/monster/ - The Last Bastion of Romance

>>399937

'avin a giggle/10

>>399937

Can’t she just tell him what’s going on? She might not be able to talk to him yet, but she could still probably do ghost shit. Possess objects, write on his bathroom mirror, whatever sends the message.

>>399944

Yeah if I came to the mirror and saw something like "true love will come when you do" I would definitely not be suspicious, no I would totally not be all the more motivated to keep my nofap going.

>>399937

Probably akin to what happened to Saint Augustine. His famous prayer: "Lord make me chaste, but not yet!" His prayer was answered by the way.

Ghost girl gets one, but sadly only one, night with her beloved. Then he goes on to be the greatest paladin that order ever did see because of that. I leave the details up to whomever desires to flesh this out.

>>399939

You win a sketch!

>>400021

How about a /k/ikimora?

>>400103

Lawd yes

mg stories, romantic in particular, tend to have two core sets of thematic elements to the monstergirl's involvement - one being the thematic elements pertaining to monstergirls overall, typically some degree of femdom, female pursuit, etc etc

two being the elements specific to the type of monstergirl, like their behaviors and all that

generally speaking, how important is the second set of elements to you? does it feel incomplete if a story is just about a romance with a monstergirl, who may exhibit some or many of her traits, but whose specific monster type is otherwise inconsequential to the overarching plot of the story?

in other words, would you say an mg story is lessened if it's essentially a femdom story with the mg selected for no better reason than author's preference?

>>400166

I think it’s nice when a writefag can design the story around the quirks and iniquities of a certain girl, but it’s not a problem if they’re just being used for their physical traits. That is, so long as the girl isn’t being written as a degenerate.

>>400166

I like the second set to be there because they usually have certain aspects that make things interesting. A Lizardman likes men who can beat them in a fight, which gives an excuse for the human to learn how to fight if he wants her. Hellhounds like to physically dominate men, Danukis use their money, demons try to use contracts. It makes them suited to different types of stories, with different expectations. When you read a story about a Danuki, you're probably not going to expect it to be about a Danuki who falls in love with a fencer after she loses to him, that's what the Lizardman is for. It's best to play to the specific species' strengths.

Of course that isn't to say you can't mix things up. A submissive Hellhound who's made fun of for her meekness, a Lizardman who tries to beat people in debates or financial deals instead of swordsmanship, a Danuki who controls a lucrative mercenary company while leading from the front because general types usually ask for more pay. I wouldn't go so far as to say that not using these things would make your story bad, but I do feel like you could be missing out on some potential for an interesting storyline.

>>400172

>Any man who beats her in the debate not only trapped himself into the lizardman autism trap, but has also successfully argued why her and other mamono like her should stay in his town, and thus has no rhetorical leg to stand on.

Clever girl

Now I want a parallel greentext about a fellow master debater who lives in a predominantly mamono town dealing with his classmates attempting to debate him into marriage.

>>400232

t. DIDF

>>400279

>3.6 males

>not great, but not terrible

>>400265

Thanks. It makes me smile.

>>400279

>starts in a government facility attempting to find alternate dimensions

>attempt to do a maintenance test on their makeshift “portal” that normally wouldn’t be functional

>however their efforts have made the barrier between dimensions weaker, allowing the MG’s to open it from their side

>panic at the facility as men and women begin to experience the onset of “Advanced Demonic Energy Sickness” firsthand while trying to figure out what happened

This sounds pretty rad actually

>>400290

Sounds like a MG version of stranger things

>>400291

I don’t watch that show, so I got no clue there, but it’s supposed to be analogous to the first episode of Chernobyl, right after reactor #4 explodes

just an extended concept i thought of, if i continue it probably won't actually end with sex, just the first meeting. Unless someone else wants to expand on it.

The portals opened recently. The board has been filled with anons telling about their new wives and claiming that day of he rape is upon us. Good for them, but I disagree. For one, the monsters coming through are still the species that barely differ in appearance from humans. Hakutaku, danuki, kikimorae, golems and the like, but not much else. Second, the monsters are still playing up the refugee angle pretty hard. Not that I fault them for it, it's working wonders at letting them slip in. The big tip off that the big day hasn't come is the fact that feminists are fervently advocating for monsters still, not knowing what their plan actually is. Even a human woman at the store the other day mentioned that I try to ask a monster out.

I would like to bring a monster home myself, and I know that whatever I do end up with will be a loving loyal wife. But my mind keeps telling me not to trust any of them when they get near. I'm not sure why I told her that I have only known rejection and expect it, but all I heard in her response was, "Ew, you had negative experiences with people? Get away from me you creep." Doesn't everyone run into someone they had rather not met at least once in their lives?

I've had a few monsters try to approach me, but actually talking to me makes them lose interest in the pursuit. Really not sure how I'm managing that. I asked one once, and all she said at the time was, "Your mana is really hostile."

I get home and log into a pirate private mmo server and go sit in the main town to shoot the shit with random players. A newer player I've chatted with before, SmoothSigh, sends me a PM shortly after I login.

<[SmoothSigh]: hey mr alphabet

<[SmoothSigh]: how it going over there?

SmoothSigh claims to be a monster who somehow has access to a computer, with Earth's internet, from the other side of the portals, and is officially using it to communicate with other monsters who came over as a way to monitor progress. Though the fact that she's usually on this game instead of doing her supposed job or even hunting a guy for herself casts some doubts on that. It doesn't help her case that she refuses to tell me what kind of monster she supposedly is.

>[Eleminopy]: alright, you?

<[SmoothSigh]: alright?

<[SmoothSigh]: thats it?

>[Eleminopy]: that's it, now how about you?

<[SmoothSigh]: eh, i guess i'm alright too. works just been a drag readin the reports from

<[SmoothSigh]: r agents makes me so jealous

<[SmoothSigh]: i have 2 stay here while other girls get husbands

>[Eleminopy]: heh, maybe not all of them

<[SmoothSigh]: wat do u mean?

<[SmoothSigh]: did something happen?

If this girl was real, which you always suspect they aren't online, she should know about something like this.

>[Eleminopy]: aren't your reports supposed to tell you?

<[SmoothSigh]: we dont get told every detail of every girls day

>[Eleminopy]: uh huh

<[SmoothSigh]: just certain leaders that r sent over to help us adapt

>[Eleminopy]: r u sure you're supposed to be talking about this with a stranger online?

>[Eleminopy]: in a game no less?

<[SmoothSigh]: i hav a good feeling about u

>[Eleminopy]: that's a first

<[SmoothSigh]: wat do u mean?

I wasn't sure why I decided to vent to her like I did, but it gave me a slight relief for a moment to let it out. Then I started to panic as she read about the girl at the store and the monsters comment about my mana.

<[SmoothSigh]: Hostile mana, huh?

<[SmoothSigh]: Monstergirls are pretty sensitive to that kind of thing. Helps us avoid

<[SmoothSigh]: danger. Whatever it is going through your head, you need to clear it out if

<[SmoothSigh]: you want a monster to not run away.

I was more taken aback by the fact she started using proper English than anything else. This is the first time I saw anyone in an online game type like that in a long time.

>[Eleminopy]: what do you mean?

<[SmoothSigh]: My best guess is that you just need to relax and not be so defensive.

<[SmoothSigh]: If I knew more about you, I'd give you advice on how to do that.

<[SmoothSigh]: But I'm on this side and you're over there.

<[SmoothSigh]: This is the best I can do for you. ;P

The generic advice that could easily be shoehorned into a shitty after school special imprinted itself in my mind. I wasn't sure how much I could trust this, but none of the other changes I've tried helped so why not? We chatted for a bit before "her superior came in" and she logged out in a hurry. I decided to get off in a more leisurely pace and try to imagine how letting my guard down might play out.

>>400398

Your concept has intrigued me. Do continue

>>400404

Honestly, I have no idea how to continue before getting to the end. The only ideas I have to add onto this is that monsters generally don't take a romantic/sexual interest in eleminopy because he never really gets over his issues that prevent him from trusting anyone in any kind of relationship. After some time smoothsigh migrates over and they pass each other once in a while without ever knowing it until some sort of event sits them across from each other and smoothsigh recognizes his mana from descriptions he got from other monstergirls.

