/monster/ - The Last Bastion of Romance

Requesting a story about any monster girl you think should be in the MGE but isn't.

>>372007

I'm working on the story of a cursed AR15

>>372007

Wraith

Banshee

Leprechaun

Kelpie

Homunculus

Revenant

Djinn/Genie (Efreet/ Marid)

Off the top of my head, popular monsters that KC has yet to touch

>>372037

>>372037

>Kelpie

OH FUCKING BOY!

I've had the idea for a kelpie story forever, if you want me to do it lemme know.

>>372046

I dont think anyone will ever turn down any type of content. unless it’s of a matango or something

>>372063

*like that

>>372063

I might do a sweet and loving matango story just to break up the endless bully the poor mindless shroomgirl cops around here…

>>372063

Take a crabman themed approach to matango since his version isn't horrifying

>>372046

Go ahead.

>>372037

There is a mention of a "balrog" on the MGE books.

>>372001

Recently finished some smut for the Baphomet Doctor Greilia (from MGE3: Sabbath Grimoire), it can be found there: >>372122 or https://pastebin.com/nYAePkDg

I hope you enjoy, feel free to criticize and have a great day.

Sage to reduce the amount of shameless plug.

>>371873

On we continue!

>Be vampire still.

>You can't get your human slave out of your mind.

>Fucking twice, you've been denied his delicious blood but not again.

>You've stolen his stupid neck pillow.

>You've told him off cleaning today.

>You could totally chain him down and hypnotize him but that would ruin all the fun, right?

Nope.jpg

>You decided to get an early night and got up earlier than normal.

>Just before the sun went down.

>He was rolling something out in the kitchens for the other slaves.

>He truly does care about them…

>And you…

>How about you surprise him with a little nip on the neck.

>No harm or anything but just a reminder that you own him.

>You sneak up behind him and lean in for his kiss.

>"Hey Tomas, do you think this dough is-"

>His sentence is cut short because, as he was calling that particular slave over, he slung the heavy wooden rolling pin up on to his shoulder…

>And onto your head.

>WickerBatHittingA_HomeRun.wav

>You go fucking *DOWN*!

>Your jaw hits the ground first as you crumple like a twice-used condom.

>Such exquisite pain…

>For the first microsecond, you feel nothing…

>Can vampires go into shock?

>Apparently not…

<"AHHHH! What the fuck! What the hot fucking garbage! Look behind you!"

>He's on his knees again.

>"Miss! Are you alright? I'm so sorry, I had no idea that you were behind me!"

>Once you stop seeing stars, you stand up and stagger away, muttering.

Why must it be so hard to find a nice story about a dragon cuddleraping the mc without it being furry?

>>372195

Because dragons are shit-tier edgelords

>>372196

>dragon

>edgelord

Did I miss something?

>>372203

Nah, friend. 9e2dd9 has the worst tastes possible.

Arguably, you could say Dragons are OverPowered and I would be inclined to agree.

>>372212

>the worst tastes possible

Clearly you have never heard of Kelp-chan.

Also, only liking good MGs is not shit taste.

Anyone have any advice for getting back into writefagging? I haven't put anything up in almost a year according to my pastebin, and rewatching youtube videos is starting to not help in curbing my boredom when I don't have work.

I have nine story ideas I could be using, plus doing a rewrite of two of my stories I made earlier, PLUS an idea for a CYOA (but I'm hesitant on that since the last CYOA I did went poorly imo), but I just can't seem to find the motivation to transform ideas in my head into words in a word document.

>>372269

Stick with one of the new story ideas, also do up some greentext shitposts as warmup

>>372269

Nigga, do CYOAs please.

>>372105

where?

>>372283

well i'd have to spend an hour or two writing some stuff up for the OP post and figuring out how i want to consider suggestions/which one "wins" and maybe a system on how much NPCs like/dislike the PC

i at least have an idea for the overall story and some vague idea for the relationship meter, but i dont have much more than "here's anon, try to do x before y happens"

>>372299

Roll a D6 and assign numbers to the suggestions as they are posted.

For the NPC's? Make a sliding scale of 0-100. Base the gain and loss of affection on how much each npc values each action.

>>372304

I was more thinking of 1d20, with 1 being crit fail and 20 being crit success (with 1 beating all other rolls regardless, and 20 beating everything), and perhaps a reroll system as well just in case

as for relationship, i was thinking of a 0-100 scale, with certain sections/blocks of numbers being different "tiers" so to speak, and NPCs would be more willing to do something/the roll needed (purely arbitrary and based on what i come up with at that moment) if they were at a certain tier, and then depending on the action done their affection either goes up or down a certain amount of points

i could also have a sort of "prep thread" or start the CYOA off with a bit of prep/PC creation before dumping the first wall of text for the story, and figure shit out with the whole relationship/diceroll thing then too

Owen was drinking his Guinness at his usual spot in the bar when the door opened. Normally Owen would only take a quick glance to see who it was before returning to his drink, but this was different. The boy who was standing in the doorway couldn’t be any older than 15, the smoke made it difficult to tell from across the bar, but Owen could tell he was young.

Owen returned to his drink but kept watched him from the corner of his eye. Anything unusual was almost always trouble. While the kid was talking to the bartender Owen double tapped the side of his head and activated his companion. “Run his face against any local bounties or warrants.” Owen did not want another run in with the marshals. At least one of them was going to remember him from the last time.

Whatever they were talking about Owen couldn’t make out but he had seen money switch hands. Owen didn’t know what Frank could know that the kid would want. The worst Frank was guilty of was smuggling alcohol, being his supplier Owen would know if he did anything else illicit. When The kid started walking towards him is when Owen became more confused. ‘This kid is definitely upper class’ he thought. ‘He holds himself up too straight, he’s too clean.’ ‘His skin is pale and his clothes are too fine.’

Standing in front of me he seemed almost hesitant, but this passed and he spoke firmly. “I want passage off world.”

My earpiece vibrated once in my ear. Meaning the kid had no bounties. Why would he want to be smuggled off world?

“Buzz off kid, I’ve got no time for games.”

He seemed rather indignant at being brushed off.

“This is no game sir. Name your price and I’ll pay it!”

Thinking for a moment, Owen decided that a high price will make the kid leave him in peace. “16,000 credits.” That was an obscene price, even for him. The job wouldn’t even be half as expensive. Now to get back to his drink-

“Done.” He said, “half will be paid now, and the other half will be paid upon arrival to our destination.” As he said this he reached into one of his pockets and withdrew a handful of 500 credit chips and put them in front of Owen.

Owen was silent a moment. He reached out and grabbed one of the chips to be sure it was real. And then counted them twice to be sure. 8,000 credits just like that. Enough to cover all his expenses for a couple months. Even if he didn’t see a penny after this the kid more than paid for himself.

“Alright.” He said nodding his head and pocketing the chips. “Where are we going?” He was half tempted to say ‘your lordship’ or something but decided he had enough attention from the other patrons. One of whom looked like they might cause trouble.

“I’ll give you the coordinates once we’ve reached orbit. Any other questions?”

“Just one. You’re a kid, no bounties or warrants out for you or anything. Why leave?”

“It’s a private matter, just get me to where I need to go and you’ll get your money.”

“Fair enough I guess. Follow me.”

Walking towards the exit he gave frank a 50 chit for his tab, and made his way out the bar into the cool summer night.

first opening scene. Monstergirls will come Later since this is just the intro and I needed to set up the plot. I just want opinions on if it’s any good

>>372323

Fucking hell I Switched between first person and third person at points and I missed it. Shit

>>372324

Yeah, I do that alot.

And I had some other mistakes too.

>kept watched him

I need to do a better job proofreading next time.

>>372330

Alternative. Get better at fingers.

>>372269

Well… I've only recently come across the notion that writers are readers and I can't really formulate a counter argument to that assertion so here's my drunken advice…

Stop trying to "write" and instead read for now. A lot. Like, a great amount of fiction. Consume it. Twice if at all possible as if you're really a writer at heart you'll pick up on how and why you loved that certain passage or that big plot twist. That emotional response you had that you really want to cause others to have? So that's how they did it! Yes! NICE!!! Now I can do the same with my own story!

Get a good and large amount of that type of knowledge. Get a big emotional payoff every so many thousand words if you can manage. You're 80 percent of the way towards being a "best-selling" author at that point.

>>372323

If this is going to be a running story, put it in a pastebin or make a new thread.

>>372394

>project's going fine

>surprisingly, everyone's been doing their work on time

>Unlike some monsters I've had the displeasure of dealing with, Anne has been perfectly fine to deal with

>doesn't try to randomly change the subject to something lewd like Succubi and Wererabbits constantly do

>still, a monster remains a monster. Gotta keep your guard up.

>For men, monsters are a feast to every sense. Their voices are angelic, their appearance radiant and their smell intoxicating

>which is why you trained to keep your feelings under control and ignore what monsters made you feel

>Despite you keeping things perfectly platonic, Anne remained perfectly friendly

>class for today's finished, Jack and Shay say goodbye

>Anne turns to you

<"What are you going to do this afternoon, anon?"

>"Job hunting, I guess."

<"Money's getting tight, huh?"

>"Yeah… I mean I could lend more money but I don't like having any debt"

<"I might have a proposition for you, anon"

>This can't be good

<"I don't know how much you know about us, but as you might've noticed we yeti are rather physical"

>just like every monster you think

>"Uh sure."

<"I know that you're not interested in me, so how about we make it something purely platonic?"

>Do I look like a prostitute to you

>"What?"

<"Just hugs, I mean! I'm not talking about anyt-.. yeah! Just hugs."

>She has gotten all flustered

>"What, so I…"

>lower my voice

>"…I hug you, and you pay me for it?"

<"Yeah, essentially! You allow me to hug you and preferably hug me back, and I pay you a dollar for each! You won't be worrying about money soon enough, hehe."

>That laugh almost seemed ominous

>"Let me think about it"

<"Sure, see you tomorrow!"

>Felt a little disappointed in yourself for considering to do this

>money was getting real tight though, and considering how much free time you really had, you'd highly prefer it if you didn't need to spend it working

>next day after class

<"Heyy anon, did you think about it?"

