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No.20
I would dump, but I can't because firetires won't let me.
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No.23
Break it up into <8MB sections? Or is there some filetype I need to enable?
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No.25
>>23
>you may upload 1 per post
it didn't update until just now.
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No.34
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No.65
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No.235
Everything takes longer and costs more.
Fortunately, I do it for free.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/23/Inseparable
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No.247
I guess we'll call this a fanfiction rivalry; let the better one prevail.
Chapter six is out, guys! A word of warning: this one is as dark as it gets. It's also rather long.
http://pastebin.com/UE2fNi4i
I can't find the words to describe how I feel right now. I know it's stupid to say this about a silly little fanfiction, especially when I've created whole original novels and short stories, but nothing I've ever written has made me feel this way. Nothing's ever moved me this much. I can't pin down why I get more attached to other people's characters than my own, but it's just the way it is. In a sense, this isn't even my own story; it's just the story of Undertale from another point of view — from Chara's point of view. I just wanted to thank each and every one of you for sticking with me this far, and for (in your invisible, unknowing way) influencing me to write it in the first place. I am overwhelmingly glad to have done so.
But nothing can make me feel stupider than pouring out my emotions like this when the story isn't even done yet! I could end it here, but I won't. I still have a happy ending to put together. I still have to save both Chara and Asriel. I still have to right all these wrongs. I don't know when Chapter 7 will come, but it will so long as I'm still alive. See you again, soon!
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No.251
>>247
Think you may want created separated thread for fanfic only.
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No.274
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No.284
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No.334
>>284
Yeah, I know
Just in case HW fixes that goddamn bug
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No.450
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No.540
>>450
Chapter 25. Merry Christmas! Only three months late!
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No.542
>See a lot of OC from the threads end up on social media accounts/other websites
>Demotivated to see my own work plastered everywhere much less I can handle seeing it myself
At least I know I won't end up seeing this everywhere.
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No.548
>>540
>alongside pictures of a smiling man with cold hands and an excellent sense of smell
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No.557
>>542
>waaah OC thieves
Grow a pair. If you're going to be a content creator, then people will steal your shit. The sooner you accept that, the better.
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No.558
>>557
It's less of a waah people taking my thing, as much as it is a holy shit why do I have to see this 20 times a day thing.
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No.559
>>558
Sorry, it's inevitable. Most creators are mature enough to not care their stuff becoming fanny maymayz. Trying to make your stuff not popular to save it from the normies would be counterproductive.
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No.565
>>558
I made this video and it appears every day mocking me.
Every fucking time I go to youtube's homepage it's there.
I fucking made the video and it's shoving it down my throat.
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No.566
>>557
>>542
Though seriously anon if you don't want your OC to be stolen claim it.
I only claimed my OC because the people that were posting it were saying it was from 8chan, and the last thing I wanted was the cancerous part of undertale to infest our threads.
I was a fool for thinking the cancer wasn't already here but too late for that.
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No.569
>>565
shoulda monetized it yourself, oy vey
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No.576
>>569
I did at around 1.5 million views.
I have so many sheckels.
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No.591
>>576
>monetizing poorly edited versions of other people's videos
Alphys level trash.
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No.592
>>591
Anon you're misunderstanding what I said.
I made the video and the videos in the video.
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No.593
>>592
I think he mean you took part of a JonTron video and put Sans face over it.
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No.594
>>593
Well he's not wrong, then.
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No.595
>>592
Well that's also Balloonshop right there on the thumbnail mate
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No.597
>>595
I've done scummier for a sheckel.
Speaking of the video, I added a "vote for trump" and "hitler did nothing wrong" annotation at random points about 2 weeks ago.
Not trying to change the subject, just thought it'd be funny.
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No.601
>>597
It's almost like none of your viewers are over 18.
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No.604
>>597
mfw everyone in that pic
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No.621
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No.622
Chapter 26 now.
"This video game contains no true violence, no profanity, and none of what are childishly called 'adult themes'. I believe that it'll bring all of us together, and all of us will enjoy the experience, feel an increased sense of love for each other, and heal the last of our hurt feelings."
"Really?" Charles asked skeptically. "What game's that?"
She held up the box with a smile. "Mario Kart!"
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No.623
>>622
Amazing. You've somehow managed to take a game that was called a meme-game but really wasn't, and write a fanfiction about it that is literally nothing but memes, but isn't called a meme-story.
You're either a wizard or everyone in the audience is about three standard deviations stupider than I thought.
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No.624
>>623
A little of column A, a little of column B.
Really, the most cogent and complete feedback I've gotten so far is from some douchehammer who believes in TV Tropes like Baptists believe in God.
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No.665
>>664
>serious
No, it's just shitposting.
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No.744
Chapter 7 is done kinda.
http://pastebin.com/Y8RqkvKx
It's a lot shorter than I wanted, a lot more "descriptive" than I wanted, but I have to get something out, or I fear I'll never get anything more done of it. I plan to add to this chapter with more content, so I'll probably re-release the full version in a few days or so. I don't have time or Determination to continue writing tonight. Call it a "teaser" for the full chapter, I guess.
But I'm not dead, so there's that!
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No.745
>>744
great chapter as always, anon.
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No.750
Chapter 27's up. I'd actually written quite a bit more but I'm trying to avoid the typical fanfic problem of longer and longer chapters as time goes on, so I broke it up. This one's just fun and cozy; serious shit goes down in the next one.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/27/Inseparable
Expect another update sooner than usual.
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No.753
>>744
So how old would Alphys be? Are you going with the whole "monsters live longer than humans" thing?
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No.754
>>753
>"monsters live longer than humans"
Generally yes, but it's flexible.
Anyway, in my story, she is about as old as Undyne but not nearly as old as Papyrus and Sans (who are only slightly younger than Asriel and Chara... depending how you look at it) and certainly nowhere close to Asgore and Toriel. Chara's an unreliable narrator and the actual game doesn't give many hints. I leave the reader free to guess how long his ghost floats around, as he can't tell time in that state.
In the game canon, Alphys has to be at least old enough to have been around when the first of the six humans fell in, because she was the one who collected their SOULs into the containers. I can't see Asgore having the scientific ability to do that, even using equipment Gaster left behind. But it could have been hundreds of years between the first human falling in and the sixth one, or it could have been only a few years. We don't know.
I once read a convincing fan-theory that the fallen humans were from vastly different time periods (like the cowboy kid was from the 1850's), so in fact centuries passed, but upon further reflection, it just doesn't add up. It seems more to me that they were all just neglected children who got their personal items from the Surface trash dump that flows into the Underground trash dump. A torn notebook, a burnt pan, a dirty tutu... just things other people threw out that only children with active imaginations could find value in.
There's a reason why I'm sure Gaster was gone before or soon after Chara came along, but for the life of me I can't remember exactly what it is. Of course, I could be wrong. Undertale is fraught with plot holes and assumptions, and it takes a lot of mortar to repair the gaps in the wall, so to speak. We're all left to mostly wild-guessing.
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No.777
Chapter 28's up. This one gets ugly fast, going into rapid-fire on a lot of serious topics.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/28/Inseparable
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No.804
>>777
I was on vacation last week, but expect a new chapter fairly soon.
Bleat.
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No.805
>>804
There's nobody else posting besides you... so have fun with that, I guess?
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No.806
>>805
Everyone who still cares is still here.
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No.811
This is still the no fun allowed board, right?
So I'm going to get b& if I say that I'm putting more and more effort into miniontale, and plan on making a game based off of it, right?
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No.813
>>811
As long as you're not being a faggot about it then you're fine.
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No.818
>>811
Go ahead; have fun. You're like Shinji jerking off, except instead of Asuka you're doing it over a dead horse that someone has cut "Undertale" into with a knife.
Just don't expect people to feel much toward you besides disgust and animosity.
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No.819
>>818
YES, THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I WANTED
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No.820
Chapter 29 finally up. This one's just lighthearted fun.
"You're a big goat."
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No.836
>>818
I think it's more along the lines of "Inseparable" in the horse.
:^)
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No.838
>>836
Nah, Inseperable is like an online "celebrity" making a youtube-poop of Evangelion and filling it with memes from 2007, and thinking himself clever for it.
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No.841
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No.842
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No.843
Oh, and before anyone accuses me of bias: Charafag's story is like an Evangelion prequel series, except there are no grandiose mecha battles, just episode after episode of Kaworu introspecting about his unrequited love for the still-prepubescent Shinji.
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No.844
And by more effort I mean more effort to make it the most cancerous thing on the internet. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11866793/11/
Chapter 11 is up.
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No.847
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No.855
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. Here's the intro to Miniontale the Game.
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No.905
Chapter 30 of Inseparable is up.
Time's going to start skipping forward from now on. Spring, summer, teenage years, college, later life, the future.
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No.920
>>905
Chapter 31.
Before anyone asks: Whatever happens, it's staying offscreen. You'll just have to use your imaginations.
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No.926
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No.936
>>920
What was the point of giving Frisk freaky herm genitals if you aren't going to describe how she uses them?
Shit. What is the point of ANY of the story? now that I'm asking. Just building up to a meaningless happy ending?
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No.937
>>936
>what's the point of a story
Gas yourself
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No.944
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No.952
>>65
Thanks for the line
>"W h a t y o u s e e i s n o t a l w a y s j u s t a d r e a m."
: ^)
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No.953
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No.962
Chapter 32 of Inseparable. The Dreemurr kids do their thing.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/32/Inseparable
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No.977
Back at it with more memes, this time, Alphys discovers /mtt/ and /underground/.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11866793/14/Miniontale
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No.979
>>905
>Time's going to start skipping forward from now on. Spring, summer, teenage years, college, later life, the future.
I lied.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/33/Inseparable
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No.1030
>>979
Noice
I managed to escape the tisms for a while, but it kept coming back. Seeing that you keep continuing your story, it filled me with determination.
Just wondering about one thing.
The initial version had these fragments at the beginning or end of every chapter planned, and a lot of the fragments were already written up, where Gaster explains all sorts of shit that relates to the respective chapter to the skeletons and Alphys.
I keep wondering if I should put that back in, or if that ruins the tension of finding out what exactly happened to him in the first place (as that's a subplot throughout)
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No.1031
>>1030
I think you should, they make enough sense.
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No.1085
Chapter 34. Time's starting to move forward some more.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/34/Inseparable
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No.1086
>>1085
Can't really say anything besides good chapter.
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No.1087
It was the start of something wonderful.
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No.1088
>>1087
>someone posts my OC without all the other stuff people attached to it
i'm touched, but you should've posted both the before and the after.
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No.1089
>>1088
I said the start of something, no? That picture went through so many fucking stages that I cbf to save all of them. It was a visual cacophony by the time it was over. It's not like I love you anways, jeez
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No.1090
>>1085
Finally done with Asgore's story. Here's the first chapter.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/1/The-Identity-Game
Initially had a more medieval-ish prequel called 'The Mountain King's Sacrifice' planned (and partially written up) where normal-sized prince Asgore faces the same enemy in three stages, but I figured just summarizing it in the first fragment does just as well. That's why it's so long.
