/monster/ - The Last Bastion of Romance★

>Weight: Secret

I fucking hate this, practically every single character reference that mentions weight does it solely so they can go "teehee, I'm not telling you that silly boy"

>>390626

>no download

It's only just started development dumbass.

>>390623

I don't think weight is a helpful stat with mge Girls, a snek tail and a shelob booty are going to weigh more than human legs. Plus, if the too big or small for your liking, your dick will fix that when she rapes you.

>101

That part of the title alone already creates suspicion of it being garbage.

I hope for him that he has KC's permission to do anything like this otherwise it probably won't get far either way

Is there any content at this time. Also to speak for myself but it's kind of hard for me to commit to something like this after what happened the last time without some sort of guarantee.

>>390631

I think it's just because it's taking at college

>>390632

Yeah that can be a problem can probably just change the basic designs and species names it can be alright?

>>390618 (OP)

Sounds fun to be in a college for once instead of just a high school wish more date sims did this.

Looks like the ushi-oni has no tag. This probably won’t turn out well, so I’m not gonna hold my breath. All I can say is good luck.

Does the creator here have any other works to compare this with?

>>390638

>change species names

I don’t think that would be necessary, I doubt KC owns the rights to mythological creatures.

>>390627

So what? If you expect me to give you money you better have something to show me that proves you at least seem capable of delivering what you advertised and have a solid plan.

All these half assed "I have an idea and two concept photos" type patreons and kickstarter campaigns are fucking cancer.

He does specify that the patreon is mostly a tip jar for all the other content he produces and not for a specific project which is perfectly fine but you shouldn't pump cash into a crowd funding project with this little information and expect any returns.

>>390627

Then why are you shilling a never ever monetized idea?

I think this is just an announcement that this exists, even if it's just barely started. Since the patreon is just for donations, let's just give it time and see what happens.

>>390618 (OP)

>western vn

it will have trannies and monster boys

>>390640

>Does the creator here have any other works to compare this with?

He's running a quest called Azur Lane: Siren's Song on fiction.live. Haven't read it though so I don't know if it's any good.

>>390618 (OP)

That ushi-oni design is a fucking war crime.

Yeah, this is going to be a trash fire if it even gets finished and not used to fish for jewtreon shekels.

Besides, pretty much every western vn is made by a sjw, tranny, fag, or other associated degenerate or pozzed "artist".

>tfw no vn made by autists here

There better be Jinko femdom and abs licking or Im not buying this.

>>390648

>>tfw no vn made by autists here

What ever happened to the /monster/ VN?

It was going full force at first, but then it just died out eventually.

>Patreon monster girl game

If it's good, I'll buy it when it's out, but I'm not going through another MGI.

>>390618 (OP)

switch to subscibestar or another payment service. I don't fund patreon.

>>390659

>funding an unfinished game

Have these years of early access kusoge, patreon lies and pandering to degenerates taught you nothing?

>Patreon

Fuck off

>not even a proof of concept/demo

Yeah, come back when there is one.

>>390618 (OP)

I mean I'm obviously 1000% into the idea but he's gunna need better girls for me to be interested.

>>390661

>>390664

Kinkymation is fine, they drew that glacies pat pic for me. Not certain how backgrounds and everything will play out but I guess we'll see?

I think the patreon was also launched now because patreon is changing how much they charge in a month unless you already have a patreon.

Isn't ELH from 4chan /mgg/?

>Q: How many routes are there?

>A: Each of the two main girls (seen above) has their own unique route with several branching points.

So there's two. Just say two.

Also why a computer science major? Is it because it's what you are familiar with? That's a little sad if you can't write characters outside your own peripheral vision. It's also a little weird if the game itself isn't based around the monster girls as opposed to being a college dating sim with human girls replaced by monster girls. I've noticed this being a problem for most fledgling writers, since it's writing what you're most familiar/comfortable with; however, the point of a monster girl game is the monster girls, not the difficulties of college life.

Paying for development out of the pocket is a good idea, but don't expect the artist to stick around if the patreon gravy train isn't going to help them. You're setting yourself up for fail if you do.

