No.7517 [Last50 Posts]
Executive-sized edition
OLD >>6581
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No.7519
>tfw I didn't notice the thread was past the bump limit for like a week
Thanks, and sorry
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No.7521
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No.7522
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No.7523
>old thread page 1
>hey guys here's a new thread
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No.7525
>>7523
The thread is past the bump limit. Without the visual cue of the thread being boosted to the top of the front page I was unaware people were still posting in it.
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No.7534
reposting + slightly updated version
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No.7535
>>7517
>finally make it in the OP image
> the shittiest version of that one redraw I did is used
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No.7537
I don't really have any doodle stuff, that I can't post here (ie "wouldn't be spoilers") but I do have this doodle.
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No.7538
How's she looking?
spoiler for lewd
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No.7540
>>7538
>no dick
Off to a good start immediately.
I think you're going a bit overboard with the shading which is kinda leading to a uncanny valley effect, but it's good overall.
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No.7541
>>7540
What about the hips?
I accidentally posted the image on /brit/ like a retard and some said the hips were off.
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No.7542
>>7541
the left legs perspective look weird, maybe because of the shade, also some part missing a muscle.
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No.7543
>>7538
I dont feel like I know what Im talking about but to me the arm looks a little too much like a barrel shape - the bulge of the bicep being a little too far down, the shoulder muscle ending a little bit too far up and the tricep lacking all definition. The shoulder also looks a little too far out. I smudged it a towards what I would have done, perhaps someone can tell me if Im completely off.
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No.7545
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No.7548
Testing the waters with some new approaches to drawing foliage
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No.7549
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No.7551
>>7548
That looks really nice m8, gg
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No.7552
>>7548
Looks great, is this done with a brush pen?
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No.7553
>>7552
yes, it's a fine tip felt pen
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No.7554
>my kangaroo I drew from imagination made it into the op
nice
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No.7555
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No.7561
beware of embarrassing porn
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No.7562
>>756
>embarrassing porn
I was expecting a fetish a bit more fucked-up than anal.
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No.7563
>>7561
Is she meant to be dead faced, know what I mean?
She doesn't look she's enjoying it or not enjoying it.
Just like "oh this is happening again?"
mspaint edit for comparison
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No.7568
>>7561
bruh that anatomy, I don't quite understand what is going on.
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No.7569
Been working on this pretty big graphite piece for a couple of weeks now, but fuck man, I keep going back over parts of it because of smudging, put paper on my hand while I work only makes it worse. Anyone have any tips on how to avoid smudging while working?
Pic semi-related, just a warmup sketch I did for this piece.
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No.7571
>>7569
wear a glove with the fingers cut off
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No.7572
>>7569
>Anyone have any tips on how to avoid smudging while working?
Switch to digital :^)
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No.7573
>>7571
Not him but I've seen Proko use that kind of gloves before. I don't know how efficient they are though.
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No.7574
>>7572
Now why would I do that?
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No.7577
take me home country roads
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No.7579
>>7572
I love your robot man but please improve how you draw tiddies. Look at pictures of breasts while you draw so you don't end up drawing those weird deflated balloons.
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No.7580
>>7573
I go through swings of wanting to use one and not wanting to use one; I use a traditional-style tablet though-if I used a screen I'd probably always use one.
>>7577
Nice. I don't play "Doo-Doo 2" but is that an actual costume of his or just a reinterpretation based on historical costume? Looks cool. Basket head-ass nigga
>>7579
They look pretty "academically accurate" to me tbh; whether that in itself is appealing or not is another story. Also they seem to be a bit asymmetrical in this instance.
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No.7583
I've got a full body sketch of the depressed girl I was drawing from last thread along with sketchs for more character redesigns along with vision boards.
The vision board with Dio on is associated with the the first page of sketchs, which is aiming to convey a beautiful sociopath of a woman. The purple vision board with Goku on it is for the second page of sketches, which trying to show a blissful athlete woman.
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No.7584
Yes, Sally’s「Burning」is basically a big green thick disc, behind her.
And if you didn’t catch the last panel’s line, I am referring to how Max’s doesn’t look the same. You’ll find out more of that later, but suffice to say, just like no two people’s eyes are the same, no two people’s「Burning」shape is the same.
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No.7587
Want to improve my ability to put lines down quickly from observation.
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No.7588
I don't typically do fanart, but I really like Ozen and she fits my aesthetic, also wanted to do a larger drawing on in graphite. Don't like how it turned out, but it was practice nonetheless.
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No.7601
>>7588
i dont know but i think bonedrewd is more fitting with your style
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No.7613
>>7580
>>7579
The asymmetry was intended, yeah. As for the tits I do find the idea of gravity and tugging at parts having extreme effects appealing, and have on more than one occasion tried to communicate exactly this, especially with bony robots and creatures; but I am aware of the Damoclean issue of explaining everything as a stylistic choice.
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No.7615
Feel like shit, and felt like doodling this idea again to see what differences there are.
Surprisingly a lot, but it should be obvious that I didn't really have either of their personalities figured out completely, at the time, given how much more "life" they seem to have now.
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No.7643
felt like trying this, since I noticed a lot of similarities to Bayo, in Sally.
Albeit some of that isn't available to the public, yet.
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No.7644
another one, and also some random thing I drew for a warmup, earlier today.
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No.7645
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No.7646
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
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No.7647
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No.7650
Birthday thing for a friend.
>>7645
One of the main characters in my comic, which I post in these threads.
The green one. Again, there's elements to her design that anyone reading it won't really be aware of yet, but if you want a quick rundown, there's a core in that her design works only with a female character.
One of which is having a small army of skeletal servant boys (in nice suits), at her beck and call that she can order by stomping.
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No.7652
New page.
I'm gonna just flat out say that Thrust is integral to an earlier event in the story. One that re-contextualizes everything that's led up to this point.
One that I trust you're smart enough to deduce for yourself.
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No.7656
>>7647
who dat 🅱itch is tho
>>7650
>tfw no spic Sally gf
JUST
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No.7661
>>7656
>spic Sally
It's Claire. She's a filthy spic.
Claire's from before I even started drafting EGWT, and is technically Sally and old Papi's middle sister.
Old Papi being initially conceived as Sally's sister, as well.
