I'll post some critique, and try not to be an asshole. Try to take it in stride. Also, this is just my one response so keep that in mind. Pandering is generally a bad idea, wait and see what other people have to say, then discuss it internally. People tend to not know what they want until they get it.
Bad shit
1. I don't appreciate the western character names. It takes away from who they are supposed to be too much. It'd be one thing if you met them as their nicknames, then later got properly introduced with their full virus name, but that's not what's happening here. If you do change this, there is a fine line between generic OELVN and 100% weeaboo. Try not to go full weeaboo.
2. The memes are fun, and when I started they were subtle enough that they made me smile. But the more farther in I got the more they made me cringe. I hope that some of those are only for the demo. Just cut back on some of the memes.
3. The script itself so far is fairly disappointing. The tour and meeting all the girls one by one in short bursts in particular. I'll try to help: remove the tour by making it a shorter quick tour with a focus on getting to know Ebola-chan and the world we are being introduced to. Some more interesting details than this is where we live and also we're having a team-based competition, maybe some lore, history, rumors, etc. Then space out new areas and characters as the story progresses, between scenes that are more plot-heavy or perhaps reliant on being in the right place at the right time (i.e. going to a certain location on a certain day or an automatic scene triggered at a specific time as part of a specific route). Give the player an IV drip of plot and lore so they don't get bored and eager to press the skip button or just close the game.
4. The UI, transitions, and text are fuck-ugly. They are placeholders, I hope.
5. The load times(?) are awful for such a simple game, every time there is a sprite change, bgm change, or transition.
4 & 5. I appreciate the work that wentPost too long. Click here to view the full text.