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 No.235148[View All]

If this is in the catalog it's buried so here's a threat to post profiles and ask for help in rebuilding, tweaking, and making it generally less shit. Offer advise that is constructive and helpful without being purely critical. And if you post here, have a tough skin and remember you're here for help so if you hear something you don't like it may be something you need to hear.

I'll start with posting my own

https://www.f-list.net/c/Katerina%20Zaranova

I think, generally, I do ok with my profiles, but pinks are pretty easy as well. This one, however, has gotten next to no love at all. So, any thoughts would be welcome. Or is there just not much want on F-list for buff amazons who want to be tenderly dommed?

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 No.274249

>>274248

That typically means their other icons are circles in and of themselves. Do this using [icon]character name[/icon] to link them.

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 No.274279

>>274249

Thanks!

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 No.276921

I've been in the mood to make a shota/teenage character where or what are some good images to use? This is always the problem I have with trying to make a young male is finding a good series of images to mess around with.

I've found a lot of shota characters seem to always be on the submissive side, so I'd like to go for something more aggressive/dominate.

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 No.277327

Got the idea in my head to make a fantasy-esque priest recently, was wondering which direction would be more interesting for him:

1. Sex is a regular part of priesthood duties, for whatever excuse (fertility god, casual sex world, etc). It's far from the most unique of ideas, but it gets the job done. And I haven't seen it be applied to a straight(ish) guy, yet.

2. Sex, and any romantic relationships, really, are banned for the clergy. But he intentionally tries to get together with people anyway, taking extra pleasure in breaking his vows, or finding loopholes to them. It's a little more story-focused, in my opinion, but I already have a preference for story-over-smut, so it's not a huge problem.

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 No.277328

>>277327

I like the first one better.

Part of priest training being to learn how to please a girl, learning about kinks, etc.

Your priest could also be like… a sex therapist? Working in a church somewhere that has tons of shitty sex practices or where there's little law enforcement so a lot of the people are really fucked up when it comes to anything sexual.

So your priest ends up doing things like helping women who have never orgasmed because their husbands suck cum, helping a young woman who was traumatized be less afraid of consensual sex, helping a young man come to terms with being gay (if you swing that way). Just some ideas.

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 No.277329

>>277328

While I don't wholly agree with your examples mainly because that first one sounds a lot like cuckoldry, you do bring up a good point, as well as a neat spin on the subject.

I'll have to give it a bit more thought, since I would prefer to try to put him into a more story-driven context, but still, thanks!

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 No.277331

>>277329

Yeah, I wouldn't expect all of them to appeal, they were just general ideas for possibilities that seemed like they had a lot of plot potential since you seemed to want story stuff.

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 No.277392

So I'm looking for something fresh thematically. My first really successful character on f-list was a single father finally getting back into the dating scene years after his wife passed away during child birth. The second was a paladin going through a crisis of faith after seeing so much evil in the world during his first few adventures. The third and most recent was a teen prince who was completely unprepared for his father's untimely death, ascending to the throne without really knowing what he's up to.

I'm looking for inspiration basically. I'm open to a wide variety of themes and settings of course, but my taste in characters I want to play is pretty narrow. I tend to not wanna play "alpha" types or especially muscular characters. I also don't like playing the ugly bastard types.

The big problem is that good quality art for those sorts of characters is difficult to find. Most western art tends to lean really hard into hyper masculine garbage and eastern stuff tends to be way too dainty and "generic anime protagonist" for me. It's especially hard to find stuff that has a consistent look for a character without dipping into canon face claims which I'd like to avoid if the source material is too popular.

So hit me with your best shot, /erp/. I have a few ideas of my own, but I'm curious what y'all have to say in terms of suggestions about this all.

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 No.277397

>>277392

Hm… Well one idea I had abandoned (more or less) after making the character is a demon king who got bored with violence and debauchery. Enough to feel like something is missing in his life… So now he seeks something different to get fulfillment in his long life. Perhaps you can make it where I couldn't.

Idea two is maybe play a man who is so focused on working that he doesn't realize the sheer amount of stress he is putting on himself. Not to mention he's abandoned more or less anything fun in pursuit of his career. Maybe even lost his girlfriend over it which had pushed him even more into his job. With all his unrelieved stress he ends up with separate personality that is wild and fun, perhaps too much so. Hrm… Maybe not such a good idea for a ERP character… But who knows.

