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Manga from Nico Tanigawa. It is about a group of sixteen clones that live in a school/research center and the teacher scientists who are responsible for their development.
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>>2294
Which one is dressed best?
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>>2304
Found Nemo… And a pineapple.
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>>2314
You are welcome.
This manga has 3 volumes with more or less 150 pages in each one. I plan to scan 30 pages a week (I don't have a scanner so I have to pay for each page).
▶ No.2320>>2323
>>2318
All it needs is a translator, a cleaner and a Madokami account. You are going good here.
▶ No.2323>>2613
>>2320
Well, that is the thing. Any recommendations for the first two? Groups? This is my first time doing this.
▶ No.2609>>2679 >>24987
Kin-iro Mosaic translator from the meta thread here, specifically at >>1719 , >>1812 and >>2586. The posted book seems interesting enough and I'm really confident to translate it. As you can see there are still other jobs to do, but I will probably can start translating all the books on early April or May this year.
If you can't wait that long, then we need to discuss further...
▶ No.2613>>2679
>>2323
What about the translators here?
There's also the Heart & Feather scans from >>>/monster/235286 but they only do manga that has monster girls, android girls, basic kemonomimi. However they are looking for the last scans of Dullahan-chan Wa Kubittake which they couldn't finish because they couldn't find the last chapters online and they want scans for Kakuen no Hinagiku.
https://heartandfeatherscanlations.wordpress.com/donate/
▶ No.2679
>>2609
No rush, anon. Finish your own things, first.
>>2613
Heart and Feather is a possibility. Still, they have other projects and I don't know how they feel about numerical clones. Fortunately we have the former anon, too.
Anyway here is a mega for the already scanned pages.
https://mega.nz/#!9vBhnQKK!B215zpqEkNVJcKtRH5iO7cDC_5f-LgK5DZWbl2IXPqY
▶ No.3728>>4079
>>3710
If not tomorrow at night, then wednesday. As I have posted before, I will do around 30 pages a week.
▶ No.4079
>>3728
>>3729
Just because I made a compromise with wednesday a family event was marked for that day. I will have to pospone it for thursday.
Sorry, anons.
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>>5667
Headpats for lolis should use moderate strenght
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>>5670
I love these pages but the last pic is sad in many aspects
▶ No.5672>>5685 >>5873
This is it for this week.
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>>5672
this thread is cozy
▶ No.5877
Good stuff. I hope these get translated one day. Call your team /animu/ scans.
▶ No.8903
Good to know this thread wasn't nuked.
▶ No.8909
I was worried about that for a moment, but having the scans saved in my PC means that I can always make a partial clone of the thread.
Although, I was worried that the BO was compromised and I would have to go to another board.
▶ No.8918>>81001
Oh, Two…
End of volume 1 after next week.
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▶ No.9102>>9197
I've typeset and redrawn a bit before. Never cleaned but it's simple enough for me to attempt it.
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>>9102
The only power I have is posting the scans here and on mega. Anons are free to make good work on them.
▶ No.13418>>84720
Back. Teacher doesn't treat students as snowflakes.
▶ No.13432>>88990
And this is the end of volume 1.
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>>13431
I don't speak English nor Japanese and am not an editor either but I tried to do one page. No bully, please.
▶ No.15362>>15514
>>15255
Yes, I will start to scan vol.2 this week.
>>15314
The font seems fine, but for the rest you would need the criticism of a more experienced team. Expect some bully.
▶ No.15514
>>15314
>>15362
I guess in the third bubble it should have been 'ok?' and not just 'ok'.
Man, I can't even translate two words without making a mistake. Back to trying to learn Japanese.
To elaborate:
>歯ブラシなくした
歯ブラシ: toothbrush
なくした: nakusu (to lose) in past tense
>1ファースト 歯ブラシ貸してほしい
1ファースト: 1 first (in furigana): so their names are number but it's in English to make them feel like names but well it's lost in translation, unless you change the name for Ichi or something.
歯ブラシ: toothbrush
貸してほしい: kasu+hoshii: to lend + to want
so the sentence should have been something like 'I'd want you to lend me a toothbrush' but well, limited place in that bubble
>いいが
ii ga: yes, but: so she says okay but wonders why she asks that, so writing just 'ok' was wrong
>ありがとう
arigatou
▶ No.17357>>94076 >>95421
Volume 2:
To all the people who likes bullying 015
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▶ No.22370
Which was the best costume?
▶ No.22383>>22437 >>22452
>cant into moonrunes
>mfw missing on the fun
▶ No.22437
>>22383
Tonight there will be one wordless page.
▶ No.22452>>22455
>>22383
But anon you can learn Japanese
Seriously, this isn't hard to read, it has full Furigana which means you can literally type the words into an online dictionary if you memorize just the kana and the word endings, which is enough to get the rough meaning
▶ No.22858>>22859
Have a comfy night, anons.
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>>2275 (OP)
Thanks for uploading this. It's actually the easiest manga to read that I've seen so far. Great for starting out.
Only takes half an hour per panel
▶ No.24039>>24056
Fuck, just noticed that the scan quality is bad. Going to redo it.
▶ No.24084
>>24056
It is, and I am happy to see a funny edit on the manga.
▶ No.24987>>25032 >>25099 >>25107 >>25111 >>30115
>>2609 Here.
I'm really sorry to say this, but I can't seem to start to translate the book on this month.
Personal health problems and business keep making me busy.
Graduation thesis is quite an annoying grind.
I'm not even sure that I'd make it by June.
Still, I promise to translate these books completely someday.
Just make sure to archive the scans through Mega or some other reliable filehosters for safety.