And yes, every chapter has a little fragment attached now. Although the later chapters aren't as long as this one.
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No.1091
>>1090
>orcs
>brownskins
>tore down the wall and let them in
>everything went to shit
Top fucking kek! From my perspective you're a little heavy-handed on the allegory, but the kids on FFN might not even recognize it...
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No.1092
>>1091
This is the dismantled lite version. In the original version of a later fragment, Gaster went full 1488 on the elves.
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No.1093
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No.1117
Not made by me but some banners
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No.1134
>>1093
Specifically Asgore's story came from me getting fed up with the many sequel stories of 'monsters are migrating to surface and humans are being big meanies to them for no reason', so I made it an fcc fantasy version of 'monsters want to migrate to surface but everything is overtly convoluted through laws and layered authority of EU Federation and the kebabs' invasion being enabled isn't making it much better'.
Also there is nothing heavy-handed about the orcs. That's not the really heavy stuff. I don't think it gets really heavy-handed until Andrew shows up. Here's about the orcs
> irl folklore orcs brown because boars
> lotr orcs a lot brown
> Warcraft orcs brown
> orcs and orc ripoffs of every fringe fantasy setting brown
> Warhammer orcs green
> WH40k Orcs called Greenskins
> Gaster has a time machine
> he mentions the empire in connection with the brownskins
Also after a few days of this story.
> check traffic graph
> Brazil, Venezuela, Mexico, Peru
> so many Hispanic viewers
> mfw I think about how they might react when the Donald Dan makes his guest star appearance in Alphys' story and mentions the goblins.
I'm surprised at how Inseparable-Anon got away with it without even making alternate names, but in the worst case, you could probably say that the Donald is a historical character in the making.
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No.1136
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No.1161
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No.1162
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No.1164
>>1134 (hell)
>I'm surprised at how Inseparable-Anon got away with it without even making alternate names, but in the worst case, you could probably say that the Donald is a historical character in the making.
You don't even want to know how many fics on that site mention Obama.
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No.1165
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. >>1161
You forgot about your LP, Mike.
Also
>Anyone who thinks about fucking the goatmom should be skinned alive and rolled around in lemon juice polluted with broken glass and then adopted by an affectionate Silverback gorilla that wears sandpaper as clothes and constantly wants to show you a trick he can do that involves flipping a butterfly knife around.
Look like playing Pico's School at 7 years old had an effect on you, huh.
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No.1166
>>1165
Probably, my playthrough got fucked up but me fighting Asriel has 111,000 views which made me shit myself. Scrutinize whatever you see because the rabbit hole goes deeper.
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No.1167
>>1166
Your fight with Asriel gets on the recommended list a lot. Congratulations.
promote /underground/ in the annotations, I fucking dare you
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No.1168
>>1167
>wanting children to come here
I've had to step in a few times in the comments and tell people to stop shipping Toriel using my newly gained power.
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No.1170
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>>1168
>not wanting children to come here
It's like you don't even want to indoctrinate them in the ways of momposting and goatposting
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No.1171
>>1168
>>1170
> flirting with everyone
> going on dates
> homosexuals
> suicide is invoked at least 3-4 times
> the sheer edginess of killing
> generally how grim this game is
Do children play this? Goatmom would not approve.
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No.1172
>>1170
>>1171
They genuinely need to have the internet taken away from them from what I've observed. They are the new wave of autistic sonic fart-balloon-foot fetishists.
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No.1213
It's over
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11866793/15/Miniontale
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11866793/16/Miniontale
I've hit my goal of creating the most cancerous thing on the internet.
Yes, all is right with the world.
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No.1224
Was gonna wait with posting until sunday, but there are shit threads that need sliding.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/4/The-Identity-Game
I remembered the odd nigger that would show up on other boards from time to time and go 'stories are for low skill fags, draw shit' and wondered why I don't draw myself. Then I tried it and realized why. pic 1 is why.
So I only do memes. It's a meme game after all. pic 2 relates to chapter 4
Also it appears I have to further dismantle chapter 6 due to pic 3.
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No.1226
>>1224
Drawing is pretty tough and I didn't want to attempt it until I at least had the trackpad, even then it took hours to do something as simple as this picture which was the first one I drew.
I think stories can be good, I saved two because they actually were pretty comfy and I read them occasionally.
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No.1227
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. >>1165
>>1226
I didn't know you did a review of undertale.
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No.1228
>>1227
I did that immediately after beating the game so I was really high on fucking emotions and shit.
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No.1229
>>1228
Yeah I can see that, so you still think it 10/10 or "game of the century"?
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No.1230
>>1229
It's definitely backed with a lot of knowledge on manipulation of emotions and understanding of psychology if it made me become obsessed for a while and compulsively start drawing things. Its rise to popularity and the effect on many people's lives is pretty noteworthy and doesn't seem to happen that often. It has a good arrangement of events and characters to make you feel shit separately from how something like Dark Souls makes me feel shit. And evidently some elements of /pol/ firmly believe it is actually a MKULTRA psyops Jew project to destabilize the West so there's something there.
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No.1232
>>1230
Hey if you to discuss more things about undertale you can go here http://8ch.net/undertale/res/68.html#68
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No.1233
>>1230
It's an indie game with cartoon sympathetic characters. It isn't rocket surgery to find out why it generates pathos.
>>1232
>advertising your dead board
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No.1234
>>1233
Nah I don't own the board.
I'm just think /undertale/ could work for discussion.
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No.1235
>>1233
Still takes experience in order to structure something like that. One thing I think he did was using the Myers–Briggs Type Indicator and making a character to fit each one to make a diverse cast.
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No.1243
Chapter 36.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/36/Inseparable
"Reed Richards Is Useless" is on TV Tropes for a reason: despite being in a world loaded with superheroes and flat-out reality benders, the average person's life in the Marvel Universe isn't much different from our own.
Which is fucking stupid.
In case you haven't read the previous 35 chapters, that doesn't happen here.
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No.1246
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No.1247
>>1246
No you're not. 95%+ of these kids won't be able to even begin to penetrate the satire, and the mods give zero fucks. Trust me on this.
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No.1276
>>1246
Wait, banned from /underground/?
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No.1277
>>1276
No banned from fanficton.net
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No.1279
>>1276
> gasps
Oh my god Anon, you didn't even read it! How dare you! Jk I mostly post them for myself.
No I meant from FFN because basically Asgore's story makes the backdrop and because he's the king, his theme is politics, so the entire backdrop is just a slightly exaggerated parody of European politics. And not a particularly PC one.
I think I'm pretty safe at least until his bossfight comes around.
> Chief K'Tenga
> uses shortened Arabic words to refer to monsters and humans
> one of his lines is a Qur'an quote
> description of his expression is based on a Lovecraftian description of a nigger
But again, until then, I'm safe.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/7/The-Identity-Game
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/8/The-Identity-Game
Chapter 7 is Frisk being a whiny bitch. That may be the case, but truth be told, after the pacifist ending, I was like that for more than a week straight. The moment there weren't going to be any eyes for the rest of the day, there went the waterworks. And he's just a little boy.
Chapter 8 is Alphys going to /pol/ /uno/ for the first time. spoiler: They blame the Elves.
Also when the entire story was just a rough idea in my head, I was obsessed with the whisperers. I don't know what it is, but something about them just fascinated me. Pity that most of Czaikowski's other stuff is tumblr shit.
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No.1282
>>1279
I don't think you have anything to worry about.
Miniontale is still up after all, and it includes human slavery from an Islamic group.
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No.1283
Chapter 37! The Donald J. Trump School is assailed by a truly nasty foe.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/37/Inseparable
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No.1284
>>1279
so I saw chapter 9
>Yandereblender
kek
>He was already feeling kinda nosey [...] dropped a gold bar on the table
KEK
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No.1304
>>1284
Got a question if you're reading it. I get that people always say that predictability isn't good, but I don't like it when fiction drops shit on you out of nowhere, which is why I put foreshadowing/hints of stuff that happens later in every chapter.
The faction that Asgore meets in chapter 10, is that predictable or did I mess that bit up?
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/9/The-Identity-Game
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/10/The-Identity-Game
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No.1308
>>1304
I'm sorry, I really have a problem with seriously reading someone else's fic when I'm writing my own. And, honestly, yours is kinda hard to read (but probably nowhere near as hard as Inseparable)
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No.1309
>>1308
> hard to read
> criticism
finally. I need specifics. Hard to read in what way? Is it the format? Grammar? Choice of words in regards of characters? Depth of backdrop? Choice of backdrop?
Look, nothing improves without criticism.
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No.1310
>>1309
One of the sticking points for me is the use of * in dialogue, but of course there's a lot more to it than that. The character switches and the tonal shifts make it feel like a mashed-together collection of other fics. Maybe I'm trying to skim it too fast (like I said, I really can't read any other fic properly at the moment) but it feels... disjointed.
>I don't like it when fiction drops shit on you out of nowhere
Shit, dude, you pop out all-powerful Temmies on us and then say that?
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No.1311
>>1310
> cute, small, fourlegged creatures (doges and nyancats) are actually scientifically advanced aliens
> Temmie is a cute, small, fourlegged creature
> Temmie says that humans took their city
> Asgore is flying to an indestructible flying megacity at the same time
> Temmies already linked up Alphys' internet before she had a chance to help them and already figured out how to make youtube videos
It was foreshadowed for like 3 chapters. I asked because I want to know if the hints were traceable. Guess I need to be a little more direct.
> Tone shifts and pov switches
Yeah thanks, I was worried about that. I'm trying to sync up the tone shifts with the character switches, but I guess I need to pay more attention to that. But there will be less of that as it goes on anyway.
What I'm trying to go for is this.
> Asgore is taking the situation seriously
> Alphys is always confused and overwhelmed and trying to figure out how all this human stuff works and what is happening
> Undyne is like Alphys but a bit less bright and interested and in exchange a lot more self-confident.
> Sans has seen some serious
shit and is trying to see humour and make jokes wherever he can. So he doesn't take things seriously unless he really has to.
> Frisk enjoys company of other monsters but can't get over Asriel and is simply holding it all in whenever he's with other people. That's why he doesn't get that many chapters and his chapters are usually not very uplifting At least until the end of Papyrus' story
And about the * I'm sorry, but it's pretty much fixed that they're a permanent thing. There's chapters later where they get played with. One first moment of that was in chapter 3. Basically splintered moments of gaster's timeline are trying to literally meme him back into existence.
Honestly when first reading some fanfics I was more bothered by the lack of them than the other way round. And I think having one when dialogue starts is a good compromise. Just imagine staying true to the game and having one at the beginning of every single sentence of dialogue.
Also about Inseparable, especially in comfy scenes is it on purpose that you chain summarized series of events as 'They did A and B and C and D and E and F' rather than 'They did A, B, C, D, followed up with E and topped it off with F' or something to that effect?
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No.1312
>>1311
There's just so much weird stuff going on at once in The Identity Game that it isn't really clear what's going to be plot important and what's not. It's not just tone that changes, it's theme.
