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Send over your best green texts or photos about deliquent monster girls
Also sorry for that accidental triple post
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21dbfe No.393597
>Inspired by the song "Six shooter"by coyote kisses
>Be anon, a lone wanderer rambling along the plains when you come upon the small town
>The townsfolk seem a bit spooked and don't dare make eye contact
>This might be the one
>Notice wanted posters hanging up everywhere
>Its of a bandit, an Echidna bandit, and by the looks of the poster, a particularly nasty one.
>Yep, its definitely the one
>Not exactly a US Marshall, but you hunted down bad guys for a price, still you detest the title bounty hunter
>There was a bandit in the area and the townsfolk had grown desperate.
>There she sat in the middle of the road
>Street howitzer slung across her back, two pistols at her side, arms crossed
>Its as if she was waiting for you
>You dismount and saunter on up towards her.
>You walked by her a step then stopped, both not looking at each other but both poised to strike
"Talk round here is that you'll be coming with me"
>She scoffed a bit
<Folk round here run their mouth kinda reckless tryin to get an outsider like you done in
>You adjusted your hat and tilted your head slightly
"Nobody's runnin' their mouth reckless, me haulin' your sorry hide in"
>Did she just smile
<Is that a fact?
"That's a fact"
>Now you did draw first and some might call it a cheap shot, but she had the same idea
>It was a clean miss and both of you went scurrying for cover blindly letting lead fly
>Reloading as quick as possible you try and double back towards your main pack where the lever action is
>That should give you the edge.
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21dbfe No.393598
>>393597
>The coast seemed clear and you made a break for it
>Then the shots came from the left and you made sure to keep low to the ground
>Bullets whizzing by, but lucky none finding their mark
>Grabbing the lever action you scan the street
>Some motion catches your eye, she's hiding a bit behind a building down the street
>Almost ducking out, as if not sure to peek the corner
>You line up the sights, ready and waiting.
>She makes a move but you rush the shot, the bullet slamming into the pistol in her right hand
>It goes flying and she drops low and high tails it across the street
>Too low to get a good shot, but you send a few her way to be sure she stays low
>Cautiously you push up the street, rifle trained on the other side.
>Then from under the bar deck a few shots erupt
>One grazes your leg, causing you to flinch and beat a hasty retreat back
>Limping into a small stable you check to make sure your weapons are all topped off
>She probably saw you flinch and would press the advantage.
>And you'd be right, as a slow rustling sound of something large slithering about got your attention
>Struggling to pinpoint the origin, you settled on training your rifle on the right side of the door.
>The rustling noise came again and you sent three shots through the wall in that direction
>Suddenly there came a noise behind you and before being able to react you were tackled and a cloth put on your face
>Consciousnesses was quickly lost
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21dbfe No.393599
>>393598
>Coming to was sudden as water splashed on your face
>Sputtering you try to gain your senses
>It was a cave it seemed with a small fire going
>You can't move your legs, wait was something squeezing them?
>The feeling of two barrels of cold steel on your neck was quite sobering
>There was the Echidna, partially wrapped up on you, but also holding a shotgun to your neck
>A big grin on her face
<Gotcha law dog
"Why didnt you kill me"
>You inquire, still suspicious she plans on it
>She merely gives the side of your face a light tap with the shotgun
<And ruin a face like that, ha besides you got a few good hits in
>She motions to her snake section and you see a few shallow bandages
>You groan a bit, that's right, her scales would have soaked up most of it
>Those shots would be pin pricks at best
<Besides, Its going to be winter soon and I'll need some help keeping warm
>Oh boy
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449e9c No.393604
>>393599
More? This sounds promising
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21dbfe No.393687
>>393604
>more
O-Oh my, as a old washed up writefag I'm not used to this flattery
It was intended as a oneshit, but I think I have enough to work with to turn this into more
Gimmie a bit to brainstorm some stuff up
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7e8b00 No.393688
>>393687
please do, i'm a sucker for western romantic stories
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21dbfe No.393745
>>393599
Flashback time
>She put his limp form in the wagon, making sure he didn't land too hard
>Smiling a bit at him, she checked his leg to make sure the bandage was good
>Didn't want it to get infected now and ruin all the fun
>Now, there was one more thing to take care of…
>The mayor of the town made sure to sit as his desk an honorably as possible
>Still, he took a long pull from the flask he kept in his desk
>He heard the dragging noise, she was casually approaching
>Quickly dabbing a bit of sweat off his brow he straightened up in his chair
>She pushed the door open, but leaned back against the frame
"Afternoon miss"
>He managed to choke out, almost visibly shaking
>Not even looking at him, tension almost visible in the room
<I suppose I should shoot you for hiring someone to come kill me
>She pulled out one of the guns on her hip, idlely turning the drum
<Then again, what kinda thankya would that be for hand delivering a guy like that to me?
