/monster/ - The Last Bastion of Romance

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>>405596

well, just got to the part of the story where anon gets proactively dated by his future waifu, and i suddenly want to go with regular bipedal lizard-girl instead of a churio-like design (like i'm planning on going with because it makes the girl stand out a bit more compared to your regular lizardman) because bipedal lizard-girl means THICC hometown in addition to the THICC everything else

please help, i dont know what to do

>>405750

It's a pretty overwhelmingly negative consensus, yes, and with good reason. Easy to tell you're from there though, what with the body modification.

Still not as degenerate as the rest, so you have that going for you.

>>405757

Assuming the author/poster of the story uses the proper tags good luck with that, TFT isn't too bad of a place since the tags are at the very top of the story page, which makes avoiding degenerate content all the more easier.

Considering most everything on there is degenerate anyway, the point's moot however.

>>405752

Went with a Churio-based design since I can easily do a different story with a THICC monstergirl with similar body/height proportions as the t-rex girl in the story.

Five hundred and thirty two words to describe someone's new waifu. And I haven't even gotten to the part where she forcefully encourages anon to stick it in her.

>>405762

Looking forward to it.

>>405734

Nice, like your setting. Hope to see more

>>405734

It is good but by did the sister did not just use the blue flame on her brother to try to counteract the Sayoko's fire or use it on her instead? The sister was strong enough to overpower Sayoko's so it would just make sense for her to try to do so. Also I felt that Sayoko should have thought this out more or at least be hesitant on turning her to a shirohebi specifically : she knew that the sister was close to her brother; that monsters in a genetic level does not have a incest taboo; and the fact that she suggested to turn her to a shirohebi of all monsters which are known to be possessive/yandere. Also would you consider doing a squeal to this? Maybe concerning the two lack of forethought or impulsive behaviors?

>>405752

Body modification is TFT in general or is it the way he has written the metamorphosis itself? I mean MGE has girls converting to monsters so what is a non "TFT" way to write about it?

>>404600

Most of the bad are easy to avoid though as there is tags and ratings though. I just treat it as if it like sadpanda or other hentai sites where there is all those tags in the first place.

>>405843

I actually did plan on Lily using her own flame when she found out shirohebi could do that. But reading the profile doesn't give any indication that would over ride the existing flame Sayoko used. Also, Sayoko kind of grew on me and i thought a polygamous mg relationship where i can explore jealousy would be fun. So yeah, I'm planning a sequel definitely, but I'm currently working on a few other stories first

>>405843

> I mean MGE has girls converting to monsters so what is a non "TFT" way to write about it?

The MGE is a mixed bag on /monster/ and following it's canon doesn't mean it's accepted. After all, there are furries in the MGE, and furries are not accepted here by anyone. So using the MGE as an excuse is a no-go.

Body modification is a gateway /d/ fetish, corruption is probably what you're thinking of. Corruption is corrosion of the soul/appearance to reflect that, body modification is a human female losing her legs and growing the bottom half of a serpent. Now if the human female dies and her soul becomes a holy serpent then it's not body modification, but a reincarnation.

Basically, what I'm saying is, body mod is a tranny tier fetish and belongs on TFT.

>If the Lilim pulls you into her world just to inmediately turn you into an Alp, and walk away, do not despair.

>Instead, become the Mayor from Hellsing.

>My friends, it has often been said that I like war.

>My friends, I like war.

>No, friends, I LOVE war

>I love orgycausts. I love blitzkriegs. I love defensive lines.

>I love sieges, charges, I love mop-up operations, and retreats.

>Wars across prairies, in streets, in trenches, in grasslands, in frozen tundras, through deserts, on the sea, in the air, I love every act of war that can occur upon this earth.

>I love blasting the enemy to smithereens with Ryuu salvos that thunder across the lines of battle.

>My heart leaps with joy whenever a soldier is tossed high into the air and fucked to pieces by well placed Manticore paws.

>And there is nothing like a Wurm operator using a Jinko to destroy enemy Paladins.