>Also about Inseparable, especially in comfy scenes is it on purpose that you chain summarized series of events as 'They did A and B and C and D and E and F' rather than 'They did A, B, C, D, followed up with E and topped it off with F' or something to that effect?
When you've got a fic with as much shit going on as mine (I can't even begin to narrate the changes that have gone on in the world; it's tough enough just keeping up with these few characters while keeping things somewhat interesting), I don't need to add more words that nobody will read. I assume that everyone reading this is skimming for content: imaginative scenes, ideas, the meat that makes up coherent fiction. Wheres, whens, whos, whats, and occasionally hows and whys. Adding words to please some mythical English teacher isn't on the menu.
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No.1314
Chapter 38! The Dreemurr kids get shanghaied into doing more annoying royal family stuff.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/38/Inseparable
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No.1338
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/11/The-Identity-Game
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/12/The-Identity-Game
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/13/The-Identity-Game
I've noticed I was bumping the thread a bit too often, so I only posted after 3 chapters. You were absolutely right. 6 chapters of unfiltered shitlordery in a 11chapter story and no-one got offended. Most of a reaction it got was someone muhconstitutioning over a story that doesn't even take place in the states.
>>1314
pic 1
Also here's my speculation in regards to Inseparable.
> Humans still weren't really used to being mages by time of parade/chapter 38, so not much happened
> flashback to early parts of Chara arc just before the Donald Trump bossfight
> Asmodeus explains that Underground is a pocket universe created by 7 mages.
> 7 mages were enough to create a whole pocket universe and banish all monsters into it
> there's over 7 billion of them now
> humans start going wacky making their own pocket universes
> unavoidable little adventure where some kid, teenager or group of the above literally gets lost in their own fantasy world and team Asriel have to venture into it to save them with a bossfight against an enemy monster that's drawn from it's creator's mind and will probably be very awkward in it's choice of what part of their mind it's drawn from.
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No.1352
I accidentally a shit thread, but I already slid it.
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No.1353
>>1338
Also correction I meant pic 2 to >>1314
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No.1354
>>1338
Told ya. They can't penetrate the satire, even though the whole story's hip-deep in it ("It was an accident!" - I laughed).
I think that it can be likened to cooking; Inseparable's got a dash of bluepill-flavored redpill spice in it, and The Identity Game is redpill cake drizzled in redpill sauce, sprinkled with redpills, and served with redpill juice just to be sure.
Also, Inseparable's not going the way you think it is; if it were possible for humans to actually do that, Asmodeus would have flipped his wig even harder than he did, and once he had explained things, there would have been a lot more wig-flipping going on. It takes some real godly mojo to break the universe like that, but I should probably explain this in the story.
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No.1356
>>1354
> The Identity Game is redpill cake drizzled in redpill sauce, sprinkled with redpills, and served with redpill juice just to be sure.
I know this is supposed to be criticism, but this is actually very accurate in both intention and result. I imagined it as Gaster shoving a 7 foot long red pill down the reader's throat with a hammer.
What I'm going for is basically this.
> monsters come to surface
> Asgore: Holy shit the surface is cucked beyond belief
> teen reader: Holy shit what the fuck is going on?
> Asgore and Undyne meet normalfags for the first time
> Asgore: Okay, I'm not even surprised any more.
> reader: Holy fuck is this real life?
Also, there is one last trial. If that rustles no jimmies, nothing ever will, because the politics get less and less from then on in. In fact for a while there's none at all. The guest appearance.
> Dan Victor
> 'controversial presidential candidate' (chapter 12)
> looks like Donald Trump
> uses Donald Trump's vocabulary
> names everything after himself
> has a jet
> knows his way in real estate
And this is why I'm telling this in advance.
> faintly remembers monsters but can't tell why or where from (never gets explained directly to reader but his determination allows him to subconsciously tap into Inseparable-Donald's memory) Only hints are him being determined, the fragment of chapter 2 ('they can even remember things that happened to their own counterparts in other universes.' - Gaster) and him remembering Asriel for no apparent reason.
Clear difference though is that he's really just a guest appearance. He's there for like 2 chapters and then he's gone for good again. You know, like how tv shows get celebrities to show up for like 1 episode.
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No.1365
You guys still like undertale?
Here's a story I made that takes place after the Pacifist ending, it's pretty light hearted and stuff. Really ties together some lose ends.
http://pastebin.com/jf9Hjair
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No.1366
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No.1534
Chapter 39! A loose end finally gets tied off.
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No.1544
>Inseparable's got a dash of bluepill-flavored redpill spice in it, and The Identity Game is redpill cake drizzled in redpill sauce, sprinkled with redpills, and served with redpill juice
It's going to be pretty goddamn hilarious when you guys actually get out of high school and have to learn to live in a world that doesn't function on le ebin meme vocabulary. I'd love to see you in your first job interview when you're telling the guy about cucks and redpills and rustled jimmies and he's just staring at you like you're motherfucking Darmok speaking in indecipherable metaphors; the main difference being that, when pressed for an explanation of what you're saying, you don't have anything because you don't actually know the meanings, and in many cases the meanings you know are factually wrong; you're more wind-up toys parroting things you've heard online than real people at this point.
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No.1557
>>1544
Ooh, I'm sorry! You went with "You kids will have to grow up sometime" rather than "You're way too old to be writing fanfiction!", the correct approach! Play again?
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No.1559
>>1544
>it just now got a dash of bluepill-flavored redpill
>implying it didn't have that shit from the start
I mean, it does have a fucking book burning scene.
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No.1569
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No.1570
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No.1571
so, if I were to make audiobooks with your fanfictions and shit, what would you guys want the soundtrack to be fam
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No.1573
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. >>1569
>Not embed
Come on dude
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No.1599
>>1571
>audiobooks
You means videos right? But anyway I guess the undertale soundtrack would fit.
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No.1652
>>1573
I was pretending to be retarded so I win
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No.1653
>>1544
Well someone's gotten off the wrong foot.
> the way you shitpost on the internet is the way you talk outside/at work/at uni
> what is containment
wat?
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No.1686
>sit here recording the stories
>get to the chara one
>it's longer than miniontale
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No.1687
>>1686
Hey are you going to upload them to youtube?
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No.1691
>>1687
Why not, got nowhere else to put them.
Seems to be the most continent place too.
Small update
I got all of miniontale and all of that chara one done
moving on to the Identity games and Inseperable
gonna have to take them 10 chapters at a time though, they be long as fuck bruh
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No.1692
>>1691
Ok tell me when you got them uploaded
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No.1698
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. >>1692
Here is a sample of what's to come.
Once I get the rest of them done, I'll upload them en mass.
and yes, I know it's shit, everything I touch turns to shit
might as well make the best of it at least though
maybe someone could at least enjoy the shitty music that accompanies it
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No.1700
Sliiiiiiiight update.
Just finished recording just the first 10 chapters of Inseparable.
It's over 3 hours.
I've decided to instead go ahead and move on to plan B and upload when I get the things finished.
Save Miniontale, saving that as a last hurrah, as the copyrighted music in it will probably be enough to get my channel taken down.
Have a Coon in the meantime.
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No.1703
Compared to all other fan fiction, that Chara thing is fucking amazing.
Comparing it to something like dune though, it's more like Harry Potter.
prove me wrong
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No.1704
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. >>1703
That's fucking retarded, though I do remember some anon arguing that a long time ago.
Inseparable, chapters 1-10
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No.1705
>>1704
Why did you removed your mini-review in the description of the Chara video?
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No.1706
>>1704
>Ay-ess-riel
Why are you doing this? Did God touch you when you were a child or something?
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No.1707
>>1705
Not so sure myself.
Kind of felt like it?
Half out of it most of the time.
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No.1708
>>1706
you underestimate my memeing capacity
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No.1709
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No.1710
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No.1714
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No.1715
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No.1716
>>1698
>>1704
Hey can you add "Undertale Fanfiction" in the title of your videos?
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No.1717
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No.1718
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No.1719
>>1718
For real tho it better if you put Undertale Fanfiction in there so more people will see it.
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No.1721
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No.1722
>chapters 11-20 is 5-6 fucking hours
HOLY SHIT
I knew >200k+ words, but holy fuck
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No.1724
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>>1721
please anon
do it for the goats
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No.1725
>>1724
I'm doing it, not for the goats, but for the memes
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No.1726
>>1725
Ok, at least change Undermeme to Undertale
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No.1727
>>1726
Don't know how long it'll stay this way, but I've changed it to Undertale Fanfiction.
Maybe more memes will come out of it.
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No.1728
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No.1729
Wow, I sure showed that guy.
:^)
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No.1730
Chapter 40 tonight or tomorrow.
I was going to get mad at some retard insisting on using a poorly coded voice synthesizer to read my fic, but if Toby doesn't give a shit what people do, why should I?
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No.1731
>>1730
Now you finally begin to understand, my child.
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No.1732
>>1730
Oh, by the way what software would you recommend.
And no, I can't just fucking voice act, that would require me to actually have skills and talent, not to mention a microphone that isn't broken.
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No.1739
>>1686
>Someone took my fanfiction and made a youtube video of Microsoft Anna reading it
I've never in my life been so simultaneously flattered and immensely creeped out.
It might even get me to actually finish the damn thing. But probably not.
>>1729
The asterisks are a common way to indicate scene separation within the same chapter. Every novelist does that or a variation thereof like double-spacing between paragraphs. The guy would know that if he picked up an actual book once in a while.
Why the fuck am I still coming here??
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No.1740
>>1732
I wouldn't know. Half the problem is the way you've set it up. There's no pauses between sentences and no cadence, and the mispronunciations are legion. You'd effectively have to edit the fic specifically for voice synthesis (using search and replace to spell words phoenetically, for example).
Let me tell you who's going to listen to many hours of an unlistenable monotone: fucking nobody. And you have to know that. Are you just trying to get senpai to notice you or what?
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No.1741
>>1740
Nah
I'm just doing it for the memes.
Wondering if there were a better way of making memes more easy.
>>1739
I think cheeped out is a good way of feeling about it. That was my intention. For all involved. :^)
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No.1742
>>1741
cheeped out?
what the fuck
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No.1743
even when I'm trying to not meme I meme
I have no mouth
and I must shitpost
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No.1744
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. Yep.
I was building it all up to make a fuck you to Pulp for being a faggot.
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No.1745
>>1744
So you're not doing the whole fic?
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No.1746
>>1745
Partly because my computer and software are shit, and partly because I'm salty at that one faggot.
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No.1747
>>1746
Couldn't you make it 2-3 chapters at a time?
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No.1748
>>1747
I guess.
Might get back to it if I get bored.
again
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No.1749
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. And here it is. I KNOW YOU'RE THERE PULP.
FUCK YOU
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No.1750
>>1746
>I'm salty at someone, so I'm going to run a large fic through a TTS machine
...are you on some kind of disability benefit?
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No.1751
>>1750
I thought that was obvious.
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No.1752
>>1751
Okay. Listen.
Stop.
