8dd6bf No.2619
Sup /pdfs/ I'm a writefag for /pol/.
A couple months ago I wrote a novella for all the /new/smen and /pol/acks of the world. So here it is. I hope you enjoy it.
The Hand that Holds the World
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8dd6bf No.2627
It's good. But it's full of typos.
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8dd6bf No.2628
>>2627
Yeah I know.
An anon from /pol/ is editing it.
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8dd6bf No.2629
>>2627
But I'm glad you think it is good.
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8dd6bf No.2686
>>2628
if you made this a couple of months ago, are they still progressing in their editing?
if not, i may be of assistance. just send me an email or something.
also, i just found this (lol): http://www.lybrary.com/c-r-mcmahon-m-493803.html
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8dd6bf No.2894
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8dd6bf No.2898
I'm willing to help with typesetting as I can tell this was written in a WYSIWIG then converted to PDF.
http://tex.stackexchange.com/questions/110133/visual-comparison-between-latex-and-word-output-hyphenation-typesetting-ligat
To a trained eye it is repulsive, to but even to an untrained eye, LaTeX looks better.
Send an email to >29ezm1+9kkw1i80d2jx9j@grr.la
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8dd6bf No.2899
>>2898
Oops meant to greentext that email address, for no reason
29ezm1+9kkw1i80d2jx9j@grr.la
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8dd6bf No.3121
>>2899
hope you work with the fixed version (no typos)
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8dd6bf No.3151
85fb30 here, I haven't set anything yet but I'd probably fix any normal spelling errors if I encountered them since OP is probably not going to be in communication with me it seems.
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8dd6bf No.3250
Shit piece of writing. Nothing to do with the politics, you are just a banal, febrile little prose stylist.
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8dd6bf No.3849
I liked it, but a bit depressing
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86a0ea No.12806
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75cdc3 No.12845
I liked it. Very obvious where you got your themes and motifs from. I do enjoy a good plutocracy story every now and then. Your story would be less obvious if you changed the whole message. Naturally when you present the example of that kind of society, its eventual destruction is what the audience craves more than the lead character. For this to absolutely be a staggering story, the main purpose should be something that the audience would never expect. Great story, though. Could definitely be improved with more detail. The environments are hard to grasp.
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