No.69869
Vulcan Love Slave- A space elf training game.
I need feedback on this game alpha. I'm trying to make a Star Trek hentai with crew management, nerd humor, and harlot training. It's at a proof of concept stage now, but I'd like to hear ideas about where this kinda game could go.
https://mega.nz/#!TtVi1YhZ!Md5x8oPP9otRN664b3Y51VV7dHolv7ZnJCTPBZo33Qc
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No.69870
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No.69871
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No.69872
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No.69874
>star trek
>""""nerd humor"""
>art is all dirty full of lineart all over the place
>for some reason characters has blocky heads with realistic faces
>big gobbos game #403221
Try to release a polished demo if you want to "proof concept".
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No.69875
>Vulcan love slave
>no vulcan slaves.
But seriously, the 2 sex scenes are ok, but they need to be longer to work. And, you know, actually have vulcans.
>can i fuck the Vulcan daughter yet.
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No.69876
Style wise, your work is reminiscent of David Goujard. (The guy who did the "Behind the Dune" game.) Yes, the artwork needs to be polished up, but I'm hoping these are temporary placards and not final artwork. As the other anon said, your work is very "dirty" with alot of unnecessary lines that don't fit well with ST's clean aesthetics. Also you use way to much lines on the face. A common problem when doing caricatures. It makes the faces look old & man-ish. Also, all the girls' jaws are way too angular. Curve them so they don't suffer from man-jaw. So use less lines in the final artwork and put more thought into the curve & weight of your lines. (EX: Use thicker lines for the bottom of the boobs. Use thinner lines for the top of the shoulders.)
As far as gameplay or story, I haven't played the game yet, but I hope you've added a Ferengi to your cast. Ferengi the horndogs of the galaxy and one literally wrote the "Vulcan Love Slave" book itself. A good mentor/wingman character that the MC can bounce ideas & plot advancement off via dialogue.
Also, there's a guy on /strek/ who's also doing a Trek hentai game. It's about Reginald Barclay and his sexy holodeck adventures. You should take a look.
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No.69877
>>69876
Damn, I said "also" a lot. That's what you get when you reply with a stream of conscious thoughts.
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No.69878
>>69876
disregard clothed females, acquire latinum.
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No.69920
>>69869
Oh, I get it, it's planet "Eve" and that's Alice Eve. Alice is the only part of the new movies I consider canon considering my she makes my canon fire photon torpedoes.
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No.69923
>>69920
Absolutely fucking disgusting.
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No.69987
I've been waiting for this game since Denise Crosby showed her tribles in playboy. Please be good please be good please be good.
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No.69988
>>69920
This facial movement software does not seem very suitable for a cartoon style game. The result is a bit creepy.
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No.70021
Rework the character design it's too angular and blocky. These are women, the curvy sex. Are you trying to condition us into liking tranny's because this is how I'd do it, make characters with exaggerated feminine features (big breasts and wide hips) and then give them male head and face shapes all the while making their poses stiff and angular, almost like comic book actions poses. You don't realize you're stroking it to a dude until your brains been rewired to want to stroke to dudes.
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No.71002
>>69920
>only having the face move
I was willing to give this shit a shot, but that's just some real uncanny valley shit right there. And this is coming from someone who was not phased at all by the new Battle Angel Ailita.
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No.71008
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