Idea three! Perhaps play as a guy who developed a fear of women after being raised in a shitty environment. After moving away from his terrible family, he starts trying to overcome his fear of women. This is definitely something more for long term, but might lead to something interesting.

Just some ideas that I just made up on the spot (except that first one). So how good they are I can't say, but I hope they in turn give you ideas of your own. Do with them as you (or anyone else reading this) will.

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 No.277480

Not even a profile yet. Just the first needless hurdle. Those of you who've used languages that stray way out from english, how do you handle the havoc this plays with profiles? I'm attempting to use google translate hebrew and shrinking it down to fit the profile template alone is breaking just about everything

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 No.278251

So I'm a fair hand at making profiles, I think anyway, and this is my first serious attempt at a shota character.

I think it's alright, but lacking in some areas, perhaps some more custom kinks, so I'm looking for those who are into straight shota to give some feedback on what can help this profile pop and get me some of that sweet older girl loving.

https://www.f-list.net/c/Miles%20the%20foxboy

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 No.278289

https://www.f-list.net/c/mark%20wut

I want to know what I'm doing wrong and how I can improve. My character is a magic that works at a magical library. Although have gotten a little story driven and sex driven play, I do prefer story a bit more over smut.

What can I do to improve this character's profile?Do I need more customs? Should I make section explaining what kind of play I am looking for?

I am still working on my character's flaws and I will place into the profile when I'm done working on them.

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 No.278290

>>278251

I'm not into shota but I can tell you without even opening your profile: change that name. That's a very unappealing name when you have things like Brat, Dart, Precocious, stuff that would be fitting, more succinct, and indicative of at least a little creativity. Those are just examples off the top of my head since I don't think they'd apply to Tails specifically/they're already taken, but you get the point.

Second, change that icon. The art itself is fine, but round the corners. Make it a circle, add a border, something. If you have a decent aesthetic profile, people will put up with a lot more shit than you would expect. I can't tell you how many people I see with full guestbooks with well designed profiles that can't write for shit.

Third, try and be a little more interesting/subtle in your character writing. And you have to actually include character writing to begin with, because I'm sure there are a good amount of Tails running around on f-list trying to fuck older women. You have to set yourself apart somehow, and your actual profile text isn't doing you any favors. The customs are alright, but you should redo them once you find a good take on how Tails acts and talks.

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 No.278292

>>278290

>That's a very unappealing name when you have things like Brat, Dart, Precocious

Wow, these are actually so much worse.

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 No.278293

>>278292

A worse profile name than Miles the foxboy? Not even Foxboy? Sure about that bud?

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 No.278315

File: 54103b26436bd20⋯.jpg (226.49 KB, 728x993, 728:993, 5478d4d5f37251d90fd2033f05….jpg)

Hello, friends, it's been quite some time. Might I please have some feedback?

https://www.f-list.net/c/sunmaster%20chineke

He's nearly done; I have to finish his last tab, then I'd like to add a few more with desire scenarios, D&D stats, and a disclaimer concerning the art and general aesthetic. To be very clear, I am not nor was I initially aiming to make this a BBC profile. Art featuring black men is very limited in that regard, however.

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 No.278365

>>278315

Looks good to me. Maybe put some stuff you don't like under No.

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 No.278650

>>278289

I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in that post. Anyway, I added an extra paragraph to the character's profile, it basically describes that the character lives in a ghetto. I'm still working on the parapgraph describing the character's flaws.

I'm thinking I should change the character's surname, because it's too much of a meme. What else could I do to make the character and the profile better?

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 No.278721

File: 5cc86d5cbd5355b⋯.jpg (680 KB, 808x1159, 808:1159, 3079327.jpg)

Is it possible to copy kinks including the ones from the subfetish editor?

It's annoying that i have to go through the editor for every new character because those kinks don't get carried over via copy function.

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 No.279317

File: 6422150f76fb804⋯.png (33.17 KB, 201x360, 67:120, yotsu.png)

https://www.f-list.net/c/castus

might be a dumb question but are my kinks for this guy too gross? i don't want to scare anyone off,

i'm still fleshing them out by the way

…also, how's he looking in general? is the writing ok?

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 No.279320

>>279317

You're practically vanilla. Don't worry about it.