That's all I have. I have no idea of what could happen in between the post and this little bit of info.

>>400126

So no one has any?

>>400509

Apologies for the site in advance. Story itself is decent tho

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=lightning-kissed

Kiki Drawfag here. Now, I shall attempt to balamce the thread by offering some of my writing to the flame.

> “Galatea, dear. Play, Pumped up Kicks.”

>Smashing the precious vitral glass, a white cloth is launched into the church.

>Parishioners do not have much time to be surprised, as pink smoke fills the oratory with speed.

>They choke on it, and the women frantically rub their reddening eyes.

>As the sclera turms completely red, they stop choking, and breathe deeply.

>The incapacitated men have no chance, as newly turned monsters throw themselves over them.

>With impotence, a priest surveys the pious mass as it becomes a sudden orgy.

>From the smoke, an approaching shadow looms, out of place. It speaks with muffled voice

>”Where´s the girl?”

>The priest backs down, terrified.

>”The chief goddess protects me! I will not talk!”

>The shadow keeps approaching, odd shapes, glued to the silhouette of a man.

>As it comes closer the man is revealed, his nose and mouth covered by a wet rag,

>He is dressed in strange tattered clothing. Leather armor covers him in places.

>His trousers, caked in mud, still show spots where they were colored blue.

>Taking off the rag, he demands.

>”Where. Is. The. G-

>A sudden gale buffetts him, and blows the smoke away.

>”I knew you´d come for me, you snake! The Order Protects!”

>The priest cackles, as a mage, and a group of local heroes enter through the back door.

>The mage increases her wind spell potency, and the gales begin to cut the man´s skin.

>He takes out a Long Demonarm, and the Hero Paladin comes charging in.

>Monsters have been coming out with those arms, but even if it took out one Hero, the Warrior, or the Mage would take him out before he could recharge.

>Besides, the Paladin has a Shield, and Plate Armor. Those demon arms still can´t run through those.

>That particular one looks weird, though.

>It looks… tinkered with.

>A blaze of fire covers the area where the Heroes stood proud.

>The Paladin´s armor is riddled with holes, and the Mage lays slumped on the floor, with the Warrior too.

>They move slowly, crawling to each other, for they weren´t dead, but worse.

>Their souls were doomed now. Everybody knew the Demonarms spat out Poisonous Demon Silver.

>As the Priest watches the Hero´s demise, He is too busy to watch for the curved knife aiming at his throat.

>He gasps and squeaks at the Man´s hold.

>”Where. Where is She?”

>”They know you are coming, you snake! You won´t make me talk before they burn this village to the ground!”

>”Oh, I know. You wouldn´t have anything useful to say anyways. That´s why I want you to send them a message.”

>”W… Wha-”

>”Tsk, tsk, tsk. Not yet.You see, we have just ran out of In Medias Res.”

I hammered out the start of a short story. What do you think guys?

"Look at all those NPCs," he accused. "I'm so sick of them."

I turned to face him. As the car pulled away, he rested his head on one hand, trying to seem bored. Meanwhile, his indifferent gaze screamed anomie and contempt.

"Come on, kid, you know you can't go around calling people that," I gently reminded. "And nobody says that nowadays."

"Dad…" he insisted. "You don't understand."

"I don't understand what?"

"It's like…"

His voice fell away as he collected his thoughts.

"It's like they all just seem to follow everyone else's thinking," he remarked. "Like they don't hold any capacity to reflect or think for themselves."

A pregnant pause hung in the air. Gradually, his expression softened.

"I don't know," he admitted. "It just feels like I see things differently from everyone else. And when I speak out, they all accuse me."

I pondered upon his thoughts. After a while, I offered: "Would you say I'm an NPC?"

He glanced away from me and towards the window. A crisp, cloudless afternoon sky hung above. "Yeah," he answered, somewhat unsure. "You have the same values and ideas anyways."

The car stopped. At the crosswalk, his classmates poured forth from the school's entrance. The intersection bustled with his classmates, human and mamono. Some chitchatted briefly before waving goodbye, while couples held hands. They were all eager to return home.

"They all look so happy," he sighed. "All so carefree and oblivious."

For the rest of the ride home, I listened attentively but without responding. I focused my attention on the road, a now-antiquated habit. Meanwhile, he aimlessly traced the power lines as they ticked by. Soon, the car's steady hum stopped after the vehicle parked itself, punctuating the end of the short journey.

—-

"There was another shooting today," he stated flatly. "Some Order lunatic shot up a mall over in Wichita."

"So I heard," I replied. "It's a real tragedy."

"Yeah. He ended up aiming for the humans. Apparently he realized that shooting mamono isn't that effective, so he shot their husbands instead," he pointed out.

"That's horrible."

"Well, these things happen all the time. And at least this time he set a high score. It was pretty clever."

It troubled me to see him like this. Not a bad kid, but lately a dark brooding encompassed him. Though in all honesty, his attitude resembled how I felt at his age too: I had cracked my fair share of Columbine jokes back in the day. I changed when I met her, but even so his struggle with alienation and disenchantment was all too familiar. Which brought me to what I had come here to do. I sat down across from him.

"I want you to have this," I said, as I placed the journal on the coffee table. "It would help you to read it."

The old book was well-worn and marked by thorough use. It was an elegant, yet ordinary, hardcover notebook. The glossy, deep azure finish on the cover's canvas finish shined past a thin veil of dust. Pen ink twinged the pages' edges off-white. Microscopic traces of ink had diffused into the paper, migrating throughout the sheets. The thread-bound spine was evenly creased, and a torn silk bookmark hung freely. There was no brand.

"What is this?" he asked, stifling his curiosity at the old relic.

"I think you know," I smiled. "I bought this when I was seventeen. Your age."

I slid the journal towards him and moved to leave the kitchen. As I exited, he examined the old book stoically and scratched the back of his head.

—-

>6/07/16

>Bought this today. There was a choice between one with lines and one without. But I'm not really one for rules so here we are…get it? It's a nice metaphor. Just like this blank book.

He snickered. So this was Dad as a cringey teenager.

>…Not really sure what to write right now, but I'll try my best to fill it in. The idea is to have somewhere to share my mind without publicly embarrassing myself by making a Twitter.

>It would be nice to have somewhere to put it all down. No one around me seems to get it anyways.

>>400619

I won't assume anything. I can understand your disgust and its well placed. Trouble is Social JUSTICE is incredibly insidious.

Virtue signaling is rather easy to do and there's nearly no blowback unless you say/type something that is not supported by their ridiculous group think. Then they come down on you like flock of tiny, single mind birds. Scarly to look at, but more annoying then dangerous. Unless your afraid to be ostracized from said group.

A normal MG who just wants to fit in and find a 'good guy' to be with, may join a group without knowing better.

And the more… aggressive girl species might mistake it for some form of femdom, without realising the true shit-stain it is.

The thing to remember is, MGs are free thinking beings and they do make fucking mistakes like the rest of us do.

>You scanned the horizon again

>Nothing but baked dirt and shrubs as far as you could see

>For the past 24 or so hours you had been wandering in this infernal desert

>A few times you had seen what you had taken to be water, only for it to reveal itself as just another mirage

>You were now dangerously dehydrated, having drank what little water you had brought with you just a few hours after discovering that you were lost

>The heat and exhaustion threatened your body with collapse

>Just a little more though, you just needed to get to the top of this hill

>You push onwards, stumbling a few times but eventually making it to the top

>As you make it over the crest of the hill, a vally unfolds below you

>A valley with a river

>You took a moment to confirm that this wasn't another mirage, but from what you had heard mirages never followed a valley like this

>The hot sun had slowed you brain down, but a sudden realization hit you like a truck of peace

>This was your salvation

>In a wild frenzy you began to run down the hill

>Thorny shrubs ripped at your legs, sharp rocks assaulted your feet through your thin-soled shoes, but you didn't care

>Your salvation was that water; every minute without it was a minute closer to death

>But now you were falling

>A large rock had caught your foot, sending you to the ground

>You kept your momentum and continued rolling downhill, coming to a rest at the foot of the hill

>Your body, already weak from dehydration and sunburns, now was covered in cuts and bruises

>You tried to get up, tried to gather enough strenght to make it to the river, now only a few hundred feet away

>But you couldn't

>Your body refused

>You stared up at the sun as everything faded black

>>400703

>You wake up in your cozy bed, last night's dream a hazy memory

>It all felt so real, getting lost, the pain from the scorching sun, the hopeless desperation, all of it

>You turn over and open your eyes

>This wasn't your room

>This wasn't your bed

>And yesterday wasn't a dream

>You go over it in your head

>Getting lost, wandering, finding the river, falling, and then blacking out

>But there was something after that, a vague memory that felt like a gentle embrace

>You look under the covers to find that you are naked

>Your skin glistens from a light coating of some sort of gel that you can only guess is for treating sunburns

>It seems to have done its job, as your once red and blistered skin now was close to its original color, and it barely hurt when you pressed on it

>The same could not be said for the rest of your body though

>Your muscles were still sore, and you had several large bruises that were an ugly shade of purple

<Oh, good morning Anon! Or should I say late afternoon. You slept for quite some time.