>She holstered her pistol before turning away
>She gave a brief tug of her hat and a nod
<You take care now
"Have a good day miss"
>As soon as she was out the door the mayor once again dabbed away the sweat on his brow
>He opened his bottom drawer to reveal a bottle of whisky, the flask won't be enough for this
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87f5db No.393753
>>393745
So before I get invested in this story does the guy escape on his own volition and get a little payback or is it just another Stockholm syndrome story
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21dbfe No.393754
>>393753
Sroxholm vrah. its coming
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fe3364 No.393755
>>393753
>>393754
>not taming the bandit with your JUSTICE dick and fighting crime together
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21dbfe No.393868
>>393745
>>393599
>The wound on your leg was healing quite well, barely even a limp.
>She did a decent job patching it up and keeping it clean.
>And the cave she turned into her home was not that bad.
>Then again any shelter against the heavy winter storm raging outside is good.
>There was no way you'd be able to make it back to town
>For now you have to bide your time and wait for the right opportunity to escape
>Getting dinner ready, you decide to strike up some conversation
"So what made you become a bandit?"
>The question seems to catch her off guard
<huh?
>She sits up from the rug she was coiled on
"What made you choose to become a bandit, you seem a bit gentle to be one"
>She laughed a bit
<Gentle? ha, flattery aint' gonna get you anywhere
>She sighed and leaned back
<It was something I just fell into I guess, not much of a choice really
>She stretched out
<When everyone pretty much treats you different and suspect like, you embrace it or go nuts
<What about you, what made you take up the bounty business
>Now it was your turn to be caught off guard
>Well, dinner wouldn't be ready for another good while, so you might was well indulge her.
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21dbfe No.394533
>>393868
Meant to post this here
>The gun battle echoed through the square
>He laid there, hit but sitll all full of piss and and vinegar
>hes shot all to hell but still moving
>You approach him, expecting the worst, but he calls out to you
"Law dog, you gotta get to me please"
>He laid there holding himself like a kid on a playground than a seasoned outlaw
>he half smiles at you as you approach
>Tears in his eyes he pulls an old photo from his waistcoat
>Its a worn old photo and it has a lamia as its front feature
>His arm shoots out and pulls yous close,
>He cocks the hammer back on your pistol
"Finish what you started law dog"
>He's almost crying now
"I wanna see her again, feel her again
>Biting your tongue you squeeze
>you can almost hear him breath thank you
>and you'll go to town a hero
>and you'll be the best man
>and you'll be the one to recount the tale
>and you'll be the one ultimately going to bed alone
>you're fine
>you're fine
>you're fine
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21dbfe No.394536
>>394533
>You awake with a start in a cold sweat
>Chest heaving as you take a moment to come to your senses
>Ah hell, just a dream, again
>Something holds firm against you when you try to move
>Oh yeah, that's right, she was coiled up around you, enjoying your body heat
>You sigh and try to get comfortable when a pair of arms pulls you into a hug from behind
<You okay? you where shaking pretty bad there. Thought you were cold so I got another blanket
>Breathing had pretty much returned to normal at this point
"I'm fine, yeah I was just cold"
>The two of you just sit for a second in silence, the dim sounds of the storm outside the only noise
<See them in your dreams too?
>You let out a prolonged sigh
"Yeah"
<Doesn't matter how you put the lead through 'em, they'll be there
"Not too much different from each other then, yeah?
>She shifts a bit and gives you a brief squeeze
<I wouldn't go saying that now
"I mean, we both live by the way of the gun. Just different sides of the law"
>Another pause as if she's mulling it over
>She pulls you closer to her
<I think you need to stop saying crazy stuff and go back to sleep
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8feb6c No.395123
>>394536
You better keep posting.
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21dbfe No.396230
>>394536
>The next morning came as is always did, sun poking over the hills
>That and the uh, 'morning warmup' as she called it.
>Just some vigorous morning motion to help her heat up quickly to start the day
>She didn't squeeze you as tightly this morning and even nibbled a bit at your neck
>Fangs retracted, thankfully
>Afterwords she was at the stove prepping breakfast as you got dressed
>You walked over to see what exactly she was making
"Mornin' you went a littler gentler on me today?"