>you let out a small sigh

>>372395

>"Alright, I think I accept but before that some ground rules"

>"First, I can quit the deal whenever."

>Anne nods

<"Second, no groping."

>You're not very good at reading faces but it almost seemed like I saw a little disappointment

<"Of course!"

>not super convincing

>"Third, neither of us will be talking about this deal to anyone"

<"Hah, duh! Well now that's out of the way…"

>years of pussy-dodging training didn't prepare your well enough for this moment

>Anne slipped right past your defense and wrapped her arms around you

>Learning to resist the sights, sounds and smells of monsters helped well while they were at a distance, but with no distance to speak of it might as well all have been for naught

>Unfamliar with the experience you just kinda froze as her warmth seeped in

>as she broke the hug, she smiled at you

>you just dumbly stared, trying to process what just happened

<"Oh, that reminds me.."

>Anne grabbed her wallet and took out a single one dollar bill and hands it to you

<"See ya tomorrow!"

>"Yeah.."

>>372396

>On your way back home you realized you had to stop this as soon as possible

>play some music, eat some snacks and just generally do your best to keep your mind off of what's going through your mind

>Maybe you should consider this an extended part of your training? If you could become immune to this, you'd be set. No monster could charm you anymore.

>time to hit the hay

>As you settle down, unbid fantasies crawl into your mind

>You remembered the warmth of Anne's hug is a pale comparison

>better cut this all off before things get out of hand

>next morning at school

>walking through the hallways to class when suddenly to fluffy arms wrap around you

<"Guess whoooo"

>…extended part of the training it is.

>few weeks go by

>learn that Anne's parents got some exclusive tailoring business going on

>wonder whether it's her mother or the father doing the sewing…

>Anne gets a lot of money from them, she saves most of it but she got plenty to spare for your "services"

>Monsters haven't been bothering you half as much lately. Some leer your way but suddenly lose interest when they get closer

>Some throw you annoyed glances when you got Anne on your arm

>people think you two are dating

>better than them thinking you're a hoe, you suppose.

>you're not a hoe, right?

>you were doing well enough at school, but lately your grades have been getting better

>Anne's smart and studies diligently, seems to have a knack for teaching

>but that's not the only thing improving your results. The lack of general monster interest means you don't have to keep your guard up 24/7

>You're also no longer lacking physical contact due to your 'work'

>Looking up various articles on the internet brings you to the conclusion that you're "marked" with Anne's energy

>A few weeks back you would've been highly bothered by this but you couldn't really bring yourself to care right now

>Another day of classes done, they seem to pass quickly enough. A hug in the morning, one at noon and one in the afternoon

>Every. Single. Day.

>Well, not the weekends but whatever

>She also clings to your arm while you're walking through the hallways

>she doesn't pay for that but whatever

<"Anon…♥ Wanna chat for a moment?"

>>372397

>"Yeah, what's up?"

>make sure no-one can hear us talk

<"Wanna make some more money?"

>Alarm bells would've usually ran but you felt perfectly at ease

>"Hm?"

<"Weather's been getting colder and our radiator can't run 24/7 or it might get damaged, so we turn it off in the middle of the night. To deal with this could, I figured maybe… we.."

>She's getting flustered again, cute.

>"Speak up, sweetbuns."

>She only gets more flustered by that

>She's bully bait

<"Cuddle! I thought we could maybe…."

>her voice trails off

<"Cuddle…"

>"Sure… five bucks?"

<"Only fi-?! Yeah! Yeah, okay! Yes!"

>She wraps your arms around you again and holds you tight

>her warmth suffuces you again, her smell making your mind fuzzy

>The training to become immune to this hasn't been going very well but you'll get there. Maybe.

>She brings her lips close to your ear and whispers

<"See you tonight"

>7PM, knock on the door

>Wait you never told her where you live

>Anne cheerfully greets you as you let her in

>Anne has broughts her standard packback, just full with stuff now instead of a single laptop and a book

>hotpants and a light-blue turtleneck sweater. Strange combination but you're not complaining

>"You already ate, right"

<"Yeah, no worries. I did bring some snacks though in case either of us get hungry. Didn't know what you had in house and-"

>she prattles on a bit about nothing, but you don't care. It's just nice to hear her talk

>>372398

<"Anyway, it's kinda early to… sleep, so what'ya wanna do right now?"

>"I usually just play some video games during this hour"

<"Wanna watch a movie?"

>Hol' up, that doesn't fit in the plan. She gets here, you two fall asleep cuddling and that's it.

>Watching a movie is bound to end up in messing around and stuff

>Anne's nice, but she is and remains a monster

>Keep things as they are. No movies, just vidya.

>"Ehh, I really want to play this game right now…"

>"Aww, alright.. I guess I'll play some games too"

>You make a bunch of mistakes leading to your death in the game

>can't stay focused, your eyes constantly seem to wander to Anne to see what she's doing

>she just seems to relaxedly play her game, but you've heard how good monster… girls.. can be at sneaking glances

>just when you ponder whether this was a good idea it's time to sleep

>you both get ready for bed and stand at opposing sides of the bed

>Oh yeah, it's a single-person bed, cozy.

>deciding to "take the lead" if you will, you take off your clothes until you're wearing nothing but your underwear

>Anne's mouth falls open a bit as she looks at you, before breaking herself out of her reverie and following your example

>Lacy panties black panties and a comfortable-looking bra

>nice

>I mean, nice material. Gotta appreciate craftmanship. No impure thoughts here

>she stands there awkwardly hugging herself

>Chief god, help me.

>you decide to get under the sheats and bid her to do the same

>as she joins you in bed your faces end up a mere few inches apart

>blushing cheeks, shy eyes stare at you

>inviting lips, parted

>Lips asking for a kiss

>No, no. Nonono. Cuddle. You bring your head back and ask her to turn her back to you

<"Huh? Oh. Hm."

>turns her back to you

>you bring one arm underneath her neck to hug her at her shoulder and the other one around her waist and you pull her body against you

>she yelps in surprise as you show some assertiveness

>look down at her snowy-white hair and hear her fast breathing

>her sweet smell and warmth calms you

>you must calm her. Make her feel safe. You hug her tight to you and gently shush her

>kissing the top of her head you whisper to her and bid her to sleep

>Anne's big meaty paws rest on your hands and she sighs dreamily

>You don't think you've ever felt so relaxed in your life as you melt into the bed

>sleep takes you

>>372399

>you run through some unfamiliar streets in an unfamiliar city

>Ah, this sensation. Must be a dream

>time to mess around

>from merely running you go about jumping

>have to be careful in such dreams. You can do prettty much whatever you want, as long as it doesn't require much focus

>What shall we do now, you ponder to yourself

>The lewdness in your mind quickly comes up with suggestions

>yeah… you chuckle as your nose bleeds a little

>Gotta find a cute girl for that though

>white hair and a nice tan capture your attention in no time

>perfect

>She's been in your dreams often enough, but this time you have no hesitation, no reservations.

>you wrap your arms around her and she reciprocates

>your hands trail down her warm back and each find a bountifull buttock

<"Ah…"

>Huh, that sounded… not very dream-like?

>Whatever, you're not going to leave this dream just yet. Keep your eyes (and hands) on the prize.

>getting positively turned on at this point

<"Hmm!…"

>Ah damn it, there it goes. You're waking up…

>Wait, the sensation of suppleness on your hands isn't going away

>Blackness. Right, so it's late and you're in bed. Your bed

>Holding something warm. Right, Anne.

>Suppleness. Anne's nose is poking your sternum, she turned around and you're holding her… ah…

<"Anon…"

>as you let go of her bountiful ass she slowly turns her head up to look at you

<"Anon?"

>"I…"

>>372401

11/10 It's fucking excellent. Just needs a quick revision and a Pastebin.

>>372401

In depth review spoilered below:

[spoiler]Alright, if you actually have no experience in writefaggotry, you are doing amazing.

Anon is reasonable and realistic enough.

The way you portray his thought process and his slowly melting reservations feels natural and follows a neither too fast nor too slow process.

I saw a few small mistakes, but nothing immersion-breaking.

Perhaps the only weak point in this story was Anne's character being a little flat, Anon's fine, but the Waifu deserves a little more details,

small stuff like what kind of movies she likes, a favourite food, some silly obsession, small little insignificant flaws, to make her more "real".

Oh and a personal nitpick, Anon's money problem could be introduced earlier and might have benefitted from a "proper ending",

just a joke about how Anne lured the poor man with riches would have been enough, but that's really a minor issue.[/spoiler]

In a few words: >>372406 is 100% correct. I look forward reading more from you.

>>372407

>that massive spoiler fuckup.

Ammit, please, put an end to the suffering that is being a nigger of my caliber when it comes to all types of formatting.

I beg of you and your sweet massive impartial thighs.

>>372406

Thank you

>>372407

Yeah, I should've spend more time on conversations and other interactions between anon and Anne. I just wrote the story in a single go and didn't put super much thought in it

Thank you for the feedback

I would greatly appreciate critisisim

My name is Annonette I am a cursed YSS AR-15 rifle, and this is my story.

It was one week before the gavel came down…

I was sitting by the kitchen counter when my husband came in with a manilla envelope, all giddy.

“Honey?” I ask, “is that…”

“From the ATF? yes.” his charming smile growing wider as he read the papers. “Yep, everything checks out, so that means…” he tilts the envelope towards the table and a metallic clink is heard. “Happy belated anniversary” I looked at the part. This is one of the most strictly controlled pieces of metal in existence, the only reason it could even be bought is that it was forged prior to 1986. This was an auto sear for an AR-15 rifle, bridging the gap between a semi-auto carbine like myself and a legitimate select-fire assault rifle. This is an expensive piece to obtain even without the seventeen $1000-a-pop background checks. My beloved sacrificed so much for this.

“Should I install this now?” My husband asked. “Of course!” I answered, “that ruling could go down anytime, might as well enjoy our magazines while we can.” I place my gun body on the table and walk my human body over to the couch to lie down. Though my soul is solely in my human body, whatever affects my gun self affects me. As the takedown pins connecting my upper reciever to my lower are removed, my arms and legs stop responding to my brain, lying still or hanging limply, the remote sensations of his hands disassembling my fire control group still felt between my legs, still, my mind keeps going back to the case at hand. And the assault weapons ban surrounding it.