>>390687

He was disowned by them or got tired of them or whatever and doesn't visit any board beyond like, 4chan /tg/.

>>390692

Dude's loaded, paying the artist will not be a problem. I dunno about anything else tho.

>>390687

He is/was. This is the same project he's been working on with a revolving door of writers since 2015 or so. At least he's dedicated to the one idea, I guess.

>>390687

Last I saw he shut down his monstergirl blog/repository specifically because /mgg/ was a burning trashheap that kept giving him shit for reasons unrelated to said blog. Shame though, it was a nice thing.

>>390679

Maybe it's actually just a ploy for them to find a nice, young husband with a career ahead of him in which case they should be at a trade school

>>390679

there are christian girls who go to college to find a husband. Not joking. They might be doing he same. Also we don't know what kind of degrees there are. Maybe they're better than ours

I don't see the problem with the designs. but I won't be giving money without a video showing gameplay

>>390708

>just a ploy for them to find a nice, young husband with a career ahead of him

Would wurms try to catch electricians due to their fathers telling them to marry "a boy with a bright future"?

>>390655

Because VN collabs nearly always turn out to be trash fires, especially when you're dealing with people on different schedules in different time zones with no experienced project management and no way to hold cunts to a deadline even if there. Just look at the dev history of KS.

>>390679

Where else would you go when trying to find a large number of young educated single men all in one place and just a dorm room door away?

There's no place better than college to meet tons of new people. I don't see why young manamo wouldn't take advantage of that.

As long as they understand that it's better for a girl to be a virgin than not to be one. Seriously, all western VNs are pretty much trash for this one simple reason.

>>390655

Which one do you mean? I think there was more then one at some point.

>>390687

see >>390705

>>390731

The last one unless another attempt was made in this short period of time with the five brothers thing.

>>390730

All western society needs to realize this. Or remember it i mean

>>390736

>the five brothers thing

Honestly I'm not 100% sure what happened to that one and I was working on it. If you're interested I was the drawfag. I can at least tell you what happened on my end. We were using a git, I think, to organize and communicate. Everything seemed to be going well enough for unpaid work some autists were doing in their free time and just one day I wasn't able to log into it anymore and I have no idea why. I don't know if everyone else was having the same problem or not. There was a little activity in the thread after, but everything just sort of seemed to stop soon after.

>>390694

>>390703

>>390705

>>390734

I stopped following /mgg/ drama long before the 2014 exodus. If they don't like him then he can't be all bad.

>>390628

At the very least do something creative with it. Have the Ushi's weight be listed as something like "enough to smash you into the ground" to play off her personality. Maybe have the Bunyip insist on only having her human half weighed because she's worried her 'true' weight will be offputting, so the chart lists it as an approximate.

>>390687

The dude has been writing monstergirl fiction for a while.

He may not be a top tier writefag, but he has always been enjoyable.

I have yet to see any heresy in his writings.

>>390646

Here is his pastebin:

https://pastebin.com/u/ELH

>>390692

"Write what you know." -Mark Twain

I think only 2 heroines means ELH has realistic expectations for what a pair of autists can accomplish by themselves.

>>390648

ELH seems autistic as they come, for years he waged a hopeless battle with writefags to force them to tag stories, and got b&.

>>390714

The art may not be as good as your best works blanks, but at least they can stick to one screenname for longer than a month.

>>390763

>but at least they can stick to one screenname for longer than a month

To be fair I used that name for about 6 months before I nuked the account. No regrets. And the name I'm going under now I've had for about 7 months, I think.

>>390763

>I think only 2 heroines means ELH has realistic expectations for what a pair of autists can accomplish by themselves.

Wish you the best with your realistic endeavor, hope you don't get bored writing about a relationship between a college couple studying computer science and chemical engineering, but the chemical engineer is actually a spider woman from Kenkou Cross's Monster Girl Encyclopedia.

I'm sure it'll be a hit on Touch Fluffy Tails.