>She didn't look up from the skillet where she was frying some eggs and bacon
<What, you prefer it like when I first got you?
>Her tail snaked its way around your leg and gave it a squeeze
>You quickly cleared your throat and gave your leg a small shake
"No, its just… It wasn't unwelcome"
>She gave a short laugh
<What'd I tell you about sweet talk, aint gonna get you anywhere
>She flips the contents of the skillet over
<Besides, I gotta go out and do some hunting, I want something fresh for tonight
>You merely grunt in response and begin to set the small table near the corner of the room
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21dbfe No.396232
>>396230
>Breakfast was a bit salty, but satisfying and as you cleared the table she got geared up to go out
>Dishes were done and she gives you a nod before heading to the door
<Don't get into too much trouble now
"With you gone that'll be no problem"
>You retort, she merely laughs and continues out the door
>After half an hour, you're sure she's long gone, so its time to move
>Grabbing your overcoat, hat, and an extra blanket you begin to gear up
>She had locked your belt and weapons in her safe, so you had to accept that loss
>Slowly opening the door, you check to see the tracks she left go off in the distance
>The weather was forgiving today, Bitterly cold but barely any wind or clouds
>Two steps out of the door and you hear the unmistakable sound of a hammer being cocked
>You freeze and cold metal presses against your left ear
<Now where on earth could you be going, lawdog?
>You stay calm and slowly raise your arms
"Just, Just getting some firewood, that's all "
>The barrel of her handgun slowly goes under your chin and guides your head until it faces her
<I guess you just missed the small pile inside by the door, huh
"I guess anybody could've"
>She sighs and gives you a disappointing nod before motioning with her head back towards the door
>You merely mimic her head motion before she gives a firm press of her handgun into your cheek
<Get back in
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21dbfe No.396234
>>396232
>The metal shackle locks with a loud clank, securely around your wrist and one of the support columns
>She puts the key back into her pocket and takes a step back from you, crossing her arms
<You did this to yourself lawdog, I didn't want to have to do this
>You look up from examining the shackle
"Seems that way"
<Don't your type know its wrong to take advantage of other folk's kindness?
>She proceeds to get her hunting gear together again
<Now, i'm gonna try this again. I'm going out hunting I want something fresh for dinner
>You gave a low grumble as a response
>She moved in close to you, craning her neck so her ear faced you
<I didn't quite catch that
"Sounds good honey"
>You force out through clenched teeth a huge face smile
<Awwwwww, there's my sweetie
>She spits back with just as much sarcasm before planing a big hammed up kiss on the cheek
>Smiling at you she makes a point to show her fangs
>The smile drops and she stares straight into your eyes
<You try something cute like that again before I go out I'll drug you up so much you'll practically go into a coma
>The low, threatening tone conveying not only her ability but also willingness to do it. Her bandit tone if you will
>You just stare on back, and after a second or two she brakes away and heads for the door again
>Before opening it she turns back to look at you
<Take care now
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5c1fd8 No.396243
>>396234
So how many struggle snuggles is it gonna take before he stops trying to run away?
Jokes aside I’m actually rather curious as to where this is gonna go. Bandit snek is sympathetic to lawdog, but at the same time she’s still his captor.
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21dbfe No.396271
>>396243
>Sympathetic yet still his captor
That's why its been taking so long to update/write
I'm just an amateur writefag and trying to find a good balance between sympathy and not is difficult
That and being engaging while not repetitive in the short story
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efcf82 No.396540
>>396232
>>396234
Heart ticked for a minute, great work anon
Hoping to see the rest of the story
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e75e89 No.396552
>>396271
Just one criticism, from the last little update:
>(gacha) snek
>steps back
Otherwise continue, is gud. This man needs a few more struggle snuggles
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20476e No.397795
>>396234
I'll be waiting for more
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fed550 No.398622
>>396271
Don't die Writeanon! We believe in you!