Why were there no exemptions for “assault weapons” who happened to be cursed, or at least a good 2 years to acclimate myself to a new gun form instead of six months? Even when we are handled by others, we see through our sights and lock ourselves on safe if we can see we are going to be misused. Heck, we target/competition guns can feel the same shooting inanimate targets that our sword ancestors felt cutting flesh makes us the safest firearms in existence, the biggest “cost” to our inclusion is a private room for us and our husbands at the gun range. Why do you have to smelt them all, including us? Can't you just lock our gun selves up? Why are you defending it so much when you can just amend in a special exemption for us?

It doesn't matter, the court is gonna rule against them and at least secure me my life. Albeit with stupid Canadian 5-round magazines, but we can get that right… ugh…ohh…ooh! Masturbatory orgasms rack my body as my husband pulls my bolt back, releases it, and dry fires me. He does it twice more and at the end I am panting. function checks will never replace legit range time, but boy do they help ease the tension from my hubby's dad bod.

I stand up and go into the armory, my beloved following me. We start working our respective reloading stations, I load magazines and drums, he reloads the cartridges themselves. Now don't get me wrong, I'm an Armalite, I need good loads in my chamber, but not even fresh premium cartridges can not feel as good as whatever he’s putting in my used brass, plus I think I can tell if the casing is from our first date or our wedding night or something like that, but that's probably just me being sentimental. as i finish lading fresh 5.56 into the last 30-rounder my mind shifts to the drums, they tend to be a bit more complicated.

After the last drum is loaded with fresh cartridges, a pile of ammo loaded by my sweet lover is placed in front of me. I put the 40 shots into two 20-round Vietnam mags. I was never able to get through a standard 30-rounder of his ammo before feeling frisky. I have no idea what full auto was going to do to me.

It turns out, it does a lot for me. I never really got to the drums, after going for his meat in the middle of the first 30, we correctly figured I'd be wiped out on the sexual stuff after the special 20’s. My trigger is such a blessing and a curse.

I also had to help my hubby up. As beat as I was, he was even worse. I had to pick up the brass and manually unload the drums myself. Hopefully I'll get to be able to unload a drum before they are banned.

About a week later we came home from “iron manticore” the new Marvel Represent All People Edition did a better job at bringing in minority characters than the ANAD initiative. Not to mention introducing mamono superheroes. And this film showed that perfectly.

When we got home and turned off theatre mode (we kinda forgot to do that at the theatre, derp) the news hit. Cursed weapon mamono are not exempt from the removal and destruction of assault weapons provision of the National Safety Act Uhh Jane we Need Some Other Words or Else This Will Get Confusing (NSAUJNSOWETWGC).

Please put writefaggotry into a pastebin to make the thread easier to navigate.

>>372442

In a few word: it's bizarre, not bad at al, but so very strange.

While I'm pretty sure I managed to understand the "plot", this work requires a solid knowledge of firearms to be 100% clear, knowledge I do not possess, which makes me miss most of the subtleties you might have written in.

The part about the re-used casings is cute and funny, the more obvious sexual innuendos made me smile, but it just wasn't my kind of story, I suppose.

>>372447

No. Fuck you.

>>372466

I'd say you're a nigger, but you're at least literate, so try not to act like one and read the thread rules.

>>372442

Do I see some Upotte in here? I like it. You've tickled my brain enough to think about writing something…

>>372398

<Only fi[ve]?!

C-C-CUTE! Would pay five hundred for hugs tbh.

>>372401

On a scale of bed of razors made of sandpaper to the cumulative fluff of owl mages, bunyips, and yetis, I rate this story a cotton candy super troupe of extraordinary fluffy love. Please write more!

>>372437

You can still add more content to it if you put it on pastebin too. Flesh it out with new stuff and such, for a fresh second read.

>>372167

I still love this idea but what to write about next?

I like Anubis.

>>372291

MGE Encyclopedia Volume II, Seven Seas, "The realm of Fire and Monsters, page 33

"In the case of especially large and dangerous volcanoes, the Overlord is said to dispatch balrogs - great fiends girded in hellfire - to take control of the volcano before it erupts."

>>372520

I just looked it up. You right. How's that going to work though? KC is able to use terms like mindflayer and gazer because those terms aren't copyrighted. Whereas beholder and illithid are, so he can't call them that. HP lovecraft's work is public domain so that's fair game. But "Balrog" is still copyrighted by the Tolkien estate.

Still it would be cool to see a Balrog MG

Just found the Balrog.

Also just found out what I'm writing next…

>>372524

That's kind of iffy. Balrog, according to the Tolkien Gateway comes from the Old English ''Bealuwearg'; Copyrighting a single word is usually impossible especially if a variant already exists. Plus KC won't be purely relying on Tolkien's works purely, but rather making a parody of it based on his own creations (fire-based, men-lovin' succubi vs. infernal, fire-wielding Maiar cloaked in fire and shadow). Nethack and other roguelikes have a closer-to-Tolkien's version of their own Balrogs, but the Tolkien Estate either doesn't care or just doesn't bother to know.

Then again, now that a (((Jewish grandson))) is over the estate, they might get more anal about such things.

>>372511

an anubis getting this monstrosity from her husbando for her birthday/anniversary/whatever https://shop.lego.com/en-US/Millennium-Falcon-75192

it's a lego set that costs 800$ freedom bux and has 7541 pieces

>>372534

She just ends up making a pirimid out it despite following the instructions perfely and her husband finds her at 4AM trying, for the sixth time, trying just build the fucking space ship.

>>372526

A wizard hunting monster that pulls her prey inside her dark, bottomless hole, and also likes to crack open non corrupted dwarven strongholds in her free time?

>>372558

Sounds like ratmen…

Gremlin girl won't stop calling you "Boss"

Tell her that only one person can have that name.

She does research.

Now calls you "Big Boss", emphasis on *BIG*.

This is not better.

Shilling here because I dont want to make a new thread for this/ dont see a reason to revive the old thread unless im asked to. For those who read Wizardquest, Im almost done with a first pass edit, which means im getting closer to making this book a reality! Even if it doesnt sell, at least I'll have a hardback copy.

I do, however, wonder what people think would look cool for a cover illustration? I probably need to put the commission request in soon, so I was interested to see what others think.

>>372649

Character collage maybe? WQ was primarily character-driven after all.

Or just… y'know. Big fat monster tiddies.

>>372650

Tig ole monster biddies

>>372650

Big meaty paws grabbing the books cover!

posting here for more coverage. I'm willing to exchange short stories for drawings. if you're a drawfag hit me up. You can get as detailed as you like for the kind of story you want. My stories are over on TFT if you want to see i I'm worth your time

>>372662

Alright, what kind of story do you want?

I'd like a Demon in wedding lingerie in a leg lock hug position with a lucky guy while they make out. Guy should be shorter than her, but not a shota, short brown hair with widow's peak.

I'd like the lingerie to have a corset, garter straps,lacy lingerie choker, and stirrup leggings

Feel free to be as detailed as you want with your story request.

>>372442

—CHAPTER TWO—

my husband and i didn’t know what to do. we just stared at the live feed as Jessie O'hara, the cursed AR-10 that sparked this case. (AR-10S are kida like me, but she shoots bigger bullets and can hit them farther) as she gives her husband, who kinda looks like a 10-year-old next to her tall body, one last hug before she is taken away. Afterwords a reporter was interviewing a protester form SIFT. “Today is a great day,” see the man in a black hoodie and red bandana. “the courts have now decided that the safety of marginalized people outweigh the tools of white nationalism. the tools of fascism, the tools of the Patriarchy!”

“Enough with the commibarf, what am I supposed to do?” I cry out at the TV. “All assault weapons are to be surrendered to your local police station in 30 days or destroy it and give display the remains of the weapon for smelting. I look at my husband who is… smiling? “They said I gotta give the ‘remains’ of of an ‘assault weapon’ right?” He says.

I immediately get the implication “right, not my dead human body.”

“And our good friend Jack will gladly make us a fake 'you’ to ‘kill’ with a spiked bullet”. My husband nodded and picked up the phone. And my mind still wondered about SIFT, their victory signs were too professional to be put up this fast in a surprise decision like this. My beloved hangs up the phone. “Looks like we got an appointment.”

I thought back to SIFT, and what inspired it. Before my mom able to cross over into this world, a small group of human men calling themselves the “National Socialists of America” came over here, telling the mamono woeful tales of the extinction of their people. The Grand Maou was sympathetic, but couldn't do anything, still couldn't have sons yet. One of her daughters had a theory. If a Grand Maou was set up on this earth, which had no real magic or chief god of it's own, they could recreate mamono nature without the interference like in that universe. We figured out the public relations nightmare that working with them was before we went public, but we still made a promise, (and besides, just about anyone with a cock was an irreplaceable asset in the monster world), so they agreed to have their involvement buried in exchange for wives. Albeit ones who still go by Jack, Daniel, Conner, Joe, Peter, Cleveland, Quagmire, etc. Even after alping.

However, people still figured out their involvement which sparked questions. Especially considering their previously-overlooked ploitics. Antifa and some Anti-mamono radical Neogaf cat ladiess got together, decided AMRF was a stupid name and went with Stop Importing Fascism Today (SIFT). Good thing that the only group that's a bigger joke than them is the Anti-mamono faction of the Knights of the Ku Klux Klan. Even if they wanted to, they don't have the strength or guts to pull it off…

————

One of the quirks of mamono society is the welcoming party. At first sparse and rare as they could not get proper welcoming parties, except for affluent monster girls, but as mamono populations neared 10%, Mamono maternity halls started opening up as more and more businesses starting letting mamonos off work on Tuesdays and Thursdays, which became the days when mamono mother's induced labor to deliver children. On these days, every mamono not currently in emergency services and active duty was there giving loud, joyus cheers as each new baby was delivered. Alcohol flowed freely among the crowd. Men were in attendance, but those that weren't married didn't stay single for long.