>>390857

>PSA on racism

On a side note to that, how come the ushi is brown while the bunyip is hwite?

If memory serves me right, ELH was also impersonated a lot back in /mgg/, related to the reason why there's so much beef and drama

>>390845

what a hot take, but there is no content other than japanese sea spider and abbo gas fume cryptid.

>>390883

>>390902

>A spider monster who wants to make a cure for humans so they don't become spider monsters, but also is a tomboy and horny

You don't need to steal Kenkou Cross's design-work for this, just make an original spider monster woman. Unless you're trying to bank off his intellectual property, shame on you if that's your intent.

>cow spider MG

>furry snek MG

>college dating

>MGE inspired

Hard pass on this one.

>>390908

So I wasn't the only one urked by the hair? Sick.

>>390907

>>390908

If he's going to the point of taking Zipangu and the bloodmorph, it's definitely more than MGE "inspired".

>>390911

checked

Everyone likes a shitshow, johnny

>>390640

>>390638

>>390845

to avoid copyright issues you should probably say that your designs are inspired by MGE not taken from

>>390632

Report this garbage to KC.

>>390910

The term Zipangu for a Japan like country has been used in more than just MGE though, long before MGE even.

>>390915

>>390910

>>390907

To be fair, Japan works differently. Often forming 'circles'. If you approached KC and told him your intent, and it doesn't fuck with the themes in his work, he'd probably give it the go ahead if he thinks it would improve the 'brand' that he has created. But if you go ahead without contacting him beforehand, you are likely going to be in for a world of hurt.

>>390918

its like albion for britain, or middle kingdom for china. Its the archaic term they used to refer to it

I think you guys are too hard on him. I don't blame people for shilling content that they think I would like. I'm not giving anything, because I don't see this as a good investment at the moment, but I think ya'll are being a little harsh

>>390967

I'm not the guy. I just have a different opinion than you

>>390927

He just came here to ask for money for a project he hasn't even started. Not to show us his game, not to get ideas, just the money.

He's a top kike, I'll be surprised it he doest shove degenerate shit for money halfway in.

>>390990

lad it says right there that the guy's self-funded and the game will be free, the patreon is for donations

>>390997

Until there is something that at least shows progress there is zero reason to give him money

>>390997

>>390981

Listen, everyones skeptical about paetron stuff, including if theres no current progress. just calm down, and come back in a few days when you have shit to showoff and you might get a better reaction. instead of blatantly asking for donations.

>>390998

>>390999

im not paying for it one way or another so whatever. just wanted to point that out

>>391012

When you already have the assets to the models you can stitch together a demo for a VN in a day, the minimum required instead of this is a pastebin with the beginning chapters in script form.

This fag paid some retard in devianart to draw him 20 pictues so he could live off some retards through patreon just like the manlet that is YandereDev does

>>391055

>When you already have the assets to the models you can stitch together a demo for a VN in a day

This was done here once before as well, except the art was even worse. >>386417 It was met with even harsher criticism. However, even that guy managed to shovel something semi-playable and legible, the creator of Monster Girl 101 didn't even have the energy to make a demo, merely skip to the chase and ask for money outright.

Another issue that stems from the fact that he's accepting alms for doing nothing, is his claim of self-financing his project with the intention of releasing the game, free of charge. The moment the donations enter the picture, the funds are added to living expenses attributed to development/actual asset creation. It's no longer funding out-of-pocket, it's funding out of several pockets.

When you remove feedback or criticism from the equation, donations appeal to only the most fatuous. That is not to say there isn't a market for idiots, clearly yandere simulator is still popular for a reason, but marketing your idiot market here insults the intelligence of every anon that uses this chan.

>>391057

Well, it's not like ELH actually came here to post until he was getting dabbed on by bromont. The artist is fine too.

Still, slapping it up on what appears to be an already existing patreon is silly. I don't have much faith it's going to happen.

>>390907

How much does a ushi-oni bleed in the first place for that even to be a problem

>>390721

>girls who go to college to find a husband

I feel both contempt and amusement in equal portions. What is the name of this emotion?