EGWT's design documents and process has been a clusterfuck, that's only recently in the past year become something cohesive that I can build upon.
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No.7691
second guessing this composition
>>7656
hikeah kareem
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No.7693
>>7691
I like the way the mast guides the viewer towards the mermaid, but perhaps having the whole ship there might make it a bit busy-leading to a struggle for dominance between the ship and mermaid as the main focal point.
Having a ship in the background and perhaps some miscellaneous stuff for context like you already have may be enough. Sagging ropes or chains in the foreground or something like that could break up some of the empty space. I don't know-it's up to you!
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No.7694
>>7691
I think the dimensions of the view is working against you. Feels like there is to much vertical space, but to little horizontal. My gut wants the horizon lowered, further centering the mermaid vertically, the ships pushed outwards to line up more with the dominant diagonals, debris in the bottom right suggesting the diagonal leading toward the mermaid in the center.
Here i've drawn in some lines. I think it is a solid composition with the design making strong use of the most dominant lines. However, I think you can see that with some slight adjustments, the elements will "fall into place" better.
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No.7696
>>7693
>>7694
thanks chums, i took into account both of your thoughts and i tried to put it through here with more focus on making the comp really work. i know it's a bad habit to post wips too much so by the next time it should be done! thanks again
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No.7697
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No.7700
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No.7702
something dumb and shitty
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No.7703
>>7702
It might be dumb and shitty but it made me smile; it is from within its shittiness that it ultimately finds its redemption.
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No.7723
an alt outfit for Papi.
It might come into play in a bit, might not. But I've included the back view of the hoodie, to show how the stripes wrap along it.
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No.7725
Big, potentially divisive, detail, here.
I'm not gonna spell it out, as just bringing it up is probably pushing it, but yeah. There's something there.
Also going to post the links for reading it, in case anyone wants to see the rest of it, subsequent posts won't have this
https://endgamewastaken.tumblr.com/post/171250963130/
http://endgamewastaken.the-comic.org/comics/
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No.7728
It's good to be back in life drawing sessions where I can glance at the work of people a bit better than me, the people a bit better than that, and so on. I think I'm improving at putting values on the paper.
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No.7737
>>7728
>5th pic
Where can I find life drawing sessions with Gerudos?
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No.7739
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>>7725
>yes, Dear
lewd tbh
>swearing
rude tbh
>>7737
this tbh
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No.7740
Is there anything I can improve on in Pic Related?
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No.7741
>>7703
Thanks, also that gave me another idea, recently.
Just forgot to upload it here.
>>7739
You're right on the mark I think.
If it wasn't obvious with the dialogue, then the thing "Goblin Max" is based on, should clue you in.
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No.7742
>>7740
Neck and chest area in terms of anatomy. The joint of the neck to the top of the chest is done vaguely, and the character's left breast begins some distance away from where it should (too close to the centre of the chest).
She looks like some girl who incessantly says 'meh' and complains about being bored and not having enough coffee to get through her convenience store cashier job, not sure if you were going for that.
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No.7749
>>7740
About them feets. One is flat from the side and the other is seen from above. Figure out what perspective you want and stick to it. Feet are hard and I've seen a lot of professional art with this problem.
Not mentioned in pic, but I also thinned out the line on the shoulders. I like that you're using varying line weight, but shoulders catch a lot of light in most situations so I'd keep it thinner on top. It's minor, and your opinion may vary on the matter.
You've improved a lot and I want to see you keep going.
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No.7750
I feel like I've hit a plateau, progress-wise. Not sure what to do now.
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No.7751
>>7750
Learn more anatomy and shit to increase your shape repertoire.
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No.7752
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No.7753
>>7752
I can only make out "I'm fun gun chill" and "Pulling ou".
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No.7781
>>7742
>Neck and chest area in terms of anatomy. The joint of the neck to the top of the chest is done vaguely, and the character's left breast begins some distance away from where it should (too close to the centre of the chest).
The thing with the neck that you and the other anon had pointed out came from an attempt to represent the clavicle of the neck in a more realistic manner, but it appears that wasn't the best idea. The chest came from me not knowing where I should place the left side if the breast. I intend to fix this next time I try this.
>She looks like some girl who incessantly says 'meh' and complains about being bored and not having enough coffee to get through her convenience store cashier job, not sure if you were going for that.
That really does describe what I was going for, despite the story I intended for her being a little different. On that note, what would you say is the age of this character based on her looks alone? Because I was aiming for a fifteen year old looking girl.
>>7749
>About them feets. One is flat from the side and the other is seen from above. Figure out what perspective you want and stick to it. Feet are hard and I've seen a lot of professional art with this problem.
>Not mentioned in pic, but I also thinned out the line on the shoulders. I like that you're using varying line weight, but shoulders catch a lot of light in most situations so I'd keep it thinner on top. It's minor, and your opinion may vary on the matter.
>You've improved a lot and I want to see you keep going.
Once again, your advice is very much appreciated. I look forward to displaying to you what I might have next time around.
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No.7782
>>7781
>On that note, what would you say is the age of this character based on her looks alone? Because I was aiming for a fifteen year old looking girl.
She looks to me a little older than that because of the shape of her head. Her waist to hip ratio also makes her look mature but this may be the bagginess of the clothes.
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No.7792
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Found this video showing the x-ray recording of various moving joints.
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No.7793
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>>7792
And also this newer one.
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No.7794
>>7792
>>7793
Just find a 3D model on sketchfab ya dingaling
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No.7799
>>7723
Continuing the shitty sketches of alt outfits, here's one for Sally.
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No.7800
>>7799
>midriff
You lewd son of a gun
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No.7801
>>7800
She's had a midriff going for the past two chapters. Albeit the framing of it in this outfit is different, yeah.
That being said, a /fit/ chick showing off her midriff isn't just her being lewd/for sex appeal. It's also a display of power
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No.7819
Here it is. It's taken me a while to get to here, due largely in part to my own ineptitude at writing, but this is going to be the main gimmick of the story.
It's basic, but with this all the rules have been established, and things will only pick up the pace/get better, from here.
Also if anyone's confused on any rules of Burning, I'm willing to clarify.
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No.7821
>>7819
THE THIRD COLOR HAS BEEN REVEALED FUUUUUUUUUUUU-
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No.7824
>>7821
I'm just going to start explaining stuff I've shown, in these posts.
