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 No.13854

I'm writing a script for a video review of what has to be one of the worst series of books ever written. It's not the worst because nothing has infuriated me more in writing than this, to actually motivate me to make a video on it.

The series in question?

The Land.

>The Land?

That's the actual name, the author is so lazy they couldn't even come up with a decent name. But that's not all, there's so much in this garbage fire.

Marry Sue main character who gets so much advantage right at the start of the story that it makes the Self Insert obvious, a power structure literally handed to him by killing a couple of goblins that makes him the power of not only magic but MASTERY over several schools of it, overly convenient plot elements, stakes that ultimately lead to nothing because it's like the author usually forgets about them since the MC's power creep is way too fast for them to even matter or can be simply handwaved and brought back up in minor passing to being completely forgotten, cliff hangers that ultimately lead to nothing but also are complete letdowns because the MC can handwaved them away, a bafflingly confusing skill system that always conveniently favors the MC, writing that relies heavily on not only dead memes but incredibly unfunny ones MC kills a fox, screams "What does the fox say" along with cringy writing to make the sounds I shit you not and there's even more memeshit ahead clearly stollen elements from Skyrim

>Don't you mean The Elder Scrolls?

No I shit you not he just rips off Skyrim.

This is just part of the shitty writing but one thing, the author's main crutch, is his use of what some would think a minor skill but he turned into a page-filling, same information repeating skill called "Analyze" which the author abuses to no end and cheats in literary terms to explain how the MC would know other characters names without ever talking to them. Worst is that he "Upgrades" the skill to also include useless stats of characters and he's not shy of filling it all in over and over.

Oh yeah, stats, did I mention they don't matter? Percentages, plusses and minuses all don't matter because the author can't write for them, his own rules are so convoluted and skewed in favor of the MC that it doesn't matter at all.

Going through halfway through the series and the idea that the MC was actually evil popped into my head made me almost forgive most of the bad writing but it gets so much worse that made me abandon the thought. The MC can be sumarized as a narcissistic-sociopath that can act as such because he never gets any real punishment for his actions but only does the right thing because he never gets any setbacks like you would see in actually good writing. He never makes a sacrifice but time after time he gets literally god-tier stuff and skills.

Now you all might be thinking this would be the writing style of a teenage author but get this:

THE AUTHOR HAS A DOCTORATE'S DEGREE SO HE SHOULD KNOW IT'S BAD

This isn't a "So bad it's good" series because it is so mind numbingly bad and bland how it gets. I'm on book 5 and every book between the first and this one, which I'm finding out is even more filler and showing the author has not only an incest but also a bestiality fetish.

This book is so bad it is proof that anyone can get published even if their writing is poor and on more than one occasion I've been tempted to start writing a book but this script MUST come first and I NEED to expose the sham that is this author.

But this is what I need from you guys: I need other book series to compare this to or just single books in the "LitRPG" genre. I have two series but I need even more to prove my point. The two I have are Delivers LLC and the Video Game Plotline Tester series. It can be the video game style or table top. Can be anything like Fantasy or Sci-Fi but must be considered LitRPG.

I've got time to write out a huge script, I've got friends who are competent video editors on hand, links to several communities that can spread the video pretty far. I just need more examples to prove my point

Please help.

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 No.13856

>>13854

>LitRPG

I've never heard this term. I like the idea, albeit such holds a high probability of sharing the stereotypical faults of fan-fiction.

>The Land

Your description makes it sound a bit like a bad novelization of a film, substituting /v/ for /tv/ as it were.

I'm reaching back through those grainy yellowing memories of yesteryear, to a time pre-internet and I was quite young. Asimov was the gold standard of Scifi literary talent. I recall James Blish did a novelization series of the original Star Trek episodes. A decent result, they were most engaging. Blish was, however, an accomplished author and close to the primary source material. I do wonder how they might read today. I know a place that has his series for sale …

More recently, during my travels, I've picked up the novelizations of The Phantom Menace, and the original Battlestar Galactica pilot. To the point, these two would be the first into the wood burning stove in an emergency.

