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Watch my short film inconnu 10/27/14 (Mon) 12:09:59 No.2218

I made a short with my friends for the 48 hour film challenge (come up with an idea for a film and shoot it in 48 hours). And I want to know what you think.
If you have letterboxd you can rate it here
http://letterboxd.com/film/door-to-door-2014/

here's the film itself
https://vimeo.com/109970186

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inconnu 10/27/14 (Mon) 16:17:17 No.2221

>>2218
>intro
Funny and relatable, wish it was a bit more smooth just felt like the cuts were a bit to sloppy but a 8/10 for the intro.

>Second bit at house number 13
Funny as well wish the dude you got to answer the door was being more impatient and annoyed, the joke at the end was funny but I wish he said it more smooth again but it does fit in with the hole creepy Jehovah people 7/10

>the bit after the second bit at number 21

Like the two Mormons a lot more, starting to like them even though in real life I would just not open the door, other dude is a bit dull with his dialogue, the two Mormons I like the other dude not so much 6/10

>at house number 4 with the dude at the tree

Guy in red wish he was shouting more not trying to be angry but knowing he is in a public place so he just makes him look like he is putting it on, make him more beta not alpha

>them looking at the letter

Don't feel that was needed, I know some atheists get together and talk about shit, but never about "EXPOSING DA LIES OF OTHERS1!1!" and no need for the ending happy bit and that dude said it too fast and I could not hear him.

Also gods not real they should be at home playin vidya or taking shrooms.

6/10 the last bit killed it for me.

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inconnu 10/27/14 (Mon) 20:46:27 No.2222

Well done for actually doing something.

Please don't listen to anyone who uses the the terms 'beta' and 'alpha'.

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inconnu 10/27/14 (Mon) 21:51:50 No.2226

>>2222
Nice quads

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inconnu 11/07/14 (Fri) 19:39:53 No.2394

It was an appealing little thing, nice job. The only thing I'd say is maybe invest in a tripod, but really, you should be proud of this.

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inconnu 09/12/16 (Mon) 12:17:19 No.7882

>>2218

I'll watch yours if you watch mine, OP.

Shot in 4 days for £180. One man film crew.

Two men who exist by eating only sand. Black comedy.

https://vimeo.com/179203602

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inconnu 09/19/16 (Mon) 06:19:25 No.7898

>>2218

solid concept with lots of potential for material.

What did you film this with? An iphone or a DSLR from before 2011? The aesthetics seemed very plain and dull. Did you film this using automatic mode?

Why did you use handheld shots then switch to tripod shots for CU? I already know the answer but you do realize that if you go back and forth between static and dynamic shots, it can be jarring to the viewer. In this case, it was obnoxious because it wasn't done proper.

Next time get an audio guy as well, or just buy a cheap smart lav and hook it up to your iphone. You *need* proper audio gear, camera mics are *never* an option unless your established or an its arthouse.

Read Five C's of Cinematography too.

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inconnu 04/24/17 (Mon) 21:35:11 No.9485

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>>2218

Almost three years later, but I'll offer some of my own thoughts. You really need to either get a handheld rig to reduce the annoying jittering. Also learn how to light scenes, because it looks like you relied solely on natural lighting for shots that need set up. The blonde kid should have been yelling, not pretending to yell. You need to really focus on the different elements and hone them in. There were some funny moments, and you should be proud that you completed the project but strive to improve.

>>7882

Nice cinematography, what did you shoot this with, and how much storage did the footage take up?

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inconnu 04/07/20 (Tue) 12:20:21 No.15672

Necrobumping this thread to shill my first attempt at a short.

https://vimeo.com/404961513

Tried to portray an insomniac stuck in his parents' home during the quarantine (t. me)

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inconnu 04/07/20 (Tue) 12:35:50 No.15673

Ah shite. I might have bumped two threads. The site won't let me delete them either. Oh well, don't ban me mods.

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inconnu 04/08/20 (Wed) 16:53:35 No.15675

>>15672

You wanted to impart the viewer to what's like having tinnitus? i know it very well

>britsh flag

kek

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