>And the feeling that comes when a soldier runs screaming from his moaning band, only to be mowed down by heavy Balrog fire, is such an exquisite feeling.

>Like when ranks of infantry brandish their panties rushing into the enemy line.

>It moves me deep within my heart to watch a fresh recruit slamming over and over into the inflamed rod of a long-spent shota

>The sight of deserters being trapped inside the Will o´the Wisp is an irresistible pleasure.

>And there is nothing more arousing than the sounds made by prisoner husbands dropping like flies, screaming in agony as they're mowed down by ear piercing screaming Amazons!

>When a band of pitiful resistance fighters makes their final stand with nothing but small arms, only to have their city smashed to atoms block by block by 4.8 ton wurm bombshells, I'm in ecstasy.

>I love it when my forces ravage an Order armored division. It's so sad to see towns and villages that were supposed to be defended at all costs, being laid to waste, their men and children being raped and wed.

>I love to be squashed under the heel of the Order and Empire war machines. The humiliation as my orcs crawl around like vermin, ducking the nut bombs flying overhead.

>Ladies… All I ask for is war, war so grand as to make Hell itself tremble. Ladies, I ask you as fellow sisters in arms what is it that you really want?

>Do you wish for further war as I do? Do you wish for a merciless, bloody snatch? A war whose thirst is built with iron and lightning and fire?

>Do you ask for war to sweep in like a tempest, leaving not even single nerdy tengus to scavenge men from this Earth!?

>>405849

now you're just being retarded. /monster/ has a monsterization thread up right now. Corruption and body modification are synonymous within MGE lore, and its a big part of it. True, not all of MGE is liked by everyone. But most of it is liked by most people. Including here.

>>405848

finally, more good content

>>405853

>Corruption

that implies they are changed into something bad, rather than devout waifus

>>405762

3,631 words more or less, and about a third of that is the lewd part, and 327 words of that lewd third is the part where they snuggle in bed together several months later, their daughteru only a few weeks away from being ready to join the world.

Gonna wait a few days before coming back to it so I can do a better job of editing the parts I'm not happy with see: everything before the part where he sticks it in her, since for whatever reason I feel like everything's too "robotic" with how I described things, along with general revisions so the grammar/spelling isn't shit.

>>405853

>But most of it is liked by most people. Including here.

Your argument is still 'it's in the MGE, which means it's A-OK', which I just explained why it's not. The monsterization thread is up because it's in a grey area, and has been for over the year it's been there in purgatory. There's a shitload of heresy in that thread, but it's restricted to just that thread, because it's purpose is containment.

It's not heretical enough to be booted off, but it's not welcome in any other thread. Besides, making inferior human women into monster girls pales in comparison to pure monster girls. Undermines the whole point of /monster/ whereupon the principle is vanilla handholding love between a human male and a monster girl female.

I swear anon, if I didn't know you better, I'd say you were an Alp supporter.

>>405870

I just noticed this argument but I must have misunderstood something. Do I understand correctly that you are arguing the idea that monsterization is heretical?

>>405870

You dipshit. Monsterization is recycling bitches.

Pure monster girls > monsterized girls, but they're still monster girls at the end. It's never been heretical to recycle via monsterization, you stupid newfag.

>>405870

>turning a 3dpd into a loving waifu is heretical because it involves her growing a snake tail

It sounds like you’re the heretical one here. I saw earlier that you think bodily transformation is a gateway to /d/ tier shit. You’re missing a few major facts regarding monsterization writefaggotry here.

1. She isn’t turning into a furry or other gay shit, she’s turning into a pure monster girl.

2. She is going to be a loving wife with no deviant shit involved.

3. No writefag who doesn’t want to be lynched would ever cross that line if he knew what’s good for him.

You’re making the same argument as those faggots who claim monster girls in general are a slippery slope to furries. The truth is there is no slippery slope from here. We’re on a different hill altogether. The people who go down that slope do so because they find themselves aroused by the depravity involved, and seek further debasement with all the horror it entails. What we read, write, draw, and view here, we do because we find the love and comfort of monster girls to be satisfying in a manner the depths of /d/ could never compare to.