>Why can Max do that, but doesn't even know what it's called?
>If Afterburns are so common, why didn't Sally show us hers?
>Come to think of it, how was Max able to dodge all those swipes and jabs, without Igniting?
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No.7825
>>7819
Is Sally an alien? I just noticed she doesn't have a nose and the other characters do.
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No.7826
>>7825
Actually wait; I feel like I may have seen a nose on a panel at some point. Ah hell I don't know.
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No.7827
>>7825
>>7826
DON'T SECOND GUESS YOURSELF.
YOU ARE INDEED ON TO SOMETHING WITH THAT!
AGAIN, I POINT TO THE THINGS I INCLUDED IN >>7824 TO HOPEFULLY GET YOU TO QUESTION A FEW THINGS IN THIS.
As for why?
Primarily because I've combed over the details to this story, autistically and meticulously, to a ludicrous degree. Basically every page has some small detail or foreshadowing, that will come into play later. Even the squabbling of those two, and the terms Sally used for Papi, comes into play a dozen or so pages from now.
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No.7833
>>7825
>Is Sally an alien?
Is Sally a wax /monster/?
>>7824
>If Afterburns are so common, why didn't Sally show us hers?
I was assuming (after reading the last page) that six-eyes, ten-fingers thing she did was her After-burn. *shrug*
Don't worry too much about readers picking up on everything right away. Questioning what's going on for a while can be part of the fun, and the ones that want to suss it out will, unless you really screw up the narrative.
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No.7839
>>7833
In hindsight, I see what you mean.
The hints are there, and there's just enough information to piece what I'm hinting at, together.
It's just like, it's like having a good riddle, and struggling to not tell people the answer, because the second you do it ruins the fun.
I'll go back to being more cryptic about this, and just letting people piece it together.
Anyway, two more pages in the gym, then we're out of here, and I'm never spending more than ten in the same setting, and even then it'll be shifting around to be more visually interesting.
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No.7872
Anyone want to critique these?
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No.7873
>>7872
Pretty good tbh, biggest offense is that they look kind of sloppy/unfinished in places. I'd also take a good look at how you have her brow rendered on the rightmost drawing because something about it is making it appear almost cro-magnon; try and smooth that area out.
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No.7875
>>7873
Also I'm trying to remember: did you post a picture of this character like a year or more ago? Huge improvement assuming you're the same guy. Kudos.
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No.7876
>>7875
maybe, I posted here a long time ago though I didn't post Shimakaze as far as I recall.
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No.7884
>>7872
the one on the right sorta lacks a focus point, there's nothing that really grabs your eye.
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No.7887
any1 else watch this gongshow of a movie
>>7872
CUTE
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No.7888
>>7887
No, but I heard it was good
>from the sort of people that reliably say everything ever is good
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No.7906
>>7872
That face is not looking great. It's well drawn but she looks like a different person from 1 to 2. You've hit a weird mix of anime and cartoon and it does not look appealing. Her back's also looking all kinds of fucked up in the first pose but I can't put my finger on why.
It's great otherwise, though. I dig the shading.
>>7887
I saw it with friends. That movie was kind of dumb, dude.
>lol DNA mixes inside the alien bubble
I study genetics so the flagrant impossibility of the scenario took me out of the movie a lot. You can't just give an alligator/crocodile (I don't remember which) shark teeth.
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No.7920
>>7906
>Her back's also looking all kinds of fucked up in the first pose but I can't put my finger on why.
The lower half looks much, much bigger than the upper half.
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No.7923
The first three are just some quick ones from a drawthread, the last few are actual real attempts rather than quick works
Thoughts?
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No.7932
Next week is the last page in this fucking gym, then we're outta there for good.
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No.7934
>>7932
Nice angles on Sally there. It's good to be moving on, looking forward to seeing where they end up next.
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No.7935
>>7934
Thanks. And I think you'll be pretty surprised, but have seen it coming in hindsight, when I show where they go, on the page after the next page.
Though also look forward to the next page, there's certainly something there, that would keep me from just jumping locations immediately after this one.
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No.7936
>>7587
Pretty cool,nice work.
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No.7937
>>7923
I remember that witch from a while back. I'm seeing consistent proportional issues but don't be discouraged, just keep practicing and try to be self aware. When you finish something yeah ask your peers what might be wrong with it but you should go off and look at other pictures that inspire you and see how your picture might struggle in comparison and think about why that might be
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No.7939
>>7923
It's cute, but it all looks like you're either drawing with a mouse or brushes that have shit settings.
Apart from obviously looking a bit more into anatomy, try looking into both line weight and color/values.
Before jumping into colors right away, you could benefit from doing monochrome/greyscale studies.
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No.7940
>>7923
Color looks not so bad for a noob, you just need more practice on sketching. Foreshortening is hard, try have a transparency lineart when drawing. It would give you a better picture on what you're trying to achieve.
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No.7942
almost forgot the glasses. very important.
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No.7943
>>7937
>>7939
>>7940
Thanks anons
>>7939
I'm using Medibang Paint Pro, but are there any recommended kinds of brushes or settings I should be aware of?
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No.7948
>>7942
I initially scrolled by this hardly having looked at it but I'm glad I looked at it again because o I am laffin'.
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No.7955
>>7942
Was this inspired by the web serial Ward?
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No.7957
>>7955
sorry I don't know what that is. I just did it cause of the meme floating around.
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No.7958
Is there anything that could be touched up before I start trying to ink this?
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No.7960
>>7958
nope, knock yourself out
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No.7964
>>7958
her face is scary. please fix it.
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No.7968
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No.7974
Despite the anatomy and foreshortening errors I am pleased with this drawing due to how I got the shadows down.
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No.7975
>>7974
See how in places you have two intersecting shading lines and they kind of happen to blend together? Take your time and try and do that over the entire figure to get an even tone and then build on that/take away from it with your eraser and you'll get a sophisticated looking result I'm sure. Make sure to go in one direction rather than going back and forth if you know what I mean.
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No.7981
8 doobies to the face FUCK DOT
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No.7982
>>7958
I think the eyes are a little too high in the skull. The nose is really long, making the bottom too low, and not giving the mouth enough room. The mouth itself could stand to be raised a little. I can't tell if those are teeth or bottom lip. As bottom lip, it's about right, but if those are teeth, I'd thin out the top lip some and go really light on outlining the teeth.
