but she looks like she's getting less and less sleep as time goes on. I thought that maybe she needs some rest from this contract thing and asked her if we could take some time from doing this. She cried like a baby. I didn't know what to do to calm her down, and she ran away before I could do anything.

The next day she seemed very upset and avoided me everytime I tried approaching her. She really must be proud of her cooking skills. I had an idea.

After class, I reached to her with a new contract: I would go to her place everyday and would help her cook next day's lunch. She blushed hard and gladly accepted the new terms.

And so, everyday, after class, I'd go to her house and make sure she has time enough for sleeping. I'd help her finish our lunch and then go back home, although, for some reason, she always seem like she wants me to stay and sometimes gives me a kiss goodbye on the cheek. Do demons normally do that to say goodbye? I wonder.

I'm happy she can now sleep properly and also cook, and I think having me as company makes her happy too. I really like helping her out; going to her place everyday is always a daily highlight.

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e14ab9 No.399128

>>396781

You deleted your pastebin?

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ad642c No.399171

I recently saw an undead story. The MCs town got taken over by undead and had a zombie wife forced on him. I cant remember if it was a pastebin, greentext or TFT (cuz this thread is slow on content). Does this sound at all familiar?

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74f129 No.399175

Yes! And after enough "mana" she regains some levels of cognition or something, right?

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cb1780 No.399177

>>399171

>>399175

In my memory he had a collar on his neck that would explode in a year if he didn’t turn her into a wight

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ad642c No.399179

>>399177

Yes, exactly. I cannot for the life of me (pun intended) remember where I saw. Knowing how retarded I am I could've seen it in this thread.

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ad642c No.399180

>>399175

This too

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0fad5a No.399181

File: dfb733a757c5c33⋯.pdf (61.66 KB,undead_invasion_(zombie_to….pdf)

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cb1780 No.399184

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909b93 No.399336

>>397531

okay I'm gonna sorta-necro this because nobody asked what's wrong with "mating season" as a concept and I want to know

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02ed3a No.399434

File: 3fabec94e04159d⋯.jpg (35.05 KB,576x432,4:3,e g g.jpg)

>>399336

I don't know what his deal is, I would rather have a waifu that goes into heat a certain portion of the year rather than bleeding once a month.

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849380 No.399438

>>399434

>>399336

We've already talk about this. The issue is that the context is not clear and seems to imply she fucks whatever guy there is without care or second-thought once she goes into heat.

I stand by what I said earlier. The guy who made the comic should have followed parallels and kept the second have a universal pronoun instead of the personal. He probably meant well, but we've been having a slew of idiots, faggots, and degenerate shitheads the past few days so we can't be too careful.

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953323 No.399476

File: bf8295dc4a27e3b⋯.png (269.53 KB,480x561,160:187,WHO_is_the_killer.png)

>Monster girls don't like men who enjoy murder

Writing prompt: Anon is framed for the murder of multiple mamono in a gloomy city. He's regarded as the only suspect due to relations (not romantic) with said mamano and reports of him being witnessed near the events of the crimes. Although he hasn't been proven guilty, he's immediately seen as an outcast and is rejected by even the most lustful monster girls. The real killer is still loose, and soon enough, the body-count starts to rise. Meanwhile, a detective owl mage doubts Anon's correlation with the murders and joins Anon to find a way to clear his name and catch the killer.

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533194 No.399487

>>399476

while not EXACTLY what you wanted with the prompt, here's something similar that i didn't write but i remembered someone else did a while ago

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=the-sweetness-of-poisoned-fruit

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e9817c No.399490

>>399476

I see one issue with this: aren’t mgs able to “sense” the nature of a man? You’d think they’d just notice something’s up when they don’t see a psychopathic aura around the mc

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953323 No.399530

>>399487

Heh. Kinda busy right now, but I'll check that out.

>>399490

Really? Is that canon? Would all species of mamono be able to do that?

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868800 No.399534

>>399530

Technically this is KC canon. However: it would be worth ignoring if a good story came out of the suggestion posted >>399476

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953323 No.399672

File: a18ac274147cd16⋯.jpg (54.88 KB,700x700,1:1,d949h1j-bf22c544-4510-4ebf….jpg)

>>399487

Damn. I finally got around to reading it, and that was one hell of a read. Everything in my mind clicked as each question was answered. The bad ending for Trent/Thompson left me slack-jawed (in a good way) and kind of sad, since Penny was dedicated to finding an antidote for him so they can be together. And who knew a holstaur can be seen as intimidating. Once again, a fantastic read, especially with some noir jazz playing in the background. Now I want more stories similar to it.