This is just /cow/-tier. Beyond /cow/, actually. I've been waiting for you to go "I was just pretending to be retarded lel" but you're almost as seriously, genuinely retarded as the spammer, and I shudder to think what you'd be doing without the Internet.
Stop talking about memes. Get off the computer. I'd say "Get a job" but we both know there's no one on Satan's blackened earth that would hire you.
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No.1753
>>1752
but I was only pretending to be pretending to be pretending to be retarded.
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No.1754
For some reason I want to make a undertale doom wad, but I don't know how to.
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No.1755
Well, that didn't last long.
Guess this place can go back to sleep now.
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No.1756
>>1755
If it makes you feel any better I at least enjoyed your thing.It was short, sweet and to the point.
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No.1757
>>1746
Salty at who? And for what? I'm not getting anything. This is confusing.
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No.1758
>>1755
Just write your fic and post it to a large site.
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No.1760
>>1698
>>1704
>>1744
>>1749
>deleted the readings
damn it
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No.1764
>>1757
I think he wanted to confuse people.
>>1758
this
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No.1767
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No.1769
>>65
>>247
>>744
Anon, if you're still there.
Try to get this published. Use a pen name or something, It's worth print, more so than anything else in this thread.
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No.1772
>>1769
At least don't have it just on obscure pastebin files where nobody but us gets to read it.
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No.1781
>>1769
>>1772
I'd consider ff.net, but from where I'm standing it looks like I'm a year too late. The Undertale fandom is pretty much dead.
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No.1782
>>1781
So what?
You gonna let greatness slip through the cracks?
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No.1783
>>1781
That's a sad excuse and you know it. New and updated Undertale fics show up there daily. Inseparable gets multiple reviews with every new chapter.
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No.1787
>>1754
One idea I had for it was a NSFW fan fiction Frisk(Male) and Asriel(Adult) but I don't have the motivation.
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No.1788
>>1781
>pretty much dead
What planet are you from? Undertale shit from multiple mediums is being pumped out near daily, we aren't even close to finished yet.
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No.1803
>>1754
>>1787
I am going to try to recreate the ruins in a Doom Wad. Hopefully before Undertale's anniversary.
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No.1809
True inspiration, if such a thing could be said to exist, is the knowledge of how the story goes. Is this chapter rushed? Is it too neat? Does it make light of a long-term problem? Is it right? Is it good?
I don't know. I don't care. I know, absolutely, that that's how the story goes and it's the only thing I can possibly write.
Sometimes, as a writer, you just have to go along with inspiration.
Chapter 41.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/41/Inseparable
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No.1881
Chapter 42. The story's wrapping up; there is little left to tell. They've grown up, grown up to become great people, and there's just a few more things before Inseparable reaches its end.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/42/Inseparable
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No.1885
>>1881
>They've grown up, grown up to become goat people
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No.1901
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No.1905
>>1803
>No progress made
Sorry I got lazy, but I found some good Undertale X DOOM.
>tfw want to draw but cant due to lack of motivation ;_;
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No.1911
>>1905
>that first pic
Fuckin' genius
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No.1913
Had some stuff coming up that warranted a break from this, and then I didn't want to post it here until there were enough chapters.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/17/The-Identity-Game
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/18/The-Identity-Game
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/19/The-Identity-Game
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/20/The-Identity-Game
Overall it's definitely gotten closer to the original version again. Less political (without discarding it completely) and more slice of life-ey.
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No.1919
I'm doing multi-year timeskips, and yet there's no end in sight.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11601057/44/Inseparable
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No.1920
>>1881
>>1919
>The story's wrapping up; there is little left to tell.
>No end in sight
make up your mind, fugger
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No.1921
>>1920
I swear I was going to end it with some planned stuff, and then suddenly I realized who the kids were going to be
I seriously have no idea what the fuck I'm going to do next chapter
I am no longer in control of my own story
send help
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No.1922
>>1921
>the story assumed direct control and is writing itself
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No.1923
>>1919
>she will never be your grandmother
>she will never make your whole family pie
>you will never be Frisk's child
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No.1940
>>1921
I'm in a similar boat. Chara decided to stay dead. Frisk didn't get any help from him and got lolmurdered by Asgore. Undyne took the seven SOULs and is now out on the Surface genociding humanity with spears launched from space that impact like nuclear bombs.
This isn't what I wanted!
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No.1943
>>1940
so.. she's Buu now.
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No.1944
>>1943
Shit, you're right. We have to get Chara and Asriel to do the fusion dance to stop her! Or else wait for Sans to train Frisk in the use of the Bone Sword...
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No.1945
>>1944
If I recall, the Z Sword didn't even really help at all, did it
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No.1949
>>1945
Well, it broke in half and out came WD Gaster who unlocked Frisk's Determination or something I kinda forget...
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No.1950
>>1949
>gotta break a big bone to save the world
ech, the hospital bills.
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No.2037
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No.2075
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. Can't believe I forgot about this
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No.2105
Inseparable is finished.
I'm ending it on chapter 46. I might return to this universe, but for now it's over.
Fluffy goat forever.
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No.2110
>>2105
I may only be interested in Toriel-Frisk platonic lovey dovey stories but I respect that you've been typing something you like for the last year that I've observed.
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No.2111
>>2105
INSEPARABLE IS DEAD
LONG LIVE INSEPARABLE
HAIL THE IDENTITY GAME
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No.2162
>>2105
It's a pity. I'm looking forward what you do next - if you do something next. Maybe about some different source material or completely oc altogether?
>>2111
Speaking of TIG, haven't posted here in a while.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/30/The-Identity-Game the chad-metalhead-fish storyline gets wrapped up, as for it's ending What did you expect, he's basically Undyne with a dick minus combat training plus swimming training
I'm guessing no-one gets the sex jokes either. Krushe has a massive harpoon and Alphys gave Undyne a motorboat
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No.2163
>>2162
If I ever do anything non-Undertale-related in the future, I will never discuss it here. If I've ever done anything non-Undertale-related in the past, I will never discuss it here. I probably will revisit this setting in the somewhat near future, but not right now. I've been (slowly, intermittently, yes) writing Inseparable for the past year. I need a moderate break.
I did just put it on AO3 though.
http://archiveofourown.org/works/8444542/chapters/19345753
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No.2164
>>2163
what did he mean by this
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No.2165
>>2164
It means he won't post undertale stuff on the undertale board. Your not that bright are you?
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No.2166
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No.2167
>>2165
Did you mean:
> he won't post non-undertale stuff on the undertale board.
Which is okay with me, I knew when I first asked what he does next, I was just hoping he'd be willing to give some sort of hint where to find what he does next, if and when he does something non-UT next.
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No.2168
>>2167
>didn't notice that typo
lol
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No.2169
>>2163
It's funny. The people on /mtt/ think we're the same person because they can't conceive there is more than one person who writes autistic nonsense about Undertale. We don't agree on very much, but I certainly respect your decision to keep your fanfiction separate from the rest of your life. I, too, would never tell anyone here which novels they might find at Amazon with my name on it.
I do write totally-not-Undertale-related furry sci-fi, if anyone's interested in that crap.
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No.2172
>>2169
I'm very interested in that non undertale related stuff.
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No.2173
>>2172
*shrug* Okay.
Fair warning: I'm pretty much equally unlikely to finish this as the Chara fic. Or else finish it years from now. I do basically everything ludicrously slow, if at all.
http://pastebin.com/pH9QA6z6
http://pastebin.com/rvUPpFr3
http://pastebin.com/Q2xqv1VT
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No.2174
>>2173
I thought it was finished.
lel
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No.2175
>>2174
Well, I guess it COULD BE, but I would prefer it not. I still have to give everyone a happy ending.
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No.2176
>>2175
Happy endings are for chumps.
:^)
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No.2177
>>2175
I like it when I get a happy ending.
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No.2184
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. Cool review of the new Toriel statue thing imho.
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No.2189
>>2184
> watching video
I'm feeling tempted to mention the game in the comments. This is what he wants, isn't it?
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No.2190
>>2184
Wow this guy is really agreeable and understands who the best goat is and speaks for us all.
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No.2192
>>2190
>samefaging this obvious
>didn't not disprove that Asriel is still best goat
>"I have this, b-but I'm totally not a faggot guys."
Gee I wonder why Asrielfags are better than Torielfags.
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No.2193
>>2192
I don't have to not not not disprove a proven fact that he's inferior to the momgoat in every fathomable way. It's time to face reality.
Torielfags are on a higher IQ level, we are the smart genes and we do not have to lower ourselves to the dumb genes in the new world order.
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No.2194
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. >>2193
>on a higher IQ level
People with high IQ don't make 6 minutes sperging about a game to pandering to /pol/tards
Also
>he's inferior to the momgoat in every fathomable way
Nigger you cried when you first saw him
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No.2195
>>2194
>people with high IQ don't balance multiple fields
People with high IQ also realize that Toriel is superior.
Also it was the god damn music because it was also effecting me when I was standing by the statue remembering the tune to solve the piano puzzle.
Toriel WILL let you live with her and take care of you this isn't even a competition.
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No.2196
>>2195
>Balancing multiple fields
You were saying "I like this, b-but I'm not one of them guys." while acting nervous the entire time. If you actually had a high IQ you would play it straight and said "I like a game who cares.", but no instead you acting like a faggot.
>Toriel WILL let you live with her and take care of you.
Yeah and she thought it was a good idea to let you fend for yourself against monsters.
>this isn't even a competition
>a tragic story about a kid being trapped inside a flower for rest of his life is not a competition.
Also
>mfw your this autistic about a debate about goats
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No.2198
>>2196
The ramblings of a mere fool on a lower intellectual level, Toriel is the thinking man's goat.
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No.2200
>>2197
>he think I'm butthurt instead of laughing at his faggotery
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No.2201
>>2200
>he deleted the post
HAHAHAHAHAHA
>>2198
>Toriel is the thinking man's goat
>Forgot about Asriel being trapped inside a flower for rest of his life.
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No.2202
>>2201
I felt like it was a low effort post.
Tragic stories don't cook good food and do the laundry.
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No.2203
>>2202
>Tragic stories don't cook good food and do the laundry
You special aren't ya
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No.2204
>>2203
Sure he's tragic but Toriel offers shelter, good food, clean clothes, loving affection and if I had to be stuck with one I'd prefer it to be the female one so I'm pretty inclined to lean Toriel.
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No.2206
>>2204
>waa i wanna replace my mommy with one with benefits
>abloo bloo
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No.2208
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No.2209
Guys. GUYS! So help me, I will turn this Chara around and we will NOT go to Disneyland!
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No.2210
>>2209
One step ahead of you.
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No.2211
>>2206
A bit better than A FLOWER.
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No.2212
>>2206
>>2211
And yet a bit better than a flower that tried to murder you twice, and then turned into a goat and tried to murder you again. Also
>waa i wanna replace my mommy with one with benefits
> cleans
> prepares food
> does laundry
> generally cares for you
> benefits
There's a word for what you two are describing. It's called a wife.
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No.2213
>>2212
>like comfy women
>get called mentally ill by gay pedos
It truly is the CURRENT YEAR.