Don't bring the line around the breast so far up. I wouldn't connect the line between them on a pair that size either. Also, they're a little uneven.
The thumb/palm connection on the hanging hand is off: There needs to be more meat/an angled line connecting lower on the palm. (hands amirite)
Those are some really wide shoulders.
The positioning of the feet is much better!
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No.8000
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No.8007
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No.8009
>>8007
Hepburn sure was a pretty lady tbh
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No.8013
Sup /loomis/,
Decided to try and change how I've been painting because I seem to go full steam ahead and completely lose my steam by the half-way point. I actually want to finish things so I've decided to go low-detail and hit the painting with an ugly brush to see what happens. I'm sure there's still work that could be done here, but too amateur to figure out where I should take it from here.
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No.8018
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No.8019
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
>>8013
Finishing things by deliberately NOT finishing them seems like kind of a cop-out to me brudda.
>>8018
I think the fat little guy is playing.
Given his segmented, round shape that position doesn't look natural, like it would need to be maintained with at least a little effort. The drool would have dried if he was dead for more than a very short time, and his little claws would probably be in a more neutral position
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No.8021
>>8019
I get what you're saying. Working on more defined rendering on it now too make it feel more complete. I fixed the jacked nose and mouth because they're out of alignment in that version.
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No.8022
>>8019
Yeah that's right. He's a rascal. He'd probably be flipping back over the instant you looked away.
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No.8023
>Miss Wickerish requires all her employees to be at peak physical performance.
>I'm no exception.
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No.8024
>>8023
Actually, thinking about it, I should probably have shrunk that.
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No.8038
>>8024
The hidden leg looks smaller than it should be. I tried to give my impression of how the lines connect behind the leg to show why it looks small. The far shoulder also looks less muscular than the near shoulder.
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No.8040
This page is hands down, my favorite page I've ever made. It's just really got everything that makes my style.
I won't bore everyone by going into detail, but there a ton of stuff here.
As far as what's happening, that's El Grande. He's Wickerish INC's accountant. Though most of what he handles is paying for the collateral Sally causes.
But that's not important, what is, is that last panel. I remember a while ago, an Anon thought Max being able to go toe to toe with Sally was an oversight. Well now I can finally back up how it's not.
Next week, look forward to finally leaving the gym.
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No.8041
>>8038
Hey thanks. Anything else you're noticing that I could take note of?
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No.8042
>>8038
Okay, I'm back and not strapped for time, this time.
I can see what you mean, and I actually had the stage left leg sticking out further, before lassoing it to the length you see there. The shoulder I just straight up didn't catch.
A friend of mine also pointed out how the length of the torso overall feels too long/wrong.
I'm not going back to correct this, because I live by a
>"when it's uploaded, it's done, and you gotta take the lessons you learn from it, forward"
mentality, but again, thanks. If anything this shows me I should be drawing more pinup types of drawings, to better gauge what I'm still bad at/messing up.
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No.8044
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No.8047
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
>>8040
I know it's a canned pose but the bottom right panel kind of reminds me of something I saw in Hajime for some reason. Fun page; keep it up.
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No.8057
>>7982
I wasn't really happy with how I inked the other drawing (on top of how dissatisfied I was with how it looked in general), so I restarted the day I posted the the other one, heeding your advice when I had checked on this thread again, I couldn't be fucked to try and relay this info until now. I'll try inking this one tommorow, tweaking all the things I dont like about it out.
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No.8062
>>8057
While you're tweaking, the neck looks a little long. I'd bring the shoulders up, lengthening the short upper arm in doing so.
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No.8071
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No.8078
New drawing. Please critique me I seriously need to at least make the pose less shit. :(
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No.8085
>>8078
Area between her neck and lower shoulder are awfully flat which made her head placement looks like proportionately wrong. In fact her whole arm looks really flat. You have too little thin lines in your drawing. Fix your line dynamic so that it looks better.
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No.8087
I had finished inking today, so I will try coloring with marker sometime this week.
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No.8088
>>8078
My biggest issue with this pose is the underlying confusion that's come from the lack of foreshortening with the arms and the sword's perspective not taken into account. Both arms form an overlapping tangent as though they were completely adjacent. It also means, that the inner arm (left) is much shorter than the outer.
I lined your image to show you how the arms overlap funny. In the second image, you can see how the left arm extends away from the viewer in the same way as if you were doing a stretch. The posture of the other arm has the right idea, and it doesn't change all that much.
this picture activates my sword autism, a foil is a one handed sword
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No.8097
What do you guys think about this?
trying to develop some stuff unique to paint
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No.8100
>>8097
I don't think much about it, and I don't think you put much thought into it either. It's cute for what it is I guess but you can't give something like that a serious critique.
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No.8101
>>8100
thanks for the input, for sure confirmed my fears about it. To be honest, i was putting a decent amount of thought into it, I was trying to play with balance with the colors and using a limited amount of color. I'm concerned with not being able to critique it and I'm hoping i can progress these tools to a point where they are worth something so someone
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No.8102
>>8101
Well for what it's worth sure I'd say the color is nice but it's just too abstract for me to give a weighted comment on in general beyond that
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No.8103
>>8097
>>8101
If you're trying for a limited palette, get rid of the black and use the darkest fill color for the lines.
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No.8104
>>8103
Oh that does look really nice. Thank you
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No.8105
>>8085
>>8088
Thank you so much for the input. I knew there was some fundamentally wrong shit with the pose itself and I just wanted to at least practice with being a bit more dynamic with my posing drawing anime waifus for some bros I know.
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No.8107
>>8097
I agree with >>8100 and >>8102
It looks like you're trying to go for something like what this person draws https://twitter.com/tkmiz/media?lang=en
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No.8117
>>8105
That happens to me a lot.
I think doing this kind of thing helps me as much as it does you. That pose was far more complicated than even I imagined and I learned a thing or two just trying to reconstruct it.
When in doubt get yourself a wall mirror and reference your poses! best 10$ I ever spent.
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No.8127
>>8097
That looks like a Zachary Waltman drawing.
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No.8128
>>8047
No you're right on the money.
>Thanks. I used to box.