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2911aa No.399680

File: 166230b512a9e10⋯.png (46.96 KB,198x315,22:35,sipps.png)

The monster with me

I'm still not exactly sure where she came from, or what she wants. …or even if it is a 'she'.

She seems to enjoy taking the form of females, in any case. Young, old, any body type or race. I'm guessing its just an after effect of whoever she's eaten that night.

She doesn't speak much, which is fine by me. I think she's still getting a grasp of mimicking human speech, trying to parrot what I say, though it still sends a fucking chill down my spine hearing all those voices coming out of her at once. She seems to understand me well enough when I speak to her though, so theres still hope. She learns very, very fast. When the first batch of cops came to my door, asking me about the dissapearances around the neighborhood, it never happened again so close to home.

She also picked up on the concept of humor rather quickly, and I soon discovered that hers is a very fucked up kind. She loves trying to freak me out any time she can. I've always been a big fan of body horror in movies, but seeing it writhing and twisting right in your face in real life..theres just something very, very different about it.

Its strange how you can get used to it though, much like paramedics or morticians who constantly have to see the twisted remains of car crashes, you just sorta grow numb to it. Or maby i'm just fucked up.

She always seems to be 'in the mood' right after a hunt, and i'll hear her slithering and twisting behind me, 5 different mouths all whispering my name, the warm, meaty feeling of her arms/legs/whatever appendages she's duplicated, twisting and cracking as they slide around my waist.

I'll feel a scream welling up from within my throat, but i've gotten better at keeping it to myself. I know she'd never hurt me, but still, all those teeth and eyes, feeling my neck and face getting enveloped in all that wet, drooling, vibrating vicera.. she still hasn't quite figured out the concept of kissing, no matter how much I try to show her. I've pretty much given up at this point. I try to be a romantic, but she usually just splits her head open at the lips and laughs and starts sucking directly on my face. Maby this is how her species does romance?

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953323 No.399703

>>399680

Reminds me of this one slime girl doujin.

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02ed3a No.399765

Are there any girls that need more love?

Trying to get some inspiration for writing.

New thread when?

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533194 No.399774

>>399765

holstaur because i have zero motivation to write a story about best girl right now, or the ability to transform the idea(s) in my head into words on my computer

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937d8d No.399781

File: 70e5428b3058136⋯.png (374.57 KB,500x693,500:693,70e5428b30581364f27eeae1dc….png)

>>399680

>bodyhorror shapeshifting gf

>who loves you enough to go out of her way to hunt so the police don't suspect you

>and who is awkward at kissing

How can you fit so much yes in one post?

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2911aa No.399803

File: b7c23073f0859ed⋯.jpg (45.16 KB,800x450,16:9,C-658VsXoAo3ovC.jpg)

Human meat love

The crash hurt so bad. The light, the heat, it hurt so much. So hungry, but I smelled them.. so many of them.. so many scents and tastes and textures. I was so hungry. Need to eat, but need to be careful. 6 legs, 4 legs, 2 legs. 2 legs built this? Blend in, 3 legs. No, too many, 2 legs. Hands? Mouth..ears.. eyes.. ah yes, delicious.

Strange memories, not mine, but from the 2 legs. I don't remember when I crashed, or why, but the ship is buried, i'll deal with it later. Edna.. Howard.. Heather.. strange names, everyone lives in these hard box..no.. its called a house. I'm starting to understand them more. So hungry. Whats this smell?

This one.. this one is different. I feel him, taste him. So delightful! Such elegant DNA! I could feed on this one for cycles! Must have more.. No, no, this one is not for eating. He has invited me in? Not afraid? Hmm.. so strange. I change for him. Hehee.. such a cute scream. No, sweet one, don't run, I won't hurt you. I try to speak, but I can't figure out this vocal tract just yet. How do they only make one noise from such a complicated system? It makes such sweet music. I try to make myself small, not a threat, don't be afraid, please. A few of them inside of me were singers, maby I could try thier voice? Oh no, he passed out.

Cycles pass, I travel further and further, exploring, but always coming back. Safe, warm, and he's there. So delicious, that scent, his taste. I can't hold myself together around him, my flesh melts against his, I want him inside of me, just for a moment. He presses his lips against me once again. Are you trying to taste me, sweetling? Hmmhmm.. let me help you..