Three days after the verdict The Toledo Extra Species Maternity Hall was the same, but cursed firearms were reported as “cursed revolvers” even as their gun selves sported box magazines sometimes actual select fire. Until a bunch of masked SIFT protesters came pouring in chanting horrible things about how mamonas “perpetuate fascism” and that they need to be destroyed “to protect the rights of human women” among other things. They kept banging on the trash cans and congregating around them. A keen eye would have noticed a prevolence of Hammer and Scickle symbols, which is rare in normal SIFT screech-fests. They couldn't run fast enough when the ushi-oni and hellhound guards were called. Three of the hellhounds started sniffing the air, their eyes going wide with horror. Accidentally setting off the explosives by yelling “RUN!! BOMBS!!”

>>372689

Cute and cool.

Needs formatting and proof reading/10.

Would read again.

Ohhh! Idea time!

What would be the implications of a monster that couldn't get pregnant? What treatments are available? Would they work?

What would their peers, friends and other say? How would it affect their marriage? What would their husbands say to them when they told him? What would they say to others?

>>372649

Given how fending off horny monsters is a central part to the plot and tone of the story, maybe the Wizard and Blake in combat with some of the initial monsters, so the Slime, Moth, Minotaur and Alarune, could work as a way to establish the tone without spoiling too much? You might be able to slot in a sneaky Selene somewhere, perhaps as an imposing, shadowy threat in the background, if you really wanted to as well, seeing as she's pretty important. Whatever you decide to go with I'd highly recommend avoiding the copromancy, because while hilarious in practice it's a pretty good way to turn off anyone from wanting to read the book, as they are likely to think it's a weird fetish inclusion when really it was just a tool at the time.

>>372195

Since Dragons are my favourites MGs, I'd like to do my part in fixing this awful inJUSTICE.

Is there anything in particular you'd like to read? Just so I set myself some early buidling blocks.

>>372694

Well, if we use the "more basic" setting of the Monster Lord being an OverPowered Succubus with the end-goal of spreading happiness to the entire world through pure unfettered love…

We can extrapolate that she would consider having children as the material proof of a successful family.

Going further on that line of thinking, let's imagine most of the Monster Population agrees with that psychology (we could say they consider this "new life" better than their previous, violent and murderous one).

With this basic consept as our base, it's not a stretch to imagine that Monsters would see Women unable to have children as something tragic and deeply sad, doubly so for Monsters who are seen as symbols of fertility (such as Echidnas or Trolls).

It seems logical to consider childless wives as being overly cared for and treated with a sometimes unhealthy mix of pity and compassion.

We can suppose these women are certainly quite miserable or immensely frustrated by all this.

>>372710

I'm not really looking for a lot. Maybe throw in some light gfd if you want to add a some lewd bits. You can also add some humorous stuff if you wanted to, I'm just mainly looking for what I previously said: "a nice story about a dragon cuddleraping the mc without it being furry"

>>372650

>>372658

Nothing wrong with Monster Tiddies, probably should have one on the cover.

>>372697

I actually removed the Alarune fight since I wanted to trim a little and that part is superfluous enough to do so. Him getting high off her fumes and rambling about the plague was also removed since it reads weird and the thing happens anyway at the end.

I was thinking about a sneaky selene, heh. This may be what's best to go with, especially if I have to break it into two books.

Yeah, was certainly not going to have copromancy pictured, haha. It's just… going to be in the book because it's so important.

>>372691

>Terrorist bombing of a maternity ward

>Cute and cool

>Wtf.

>>372778

d'aw

you never told me what story you want by the way.

Also, my offer is ongoing if any other artists are around.

>>372785

Hmm. Feels like it'd be longer than a short story, but I'll give it a shot. You have a preference for the girl? Or can i choose? Would more than one be out of, the question?

>>372710

>Going further on that line of thinking, let's imagine most of the Monster Population agrees with that psychology (we could say they consider this "new life" better than their previous, violent and murderous one).

>

>With this basic consept as our base, it's not a stretch to imagine that Monsters would see Women unable to have children as something tragic and deeply sad, doubly so for Monsters who are seen as symbols of fertility (such as Echidnas or Trolls).

>

>It seems logical to consider childless wives as being overly cared for and treated with a sometimes unhealthy mix of pity and compassion.

>

>We can suppose these women are certainly quite miserable or immensely frustrated by all this.

This is perfect and I love it and I'm writing a couple that is trying to have a baby or a litter or whatever and they can't. It's going to be emotional and sad. Be peppered for face-water.

I was thinking about a story in the lines of this: the hero is a lonely traveler. There's no one to give him company. In his lonely nights, he talks to the wind spirit who is technically his only companion.

>Hero, you travel alone, across the vast plains and mountains. You struggle, suffer and fall, but still go on. Why?

<It is what I do, it's what I am. To move forward is life and to stop, well that's another life. Is it much different than what you do?

>Is it hero? What do I do that makes you think so?

<You go whimsically wherever you want, whenever you want, just fly about on your cool wind to distant places never seen, never see about the rest of the world and its petty concerns. No aim, no reason. Free from the bonds of the world of man.

>Such a keen observation from a man who couldn't tell a bad guy apart from another. You try to act indifferent but do concern about the world and its people. You do help the unhelped and protect the unprotected. I doubt about flight but you do have an aim, just as all men. A life of fame and glory. Or perhaps treasures worthy of such travels. What do you seek beyond these trials and tribulations?

<I don't know. I am not sure.

I have no idea how to follow after this. Or even if its a good dialogue. Any ideas?

>>372831

Ah, oh well. It's not quite the angle i had in mind either but im not one to be ungrateful. I'll go ahead and start on your story. I don't have much to work with, but hopefully you like it anyway.

>>372840

This is Opie by the way

>>372401

One of my favorite greentext stories now, thanks anon.

What is your favorite MG?

per

Preferable one that is

A) Known for having kids ASAP and

B) One that you wouldn't mind seeing sad.

https://pastebin.com/Nb1mzyTx

I tried to keep it short and simple, but I thought I would contribute with a story

>>372879

Shit, I'm so damn out of it and tired from work. Don't work in retail or the food industry.

*profile to the monster state's general paranoia in the story

*Can't say I would take that route (how the hell did I get right?) personally

>>372879

Thanks for the feedback. I struggle alot with plot and pacing. You're not the only one to tell me some of my transitions are jarring so I should probably work on that. (It's easy for me to forget that the reader doesn't know everything the writer knows neglect to give them enough to work with.)

Lenny is actually my half assed attempt to write a few scraps of "Runyonesque" dialog: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Damon_Runyon#Literary_style

If you want to get a taste of Damon Runyon's work the old radio program The Damon Runyon Theatre is a good place to start. Runyon's odd and distinctive dialog really comes through when you hear it spoken:

https://archive.org/details/OTRR_Damon_Runyon_Singles

It's a little bittersweet reading or listening to his work now as it's a window into an America which is lost forever. Even if he's mostly forgotten today Runyon was hugely popular and influential at the time. If you've ever watched an old black and white gangster movie there's a good chance you've heard at least echoes of his work.

That being said I really should avoid the temptation to add references to a story which only people who remember the Coolidge administration are going to get.

I also probably shouldn't listen to my mecha anime song mix when plotting…

>>372839

its good but the paste is on a timer and i would like it to stick around ** plus i personally hate it when i'm looking through the old Writefag threads

only to be cucked out of a paste by a timer so please take it off for the future lurker just a thought **

>>372782

good to see you around opie, or at least good to recognize your namefaging

i dont want the monstergirl 2020 setting to go to waste, so i will be posting a related story in a couple of days i hope

>>372817

>do you travel to find a meaning or traveling has become your meaning in life?

>>372872

Adorable! Wouldn't mind seeing more

>>372689

–chapter three–

A TV reporter continues to cover the ongoing investigations, who survived, who died and speculation as to who did this. SIFT was a prime suspect, after all there was a protest there. That alone gets on my nerves, protesting the birth of people. Add to that fact you just murder babies, moms, and those who celebrate them, and they have the gall to claim that WE are Hitler's fans? And that THEY speak for women? Oh, look it was the KKK, which remains a tiny, insignificant speck, just like it was decades before we showed up.

My husband saw I was getting upset, so he changed the channel. Renate Hoeltzman the lead singer for the metal band The Virgin Stealers. Is giving her last performance next week, because she's a cursed stg 44, a banned assault weapon. She looked like such a trooper. Her death mandated by the state, but she was giving one last stand before her gun body was destroyed. Also it's free for cursed assault weapons and their husbands.

Jack returned my gun body to me. “Alright, i'll have that ready before Saturday”

My husband sighed in relief “Great! What's the charge?” He said.

“No charge, it'll make things look suspicious.” He said “this is not just the people's right to self-defense and the means to it, it's now people who are threatened. I…I can't just let that stand”

“Wow… thanks!” My husband said. He shook Jack's hand, then turned back to me. “Wanna go to that concert? I know you like The Virgin Stealers.”

“Sure! One last date, hide and acclimate myself to a compliant weapons, ride out the statute of limitations-”

“No use. That was removed last year.” Jack said.

“I thought that was just for sexual assault charges!” I said.

“It was extended to illegal firearms possession last year. Dems snuck it into a budget provision.”

“So I'll have to hide until we get this repealed?!”

“Yes, I'm afraid.” Jack said, his face looking at the floor.

“We’ll figure something out, I'm sure” my husband said…

————-

“I mean, yeah loss of life is tragic, but you have to look at the context.” A news commentator stated. “These Creatures have no interest in dismantling Patriarchy, they just want to participate. I mean look at Sweden: No gender pay gap before mamono, then it comes, not counting monster girls, back at FIFTY CENTS ON THE DOLLAR!, Abortion rights are rolled back. Big shocker people who celebrate the births from total strangers don’t like the right to choose. Australia, Canada and Great Britain have repealed their assault weapon laws. The gals support meritocracy, putting minority representation in major jeopardy. And if that wasn’t enough, these girls seem to want outright fascism, i mean look at the husbands of their greatest leaders” the news commentator droned on and on about how the mamono and the alt-right are linked. Jerome Brown's mind was on the The Maternity Hall Bombing, and how he lived through that.