That's what "boxing" is, in EGWT. I do my best to avoid putting useless details in, and by proxy basically anything I'm showing you guys can potentially become relevant again later.
Though I'm glad to hear it stuck out amidst the rest of the page, that's probably my favorite panel I've made and it's definitely had a good reception amidst people I know, too.
To the point where one person made a poster of it.
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No.8129
>you will never squeeze Mami's milkies
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No.8130
>>8129
You know what else we'll never squeeze?
Mafic milkies
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No.8132
>>8129
muh dick.
I feel like her kicked-back leg is a bit exaggerated as far as the angle goes-it should probably look like it's coming more directly towards the viewer. Try and put your own leg like that and see what I mean (if you're having a hard time drawing the shoe at a foreshortened angle no one would blame you, consider looking for a reference for a heeled shoe on sketchfab). Also, her legs are much shorter in her dynamic pose relative to her kneeling pose. Her head and breasts are a little smaller implying a distance somewhat further from the viewer but her arms appear to be essentially as long while her hands too are substantially smaller. Definitely try and cross-reference your proportions inbetween drawings.
Compositionally it feels a little weird because you see her h'big h'butt being well in front of everything else but then her elbow is being obscured by her standing pose's knee, giving kind of a visual mixed message.
Keep going it's looking pretty good.
>>8130
Sexy rocks dude
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No.8151
Felt like doing something with an autistic amount of detail, so I drew a monster face.
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No.8157
New page.
Not much to say about this one, but we're back where the cover was located, and there's a fair bit of nonverbal storytelling going on here, that I stuck in.
Whether or not I'm successful is another matter, but it's there.
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No.8158
>>8157
I like how everyone's ignoring how WICKED SIKK the cab driver is. Just an ordinary citizen in a city with a giant sword in the middle of it I guess.
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No.8161
Also remembered I drew something, today, and have unposted draws.
>>8158
He got used to it.
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No.8184
Playing around, trying to do some comics, without words because i'm lazy.
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No.8185
>>8184
Crude drawings, subject matter is pretty hot though.
>tfw no stray dog gf
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No.8187
>>8132
Thanks for the critique.
>Definitely try and cross-reference your proportions inbetween drawings.
Yeah, this is a big problem I have. I need to be more thorough about sticking to a particular character design.
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No.8191
oh yeah, so here's something I made a while back. Probably my best work so far
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No.8192
>>8191
Not too shabby, however I feel like something's off about her lower body; legs and distance between the navel and gooch seem skewed a bit long. Also I feel the detail could be pushed more in certain areas like her ripped leggings and eyebrows which both find themselves among strong focal points . While asymmetrical detail is perfectly fine it's not a bad idea to think about that kind of stuff.
Also it would probably be a good idea to crop the image closer to whatever the hell that thing-is' balls is. They're well-drawn, but we don't need to see that nigga's vastus lateralis or whatever.
Compositionally you have a lot of open area where not a lot is happening. You might be able to get away with trimming down a lot of her right leg, or adding another monster on the side ready to give her the pacific rimjob I don't know.
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No.8193
>>8192
>legs and distance between the navel and gooch seem skewed a bit long
Having second thoughts about this comment, it looks pretty good in the thumbnail as far as that goes. If it is off it's not severely so, at any rate.
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No.8197
>>8191
It's good but it's painfully generic.
I've seen literally thousands of images of anime girls getting fucked with tearing up slightly.
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No.8198
>>8185
Yeah, I kind rushed some parts because I just wanted to finish as soon as possible, but I don't think I can make much better without speding one week in each page, I was thinking in making each frame separately to improve the art quality.
Any lead in how make it better? Next time I want to do a stray little cat or something like that.
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No.8200
>>8151
It's hard to see the 3D form of this guy, especially when viewing a thumbnail of the picture. The neck parts where the fat rolls butt up against each other look like slits in paper rather than looking like they're formed by cylindrical pieces of flesh bumping up against and disappearing into each other. The interior of the mouth doesn't give the impression of being further away from the viewer than the lips, and it's the same with the bottom of the chin against the neck. I think part of the reason is that you appear to have used two discrete brush size settings, and the larger one overpowers the small details in a lot of places. If I zoom in to some of the neck rolls it does look a little more 3D because of how the small details wrap around the cylindrical form but then the smooth, solid thick line just lies on top like a horse hair and hurts the effect. The back of the throat being the only thing that's solid black also looks strange composition-wise (again, especially visible in thumbnail).
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No.8202
I saw a hot girl with nice hair on the bus so I whipped it out.
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No.8203
>>8198
I made some more, no cat this time. I have this great idea in how to make the art look 10 times better, let's see how it ends.
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No.8206
>>8198
>Any lead in how make it better?
The dude has wildly inconsistent proportions, try and keep them stable in between panels. Think of how many heads tall he is, wide he is and how he relates to her in size etc.
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No.8207
>>8206
A-actually that's make a lot of sense. Funny how I overlooked this, but being fair I really dind't give a fuck about the dude, he was there just to interact with the loli.
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No.8209
Finally remembered to post this after attempting to shade the colors a few weeks ago.
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No.8210
Was supposed to be a gentle whap to the temple, but the posing ended up a little goofy.
>>8203
I feel the story flows better in this one. The previous had some panel choices that confused me. -10 points for being borderline furry, tho. :^)
>>8209
Was wondering where this went. Keep it up.
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No.8211
>>8210
Dude, please, lolis furrys are completely diferent from normal furry, it's the fetish of the neo übermensch born to purify such despicable comunity. I even think that the biggest problem of the furry comunity are the shitty designs and digusting fags that destroy everything. Overall furry it's just another autistic fetish good to make money, take the fags off and teach them what good design is about and everything is just fine.
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No.8213
>>8210
That left hand made me remember how I used to draw terminator hands as a young kid. I remember tripping over the incidental optical illusion I had created when using lines for the fingers of the hand. You can't tell if your looking at the top of the hand or that palm.
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No.8214
Anyone know any good resources for drawing genitals in general? I did this for a drawthread but I wasn't really happy with how the vag turned out.
Any other critiques are welcome.
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No.8215
>>8211
Are you trying to tell me it's only the most degenerate and faggy of individuals; people so psychologically messed up that they ruin anything they choose to invade, who need to be hated and mercilessly ridiculed?