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No.2216
>>2210
...well, I guess it's original content, kinda, so I can't complain.
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No.2217
>>2212
>he didn't just say he wanted to marry the goat
>he took my 1 year old bait
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No.2218
I mean, it is really really good bait, but it is 1 whole year old now.
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No.2219
Still can't blame you though, Toriel would make a fine ass wife.
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No.2220
If Trump wins, I'm changing the Inseparable summary to "The fic that memed President Trump into existence".
If Hillary wins, before the nukes fall I'm changing it to "Well, you screwed up; none of the events in this fic can possibly happen now that Hillary's the President. Good job, idiots."
Chances of causing asshurt: 100%
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No.2225
>>2220
>Story is concluded but he still can't stop being an attention whore
Or you could just write a sequel. Never stop writing actually; your fans will continue to eat it up even if it runs for a thousand chapters.
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No.2226
>>2225
There's three possible continuations here.
One is Papyrus as a lawyer. I want to do it murder-mystery, Phoenix Wright style, where the reader's encouraged to puzzle together the facts before the next chapter comes out. This stuff is tough to write, and I only have an idea for one chapter.
The second is Frisk and Charles' kids. That stuff's less tough to write but might risk becoming more of the same.
The third is what comes after Inseparable - which can only be expressed properly in another game. I need a pixel artist and a good framework for that shit.
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No.2227
>>2226
I too hope the Temmies help the Dan Bring Back Glory.
Do the Papyrus one. If you only have ideas for one chapter, that's okay. Do the one chapter, write whatever comes to mind/happens. And do them just as isolated filler stories. Then whatever comes together as the story spins out of your control (again), gives you material for a thread that goes through the chapters/cases and leads back to some conclusive bigger case, where Monsters are at stake in some way..
> expressed properly in another game.
Screw spoilers, summarize it in one sentence. I have to know.
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No.2228
Also get this. The guy that does an AU called Inverted Fate (basically the improved version of Underswap) wants to have a chapter with Pheonix Wright references where Papyrus has to defend Frisk in a trial against Undyne. Sounds mighty familiar. I even asked him under a different name if he reads fanfiction, but he simply didn't respond.
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No.2229
>>2227
You're probably right; I'll just start with the one mini-story.
The game would be Frisk and Asriel in an Underground-style pocket universe created by aliens. There's even a game mechanic I want to use: Asriel's white heart, which blocks/destroys white attacks, is controlled with WASD; Frisk's red heart, which blocks/destroys red attacks, is controlled with the usual arrows. Yes, it's either a two-player game or for one nimble, cheeky motherfucker.
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No.2230
>>2217
Not him but I actually just wanted to be adopted and get smothered with platonic love by Toriel because she would actually in-character do it.
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No.2231
>>2229
Or.. it's just, you know, Ikaruga.
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No.2232
>>2231
I was waiting for someone to make the comparison but it's not quite the same.
Imagine one ship that's always black and another ship that's always white.
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No.2233
>>2220
THAT HAS TO BE THE BEST PLAN ON /underground/ RIGHT NOW
GOOD LUCK ANON
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No.2234
>>2226
>The third is what comes after Inseparable - which can only be expressed properly in another game. I need a pixel artist and a good framework for that shit.
That could be far enough removed from the source content that it could work as a game on it's own.
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No.2235
>>2233
I just carried it out, as Trump just officially won the election.
MAKE FRISK'S AMERICA GREAT AGAIN
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No.2236
>>2235
BBG
By the way are you the goatposter in the election threads?
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No.2237
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No.2238
>>2236
>>2237
might have been me
Can't even remember last night, went on a shitposting frenzey.
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No.2281
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No.2358
Spooky how silent it's gotten. You can practically hear the wind howl.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/33/The-Identity-Game
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12010259/34/The-Identity-Game
Got to finally work in some partially written (main plot) chapters from way back when the game was new. Story's finally progressing. I somehow get carried away with fillers a lot, but I enjoy writing the fillers. They make it more...Undertale-ey. Hard to describe. It feels like they're needed to make it more lighthearted.
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No.2400
So I've gotten back into writing again. 'Tis the season to be jolly, and all of that.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12281954/1/A-Very-Dreemurr-Christmas
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No.2409
>>2400
Chapter 2 is up! I honestly wanted to be finished this entire storyline in time for Christmas, but I'll have to settle for just another chapter instead. Writer's block and all that.
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No.2410
>>2400
>>2409
>A Christmas special one-shot
>It's multiple chapters long
Wow, and I thought *I* had trouble containing my diarrhea of prose.
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No.2412
>>2410
It's only 4 chapters long.
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No.2413
>>2412
One chapter longer than I thought!
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No.2436
Chapter 3 is up. I hope to have Christmas done before New Year's.
(This is kind of 'heavy reading'. Set aside a bit of time for this one.)
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No.2443
>>2436
You know me, I never get shit done when I say I will.
But it's done now.
There wasn't a lot of point to this story, but part of the point is that there is no point.
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No.2444
>>2443
Guess that means I should get back from my winter hiatus as well. Not going to lie. It is a bit of a writer's block because the main story gets progressively more grim with pizza references and all that. And there's not exactly a lot of fillers.
By the way, now that the Inseparable christmas special is over, does that mean the Papyrus spinoff is next?
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No.2445
>>2444
Maybe. That one's still going to be a bastard to write.
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No.2647
I'm sure we all browse /pol/ here, and I don't normally want to point out my own references, but who's in Frisk and Azzy's history class in Inseparable? (Chapter 30, 33 he's mentioned again)
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No.2675
>>2647
> Barry
> Wears suit and tie even if it's inappropriate.
> Goes to school with world famous kids.
> Same world famous kids who know Donald Trump personally.
Seems legit.
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No.2718
I should probably explain, at this late date, why I wrote Inseparable the way I did. Why it couldn't have happened any other way.
As a kid, I always wanted a friend like Asriel. Somebody who needed me as badly as I needed him, somebody who I couldn't leave and who could never leave me, who could take me away from my family and let me be his sibling because fuck my life.
I actually did write a tale of two friends a long time ago- again, I will never, ever link it here, so don't bother asking- but, in retrospect, it came out all wrong. So this was my second chance to do it right, with a fresh new perspective on a fresh new universe and from a vantage point that guarantees that it's going to get read. I actually make my living with the written word; bringing my abilities to a site full of middle schoolers is rather like bringing a bazooka to a food fight. Of course the kids are fucking impressed, I'm too old to be writing this.
I had to save him, and I had to do it right - just going "Asriel is saved" with bullshit I couldn't take seriously (I put 97% of Undertale fanfics into the 'bullshit I can't take seriously' category) wouldn't do it for me, because if I can't suspend disbelief long enough to write it then what's the point? I had to write something cohesive, something with its own laws and logic even if I slipped into satire for a few parts because there's no way in hell I was going to write them realistically. And I had to save him without sacrificing Frisk (Dreemurr Reborn can lick the underside of my taint) and I had to save Chara in a way that kept him mostly who he is.
And I had to let him actually grow into an adult, because to want to hold him back is evil and wrong, and I had to give him his own unmatchable abilities, and I wouldn't let him experience the pain of loss and hardship because he's already had quite enough of that. Save him with a mostly blank-slate character who, canonically, already has power over time? Sold. Most fics can't deal with that, or they fuck it up because they take Life is Strange-tier bullshit seriously. For me, it was the easiest thing to write. Oh, and the whole world gets to come along too. Fuck it. This is all blatant, full-on wish fulfillment, you knew that in chapter fucking one and if you didn't know that you're a moron, I'm just good enough at my job to make it readable.
The political commentary, the silly humor, singlehandedly memeing Donald Trump into the most powerful man in the real world (because I totally did that, you know. What, you don't believe me?) All that stuff was largely tangential, but interest and excitement are things I want to promote. There's also a belief structure, a certain way of thinking, that I have a duty to proselytize, and I'm pretty sure I accomplished that. (It's tough, though. A lot of shit goes over these kids' heads, as the Identity Game guy found out.)
But the core of the story- the very fundamental thing- is Charlie, Azzy, and Frisk all together, the two humans snuggling the goat every so often until the end of eternity. Frisk did make her imaginary friend real. Charlie did learn how to love. And Frisk, well, it's Frisk's world; everyone else just lives in it.
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No.2719
>>2718
Nothing of value was ever written by a happy person.
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No.2720
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. >>2718
So, I've been thinking about something. With the, rather, highbrow comedy, I'm pretty sure you are in fact George R.R. Martin fucking wasting time not writing your actual book.
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No.2721
>>2720
>Dysenterys Cholergaryen again
You know there's not nearly enough rape in Inseparable for me to be GRRM
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No.2722
>>2721
>Remove all the Trump references and replace them with rape
I might have read it in that case.
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No.2723
>>2722
>not wanting both Trump and rape
Nooblet
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No.2724
>>2723
Rape adds something to the story. All Trump does is make the piece worthless five years from now when everyone's forgotten about him, and devalues any potentially redeeming qualities like a rotten orange molding the rest of a bowl of fruit.
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No.2726
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No.2727
>>2726
At the rate he's going, he'll be lucky to not get impeached in two.
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No.2728
>>2727
This man speaks the truth. He's going to be impeached and replaced by my friend the great Hildog.
All hail the BBC, may she make it the greatest religion on earth. We will all sacrifice our wives to the altar of the bull!
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No.2729
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play. >>2724
>>2727
>the Trump hater is the Charafag
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No.2730
>>2729
If you'd been paying attention, I got banned for it on /mtt/ like eight months ago. :D
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No.2886
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No.2887
>>2886
the fuck am I looking at
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No.2888
>>2887
your picture makes me ask the same question
also checkem
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No.2927
The Papyrus fic has begun!
I'm sure you guys can figure this one out. The kids on FFN? Maybe, maybe not.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12409213/1/The-Law-Offices-of-Papyrus-Papyrus-and-Papyrus
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No.2928
>>2927
I can't believe I fucked up on a detail. If NyehHehHeh is from here, it was my fault and I've fixed the problem
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No.2934
>>2927
Chapter 2's up! These chapters are all going to be pretty short. The question-asking chapters need to be short to make it easier for the kids to analyize, and the answer chapters are short just because of what they are.
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No.2949
>>2934
While 8chan was getting hacked, I was finishing Chapter 3.
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No.2966
Chapter 4! Of course it was him.
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No.2986
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No.2987
>>2986
here it is without the shitty paint smear things that I regret putting on it
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No.2988
>>2987
Edgy. As in, literally with a lot of edges; the use of strong black lines is probably the most noticeable thing (aside from the yellow heart).
The shape of his head is 100% actual gote and 0% human, and his neck makes him look, well, fat.
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No.2989
>>2988
Yeah, some of that shit was bothering me. Especially the neck and lack of ears.
Now he just looks like a giraffe.
Probably should just start over at this point.
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No.2995
Try this one. This is a toughie, sort of; but everything you need to know to solve it is contained within it.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12409213/5/The-Law-Offices-of-Papyrus-Papyrus-and-Papyrus
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No.3003
>>2995
In a magical world, sometimes "a shapeshifter did it" is the right answer.