He was in the process of being incubised by a beautiful oni named Jan when he drank her sake a little too early. He threw up into a trash can just as the SIFT protesters were leaving. Little did he know, that can contained a bomb, and throwing up on it shorted out a key part of the control circuit. That saved him and his wife from the blast. The other trash bombs were too far away. However there was still the collapsing ceiling. A shard of the rafters smashed through her head, killing her instantly.

>>373226

Chapter three point five

He was one of the few survivors of the attack. In the celebration part of the Maternity Hall. Most of the other survivors, ironically, were in the delivery rooms. however , he finds himself unable to move on from Jan. Every mamono thinks I’m trying to cheat on my wife, and is shocked when I tell them she died in the bombing. One girls said it was due to a “smell like a mamono on him” that the mistake was made. It had been three days since the attack I shouldn't “smell” like her. After not turning up crap on google, he looked towards the residence of the Great Mage Geri, if anyone knew how to get her smell off it’s her.

His number is called as he walks into the room, a mixture of modern medical facility and witches potion shop. After a few minutes, she walks in piece of paper in hand. “I just got done talking to your wife we-”

“SHE'S ALIVE?!” he jumps off of the examination table. Gidder than when he saw Wanda Wayne, the first Oni in the Lakers, bounce the ball of the opponent’s backboard into the net. A spectral image of Jan appears

“no… I'm not, sorry.” the ghost said.

“As I was saying” Geri continued, slightly annoyed “We have determined that you need to be decoupled from her, the way she was incubised you would have made you dependent on her body for things she can't provide as a ghost.” She grabs a pen off her desk and starts writing “while posthumous decoupling is relatively simple as far as decoulings go, it's still outside of my particular skill set. I would advise that you talk to her.” She pushes a slip of paper in his hand with some codes, an address and a name. When he types the address in it is discovered that the address puts him clear across town. “Well, no time like the present” he said to himself.

>>373098

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=into-another-world-part-1

Here's your isekai story good sir.

Would anyone else be interested in an exchange btw? I'm still up for it if you are. Also willing to write longer stories than 5,000 words for more complicated pieces.

>>372195

https://pastebin.com/TKzE6udq

It's incomplete, but here's a start

I hope I'll be able to complete the rest of the story tomorrow or the day after

>>373147

Thank you so much! I'm writing another story right now and I'll try to make it a little longer and character focused.

>>373233

Cool. I'll try drawing the pose on a different view then.

>>373258

don't bother. I got banned. I have a dynamic IP, so it isn't too big a deal. But I'm still miffed. I've only been in two threads and I ony had my name so people could look me up and see if they liked my writing style.

I'll just be quiet for a bit.

https://pastebin.com/5QFzntTi

As of yet incomplete story about a kikimora

I will add in more interactions between the two and probably end the story with Abby warming up again to Anon and stuff.

Feedback to this story and >>373239 is appreciated

>>373498

You'll have to emphasize that it isn't an MGE derivative work since those ghouls don't eat the dead.

Also, does anyone have a short story request? Something with one of the under-used girls preferably.

>>373511

I had this idea for a while where someone finds his Basilisk girlfriend one way mirror shades and she gets to see a whole lot of the world.

>>373511

MGE nightmare vs Freddy Kruger

>>373515

Arent those just sunglasses?

>>373420

About the Kiki story: it's pretty good. The beginning is solid, adding a couple more interactions between the characters can only make it better, but the message comes across quite clear.

The "breaking point" scene was my favourite part: it's a short but efficient emotional roller coaster, first is the empathy, then comes the dread, really well done in my opinion.

The ending however is a little too rushed, it's missing something (justva longer discussion between the two, a promise, a show of affection) and your unusual formatting makes reading it a little more complicated than it should be.

But since you said you were planning on adding more to this, it can easily be fixed.

I liked it. You can do your idea the JUSTICE it deserves.

>>373526

Basically

It seemed like the easy solution to the eye problem Basilisks have but no one seems to have thought of it.

>>373544

thanks buddy

>>373498

For whatever reason, I think the comedy angle is the best way to handle this. It's just a gut hunch so take that how you will.

>>373511

I had an idea for a story about a guy that rides his bike late at night and gains an owl Mage tag along.

>>373544

man I expect you to give me a (you) if you update that. Great read!

holy fuck I want a flirty Griff boss now

>>373764

Grad you riked it.

>read it all in 2 days.

Neat. Lotta non griff content in there though. My copy editor did mention the griff seemed to get a bigger chunk of the spotlight at times. I didn't intend for it focus on her, but that's kinda how the story unfolded as I wrote it.

Originally I said I would update this story on a monthly basis but that plan fell through when I hit creative roadblocks and got distracted by other things. Either case, I'll post updates here if when I do update it.

Did you utilize the .pdf or the pastebin?

>>373803

Yeah I liked it I was a bit busy the weekend but I read it until I hite the end, Willard was a highlight too.

Used the .pdf on your advice.

>>373756

alright, this seems doable

>>373498

https://pastebin.com/TnHycUYf

I made a first story, not yet involving the lich or ghouls. Basically just a test run to see where things could be improved.

Currently it's probably a little too mean-spirited.

>>373817

I like it, but your right in that the ending while pretty funny to me will probably trigger some of the more “sentimental” anons. I’d suggest adding a little extra to the ending saying she’s alright now or something.

>>373817

Pretty enjoyable. Not mean-spirited at all, really. She's a zombie anyway, so there wasn't any pain involved either. Not sure about the use of asterisks and onomatopoeia though.

>>373817

I giggled tbh,

>>373239

>>373420

remember to re read carefully before saving, both of the pastebins have some gramatical errors.

apart from that i enjoyed both, but i will wait til they are finished to form my opinion about them

>>373544

OH! i remember you, i thought you quit, and you even finished your story, i liked the tone of it

>>373064

https://pastebin.com/DTNKgwqr

well, here's the story I've been working on, for now it's mostly setting but I'm gonna start writing the more character driven parts next

Its my fist time writings something this long so sorry, reader beware

English is not my first language, so it may contain some errors in the sintaxis and the grammar, recommendations about this topic are gladly accepted

>>373907

He did get to fug the griff but there's some plot threads left undone. Particularly the winter break vacation with college kids and Ed's overall character arc from being wishy washy with women to understanding the importance of being a proper husbando to a loving waifu. I don't think I'll finish it soon but chapter 8 is currently being written. I just gotta stop being a lazy shit.

>>373941

When i joined, this weird beef we had with them didn't exist.

>>373944

There's always been a beef between monster girl fans and furries.

>>373950

Its not a furry community though?

>>373952

If i remember correctly there was some cuck shit as well.

>>373953

Its just a repository for stories and art of monster girls. You can't expect everyone to follow /monster/'s rules, not even MGE and Monmusu follow our rules exactly. There's good work and bad work, and you kind of just have to sift through to find what you like. The majority of stuff on TFT is pretty good. Though that might change with the current collapse of the furry fandom, I don't know. Though as it is right now, I think TFT is one of the better MG communities. Better than MGU or Monster Girl Redux.

>>373952

Three main problems I can quickly thing of with Touchfluffytail

1. Futa.

2. It's not all furry but it pretty much tolerates furry/semi-furry stories.

3. Abuse. Touchfluffytail tolerates and even has high-rated stories in which the male MC is abused severely.

4. Infidelity. Touchfluffytail has various stories in which monsters have casual sex or even cheat.

>>373958

those aren't very prevalent though. But hey, If you don't like it, you don't like it, but I just see it as a repository, and don't think the bad stories outweigh the good

>>373958

For now this kind of stories are a minority, but they are still there, with the current collapse of the furry community that might change.

From what little i know about TFT it seems that there is not much moderation involving the content and they don't have any culture or head-cannon to follow.

They have a discord i think, but i'm not touching that shit

>>373959

>>373960

I know, but I'm just explaining why others on here might hate touchfluffytail.

What do you mean by the collapse of the furry community, though? I must've missed something good

>>373961

a leak from telegram involving big people on the furry community uncovered some shady shit (zoophilia, necrophilia, pedophilia, the usual whit this kind of degenerates) and now furries are being uncovered for what their always where, a bunch of degenerates that need to be gassed

you can watch the latest Jim videos if you want a better summary

>>373963

hm. I don't go on discord. I was just thinking the mods seem alright and all the big MG artists are there. We also have a lot of our writefags put stories up there

>>373959

>>373956

Each community has its own land and its own laws. /monster/ is the branch of mg communities that focuses specifically on romance, heterosexuality and commitment, with no tolerance to abuse, infidelity or furry shit. It built itself on a consensus of its users on these things, rather than mixing fetishes and people that might not go along with each other in one place like TFT, as >>373958 pointed out.

>>373965

funny enough monstergirls haven't gotten much traction with normalfags due to the fact that shitposters use them for shitposting on twitter, the people who tend to comission mg art tend to just be basic stuff thats mostly stays within a margin of normal stuff, its literally made /d/fags screech because of the pinup material.

>>373960

>>373964

the discord isnt worth it

i tried going on there for all of a day before i realized that every single chatroom in the discord was nothing but circlejerks about "authors" in their little community, and imagedumps of gay and/or futa "art" of monstergirls or rather monsterboys because that's pretty much what all the art was of

>>373971

TFT discord has its perks, but the general lounge is literally homosexual. Do not advise going to it. The writer longue is where bob posts fur shit and is a general downer while art longue is hit or miss.

If you look at TFT as a repository, it has some god stuff and a fair number of authors from here use it to branch out as well. If you look at it like a community, yeah its gay furries.

I suppose thats redundant.

>>373973

>>373971

It is ran by a kraut, the guy is a hypocrite because he dislikes merkel but yet allows his repository and discord s to hit weimar conditions.

>>373964

>I was just thinking the mods seem alright

Two of the mods are furries trying to induct other furries into the community. It's a case of 'stranger seems nice because he gives you candy, but his real goals are dubious'.

Don't get suckered into their degeneracy, they wholeheartedly condone furfags and the fetishes they love, it's the current majority of the community that fights them tooth and nail for it. Unfortunately, furries see monster girls as furry-lite, so don't expect that problem to get any better only worse, especially when the moderation is passive in their involvement.