Just a question if you might be planning on posting these or other stories on a pastebin or archive site? I got hooked on your writing style
Nevertheless, hope to see more struggle-snuggles
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21dbfe No.399058
>>396234
>She had gone out hunting
>again
>it seemed as if she'd been hunting a lot lately, as if building up a stock
>but no matter, you'd been able to pick the lock on the arm brace for a few days now
>Just gotta make sure she's nowhere around when you break out for good
>And that time has come
>She was out hunting again
>So an hour goes by and you're sure she's gone so you bust the lock and get to work
>You grab a few extra layers and make you way through out the door
<Anon, I'm home
>She bursts through the door with a deer hanging over her shoulder
>And what greets her is a empty shackle
<Heh, took him long enough, but
>Looking out across the sky, there's a blizzard a' brewing
>He won't make it far
>She drops the deer and looks to the smoldering stove,
<Ah hell, I swear he's more trouble than he's worth
>She grabbed another coat before heading out
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676f9c No.399072
>>399058
Who will rescue who first? The Lawman denying his snek craving, or the the outlaw snek who fell in love?
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5c1fd8 No.399087
>>399058
>Winter approaching
Oh boy, if Lawman can’t get to civilization fast, he’s in for at least 3 months of sleepy snek hibernation sex
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2c587a No.399538
>>370550
scrolled through recent pastes on pastebin and found yours https://pastebin.com/aC5VdmrT
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f7f305 No.399662
https://pastebin.com/mQkazSvy
I typed this up a week ago and decided to put it up here. I also wrote a couple other delinquent girl stories but they're in the writefag thread. If you're interested I could paste them here too.
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21dbfe No.399728
>>399058
>Be anon
>And be in way over your head
>Its been a mile or two now through heavy ground snow and not a sign of town in sight
>It doesn't help that that ominous black cloud keep rolling closer and closer
>Ah fuck, that's one hell of a storm
>Decide to keep pushing on, too late to not commit at this point
>Lawdog
>That distant yell causes you to pause. no way she's all the way out here
>You turn to see her, bundled up in extra coats approach you
>She pauses maybe 20 feet away
<There's a blizzard brewing, you can't keep going
>She's not pointing a gun at you this time, in fact she seems almost fearful
>You look at her then chance a glance towards where you were headed
>She almost seemed to read your thoughts
<Don't, its too far at this point, you'll freeze to death
>Sizing up your options, you decide to go with the bundled up, armed, semiannoying captor
<Come on now, we gotta hoof it back to beat this storm
>She tries to keep her voice even, but its still a bit shaky
>You've never heard her this shook up before, so it adds a bit of pep to your step
>Maybe this storm is as bad as she says it is
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21dbfe No.399730
>Holy shit she was right this storm is pretty bad
>Unfortunately you both were unable to reach home before it hit
>The snow and ice felt like miniature blades whipping across your face and the cold stuck to you like pitch
>She was leading the way but began to slow down
>Fortunately you reached her dwelling not long after the storm breached you two
>But, despite her wearing two coats, you could tell the wind and the snow had an effect on her
>You two finally burst through the door, she was practically leaning on you at that point
>The stove was stone cold and the interior was like an icebox
>She collapsed in the center of the room and you managed to stagger onto a chair after grabbing a blanket from the bed
>You two just sat there a bit, wallowing in the cold
>Suddenly a though crossed your mind
>She can't sustain herself on this cold, but with this blanket you can…
>Her gaze meets yours and her eyes narrow as if she's reading your thoughts
<G-go ahead lawdog, J-j-just sit there and let me f-f-freeze to d-death
>She seems to go weak and you swear you see her tear up
<y-you didn't pull the t-t-trigger, so I-I wont show up in y-your dreams
>That last line stung
>A lot
>You visibly grimaced at it, thinking back she had what, 3 chances to kill you and yet she didn't
>Her mercy, for an outlaw apparently, was pretty good
>But she's been holding you for weeks, even going so far as to chain you up
>Then again, it was all your fault; loosing the gunfight, getting caught
>You gaze again at her trembling figure
>Goddamnit, you're too nice for your own good
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21dbfe No.399737
>>399730
>You take the overcoat off and lay it across her, she had since closed her eyes and accepted her fate
>But when you layed your coat over her, She sighed slightly through the shivering and opened her eyes
>She didn't say anything, but pulled the coat closer and smiled at you
>Putting enough tinder in the stove you light it with a flint and kitchen knife and begin to build it up again
>With the fire roaring and starting to build heat in the home, you pull the covers off the bed and cover yourself and her
>She's still shivering
<I-it aint gonna be enough Lawdog, y-y-you gotta do m-more
>Well shit
>Resigning yourself you strip down to your birthday suit and get in with her
>She's as cold as ice and doesn't' coil up on you
>Though her coils try thy are too cold to move really
>She looks you in the eye before rolling to her back
<You know what to do lawdog
>Well, you did know what to do after a few week of this
>But her being in such a submissive position was a first
>You went at it, uncomfortable at first due to her internal temperature, but it improved
>but as it went on she became more respondent
>Her grip became tighter and tighter
>Pretty soon it was just you two sitting under a blanket on the floor listening to the roar of the hearth
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21dbfe No.399740
>>399737
>You get up to put more wood on but a weight keeps you down
>mmmm. dont go
>She mumbles, a goofy smile on her face
"I just gotta restock the hearth"
>She frowns
<Don't be long
>You restock the hearth and slide back into the embrace of her
>She sighs
<You done?