As a proof that this is me, the translator and not an imposter, here is a translation for the first 4 pages.
https://files.catbox.moe/goytt1.txt
>inb4 goy ＧＥＴ.
And oh, would anyone kindly tell BO-kun, a typesetter who did Kin'iro Mosaic that I said hello? I don't have much time to lurk for long. Also tell him that I'm still alive and happy that the project seem to have been completed.
PS. /animu/'s picking up steam, that's good news. Last time I came here, the post number peaked at 2700-ish.
▶ No.25032>>25107 >>30115
>>24987
>And oh, would anyone kindly tell BO-kun, a typesetter who did Kin'iro Mosaic that I said hello? I don't have much time to lurk for long. Also tell him that I'm still alive and happy that the project seem to have been completed.
The BO is not the typesetter of Kin'iro Mosaic, that was me. Good to see that you're still around, sorry to hear that all that stuff is keeping you busy.
Whenever you get around to doing the translation for this manga, I'd be happy to typeset it too.
▶ No.25099>>25107 >>30115
>>24987
Scanner here.
Your health and education come first. Don't worry I will keep the scans safe.
Take care.
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>>24987
>>25032
>>25099
I'm glad to see you guys are coming together. Just take your time and take care of yourselves.
▶ No.26086>>26088
And that is it for today.
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>>26085
>>26086
are those chinese clones?
▶ No.26099
>>26088
I thought so initially, but with a serarch, I figured. Their eye numbers are in kanji. The girl at page 118 is 5, and the ones exercising at page 117 are 4 and 3.
As for why they always are like >>24056 I don't know.
▶ No.26139>>26144
I don't know what's worse, that Watamote died for this or that the artist found a way to turn samefaces into a plot point.
▶ No.26144
>>26139
This work came before Watamote, fool. It is already finished.
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>>24987
>>25032
>>25099
I hope you guys are healthy and doing alright.
▶ No.30336>>30338 >>30342
I am, right now I am trying to figure why can't I post multiple images in a single post like usual.
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>>30336
Try again and post a screencap of the failure if it happens. What are the formats of the images?
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>>30338
>>30342
jpg images.
I click "browse" I select what I want, I can't select multiple. When I click again and select another it doesn't add, it replaces. It is like half chan (agh).
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>>30344
The drag/drop works fine.
▶ No.30349
I did it by changing the web browser.
I will just get Palemoon right after this.
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▶ No.32904>>32918 >>35084 >>35693
I think I might attempt to clean and level the scanned pages in preparation for a future translation. First three pics are some preliminary work I did the other day to get a feel for it.
What's with the weird blurriness displayed in the fourth picture? It happens throughout the whole thing. It's as if the halftone dots are only being scanned at the proper resolution near solid lines, and the scanner blurs shit otherwise. Or do the original manga pages actually look like that?
▶ No.35084
>>32904
This is some good stuff.
▶ No.35693>>36845
>>32904
>two and a half weeks later
Volume 1 is done, and here's hoping our translator's business and health problems are clearing up.
https://mega.nz/#!ECJCEayL!921B4YH85A9_ku4juW33ELsvXv3VQXb_Hzxna7ZL7Es
▶ No.37730>>37873
Hello again, anons.
Wisan here.
I decided to stay up a bit late to polish my skills after being absent for a long while. Here are the results:
TL for NG V1, folder NG01
https://files.catbox.moe/pz6r18.txt
TL for NG V1, folder NG02
https://files.catbox.moe/049a7u.txt
From my rough estimates, both volumes can be done within 14-15 days if I can keep up with this pace. Sadly, not all of my personal problems have been cleared, at least until September, so please don't put too much expectations on me.
Happy typesetting!
▶ No.37873>>38035
Cleaned volume 2 is done.
https://mega.nz/#!EHZzVSxB!362_o_3dlJNladdZlPJXFG_gQrWuk2dRELO2mDbtA4U
>>37730
Good to hear. Hope things are better by September. I'll get started typesetting it soon.
▶ No.37874>>38035
You guys take your time, you don't all have to do it all in one go. Uploading a chapter a week to a manga reader would suffice. Just don't forget your credit page.
▶ No.38035>>38045 >>39633
Whew. My initial estimation deviated way too far from the reality. Guess I should take it slower.
Here's the TL for File NG V1, folder NG03
https://files.catbox.moe/q04t97.txt
The original book script goes progressively more complicated in each chapter. It gave me a nice challenge this time around.
For anons that can read Japanese, I implore you to read this. After reading it to this point, I've arrived to one idea:
The book delivers subtle inquiries regarding the emulation of familial relationship dynamics between metaphorical orphans and guardians, with some basic epistemological riddles sprinkled around it without making the book sounding 2deep4u.
By all means, please read this.
Also, if you still have any parents, make them happy for once.
By the way, did anyone make an archive of the very first /animu/ meta thread?
The one where people complained about /a/? Would you kindly post it here?
>>37873
Same here. I look forward for the typesetting. I'm in your care.
>>37874
Good advice, anon. I should've paid attention to that before proceeding with this file.
I didn't sleep the entire last night for this occasion. I inadvertently put myself in a danger, but the ball has rolled, probably the same goes for my adrenaline, so I wasn't able to stop.
▶ No.38045>>39633
>>38035
Oops, I made some typos.
Here's the revised TL file for file NG V1 folder NG 03.
https://files.catbox.moe/zac6sn.txt
Also, I meant to write "my adrenaline levels"
▶ No.38752>>38754 >>38899 >>39633
Started to typeset it. When three chapters are done I intend to put those up on Mangadex together, then put each chapter up as it is completed.
