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File: 2a9580963fcffe2⋯.jpg (103.34 KB, 736x1000, 92:125, sample-d8acf622beba5a7fe74….jpg)

 No.235148[View All]

If this is in the catalog it's buried so here's a threat to post profiles and ask for help in rebuilding, tweaking, and making it generally less shit. Offer advise that is constructive and helpful without being purely critical. And if you post here, have a tough skin and remember you're here for help so if you hear something you don't like it may be something you need to hear.

I'll start with posting my own

https://www.f-list.net/c/Katerina%20Zaranova

I think, generally, I do ok with my profiles, but pinks are pretty easy as well. This one, however, has gotten next to no love at all. So, any thoughts would be welcome. Or is there just not much want on F-list for buff amazons who want to be tenderly dommed?

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 No.279317

File: 6422150f76fb804⋯.png (33.17 KB, 201x360, 67:120, yotsu.png)

https://www.f-list.net/c/castus

might be a dumb question but are my kinks for this guy too gross? i don't want to scare anyone off,

i'm still fleshing them out by the way

…also, how's he looking in general? is the writing ok?

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 No.279320

>>279317

You're practically vanilla. Don't worry about it.

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 No.279379

File: 37d166c3dc4a471⋯.png (83.08 KB, 372x469, 372:469, 129556785428.png)

>>279317

>view count keeps going up

>nothing to show for it but one new bookmark and a message from some weirdo (if they somehow see this i'm sorry)

what's wrong with him…

is it just a blue curse?

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 No.279381

>>279379

It happens a fair amount to profiles posted asking for help, doubly since you’ve posted him for the same purpose in two threads. People are mindlessly clicking the link and/or taking a look to see if anything is wrong with him (as you don’t need to be interested in the character to critique its kinks/information layout) and don’t bother to say anything here if they have nothing constructive (or debilitating) to say.

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 No.279382

>>279381

oh yeahh

forgot that i posted him in qttdtot too

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 No.279912

Post those profiles /erp/.

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 No.279915

Holy shit. I just found infinity chan again and that old now deleted profile for this help thread is still around.

Kino mates.

Welcome back ya perverts

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 No.279920

>>279912

No, you first.

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 No.279924

File: e212ba10c6fee29⋯.png (213.84 KB, 1103x1200, 1103:1200, DKgLONiX0AECs2H.png)

>>279912

https://www.f-list.net/c/insatiable%20greenery/

Not sure what else I can add to this. Inlines aren't my strong suit.

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 No.279925

File: debcd37727ebcfd⋯.jpg (1.29 MB, 2000x2000, 1:1, 75789876_p2.jpg)

https://www.f-list.net/c/wych/

I want opinions on this guy.

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 No.279926

>>279925

I think he's cool. Since he's a mage, an ex-thief, and one of the queen's special dudes should give you a lot of fun stories to play out. Like, what if he gets in trouble due to a crime he committed from his past, an old pal shows up, or gets marked as a heretic himself? Plus, he's cocky, so that's always fun to play around with.

I'd approach you if I weren't so vanilla and if I didn't had an RP going on.

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 No.279927

File: b0200704a985072⋯.jpg (78.2 KB, 786x1200, 131:200, EDsnPkMUEAApexv.jpg)

>>279926

>if I weren't so vanilla

I enjoy vanilla stuff too.

Do you think I should add a custom letting people know? I've seen other profiles doing it, but I do have 'affection' and 'tantric sex' in the yes sub-fetish.

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 No.279928

>>279927

I don't think it will hurt to add a custom.

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 No.279936

File: 5ac50a2f8c843a3⋯.jpg (858.67 KB, 807x1200, 269:400, 62427593_p0_master1200.jpg)

File: e131e02ebaff1bc⋯.jpg (1.17 MB, 1061x1500, 1061:1500, __original_drawn_by_ram_ra….jpg)

https://www.f-list.net/c/just%20an%20accountant/

https://www.f-list.net/c/grocery%20store%20clerk/

I’m a bit of a beginner and these are my first big characters, so I’ll appreciate any feedback or advice.

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 No.279937

>>235148

How do I make a good profile?

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 No.279938

>>279937

>Make an inline

It really helps.

>For the bio, have the "core" of the character's backstory/personality be 2-3 paragraphs.