>>391092

Conmusement?

>>391095

Wait trying to slay ushi-onis can't be common in the game's timeline if one was accepted into college. Probably ushi-oni blood would be useful in medical research or just for a blood bank if they regenerate instantly.

>>391084

A couple of days a month :^)

>>391100

The whole Ushi-Oni blood thing that turns human women into Ushi-Oni was something specifically Kenkou Cross made up.

There really isn't the excuse of saying it's 'influenced by MGE' when both it's design and background information are just straight up ripped out of the encyclopedia. It's just lazy writing on ELH's part. Very low energy.

Monster girls dont menstruate though. It is actually a very rare thing in the animal kingdom. they do not go through menopause either, so they never age beyond MILF or christmas cake

>>391094

Contusement maybe.

>>391100

>Wait trying to slay ushi-onis can't be common in the game's timeline if one was accepted into college.

From the way students have behaved in US campuses within the last year or three, I'd say universities are filled with some of the most homicidal clowns society has to offer. Put the college in a metro area and it's completely believable.

>>391066

>'s not like ELH actually came here to post until he was getting dabbed on by bromont

Bromont just threw some valid criticism his way and the guy sperged out instantly. Most likely he IP hopped to pretend he wasn't the one shilling his game.

>>391092

>contempt and amusement

Why? I'd understand if it was either one or the other, but both simultaneously confuse me.

>>391104

Yeah, because most mammals reabsorb the lining along the uterus when failing to get pregnant instead of shed it off painfully and then discharge it.

>>391110

Anon, you're not taking into account the influence the danuki and other (((merchants))) would have on the poor impressionable minds. Without banning them outright, it would eventually end up to a similar manner the way things are now. The danuki would simply play the system in their favor, leading and brainwashing conservative monster girls into promiscuity as a means of securing their own lineage. Monster girls are, unfortunately, still ruled by their emotions and instincts, and thus susceptible to such tricks.

>>391116

Kinda just proving my point, anon. Monster girls can't function in an environment with human boys, they'll immediately try to rape one into a husband. If they try their best to behave, the danuki will simply poison their minds.

It's unfortunate, but the only foreseeable outcome of this matter is harems.

>>391119

>Monster girls can't function in an environment with human boys, they'll immediately try to rape one into a husband.

So? Monster girls canonically settle down once they have a husband. Your assertion that they would ride the cock carousel like 3DPD is totally unfounded.

Danukis are antikikes, anon. They play the game, but they want monster girls and men to be happy instead of pursue world domination.

>>391120

You misread my meaning, I'll rephrase it and say they will be coaxed into acting/dressing more promiscuous and horny, as it coincides with their instincts and danuki brainwashing, not actually having sexual relations with multiple partners. They will look and act slutty, despite being monogamous, as a means to attract a male. As lower lifeforms are attracted to that behavior, the Danuki and other (((merchants))) will swoop in and bag the desireables.

This is basic merchant strats 101. Also sage when you're not bumping a thread with something meaningful.

>>391121

>saying that like it isnt part of world domination

don't blame you though people always forget that part

>>391122

>dress more provocatively

Not possible, look at them now. Monster girls, through MGE as it is the basis of the whole thread, are biologically primed not to act like 3dpd. At all. You would have to go maximize contrarian and head canon to claim otherwise and here we tell those faggot to kill themself.

>>391112

>Why?

Contempt thanks to inevitable 3DPD behavior enabled by society or religion. Amusement because their efforts these days will land them in a giant field of soy and soy in disguise. When I think about one I can't help but remember the other, so that's why both.

>>391125

Well, this is in relation to the thread's topic, which is a contrarian head canon masquerading as a patreon cash grab. You might not like it, but please remember the six million danuki, and how all other tragedies pale in comparison.

>>390907

lmao shut up fag nobody cares

>>391142

>lmao shut up fag nobody cares

Well, you're right. A nobody wouldn't care, in fact, I'm quoting one right now.

>>391110

It really suck that everything in our society is so broken. Not a thing in our society works anymore

>>391150

Can I romance a danuki in this and settle down with her?