>A beautiful girl was peeking around the door

>You quickly pull the covers back over you as she walks into the room and over to a dresser

>Maybe "walks" isn't the best word

>In place of legs she had a long snake tail covered in a mesmerizing pattern of diamonds that ended in a large rattle

>She was a monster girl

>If the stories your family and friends had told you were true, you were now in only a marginally better situation than dying of thirst

"Who are you?" you ask, wanting to run but at the same time not wanting to expose yourself

<You don't remember? I guess you were quite out of it when I found you. My name is Kylie.

<How do you feel? I gave you some water, but it wasn't enough to get you properly hydrated

>You didn't know what to say

>She was acting a lot nicer than the monsters you had heard about, seeing as she had taken care of you while you were unconscious, but it could also just be a trick to get you to trust her

>You decide to be cautious

"I'm a little thirsty, but other than that I'm fine"

"Um… where are we?"

>She laughs as she places a bundle of clothes on the dresser

<You're in my house, silly! You must have gotten really lost to make it all the way out here."

"Oh. Well, how did you know my name?"

<You told me when I found you yesterday, but you fell asleep right after that. Now, I know you have a lot of questions, and I'd love to answer them, but right now I need to go finish making dinner. Your clothes just finished drying, so I'll leave you to get dressed.

>She gave you a quick smile beffore leaving the room, shutting the door behind her

>The thought of food made your stomach moan, so you got up and started quickly getting dressed

>Your clothes had been cleaned and now smelled like fresh flowers

>Maybe this monster wasn't as bad as you were expecting

First time doing this, I hope my writing style isn't too autistic. I'll write part 2 soon

>>400712

Sorry I couldn't write any more than what I did. That took me three hours, and I kinda needed a break.

>>400715

That’s perfectly fine anon. Rushed or quick work tends to be of poorer quality than work you really take your time on.

>>400704

>Leaving your room, you continued down a short hallway into a room that appeared to meet the needs of a dining room, a living room, and a kitchen

>The walls were covered in a white plaster, and large windows let in more than enough light to see by

>Along with the log rafters and the assortment of tools and plants hanging from them, the whole place reminded you of a cozy frontier home

>Kylie is attending to an antique wood-burning stove in one corner of the room

>She looks up at you as she hears you enter the room

<Perfect timing Anon! Just take a seat and I'll be right over.

>She takes a tray out of the oven and sets it on a nearby counter as you make your way to the dining table

>You sit down slowly in a chair, your muscles still sore and tired

>Kylie makes her way over with two plates and silverware

>Sitting one plate of food in front of you, she takes the seat opposite you

>Your stomach groans loudly as the smell of the food reaches you; it appears to be some soart of meat with a side of cooked cactus

<Sounds like you're hungry! Don't worry, there's plenty if you want more. Now, did you have some questions for me?

>You take a bite as you think about what to ask

"Why are you being so nice to me? From all the stories I've heard, monsters are supposed to be vicious and only want sex."

>She blushes heavily, making you regret wording your question so directly

<W-we aren't all like that! Thats just the more aggressive species! Besides, those stories are just propaganda anyways!

"Ok, ok, sorry. But still, why be so nice to me? You healed my sunburns, washed my clothes, and you have been treating me kinder than most people ever would."

<Well, I believe you should be nice to everyone, at least at first. Also… I don't exactly see many guys out here… B-but I would never force anything like that on you!

>Her face got even redder from this confession

>The idea hadn't even crossed your mind at this point, but looking at Kylie you realised you could do a lot worse, and you were a little desperate from being single so long

>An awkward silence decended over the table, so you decided to break it by changing the subject

"This food is really good, Kylie. It's been a while since I've had a home cooked meal."

>Kylie's smile was restored to her face

<Thanks, Anon! It's an old family recipe.

<By the way, what were you doing out in the middle of the desert in the first place?

>You laugh and tell her how you had read on a Yugoslavian silk weaving imageboard that getting out in nature was a good way to relieve stress, so you had left the city to go on a road trip through the desert, and how you had thought it was a good idea to stop along the way for a short hike to the top of a hill

>Looking back on it, you couldn't help but laugh at the absurdity of the situation

>Kylie then told you about how she had gotten fed up with city life in the crowded government housing sector she had lived in, and how she had left to start a new life in the wilderness

>The two of you talked for hours, with you eating enough food to satisfy your gnawing hunger

>>400822

Wholesome

>>400822

>You let out another yawn

>The sun had set an hour ago, but Kylie had lit an oil lamp that gave you just enough light to see by

<Anon, you really should get to bed. Sleep will help you heal much faster than any medicine, you know.

>You had wanted to continue chatting with Kylie, but now that she mentioned it, your eyes were beginning to droop

"Yeah, I guess it's about time. Wait, Kylie, where are you going to sleep?"

>When she had shown you around her house earlier in the day, you hadn't seen a second bed

<Oh, don't worry about me. I'm fine on the ground.

>Chivalrous gentleman that you were, you could never allow a lady to sleep on the floor while you took the bed

"No, this is your house. I'll take the floor."

<I don't want you sleeping on the ground Anon. You're still covered in bruises, the hard floor would only make them worse.

>Her face suddenly took on a shade of red

<How about a compromise. We could… share the bed?

>Her face took on an expression of shame

<No, forget I suggested that. I will sleep on the floor tonight…

>You contemplated her suggestion

>Just yesterday, even considering sharing a bed with a monstergirl would've never crossed your mind, yet… you felt like you could trust Kylie

>She had never tried to take advantage of you, and she was always so nice

"Kylie, wait. We could share the bed, if you still want too."

>Her face lit up

<You mean it?!

>You nodded and she gave you a quick hug

>You both made your way to the bedroom, and reached a silent agreement to keep all of your clothing on

>After you both got comfortable under the covers, Kylie blew out the lamp

<Good night Anon

>As she turned away from you, a rash action overtook you

>Leaning over, you gave Kylie a quick kiss on the cheek

"Good night"

>You felt her tail brush a little closer to you as sleep overcame you

This is the last part I'll write, as I don't think I'm good enough at dialogue to do a romance story JUSTICE

>>400873

This is good so far, really interested in seeing what happens. Maxine kinda reminds me of Megumin.

this is gonna sound oddly specific but I'm watching SGDQ, and Minish Cap is the current run. I think the dynamic that Ezlo and Link have would make a good MG story if Ezlo was a monster girl

For those who haven't played the game, basically Ezlo is a sage/wizard who is part of a secret (from humans) civilization. Their apprentice turns out to be evil and turns Ezlo into an almost inanimate piece of clothing (Link's signature green hat in this case). Ezlo then assists Link in defeating the apprentice

Honestly I would write this myself but I'm too drunk to focus… gdq is just that boring this day and age. Feel free to ignore this post

>>400873

Man, you captured a mg witch perfectly.

A slightly crazy creep with magic.

Its a good muxture of cute and worrying. Please do continue.

>>400905

Everything you have written is good.

My personal favorite is "victory and defeat."

Just trying a little something to start with. First time posting any writing to the board, so be as vicious or gentle as you want. If people want more, I'll post more. But if not, then I won't bother people by posting stuff they don't want.