I might change my selection of fonts to avoid overdoing the whole beep boop computer voice robots thing. I also don't want to redraw the sound effects anymore for a number of reasons:
>They're part of the manga art and drawing over the art doesn't sit right with me
>I think a reader of manga should be familiar with basic Nip things like hiragana, katakana, honorifics etc
>But most importantly, redrawing is a pain in the ass and I don't have as much time for it as back when I was doing Kiniro Mosaic volume 8
On the other hand, I think it looks unprofessional to have SFX: blah blah everywhere, like in the last image. What do you anons think?
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>>38752
>>They're part of the manga art and drawing over the art doesn't sit right with me
I prefer when scanslators add a sfx translation to the side, outside the panel.
▶ No.38756
>>38754
That's how it's usually been done.
▶ No.38895
I'm glad that this is getting translated. Thank you guys for your hard work.
▶ No.38899>>38910 >>38913 >>38985 >>39633
>>38752
>/animu/ is finally doing scanlation work
Good job. What will your scanlation group be named?
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>>38899
THE UNITED FEDERATION COALITION OF WORLD-DESTROYING DEMON GODS
▶ No.38913>>38924 >>38985
>>38899
/animu/ scans could work.
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>>38910
>>38913
What about Stinky Scans?
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>>38899
>>38913
You anons forgot about Kiniro Mosaic vol 8.
To the raw provider: Do you want to be credited under a particular name?
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▶ No.39269>>39271 >>39633
>>38985
Now you guys just need to get around to finally actually translating Rape Man.
▶ No.39271
>>39269
Let them finish Number Girl first. You are going to have to wait a while. I prefer them to only translate and upload one chapter of number girl a week, take it slow so that they don't burn themselves out. Rape Man could be a possibility down the line.
▶ No.39541>>39542 >>39633
Number Girl (♂) chapter 1 is done. I've changed one of the fonts and the SFX are now done as side texts instead of redraws.
I have a TL question:
>朝ごはんは ３人で食べといたから 問題ない
>I already had breakfast with the other two in our group, so it's no problem.
Is this the correct interpretation of the ３人で part? I took it to mean "The three of us" when adjusting the line for that panel.
▶ No.39582>>39633
Another TL question: What's this line that comes up multiple times and is apparently about body curves?
>いいなー しかも腰は細いのに 出るとこは出て～
>On top of that, you have slim waist, and your body curves are showing~
>これを飲むと 出るとこが出る
>If you drink this, you'll make body curves
>出るとこが 出る！？
>Make body curves!?
'(make) body curves' is an unnatural-sounding way of putting it in English so I want to change it, but I barely have a clue how the literal meaning of the phrase relates to what it apparently means. The only thing I can think of is that the とこ is short for ところ, meaning 'place', so the phrase says something like 'the coming-out place is coming out'.
▶ No.39633>>39634 >>39643 >>39944 >>40080
Did I made you wait?
Here's the TL file for File NG V1, folder NG04.
https://files.catbox.moe/jdv6er.txt
God, I hate seeing cute girls smoking.
That, and Sensei's violence prevented her from becoming a good mother to the clones.
I just realized something from reading this chapter: Those girls aren't robots! How did they label them on the pupils?
>>38035
>>38045
>no replies
>not a single (You)
>mfw
I feel lonely.
>>38752
I'd prefer to have the SFX be typeset outside the panels.
>>38899
>/animu/ is finally doing scanlation work
You're late onto the hype train, we've done scanlated a whole book already.
Plus this board already have another anon who's teaching Japanese by dissecting and posting detailed analysis on each page slowly. I think we can expand even bigger with proper management.
>Good job. What will your scanlation group be named?
For the time being, I'd keep the name as /animu/ scans.
If there's going to be a new name, I believe it should be agreed upon the scanner, typesetter and me.
If my hunch is right, there are three people in the group, each doing different tasks.
Sometimes I wish that tripcodes are enabled in this board to prevent identity theft.
>>39269
Never heard of that book. Make a new thread, dump the raws there, wait and hope for the best.
>>39541
>Number Girl (♂) chapter 1 is done
You're doing a good job.
>Number Girl (♂)
>(♂)
What?!
>Is this the correct interpretation of the ３人で part?
Yes.
>I took it to mean "The three of us" when adjusting the line for that panel.
That's partially correct. By saying "three of us", you do not explicitly state that Fourth is being left behind, that phrase can be taken to mean that First could have eaten breakfast with two of all other three girls in her group, Second, Third, and Fourth.
>>39542
I see that you've changed several lines significantly on page 10.
>I wouldn't worry about being late
It's missing the word "You".
>Every one of you will surely have changed
There's a change in tense.
Tell me the reasons why you did this. Notice that I've made a change in the guidelines within the new TL file.
>>39582
Are you a translator? Or are you still learning to translate?
Post a suggestion if you like.
>phrase says something like 'the coming-out place is coming out'.
Indeed, that's what you get from translating it literally. The Japanese is being inscrutable again, so I had to take some liberties in interpreting those lines.
>いいなー しかも腰は細いのに 出るとこは出て～
If you read the context, what she was doing it contrasting her friend's slim waist and big breasts. That's where I get the idea to write "body curves". It's more like saying her friend is trying to make a hourglass figure/ボンキュッボン out of her body, but she's still halfway done.
You should also notice that many of the gags within the book is playing with the fact that the clones are too naive to see multiple hidden meanings within the actions and utterances of other people, perceiving other people's statements as literal truth in Japan and taking logical, albeit unwise actions according to their limited cognitive perceptions.
▶ No.39634
>>39633
/animu/ scans works. Also, thank you guys for working so hard.
▶ No.39635>>39841
You're welcome.
Now I remembered something, who provided the scans for Kiniro Mosaic vol. 8? Why doesn't his name appear on the credit page?
▶ No.39643
>>39633
Oops, I made a few typos again.