You could write more, but put the stuff that could be considered extra information inside of a dropdown, because the more you write, the less people are going to read. Why spend time reading some character's profile with a bunch of paragraphs, when your kinks don't match up anyway?

>Don't be a sperg about stuff you don't like. This includes muh transphobia, racism, sexism, etc.

This part is very important, and why I think a lot of people on F-List are mentally ill. For example, don't want to play with males or females? Just put them in no, don't go on a tangent about how you find x percentage of males/females boring and other things.

>Don't mention anything too personal in your profile

Somewhat self-explanatory. You'd be surprised about how many players mention they have a mental illness, have tried to commit suicide, or even mention imply that they have been raped. Imagine you meet someone for the first time and one of the first things they tell you is that they're bi-polar or tried to hang themselves,

>Write some custom kinks

These help other players know what you really like or should pay attention to, even if you have a related kink under faves.

>Do your best to find art that is really consistent

Self-explanatory.

That's what I can think of. I hope this was helpful.

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 No.279939

File: 7389c734c10a03f⋯.png (8.69 KB, 500x500, 1:1, 1409829777619.png)

>>279937

Learn how to do inlines and transparency in pictures, the 'you suck at photoshop' tutorial explains it quickly.

A profile should have the following, usually:

Some sort of header, with what you're looking for, how you want to be approached

Inline picture

Two good paragraphs establishing what kind of character your character is, including personality and appearance and what they're for rp-wise that shows you can write and are not retarded

custom kinks, with descriptions that are sexually appealing

done

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 No.279940

File: 5ffbbea44315670⋯.jpg (286.97 KB, 850x1202, 425:601, sample_7d60da0b1644e89efff….jpg)

I've had it in mind to make a Lara Croft type character for a while.

Sophisticated intelligent treasure hunter.

But I don't want to play as the canon Lara.

Any thoughts on what can be done to get that Tomb Raider feel without being the actual Tomb Raider?

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 No.279941

>>279940

I don't see anything wrong with making an original character inspired by canon. Go for it, anon.

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 No.279942

>>279941

Oh I don't think so either. I just don't want to make a carbon copy of Laura under a different name if that makes any sense.

I do plan on her coming across time travel, space adventures and that sort of thing. Maybe that will be enough.

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 No.279943

>>279940

>>279942

This is an interesting idea, what types of stories do you have in mind?

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 No.279945

File: a70e69ecc510d5f⋯.jpeg (76.9 KB, 1069x890, 1069:890, 27cb864a11a38b3bb42625a8e….jpeg)

>>279943

This is the image that had me think some time travel shenanigans. Some ancient artifact that transports her to a much more primitive time. Or, on the other hand, she comes across some sort of savage land where dinos roam free and she's stuck there for a little bit.

For a more sci-fi thing being a xeno-archeologist looking for lost relics of ancient alien races, maybe even of her own that takes her far off worlds, asteroids and the like.

In either setting she's going to be very much a Lara Croft. An archeologist who knows how to throw down when need be but would rather talk first shoot second.

Those are just some of the ideas that come to mind for stories

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 No.279946

>>279945

That sounds like it could be fun.

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 No.279949

>>279945

This sounds really fun. I could even see myself forgetting the E and RPing too much, heh. What are her kinks?

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 No.279950

>>279949

>>279946

Well thank you anons. I'm glad she sounds like fun.

As for the kinks, to be honest I'm actually pretty vanilla in that department.

I love a good foreplay scene, kissing, petting, cuddling but I like to throw in some unrealistic things as well like some light cum inflation, stomach/throat bulging.

Given what this character might get into things like tentacles and aliens are on the list as well, monsters possibly as well.

One thing I would like to do with her is that out of the sack she's a take charge kind of woman, but utterly enjoys being dominated in the bedroom.

Pined down in a mating press, being put in a full nelson, bent over, hair pulled, ass slapped that sort of stuff.

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 No.279951

File: a908da68bd4af96⋯.png (2.76 MB, 822x1166, 411:583, 815d5310380e5dd4275fc5464f….png)

>>279949

You know something like this might be a bit too far out there but I won't lie and say the idea of her ending up in some almost bad end situations kind of hot.

I say almost bad ends because I do want her to be able to escape, but she might just have some long lasting effects to deal with after such close encounters.

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 No.279960

File: 7d3f27f8e0fdb9a⋯.jpeg (601.41 KB, 1000x1398, 500:699, 07fb21e7ca1c8ae824f82f197….jpeg)

Well lads she's finally finished.