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I was up to my knees in debt. My job didn’t provide enough income to make significant headway towards paying that off and pay rent at the same time. I had nowhere else to turn. I had no idea what my future would hold for me as I struggled to stay afloat. So, I went to see a financial adviser by the name of Dani Cooper who works at the local community credit union.

“You have a very good payment history,” I was told by the eccentric woman with the red raccoon ears and large fluffy tail. “No lates, no short sells, no bankruptcies… the only real issue I see is you don’t have enough assets that can be liquidated if you need to.”

“No property, I get it.” Dani must’ve been the twentieth person to tell me that I should’ve bought a house for the simple freedom to put a nail in the wall wherever I pleased. I wasn’t much for household decorations though.

“Still, I know of a way you can secure the loan and work towards paying it off.” Dani smiled as she uttered the conditions, “But you’ll have to quit your job and work full time with us.”

My blood ran cold as a chill went down my spine. I didn’t like her delivery. Since she was a Danuki, I trusted her financial know-how. What rubbed me the wrong way was that she might use that know-how towards nefarious ends.

“Don’t worry, it’s nothing like acting in adult films or prostitution,” she tried to assure me. “Most of our kind aren’t really into the sharing that needs to happen to make adult films possible.”

“Nobody wants to watch the same couple together in every film though, right?” I smirked.

Dani leaned in to whisper, “As long as no spirit energy is exchanged, it’s all good.”

“Don’t tell me…” I began, incredulously.

“Yes,” she replied, keeping her voice low. “There are adult films where men are just holding hands and hugging the girls.” Her head on leaned on her hand as she smiled with amusement. “You strike me as a cuddler. I bet lots of girls would pay for videos of you holding hands, hugging, going out on dates, and kissing the girl goodnight without seeing the inside of anyone’s bedroom.”

“You flatter me.”

“Seriously!” She began searching through her desk and assorted belongings for a few minutes before stumbling across what she was looking for: a business card.

She carefully placed the card in my hand, “Give these people a call, tell them that Dani Cooper sent you. They’ll take good care of you.” She winked and made a kissy face.

I chuckled nervously, having a strong feeling of what I was getting myself into. “A-Alright. Thank you. For everything.” I stood up to walk out the door, pausing for a moment after a few steps to look back at Dani. She was already putting my financial records away, back into her desk. She even locked the drawer. Another client soon approached her and it was business as usual. This client must have had a better portfolio than I did, because what snippets I could pick up of their conversation was strictly finance-related. I chuckled as I shook my head and walked out.

“Legitimate Film Company, LLC” I read aloud from the business card Dani had given me. “That doesn’t sound suspect at all,” I sarcastically remarked to myself. “In Partnership With Legitimate Adoption Agency, LLC” the card continued. I mounted my bicycle and pushed off the curb to ride home. It was going to a be a strange week.

>>400953

Nice anon, I really like it so far.

>Legitimate Film Company, LLC

>Legitimate Adoption Agency, LLC

A most worrying partnership

>>399933

Hi, I've been trying to get into writing again but I can't come up with anything decent for my would-be story; so far I've nailed down most of the lore, but that's just about it, all the plot options I try to come up with seem like crap to me. While it's not necessarily about just monstergirls, this is the only place I know where I can vent my frustrations.

Anyone else experiencing the same problem?

Also I'm afraid I've been recycling far too many elements from other failed stories I've written, which kinda makes me disappointed at my lack of creativity. I try to come up with new stuff on my own, but I often resort to reading irl events or other stories in order to come up with ideas for my story.

>>400953

I'm interested.

>>400858

I REALLY likes this one.

More perhaps?

>>400954

I fear for the shotas.

>>400986

Thanks. Sometimes I just feel that writing is a huge bother because I can't come up with a 4D chess-tier plotwist for my characters/MC and it makes me really frustrated because the stuff I come up with seems generic/overdone to me.

rape's the name of the game here, but tends to be portrayed in a more declawed/tongue in cheek fashion that comes across as mostly harmless

are there any stories out there with a more serious take? not necessarily from the perspective of physical brutality, just in the general handling of it as an ordeal.

is there a point where a rape scene might be considered /chaos/ or beyond, without breaking any other rules?

>>401055

>is there a point where a rape scene might be considered /chaos/ or beyond

When she grows a dick and plows the MC. Hard femdom/rape has been tried by various writefags but I haven't seen too many that aren't pathetically edgy or just really badly written. Give it a shot, it's not against the rules, but don't be surprised when people get autistic about it

Also worth thinking about is why you're writing it. What pathos are you trying to engender with the act? And if it's just porn, who would actually want to self insert as a genuine victim of violent assault? Besides feminists, that is.

>>401058

<And if it's just porn, who would actually want to self insert as a genuine victim of violent assault? Besides feminists, that is.

>there are people on this board who haven't played Monster Girl Quest

Explains the state of the board, sadly.

>>400953

This update is a little shorter than the first part. My apologies. It's mostly a conversation between the protagonist and a receptionist. Let me know if things are dragging along too slowly, I'll see what I can do to pick up the pace.

-

It had been a couple days since I visited Dani at the credit union. I thought about what the Dani told me, and the strange business card she handed me. When I checked my creditors’ accounts, everything had been paid off. I thought it would’ve taken longer than a few days for funds to transfer. Oh well, one less thing for me to worry about. A HUGE one less thing to worry about. Although, my life seemed like it was turning into one of those stories where the protagonist unwittingly ends up in compromised circumstances because shenanigans. I was not about to let that happen to me, so I called the number on the card.

“Hello, Legitimate Business, LLC, Cassie speaking. How may I direct your call?”

“Hi, I’m Dani’s friend, calling about, um… this business card.” I played with said business card between my fingers. “Do you know who I should speak with? It says something about Legitimate Film Company, LLC, and then something something Legitimate Adoption Agency, blah blah.”

“Well, we did put out a request looking for someone capable of providing stud services. There’s a bicorn that works with the adoption agency that takes requests from couples unable to conceive…”

“I don’t think that’s what Dani had in mind…”

“Ah, sorry… you must be interested in the film company then?”

“If it’s not pornography, then sure!”

“Don’t worry about a thing. They take really good care of you. They don’t even contract with Hellhounds or Ushi-Onis anymore. Rarely they’ll have Manticores and Cheshires, but only if they’ve proven themselves to be well-behaved.”

“Yeah, not what I was… but actually, thanks for the heads-up. That does put my mind at ease a bit.”

“Why don’t you come in to the office and we’ll get you started right away.”

“No one’s even told me what I’d be doing yet!”

“You’ll find out when you get there. I’ll text you the address.”

I grunted with a bit of annoyance, but thanked Cassie for her time. Allegedly not pornography, yet no one will say what it is, and they don’t work with Hellhounds or Ushi-Onis because of what I assumed was ‘bad behavior’. Curiosity got the better of me as I received the text message containing the address. Looking it up on a map app from my phone, it seemed like it wasn’t too far, I could get there on my bike. I decided to check it out, not that I had a choice. The checks have already cleared.

>>401055

Because hard femdom is trash

>>401069

Well we’re not referring to the “fun” violent rape that comes from a hellhound or something, that guy’s talking about something approximating irl violent rape that actually leaves the person humiliated and traumatized.

>>401058

Well, I wasn't quite intending to stray into the edgy hfd/ballbusting sort of territory, like I said, "not necessarily from the perspective of physical brutality", so maybe paternal-gfd. I'm mostly just writing about a very paternalistic/traditionalist kind of society where a reluctant young teen mc ends up in an arranged marriage to a dragon and the marriage is consummated against his will. Not so much violent as forceful, so to speak, because the dragon is very intent on physical intimacy and the shota+ is very much not ready for it.

At any rate, I just usually see a lot of "fade to black - and that's how I met my wife!" and "secretly loving it" stuff and was wondering if that was the most anyone would tolerate when it came to consent themes or if you'd all read something a bit less declawed

>>401168

Go as far as you want. Not every type of story is for everyone, but do what your vision tells you. Don't pander to /monster/, write the story you want to write, then present it to /monster/.