For an ambitious eight year old, tackling The Lord of the Rings on their own would not surprise me. Beyond the ambitious, there is a market for what commands the imagination of youth. With or without such merits as may lay claim to literary fame, penned in simple scrapings of the contemporary zeitgeist; the market is there.

>THE AUTHOR HAS A DOCTORATE'S DEGREE

Unless for English lit, that's inevitably a disadvantage. Sometimes more-so, as a proper PHD in English lit, for a would be writer of fiction.

I encourage you to do your thing. Post a link when you're done. I might look into this further, but for now it is John Horne Burns who holds my attention.

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 No.13857

>>13854

>I need other book series to compare this to or just single books in the "LitRPG" genre.

Have you looked into the Japanese side of the genre? What immediately springs to mind are the novel series "Log Horizon" and "Konosuba", which are both excellent for what they are, and both revolve around RPG concepts (like stats, classes, skills, quests, guilds, etc).

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 No.13860

>>13854

Oho! I see yet another series was made available for free by the usual suspects in the typical locations. I suppose I could give volume one a skimming over.

Peering backwards across the never-never lands of distant memory once again, I recall hitting a brick wall with Dragonlance. Knowing full well what an experience these works can be when they capture your attention, I don't look down on the genera, nor the people who read them. Purported stylistic failings aside, I've had severe problems engaging with never ending fantasy epics from high school on. I expect no difference here.

In thinking about LitRPG I realized I am familiar with the form, if not the term. Fallout: Equestria is one. Brandon Sanderson's noted as being all into this with Mistborn, yes?

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 No.13861

>>13860

I think someone posted about these things before with some stories about martial arts and magic.

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 No.13862

>LitRPG

The genre seems absurdly pointless, but I've seen something similar in no-games /tg/ faggots writing obviously fake recap greentext stories about games they never had.

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 No.13866

>>13856

"LitRPG" is something new I've found in my current research. It's literally just writing about things with RPG aspects and a sub genre of RPG. It has potential but this guy is touting he's the "Father of LitRPG" which he soon changed to "Father of Western LitRPG" after being called out that Japanese writers had already made it, but the title is still pure cringe.

I thank you for your support on my project

>>13857

You're right! I completely forgot about Log Horizon and Konosuba, those are actually really good examples because they try to make sense of their world's rules

>>13860

I was thinking of Dragonlance books too, I've got quite a few of them from the Legend of Huma and so on, but it doesn't really fit the criteria I need it to.

>>13862

It is kind of pointless but with stuff like Delvers LLC it shows amazing potential.

I'm going to be starting my third re-read of the five "The Land" books I pirated after getting a refund for the first. I'll be checking back for more help and advice

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 No.13875

>>13866

I'm back and I found another series. I think I've found the final piece to my puzzle in bringing this all together.

On a hunch, I found a book called "NPCs" and I thought it was going to be a generic book.

How glad I was to be wrong! This book was awesome!

It starts out with a group of TTG player characters stupidly dying by poisoning themselves so a group of NPC have to assume their identities or risk having their entire town wiped out by a mad king.

It doesn't make sense, but thats all I can give or risk spoiling the entire plot, but it's worth the read.

So my checklist is as follows:

>Read and reread the entirety of the NPCs series (So far 3 books with a fourth announced) and take notes

>Re-read through both Delvers LLC and Video Game Plotline Tester series (Third book in VGPT is coming out January) while taking careful notes

>For "diversity" go through Log Horizon and Konosuba with notes, take SAO as well to show that there are downsides there as well

>Finally, go through the first five books of tThe Land" series. actually finish book 5 despite the headache I seem to get whenever going through it, and take my notes. *Perhaps if I just do it through Audiobook exclusively I can alleviate the pain**

>Script the review then record

>Gather assets for review

>Edit audio to flow and have a buddy of mine do the video

This might take a couple months, but wish me luck!

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