>>391155

For the love of god keep it in the same threads, the second you take shit out things start going to hell.

>>391155

>>391157

This.

Last project had people talk outside the thread too much, to the point where people don't even know why the project died.

>>391156

Five routes

>Unicorn who wants to be a nurse

<could use filings from grooming her horn to make mad bank on its magic healing properties but would rather start a small practice and help people instead

>Hobgoblin who is a complete ditz

<only manages to get in and keep barely afloat by sheer grit and desire to marry a good man

>Dragon ojou-sama

<needs to learn the lesson her mother did and that inheriting all that money is nothing compared to starting a family of her own

>Jinku on a sports scholarship for judo

<embarrassingly more into cooking and other assorted homemaking activities like sewing than doing sports

>danuki daughter of the dean

<knows what's actually happening, so takes it easy while doing get rich quick schemes and always mischievously flirting with MC

>>391161

Wouldn't it be best if we could actually date the dean herself rather than a daughter?

>>391161

>each girl gets 3 sex scenes per route, first scene locks you into that girl as it "marks" you, can still befriend other girls and help them

>With danuki you learn she has a big scheme going on

>Right before 2nd sex scene she tells you what it is, it's a long game involving you

>She reveals her she wants you in her life and wants you to "get invested" in it too

>You end up impregnating her and marrying her in the end

>Her 3rd sex scene is on your honeymoon night with her in a wedding dress, her last words to you before the two of you go at it is a tease at how you're the scheme she's ever pulled off

>>391683

You have to go back

>>390618 (OP)

Fuck off, ELH. Nobody likes you.

Wouldn't any Visual Novel that follows KC canon that actually gives the player realistic choices be incredibly boring though? If a manamo flirts with and is sexually explicit towards you doesn't that already mean she sees you as a marriage candidate? As soon as she shoots of her first awkward attempt at seduction you can just say yes. Boom happy end. Roll credits. There's no real tention and fucking up is incredibly difficult if you don't actively try to.

>>392182

Originality is hard. It's easier just to take an established setting with established designs and doctor it in a manner that suits your writing style. Plus, you're more likely to make money off an established property; as people latch onto brand recognition with relative ease.

>>392182

Not necessarily, take MGE for example. The objective is not to bang a chick, but rather to save the world AND bang the right chick.

Making the objective either already be fulfilled or be easily fulfilled is boring, but that's implying the one and only objective of the story is "bang the first chick you see". You can make some fun shit with it if you don't go down that road, CYOAs are proof of that.

>>390618 (OP)

>ushi-oni has non-green skin

>instead they have brown skin

>green skin is their only canon skin color

get the fuck out of here you tumblrette kike

>>397082

>>green skin is their only canon skin color

That's wrong though. Also, stop bumping your own thread.

>>397087

Sauce?

>>397087

Absolutely subversive. Elves are the lowest tier of monster. Literally humans with pointed ears. You keebler fuckers are as bad as 3dpd lovers.

>>397204

problem is MGE is interviewing ONE of the monsters from each species to get a general idea of the race as a whole. We can obviously surmise from this that there might be different ushi-onoi or MGs with varying skin colors based on region and genetic heritage.

So yes, there is a good chance of delicious brown cow demon spiders

>>397205

>problem is MGE is interviewing ONE of the monsters from each species to get a general idea of the race as a whole.

<They possess the upper body of a woman with green skin

<They possess

<They

You're fucking dumb if you think he's only referring to the girl in the profile picture.

>>397206

Also keep in mind the wandering scholar hasn’t seen the entire world yet, there are still new types of MGs being written. If you only ever travelled around Africa you’d assume all humans were black and fucking backward savages would you not?

>>397231

If it were possible for Ushi-onis to have skin colors other than green, then KC would've said so already.

>>397232

>hurrr muh KCanon

>>397239

>adhering to MGE canon when discussing MGE monsters is bad

OK faggot.

It's canon that mamono mana can alter the appearance of both husband and wife drastically to fit the taste of their partner. Therefore recolored versions of monsters are entirely possible.