>>400126

>Be anon

>Driving your car down the backroads pretty fast

>No cops in the area, its near the end of the month and they've already got their ticket quota

>Suddenly very large winged beastie flies in front of you

>Fuck its a thunder bird

>Try to swerve but not enough and she hits you

>FUCK, you hit a Thunderbird, in your Thunderbird

>Screech to a halt and go out to check on her

>Thankfully the car insn't damaged badly, just some scratches

>Then you go check on the Thunderbird

>Give her a tentative poke with your foot, and she groans a bit and crackles

"Are you okay? do you have brain damage?"

>She rolls over to face you and shakes her head

"Well, uh, I suppose you would like to go to the hospital?"

>She nods

"Well, I'd pick you up, but I think you'd discharge on me, so can you walk?

>She huffs a bit before noding again and getting up, wobbly walking towards the car

and everything went happily ever after

>>401200

there's actually a whole thread for hellhounds specifically

>>401200

Is Anon fucking hoola-hooping while hes doing his hellwan waifu?

Well, We've proven my own writing ain't good enough to be bad, I'll stick to prompts.

JoJo's Bizarre Adventure, but instead of Stands, dudes fight with their monster girlfriends.

>>400893

I think what you really meant was Twilight Princess:MG edition where Midna is a hellhound cursed into being a much more diminutive version of a hellhound

>>401285

>hula-hooping while fucking your waifu

This is a new asperation, time to get training.

>>401285

It's a new sport that a monster girl created when she wondered how great the hip gyrations from her husband would feel.

>>401062

>vore, death, and worse

Shit game belongs in the bin.

>>401299

Exactly, there were only a few girls in the game that were good. I'm quite surprised the fags at TRTR got KC to draw a few

>>401299

>death

is there something wrong with death? or just how it's used in the game?

>>401301

>Dying painlessly at a ripe old age after getting a chance to say farewell to your loved ones

>Being murdered

How about you tell me?

>>401299

Where is MGE the game? I want all the game-overs to end in kissing and cuddles.

>>401301

Death in a fashion that is presumably meant to be erotic. Not getting killed by a sword or thrown off a cliff, it's stuff like getting devoured by vaginas.

>>401302

2nd part meant for:

>>401300

>>401303

ooh, you mean it's got snuff

>>401307

The anal is only the beginning. She performs ATM and licks her ass juice off Luka and gets him to nut in her mouth while he still has poopdick

>>401308

Counterpoint: monster girls don’t poop

>>401063

I arrived. It was an office in a strip mall. I guess whatever made the rent cheaper. A banner hung in the window next to the door, “Legitimate Film Company, A Division Of Legitimate Business, LLC”. It didn’t look especially seedy or anything. Good part of town, not crime-ridden. Upon entering, there was the standard reception office, chairs along the walls like a dentist’s office. No woefully out-of-date sports magazines though.

Shortly after arrival, I was quickly ushered into a back room that looked like a private office. There was the usual trappings, a desk, chair behind the desk, bookcase, etc. Then my eyes wandered across from the desk and noticed the infamous “Casting Couch”.

“I thought this wasn’t a porno…” I worriedly said to the Elf that escorted me back here.

“What? It’s just a piece of furniture.” She shook her head, “I swear, you humans…”

She dusted off a spot on the couch and directed me to sit and wait for the casting director to arrive. Then she left. I was alone in the room. Sitting on a literal casting couch.

After a short while, a Danuki walked in, sat down at the desk promptly and began studying me. I was beginning to feel a little uncomfortable with the focused attention. She took me by surprise by suddenly standing up walking briskly over next to me on the couch and sitting down.

I was very puzzled by the events transpiring, or lack thereof. Not a single word had been spoken yet, so I was unsure of what I was supposed to do, or if we had “started” yet. I decided to play along since I was being paid (or so I assumed) to be here.

The Danuki slowly reached her hand over towards mine and hovered it there for a moment before finally taking my hand in hers. Her ears twitched. She pulled her tail in front of herself with her free hand, and I got to see just how fluffy a Danuki tail can really be. I wanted to touch it, but I didn’t want to be rude and assume.

She eventually released my hand, wrapped her arms around me with a big smile on her face like a very happy girl from an anime. It kinda warmed my heart a bit actually as she nuzzled her face into my chest. Then, as quickly as the warmth had spread, she released her hug, sat back down at what I’m assuming was her desk, and was back to a colder, more business-like demeanor.

Finally the silence was broken. “You’ll do.” was all I got for my evaluation. She shuffled some papers on her desk, opened a drawer to put some papers away, get one sheet out, write something on it, put it away. Every action appeared deliberate, but the more I watched, the more it seemed like she was just pretending to be busy and doing paperwork.

“I’ll do what?” I asked, with a nagging suspicion.

She reached into a pocket to pull out some glasses and put them on. “Let me tell you what we do.” More paper shuffling. “We’re in the process of shooting for a ‘reality show’. We don’t have a name for it yet, but the basic premise is you would take girls on dates, hold hands, hug, maybe kiss, but no intercourse. This part is important.”

I nodded in agreement.

“We’re not looking to marry you off in the first ‘episode’, of course. That would ruin the ratings for the rest of the show.” She pretended to write something down, seemingly giving up on the illusion. The pen didn’t even touch the paper.

“Okay, so I’m taking girls on dates? How am I paying for this?”

“You’ll get a budget per episode. Some episodes will have higher budgets than others. Money not spent one week does not roll over to the next, so you don’t have to worry about saving anything.” She stands up. “Oh, and we won’t be broadcast on traditional television, we’ll be streaming on the internet. Feels more real and in the moment that way.”

“I see.” I stand up as well, because I didn’t want to be the only one sitting.

“Alright! Let’s meet the girls.” She motioned towards the door, and we both exit to the hallway.

Forget being a strange week, this was going to be a strange year.

>>401359

Did you really have to point out the fucking joke?

>>401358

I like where this is going, keep it up.

>>401359

Nothing saying you won’t get a tail when you become an incubus. You already get a M A G N U M D O N G so why not?

>>401381

Only if she wants that upgrade.

>>401379

no u

>>401379

besides I had to use something other than teenager

>>401392

Yeah. Enjoy your ban, cuckchan cancer.

>>401393

Im sorry I didnt mean it to get out of hand

>>401393

oh well I will continue with my writefaggotry tomorrow

>>401386

Adolescent, 16 year old (or however old your underage self insert is supposed to be), lad. The English language has several words and you opted for the 4cuck made up word. You could even use a Spanish word and it would hook the reader probably the best and immerse the reader that it actual is Spain. Aside from that your greentext is just poor. The lack of quotation marks makes it slightly difficult to differentiate actual quotes and descriptors of the scene, irregular usage of capitalization alongside poor spelling and grammar and a story with few to none interesting concepts.

You clearly aren’t from around here given your posting habits and your double-posting reeks of insecurity. For your continuation please put it in a pastebin as the OP requests, it becomes difficult to navigate when 30 greentexts blob up the page.

>>401382

True, if your wife wants you to have a cute shota-dick, that’s what you’re getting.

There’s a story someone had up on pastebin a while back and I haven’t been able to find it again on the writefags list.

The premise was this: a young orphan being raised by the church is visited by a demon who starts acting like a mother/onee-San stand-in for him, cooking and the like. Once he learns how to write his name, she tricks him into signing a contract and promptly disappears for the next decade.

I mainly want to find it again because the ending has a nice twist to it and puts some characters in a very intriguing situation.

>>401413

>Not from around here

I am a lurker from both /pol/, /christian/ and here,reason why my posts are horrible is that I dont post very often. And obviously my greentexts are shit, its my second time writefagging, but thanks for the advice anyways oldfren

>>401454

Now that is one I would like to see, although I try to explore the religious conflict in the new world. But it would be fun to greentext it

>>401469

>browsing nu/pol/

The amount of times you post has nothing to do with post quality. You're just a newfag who needs to go back to lurking.

>>401472

Since when are you under the impression I was talking about 4/pol/. Well it is my fault for not specifying, and also because english is not my first language might have something to do with my poor writing, even though I spoke it for 12 years.