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 No.279379

File: 37d166c3dc4a471⋯.png (83.08 KB, 372x469, 372:469, 129556785428.png)

>>279317

>view count keeps going up

>nothing to show for it but one new bookmark and a message from some weirdo (if they somehow see this i'm sorry)

what's wrong with him…

is it just a blue curse?

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 No.279381

>>279379

It happens a fair amount to profiles posted asking for help, doubly since you’ve posted him for the same purpose in two threads. People are mindlessly clicking the link and/or taking a look to see if anything is wrong with him (as you don’t need to be interested in the character to critique its kinks/information layout) and don’t bother to say anything here if they have nothing constructive (or debilitating) to say.

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 No.279382

>>279381

oh yeahh

forgot that i posted him in qttdtot too

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 No.279912

Post those profiles /erp/.

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 No.279915

Holy shit. I just found infinity chan again and that old now deleted profile for this help thread is still around.

Kino mates.

Welcome back ya perverts

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 No.279920

>>279912

No, you first.

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 No.279924

File: e212ba10c6fee29⋯.png (213.84 KB, 1103x1200, 1103:1200, DKgLONiX0AECs2H.png)

>>279912

https://www.f-list.net/c/insatiable%20greenery/

Not sure what else I can add to this. Inlines aren't my strong suit.

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 No.279925

File: debcd37727ebcfd⋯.jpg (1.29 MB, 2000x2000, 1:1, 75789876_p2.jpg)

https://www.f-list.net/c/wych/

I want opinions on this guy.

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 No.279926

>>279925

I think he's cool. Since he's a mage, an ex-thief, and one of the queen's special dudes should give you a lot of fun stories to play out. Like, what if he gets in trouble due to a crime he committed from his past, an old pal shows up, or gets marked as a heretic himself? Plus, he's cocky, so that's always fun to play around with.

I'd approach you if I weren't so vanilla and if I didn't had an RP going on.

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 No.279927

File: b0200704a985072⋯.jpg (78.2 KB, 786x1200, 131:200, EDsnPkMUEAApexv.jpg)

>>279926

>if I weren't so vanilla

I enjoy vanilla stuff too.

Do you think I should add a custom letting people know? I've seen other profiles doing it, but I do have 'affection' and 'tantric sex' in the yes sub-fetish.

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 No.279928

>>279927

I don't think it will hurt to add a custom.

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 No.279936

File: 5ac50a2f8c843a3⋯.jpg (858.67 KB, 807x1200, 269:400, 62427593_p0_master1200.jpg)

File: e131e02ebaff1bc⋯.jpg (1.17 MB, 1061x1500, 1061:1500, __original_drawn_by_ram_ra….jpg)

https://www.f-list.net/c/just%20an%20accountant/

https://www.f-list.net/c/grocery%20store%20clerk/

I’m a bit of a beginner and these are my first big characters, so I’ll appreciate any feedback or advice.

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 No.279937

>>235148

How do I make a good profile?

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 No.279938

>>279937

>Make an inline

It really helps.

>For the bio, have the "core" of the character's backstory/personality be 2-3 paragraphs.

You could write more, but put the stuff that could be considered extra information inside of a dropdown, because the more you write, the less people are going to read. Why spend time reading some character's profile with a bunch of paragraphs, when your kinks don't match up anyway?

>Don't be a sperg about stuff you don't like. This includes muh transphobia, racism, sexism, etc.

This part is very important, and why I think a lot of people on F-List are mentally ill. For example, don't want to play with males or females? Just put them in no, don't go on a tangent about how you find x percentage of males/females boring and other things.

>Don't mention anything too personal in your profile

Somewhat self-explanatory. You'd be surprised about how many players mention they have a mental illness, have tried to commit suicide, or even mention imply that they have been raped. Imagine you meet someone for the first time and one of the first things they tell you is that they're bi-polar or tried to hang themselves,

>Write some custom kinks

These help other players know what you really like or should pay attention to, even if you have a related kink under faves.

>Do your best to find art that is really consistent

Self-explanatory.

That's what I can think of. I hope this was helpful.

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 No.279939

File: 7389c734c10a03f⋯.png (8.69 KB, 500x500, 1:1, 1409829777619.png)

>>279937

Learn how to do inlines and transparency in pictures, the 'you suck at photoshop' tutorial explains it quickly.

