/cyoa/ - Choose Your Own Adventure★

tl;dr

>>14296

But not tl;db, apparently.

>>14202 (OP)

You wrote so much yet you told so little.

tldr: you are teleported to another dimension, a medieval looking one it seems, and this dude will give you help for Favors. First choice is free.

I'd pic the elf slaev wat do but even with "they" (just use he or she you mutt) i'd still not have the one thing I need to thrive. Information, which OP did not gave despite typing so fucking much.

>>14321

what information is lacking, specifically

>>14323

Sorry anon but you have the wrong type of autism.

>>14322

What, you mean two (almost) monochrome abstract crayon drawings is not enough for you to swallow all this graphomany?

>>14323

You have provided zero information on the setting itself (thus severely diminishing our ability to reason which choices would be useful), and zero graphical information to navigate this wall of text. Hell, you didn't even say what gender the slave would be (and just so you know, it makes a big difference!)

this is pretty shit. lots of text, nothing to break it up, no depth to the presentation. images are… i'm not sure what to say.

>>14419

i don't think exposition on whatever the fuck special-snowflake setting this is would in anyway help this clusterfuck. i guess if we give the author the benefit of the doubt you could say the slave's gender was left ambiguous so you could choose for yourself. or maybe they're some genderfluid tumblr refugee.

>>14432

It's called "constructive criticism". If we just call it shit, it's probably gonna stay shit. But if we want to give the author a chance to fix it (and in the process let him learn how to make better stuff), we should give him some hints on what needs fixing.

Information on the setting and images to go along with text is a place to start, at least. Scaling down (or at least making a tl;dr version) would be a second step.

>you could say the slave's gender was left ambiguous so you could choose for yourself

He totally failed to mention that, though.

>or maybe they're some genderfluid tumblr refugee

It's a fantasy setting, there shouldn't be enough overindulgence for those morons to breed