I’ve gotten really sanctimonious about this and I’m rather sleep deprived, but all I’m really trying to say is that monsterization is not a gateway to /d/ shit anymore than /monster/ is in general, which is to say not at all.

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>>405900

you guys are getting autistic, stop being retarded, what the guy is saying is that we can pick and choose shit, some shit is bad and we dont have to defend it all. I mean the alp shit is hillarious because it gates gays people off but in the end it kinda attracts trannies. so its a pretty bad hill to die off. in the end you can just take the designs form a story around it but not fully adhere to the fucking weird ass shit.

>>405900

theres a whore with green and black color scheme that always comissions herself as different mg's are you sure you want to die on that hill lmao?

>>405930

Is that really his true form?

Any monsterization that isn't fully consensual makes me sad. I wish purple-snek got stories that didn't involve her being mean. Is there any interest in a story where an aphohis and pharaoh rule together peacefully with different duties, with a sort of light-hearted cold war where the lamia and anubi prank and tease one another to be "best servants"?

>>405971

I love seeing their thoughts betray them. Slowly and slowly altering them, making them see things in new ways that frighten them at first, but soon the fear is replaced by exhilaration. And then, as their mind is warped fully, their bodies change to follow suite.

>>405974

Ew.

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>>405974

Am I the only one who treats it clinically or objectively?

>Gee. You're ill, weak, or have some chronic condition. That's no good. Take some mamono mana and go to a rehab course for newly monsterized.

>Gee. You have a chronic case of the bitch. Time to recycle you via mamono mana. Don't struggle, it'll only waste your time.

>You're a fag. I'm going to dip my baseball bat in a dark matter then beat the gay out of you until you alp into a decent wife.

>Oh? You're fine and simply want buffs? Here's some mamono mana. Next patient.

Give prescribe the mamono mana, give them a pamphlet, and away they go.

>>405981

you keep forgetting that not all trash transmutes into something else. a fag that murders people wont alp. at least learn the rules first.

>>405974

if you read your post with a nasaly voice it makes it sound like a jew wrote it.

>>406003

Reading anything with a nasally voice makes it sound like a jew wrote it.

>>405974

Isnt this exactly how monsterization works though?

>>406004

it reads like mindgeek yid shit dude, don't be dense.

>>406005

thats more like mindbreak.

>>406003

>you keep forgetting that not all trash transmutes into something else. a fag that murders people wont alp. at least learn the rules first.

Did you ignore the baseball bat part? If he doesn't all, then at least he gets a beating. Alternatively, just have a gun on hand so that if monsterization doesn't work because they are so shit, you can just ventilate their head right then and there.

>>406009

Actually now that I think of it, can monster girl necromancers raise the corpses of these shit people? You can always recycle them as slave labor or cannon fodder.

>>406010

technically speaking if they die they can be turned into undead, but a murderous fag will remain a murderous fag until he dies. read up on the mge skeleton to learn more undead monsterization. not even bones are safe.

>>406013

Somebody needs to make a story about pic related offering a dude a loan with the subtle implication that his body is the collateral. That mix of smug and sultry is hitting all the right buttons.

>>406013

https://pastebin.com/jiaDkW9r

I think this is it, not quite sure but it seems close.

>>405981

>beat the gay out of you

that only works if you throw them off a building

>>405867

Did an editing pass, and I'm a lot happier with the story now. Gonna wait another day or two before coming back to it again so I don't gloss over anything I need to fix and do some touch-ups.

Soon™

>>404147

https://pastebin.com/x2ErmAim

Here's the image in paste form if you want

>>406164

The only other work besides this and the one I mentioned was a short joke greentext about a "mature", onee-san titania throwing a tantrum about not getting the dick. How does she have so little writefaggotry?

>>405848

I like the story so far!