Here's the revised TL file for File NG V1, folder NG04.
https://files.catbox.moe/ymd9qd.txt
I had a proofreader helping the majority of my projects back when I was volunteering outside of fullchan. Now I miss him.
>what she was doing it contrasting her friend's slim waist and big breasts
*is
▶ No.39841>>40049
>>39635
Kiniro Mosaic Vol 1-8 raws are available at http://manga-zip.net/
▶ No.39846>>39866 >>40049
Just proof that I am alive and searching to scan vol. 3.
There was something weird in the first batch so i asked the guy to do again.
▶ No.39866>>40049
>>39846
How many volumes are there?
▶ No.39944>>40049
>>39633
I think it's just eye tattoos they were printed in them in the clone capsule/creation device
▶ No.40049>>40266
>>39841
That explains it. I think it was the first BO who dumped the scans, but he probably didn't scan them himself. Still, I appreciate what he did for getting through an annoying file- hoster.
>>39846
Sounds tough, this is a niche title after all. Good luck.
>>39866
According to that cover picture and a MAL entry, there are only 3 volumes.
>>39944
How icky, most of the scientists probably think of the girls as nothing more than guinea pigs. It must be tough, having to live with a tattoo that obstructs your vision on your right eye pupil. At least label them with a cheap accessory like earrings or something.
▶ No.40080>>40081 >>40136
>>39633
>If my hunch is right, there are three people in the group, each doing different tasks.
Yeah, raw provider isn't me.
t. typesetter
>Are you a translator? Or are you still learning to translate?
That was me again. Still learning to translate---I would not attempt even a manga with furigana at this time.
Given that she's contrasting her friend's waist and breasts, I'd word the line as
>On top of that, you have a slim waist, yet your body's curves are showing~
The other lines:
>これを飲むと 出るとこが出る
>If you drink this, you'll make your body curvy
>出るとこが 出る！？
>Make your body curvy!?
For brevity, these lines could even be "…yet your curves are showing~", "…you'll make yourself curvy", and "Make yourself curvy!?"
Now to respond to this:
>I see that you've changed several lines significantly on page 10.
>Tell me the reasons why you did this. Notice that I've made a change in the guidelines within the new TL file.
>遅刻は 関心 しませんが その髪型は 悪くないですね
>I wouldn't worry about you being late, but that hairstyle isn't bad.
<I wouldn't worry about being late, and that hairstyle isn't bad.
I removed the 'you' because I figured a sentence beginning with 'I wouldn't worry about …' represents the speaker putting herself in the listener's shoes here, so it has an implied ending '… if I were you'. That would make the 'you' in the original translation unnecessary. Also because the original Japanese doesn't include a 2nd person pronoun or the listener's name. If it did, I'd have worded it as 'I won't worry about you being late…'
The other change I made is replacing 'but' with 'and'. I did this because my understanding of the conjunction が is that it doesn't strictly correspond to the English 'but', and the two parts of the sentence seemed to be talking about unrelated things.
>きっとみんなも 少しずつ変わって いくことでしょう
>Someday, every of you will change, gradually.
<Someday, every one of you will surely have changed.
I took this sentence as the teacher speculating on what will happen at some future point, and the tense that 'will have …' can be used in that way.
The combination of 'gradually' and 'someday' sounded odd, because if the change is gradual then it's difficult to think of it as happening in just one day. So I put in 'surely' because the word きっと appears.
This sentence, I'd say that I screwed up. The wording I used doesn't account for 少しずつ (which I assume is the reason you had the word 'gradually') and the combination of きっと at the start and でしょう at the end is what seems to give this sentence its hypothesizing feeling, a nuance that I completely missed.
I got overconfident about my Japanese skill. So from now on I won't make such drastic changes, at least not without running it by you first from now on. I apologise for overreaching with my translations and changing stuff too greatly when it was not my role to do so.
▶ No.40081
>>40080
>the tense that 'will have …' can be used in that way.
Meant to say: the tense that 'will have …' has, can be used in that way.
▶ No.40136>>41915
God, I've made more mistakes.
Here's the revised TL file for File NG V1, folder NG03.
https://files.catbox.moe/qd7f1d.txt
>>40080
>that spoiler
An aspiring translator is always welcome. It feels good to see more people learning Japanese. Keep it up. If you do try to translate manga, I'll be glad to assist you.
By the way, when did you start learning? Are you a native English speaker?
>On top of that, you have a slim waist, yet your body's curves are showing~
>If you drink this, you'll make your body curvy
>Make your body curvy!?
I prefer these lines. Good idea.
>>遅刻は 関心 しませんが その髪型は 悪くないですね
>Also because the original Japanese doesn't include a 2nd person pronoun or the listener's name.
It's implied in her line.
>If it did, I'd have worded it as 'I won't worry about you being late…'
This one is good too.
>The other change I made is replacing 'but' with 'and'.
Fair enough.
So we can settle on this line.
<I won't worry about you being late, and that hairstyle is good too.
>きっとみんなも 少しずつ変わって いくことでしょう
Keep my original line.
>The combination of 'gradually' and 'someday' sounded odd, because if the change is gradual then it's difficult to think of it as happening in just one day.
That's logically valid.
However, translators are expected to replicate the original meaning of the source text as close as possible into the target language, even if the source text does not make any sense. Deliberately changing the original meaning of a sentence is a violation of translators' code of ethics.
I'm saying this as I am a translator who once had his salary cut for trying to correct one of his client's papers.
Exceptions still may apply if the nuance and original intentions of the source text can be replicated better by changing some parts of it e.g. puns or adages. Notice that I changed some lines on page 9, I believe you should be able to figure out the changes I applied and the purpose of me doing so.
