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 No.12210

(I GOT BANNED FOR ASKING THIS ON 4CHAN, go figure)

I'm writing a book about two kids that want to shoot up their school, I have the characters and their internal struggle and issues like that planned out very well. The only thing that I am lacking is that I never touched a gun, and I've never been to a USA high school (where the story is based - I was pulled out of high school because of bullying, was homeschooled since 14).

I am making this thread to BRAINSTORM ideas because if I dare to talk about this with anyone else they'd call the cops on me.

Some things to discuss:

* How was your high school experience?

* Were you bulllied? What were some bullying experiences you have?

* Have you shot a gun? How's that like?

* How would you go about to shoot up your school?

* What are some rules that you think are necessary to have in order to have a successful school shooting?

Let's get brainstorming hoot hoot!!

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 No.12211

>I never touched a gun

Go fix that and maybe you stop being a fag that gets banned.

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 No.12212

I see Islam hasn't taught you a thing. Explosions are, besides wonderful, a safer way to send a message, and you don't even need to kill the faggots. You could poison something if you really hate them. With careful placement, banana peels with get a higher kill count. Even setting the place on fire will do more to get rid of the occupiers than a shooting match.

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 No.12213

>>12212

ye, but the book is supposed to be about a school shooting, where the perps will then commit suicide

but i am liking the bomb idea, maybe they can use a bomb to drive the crowd and isolate it

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 No.12214

>>12211

ugh I wish but guns are banned from where I am from :/

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 No.12245

File: 7d53df994d264ab⋯.mp4 (3.07 MB,1280x720,16:9,to be continued.mp4)

Columbine was actually well planned apart from the awful choice of guns they had. If their bombs had worked they'd had BTFO the entire school. The shooting was just what they were going to do to pick off survivors and then commit sudoku. Seems that all the MK Ultra subjects just copied the backup plan. Speaking of copying, if you actually ended up writing a basic school shooting, it's going to be shit. I advise to just have the school shooters and their motives and personalities be different, but copy the plan of the columbine kids. No one will realize if you go with their original plan, trust me.

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 No.12249

File: a83fb7499fa3525⋯.jpg (1.91 KB,124x78,62:39,1372277522085s.jpg)

Sounds like a really dumb if you ask me.Very edgy too. From what I understand the Columbine shooters were both fucked in the head. Even without being picked on and I think they were known to be assholes to other kids too. They were just shitty people.

I'm also not falling for that one. Nice try ATF.

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 No.12250

This already exists. Though, if you still want to write it, maybe check this one out for inspiration

http://www.lulu.com/us/en/shop/mumkey-jones/the-triflers/paperback/product-23021400.html

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 No.12252

>>12249

It don't think they were even picked on. I think they just had no friends.

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 No.12258

File: 395b46a2eef70fa⋯.jpg (8.31 KB,200x238,100:119,d56c62143cfe28f03ad5407ed7….jpg)

>>12249

They did absolutely nothing wrong. Those normalfags had it coming.

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 No.12275

>>12210

>How was your high school experience?

Got bullied, got into some fights, eventually became more respected later on, but I still almost never made friends. I have no love lost for compulsory schooling, but all in all, I'd say I always had good and had times. It really wasn't so special.

>Have you shot a gun? How's that like?

The muzzle flash is not as spectacular as movies make it put to be, and while these things are loud, there isn't as much of bass as you'd expect (unless you wear mufflers, then they sound much cooler). Whether you can use a specific caliber safely depends on your strength by a good deal. Large handguns and shotguns in particular require some experience or a fair amount of strength to handle, especially if they're light, as that means the gun is kicked back faster. A scrawny guy can break his nose firing a shotgun, but usually only if he doesn't respect it properly. If he does, then he might still have some bruises the next day, like after a martial arts class.

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 No.12284

>>12210

>How was your high school experience?

Pretty standard. I had a small group of close friends. We weren't the cool kids or anything, but I felt like I was on good terms with most of the people in my year level.

>Were you bullied? What were some bullying experiences that you have?

I wasn't bullied in high school, but I did see a lot of bullying, took part in some, and thought about it often.

In my experience, the kids who were bullied were the awkward ones and the ones who didn't really fit in. There was nothing wrong with being awkward, as some of the most awkward kids at school didnt get bullied at all, but all the kids that did get bullied were awkward.

There's a whole set of behaviours you have to adhere to at high school. Its like unspoken rules. The kids who got bullied couldn't pick up on the rules. The behaved differently and unwittingly separated themselves from the pack.

At my school, it was rare for someone to go out of their way to bully somebody else. In my experience, the bullied student desperately wanted to be friends with their bullies, and would go to great lengths to try and be accepted by them. Because of the awkwardness of these attempts, they were mocked by the bullies. Each incident of bullying usually came as a consequence of the bullied person trying and failing to enter the social circle of the bully.