>>397293

>It's canon that mamono mana can alter the appearance of both husband and wife drastically to fit the taste of their partner.

Pretty sure that only applies to general body type, not things like hair or skin color. Stop trying to force your Reddit/cuckchan meme.

<why is this on the first page again?

>anons are shitposting about MGE canon

>>397330

There's immutable traits and ones which can change in the short term. I could imagine a baphomet dropping the loli act, a bit, for a time, but she would much rather you love her in her true form and will work toward that end. Love is a process after-all. A journey not a destination.

>>397315

Yeah… Citation needed. From what I recall the physical alterations are mostly of sexual nature, I don't recall any of them changing the husband's height

>>397330

dear god i can picture a blue eyed blonde elf girl in black face.

>>397354

We need a drawfag to do this

>>397330

>can I have a DARK elf turn her skin LIGHT-colored?

>sure, but it's only temporary, and she'd rather make you love her natural skin color

I feel like this is a backhanded way of telling the questioner "you're a fucking idiot".

>>397206

They can be singular you fucking retard. "They" as in "the person in front of me" or "That person over there".

"They possess" can be inferred to be the ushi-oni that is the subject of the entry.

>>397204

Gotta agree it's bait, but you also have to remember KC has said you can handwave shit and thats where the problem is I think, people are actively substituting headcanon for KC canon in discussion without citing their own head canon (which is autistic, but then again look where we are).

>>397380

>They can be singular you fucking retard. "They" as in "the person in front of me" or "That person over there".

It's a profile for a fucking SPECIES , not a SINGLE CHARACTER.

>>397389

its a profile for the species based off an interview with ONE of the creatures from each species.

>>397391

>he mentioned the green skin because he thinks all members of the species have green skin

or

>he felt the need to mention his interviewee's skin color even though you can clearly see it in the profile pic

I think the Wandering Scholar has a serious case of autism.

>>397769

The longer I look at the 'original content do not steal' spider woman, the more questions I seem to ask. Basic questions, like why is her thumb on the other side of her hand. What exactly is wrong with her horns; one being fatter than the other and not shaped the same at all? Why is her face tag clipping through her side-hair? For that matter, what shape is her head, the tag doesn't contort so her jawline is just that massively wide? The shading should also be neutral, not side-based; I bring that up because you can see the light shining through the windows on one side (which also no doubt masks the poorly traced over background in brightness and bloom as evidence by the second image) and her shadow is on the same direction of where the light source is shining. Could go further, but it'd be nitpicking minor problems that nobody here cares about.

(You might want to tell Kinky they can get rid of the jaggies by duplicating the lineart layer, then gaussian blurring the layer just a tiny amount. It's not a hard fix, takes maybe ten seconds, make the lines look less janky.)

Also, why don't you post the script you have so far? Maybe your story is really stellar, so we can overlook the patreon shilling and the meh artwork so far. It's a free game right, made from the goodness of your heart, so what does it matter if we read it now or later?

>>397776

I ain't ELH brah, I just saw the pics and posted them here because I was hoping for more chimping for shits and giggles.

However, this is probably good info for Kinkymation at the very least.

>>397205

The Wandering Scholar's travels take him deep into monster territory. Even if he only sits down to interview one girl from each species, he's bound to encounter multiple other examples of those species.

>>390623

I agree, it points to laziness of the creator and that instead of putting in the effort and knowledge to provide a ballpark esitmate they just go "Secret" like the meme of asking about women's weight.

>>397232

Except, the Ushi-Oni are native specifically to Zinpagu.

>>397391

The context was quite clear, you fucking mongoloid. It's describing the entire species.

You guys need to stop defending this tumblrette bullshit. Hell, the main reason I found the dark skin annoying was because of their dress style, art style, and glasses (I actually don't mind changing the skin color by too much, to clarify, so long as the setting isn't the mge world). It's clearly tumblrette style, and the recoloring of the skin just made it worse. Stop fucking defending this bullshit. Defenses like this are why tumblr can enter and destroy good things.