>I apologise for overreaching with my translations and changing stuff too greatly when it was not my role to do so.
Don't apologise. In the guideline I wrote in each TL file, I've given the clearance for typesetters to proofread my translation. This is because I don't have any proofreaders helping me in Fullchan. In contrast to my real life, where I have a proofreader whom I've worked with for months in the same company. I've became accustomed to rely on him to the point that sometimes I forget to proofread my own work.
I simply did not expect to work with a typesetter who is studying Japanese, but it certainly helps to have someone that can point out the possibility that I probably have made a mistake on a deeper level of understanding.
▶ No.40266
>>40049
Inmate #610 from nanbaka didn't seem to suffer from a eye tattoo of course don't know what effects they have on eye so I'm not sure.
▶ No.41915>>41943 >>44841
>>40136
I've been working on the second chapter. Before I post the images to this thread, here's the script with changes and reasoning for you to look over. In the meantime I will start typesetting Chapter 3.
https://pastebin.com/rQ7NhUpF
>I prefer these lines. Good idea.
>So we can settle on this line.
>Keep my original line.
Made these changes too.
From page 12:
>2, 3, 4, you're all on the same group, so run together at the same time.
Since Number 1 is speaking, is this meant as "We'll run together"? I only noticed this just now.
>By the way, when did you start learning? Are you a native English speaker?
Three months ago. It was actually just after I typeset Kiniro Mosaic Volume 8, as I wanted to do more like that and also have a more active hand in the process. To be honest I'd like to be a one-man team someday, that's just my temperament I'm a native English speaker.
>I'm saying this as I am a translator who once had his salary cut for trying to correct one of his client's papers.
Ouch. Since you say papers, do you work for academia or something like that?
>>41286
Ah, awesome. I love seeing the number girls grow and diverge, and I look forward to reading to volume 3 and beyond.
▶ No.41943>>41959
>>41915
Has chapter 1 been uploaded yet?
▶ No.41959>>42699
>>41943
Nah, I intend to do that when three chapters are done. 10 pages of content are just not much to start off the series with, and I might change a font again (The SFX side note one is a bit hard to read considering how often it's being used here)
▶ No.42699
>>41959
I see, it makes sense. Good job on everything.
▶ No.43248
Translation question about Page 23:
>パンツで 外に出ても それがパンツ じゃなければ 恥ずかしく ない
>Even if you go outside only wearing panties, they stopped being panties, so you shouldn't be embarrassed anymore.
I can't make sense of this line in either Japanese or English. Under what circumstances do panties stop being panties? I'm thinking about alternate possible meanings for this line but I'm getting hung up on what それが is doing in this sentence.
>Even if you leave with your panties on the outside, if you're not wearing panties only, it's nor embarrassing.
(Not confident that it means that, because the meanings of the で, に, and も particles are very stretched in this interpretation. There's also no word in the Japanese sentence here that means "only".)
>Even if you go outside only wearing panties, if the panties are removed then it's not embarrassing.
(Interpreting パンツ じゃなければ as "If the panties do not exist", but I'm not sure about that either)
▶ No.43249
>it's nor embarrassing.
I meant
>it's not embarrassing.
▶ No.44699>>45047
Shame there's not much Number Girl fanart.
▶ No.44715>>44720
Can't wait to see this uploaded to mangadex. Reminds me of the times /monster/ had scanlators.
▶ No.44720>>44721
>>44715
Can't believe Heart & Feather disappeared. Then again, they took upon themselves too much work load on doing both lewds and manga, so I think they burnt themselves out. Just do one manga at a time and I think just doing completed works is best.
▶ No.44721
>>44720
I wish they had finished the Shantae lewds translation.
▶ No.44841>>45047 >>45898
>>41915
>Before I post the images to this thread, here's the script with changes and reasoning for you to look over.
TL-anon, I'll still be posting the script changes, but because of the unfortunate delays you mentioned elsewhere, for now I'll be just putting the pages up as I get to them. Here are the script changes from page 20 up to page 28: https://pastebin.com/HzHcu2A6
Proceeding to dump chapters 2 and 3. See also:
https://mangadex.org/title/27487/number-girl
▶ No.45035>>45053
Cool. You guys don't seem to have a translation credit page.
▶ No.45047
>>44699
Maybe now they can appear since you guys are translating it.
>>44841
This makes me very happy.
▶ No.45053>>45114
>>45035
This, what the hell.
▶ No.45114
>>45053
Especially when manga sites leech off each other. Anyways, great job on the translation, I really enjoyed it.
▶ No.45161>>45164 >>45225 >>45898
There are credits pages now.
▶ No.45167>>45213 >>45223 >>45229
>1k views
Congrats to the team!
▶ No.45213
▶ No.45223
▶ No.45225>>45228
>>45161
Mangahere leeched from Mangadex before you added that in. Oh well.
http://www.mangahere.cc/manga/number_girl/
▶ No.45228
>>45225
It's on Kissmanga now and it has the version with the credits.
http://kissmanga.com/Manga/Number-Girl--TANIGAWA-Nico
▶ No.45283
>a group of sixteen clones
Do they practice self-cest?
▶ No.45328>>45336
These weren't translated?
▶ No.45336
>>45328
That's from the back and I put it in the first chapter by mistake but I'll just roll with it until the final chapter is TLed and typeset, I'll fix it then
▶ No.45898
▶ No.48124>>48161
>>47974 Good to see more raws.
Here's chapter 4. This one's a bit odd, only six pages and the last two have a separate plot from the first four.
Script changes: https://pastebin.com/3ywMw5MS
That department store they went to in the last chapter is based on a real building in Tokyo. Pic related.
▶ No.48125
Cute hostesses, would pay gaijin tax.