Come check her out, look the profile over and if you've got any feedback send it to me.

https://www.f-list.net/c/Daphne%20Ashcroft

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 No.279979

So I decided to make a succubus character, something I've never done and with some art I bought a couple of years ago. I'm mostly happy with the profile but I can;t help but think there's something missing on it.

https://www.f-list.net/c/Red%20Imp%20Succubus

I've got a few more custom kinks in mind but, maybe a collapse with some scenarios for summoning the demon as starting points?

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 No.280015

File: c9e4c7204e0501d⋯.png (4.66 MB, 2394x1240, 1197:620, ClipboardImage.png)

https://www.f-list.net/c/an%20honest%20salesman/

What do you anons think?

A part of me thinks that I need to add more characterization, but some people I've shown him to have told me that he's good or fine.

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 No.280018

>>280015

It looks good to me, the only thing I would suggest changing is this line

> Just don’t worry about the legality of some of those wares. Also, some of those items might have been stolen, but he doesn’t let those things bother him

That seems redundant to me. It might flow better if it were something like

>Just don't let the legality of some of those wares bother you, they certainly don't worry Ren.

Just my two cents. Other wise, looks good.

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 No.280019

>>280018

Thanks, anon. I'll get right on that.

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 No.280425

File: 01124ded94dbd53⋯.jpg (176.4 KB, 800x1119, 800:1119, DgXmBK4VAAA8YmG.jpg)

Still working on him, but how's he looking so far?

https://www.f-list.net/c/mendiant

Anyone know how to make cute inlines, also.

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 No.280428

>>280425

I think you have something gucci going on. However, I'll be honest and say that maybe you should have finished work on the customs before creating a profile for him.

>Anyone know how to make cute inlines, also.

I recommend looking up tutorials on Youtube on how to remove backgrounds from images in Gimp. You'll want to watch the videos where they use the pen tool to do it.

After you've learned how to remove backgrounds, you're really just limited to your imagination and how much time you want to put into making an inline. You could stitch multiple images together into some kind of collage or just put an image with some text, like I said, it's up to you. Of course, you could even forget all of that and just place an image in the bio.

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 No.280832

File: c9bc60f72409ba6⋯.jpg (78.85 KB, 776x1246, 388:623, LgLqy7em2RkmgbRZMccWMrk1oJ….jpg)

https://www.f-list.net/c/redheaded%20cleric/

I'm still working on some customs, but here he is. What do you anons think? Go ahead and roast me.

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 No.280833

File: da2021c957ef81d⋯.jpg (97.58 KB, 1280x720, 16:9, 1324867498351967489465.jpg)

>>280832

Disgustingly vanilla.

I'm (mostly) serious. Cute and nice is good and all, but I at least like there always to be something simply… Carnal. Especially as a custom kink to see just how the writer can jingle my tingles. You could do it just with the Dirty Talk kink.

You spend all the profile going off about pretty romantic things, so now show me the fire and lust. Passionate lovemaking? Say more than just tongues and hands, you pew puffer.

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 No.280836

File: 8f877c426585b49⋯.png (453.96 KB, 1248x1358, 624:679, 80861901_p2.png)

>>280833

Thanks for the roast, anon! I'm going to do my best to fix those problems.

>pew puffer

That's a good one.

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 No.280839

>>280832

I keep misreading the name as "Retarded Cleric".

>>280833

>Disgustingly vanilla.

They did say they were planning on using that character for mostly vanilla stuff.

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 No.280939

>>280832

>Deleted

That's a shame. I've been eyeing that character.

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 No.280945

File: 6ebbabf2e7f1b7e⋯.jpg (272.37 KB, 1000x666, 500:333, Wn25bhRlA8KRdQipUXW0x10VmE….jpg)

>>280939

Sorry about that! I took him down while I redo parts of his bio and work on some more customs. Once I'm finished with those things, I'll bring him back.

What were you looking to do with him, by the way? It could help me with making him better.

In the mean time, if you want to, we could try something out with him in the random rp thread.