Yeah
>She coils around you a bit more
<Please dont leave me again
<Anon
>Thats the first time she used your name
>You exhale and snuggle up closer to her
>Perhaps this isn't so bad after all
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5dbd4e No.399746
>>399740
Is it the beginning of copulation time yet?
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5c1fd8 No.399801
>>399740
>snuggles in a small cabin with a snowstorm roaring outside
We’re reaching levels of comfy that shouldn’t even be possible
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d1d2c1 No.399812
>a delinquent Ork girl would be a chaste cute girl
>a delinquent succubus would be a chaste cute girl
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23fad0 No.399834
>>399812
Wait that actually makes sense…
Some monsters are already delinquents by nature By human standards, so those types of monsters would be the exact opposite.
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87fafb No.400173
>>376997
>>381680
>truth'd
No more greentexting? I've gotten too used to the long form.
What was wrong indeed.
In a hushed tone, Kasumi relayed the truth how she'd bullied him, took advantage of him, stole from him and how despite it all he never stopped trying to change her for the better. She'd done everything to crush his spirit and yet he never wavered. His conviction that she was redeemable and that he would be the one to redeem her angered and frustrated her. She abhorred the notion that someone so weak could hold sway over her heart the way he did. In that way, without ever throwing a punch, he'd completely defeated her. In a contest of wills, she couldn't hope to touch him. As close as they were as they'd walked home today she felt distant from him.
She'd been used to disappointments throughout her life. Growing up, her possessions were always 2nd hand. She was used to going to bed hungry every other night. In her single-parent household her often drunk father did little to brighten her disposition. Her home, being a veritable hell, she'd grown to resent the people Hiro's family represented and the seemingly effortless cohesion they enjoyed. In that way, she had vented that hatred towards him and rationalized it as him deserving every blow. Every time she struck him the feeling of satisfaction it gave was intoxicating. When she stole his money it felt as though she was dealing out JUSTICE for her unfair lot in life. As cruel as she was towards him she deserved none of the love he'd given. The bitter sting of this realization spurred yet more tears. Hiro wasn't just a good person, but a great person and one she could never hope to have. He was part of a long list of things she'd never enjoy.
Kasumi bowed, "I love Hiro but I don't deserve him. I'm sorry, please forgive me."
A moment passed. She swallowed anxiously expecting to be struck before getting thrown out of the house.
Mrs. Karasuma gripped her shoulder. Kasumi tensed up before Karasuma began "You really love him?"
Kasumi nodded.
Karasuma ushered her to the back yard "Come with me then."
Here it comes. she thought.
His mom would start with.
"Stay away from my son you bitch!"
and finish with something like.
"Never come here again! If you do I'll kill you myself!"
She figured if his mom could manage to forgive her that would be good enough before she was dismissed from his life forever. After that, he'd probably forbidden from seeing her after the lies he'd already bandied about earlier at the dinner table.
Karasuma motioned to a patio chair. "Sit"
She sat down as did Hiro's mom across from her. "If we're going to exchange secrets than I'll give you one of mine." As she said this, she rolled her sleeve up revealing an intricate tattoo. Yakuza!?
There was no doubt with the traditional design and color scheme.
Karasuma gave Kasumi her truth. She explained her past as a delinquent. Like Kasumi, she too was a real bitch when she was younger. She ended up falling into the worst kind of crowd but managed to pull herself free. She admitted, she couldn't have done it without Koto. Her husband a decent and honest man. Hiro, she explained, definitely took after him. In that way, she'd envied Kasumi. Karasuma sighed and confessed that even if she had met Koto earlier she probably wouldn't have appreciated him the way Kasumi appreciated Hiro.
She rolled her sleeve back down and tapped her shoulder as she did "We keep this a secret." Kasumi nodded and as she did his mom produced a cigarette from her robust bosom.
Kasumi offered a light for her.
His mom was taken aback "You smoke?"
