No.16314
https://pastebin.com/twkVs3r0
Anyone wanna give feedback on my creative writing?
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No.16319
>search url
>he posted it on cuckchan as well
wtf op, if you're so desperate for input you may as well post it on r*dd*t at this point.
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No.16323
>>16319
>Shill appears
>Posted their shit on cuckchan too.
Everytime.
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No.16364
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No.16365
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No.16373
>Yet they kissed, mouth to mouth. It was an innocuous thing to do, something young children did when they expressed their love. It wasn't sexual, it was a kiss of goodbye. Then Hank disappeared. He relived it in his mind. He felt it like a sailor would feel a burning typhoon. He stood up and walked straight forward. He let the waves kiss his ankles, shins, waist, stomach, and chest. He could taste the salt. He closed his eyes. While underwater Oscar opened his mouth and swallowed as much of the freezing water as he possibly could. It filled his lungs, and filled them even more, and he never went back. . . .
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No.16374
>>16373
Holy shit is this actually what the wrote?
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No.16375
It's literally a faggot's fanfiction
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No.16377
>>16375
The protagonist is gay
I'm straight
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No.16389
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No.16391
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No.16397
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No.16400
>>16397
Are you asking me why the protagonist is gay or why I am not?
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No.16405
>>16314
>gay fan-fiction with tween level prose and sub-par story
>posts a pen-name (or real name)
Oh shit nigga, what the fuck are you doing.
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No.16407
>>16405
It's just a story I never said it's Shakespeare
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