>>373983

Well shucks. Is there a way to fix it? Because the stories don't seem that degenerate. Not the ones in the last couple months anyway

>>373984

>Is there a way to fix it?

Yes. Don't allow furries or invite them into your community. Don't even humor them.

>>373971

>imagedumps of gay and/or futa "art"

Assessment of art dumped in Art Corner (artists posting new things they've drawn) over the last 3 weeks

>Contains monsterboys, furry or futa (explicit): 1

>Contains monsterboys, furry or futa (SFW): 2

>Contains no monsterboys, furry or futa: 51

<Total corruption: 5%

Assessment of art dumped in NSFW channel over the last week (channel is much faster than Art Corner)

>Contains monsterboys, furry or futa (explicit): 2

>Contains no monsterboys, furry or futa: 169

<Total corruption: 1%

Look, I entirely agree with making sure the furfags and /d/eviants need to be kept out, but you seem to be exaggerating the problem just a bit. I'll agree you do get some level of fanboyism, but at the same time I'm reasonable certain that you can disagree with those people without a banhammer threat hanging over your thread.

>>373983

This. That being said it's good to monitor them regardless, so we can make some fun of them anyways.

They, like many others only like monstergirls for the face value. They do not like the underlying and personal values of them. That is my 2 cents. Fags get can get the noose man.

Also I would like to mention the majority of their stories are quite degenerate. The one that was linked was majorly so.

And for god's sakes I shit up the thread by accident.

>>373976

The fatherland has given birth to many an autistic generation it would seem.

https://pastebin.com/AdBHY5HH

New story, significantly longer than my last one and I tried to add more character driven interactions and a small (if overused) conflict. I think for now I'll stick with the shorter slice of life kind of stuff but it was still fun to write. Let me know what you guys think!

>>373992

>futa (SFW)

How does that even work?

>>373995

The specific examples were a catboy, just standing there, and a male demon drinking coffee. I lumped futa in with it just for statistical and demonstrative purposes.

>>373992

>Look, I entirely agree with making sure the furfags and /d/eviants need to be kept out, but you seem to be exaggerating the problem just a bit.

>5 furry, futa, monsterboy images posted over the past couple weeks but it's okay because there's a hundred A-OK pictures

Putting a couple rabbit turds in a punch bowl obviously gets drowned out by the punch, but you'd be hard pressed to ask me or others to drink shit. How about just a punch bowl filled with punch?

>>373997

>>373996

>>373993

Let's take this over to the meta thread. It's drowning out the writefags.

>>373998

it is a writefag issue you dunce.

>>373999

It's been a "why TFT is shit" issue for a while now.

>>373994

Nicely done, although the pacing in their exchange when she apologizes seems a bit sudden.

Ok, hear me out violated heroes, I have an idea and I'd like to worldbuild for a moment. Sorry if this isn't the place for this.

The setting is a world that has a very emphasized Hindu-Style spiritual aspect to it. 'Every thing has spirit in it', along those lines. A few hundred years before the story takes place, something befalls mankind. Maybe some sort of plague, or curse or something. It affects humanity on a spiritual level, causing their spirits to be weak, too weak to support their living bodies. Children are born malformed, broken, and weak, and those are the ones lucky enough to survive to birth.

The people pray to the spirits, and something higher up on the totem pole than them comes up with a fix. Animal spirits, being far less powerful than human souls when things aren't fucked, would fill in the holes the curse or whatever left during their formation. Kind of like a spirit animal, but literally making up some of your being. This, of course, has physical consequences as well.

Basically everyone, man and woman, is a chimera of human and some kind of animal. The 'weaker' someones soul was during their formation, the more animal they are, both inside and out. The 'stronger' your soul, the more human you look, with the 'strongest' souls having no animal influence.

I've got a bit more of this to talk about, but I'm not sure this is the right thread for it, should I post more?

>>374018

Tough question, friend, the problem being that you run the risk of mentioning MonsterBoys, which are very problematic around here.

Additionally, having an interesting setting is not enough to hold an interesting story to tell.

>>373239

I need more

Also,

>ask dragon's servants for her name, they refuse to tell you, it is an honor to know her name

>she will not tell you either

I'm not so good with people. What do you call the dragon in this situation? Gay lizard?

>the risk of mentioning MonsterBoys, which are very problematic around here.

Are people so autistic they cannot even deal with the idea of monsterboys, even as a simple component in a setting? Like, I can understand not being interested in stories about them, but as side characters or even just to explain how monstergirls exist outside of having human mates it seems excessive.

>>374035

No, fuck you faggot. The rules are there so that faggots like you can't start the slippery slope to argue for dick girls or furfaggotry. Go to /chaos/ if you want your precious faggotshit so much.

>>374035

The inherent problem with male monsters existing in your setting is that you have to come up with a damn good reason for why female monsters (or at least the female monsters important to the stories in your setting) are pursuing human men over their own kind, as otherwise your setting is just standard fantasy and isn't focusing on monstergirls, which defeats the purpose of making a setting on this board entirely; content coming from this board should primarily be about monstergirls, not fantasy which just so happens to have monstergirls in it. Sure, we occasionally discuss monstergirls from other media which may or may not have monsterboys in them, but discussion is much different from production.

Polite sage for off-topic.

>>374039

I mean, arguably you can make a setting that has monster girls without monster boys. Stories like wizardquest have this down to a tee, but generally the possibilities you have are:

>Radically different biological gender dimorphisms for females that pass down hireditarily (optionally through men, but will never fully manifest in men) - this explaination does not lend itself well to magical attributes as everyone is technically still human

>Species hierarchy that men exist alongside; monsters can either give cross-racial birth to human men or females of their own race - in this case, human women still exist and the absence of male monsters will need to be explained somehow, as does the ability of humans and monsters to interbreed - this would be your magical option

>It's post-apoc I don't have to explain shit

Probably some others.

>>374041

rip, I meant to say sustainable* setting

>>374039

I mean, my setting does have that reason. A lack of animal features is seen as a desirable trait, as it shows a 'strong soul'. I was going to explain this in more detail later, but I may as well mention it now, the 'fix' with the animal spirits is a sloppy one, it allows humanity to survive, but it's not without its setbacks. If someone's soul is too weak in the womb, they may pop out more animal than human, in which case you have either a 'chimera' or a 'troll'. chimeras are like the opposite of what humans have become, more like animals with bits of humans mixed in, which make them more dangerous than an ordinary animal, human souls being stronger and all. Trolls are chimeras that have retained human intelligence, but not human emotion or empathy. They're savage, can not be reasoned with, but are by no means stupid. They'll even occasionally group together if their animal spirit understands concepts like pack hunting.

Those with the 'strongest souls', the ones who only have the faintest hints of animal traits became the nobility. the royal family of the nation the story is set in is entirely human, which is an important point I'll get back to. Animal traits aren't considered unattractive, but they're definitely considered to be the traits of 'peasantry'. its important to mention that all this souls stuff isn't entirely hereditary. It is sometimes, but then other times it isn't. A noble family is generally pretty human, and it's unheard of for them to spawn a chimera, but it's not unheard of that they have a kid that's as animal as the peasants. Also, the animals themselves aren't genetic. A tiger man and a fish lady might give birth to a crocodile, a ladybug and a rabbit. Except, sometimes it is genetic. A certain noble family is known for consistently having the features of snakes, a pattern going back a dozen generations. It's spirits, I ain't gotta explain shit.

The mc, despite being born of a man with the head and forearms of a mole and a motherhen, whose equal parts mother and hen, is completely human. This is a big deal, seeing as how the only other people that can claim such a thing are the royal family.

If this setting is really not welcome because the dude's are monsters too then I'll stop posting

>>374050

>If this setting is really not welcome because the dude's are monsters too then I'll stop posting

Every place has different rules. You don't have to "stop", just adapt to them. You could always think up a different setting and save this one for a different place, but please understand that some things just don't fly here as they would over there and vice-versa.

>>374052

I meant I'd stop posting the setting

>>374058

>id politics

I really have no idea where you're getting that from what I wrote. There's a definite spiritual or supernatural part to the setting, but no outright magic. I think I did a bad job of explaining where mc stands in the world. He's rare, for sure, but he's not royalty just because of his human nature, it's not the first time this has happened, or else you wouldn't have royals or nobles to begin with, and now that a few centuries have passed and the state is more solid it's not like he can just up and claim to be the new king or even start a noble house. He IS a curiosity, but other than to the most superstitious of people that's all he is. I mean shit, the only reason I'm even having the mc be human is because I figured no one here would want to insert as anything but a normal anon.

Between this and some guy bringing up futa like my story was a gateway to it I'm starting to think /monster/ might just be autistic.

>>374060

> monster might be autistic.

more like your story is too convoluted and will make way for incoherent themes and inconsistent looking monstergirls and even more erratic story plots.

>>374063

>Inconsistent looking monstergirls

yeah no shit, it that seriously a problem too?

>>374018

>The 'weaker' someones soul was during their formation, the more animal they are, both inside and out.

>>374050

>chimeras are like the opposite of what humans have become, more like animals with bits of humans mixed in, which make them more dangerous than an ordinary animal

>The mc, despite being born of a man with the head and forearms of a mole and a motherhen, whose equal parts mother and hen

>>374064

>>Inconsistent looking monstergirls

>yeah no shit, it that seriously a problem too?

I think the bigger problem with your setting here is that you are writing about 'humans' which range from normal human, to cosplay-tier monstergirl, to actually monstergirl, to blatantly fucking furry. That last point alone is a good reason for you to not bring your setting here, male monsters or no.

>>374060

Your setting is fine, its just not /monster/ As an avid ready of all kind of fantasy, I would give the setting a shot if I found it on Amazon. I just don't know if /monster/ is really your audience. Don't be discouraged, just know /monster/ is… very strict with its orthodoxy to the point of silliness sometimes. Not even parts of our favorite materials meet the orthodoxy of /monster/. MGE and monmusu both break /monster/ rules. Do what you like, just realize not everyone will like what you do, even if its perfectly fine.