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 No.280954

File: b751a2ccb0b9c43⋯.png (397.89 KB, 895x1285, 179:257, ten_17.png)

File: 964a1b069558269⋯.png (255.34 KB, 728x1000, 91:125, ten_04.png)

File: fa3ef5958d8fd10⋯.png (284.44 KB, 895x900, 179:180, ten_18.png)

>>280945

That's good to know. I liked the idea that he's a healer and is able to tell what someone's pain is and wanted to build up on something from that. I haven't thought too much about the smut part maybe something affectionate and maybe something that involves him licking her abs.

I'll post my profile here and you can just hmu whenever you're ready

https://www.f-list.net/c/asuka%20sunahara

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 No.280971

File: 12b9e7702ca29ba⋯.jpg (274.77 KB, 796x967, 796:967, 4Sl5HAJHsKZ8RrgDttZKBzhxu6….jpg)

>>280954

I think she's great and I'll be happy to those things! As soon as I'm done with him, you'll be one of the first people I contact.

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 No.281069

File: 2dcbf0b4e1e6b2c⋯.jpg (50.65 KB, 427x639, 427:639, I_want_to_believe.jpg)

File: c68bc97476e649b⋯.jpg (859.31 KB, 1920x1080, 16:9, spacelife_1589315540724_29….jpg)

https://www.f-list.net/c/Renny%20Hawkins

A paranormal hunting teen girl who wants to meet strange things and play video games with them. Not sure if I'm missing anything or could improve on it.

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 No.281072

>>281069

Off the top of my head, I have two suggestions.

1. An inline. Those always help.

2. Add some customs related to the wacky paranormal things that you're looking for and how they could be applied to lewd. If it helps, your profile comes off as pretty wholesome, so maybe design the customs with that in mind. Here are some examples:

>Hypno. / MC / Sirens: Mermaids have always been known to enthrall sailors, Renny finds their beauty to be really irresistible.

>Growth / Shrinking: Renny always wanted to meet the 50 ft woman or see what it's like to be the size of a mouse.

>Body Swapping: Sometimes those wacky aliens want to see what it's like to have sex from a human's perspective.

Inb4 someone suggests that you play with shemales and herms so that you can experience the different cocks the galaxy has to offer.

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 No.281075

https://www.f-list.net/c/august%20hanner%20smith

Have been thinking about adding an inline but don't really know where I would put it.

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 No.281084

>>281075

I recommend filling in your empty customs. For the inline, I think putting it above or below your character's name might be a good idea.

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 No.281087

>>281075

1. What the other Anon said about your customs, even if you just fill it in with a blank space (Unicode Sort Test has a handful to choose from) "No description set yet" can make your profile look unfinished.

2. The inline placement depends on what it looks like. For most huge ones I would just put it above or below the name, I would consider doing an image split by the quote box (or for a smaller one just put it outright in the quote, above the text)

3. Speaking of the name, it's a nitpick, but I would recommend extending the unicode lines on top and below, it looks weird with the name spilling out, but it's so minor it doesn't really matter

4. Consider adding some linebreaks to your background paragraph, it's not THAT big so you can get away with it but in general unformatted lumps of text aren't very nice to read

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 No.281138

File: 1ea9c76497a92b5⋯.jpg (22.18 KB, 437x431, 437:431, 1ea9c76497a92b50922281d7d5….jpg)

>>280954

>Deleted

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 No.281139

File: 8de2d2eeb4e820d⋯.gif (86.18 KB, 300x299, 300:299, 66c0b0d9c6287460ec3466bacc….gif)

>>280971

>>281138

Hey, it's me.

I want to first say that I'm sorry that I deleted on you. There was nothing wrong with you or our role play. As of right now I am realizing that my personal issues run far deeper than I expected: I've spent almost half a year trying to return to a hobby that I thought would make my condition a little bit better. For some reason, I find it difficult to enjoy certain things that I once can easy get really into and I know now that role playing isn't going to solve that.

Again, I apologize. I know I kind of spurred you in finishing your character and in the end I just disappointed you. Hopefully I can find the root cause and I can start feeling like my old self.

Best of luck to you.

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 No.281140

File: 28525029e193502⋯.png (44.88 KB, 298x450, 149:225, 1565211158680.png)

>>281139

If it means anything, you were one of the best people I played with. Whatever you're dealing with, whatever it is, I hope you're able to pull through it. Good luck.

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 No.281142

File: 35ff128fb06d632⋯.gif (37.08 KB, 256x216, 32:27, anime.gif)

>>281140

Thank you. I hope you find some worthwhile plays.

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