These are two real life examples that happened at my school.

1- James

James was an extremely awkward social outcast. Nobody particularly liked him, but nobody went out of their way to put him down. One day, he anonymously emailed a message to the entire school email group. Each student had a student email that you used for homework and assignments, it was generally used for announcement and important shit. Group emails were forwarded to everyone they included. His message, to all students in the school, was something along the lines of: "You've just been hoodwinked by the sylver fox!" and had a picture of his fursona winking; a silver fox.

He came to school the next day giddy with excitement, eager to talk with all his newfound friends about his epic prank. The whole school was pretty pissed that they had been woken up in the middle of the night for some gay fox picture. As soon as the school found out it was him, his school email was bombarded with gore and porn for the next 3 months.

2. Mike

Mike was a somewhat popular kid, who snitched on his friends that were drinking alcohol to the teachers. From that point on, Mike was referred to as the golden snitch for his golden tan, rotundness, and diminutive stature. Mike was quickly expelled from his group of friends, and the whole school referred to him as the golden snitch. Mike tried to join my group next lunchtime by sitting at our table. His lunch was kicked away, we threw his pencil-case in the fountain, and tried to get him in as well. He didn't sit with us again.

The thing I want to stress about both Mike and James is that they both wouldn't have been bullied if they had been quiet and unassuming. There were weirder, uglier, more awkward kids than them who didnt get bullied at all because they stayed quiet and didn't interact with anyone.

It sounds horrible because it is.

High school is hell.

>have you shot a gun

nope

>how would you shoot up your school?

A couple of the seniors a few years before me pulled the fire alarm on the last day of school and soaked everyone with water pistols as they came to the evacuation area. It would probably be effective, since everyone was in one place on the oval with almost no cover.

I think you're putting too much focus on the actual shooting OP. The mindset and experiences of your characters will be more important to the story than their actual plan and execution.

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 No.12288

This thread/book idea remind me of Andy Nowicki's The Columbine Pilgrim.

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 No.12305

>>12284

>threw his pencil case into the fountain

Did you go to Hogwarts?

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 No.12509

>>12210

>Have you shot a gun? How's that like?

That's a vague ass question. I'm an apprentice gunsmith, so I'll answer technical questions if needed but that is unclear as shit.

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 No.12513

>datamining

sage

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 No.12518

* How was your high school experience?

Boring

* Were you bulllied? What were some bullying experiences you have?

No

* Have you shot a gun? How's that like?

It's dull. I was planning on going to the range weekly before I tried shooting a gun but subsequently it turns out it's boring as shit.

* How would you go about to shoot up your school?

I wouldn't. That's a fucking retarded idea.

* What are some rules that you think are necessary to have in order to have a successful school shooting?

Like bring bullets? Don't forget to aim?

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 No.12535

>>12210

>(I GOT BANNED FOR ASKING THIS ON 4CHAN, go figure)

of course you did

4chins is shit

>I'm writing a book about two kids that want to shoot up their school

Why?

I mean, what for? What could possibly be gained from such a story? What inner depths of the human condition would be plumbed other than "Waaah, i'm an emo little bitch with a napoleon complex"

>>12249

LOL

>>12258

Don't papercut yourself on so many edges, fam

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 No.12562

>>12535

>I mean, what for? What could possibly be gained from such a story? What inner depths of the human condition would be plumbed other than "Waaah, i'm an emo little bitch with a napoleon complex"

Well, this.

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 No.12594

>>12284

>being an alcoholic

>>>/out/

Furries are vile, though.

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 No.12658

>>12252

No, they had friends. There were at least two people who they specifically chose not to kill.

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 No.12661

>>12210

>How was your high school experience?

So far it has been pretty good; I go to classes and don't talk much and when I do it's to friends. I haven't had many bad experiences in high school, except with teachers. I'm not a pushover, but I don't get into much trouble. I don't gossip and am generally very nice, so no one has a reason to start anything.

>Were you bulllied? What were some bullying experiences you have?

No, I might have been teased on or twice, but I don't really care, I let it slid off and ignore them. I've never been physically bullied because people are more mature in high school and because of my answer to 1st question.

>Have you shot a gun? How's that like?

I live in the south so its embarrassing to say I've never shot a gun, but my family is poor so the sold the one the did have before I had a chance to shot it. I can say they are very loud and can hurt your hearing if you aren't careful since everyone else but I have a gun.

>How would you go about to shoot up your school?

> call a bomb threat

> they will evacuate the school because I've had it happen to our school before.

> they go to the football field outside our school.