That finding a humanoid with animalistic traits cute or being able to enjoy a funny animal cartoon doesn't make you a complete reprobate?
That being a purity-obsessed, virtue-signaling idiot on a subject, especially when dealing with fiction, can make you just as retarded as the obnoxious, mentally-troubled faggots?
Nope. Not buying it, nigga.
>>8213
Backhanded compliment. heh
Like I said, the posing got a little goofy trying for cartoonish expressiveness. It's palm out. If that were the back, it would be the wrong hand and I'VE NEVER DONE THAT BEFORE HA HA HA!
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No.8216
>>8215
If they were, for the sake of argument, of legal age pursuant to legislation passed by the local constabulary I would breed the pussies of every last one of those creatures except maybe 5. Maybe.
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No.8217
>>7517
tablet died a while ago. been sketching traditional stuff a bit more and i still don't even know what i am doing
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No.8218
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No.8219
Uh…gay?
If you're going to suck your own dick you should at least finish with your hand
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No.8220
>>8219
meant for >>8217
smh
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No.8221
>>8217
>>8218
GAY FURRY TRASH
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No.8222
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No.8223
>>8222
yiff in hell furfag
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No.8225
Experimenting with colors, trying drawing without outlines because I find it fucking cute, but I dont know if this style is cut for porn or something close to it.
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No.8233
We're back to the cover, and believe me, I forgot Max's actual job, too.
But something seems weird about that tongue. Is it, nah I'm probably just overthinking things.
>>8217
>>8218
They're well drawn, at least.
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No.8240
>>8233
Excellent use of negative space.
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No.8246
every time i do a self portrait i remind myself how much i hate my nose
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No.8249
>>8246
(((Roman))) noses are in, silly goy!
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No.8251
>>8240
Why thank you.
I see you are a man of culture, as well.
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No.8252
I usually do traditional inkwork, so I decided to mix it up and do the opposite! Digital painting!
I don't get it guys, how do paint work?
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No.8264
Ok, I really should stopping drawing this shit before people start to think i'm a actual furry, but messing around with the colors and designs is so much fun.
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No.8266
>>8264
It's okay that you're a furry
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No.8267
>>8266
This. Furries are disgusting because they're gay, not because they want to have sex with humanimals
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No.8273
>>8264
>drawing furries
>somehow you're not a furry
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No.8278
>>8266
>>8267
wrong or not i'm still not one, I just like to fuck around with different concepts time to time.
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No.8279
>>8278
I don't know why, but the ears fell like they read better than the rest of the illustration. Maybe push the contrast more throughout? Something about the rest feels plastic
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No.8280
>>8279
Maybe it's the fur texture that I tried to apply, i'm not used to it. Maybe if I use some different brushes next time, but i'm over with this drawing, dont wanna even look at it for now.
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No.8282
>>8278
Actions speak louder than words, anon.
You're drawing furry characters, that kinda makes you a furry by default. By your logic drawing gay porn doesn't make you gay.
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No.8283
>>8279
Maybe it's the wider range of values on them?
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No.8284
>>8283
That's it, if you look at the hair it has that same range of values too.
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No.8288
First pass at a character design.
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No.8294
>>8288
I dig the crescent staff; you should sneak a few more crescent shapes in somewhere.
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No.8309
>>8288
I immediately thought of Shantae
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No.8311
>>8288
Really digging the design, but the belly looks really weird to me, looks saggy and floppy. Try simplifying it in a different way, you're doing all the wrong lines in the all the wrong places. There is a how lot more of anatomy "weirdness" all over the place, like the armpits or the collarbone, but the belly is such a strong point in your design that is the first thing that the eye go to, so you should see how to improve that first.
Hope that my shit engrish don't make it harder to pass through my point.
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No.8315
>>8311
Thanks for this. Maybe having someone correct my shit drawings will finally learn me something.
> you're doing all the wrong lines in the all the wrong places
just write that on my tombstone tbh story of my life
>>8309
It's them genie pants.
>>8294
Maybe a cresent earring or something similiar. I want to keep her attire simple.
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No.8322
YO BRO AFTER OUR WORKOUT WANNA GO BATTLE MISTY
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No.8323
>>8322
He's a big guy.
Tell me, why does he wear the mask?
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No.8324
>>8322
Good work. My favorite part is the to right arm draped over the barbell. I like everything about this pose except the bottom left arm. Feels out of balance being held slightly away from the body, when gravity would suggest to me it would be against his leg. I assume you chose to move it away to show off his physique.
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No.8327
Little birdie got some colors.
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No.8332
Really trying to rap my head around digital art, as it stands, I'm still treating it as I would pen and ink. A little stumped.
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No.8336
>>8327
Cute tbh
>>8332
I'm not sure what you're having problems with, looks pretty much like your usual stuff. Nothing wrong with that but I'm just curious what you mean.
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No.8337
>>8336
The thing is I don't know either, I feel like my usual stuff just isn't good enough, it just lacks something.
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No.8339
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No.8340
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No.8344
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No.8351
>>8344
I like that painterly look. Do ya paint all that in just one layer?
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No.8354
>>8351
Aye, man, just paint it directly onto the png. Fun way to handle it.
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No.8382
Update on that pose I made plus the right weapon, and a render requested from a friend.
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No.8384
>>8382
Nice render, bud. But if your friend isn't doing something proportional in return you really should consider not working on shit for hours just because someone asked you to, know what I mean? Give a mouse a cookie that nigga gonna ask for a glass of milk, dawg.
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No.8391
>>8382
Nice improvement! This is a bit of a step up from the original.
It's fun making gifts for friends too.
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No.8432
And I'm back off the brief hiatus.
Here's to hoping I'll keep my shit together enough to not fall behind again.
Page 77, we get back to Max's actual job. A few fun bits in this page, particularly Max's Dante styled comeback, his strut, and the closeup of the Game.
That last point in particular, I don't know about you, but that doesn't exactly look like a "tongue" to me.
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No.8433
>>8432
Nicely done
I would say that Max seems a bit smaller relative to Sally than usual, but I could be wrong. I'm sick and delirious-I know canonically speaking she is a bit bigger, but in a handful of those panels I feel like the difference is either more extreme than it should be OR perhaps just more extreme than I remember it being
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No.8434
>>8433
I'm willing to accept I just flat out fucked up on the scale (that's always been a weak point of mine,) but he's closer on a lower point on the hill.