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No.3005
Nice to see this place still exists. TIGfag here. No, it's not dead. I wrote ahead quite a bit within a week, and am writing ahead even further now. This shit keeps dragging me back. I need closure. No matter how fucking long this autism gets.
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No.3103
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12544000/1/Baby-Blue
I get bored at night when I can't sleep and figured I could use a little practice with story writing. So I decided to write you guys a little story, what little of us are left, maybe 5 tops.
Consider it a love letter, straight from my heart to yours.
It's also first draft, so hopefully it's not too shit.
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No.3104
>>3103
*start writing
polite sage for being a dork
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No.3105
>>3103
I just read something, but I don't know what the fuck it was. I don't get any of the strange words or letter combinations. Seriously that story is a nightmare.
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No.3106
>>3105
I don't know whether or not to take that as a complement as that's what I was hoping to do, or a criticism of being absolute ass.
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No.3709
>>3703
This was an attempt
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No.3711
>>3709
check out
>>>/loomis/
they have loads of helpful info
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No.3712
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No.3725
>>3709
Tried again and it was a little better. At least I fixed his neck.
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No.3732
>>3725
I would recommend you read the book "Fun with a Pencil" by Andrew Loomis. There's a download for it on /loomis/ in the resource page linked on the first sticky. Just go to the mega link and it's under books - loomis.
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No.3733
>>3732
Okay, downloaded that and reading it right now. Will get back to you later.
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No.3734
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No.3735
>I posted the version with the weird noise going on
here's a marginally better one
It's still a piece of shit.
One that I made before the last goat I did.
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No.3736
>>3734
>>3735
That looks okay-ish
>the version with the weird noise going on
What? I don't hear anything.
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No.3737
>>3725
Do some basic shapes before you draw something.
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No.3738
>>3737
That was a bit rude, I suggest using basic shapes before drawing something
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No.3739
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No.3792
Do reaction images count as OC?
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No.3795
>>3725
>>3709
Had some help with a friend on this one
It Azzy in sans' hoodie (minus the hood)
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No.3806
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No.3807
>>3806
Technically, Flowey would anatomically have genitals where his face is.
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No.3808
>>3807
I just think he looks cute with a dick coming out of his stem. Also flower cummies
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No.3809
>>3806
>>3808
I'd say flower for sexual, but flowers are sex organs.
Too close to goat, and goat is not for sexual.
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No.3810
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No.3811
>>3810
even edge goat
edge goat is for holding hands
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No.3823
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No.3824
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No.3830
>>3824
Are you also the memegame anon?
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No.3832
>>3830
Nah, I don't really who that is, sorry
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No.3833
>>3824
How long have you been here? (Like were you in the threads on /v/ late 2015, or did you come here recently?)
Also I kinda want to know if you have a furaffinity or something like that.
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No.3834
>>3833
Fairly new here, spent about a year on 4c /vg/, though i would see what other undertale content was out there. and nah I don't have an account anywhere yet, i'll probably make a flowey tumblr one day
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No.3835
>>3834
>tumblr
don't
you may think it's a good idea, but that's a bottomless pit you'll never come back from
That website is a dumpster fire down to the damn UI.
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No.3840
>>3834
Well, welcome aboard then. Hope you enjoy it here.
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No.3841
I had an idea, if I were to learn GoDot, I could make a paper mario game in disguise as an undertale fangame, meanwhile, seamlessly fixing every problem I had with undertale and including other mechanics from games I enjoy. Effectively creating the game I've been waiting for, since Toby doesn't give a shit about fangames.
What do you fags think?
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No.3842
>>3841
I say go for it, and how would you disguise it exactly?
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No.3843
>>3842
Use the ideas behind making shit easier to work with with the paper aesthetic, but cover it up with undertale textures and sprites. sounds better in my mind than put on table
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No.3844
>>3843
Well good luck with that. By the way what would be the title? PaperTale?
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No.3845
>>3844
I was thinking Undertale revised just to make sure I don't get fucked by Nintendo with my free damn fangame.
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No.3846
>>3845
Smart move. Tho I would at least think of a more original name than "Undertale revised".
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No.3847
>>3846
I'll think of something sometime.
Gotta lrn2 GoDot engine first.
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No.3848
>>3847
So we're waiting for Godot?
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No.3851
The Goat with the Seven Souls
I wanted to draw Asriel as Kenshiro but, my drawing skills are well... >>3795 ,so I did this.
Original: https://ud7s.deviantart.com/art/Kenshiro-tenha-no-kamae-411712583
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No.3918
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No.3923
>>3918
you're clearly improving
but you still have a long way to go
good luck
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No.3925
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No.3944
Inseparable-anon here.
I'm thinking of writing some tasteful, light-hearted, comfy smut in the Inseparable universe. I'm just not sure if I should.
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No.3945
>>3944
I guess Frisk & Asriel smut would make sense, also welcome back.
I kinda want to draw fanart of Inseparable but, I don't know if my art is good enough.
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No.3946
>>3945
>welcome back
I never left.
I don't care if you suck, draw it anyway
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No.3947
>>3946
I'd draw something, and you at least have some idea of how to write shit just descriptive enough to draw I guess. Hit me with a request.
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No.3948
>>3946
>I don't care if you suck, draw it anyway
Well it also because I lack ideas, I could draw Frisk & Azzy holding hands with that bracelet thing they had on.
I actually forgot a lot of the story and I think I stop reading after chapter 10 so I'm not very far in.
>>3947
Hopefully we don't draw the same thing. but gook luck to you fellow drawfag.
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No.3949
>>3948
Go for it, then. I don't know your real limitations. If you're going for the early story then remember, Azzy doesn't have his horns yet (nor any facial stripes; he never gets those in this story).
>>3947
I don't know your limitations either. A lot of the scenes are very rich in characters and details that are difficult to draw. Try Frisk on a hang-glider with Asriel on her back (both of them have green-growing bracelets on) as Asriel uses his magic to help pilot it. How you choose to represent this magic (it looks like *nothing* in the story, but that's no good for artwork) is wholly up to you.
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No.3950
>>3949
Also at these points in the story, Frisk and Azzy are still roughly the same size. If you ever decide to go for the later story, remember that Frisk tops out at about a 5'6" woman, Charles is heavily muscled and a bit over seven feet, and Dr. Asriel Dreemurr grows to be a full ten and a half feet tall (where he goes, everything's generally sized for him- or at least he isn't stooping most of the time)
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No.3972
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No.3973
>>3972
>bracelets on only one wrist each rather than both
>they look like they're handcuffed together
You know what, this works anyway. Bleat.
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No.3974
>>3973
>both wrists
Oh sorry, I didn't know what the bracelets looks like.
>they look like they're handcuffed together
Well to be fair, it kinda fitting for a fanfic called "Inseparable".
>You know what, this works anyway. Bleat.
Thank you.
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No.3992
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No.3997
>>3996
Oh there's lots and lots else wrong with that image, including "They don't live in a freaking desert!", "Hang gliders are not shaped like that!", "I meant actually on her back, it's established early on that his weight is about a tenth of hers", "All things considered, Flowey symbolism is REALLY not a good choice", "He's gonna poke somebody's eye out with that elbow", and the big one, "Where the fuck are her arms? Is this some sort of airborne BDSM?"
I'm saving this image as "Evil goat kidnaps girl with his glowing tentacles and demonic flying machine.png".
Normally I wouldn't be so harsh to someone who's giving me free art, but you forgot Asriel's ears, even for a moment. That's a paddlin'
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No.3998
>>3997
Thank you for the constructive criticism, I appreciate it.
I should explain myself.
The "elbow" you're referring to was supposed to be his shirt. Her arms not hanging out was supposed to be because I thought I could cleverly show that the bag things I kept seeing in my reference images of hang gliders could be zipped up or something, like they had a custom model made that could be used for extended flight where one of them could go to sleep in flight. The Flowey vines were supposed to be showing how he's bending the wing down and forward radially on the x and z axis, giving it the funky shape, but that just made it look more rapey from that. I didn't know where they would be going so I just tried to paint a nice night time desert background but that just looks like pure fucking shit and doesn't fit your story. All in all, the world only remembers the results, and by golly I sure made some prime fucking eye cancer. To be fair with Asriel's Ears, I have forgotten them before with >>2987 and >>2989, only supporting the thought I should just give up entirely from my damn lack of even doing a single thing right.
All in all, I would like to make an apology for this major blunder, and posting it for all to see. I've taken the liberty of removing the pictures in order to prevent others from suffering as those that saw them did.
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No.3999
Is there a single fucking thing I can get right, find out next time on Shitpost Z.
I even forgot to mention I tried to paint the desert first and came up with my ideas from that.
Polite sage for being utterly useless.
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No.4000
>>3998
>deleting images
Oh, you're not getting away from this that easily.
You need a better internal critic. Yours is telling you "I'm shit" when it should really be telling you how things look from a new observer's standpoint, rather than what you intended to portray. That's the crux. You have real talent - you just don't have anything managing it properly.
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No.4001
>>4000
Actually, wait. I haven't even mentioned the real problem with this image yet.
It's fucking depressing.
It's partially the setting, somewhat the color choices, and not completely the time of day. It's the reference to Flowey, the wrapping up in a black cocoon, the fact that Frisk doesn't have even the outline of a fucking face. Even assuming, okay, we're not close enough to see her face, look at her head! Look at what it's doing!
Does any of this look like the body language of people who are enjoying themselves?!
I am dead fucking certain you actually suffer from clinical depression or something very like it. In this story, if Frisk gets depressed, Asriel turns back into Flowey. In real life... well, I'm sure you have some idea.
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No.4002
>>4001
And, again - you have real talent. You can actually create evocative images. It's just that what you're evoking is hopeless and gloomy.
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No.4026
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No.4029
>>4026
>hand size
>foot size
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No.4030
>>4029
Yeah I know I fucked that up. I couldn't make the feet look good so, I settle on that. As for the hands, didn't think the left hand being slightly longer was that noticeable.
I might stop posting art here and, just focus on practicing for now. Anyways have edgegoat sunbathing without a shirt. (The black stuff on his body is markings.)
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No.4031
>>4030
Oh I meant in comparison to each other; if you hadn't made the hands so much bigger than the feet, it wouldn't have been so noticeable.
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No.4032
>>4031
Ah, that makes sense. But yeah could have made the feet better. Hopefully I keep trying to draw and get better.
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No.4042
>>4030
>when you are browsing 4chan /trash/ and one of you favorite artists is in the same thread as you
>He said to keep drawing and Asriel is fun to draw
I feel happy that I actually was able to talk to him.
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No.4043
>>4042
He's been on an asriel binge for..quite a while from occasional glances at his gallery. Shame I refuse to visit that place else i'd share some love.
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No.4051
>>3841
>I could make a paper mario game in disguise as an undertale fangame
Someone kinda tried that, but really all it was them drawing Undertale characters in Paper Mario art style.