Im sorry for appearing like an newfag

Furthermore for my writefagging, is it okay if I include several foreign words and customs in my story since I am setting it in a non english speaking country?

>>401473

8/pol/ is heavily infested with redditors. It has been since kamphy was in charge if you even know who that is. Keep lurking.

>>401479

I know who the former BO of /pol/ was, some turk who's autism rivals that of /leftypol/'s BO, they still keep talking about him to this very day

>>401304

If ya check one of the threads it's about how KC is making his own game, among the fallen Maiden games

Looking for a story where the captain of the guard for an Order city state gets seduced by a kunoichi. It used to be on pastebin.

Finally got out of my way to post the second part on this trainwreck of a greentext, I am trying to improve my writing so please do criticise.

https://pastebin.com/b6DCJQSU

>>401522

It doesn't show anything

>>401526

there used to be one posted here that was quite similar but instead of a kunoichi it was a succ

>>401550

There's a fairly obvious and easy to fix error in the link. You can figure it out and learn something useful in the process. I believe in you! Here are three hints:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uniform_Resource_Locator

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Query_string

>>401454

>>401557

Original requester here, thanks m8

something about Frigeridus’ fruitless and doomed quest to save the young men caught in the same trap as him is really compelling to me. That’s why I was trying to find it again.

>>401555

FUG, I DID NOT NOTICE,I AM A RETARD

>>399939

anon do you have any more of sacrifice's works?

>>401592

made me chuckle anon

now he really is hoola-hooping

>>401611

Seconding this request and checking dubs. I'm pretty sure he did the story I mentioned but his pastebin got nuked so I don't know for sure.

>>401592

Kek, now I want a no tail version of all of them.

But I am still too retarded to find the edit thread in the catalog. I'm going to just dump the other wan images from this artist in the hellwan thread.

>>401632

Good shit writefag,

Can’t wait for part 3

>>401632

and here is the next step on recent writefag medusafag's metoric rise among writefags on /monster/. Keep it up m. I love all your stuff so far and can't wait to see what you bring next.

>>401632

Nice to finally see some new blood around here. I'm loving this.

I want to writefag some but I can't think of a specific monster girl

Throw something at me and I'll try my best not to make it shit

>>401692

I'd love to see something from the lonely jewel of the desert, the girtablilu

Stories of her species are so scarce… I'd yet to see something that matches https://pastebin.com/MLdAGuJF levels of thrilling and interest

>>401551

https://pastebin.com/H1dUYunB This one? I remember the kunoichi one but can't remember the name nor the author, so I can't look for it.

>>401551

>>401700

I found it but its gone. Even the account is gone.

https://8ch.net/monster/res/282970.html#314337

>>401704

tfw you proofread before you post and still find a typo the moment after you post

>>401704

This seems like it could be a nice series: Stefan and Bertrum’s Bizarre Desert Adventure. The Girtablilu can be a recurring antagonist, maybe bringing some muscle along to deal with Bertrum.

>>401704

>be me, Stefan Parnell, a young noble sent on a stupid journey that almost got me killed

>caravan finally reaches boring trading city

>local trade baron recognizes that I need some time to rest before I can discuss anything with him

>baron's workers lead me to a monster-proof room, as requested

>two maidens ask to come into my room and clean my body

>I let them in after the baron's subordinates made sure that they are no less than 100% human

>they did a very nice job. shame they don't speak my language too well

>sun finally sets

>can't fall asleep

>someone knocks on my door

>it's Bertrum

>he gives me a knife and a dead scorpion. a regular scorpion, not a monster one

>says that some "payback" would make me feel better

>cutting the little bastard to shreds surprislingly did brighten me up a bit

>manage to fall asleep shortly after

>wake up the next day, make sure none of my limbs are paralyzed

>spend the morning walking around the market with Bertrum

>he doesn't say anything, but at least there's a smaller chance of anything jumping on me while he's around

>it's finally time for the meeting with the baron

>most of it is pretty boring, majority of the discussion is about trade with the order, bandits, etc

>as we finish our discussion, a man suddenly bursts into the room

"why haven't you told me the Order representitive is here?"

>the baron sighs and the furious man turns to me.

"I am coucilman Lanos. forgive me, but I must rush into the topic at hand. recent reports have confirmed that a subordinate of the demon lord is attempting to transform this area into a monster realm! you must send more paladins!"

"confirmed. bah"

>this doesn't seem to be the first time the baron has heard these claims

"these are all rumors and conspiracies. we have more important issues at hand. you'd think that a councilman would be more aware of the real troubles his city is facing"

>as the argument grows louder, my patience declines, and I leave the room while Bertrum follows

"do you think the councilman's rumors have any truth in them?"

"not too much. but we should still inform the Order. reports like these are not to be taken lightly"

>Bertrum is probably right. I don't really care for cities in middle of wastelands such as this one, but more regions turning into monster realms doesn't sound too good to me

>before we leave the building, I spot an odd woman standing by the exit

>she has silvery hair, pale skin and crimson red eyes

>the creepy woman doesn't say anything, she just smiles and steps aside as we move through the exit.

>I speak to Bertrum as soon as she's out of hearing range

"that woman, didn't she look a little weird?"

"what woman?"

"you didn't… nevermind"

>this heat… I must be seeing things

>I hate deserts.

Somewhere in the desert, later that day

<"the boy doesn't seem anything special. he's just a little brat. I can't see how you can possible fail to capture him"

>the silver haired woman floats in the air, her royal set of wings matches her black horns

<"that bodyguard of his - the old man, he's the problem!"

>the Girtablilu crosses her hands, reinforcing her visible anger.

<"the brat himself is also troublesome, even when paralyzed! When he's mine, he won't-!"

<"when he's yours?"

>the silver haired woman giggled mockingly

<"it was funny seeing you fail the first time, but I'll give you just one more chance. if you fail to neutralize him again, I'll have to find another way to take him out of the picture. as weak and fragile as he might be, he is a big threat to my plans"

>as the lady vanishes, the scorpion girl is left to rethink her strategy

<"he will not escape me again.

>>401721

Your greentext is not the worst but not the best. Capitalize the beginning of your sentences, it hurts to look at. If you want you check for typos just copy and paste your text into a word processor. And as another anon mentioned please put your text into a pastebin.

>>401741

when I came across other greentext stories, some had capitals at the beginning of sentences, some didn't, so I didn't really know what to go for. Now I know. Also, is greentexting in pastebin acceptable? If not, I'm probably gonna need to reorganize the story and shit.

>>401700

>>401703

https://pastebin.com/iCdNH80T

This was one of my favorites so I had it saved. If some else has included it in an archive let me know and I'll remove it. This story is far too good to be lost.

>>401787

Thank you so much.

>>401551

>>401787

>>401703

>>401798

While we're on the topic of preserving Sacrifice's work, I found a few stories of their's that I saved and uploaded in case anyone can't find them.

https://pastebin.com/GUBjx22z

https://pastebin.com/KxSXunWB

>>401787

This was my favorite story of his, thank you for saving it.

Are there any good de-dykeing stories around? I don't remember anything from other threads and TFT is too full of plebbit users to ever have anything like that.

>>401810

>good de-dykeing

Interesting idea. I've never really thought about this. What kind of elements do you think a story like that would/should/could have? Themes? Characters? Monsters? inb4 /cuckquean/ total normal /monster/ anon shows up with the obvious

>>401805

>>401798

Happy to help! I encourage you all to make copies of your favorites in the future.

>>401743

It's a cute, not grim-dark story that is fairly well-written, and makes me hope that the characters end up happy. It's the kind of MG content I wish we got more of.

>>401787

thank god someone saved it. I loved this story.

Has anyone made a compendium of /monster/ approved stories?

>>401820

How do stories qualify as /monster/ approved exactly?

>>401820

There’s the writefag list if you go to the sticky thread.

>>401415

Holy dear fuck I remember reading these.

They are funny as hell, but what a fucking psychopath. Jesus.

