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0c196d  No.178

http://pastebin.com/b1Wb4w70

/rg/ anon here, I wrote something about racemixing.

I was kind of going for a mythic/biblical parable tone here, but I feel like it shifts between mythic poetry (e.g., Beowulf, the Tain, Iliad etc.) and religious myth, which are actually important to keep separate.

Also I'm not a very good writer because I don't write often.
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0c196d  No.217

This is actually quite good. You do well with the tone, though there are some missteps here and there.
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0c196d  No.221

Pretty cool.

Isn't there already a biblical passage on miscegenation though?
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