> shoot them there In a crowded area with limited escape

OR

>during class change

>go to the busiest area

>plant bomb

>set off

>one person on either side so the students run into one of the other shoots while running

>open fire

>bring handheld battering ram

> flush out classrooms

> continue until police arrive and shoot you down

tbh a bomb would be more effective in a lunch room when the lunch room is occupied, It could do a whole lot of damage. However, that doesn't make a good book

> What are some rules that you think are necessary to have in order to have a successful school shooting?

1) confusion, if there is confusion, it is easier to take advantage of the chaos, such as in a crowded situation or bomb threat.

2) secrecy, if people know you coming it's over before it happens

3) swiftness, unless you can successfully deter police involvement, which is nigh impossible, you need to do it swiftly for maximum output

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 No.12682

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>>12284

>From that point on, Mike was referred to as the golden snitch for his golden tan, rotundness, and diminutive stature.

That's golden. Too bad he was ostracized for it though, I hope he wasn't left with Potter-related trauma.

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 No.12710

File: 44148996effc0c5⋯.jpg (70.86 KB,388x286,194:143,image_4.jpg)

I'm guessing since your a eurofag you have no idea about guns. Please dont give them something retarded like automatic AKs or desert eagles. Make them have a sawed-off Ruger Mini-14 or an Obrez.

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 No.14054

1) mixed but mostly negative, and this was pre-white flight

2) too many to name, even sometimes by women as well as men. teachers mostly didn't like either, with a few exceptions. also got in trouble for sexual harassment of women (I had no idea what that was at the time being autistic and all)

3) once, a shotgun, I'm much heavier now and wouldn't have fallen on my ass now that I did then. also SSDI prevents me from owning one, which blows

4) not just guns, stealth tactics, timed bombs, etc. I'd think it through although it's been 17 years since I left

5) plan ahead, know your way around the school, don't show your face when entering, today I'd recommend checking metal detectors and where they're placed, alternative routes, windows, etc

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 No.14076

File: 7cc2cd7712f6061⋯.jpg (65.74 KB,558x720,31:40,mrpimpgoodgame.jpg)

>How was your high school experience?

We beat dem niggas

>Were you bulllied? What were some bullying experiences you have?

We beat dem niggas

>Have you shot a gun? How's that like?

We beat dem niggas

>How would you go about to shoot up your school?

We beat dem niggas

>What are some rules that you think are necessary to have in order to have a successful school shooting?

We beat dem niggas

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 No.14105

>>12284

>mike and james

>tfw anon went to school with AVGN and his autistic pal

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 No.14137

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>>12210

>(I GOT BANNED FOR ASKING THIS ON 4CHAN, go figure)

No surprises. Go to FBIchan, get banned by the FBI

>book about two kids that want to shoot up their school

>What is "We need to talk about Kevin" for $500, Alex.

Really, you've got to get out of the "Teen angst 'cuz I was bullied" trap.

Holden Caulfield was a very long time ago, we all got bullied and we all need to move past it, UNLESS you've got something new and unique to say, I wouldn't bother trying to get it published. But, maybe it will work as therapy, but I doubt it – wish fulfilment fantasies aren't a good therapeutic strategy, just a recipe for fixation

>What are some rules that you think are necessary to have in order to have a successful school shooting?

>implying I want to help you plan shooting up your old school

Bitch, do your own massacre planning.

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 No.14167

>>12518

>>12210

I'll give you a response since so many in this thread are shit.

First off, go fucking shoot a gun, you dumb cuck. And don't listen to this faggot>>12518

>How was your high school experience?

Fine really. Should have dropped out and gotten a GED at 16 IMO. Last two years I switched from a gay liberal charter school to a public school and got laid way, way more.By senior year I was just ditching class and getting high all the time. It was a school with a 4.0 graduating GPA average, so no matter what I did the Dean outright refused to kick me out. Helps that I look like a basic nerd, I bet.

>Were you bullied? What were some bullying experiences you have?

I was in theatre with this faggot who hit on me in middle school. He didn't like that I rejected him, so he did his best to torment me. It ended when he tried to attack me from behind and I whipped around with a hay maker, leaving him on the ground crying and bleeding. Fag said he would send me a bill for his glasses but I never got it. He got suspended for a week I heard, I didn't get in trouble at all.

>Have you shot a gun? How's that like?

Depends on the gun. .38 is pretty accurate and fun to shoot, my roommate has a 1911 and a revolver that are super accurate. I prefer the firepower of a .45 but it takes a lot more practice to get the hang of, especially when you're retarded like me and have a 3.3 inch barrel.

9 mm sound like blackcat fire works. Literally. With a suppressor they sound like a loud clap.

.226 out of a AR-15 is seriously jarring. Shooting it for the first time I was surprised at the sensation in my nose. each shot feels like a light punch to the nose, with all the unpleseant tingling involved. 11/10 would shoot again.