Link to more of their work: https://paper-tale.tumblr.com/
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No.4052
>>4051
>he focused so hard on the assets he got burned out
wew
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No.4053
>>4052
So do you still plan on learning GoDot?
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No.4054
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No.4055
>>4051
>That Gaster and Chara hidden on the cover
Nice.
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No.4072
Guess I'm a porn artist now.
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No.4073
>>4072
You just need to fix the color.
This was made in GIMP by desaturating it and playing with the brightness/contrast sliders.
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No.4074
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No.4126
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No.4127
>>4126
Do you make that Inseparable-anon?
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No.4128
>>4127
No. No, I did not.
And after glimpsing the blog of the "person" who did (it's concentrated usual tumblr shit), I wish I had not noticed it at all.
this is not the first, nor the worst, time a vigorous fan of my writing turned out to be a massive sjw
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No.4131
>>4126
>TFW Tumblr will never make a headcanon blog about your fanfiction
I don't know whether to be happy or sad about this.
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No.4132
>>4131
I'm glad nobody will with mine.
I deeply regret starting Baby Blue, I can't even finish it now because I lost the email and password for the account.
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No.4133
>>4132
I deeply regret starting mine, too. It made me give too much of a shit, but nobody else does. Nobody gives a shit about Chara outside of tumblr, and in there everyone will pitch a fucking fit it either they or Frisk have a stated gender/sex; but the goddamn story simply won't work unless they're boys because it's a story about homosexuality, not transsexuality. I'd just get shit slung at me from both sides, for different reasons.
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No.4134
>>4133
>caring about the opinions of tumblrites other than for mockery, derision, and punchlines
I cannot possibly smug at you any harder
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No.4135
>>4133
>Nobody gives a shit about Chara outside of tumblr
Are you the guy who wrote the Chara fanfic?
>>4134
I admit I did post my art on tumblr to get some praise and recognition. Yeah I need to get better at art first.
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No.4136
>>4134
You misunderstand. Unsurprising from a retard kid who thinks smugposting is the acme of intelligence.
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No.4137
>>4136
Misunderstand what? You are concerned about the opinions of Tumblr users while creating your work. You clearly want to have their approval and state that they are the only ones who care about the character you have chosen to write about. (This is false, as even a cursory glance at AO3 and FFN will demonstrate.)
That does not deserve anything but smugging.
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No.4138
>>4137
I think you misunderstand that he has deeply ingrained autism the likes of no other, going as far as to admit brain damage.
also
>avatar-fagging as fish
>>>/mtt/
:^)
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No.4139
>>4137
Are you the fish-oil anon?
Oh, Jesus Fucking Christ you are.
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No.4140
>>4139
I'm not.
but you know what time it is
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No.4141
>>4140
>I'm not the fish-oil guy
>posts fish-oil
You totally are.
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No.4144
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No.4153
This could have been better. My friend said "The markings made him look like a tiger."
>>4141
Pretty sure he was joking dude.
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No.4154
>>4153
That's not the biggest problem.
The biggest problem is that he looks like he's wearing a shirt and stockings with markings on them, leaving his crotch uncovered.
You intended shorts, but it looks like the opposite.
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No.4156
>>4154
Thank you for the criticism
>You intended shorts, but it looks like the opposite.
Actually that supposed to be underwear.
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No.4157
While it's fresh on my mind, might as well try and say how my story baby blue was supposed to play out for all those 0 people that gave a shit.
After the end of the first chapter, the detective was jump back to his office on the day he was sent out to the town to investigate the case, his boss, wearing yellow loafers and a neon pink paisley pattern suit and blue pen striped pants was supposed to break the news and give the hint of smelling of oil. After which he mentions that he'll take a coworker home first remembering there was supposed to be a buss accident where she was killed, as to test the idea that he just reset without drawing too much attention to the matter. This woman was to have a soul piercing crimson eye color, and hate the GPS because it was too loud.
After confirming that the event did happen, he still goes to the town in order to attempt to gain advantage on his killer. On the way he would have to stop for gas where a man with yellow shoes who looked nothing like the boss would say something in code, then fill his tank and mention to visit the gift shop for further questions. Obliging, the detective would go in, be introduced to a long time friend who gives him a porcelain cat figurine on the house, then mention something about his past he doesn't remember. After that, I have no clue where it was supposed to go until the finale, but in the meantime, he was supposed to learn he was an experiment between a yithian and an elder thing that fused and transferred into a shoggoth, which was the man in the gift shop. The boss was supposed to be the king in yellow and the lady was supposed to be his ex Nyarlathotep in past lives before he swapped bodies to keep alive. Because of the experiment, the remembering things when you transfer disappears except for a few key details. Eventually the killer was to realize that the timeline had been altered, and thus goes full scorched earth, killing the detective, however by this point, he had begun saving and reloading and loads a save just before. However, once he does this, the killer remembers the load and does the same thing until 1 more load and he's caught. The killer was to be revealed as a part of a church built on the side of a mountain, worshiping the things in the holy book he left in the end of chapter 1. In order to investigate further, he would have drove to the church, where a high priest covered in about 5 layers of clothes would take him in, mentioning something about being expected. They give him food and water, a bed and a bath so he stays for the night, only to be woken up by chanting, and a ritual beginning. This is where the story shifts focus from the man to a child. This child runs to the detective, somehow escaping the cage he was in, and asks him for help, as he saw an unusual man walk through the hall he was locked in behind a wooden plank with a hole in it. Attempting to leave, the high priest takes the rusty dagger from the book and stabs the directive, being unable to load again, he tells the child to run and look for a man by the name of whatever his name was going to be before taking the dagger and killing the priest. This child runs past the chamber where the ritual was to take place, glancing in at the people, now removing their clothes, more resembling the monsters from undertale than the game, all of them calling for the child as a mysterious figures face emerges from the void being created above the altar, causing all the souls of the people to split and form new monsters, at which point, they all disappear, and the child runs to the top of the mountain he was on, trips down and has a fall in a cave. He lands on some flowers, and a yellow one tells him "welcome to the underground."
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No.4158
>>4157
One day, you shall look upon this post and feel both deep shame in having written it and deep relief that you did not identify yourself in writing it.
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No.4165
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No.4166
Just to be transparent, I never read over anything I write because I would not only just not write it, but every word that comes out of my mouth makes me want to puke, I feel nauseous thinking about it.
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No.4167
>>4166
So how do you do it, then, spirit writing? When you make mistakes at least you have to be reading it to correct them. No need to feel such shame though.
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No.4168
>>4167
>when you make mistakes
I leave em be, don't look back, never look back, just keep going maybe I won't hate it one day.
Closure is enough for me.
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No.4169
Asriel as Jotaro Kujo
>>4168
>just keep going maybe I won't hate it one day
Well, why upload it then if you know you are going to hate it.
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No.4174
>>4169
because I wanted closure, and to cling on the vein hope that I would someday not despise it
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No.4175
>>4174
>because I wanted closure, and to cling on the vein hope that I would someday not despise it
Then figure out what you are doing wrong, learn from your mistakes, and improve from it.
If you don't look at your mistakes, then you will keep doing it over and over again. Up until >>3918 my drawings were stiff so, I tried making the limbs more 'bendy', so they look more natural. Sure they are still stiff, but they aren't as bad as my old drawings. Also sometimes you need other people to help point out what wrong, and that okay because there nothing with some criticism.
Anon, it's okay to mess up ever now and then, but if you don't look back at your mistakes then, whatever closure you are looking for is going to never happened.
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No.4226
This is one of those drawings where the idea just popped into my idea. Weird how some old memories just come back to ya.
Source on where I got the inspiration from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HkmgpL-ItiE (4:58)
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No.4240
I was trying to that image of the god emperor from Warhammer 40K with Asriel face on him, but I came across these images that could work as banner material.
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No.4241
>>4240
Make them 300x100 (8ch requirement) and I'll put them up.
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No.4242
>>4241
You got it, Body Odor. Also I will try to make more to give this board more flair to it.
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No.4243
>>4242
They need to be exactly 300×100.
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No.4244
>>4243
Are you kidding me? Ugh, alright I do it after I go to bed.
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No.4245
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No.4246
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No.4247
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No.4248
>>4247
>>4245
Tried to make it look better.
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No.4249
>>4248
okay look this is graphic art 101
DO NOT STRETCH FONTS
the blurry anti-aliasing literally makes my eyeballs hurt and the mismatched borders are shit too
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No.4250
while we're at it, stop using .jpgs, just in general
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No.4251
>>4249
I be honest, I don't how exactly to match the "300x100" thing without stretching. I will stop (at least for now).
>the mismatched borders are shit too
So just leave it a white border then?
>>4250
>while we're at it, stop using .jpgs, just in general
Okay, going with .pngs then.
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No.4255
>>4251
Best way: Re-create the border. Find the font and retype it. Only copy over the picture from the original image (S rank: find a better, non-jpg'd one yourself).
Second-best way: Re-create the border. Squish the fonts by some simple fraction (3/4, 1/2) in Paint or some other program that does not do anti-aliasing, and copy that over. Copy over the 8ch image and picture.
Also the borders ought to be standardized and even on all four sides.
c'mon man, do what you love and love what you do, I'm actually hoping you make something good
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No.4256
>>4255
I actually found this text box generator that can handle the font problem: https://demirramon.com/en/generators/undertale_text_box_generator
Also I couldn't fit the 8ch logo, but I will try again later. This picture is more of a test.
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No.4257
>>4256
And the Chara face might have some anti-aliasing to it, and the white border was to fit the "300x100" thing.
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No.4260
>>4256
I'm only doing this because I love Chara, and he deserves better. Also, I happen to already have the actual Undertale font on my computer from downloading a mod, so it's easy.
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No.4262
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No.4264
>>4260
If you can do one without the CRT-style blurred pixels, I'll put it up.
Zoomed so you can see what I'm talking about
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No.4265
>>4264
Yeah, I don't know why that's just the way the font works in Paint, even if that's not how it works in the game.
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No.4268
>>4264
>chromatic aberration
>ON A FONT
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No.4269
>>4265
Fixed spacing and added, and removed a couple of blurry old shit ones while I was at it.
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No.4270
>>4256
Another test, the 8ch logo could be better, but I'll still trying to figure it out.
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No.4271
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No.4272
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No.4276
>>4270
Sorry it took a few days to finish this, I got lazy.
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No.4278
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No.4338
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/Inseparable
Huh, I didn't know Inseparable had it own TV Tropes page.
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No.4352
>>4338
I really feel like TVTropes loses all credibility by allowing fanworks, especially really shitty ones.
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No.4355
>>4352
>tumblrtropes
>ever credible
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No.4356
>>4338
>>4355
TV Tropes is silly shit through and through, but it's nice when fans use it to spread your work.
>>4352
Your tears water my soil.
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No.4357
>>4355
Credibility simply means its factual. It's fine for it to list conventions occurring in media that have been extensively studied and largely agreed-upon. This is no different than having a wiki listing the actors in films, as it's largely not an opinion and is simple a repository of information. But allowing fanworks changes it to a platform for shilling, plain and simple.