That said, I just bought "Summoner" off of Amazon since I was thinking of self publishing my own book on there and wanted to see what a high ranking best seller in the same genre was like. Its garbage, complete garbage. If anything its given me a massive boost in my confidence to achieve success as a self-published author because if that thing is selling well all I need is a kickass cover and a marketing campaign and I'll be golden. If any other writefags were thinking of getting an e-book on amazon, just know the cover and marketing will determine your success more than anything else. Because all of your writing is better than "Summoner"

>>374079

Hol' up

You tellin me I could sell a story about a shit slinging virgin on amazon and make money?!

:^)

evenin', fellas.

I've been writing a word document version of a greentext I made earlier which I felt was more expansive. But I've never written a big story like this and I'm having some difficulties moving the plot along when the situation becomes too open.

Do I just let my brain simmer on these things for a while or should I push on?

>>374242

Write an outline for the kinda story you want to tell. Make a roadmap for the plot. Write down character concepts with their personalities, traits and flaws.

Get all that together and you'll have a little toolbox to turn to when you're not sure about what to write. Go back to your outline and then figure out what you need to write.

>next I need to write the part where they sneak into the castle but a thing happens and they have to get out a sticky situation

That's when you use your creative juice and fill in the blanks.

If you dump out a jigsaw puzzle on the floor and try to see the picture before you organize the pieces you're gonna have trouble.

Wrote something short, cute, and moderately lewd about a Ratatoskr. Please enjoy! https://pastebin.com/EHBvAdWm

>>374247

I didn't think of giving my cheat sheet their personalities too

thanks for the tips!

>>374301

Oh, boy, two stories featuring Ratatoskr in two days! I feel spoiled! Thanks, dude. It was really cute The use of the word girlish really made my diamonds. Ratatoskr are one of my top ten monsters so I'm very happy to see more stories featuring them.

hey fellow writers. I was wondering if ya'll have any patreons. I was looking around patreon to see what short story writers made (I'm aware they probably make like 12 dollars a month) but the search function on patreon is abysmal, I looked up Kenkou Cross and there was nothing. Same for monster girl and several variations.

>>374716

KC has a patreon but youd need to check his twitter for the name.

Writer patreon would only work for brand name, just do furry commissions if you want to make money writing.

>>374725

not to sound like a whore, but do they pay for writing commissions?

>>374744

Furries? They'll pay for anything. Just be ready to write stories about OC do not steal characters getting into erotic diaper battles with Sonic the Hedgehog.

Should you decide to do so, you will not be welcome back here. Safe journeys.

Old writefag here, been off the game for a while and was looking at jumping back into it with a John Wick style story. Was wondering if anyone would be interested in seeing/reading it and where it could possibly go?

>>375360

>John Wick style story

Count me in

>>374823

KCs descriptions are more basics about the monster rather than things set in stone anyway so it works. With that said I really enjoyed it and look forward to more.

>>375360

>john wick

so instead of it being a dude who lost his puppy and car, how about a dog-girl who lost her husbando and car?

I have the germ of an idea for a manticore story, but I've run into a few difficulties. The idea's jammed into a far corner of my brain and won't come out onto the page, mainly because I have no idea how to get to where the central concept comes in. I already know it's not going to be nearly as good as the apsara thing I did last year…

>>375535

Forgive me if I sound hostile, but what are you trying to express with this post?

Because right now, it's just blog posting.

There are no secrets to "un-stuck" writing.

If the concept is staying in your brain, it means your idea needs to be expressed.

Skip the part where you're stuck and start writing what happens next.

Writing without a clear goal is like playing with Legos without any idea of the finished product, getting something good out of it becomes a stroke of luck, not a conscious effort, it's not "bad", but is it the goal you set yourself?

>>375588

Back to /mgg/ with you

>>375591

It's a fair point. an 'idea' isn't enough for a story, you need to take that idea and at least develop a rough outline of what happens, even if it's something as simple as "MG has not received hot dickings, MG meets Anon, Anon administers hot dickings, MG is happy and pregnant and everybody lives happily ever after."

Here's a manticore idea that was stuck in my head and going nowhere until I gave up on it as a full-blown story and just scribbled it out in greentext… I already know I'll never do anything to top that Apsara story, so why stress myself out?

https://pastebin.com/jui4Y1U7

https://pastebin.com/5SXDgyW4

Its pretty late here but I thought I'd upload my latest project after a solid month absence. I know I promised to get back to shorter works but I wanted to experiment with different narrative structures and dialogue. As per usual feedback is not necessary but is highly appreciated!

>>376266

Anon, please write more soon.

This reminds me, anybody have the Facebook Indian Jinko pastebin?

>guy got into some trouble with some loan sharks

>they end up breaking his arm

>he still has to get them the money

>and he also has to pay for his hospital bills

>that's when the guy gets help from a monster girl

>it could be a childhood friend, a hellhound from a gang, a rich monster, or just a danuki

It's just a idea that came into mind, you can have fun with this idea if you want

>>376324

>Loan Sharks

>Not Loan Mersharks

Anon you had one job

>>376403

I realized the error of my ways anon

Has anyone written a David Lynch style twin peaks kinda story? A premise came to me about a straight-laced FBI agent and his quirky moth girl assistant helping a small town with a strange murder case. Something with lots of weird characters and mysteries to unravel. I know I'm a little late for Halloween themed content but the little bit that I've written in my head makes me think it'd be an interesting story to mess around with.

I figure I'm not the only one to be inspired by David Lynch stuff but I don't know of anything like that with a monstergirl infusion.

>>376497

Thinking back I don't think so, think you can pull it off?

>>376502

I'm invisioning a proper story, not something green text or CYOA teir. I don't think I could pull it off without planning and putting together a proper outline. It'd be a murder/mystery kinda deal so I gotta think clues, evidence, suspects, witnesses, plot twists and more. Pretty much build a whole small town's worth of characters. That and if I'm going to say it's inspired by David Lynch I gotta really pack the weird in. The supernatural would be part of the plot but only in little dripfed bits as you dig deeper into the mystery.

Granted, everything looks better in your mind until you start writing it. When the text hits the word processor that's when you know if you actually have something to write home about.I wouldn't mind some people throwing in some ideas character wise to help me build up the town roster. Otherwise I'll just have to build familes and people up from scratch which I can do but I'll need to give them all quirks, connections, goals, personalities and so on.

>>376504

Yeah I understand what you mean by that, writing a plot can be hell sometimes due to that

>hillbilly monstergirl witness

>facts about manamoos being used in the case

You could probably use something like the victim died from a manticore venom overload yet the body doesn't actually have any marks on it

Meaning the killer tried to make it look like a manticore did it

You could probably have someone framed also with that mind of plot

>>376508

Kind not mind)*

>>376508

>tailpussy

I know I'll catch shit but I don't like manticores from MGE because of the tail pussy. If it was just a regular stinger I think I could deal with it but tailpussy makes it hard to suspend my nonfetishistic disbelief. The thing is, tailpussy is so ingrained into the community if I had a manticore character without a tailpussy I think most on the board would view her as deformed. Even if she wasn't sexually active in the story and would have no need to even utllize such a thing.

Genitalia digression aside, the poison concept is the kind of thing I'd conjure I'm sure or something like it. I haven't even started the basic building blocks of assembling the plot yet so I don't have much more than a few simple character outlines.

>>376510

If it's just the manticore design bothering you, there's other venomous monsters. Even if none of the available ones fit into your story, I don't think anyone would complain about some unofficial ones, as long as they're properly introduced and described.

>>376510

I'm not gonna lie I can actually see where your coming from

>>376497

>a straight-laced FBI agent and his quirky moth girl assistant helping a small town with a strange murder case. Something with lots of weird characters and mysteries to unravel.

I am 500% in favor of this. You could call it "The Mothgirl Prophecies." Strange lights appearing over a deindustrial Ohio river town, a popular young human boy getting brutally murdered, monster girls acting as if hypnotized or under an undetectable spell, strange lillim in black asking incomprehensible questions of lonely farmers…if you don't finish it, I might have to start it, although I can't guarantee I'd do a remotely acceptable job.

>>376504

I can understand where you're coming from, even though manticores are my favorite MGE monster by a good margin, and tailpussy is part of the reason why. If you're writing a setting that is not just entirely an escapist fantasy, it looks a little odd.

>>376510

Consider the following interpretation: Manticores come from an area unusually high in poisonous plants and animals. "Tailpussies" are in fact a secondary mouth of sorts, with an enhanced sense of taste and feeling designed to detect toxins within food, while keeping said food separate from the primary digestive system. It's use as a sexual organ is merely a secondary/cultural aspect, as the heightened senses make using it in such a way highly pleasurable.

>>376510

Manticores aren't just their tailpussies, it all depends on how you write them

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=spineless

>>376510

There have been a few posts here with manticores not having a tailpussy. Different artists draw different things. People like manticores with tailpussies and some people like them without it. We can all agree that manticore is best girl.

>>376701

Is it just me, or does the manticore in this story act 3dpd?

>>376769

Then the story is believable!

>>376701

>Ended up raping a lot of men

No wonder her tail got cancerous.

What's the point of making a story about a Stacy on steroids?

>>376859

I didn't get a chance to read it but I saw the comments at the bottom that said "The twist at the end when he was gay caught me by surprise!" or similar such sentiments and I figured it probably wasn't a story I'd enjoy. That's what I get for skipping to the bottom I suppose.

I'll try muscling through it later to see how one attempts a non tailpussy centric plot with manticores.

Dumping ideas I most likely won't write them

>guy joins a martial arts class to learn how defend himself from delinquents, or some random manamo

>theres a shit ton of lizard girls

>he doesn't mind it and trains with them

>eventually spars with them

>first time sparring he got his ass handed to him

>realized he still has a far way to go before he can defend himself

>continues train with them

>eventually becomes great friends with a Tomboy lizard girl

Or

>guy is meeting up with a old childhood friend

>a arachne trauntla type manamoo

>they meet up and begin to talk

>through out the event his friend begins to become more and more aroused

>eventually she attacks the guy

Long time lurker, first time poster. But I am having fun with the roll thread, so I'll post the pastebins here.

>>376981

https://pastebin.com/HQdsAYPP

>>376988

And part 2

https://pastebin.com/NYAWQPsL

>>376983

Heartwarming stuff. I liked the MC's inner monologue.