>>401811

Well of course your standard radfem political lesbian getting changed, but that's obvious. What I think would be interesting is a story set where monsterization is a very slow process. The story would center on the main character monsterizing just as she gets out of a relationship. As she begins dating again she starts to feel a pull towards wanting to date men. She doesn't want to because a part if her identity is still wrapped up in being a lesbian. Then she meets a succ she genuinely likes, but doesn't have as much desire for as she does for a man. Then, she confides this in the succ. The succ would then explain that she's monsterizing and that what she is feeling is normal. The succ would then offer to speed up the process through a sexual encounter thus giving our MC her final experience as a lesbian and fully transitioning her to her monsterdom. Then our MC would begin dating as a monster and end up dating a guy she originally turned down as a lesbian. Then hijinks would ensue of course

>>401832

Now that I'm thinking about it, another good one would be an unwilling wife coming to love her husband. Were talking a wife acquired through less than consenting means (mail-order, conquest, royal marriage securing allyship) who is really a lesbian. As she monsterizes she begins to see her husband for who he really is, as prior to this she would be resentful of him and think he could do no good. As she monsterizes she realizes he was trying to do as much right by her as he could in an attempt to get her to love him and just all around trying to be a good husband. Her next challenge would be to get through to her husband whom she now loves. Her husband would be cynical and jaded towards her, having accepted that she did not and would not love him, and has accepted his loss and moved on

>>401812

This is great, Anon, keep it up.

>>401800

thank you so much anon

>>401822

If they don't have anything we disapprove of. Cuckshit, furshit, sluts, monsterboys, faggotry, leftism, grimderp, scat/piss/farts, vore, and gore are all forbidden.

>>401978

>leftism

>Still thinks either boot of the ZOG machine is preferable to the other.

Ammit expects better of you Anon.

>>399935

>thing

you have my attention.

also ignore the other retards. 8ch is for the turbo speds that not even halfchan will cater to.

>>402027

Leftism is the end goal. Neocons are controlled opposition and doomed to failure.

>>401812

Don't stop now, anon!

>>402146

That anon is shitposting in the society thread, because that's where his autism started. As an aside, the ushi's samurai themed armour was an interesting touch I liked.

>>402526

To make up for it, I'll be compiling all of it into a pastebin for future storage.

>>402855

That opening was gloriously chunni.

originally posted this in the greentext thread, but then i thought it would do better if a better writefag got ahold of this

https://8ch.net/monster/res/378675.html#q402865

>>402855

>spoiler

Damn that sucks, i hope it’s getting better anon. How did it happen though?

your story is still great btw, i actually like highly direct narration because i’m really fucking autistic, meaning your writing style fits me like a glove.

>>400989

lets hope holstaur-chan is gentle with them

>>402855

How old is Maxine?, the chunny face its around 14/17. Maybe she's bit autistic. Also she's still living with her parents, but who know how rich people acted in you setting

>>402934

>>402871

Maxine is supposed to be late teens early 20s, for reference, her sister is 25-27 and Svetlana is mid 20's.

She's just supposed to be a childish shut-in and a little crazy with romanticized ideas of what her future should be.

I apologize that I have not done a very good job with her characterization.

All's Fair in Love and War rewrite, chapter 4. 2.6k words.

https://pastebin.com/C5xE0c8N

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OrLom3dv8crDkEjMRcCQ5qbWZKDCW6Kp6S58tWgEB80/edit?usp=sharing

>>402974

Well done!

>>402974

You got me. Fucking good writeanon.

>>402974

>the 14th most notorious outlaw in the West

>not the 3rd happiest man in connecticut

You tried, anon.

>>402994

>3rd happiest

Who are the other two?

>>401814

Hope you don't mind but I've copied your copy to my own pastebin.

>>402995

the dad of the 3rd happiest and the 1st is the dad of the second

>>401833

That would be heartwarming

>>401849

The heck is wrong with her tail

>>403004

I think it's a stinger. Like the ones scorpions have. I don't think I've seen a succ with one before but I don't really mind the autistic liberties taken with the picture. I admit it kind of makes me uncomfortable but I guess that's just a fear boner.

>>403084

She has a childhood friend who's smitten with her, but she's too dense to notice. So she'll go crying to him, and he'll comfort etc, but doesn't want to help too much because then she might get someone else. probably not what you were going for, but it makes me laugh.

I also have an outline for a continuation of that mindflayer shitposting story, but no time to actually write it. If you want that I'll post it.

>>403032

Is she offering him the latest and most advanced graphics card on the market? Damn girl, ya got "assets" if ya catch my meaning. Most any dude would just let you come on in on that alone!

She must really be committed to getting him to ask her to marry her. Which, again, is a thing most would do based on her looks alone with a bit of a prompt. Dudes really gotta stop falling for girls on just looks and forgiving bad personality traits because "she's hot". That girl, however, is true waifu material (amazing looks and a great personality) and if that guy doesn't realize that than he's going to Alp because he's gotta be that gay.

>>403084

I'd read that. I'd say it's a thing that developed though. See, she didn't used to be afraid, but after a long streak of screwing it up somehow one develops those issues.

>>403117

We cure cancer here.

>>403123

Plot twist, it's a demon GPU and turns the guy's rig into a robowaifu before anything happens between him and grapesnek.

>"Why is she here? Don't you wanna play vidya with me master~?"

<"Maou dammit! That wasn't supposed to happen!"

[Anon sweating intensifies]

>>403173

Nope, it's this

>>402314

>>403328

Top shelf bro, keep going!

>>403328

I feel like I'm missing some context for the fight between Maxine and Svetlana. It was just about Maxine snapping at Svetlana because she was frustrated about her mother setting her up on a date with Oscar, right? I'm not sure why Maxine would mention "hurting those around her to get what she wants" when apologizing. I don't recall her ever trying to coerce Svetlana or anyone else into doing anything. I'm also not sure what Svetlana means when she says Maxine was "keeping her promises" by apologizing.

>>403397

Svetlana was upset because Maxine snapped at her because of things unrelated to Svetlana such as the poor date with Oscar putting her on edge. Maxine's apology was supposed to come off as half assed as well adding further gas to the flame.

The promise was made previously to Svetlana when they were younger and it was pertaining to Max not wanting to be like her mother as a cutthroat business woman, which admittedly i should have shown.

Apologies for my poor execution on this, I've been trying to do new things with my writing here and I feel it has, unfortunately fallen flat in some areas.

I'll do some rewrites on part four to better reflect the intention.

>>403400

I did some quick edits and added a bit more at the beginning and during Maxine's conversation with her mother.

If there are any other issues in any of the parts let me know and I'll try to fix it.

https://pastebin.com/Vs0xphCv

https://pastebin.com/QZghdkTJ

https://pastebin.com/jFiaTXe1

https://pastebin.com/CQcacG3T

https://pastebin.com/S25H9zim

https://pastebin.com/7XjwGtFx

https://pastebin.com/kCYgmeRC

https://pastebin.com/CjrtaCyA

https://pastebin.com/drE53i5J

https://pastebin.com/PSczNpnA

https://pastebin.com/7bVgsNzr

https://pastebin.com/TQAUuk2T

https://pastebin.com/M1uCq1ni

https://pastebin.com/04dLzD89

Some stories I manage to save from a deleted Pastebin

>>403520

Silent_II's stuff, huh. I have a GDrive link to the pdfs, as well as some other stories of his. https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BzL7aw4ZKvmNaEIxSWFkblpHbUE

>>403549

Thanks for saving what I couldn't

>>403549

Hey camran, thanks again for the archive, came in handy I don't know how many times by now

Not sure if anyone's taking requests, but I had a story idea

Radfem turns into kikimora. Still thinks all men are rapists. She gets a master who just thinks she's a maid and nothing more. She gets more and more infuriated as he continues to not ever rape her or even sexually harrass her. Hijinks ensue.

>>403554

>>403607

Should I have said this, but the Gdrive isn't mine, it's SPARTAN-047, on the mge wiki. Sorry for implying that it's mine

>>403705

Fucked up the sage, goddammit

https://pastebin.com/543LsDFD

https://pastebin.com/kQu5RkwB

https://pastebin.com/TeAbmr89

https://pastebin.com/HCMvZF5P

https://pastebin.com/g7i0YEVx

https://pastebin.com/f5vRf3hz

https://pastebin.com/VudDTW7G

https://pastebin.com/EYNuRhZ0

Some more of my saved stories.