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No.8435
>>8432
>merely end that game
>not quite
how she finna play dat n*gga like dat
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No.8447
>>8344
The perspective is completely fucked but I like the style you're going for.
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No.8456
>>8435
It involves that "terrifying potential" that enticed her into hiring him, and kept his ass employed with her this far.
Also, as an aside, this week's detail. Look at the Game, closer.
My reaction image isn't actually a reaction to your post at all.
It's a hint.
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No.8460
Drew down the two main characters for a comic I want to make eventually. I made the guy's head too big in my opinion, so I'll try and fix that when I make fullsized drawings of these two.
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No.8462
>>8447
Yeah I getcha, didn't push the perspective hard enough.
>>8460
Hey man, I don't know if it's on purpose but they're leaning a little hard there.
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No.8463
>>8462
Them leaning had been on purpose.
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No.8464
>>8463
Unfortunately, I don't think it really works. The leaning doesn't come across naturally, and they just look unbalanced.
There's the bog standard "practice gesture" advice, but if you want more specific stuff that you can do without spending months practicing, go stand in front of a mirror, or camera, and get a good look at yourself doing the actual gesture.
You'll notice that with leaning forward, for example, you'll feel your calves contract. The reason being they're responsible for bringing your feet down and rotating towards your backside, I forget the term, but I think it's "flexion" only for your feet instead of the hands.
Likewise a lot of your backside muscles contract as well, to keep you from tipping over.
You'll get it eventually, just keep on working.
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No.8465
>>8464
Thats pretty helpful, thank you anon.
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No.8468
They seem to like this over on Blue Hellsite. I got a crazy amount of notes (for me).
>>8460
>>8465
Not that anon, but to add to his advice: pushing the pelvis back helps realign the center of gravity over the feet. Really, the girl doesn't look so bad, but her design's not top-heavy and the curve of her hips visually push the weight back more.
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No.8472
>>8468
I like it. Creases by her armpit almost looked like pit hair though!
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No.8473
Recent thing i did, what think?
(Minus the linework since i was mainly just going over the whole face thing)
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No.8474
>>8473
Well, it's recognizable, but that's about it. You have a lot of work to do, man.
>(Minus the linework since i was mainly just going over the whole face thing)
Try not to have that attitude, it should be clear to you just by looking at the work of professionals and even other hobbyists that you have a long way to go. The last thing you want to do is give yourself an out. Embrace and confront your weaknesses, don't try and preemptively excuse them.
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No.8475
>>8474
Understandable, the thing is, i do a drawing every single day, and i don't really have a ton of space around me to work on full arm strokes and things to get nice even lines, but, that's an excuse i suppose
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No.8477
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
>>8475
>i don't really have a ton of space around me to work on full arm strokes and things to get nice even lines
That whole "artificial mileage" thing is good for what it is, but if you watch an artist actually do their lineart you'll see that they often zoom in 300% or so and work the lines in that way. I have great control but it can only go so far. Their control at that point isn't that much of a concern.
However, from what you said it sounds like you just don't have enough room, period? You should probably consider sorting that out somehow.
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No.8522
god and his son have arrived
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No.8523
>>8522
Is she taking him to McDonald's?
MCDONALD'S! MCDONALD'S! MCDONALD'S!
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No.8530
>>8523
When Mox wants McDo, Mox gets McDo.
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No.8535
Started using dip pens, still getting used to it.
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No.8536
>>8535
Looks like an album cover.
That's great man, I'd love to have a vinyl with that on it.
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No.8538
>>8535
I really dig the big fat black areas.
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No.8545
Page 78
So yeah, here we are with the premise of the comic. I promise nothing interesting will happen from here, and it'll play out exactly as you're expecting from a shonen comic.
No real detail here, that I can think of. Other than the Enders in the BG noticing Max.
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No.8548
>>8545
Will this be a big graphic novel or several issue comic?
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No.8557
>>8548
Uh, both?
Whatever you think it'd classify as. I've got all the chapters and interludes planned out, and there's also chapters in general.
But at the same time, each chapter's around 20 pages, the length of a standard comic book issue, and is more or less structured like one.
But it's also longform, and while I established the goal already, I did a poor job of it, and will reaffirm it soon. And we'll be continually moving towards that goal, with the story.
Look, this entire project's structure is kind of fucking mental, and weird. And I didn't really "sweat the small stuff."
All you need to know about EGWT is that it's basically
>Weasel Stomping Day, but taken seriously
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No.8566
Going to spend an hour or two a day in the future doing actual practice instead of just doodling characters.
I had little idea what I was doing with this one, but it was my first attempt at anything like it so esch. Might try to do it again later with paintbrushes instead of mostly pen, or perhaps try to draw it more cartoony.
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No.8568
I finally finished something that it's not a full body girl looking forward in a white space.
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No.8569
I finally finished something that it's not a full body girl looking forward in a white space.
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No.8573
>>8569
Good to hear your stepping out of your comfort zone. Maybe I'll join you, someday.
I'd caution about using black outlines on nipples though.
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No.8574
>>8568
>>8569
Breddy gud. I like how it looks like it was drawn with a marker.
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No.8577
Been a while since I last drew.
From left to right, Gesture, adding anatomy, edited.
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No.8579
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No.8582
>>8569
>those dead pixels on the upper leg of the of the one with clothes
Fuck that triggers my autism, but otherwise they're bretty good
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No.8601
I have no real reason for doing this.
I just wanted to see how Sally'd look, if I used a CH reference.
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No.8602
>>8601
>tfw Cutey Honey Universe has a busted OP
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No.8604
>>8601
I like that line for the cheek. It's cute.
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No.8605
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No.8606
>>8605
Thumb too thicc; compare your own thumb to the rest of your fingers
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No.8607
>>8602
Onegai. O-ne-ga-iiiiii.
>>8604
Thanks. You could say she's a Cutie
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No.8610
>>8606
I based it on my hand
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No.8611
>>8610
Got a photo for comparison?
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No.8612
>>8610
Thumb's not the problem, it's those tiny, skinny fingers.
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No.8613
I did this one for that dead tower girls thread, then I realized that the thread was 6 months old. Anyway, quick sketch, good to warm up before draw something more serious.