▶ No.48135
Very funny stuff, especially considering how simple the comic is.
▶ No.48161
>>48124
> This one's a bit odd, only six pages and the last two have a separate plot from the first four.
This repeats through a lot of chapters.
▶ No.48193
One viewer at Mangadex pointed an error at the description:
"Each girl is known only by the number imprinted on their left eye"
It is the right eye
▶ No.51060>>51145
Chapter 5. Script changes: https://pastebin.com/P7MM9Zvu
>TL Note : The word 'Salon' and 'Hospital' is very similar in Japanese, and I can't find any English equivalent of the pun.
(For the former, it's びよういん, and for the latter, it's びょういん.) I have used "Clinic" for both, which is close to the spirit of the original pun. Rather than a joke about mishearing, it's more of a joke about misunderstanding.
>>49454 Thank you, keep it up.
▶ No.51145
>>51060
>First image
We are all the same in the end.
▶ No.52822
>tfw no friend besides family.
▶ No.53772>>53788
>>52818 Thanks for continuing to dump.
Chapter 6 here. Script changes: https://pastebin.com/f5wxGZ2Q
TL anon, this one has some changes that were bigger than usual.
>食べながら 聞くから
Original: We'll listen while you play.
Changed to: We'll eat while you play.
This change was because the 食べ was not accounted for in the original English and I assumed that was a typo. I hope this change is acceptable. Only just now did it occur to me that it's more like "We'll eat while we listen". Whoops.
>それから 「正直者はバカを見る」 という諺もあるので 覚えといてください
Original: And then, there's this proverb saying "The honest makes himself a fool in the art of living". Please take note of that.
Changed to: And then, there's this proverb saying "The honest person sees a fool". Please take note of that.
I can't see how 「正直者はバカを見る」 becomes anything other than "The honest person sees a fool", and I find it difficult to make sense of "The honest makes himself a fool in the art of living". I made an effort to search for relevant proverbs in both English and Japanese and didn't find anything for the original English wording here.
▶ No.53788>>54423
>>53772
"The honest makes himself a fool in the art of living"
I don't think that is difficult to understand. It makes more sense to me than "The honest person sees a fool".
Besides, the meaning changes. In the original proverb it is clear that the honest one is the fool while in the second is other people that are fools. The first one is more adequate for the joke.
As for the musical joke, I think both " We'll eat while you play" and "We'll eat while we listen" are adequate for the context.
Besides this, good job with the translation.
▶ No.54423>>55366
>>53788
Typesetter here, after thinking about it I went and made both of these changes (proverb and musical joke) on mangadex.
▶ No.55366
>>54423
Ok, thanks for reading my… advice? criticism?
Also, never have seen that art of 13th.
>>55357
>>55358
I have read the script changes. Good corrections.
▶ No.57149
You guys are doing awesome work.
▶ No.57379>>57426
Fucking pig farm site. How does an upgrade make things worse in every way?
▶ No.57426
>>57379
Really liked the mother's milk sketch.
>>57379
The kappa pun would have been easy in my language.
▶ No.59013>>59106 >>59159
Don't you just want to pinch their cheeks?
▶ No.59106
>>59013
I want to pat 16th and say she is a good girl.
▶ No.59159>>59405
>>59013
i want to bully those clones
▶ No.59405
▶ No.61950
Ch 10 script changes: https://pastebin.com/6GaAG6zL
This is as far as the current translation goes. Looking forward to the continuation.
▶ No.64517>>64529 >>64692
▶ No.64529>>64567 >>64692 >>68690 >>68695
>>64517
Typesetter here, there are no more translations to work from and if I remember correctly the TLer said in some other thread a while back that his computer got fucked and further progress will be slow. I'll be happy to keep typesetting whenever he returns.
▶ No.64567>>64692
>>64529
Thanks for the notice.
▶ No.64678
▶ No.64692
>>64517
>>64529
>>64567
>"Hello, translations?"
<"The translator broke."
>"Understandable, have a nice day."
▶ No.68690>>68692
>>64529
I hope he returns someday.
▶ No.68692>>68747
>>68690
I can't believe translator-dono is dead!
▶ No.68695
>>64529
Hope he is doing ok.
▶ No.68747
>>68692
Buy him a battlestation and he will most likely continue working on translating these books.
Where's the scanner, by the way? We're waiting for the final RAW book.
▶ No.68775>>68808
>>2275 (OP)
>nature trumps nurture
Is that manga too redpilled for Western audiences? Was scanslation-kun mossaded?
▶ No.68808>>70353
>>68775
I am alive. will need to rescan some of the final pages because of some fuck ups. I am glad that you asked.
▶ No.70353>>70373
>>68808
Glad you didn't go to Gensokyo.
▶ No.70373
>>70353
Nah, I still have to build my army to crusade that place.
▶ No.70919
I can't believe translator-san is DEAD!
▶ No.72475>>72519 >>73047
Restarting with some beauty.
▶ No.72519>>73052
>>72475
Are you going to TL or just dump?
▶ No.73047
▶ No.73052
>>72519
TL anon and raws anon are different people.
▶ No.75703>>75717
Merry Christmas, /animu/.
▶ No.75717
>>75703
>early christmas present
NICE!
▶ No.75751
I hope the translation team is still around.
▶ No.75808>>75825
I guess all that is left is the translator and typesetter to do the rest.
