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Critique pls? Anonymous 06/12/19 (Wed) 06:32:36 No.16314

Anyone wanna give feedback on my creative writing?

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Anonymous 06/13/19 (Thu) 12:58:07 No.16319

>search url

>he posted it on cuckchan as well

wtf op, if you're so desperate for input you may as well post it on r*dd*t at this point.

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Anonymous 06/15/19 (Sat) 03:54:48 No.16323

>>16319

>Shill appears

>Posted their shit on cuckchan too.

Everytime.

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Anonymous 06/24/19 (Mon) 05:00:29 No.16364

>>16319

>>16323

So?

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Anonymous 06/24/19 (Mon) 12:07:46 No.16365

>>16364

Exactly.

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sage sage 06/25/19 (Tue) 15:43:14 No.16373

>Yet they kissed, mouth to mouth. It was an innocuous thing to do, something young children did when they expressed their love. It wasn't sexual, it was a kiss of goodbye. Then Hank disappeared. He relived it in his mind. He felt it like a sailor would feel a burning typhoon. He stood up and walked straight forward. He let the waves kiss his ankles, shins, waist, stomach, and chest. He could taste the salt. He closed his eyes. While underwater Oscar opened his mouth and swallowed as much of the freezing water as he possibly could. It filled his lungs, and filled them even more, and he never went back. . . .

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Anonymous 06/26/19 (Wed) 11:36:12 No.16374

>>16373

Holy shit is this actually what the wrote?

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Anonymous 06/26/19 (Wed) 11:41:58 No.16375

It's literally a faggot's fanfiction

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Anonymous 06/27/19 (Thu) 03:41:11 No.16377

>>16375

The protagonist is gay

I'm straight

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Anonymous 07/03/19 (Wed) 09:46:19 No.16389

>>16377

Why?

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Anonymous 07/05/19 (Fri) 05:34:15 No.16391

>>16389

Why what?

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Anonymous 07/11/19 (Thu) 07:09:23 No.16397

>>16391

see >>16377

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Anonymous 07/11/19 (Thu) 20:32:38 No.16400

>>16397

Are you asking me why the protagonist is gay or why I am not?

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Anonymous 07/13/19 (Sat) 20:37:05 No.16405

>>16314

>gay fan-fiction with tween level prose and sub-par story

>posts a pen-name (or real name)

Oh shit nigga, what the fuck are you doing.

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Anonymous 07/14/19 (Sun) 10:34:35 No.16407

>>16405

It's just a story I never said it's Shakespeare

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anonlalo 10/29/25 (Wed) 04:24:49 No.17847

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Massive Blue Archive Lore Project: “Legacy of Light and Shadow” (868 pages)

After months of work, I’ve finished Legacy of Light and Shadow, a full-scale lore expansion for Blue Archive:

– 34–35 new schools with full structures, clubs, and philosophies

– 70+ new students with stories, designs, and conflicts

– Dozens of events, side stories, and a hidden origin for Kivotos and the Halos

Please see in the “Description” of the video:

https://youtu.be/W4nSzqBJvoM?si=Go_zE_aHXKvBXs0q

This is a fan-written conceptual expansion, not official, but made to show what deep narrative design could look like in the BA world.

Index: KOR p.1 / JAP p.1082 / ENG p.2048 / SPA p.2902

Lore fans, writers, and worldbuilders—feedback is welcome.

Written with respect and admiration for the world of Blue Archive.

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