No.15394
>uhh??? no ebik quips? no flashy capeshit battles? no regurgitated pop culture tropes from the past 20+ years? yeah, no thanks
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No.15395
>this author didnt use any of the techniques i learned in creative writing class wow what a hack!
I can tell that faggot browses reddit and loves RPO.
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No.15396
Of Mice and Memes was genuinely a shit novel but not for the reasons listed.
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No.15397
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No.15398
>>15394
>legends of american literature
so not much
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No.15400
>>15397
I forgot a good 90% of the reasons since I only read it once and that was a long time ago but things to note are lack of depth, too short for its own good, characterization does not mean good characters, and things like that in general.
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No.15411
>>15396
So you do better lol
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No.15412
>>15394
>tvtropes
What did you expect?
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No.15414
>>15394
>exposition: george and lenny are poor so they go to work on a farm
>rising action: george and lenny make good money with their new friend and feel that their dream is closer than ever
>also rising action: shitloads of foreshadowing about euthanasia
>climax: lenny accidentally kills the bitch and ruins the dream
>falling action: george agonizes over lenny's fate, doesn't want to see him lynched or raped in prison
>resolution: george kills lenny
>conclusion: george is sad, tells the new friend to fuck off, and plans on going to town to fuck some hookers
How the fuck is that a "non-story"? Fuck I hate normalfaggots so much. Good stories are almost never about someone who "changes his environment"; they're about people who are changed by their environments. OM&M is the story of how George took the final blackpill.
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No.15415
What if there were a book like Of Mice and Men with added quips and capeshit?
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No.15416
>>15415
It would be Man of Steel.
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No.15423
>>15411
>If you want to criticize something you have to excel at it or else you're opinion is invalid
Epic.
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No.15424
>>15415
>Capeshit
Wouldn't that straight up just be replacing Lenny's mental retardation with super powers he can't control?
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No.15429
>>15423
Your green sarcasm would be on point, if you weren't asked to write a NOVELLA.
Of Mice & Men is good and all, but the bar wasn't really set that high, buddy. You could put your money where your mouth is.
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No.15432
>>15429
So let me get this straight you want me to write an entire novella and post it here to prove I'm a better writer than Steinbeck?
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No.15442
Of Mice and Men is the only piece of fiction that has ever caused me to cry.
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No.15449
>>15396
>novel
Well that's your first mistake
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No.15450
>>15423
Ignorance is only bliss when it is your own
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No.15506
>Phrederick
what a phaggot
>>15411
wtf I love poorly-written books now
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No.15508
>>15394
>NPCs
wassis all about then?
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No.15681
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No.15714
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No.15722
>>15714
>Female
>white
>American
>Named fucking Karen
No surprise she thinks its about muh purrspeckiv and that her life is actually worse than a soviet prisoner's
Women really shouldn't be allowed to speak about literature, if anything
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No.15723
>>15722
Karen is a nice name. Also your impotent rage is both cringe-worthy and amusing.
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No.15728
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No.15731
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No.15734
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No.15737
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No.15742
>>15722
I've known a few nice Karens
but the rest of your assesment is correct even as an American myself. our women are absolute crap.
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No.15765
>>15714
>because being a spy is cool
Oh o-ok. I thought it was one of the dirtiest, unrewarding, suicidal, stressfully boring jobs of all time. Where do I sign up for the James Bond masterclass, Karen? FBI guy hook me up pls.
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No.16332
Obsessing over people you know are inferior to you seems like a meaningless endeavor. It's also cheap. Did you actually break down his post in any meaningful way? No. Which is why his post isn't even wrong, but yours is.
His review is fine. He's literally challenging people to change his mind, which implies he knows what he's doing. What have you achieved however?
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