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No.8614
>>8613
Not the most refined thing I've ever seen but it's good enough to warrant an erection. Kudos; keep working
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No.8628
New art of some asian genocide game no one asked for. I do need help with the dude though. Any ideas on what to add in the girl's background?
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No.8629
>>8628
You can put him bigger like a part of the background in another plane, like my pic. Like that you will have three new pics to post.
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No.8630
>>8629
The pics are kinda separate since they are from different games, but your suggestion gave me a really good idea. Thanks, fam!
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No.8666
>>8545
I lied/told the truth.
Anyway, point is he sucks at this. And it'll be a source of conflict/challenge, later on, obviously.
Your spoiler detail this week is look to the backgrounds again, and compare them to the previous page's >>8545 .
You might notice something off about it.
We also haven't learned Max's Afterburn yet.
Good luck deciphering it.
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No.8674
>>8666
Post number confirms Max is doing the devil's work on earth by killing that harmless fur burger creature that someone planted human remains near a few pages back for no reason.
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No.8685
>>8674
Jokes on you, you might be closer than you think
But that won't come up for a long time.
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No.8779
>"The world's greatest Ender, at your service."
I had an idea for gauntlet type of things for Max. Here he is/there they are.
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No.8780
I want to get into drawing with a pen. Aside from the general drawing fundamentals everyone knows, are there specific books to help me specifically to pens?
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No.8781
>>8780
Drawabox teaches exclusively in pen.
You're probably better off asking in the question thread, though.
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No.8788
>>8666
I forget what the description I put on the blogs was.
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No.8789
>>8788
Looking at it again. I should talk about what I talked about there. Since it's kind of neat, in my opinion.
The hint I posted here, >>8456 in reference to >>8432 is because that's not a tongue. It's an arm hanging out of the side of its mouth, like one does an open window. And because it's an arm, well, you can see for yourself.
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No.8790
>>8788
>>8789
Good shit. I did notice the unorthodox shape of the tongue earlier but I'll be damned if I could guess what it actually was. I like the flow of the bottom panels and the arm-tongued monster is certainly appealing. Fun stuff!
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No.8797
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No.8799
>>8790
Thanks, man. Glad you liked it.
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No.8801
>>8797
>loli footfaggotry
get some taste dude
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No.8802
>>8801
rude smh
<definitely seeing why he was blacklisted from DA now though, the other stuff didn't read as much as loli to me as this one does for some reason
You should just draw them with longer limbs. Then it's like they're just flat chested women lol
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No.8803
>>8797
This is really fucking shit, I hate you didn't draw this
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No.8811
>>8802
>You should just draw them with longer limbs
I knew it there is something odd about this drawing when I finished, that's why I didn't post anywhere. Trying do make the cartoon style anatomily more realistc I ending up doing fucking toddlecon, personally I don't mind but I know how much this shit can offend people so usually I stay away from it.
>definitely seeing why he was blacklisted from DA
I never posted this kind of bullshit on my DA, i'm not that retarded.
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No.8812
>>8801
>>8803
Crab faggots need to kill themselves.
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No.8813
>>8803
>This is really fucking shit, I hate you didn't draw this
What did he mean by this?
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No.8815
>>8811
Maybe not just the limbs but I feel like the body should be at least one and a half to two heads-that will give her youthful "cartoon" proportions while not having her be a straight up babbeh
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No.8816
>>8815
Anyway, I did it again, mostly because I didn't like the initial pose and wanted to do a background for the scene.. I tried to make a more minimalist background so the character pop up a little bit more but the colors I used didn't help, at least I tried.
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No.8820
>>8802
Shit taste is shit taste regardless of skill involved.
>>8812
>Crab faggots
What the fuck does that mean?
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No.8824
>>8820
Crabs in a buckett, anon, just google it.
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No.8828
>>8820
Search for "crab" in the whole board, there was an explanation in another thread recently.
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No.8832
>>8816
Why do you always make your art look so disgusting? You don't have a soul, do you?
>>8824
I find scat disgusting too and it's not because I wish I could shit on someone.
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No.8836
>>8832
You are cute, anon, I like you. You remeber me a little kid who saw porn for the first time.
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No.8837
>>8836
toddlerfags get the rope, but that's completely unrelated to that disgusting art style. Why is everyone either unable or afraid to make something aesthetically appealing? Even if it is jerkoff material.
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No.8838
>>8837
I really don't think you're being completely impartial in this judgment like you say, honey bum.
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No.8839
>>8838
We're dealing with kids who never grew out of wanting to be an "anime artist", it should not surprise you that the art style is disgusting. Even if he is drawing one of your fetishes.
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No.8840
>>8839
>We're dealing with kids who never grew out of wanting to be an "anime artist"
Thats not even manga, nibba, the two of the drawings are cartoon with semi-realistic shading.
Get a better one, this one is just too weak.
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No.8842
>>8837
>Why is everyone either unable or afraid to make something aesthetically appealing?
That sounds a bit exaggerated. You mean everyone here? Everyone on {insert fetish - specific booru here}? Everyone ever?
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No.8843
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No.8846
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No.8860
>>8859
this is peak degeneracy
you're in the right place
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No.8862
>>8859
Kudos for detailing and explaining the request to that extent.
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No.8864
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No.8867
So, I happened to sketch gentoo chan because her fanart seems very little. Not much stylized into it though, its kind of rough i think.
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No.8872
>>8846
Looks good. Wish I could paint like this.
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No.8878
>>8867
The pose looks kinda stiff; her back and legs are super straight, and her arms are bent at the exact same angle. Try using a reference for your pose.
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No.8887
>>8860
t-thanks anon.
>>8862
I have more requests that even could blush Devil itself.
Lolicon and guro is allowed here, right?
>>8864
-$3,323
College was expensive
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No.8889
>>8878
It has to do with line thickness on the leg and also the area on the waist is kind of flat. I'm not sure how fix this but usually if it's colored, it should be fix by itself. I sketched this in a very nonstructural way though. Is kind of shitty technique. Should have prioritize drawing the body first instead of arm.
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No.8891
>>8878
>>8889
now is a lot better
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No.8896
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No.8900
>>8896
What with the man face fam? if you gonna draw a girl, put some more feminine look in her.
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