AK-47 is a shit ton of fun. Ammo is dirt cheap so you can shoot for days. Even though the round is larger than the AR-15's .226, I don't remember it bothering me as much. 9/10

.22 feels like a bb gun

12 guage hits like a truck without padding. Last time I went out, I ended up hip firing mostly and was still just as accurate

One time I shot my friend's dad's .500 revolver. That bitch fuckin hurt. The bullets are massive and have a shit ton of gunpowder. 12/10

>How would you go about to shoot up your school?

Remote detonated shaped explosives in the offices of all the administrators. I wouldn't want to risk killing the hot female students or any of my friends (I was actually quite popular at the public school) The best way to do it is to not be present during it. Or to be there but 100% out of harms way while the explosions are going off. No need to harm students for the shitty policy decisions of SJW administrators.

>What are some rules that you think are necessary to have in order to have a successful school shooting?

Don't be there, don't actually shoot anyone. Actual school shooters are down right retarded. Idk why they would use an AR-15 when its much easier to conceal multiple pistols and prep with shaped charges.

Your book sounds like it'll fucking suck btw.

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 No.14168

>>12210

OP if you really want to learn about guns just go hang out on /k/.

Faggot

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 No.14175

>>14167

I hate everything about you. Everything.

>How was your high school experience?

Trash overall. I suffer from mental illness and this really started coming out during these years so it sucked. The middle school I went to was like a tiny, religious, country school and I went to a somewhat typical private high school so the transition turned me into an angry bitter person who had difficulty coping with little things.

>Were you bulllied? What were some bullying experiences you have?

Beyond some faggot throwing a basketball at my head or being treated like shit by 'friends' no I wasn't bullied, nor did I bully.

>Have you shot a gun? How's that like?

Yes, too bad that after my hospitalization they took my rights away for five fucking years. Shooting a gun is a wonderful experience that can only be described through true experience. The smell on your hands after is incredible.

>How would you go about to shoot up your school?

Neeting it up right now so I don't go to school. If I had to I don't think that I would tell you my plans or methods. You can research this easily.

>What are some rules that you think are necessary to have in order to have a successful school shooting?

I don't think any are necessary, what do you even define as successful?

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 No.14176

>>12210

>Wants to write about high school.

<Never enrolled

Why are you writing this book? I don't find the story you're telling in the OP believable, let alone any fiction you may be writing.

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 No.14178

>>14176

I don't remember anything newsworthy to attach it to at the time this thread was created. Even so, it was probably simple trollery. It's still being bumped today as it is oh so very burgerland topical. Right or wrong as I may be on these assumptions, I still don't see why it can't be discussed in the context of writing. Good luck though, in trying to make any sense of it, or seeing any work produced from the discussion.

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 No.14207

>How was your high school experience?

Shit

>Were you bulllied? What were some bullying experiences you have?

Not in High School

>Have you shot a gun? How's that like?

Not yet

>How would you go about to shoot up your school?

I wouldn't, too cliché, school serial killer and arsonist is where it's at.

1. Find the most obnoxious couple in school

2. Follow them somewhere secluded

3. Incapacitate both of them

4. Tie them both down with intricate shibari taking special care to leave the girl no room to move

5. Make sure the boyfriend is awake to see what happens next

6. Carve the PlaySchool opening lyrics into the girls chest with a knife but with "open wide" replaced with "open bob" and "come inside" replaced with "cum inside"

7. Rape her till she climaxes (back and front)

8. Smear your shit in her mouth, vagina and on her boobs

9. Stuff fist shaped dildos encrusted with razors in both orifices

10. Set her body alight and roast marshmallows

11. Force feed these to the boyfriend

12. Chuck him in the ute and take somewhere he won't be looked for

13. Stuff one of the razorfists in his ass and leave him to die

14. Go to school and start a fire with intentions on maximum loss of life

15. Leave a cross, cryptic poem and burning incense at each scene for max mystery

16. Repeat 1 - 15 till caught

>What are some rules that you think are necessary to have in order to have a successful school shooting?

1. Choose good weapons

2. Wait for a moment of calm before shooting

3. Target the mentally disabled

4. Livestream the whole thing with a go pro

5. Self Immolate instead of shooting yourself

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 No.14208

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 No.14213

My High School experience was fine, I was quiet but nobody messed with me bc I was wrestling team cap(5th in the state boi). Would recommend taking out any big athletes first as a strategy, because they're the ones that might truck you and ruin your school shooting venture. My school was in a nice area so you could just throw something in your backpack and start blasting whenever. lol.

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 No.14538

>>12245

>>12288

>The Columbine Pilgrim.

Is there a PDF of this somewhere, anon?

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