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e3ab0e No.399805

>>399765

Some girls that haven’t received much attention lately:

Object girls (chochin obake/kurakase obake)

Large mice

The chaos girls

Mimics/doppelgängers

Underwater mamono

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2cd4ab No.399837

File: 96fe846e376ee03⋯.gif (238.84 KB,224x198,112:99,Yes1.gif)

File: 9a7e55a5a6014c0⋯.jpg (82.43 KB,800x1173,800:1173,Flesh monster.jpg)

>>399803

>The thing waifu

CONTINUE!

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d447a6 No.399858

>>399803

Can't really approve of her consuming humans but if she could be taught to eat cattle and other non-sentient wildlife instead then she'd make an ideal waifu.

The initial human consumption could even be forgiven. I mean, she's a Lovecraftian-type alien by the looks of it. Concepts like the sanctity of sentient life are, to them, foreign concepts they never even thought of seriously. It's a thing they have to learn about, and even then, they won't exactly "get it" like we do. Like, she'd stop eating people, but only because her lover asked nicely or because grilled and seasoned steak tasted better than simple raw human flesh. Morality, as we understand it, wouldn't really enter into the equation.

Note: ya can't exactly grill and season human flesh. The smell is both pungent and awful and it *will* alert the neighbors that something is very, oh so very wrong. She may quite enjoy that delicacy, but it would also "plant the beacon" for the torch wielding mob/eldritch hunters/investigators if ya catch my meaning.

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2911aa No.399868

File: 9e0981871ce29d1⋯.png (856.26 KB,1016x467,1016:467,1372980776904.png)

I see his eyes gazing up to me as we bond once again. His scent, his pheromones, his sweat, I absorb it all until my body loses cohesion. I don't think he knows how much I love him, what he does for me. I've consumed so many of his kind, but none of them have this taste, this arrangement of DNA, so sweet and satisfying. His manner of reproduction is so strange, but the massive influx of his protiens at the end makes me weak. So potent, so concentrated, I grip the celieng, I form more limbs to hold him down as he makes me howl, as I feel my insides rearranging, reforming. I wonder if he would enjoy being a father?

Perhaps later, once things are more safe. The fledglings metabolism would need so much biomass at first that I doubt this entire city would be enough. Too much attention isn't a good thing in this place. I've tried to be very careful with sating my hunger, having to go further and further away. I've even tried eating the large, dumb 4 legged beasts I find in the country. So much mass, but they lack the taste, and leaves me feeling a bit less like myself afterwards. We need to move. Somewhere larger.. perhaps not in a city itself, but a home next to one? I found out that there are places with millions of people packed into a tiny space. Places where so many people normally go missing that noone seems to notice..

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937d8d No.399883

File: ecc19d37e5ab137⋯.gif (1.88 MB,480x264,20:11,Planet_destroying_think.gif)

>>399858

Conversely, I would argue that such concepts are flaws based in our individualistic, animalistic past. We place such great value on the individual because that is all we have ever known. But, if we were to look at it from a societal viewpoint, not every individual deserves to exist. The benevolent, the hard working, the self-less givers, they surely have a place in society because their actions are the foundation of society. It is that sacrifice of personal pleasures to serve the greater good that allows nations to flourish and rule amongst the stars. But the greedy, the individuals who see nothing outside of theirselves and only work for their own self intrests, not only are their actions against the core values of society, they are a direct threat to its existence. From a societal view-point, these people have no right to continued existence, and their removal is an act of self defence.

I guess what I'm trying to say is that I have no problems with my waifu eating corrupt polititians and gangbangers.

Also, I was planning on wrighting something based on "the devourer" from that one image, gonna do it soon

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d447a6 No.399899

>>399883

Oh if she can be laser targeted towards the absolute dregs of society like the types you mentioned then I wouldn't mind it too much either. I'd be a little freaked out, but not much else.

However, then we arrive at the question of burn rate. A single dreg a day is manageable, what's one more missing dirtbag to the pile that go missing/get murderized every damn day? More than that though and she may well run out of "acceptable" meals at some point.

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74f129 No.399930

>>399858

What about eating the already-dead? She crash lands in a cemetery? The freshly dead would give her some knowledge, not much

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74f129 No.399931

>>399883

Please eat all the niggers

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3881af No.399934

https://8ch.net/monster/res/399933.html

New thread up, sorry I was late in making it, I've been busy

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