A profile should have the following, usually:

Some sort of header, with what you're looking for, how you want to be approached

Inline picture

Two good paragraphs establishing what kind of character your character is, including personality and appearance and what they're for rp-wise that shows you can write and are not retarded

custom kinks, with descriptions that are sexually appealing

done

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 No.279940

File: 5ffbbea44315670⋯.jpg (286.97 KB, 850x1202, 425:601, sample_7d60da0b1644e89efff….jpg)

I've had it in mind to make a Lara Croft type character for a while.

Sophisticated intelligent treasure hunter.

But I don't want to play as the canon Lara.

Any thoughts on what can be done to get that Tomb Raider feel without being the actual Tomb Raider?

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 No.279941

>>279940

I don't see anything wrong with making an original character inspired by canon. Go for it, anon.

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 No.279942

>>279941

Oh I don't think so either. I just don't want to make a carbon copy of Laura under a different name if that makes any sense.

I do plan on her coming across time travel, space adventures and that sort of thing. Maybe that will be enough.

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 No.279943

>>279940

>>279942

This is an interesting idea, what types of stories do you have in mind?

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 No.279945

File: a70e69ecc510d5f⋯.jpeg (76.9 KB, 1069x890, 1069:890, 27cb864a11a38b3bb42625a8e….jpeg)

>>279943

This is the image that had me think some time travel shenanigans. Some ancient artifact that transports her to a much more primitive time. Or, on the other hand, she comes across some sort of savage land where dinos roam free and she's stuck there for a little bit.

For a more sci-fi thing being a xeno-archeologist looking for lost relics of ancient alien races, maybe even of her own that takes her far off worlds, asteroids and the like.

In either setting she's going to be very much a Lara Croft. An archeologist who knows how to throw down when need be but would rather talk first shoot second.

Those are just some of the ideas that come to mind for stories

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 No.279946

>>279945

That sounds like it could be fun.

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 No.279949

>>279945

This sounds really fun. I could even see myself forgetting the E and RPing too much, heh. What are her kinks?

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 No.279950

>>279949

>>279946

Well thank you anons. I'm glad she sounds like fun.

As for the kinks, to be honest I'm actually pretty vanilla in that department.

I love a good foreplay scene, kissing, petting, cuddling but I like to throw in some unrealistic things as well like some light cum inflation, stomach/throat bulging.

Given what this character might get into things like tentacles and aliens are on the list as well, monsters possibly as well.

One thing I would like to do with her is that out of the sack she's a take charge kind of woman, but utterly enjoys being dominated in the bedroom.

Pined down in a mating press, being put in a full nelson, bent over, hair pulled, ass slapped that sort of stuff.

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 No.279951

File: a908da68bd4af96⋯.png (2.76 MB, 822x1166, 411:583, 815d5310380e5dd4275fc5464f….png)

>>279949

You know something like this might be a bit too far out there but I won't lie and say the idea of her ending up in some almost bad end situations kind of hot.

I say almost bad ends because I do want her to be able to escape, but she might just have some long lasting effects to deal with after such close encounters.

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 No.279960

File: 7d3f27f8e0fdb9a⋯.jpeg (601.41 KB, 1000x1398, 500:699, 07fb21e7ca1c8ae824f82f197….jpeg)

Well lads she's finally finished.

Come check her out, look the profile over and if you've got any feedback send it to me.

https://www.f-list.net/c/Daphne%20Ashcroft

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 No.279979

So I decided to make a succubus character, something I've never done and with some art I bought a couple of years ago. I'm mostly happy with the profile but I can;t help but think there's something missing on it.

https://www.f-list.net/c/Red%20Imp%20Succubus

I've got a few more custom kinks in mind but, maybe a collapse with some scenarios for summoning the demon as starting points?

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 No.280015

File: c9e4c7204e0501d⋯.png (4.66 MB, 2394x1240, 1197:620, ClipboardImage.png)

https://www.f-list.net/c/an%20honest%20salesman/

What do you anons think?

A part of me thinks that I need to add more characterization, but some people I've shown him to have told me that he's good or fine.

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 No.280018

>>280015

It looks good to me, the only thing I would suggest changing is this line

> Just don’t worry about the legality of some of those wares. Also, some of those items might have been stolen, but he doesn’t let those things bother him

That seems redundant to me. It might flow better if it were something like

>Just don't let the legality of some of those wares bother you, they certainly don't worry Ren.

Just my two cents. Other wise, looks good.

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 No.280019

>>280018

Thanks, anon. I'll get right on that.

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