>>377003

Intriguing. I'm waiting for the next part.

>>377003

As a recommendation I wouldn’t write and publish your story at the same time. The reason for this is that if you feel a plot point could be better, or you want to put something in to get out of writing yourself into a corner, you can still go back and edit it. Otherwise if you edit previously released parts people who are reading it as it is released are going to be confused as to why something that wasn’t there before is referenced.

Then again the story is based on time and space fuckery so maybe something interesting could be done with that.

>>376983

Wonderful pacing.

>>376266

10/10

request.

Have a childhood friend who became a vampire,and it's not so much of a secret.

You've been on blood thinners your entire life and she knows it.

So it's very taboo to have her drink your blood because it might not stop flowing until medical intervention, or a cut could bleed for an abnormal amount such as a wound that may have other wise stopped bleeding in 5 minutes would bleed for a half hour.

She's very playful.

Perhaps you end up in the hospital with her in the lobby with a ton of people upset at her.It could be not a serious injury, but enough that they need to inject you with something to counter the blood thinners.

Would other monster girls flock around you when you get back to school?

At least one with gills will.

>>373227

I finally finished the next part off this

Hopefully i can get the next part done quicker. Any feedback is appreciated

https://pastebin.com/PEJDkvHH

>>377949

A response to the inevitable questions about the wight in this universe:

Yes, they do make love to their husband, usually once or twice a week when he least expects it. They like to take sexual exploration with their one, chosen man slowly; often, agonisingly so. They have… certain talents. They greatly enjoy the looks of unbridled lust on their men's faces.

They are not evil or unempathetic. And they often deny themselves in anticipation for finally giving the beloved man what they want. Most monsters will make love to their man multiple times a night over many comparatively short, exhausting fits of passion. Making love to the wight in this universe, in comparison, is a long, extremely rewarding process for the couple, and greatly improves the rate of conception.

Owen is currently diving through the window of his room to find some clothes. We'll see where this goes…

>>377954

Goddammit writefag, why do you have such a nice setting and story when I don´t even like male edging?

>>377003

At long last, here's part 3

https://pastebin.com/iRa6NC3Q

(now with actual smut!)

>>377037

>As a recommendation I wouldn’t write and publish your story at the same time.

I agree. I'm kinda winging it for this story. In this case I'm going to use the dice rolling as my get-out-of-bad-plot card.

>Are you telling me ONE MAN destroyed my Order Outpost!?

>>378451

She wanted a playmate, and they, within reason, wanted another child about the place, so they bought Owen. There were no ulterior motives here. None at all. Nope.

>>378515

So, do all Wights trap their Anons that way? And just what and where are they studying?

>>378519

They study biology if that wasn't clear. The institution is a pretty big one that I haven't really named.

In answer to the first question, they have multiple methods. They are quite apt at trapping and restraining men for a number of purposes - they particularly enjoy cuddling and massages. It really depends on the Wight.

New story here, this one is a multi-parter. I cant remember where but awhile ago I saw that this anon had posted a hypothetical question; what would it be like if a Pharaoh, Jabberwocky, Vampire, and Ryu all went after the same man? Many thanks to the guy who had the idea in the first place, hope you like it!

https://pastebin.com/PmMTK21h

>>378797

Oh, my God, a madman actually did it, and an excellent effort at it, too.

>>378798

glad you like it!

>>378799

I like the fact he was the "trophy" of the event. You´ll be making more, I suppose?

>>378800

oh yea, at least one part for every girl. Truth be told I'm still working on the ending a lot though

>>378801

If it helps, I like harems *wink, wink*

>>378802

but my good lad, have you heard of loving stable monogamy?

>>378806

When you love someone so much you cant stand the thought of cucking them, or worse, creating a dynastic crisis like what sparked the 100 Years War.

>>378807

Maybe it´d be nice. Not the dynastic crisis situation, but maybe? So, a radio talk show host? That is also interesting.

>>378809

girls gotta have some reason for liking him before the story starts, even if its cursory.

>>378811

Well, I´m happy with the result. Hope to see what happens if there is ever a story about a monster talk show.

>>378802

>*wink, wink*

>>>/tumblr/

I have a question for everyone I used to only lurk and I'm trying to produce content for the board. I'm dyslexic and my brain knows what I'm typing and I tend to overlook stupid spelling errors because of it. I used to just rely on my word processor. I was using Google docs and it would just not show when I'm making a spelling error. I downloaded a free one and the same thing happened. Does anyone have any advice on what program I could use?

>>378848

I've been told Open Office is pretty decent, and while its not as good as Microsoft Word for the grammar, it should help with spelling errors.

Sadly, it's only hearsay, I've been using word for years now and never had the need to check anything different.

>>378849

A bit pedantic, but open office has been discontinued, most of the useful code has been incorporated into libre office, which is still receiving updates.

https://www.libreoffice.org

I like libre office, but I can't stand what-you-see-is-what-you-get editors, I just use my text editor's spell check whenever I need to write something. admittedly, I don't actually contribute anything to the board.

>>378942

>>378949

I came here to tell him to fuck off as well as thank you two for not bumping for the shitter

Short story about a Salamander growing up and her father navigating it. Not one of my better ones to be honest but feedback is always appreciated

https://pastebin.com/BA3bqLk7

>>379025

It's pretty good, you're slice of life stories are always enjoyable

>>378815

Nice meme.

>>376701

I bet the kind of people who like this story are the same kind that find bojack horseman 'relatable'

>>380109

so I like your fleshed out characters and realistic and non magical tone, but i'm gonna need a cheshire that pops out and says "life has many doors Ed boy"

Itching to write something /monster/ related to get back into the swing of things. Any ideas?

>>380938

Daughters of the Demon Lord, and the difficulty of finding restraints that will hold them for bondage play.

>>380938

A lonely christmas cake monster girl decides enough is enough and rapes her co-worker who's been ignoring her because he's been burned by women before.

>>380938

I haven’t seen anyone write anything with girls like ice queen. It is winter time so it would be perfect to write it now

>>380941

It might be a tad similar to that recent story about the Danuki and the Robot, but I want more like this so here's my vote.

>>380940

>>380941

>>380943

Demon Lord idea is pretty funny.

Cake rape is 10/10.

What do you mean by Ice Queen?

>>380947

http://monstergirlencyclopedia.wikia.com/wiki/Ice_Queen

>>380956

Vengeance to the pelvis

>>380947

Lust demon reacts to being strapped to a Sybian at max power and left alone on the room.

I wouldn't mind an ending where they end up together but there needs to a good internal conflict that the lady dragon deals with in learning to forgive or pursuing vengeance that will leave her hollower than when she started her trial for revenge.

If I tell someone else what exactly to write it won't be as enjoyable for me to read so whatever hot take is taken I hope it's one that really activates my almonds so to speak.

>>380956

This could actually be a top-tier premise if it isn’t half-assed. There’s a lot of emotional turmoil possible for both the main characters. The dragon having to deal with her failure to properly avenge her mother directly, and with the questionable morality of punishing someone for something she knows they didn’t do, even if she decides to make the punishment non-lethal.

The dragon slayer’s son can deal with the despair of being locked into this fate by birth and coming to terms with the legacy left by his father, good and bad.

Add to that their mutual grief at their respective parents deaths (as the dragon slayer is no doubt dead by now) and this could turn into something amazing.

God damnit I wanna write this now

>>381030

*avenge her father directly

Misread the prompt

>>381031

I guess it could be the mother as well. Given /monster/'s feelings towards male monsters that may be what you want to do. I kid, whatever you write, make it interesting.

That begs the question, should the lady dragon start out with both parents or just one? If she has both do both of them need to die or maybe one die and the other be gravely wounded? I think balancing the tragic elements of the story is important to make the conclusions more emotional for the reader. Are you painting boy's father as a valiant hero or bloodthirsty killer? Was the lady dragon's parent(s) innocent or was there a reason that someone sought to kill them? The more believable the motivations the better.

>>381030

>>381044

This prompt as the one that spoke to me the most. I'll get started on it in the next few days and start writing up a few chapters.

I am very slow at plot progression though, so fair warning.

I'll try to come out with a constant stream of chapters though, one or two a week at least, or more if I write less in each chapter.

>>381426

>cuddle contest

>no yeti in there

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>>381422

How much do you charge?

>>381433

https://pastebin.com/VPD1jDNq

What happened to Sacrifice's pastebin?

>>382571

Christ alive you type like a fag

>>382606

did sacrifice had plenty of porn in it or some download links? If that is the case than I think that paste bin may have purge it. Is there a alternative to paste bin?

>>382613

It is from 4channel, what did you expect? Hopefully that may have been a copy paste instead of >>382571 authentically writing like that.

>>372037

It's funny, since this was posted, two of these have been created officially. The banshee and the genie

Not enough of a fag to forget to sage. It seems I need to up my game.

>>381422

I always see good world building and politics from your stories. I just like my heroes to be a bit more quirky, or at least flawed. $10 for 1k words? I hope the cost of living is low where you live.

Haunted

https://pastebin.com/RrqvNY0a / https://touchfluffytail.org/?story=haunted

Tags: No smut, Shoggoth, Horror

Length: 5.6k words

Synopsis: Despite the rumors of it being haunted, a man moved into a manor which all of its preview inhabitants had abandoned.

>>382644

Increasing the price might not land me a lot of commissions and I'm not in financial difficulties. It's mostly to fund an art commission and maybe get a tablet as well. Now after finish this commission I'm posting, I don't have any left to work on for the foreseeable future.

>>382709

It’s nice, but I think you need to work on your subtlety. I hate whenever “otherworldly” comes up in shoggoth stories and the officer’s words alone didn’t strike me as particularly strange as the protagonist did. I would think the officer’s creepy smile while telling him to go inside would have been a better signal something was off.

I've posted this before in the hellhound thread but that one seems rather inactive at the moment

This story is about Anon and a rather unusual hellhound childhood friend.

I've felt that my previous stories were a bit long winded at times and I'm currently experimenting with this one.

Feedback is most welcome.

https://pastebin.com/5wN0cC46