▶ No.75825>>75832 >>76127 >>76429
>>75808
Vol 1: https://mega.nz/#!tqYkhJ4Q!hm_7OamjZCoRcjBfIJPfNG2riiiZYIhkDeDZRAZV-oM
Vol 2: https://mega.nz/#!43AEzbLL!sD018iHvI6e4n9mC7rS-ls8I11X2FZo8DYI30n3YKx0
Vol 3: https://mega.nz/#!YmhgXQgL!BaRs6JaRngI-W_QLD1Bv6dv28uqVeOCysz2UJG6S5sQ
That is it guys. All the scans done. I don't think there anymore fuck-ups. I don't know if this will go ahead with the translation (be it with the old translator or a new one) but I am happy for sharing this with you.
▶ No.75832
>>75825
Thanks. I hope the translation team is still around.
▶ No.76127>>76148
>>75825
Bumping for the translators to see.
▶ No.76148>>76281
▶ No.76281>>78445
>>76148
They're just on vacation.
▶ No.76286>>76335 >>76429 >>78332
If by the time we're done with the first volume of To Make the World a Flower (we're in the middle of the second to last chapter now, roughly 60pages left overall) this hasn't been picked up, I'll do it too.
▶ No.76429
>>75825
>>76286
Good to hear. I'll keep an eye on this thread.
▶ No.78332
▶ No.78445
>>76281
To the shadow realm.
▶ No.78880>>78883 >>78988 >>80016
Index post
First page of each chapter will be linked to this post.
How to read this
chapter and page number
=panel==========
>in-bubble speech
<out-of-bubble speech
[Boxed text]
*Thought bubble
{Everything else}
I'll try to upload a few pages every day. This isn't heavy on text, so I'll aim for at least a couple pages/day, more if I can find some dedicated time to work (I literally do this in short intervals throughout the day).
Hope someone will take interest in typesetting it.
▶ No.78883>>78988 >>80016
>>78880
CHAPTER 11
ch11pg1
{title, upper left} Sunlight
[It's time to go to school. Take care, girls.]
{sfx}:
ヴィーン: viiin
ガッ: gah
みーん:miiin
ジリ: jiri
ch11pg2
{Title} Independence
=1==========
>It's hot, I can't go out.
>What about school?
=2==========
>…. recently
=3==========
>It has become so hot lately, don't hit think?
>Just a little more and it will be summer break. So work hard!
=4==========
>Well, so today must be summer break then.
{Title} Informing
=1==========
{sfx} purururu
=2==========
>No one showed up to class. Did something happen?
=3==========
>Today is summer break
>And who told you that.
=4==========
>…..Teacher did
>WHA-!?
Vocabulary
陽射: ひざし, sunlight, rays of the sun
登校: とうこう, attendance (at school), going to school
時間: じかん
気をつける: きをつける, to be careful, to pay attention, to take care
自主的: じしゅてき, independent, autonomous, voluntary, of one's own initiative, unilateral
学校: がっこう
この前: このまえ, some time ago, recently, lately
最近: さいきん, most recent, these days, right now, recently, nowadays
もう少し: もうすこし, a bit more, a bit longer
夏休み: なつやすみ, summer vacation, summer holiday
たぶん: 他聞, informing
誰も: だれも, everyone, anyone
▶ No.79093>>79567
ch11pg3
{Title} Adaptability
=2==========
>I feel like I might die.
>What are you talking about?
=3==========
>It's only hot outside. But it's pretty cool in here, don't you think?
>Most schools don't have air conditioning, but we have one.
=4==========
>So that's the difference between humans and clones…
>Nope. But there seems to exist a patience problem….
{Title} Hats
=1==========
>Nevertheless, since someone could have a heatstroke, some provisions are needed anyway.
>I've given you some money, so go out to buy hats.
=2==========
>It's that a thing you can buy?
>How do you buy it?
>Eh? You mean hats?
=3==========
>There seems to be a discrepancy in understanding here. I want each of you to draw what you mean by "hat", please.
=4==========
>WHO'S THAT!?
TN: "hat" (帽子) and "unnamed/certain person" (某氏) are both spoken "boushi" (ぼうし)
ch11pg4
{Title} Bought
=1==========
[Ther next day]
=4==========
>Are these even from this neighborhood?
{Title} Out
=1==========
>Some of these are not even hats.
>It has to fulfill the role of protecting your head from the sun properly.
=4==========
>10, 14, go return yours.
▶ No.79353>>79567
ch11pg5
{Title} Out of the question
{Title} Consequences
1========
[The day after]
=3==========
>15 had a heatstroke. And 16 is being interrogated by the police.
=4==========
>I should have stopped them sooner.
TN: lit.: even though it was bothersome, I should have gotten involved.
ch11pg6
{Title} Riding together
=1==========
>It's raining
{Title} Sticking out
=1==========
>Eh?
>no, that's…
=2==========
>Just 'til the dormitory.
=4==========
>Cram up.
>Understood.
ch11pg7
'''{Title} Staring
=1==========
>Our dormitory os that way.
>Sorry… I'm going this way…
=2==========
>Then, this is good enough.
=4==========
<staaaaaaare
{Title} Fruitless
=1==========
>It's Short distance from here
>Thank you
[They eventually let him go.]
▶ No.79529>>80148
I wonder where the typsetter is.
▶ No.79567>>79575
I'm going to use
bold
to indicate what chapter/page/story/panel I'm talking about,
>this text
to quote the original posted translation,
"quotes"
to fill out the original Japanese and any changes I suggest, and
<this text
as my final proofreading suggestion.
>>79093
ch11pg3 Adaptability panel 4
>Nope. But there seems to exist a patience problem….
Instead of "patience" for 我慢, consider "endurance".
<No, it's more an issue of endurance….
ch11pg4 Bought panel 4
>Are these even from this neighborhood?
"ここらへん" in general means "around this area". Here Sensei's talking about how, as the Numbers go up, the hats are getting increasingly stupid and non-hat-like.
<It starts around here….
ch11pg4 Out panel 1
>Some of these are not even hats.
