/agdg/ - Amateur Game Development General★

Little sister incest, it is time to be a good older brother, I will remove her from the perversions you have foreseen for her.

Game has been updated.

-Added New Ability to save as and load save files

-119 Typo corrections

-changed 'My World" messages

-corrected Midori Event bugs

-Removed Redia's Panties if you didn't give her your lucky shirt

-Fixed Suiko's day01 review

-Added new variables to setup Day03

-Misc Changes to some passages

>>33075 (OP)

Wait but Mister, if I was abandoned by my parents and told to take care of a newborn baby girl, I'd make sure she turned into a good woman! I wouldn't be angry!

>implying I'd let my sister/daughter anywhere near a public school

>implying I'd let my sister/daughter/ anywhere near my degenerate habits

>implying I wouldn't let them go for my sister/daughter's sake

Anyway, definitely needs some editing work. To name two examples, "gestor" should be "gesture" and

>"'You’re doing well! Don't be shy, my sister here to be your new friend.'"

is missing an "is" between "sister" and "here", though even then the sentence sounds a bit off.

Otherwise I kind of wish there were more customization choices. Even if simple, like hair/eye color. I'm still playing through it, but so far I kind of wish there were more options; feels too linear.

>>33150

>Soon after your sister begun grade school, you often see her with her two friends you introducted to her.

Wait, there was another? I only met Suika.

>>33151

*Suiko

>daddy has anger issues normal temperature for modern first-worlders

>scold daughter

>get pressured into apologizing

>mother is a CEO

>cannot afford the bills whilst paying for the condominium

Don't remember, but is he just paying the bills, or mortgage as well? If the latter as well, why doesn't he just move to a smaller abode? If he isn't allowed to sell the house, why doesn't he change the ownership? If it's more complicated then just visiting a government center, why doesn't he go to court? Doesn't really matter, and I understand that the point is that the parents really don't give a shit about their children, but still.

Also, the default age says "18", but now I'm 24? Then I think it says I'm younger again, I don't know.

>have a thing for tomboys

But I don't actually I do, at least not Jewesses, unless she was supposed to be Anglo-Saxon-Hibernian shouldn't I be able to choose? Or is it based on how high the love meter is?

Otherwise, I select options that read, for example, "Smoking isn't for everyone", yet then there's all this extra stuff I did not anticipate when selecting. Vid related.

Also, I don't remember meeting Redia on day 2. Also also, what was that about the sister and her room? Is it revealed later or what? Most people would ask why everything strewn about and why she's crying.

I don't know if text games or Japanese VN are like this, if so, then I guess I shouldn't complain too much. I have not really played VNs. Anyway, I enjoyed it (really, there's something comfy about games like that), but the earlier chapters definitely need to be tuned before continuing.