My first impression is that you need an audio engineer to help you balance all this dialogue properly; it sounds sharp and metallic. My second is that your writing is a little too on the nose; your le so woke political commentary breaks the fourth wall instead of flashing me knowing glances as it should.
The presentation of the "Christian stuff" suggests to me that you are not a Christian, or, if you are, not one with a very deep knowledge of the faith. Taking themes, tropes and epithets from the Scriptures is well and good, but recontextualising them in a universe with magic, aliens and stripper-boot-clad spacegirls is, obviously, tricky to do right. A superior alternative is found in Tolkien's fantasy, for example, whereby themes and ideas are carried over in an essential form, but being expressed in the lore of the fantasy universe. That way the "meaning" is the same, but it is integrated into the story.
However, if you're just making edgy animations for now, that's also fine. Reminds me of the good old internet of Flash stick battles and offensive viral songs.