>>4356
I'd be willing to bet a million bucks that you made the page. You're a self-promoting snake-oil salesman, nothing more. Did you ever think of running for President, yourself? It wouldn't be difficult for someone of your unique caliber. :^)
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No.4358
>>4357
This is like the Napstablook fight, only all the tears are green.
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No.4367
>>4358
Acceptable.
You do know you can't successfully insult someone better than you, right? I was just lowering my standards to your level because I didn't want to be rude. Sorry, I just made this more awkward. You can go ahead and pretend you beat me... Oooooooo~
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No.4400
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No.4407
>>4400
10/10
better than the original
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No.4625
Been a while since I posted any art in here.
Asriel as Kain Highwind from Final Fantasy 4.
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No.4716
Decided to draw Frisk Belmont ( >>4643 ).
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No.4902
I'm going for it. I've been inspired to make an Inseparable*/Deltarune** crossover, with some extra weird shit on the side. Be warned: There are not going to be any conventionally relatable "normal person" characters anywhere in this story.
*: As it would be if the Inseparable characters had access to alternate universes.
** Not necessarily the one Toby had in mind.
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No.4908
Posted this in the DELTARUNE thread but I didn't notice this one so w/e.
Got deleted from another site for "Cropped porn" (Mods being fags) despite the original image being 100% clean
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No.4910
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No.4913
>>4902
Have you considered wiping your ass on a blank sheet of paper, scanning it and uploading it, and seeing if your fanbase reads it?
Because I'm betting they would. Not that this is much different.
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No.4915
>>4913
I don't know how the fuck you haven't been banned yet. Guess it doesn't matter though since you have a VPN.
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No.4916
>>4915
Banned for what? This guy's raw jealousy (of me? For my fic??) is the wind beneath my wings.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13115483/2/The-Princess-the-Songstress-and-the-Plushie
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No.4917
>>4916
No, not for that, for shitting up every board on this website with his vpn.
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No.4918
>>4916
Jealous? Yeah, I guess. In a similar way that I'm jealous of someone in a coma being pumped full of happy drugs.
>>4917
How on Earth do you determine that a bunch of posts are by the same person, much less that they're using a VPN? You must be one of dem dere PSYCHIC kids. Is it still considered psychic if you have clairvoyance, but get it all wrong anyway? You'll have to let me know that one.
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No.4919
>>4918
Gee, I wonder how I can tell when you format every single one of your fucking posts the exact same way every time, then obviously samefag with a VPN.
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No.4922
>>4919
>you format every single one of your fucking posts the exact same way
Which way is that? Please describe it. We're all dying to hear this.
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No.4923
>>4922
Chronic reddit spacing, and most of the time unnecessarily leaving an extra space between posts.
Like spacing your sentences like this, while mostly acceptable when it's a paragraph, I've seen posts where you've spaced single sentences like this, which is wholly unnecessary.
Then you leave two spaces 90% of the time between replies, like that.
I get that we all subconsciously format posts different, but being so hard-fast is almost akin to namefagging. Kind of like the guy who won't stop pressing the space bar between sentences. Like this.
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No.4937
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No.4954
Something that you can do with a whimsical fic like this one, and it's a great feeling, is that you can just instantly realize something- like in a dream- and just roll with it, and it makes total sense.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13115483/4/The-Princess-the-Songstress-and-the-Plushie
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No.4957
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13115483/5/The-Princess-the-Songstress-and-the-Plushie
I wonder what would have happened if Susie and Lancer had decided to recruit their own army to overthrow the King?
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No.4964
>>4957
By the way, they have deltarune as a separate game/category on FFnet. You don't need to keep it up under 'undertale'.
And from what I'm getting numbers wise on my thing, I think AO3 is more active than FF.net.
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No.4974
>>4964
Maybe it's an audience thing, or maybe it's because I uploaded Inseparable all at once, but I have waaayyy more comments on FFN than AO3.
And few comments on my side stories. Just set this one to be an Undertale/Deltarune crossover; maybe that'll help.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13115483/6/The-Princess-the-Songstress-and-the-Plushie
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No.4979
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13115483/7/The-Princess-the-Songstress-and-the-Plushie
I'd like to think I know where this story is going, but as it is, I hadn't anticipated what I was going to write until I'd already written it.
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No.5009
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No.5010
>>5009
The real question is: who thought that you will ever stop?
nobody
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No.5011
>>65
>>247
>>744
I am reading the words. They are so removed from me. And their assembled message takes so long to inspire us. All we see of stories are their old meanings.
It’s December 29, 2015, and I am in love. His name is Asriel Dreemurr. He is a character from a game called Undertale. I am 24 years old. I was introduced to it by (among others) a thread on a sub-ground of an imageboard, /v/.
It is February, 2019. /v/ no longer allows Undertale threads, and it's very likely I am partially the cause.
That night, I play with Asriel for the first time. A month from now the story awaits me.
I sit at my chair with Microsoft Word open. My fingers touch the keys. [Typing sounds.] When I finish it, /v/ starts to read it. I am unsure.
It is November, 2015, when I’m introduced to Asriel. I see a lewd picture of him, the first time I have seen any content from the game. As he stares at me from across the screen with those sad, beautiful eyes, I am inspired to write of my love, of the boy who loved him: Chara.
I feel uncertainty for the last time. Some later threads are made. There is nothing of significance inside of them. /underground/ saves an archive of the link to the chapter. It’s the only part of my soul that anyone has.
The chapter turns into a prologue. A few days later, a partially-written chapter appears in another /v/ thread and exists for a moment before the thread vanishes.
They call me Charaposter, Autism, Brain Damage. They explain these names have been chosen for the lulz it inspires in other posters. They are perceiving me as something fanciful, something melodramatic.
In March, 2016 some posters on /underground/ ask me to continue the story, something that those on /v/ would not ask. A week later, another chapter drops. Some of the posters are still asking me to continue it.
Notim Portent, a professional shitposter, writes Inseperable. In it, he perverts the story of Undertale into a toy for his own personal amusement. I am not sure if I understand any of what it means.
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No.5012
>>5011
It is August, 2017. Posters tell me they still want to me to continue. They say that my story is good enough to be in print like a real author's work. I tell them I don’t think there are any real authors, and if there are, I’m nothing like Them. I tell them that the story was being continued and always was.
As I lie to them, it is September 8th 2016. Donald Trump has just been elected to the Presidency. It's like Inseperable has just been made legitimate and instantly becomes the most popular Undertale fanfiction, ever, for no more than its capacity to be memeworthy and the most epic shitpost. I have become unnecessary. I retreat to myself, and my story of boys.
Some people accuse me of being a pedophile, writing things like this. They burst into a moral rage, asking if it’s because I have Brain Damage. It’s true. My fragile body is aging more noticeably every day, while my indelible mind is standing still.
I prefer the stillness of my own thoughts. I am tired of Undertale. The fandom. I’m tired of being caught in the hatred of their memes. They claim their labors are to celebrate the game, yet their celebrations is populated with horrors. Perhaps stories are not made. Perhaps nothing is made. A written work without a writer.
It’s too late. Always has been, always will be, too late.
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No.5013
>>5011
>>5012
nice fuckin reddit spacing faggot
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No.5014
>>5011
>Microsoft Word
>write of my love, of the boy who loved him
I don't know which of these statements is more homosexual
>I am not sure if I understand any of what it means.
That's because your nicknames are accurate
>September 8 2016
Holy shit how did you fuck this up
>Donald Trump has just been elected to the Presidency. It's like Inseperable has just been made legitimate and instantly becomes the most popular Undertale fanfiction
Frisk Derangement Syndrome is real!
Seriously, if you're still this asshurt about a fic that ended two years ago, then you really ought to seek a professional, reputable neck yourself.
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No.5017
>>5014
>I don't know which of these statements is more homosexual
Both. They're both as faggy as possible.
The whole thing reads like a 4 year old wrote it. He gives shame to both the English language and fellow lovers of Asriel.
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No.5018
>>5014
>>5013
>>5017
>Nobody even got the reference
You all deserve each other.
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No.5019
>>5018
That movie was shit and a disservice to the comic, you're only making yourself look more like a fag. Look, your shit's all retarded, what do you think you're getting out of this? You hoping for someone to just say "let's rock" snap their fingers and start dancing because you did a le fooni reference? You're going nowhere fast, where have you been, you sure you know where you're going? I'll tell you what's wrong with you, you caught the worst disease you could, a real mind killer. You got the fear, but what do I know dude, I just I just drink blood dude. Ha ha ha, bitch.
What is it you feel that you need to prove? Do you want to be loved? Do you want someone to even care you exist? Because if that's the goal, nobody will ever love you for everything you are. You're doing a shit job at building up layers of deception, and you sure as hell aren't leaving things out to alter the perception. Shit, you can't even reference things without a hint of finesse.
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No.5045
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No.5046
>>5019
Why even respond? You're crying out for attention by comparison, and at the same time saying absolutely nothing of value. You're the guy at the party who butts into everyone's conversations and absolutely must have the last word.
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No.5047
>>>/underground/5046
Yeah, would have been a lot easier to just call you a nigger.
I could have done that or I could have shown you up after you pull some real gay shit.
Either way, I've given you plenty of (You)s, don't expect any more.
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No.5048
>>5047
Way to prove his point, numb nuts. Also way to somehow completely fuck up that link. What a hero you are
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No.5049
>>>/underground/5048
That point being no you?
Lurk moar newfag.
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No.5051
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No.5052
>>5049
>Still can't stop trying to get in the last word
>Still can't link properly
It's cute watching you fail at everything you touch.
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No.5053
>>>/underground/5052
>>Still can't stop trying to get in the last word
like what you've been doing consistently for the past few years?
>>Still can't link properly
lurk moar newfag
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No.5058
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No.5060
>>5053
god just shut up already retard. your still getting it wrong!
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No.5061
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No.5083
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13115483/11/The-Princess-the-Songstress-and-the-Plushie
The chapter was getting unusually long, so I broke it up and this will actually be finished shortly.
Next chapter, two preteen girls in bed together do a dual-slit experiment!
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No.5099
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No.5100
>>4716
>8 months since I drew that
Time files
>>5099
>why do I write this shit
I kinda had the same feeling when I written a nipple penetration story about Undyne.
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No.5101
>>5100
>nipple penetration
Know what, at least it isn't as bad as baby blue was.
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No.5102
>>5101
Don't beat yourself up anon. I just wrote that story because I got inspired by a picture someone made, and later sent it to him. He actually like it.
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No.5104
>>5100
Might as well dump the other stuff I did going digital.
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No.5305
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No.5319
So I collabed with a porn artist in drawpile...
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No.5320
sorry, but that shit was fucking disgusting
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No.5321
>>5320
To be fair, this wasn’t his best work. It was mostly just that he wanted to teach me how to shade better and other stuff.
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No.5380
>>5319
>>5321
Did something more wholesome...
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No.5488
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No.5490
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No.5491
Technically, this is a remake of a sketch I made by another artist, but I figure it still kinda count as OC.
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