Kasumi nodded and produced a cigarette from her comparatively smaller bosom and lit one up herself. "Hiro doesn't like them so I try not to smoke around him."
Karasuma rolled her head around "Heh, Koto is the same way. I usually smoke in the back alley. "
They both enjoyed a few drags before Karasuma broke the silence.
"Hiro needs someone to help him grow a pair. His father is too soft on him." she gestured at Kasumi with her cigarette and gave an ominous scowl. "I don't mind you being rough with him, but if you break his heart… I won't forgive you."
Kasumi nodded and blew smoke out her nostrils. "I'll always love him."
They both exchanged a serious gaze.
Karasuma offered her hand "Welcome to the family then."
She shook it and smiled. "You…trust me?"
Her future mother in law gave her hand a firm squeeze "Not yet, but Hiro does and that's good enough for now."
more?
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95b225 No.400195
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a39c25 No.400200
>>400173
Everybody loves a redemption story anon. More please.
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bc5162 No.402983
>>399812
>a delinquent succubus would be a chaste cute girl
there is a comic about that, more or less.
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21dbfe No.403570
>>399740
I sorta meant this as the end, but hell I'll write an epilogue
>The sun rises again the white, snowy backdrop
>Winter will be ending soon
>She is wrapped in a blanket, leaning on you
>and you are standing there with her coiled around your lower half
<Well Law dog, it looks like spring is just around the corner
yep
>She doesn't release you from her coils
>But at this point you dont mind much
I reckon you can't go into town
<Naw, specially after kidnapping you
And if I just show up, you might loose your bad girl image
<yep
>You two stood there leaning on each other, silently watching the sun rise
Well, I reckon there's a lot of space out there to start again
>She looked up at you with that grin
<You asking me to accompany you?
>Before she could react you leaned sideways and wrapped your arms around her
I'm just saying, there's a lot of space out there, a pair could disappear, start new
>Her cold demeanor hesitated with what you said, but she recovered
<God law dog, I didn't figure you for the sensitive type
Nothing sensitive about carving out a livin'
>She seems to muddle it over a bit before giving you a light squeeze back
<Don't know how you're so convincing, but I guess we can give it a go
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23fad0 No.403573
>>403570
>epilogue
This isn't an epilogue. Give us a few years later bit where the anon describes his new life and family.
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21dbfe No.403609
>>403573
Fine, im day drinking on a sunday so F it lets go
>Be Anon, and wake up bright and early like you normally do
>Your joint aint what they used to be but they work
>Going over to the kitchen, you put on the coffee as you hear your wife slither out of the room
>Christmas eve, a busy day for sure
>One by one, your 5 children and their families arrive to your house
>4 Daughters and 1 Son, all happily married
>Every year seems to bring another grandkid
>Soon your house is warm with conversation and kids running around
>When they arn't sledding down the hills in your back yard
>Your wife takes the role as Matriarch of the kitchen, and soon some wonderful aromas come wafting through the air
>Lunch is a bit late, but by 1500 all is ready
>Christmas eve lunch is an array of wonderful dishes, both traditional and what your inlaws have brought along
>As the dishes are cleared you take the grandkids to the main room
>at least a dozen young ones of various types sit on the floor and look up at you in wonder as you narrate the story
>Their eyes filled with wonder as you tell the story of St. Nick and his harem of White Horns delivering gifts
>Soon they are whisked off to bed, and your kids gather around the table to talk about life
>But soon, even they grow tired, and soon are off to their own bedrooms
>Now its just you and your wife sitting on the back porch
>The windows and demon energy keep the cold and snow out
>You and her just sit there, she still coils up around your legs like all the years prior
>You run your hand through her hair in a gentle, rhythmic manner
We carved out a decent little life, hugh
>She sighs and leans into you a bit
<Yeah, I suppose we have
You happy, anon
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6209b1 No.403624
>>403609
Best passive aggressive ending ever
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31dc68 No.403650
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7f5185 No.403675
>this story updates
>hellhound story updates
>danuki story updates
>new CYOA
nice
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23fad0 No.403720
>>403609
>You happy, anon
Yes.
>St. Nick and his harem of White Horns delivering gifts
Kek.
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161476 No.403728
>>403720
Do you think they ever deliver their daughters as gifts to anyone?
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21dbfe No.403761
>>403624
yeah, but its the passive aggressive non-canon ending.
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21dbfe No.404267
>>403720
<echidna girl
Uh, Anon
A-are you trying to say something to me, because she ma not be the girl for the job
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