>>403767

>someone actually saved my dragon greentext

Neato

>>403889

Lose, is that Viccy or her daughteru?

Anybody recall some story about a teenage thief/rogue getting stuck in a trap pit with a mimic girl while escaping a dungeon? I think the name was something like “Best Haul Ever!”, but I can’t find it among the writefaggotry list.

>>404051

https://pastebin.com/0rBBjmWu

I think this is it.

Currently writing a greentext about a shortstacked gremlin enticing anon with computer upgrades. Now I need to figure out the sex scene, if at all. Either way, it's a very elaborate way for me to say, "I like boobs".

>>404035

That's Viccy

>>404109

Yo, Lose, I'm really happy for you, I'mma let you finish, but the hat is one of the best characters of all time!

>>404147

What about incel?

>>404144

oh god that level of projection lol

>>404154

I'm enjoying it. I'm hype to see what happens.

I like the premise/different perspective, and you're doing a good job with it. I've read a bunch of stories that have an interesting premise, but poor execution.

Good job.

>>404154

>end of act one

You have even more? Dear ammit.

The story so far is great fun, although i am hoping maxine and her mother get closure in the future

>>404232

Also, I loved the cute "explanation" for monster girl art in part four, around line 30. Maybe, just maybe, fiction is based on fact and are waifus really are sending us cute art

>>404286

Please do, it sounds like a fun idea

>>404286

>Writer of that greentext here. Funny that one should be brought up since it was intended to be a side story while I tried writing out a greentxt about some geekdom/anime convention full of incels, feminazis, and the like when DotR happens. I forgot to complete it after being consumed with that greentext and life stuff. I guess I should expand and complete now that there's

Yes please.

>be anon

>and be the one with a injury that evaded capture

>and also, unfortunately, evaded exfil

>Thankfully you've spent the time around the motor pools sabotaging the equipment

>Them MGs ain't gonna use uncle sam's vics against him

>But the Situation's changed

>They brought in Baph sweep teams to clear the area

>They operate with Cupid's to clear any area of wizards holding out

>F you goat grills, I'm holding out

>Suddenly get hit by arrow near the arm pit

CYTA BLYAT

>Right in between the armor plates

>The blow initially knocks the wind out of you, but you realize your mana bleed is inevitable

>Gotta move or else the MGs will find you

>FUCKINGCAMPERS.jpeg

>Manage to crawl away into the main area

>As I'm crawling I hear the door open again and a childish giggling

<"Onii chan, we can smell your mana, come on out, we promise to be gantle~"

>That gave you all energy to keep crawling

>Make it to the fabrication area, wonderful, lots of tables to hide unde-

>A hoofed food plants itself firmly on your back

<"Where do you think you're going, Onii-Chan?

>Fabrication area turned into fornication area

I swear I'm not into Baphs

>>404337

But MC's certainly in a baph

There are so many different spiders that do neat things but I never see them in arachne form.

Here is an adea for one. Trap door spider arachne trying to live with her husband or find one. Or an anons life with a trap door spider arachne family.

Or the tale of two arachne girls splitting rent through collage but are having trouble living with eachother as one is a trapdoor spider and the other is an orbweaver.

>>404352

Repla e the trap door spider in the first two ideas with a tower spider.

I cant imagine how a tower spider girl can live in a normal house.

>>404337

There's never one of them

They all just mercilesly come at up

>>404352

Trapdoor daughters would be… interesting to live with.

>>404360

I swear

It wasn't until these monsters

you want me to Baph don-you

Fusing hell Oii chans can't rest

>>404162

My pleasure, and happy birthday!

Is TFT dead? I'm relatively new to the reading of MG stories, so apologies for the newfag question.

>>404411

TFT is a place for faggots, lurk more before you get the idea we like their content aside from the recent arrivals of 4cuck

>>404423

Oh no! I'v been found out!

Quick, back to the cuck-mobile!

>>404411

What it is is a cancerous place full degeneracy which constitutes of but is not limited to: furry, yuri, futa, NTR, scat, and much more. That's not even mentioning the amount of garbage writing, half finished stories, and other tiers of cancer

>>404630

How the fuck does that even work? I'm not sure I even want to check

>>404630

>/mg/ is not a secret club. Feel free to tell people in communities other than a chan about us

they might take some of the flak form us

>Monster Boys and Traps go to >>>/chaos/

>Yes, Furry, Futa, and Yuri are allowed.

this is some Olympic tier mental gymnastic

Rolled 4 (1d100)

Suddenly got the urge to write again, so I'm deciding to do a request of sorts.

Pick a girl and some sort of position/scenario you'd like me to write a (short) smut story out of (ie the MC and his waifu making love in the missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation and bonding between two consenting adults while they hold hands in the dark the night after their wedding ceremony; the MC and his waifu trying out a position they've never done before/doing roleplay; a generic sex scene between the MC and his waifu, but it's a scene/girl that's criminally underrepresented; etc. etc.).

First post that rolls higher than me on 1d100 (or in the event I roll a 100; first one to match me OR highest roll after 10, whichever happens first) gets picked.

No idea when I'll get started on the story, or when I'll finish it because I have no idea how long my urge/motivation will last, but I'll at least try to get it done in a reasonable timeframe.

>>405413

>roll a 4

well then

Rolled 8 (1d100)

>>405413

>Pick a girl

A tyrannosaurus monster girl

>Position/scenario

Anon is working as a nightguard at a large history museum. Some creepy Night at the Museum shit starts to occur after DE starts to accumulate in the museum somehow, and anon must find a way out with his virginity intact. Unfortunately, one of the exhibits that got monsterized was the dinosaur exhibit, and the t-rex is hungry…

>>405417

>t-rex girl proactively dating anon

well, time to make a not-T-rex na Kanojo (short) story

i'm totally gonna have the t-rex girl have THICC everything

>>405424

>THICC T-rex girl

Fate rides with you anon, I believe in you

https://8ch.net/monster/res/317706.html#321888

Does anybody remember this story, " The Mistress Of Eternal Night"? The writefag seems to have nuked his pastebin. What happened? He had some great stuff.

>>405424

Well, that's something to definitely look forward to.

<"Anon?"

<"Anooooon?"

>A voice called from the dark below as inky black tendrils reached up.

<"Anon please, can you hear me?"

>The voice almost dripping with fear and shaky as hell cried out again as the tendrils reached further and further up the well you always stared into.

>in a few scant moments the tip of the one closest to you would finally come up to the edge of the well and the dream would be over and you would wake up, just like yesterday and the day before yesterday and the day before that and you just needed to wa-

<"ANOOOON! PLEASE! LOOK AT ME!"

>a thousand yellow eyes stare up at you from the well, the feminine voice turned screech wails at you as the tendrils grip the rim of well and pull up sending new cracks down the side and the inky blackness moves up. \

>the eyes move towards you as more and more tendrils shove themselves out of their brick and mortar prison grasping towards you and the moonlight and

>its just a dream, your alarm clock blares out the time of just 10 before six and the idea that work is in an hour kills a piece of you yet again.

>clothes shoes and the essentials in your messenger pack get thrown in before a run down out of your shitty apartment into a metro into a stop three to be exact then a brisk walk down a shitty street full of beggars and assholes to your hellhole of a job, the worst to be exact.

>you work as an IT drone doing fuck all while your buds you went to college with are busy making fucking STRIDES in some advanced portal tech, the absolute assholes.

>your proud of them sure but sitting in a office while your shitty roommate who couldn't figure out a calculator at one point goes makes 7 digits just doesn't sit right at all.

>3 floors down and your modified office with a comfy ass chair you "borrowed" from some higher ups and all the screens a man could need is right there.

>now its just time to kill about 8 hours or until somebody downloads a virus again

sorry if this is shit but if you guys want me to continue i can, first ttime for actually posting some of my writting

>>405502

>writes two paragraphs

>"sh-should I continue guys?"

write the story or don't, I'm not going to praise you for a fucking prologue.

>>405553

If you're looking for something a bit different, go with Churio's set up. It might not be the most popular configuration as far as genitals go, but like you said; it'll at least make it stand out a bit.