I really fucking hate these webpages that say inane corporate speak for 16 scrolled pages in the largest possible font. WHY IS THE MOUNTAIN THERE? ARE YOU SELLING MOUNTAIN CLIMBING EQUIPMENT? Theres like a fighter jet on the about page, what the actual fuck.
This would have been enough: Velocity is an app that tracks your progression in anything you want. Create a task and track your commitment. You do/dont need a data connection for it to work. Its available/not on ios, droid, pc. You can download apk on our website or from <link> or from app store. You do/dont need an online account.
By the end I still dont know what the fuck youre selling. Even with 5x more info you provided in OP post I still dont know can it work on my device, is it compatible with tablet, pc, can it export data…. theres no download button, no screenshots of what it do…. how am I supposed to decide if I want it when I dont even know what it is? Theres maybe one paragraph of text there, and only a 1/4 is related to your product.
I'm so fucking done with…. MAKE AN EFFORT!