"まぁ、帽子ではなくても"
"Well,(まぁ、) even if it's not a hat (帽子ではなくても)"
<Well, even if it's not a hat
"日光から頭を守る役割は果たしますからよしとしましょう"
"The role (役割は) of protecting your head from the sun (日光から頭を守る) is fulfilled (果たしますから), so let's accept it (よしとしましょう)."
<it'll protect your head from the sun, so it passes.
ch11pg4 Out panel 4
>10, 14, go return yours
The ~ is inclusive, so
<10 to 14, go return yours.
>>79353
ch11pg7 Fruitless panel 1
>[They eventually let him go.]
"In the end, (結局) he took them along (送った)"
<He ended up taking them along.
BTW, are we translating the Number Girls' names as the number itself, or as it's written (for example, 10 is written "Tens" and 14 is written "Fourteens")? Using just the number might cause overlap with the kanji-eye girls.
▶ No.79568>>80148
If the previous typesetter isn't here, I don't mind working on it.
▶ No.79575>>79577 >>79651 >>79963 >>80148 >>83880
>>79567
I didn't even remember there were kanji-eyed girls. Then we should use cursive and add the "s" in the end. I'll compile these changes from time to time in a doc to help typesetter.
ch11pg8
{Title} From top
=2==========
>There's something going on with 13's face.
=3==========
>It's pretty.
>Only you have it, so unfair.
=4==========
>I'm sorry I turned out different from you and the others.
>"WE AND THE OTHERS"
{Title} To bottom
=1==========
>But you can do it too, I believe in you!
>Is that really ok though?
=2==========
>That thing is called a pimple, and it's a skin disease.
>Your living environments are identical, and yet you were the only one to develop it. Your eating habits must be the cause. Please improve on that.
ch11pg11
{Title} Touch
=1==========
>Ah
ch11pg12
{Out of panel bubble} Karaoke
=2==========
{Partially obstructed, on the building} Karaoke
>So, what do we do in this place?
>I don't know, but I was informed the price was cheaper for a larger number of people.
=3==========
>When I pressed here, music started playing.
>Should we use these to try and match the song?
▶ No.79576>>79651
I checked, and the previous translator was using ordinal numbers for the girl's name's. First, second, third, etc…
▶ No.79577
>>79575
ch11pg11
In the (only) bubble, it says "OH" not "AH"
the things we noticed only after uploading…
▶ No.79651
>>79575
These are mostly just spelling/grammar suggestions.
ch11pg8 From Top
<From The Top
ch11pg8 From Top panel 4
>I'm sorry I turned out different from you and the others
>WE AND THE OTHERS
To capture the way Thirteens is looking down on the other clones with お前ら , consider
<So sorry I turned out different from the rest of you.
<The rest of us….
ch11pg8 To bottom
<To The Bottom
ch11pg8 To bottom panel 1
>Is that really ok though?
"ちょっといいですか？" also means "Can I have a moment of your time?"
<A moment, please.
>>79576
Based off that I'll start using the furigana names (which are the ordinal numbers) as well for consistency.
▶ No.79955>>79961 >>79980
ch11pg13
=1==========
{Title} School bus
=2==========
>This is my first time going to school by bus.
>Until now I've only walked there.
<20 degrees
<20 degrees
>I see.
=3==========
>Do we get to sit down?
<clear weather this afternoon
>Nah. Other schools also commute at this hour, so it's going to be packed. There's no chance.
=4==========
>Other schools? Which ones?
>Well….
>Ah, it's here!
=5==========
>Will there be girls?
>Nothing but girls.
=6==========
>Eh? What? It's a girl's high school then?
>…..not quite.
ch11pg14
>A Clone High School.
▶ No.79961>>79963
>>79955
Is chapter 11 really that long? Most chapters in 4komas seem to be 8 or 10 pages long.
▶ No.79963>>82826
>>79961
There's no clear distinction in these pages that those are separate chapters. We could maybe consider those two omake pages a break ( >>79575 ), but since these pages are all in the same folder, I didn't bother making a distinction. For consistency I'll keep calling it Chapter 11, but I'll advance chapter number in the next omake and/or next folder and keep doing the same after.
▶ No.79980
>>79955
ch11pg13 panel 1
Only thing I have to add are the signs:
"テクバ学園行き テクバ"
<To Tekuba Academy To Tekuba [repeats]
"バス停 テクバビル前"
<Bus Stop Tekuba Building
▶ No.80016>>80018
>>78880
>>78883
Is this still vol.1?
▶ No.80018>>80124
>>80016
Actually scratch that. It is.
I don't know how the hell the scanner organized the raws into folders. The manga isn't divided into chapters.
What the fuck.
▶ No.80079>>80082 >>80123
ch11pg15
{Title} Hard to swallow
=1==========
>Chikuba Academy, exit~~~
=2==========
>Sit here.
>My, thank you young lady.
=3==========
>Cram up.
{Title} Stolen
=1==========
>Next, Chikuba Cloning Research Labs.
>Today is your turn to press the button, Sixth.
=4==========
>You….
>Eh?
ch11pg16
{Title} Doppelganger
=1==========
>Then, let's begin class.
>hmm?
=2==========
>What's wrong, are you feeling unwell?
>Yesterday on the tv, I saw something that was the same as us.
=3==========
>A doppelganger, is someone whose appearance is a perfect copy of someone else.
=4==========
>And it's said that if you look directly at it, you'll die.
TN: it might be "And it's said that if you look directly at it, IT will die."
=5==========
>Are we gonna die?
>No you're not, calm yourselves.
▶ No.80082>>80123
>>80079
>Chikuba
It's actually Tekuba, my mistake
▶ No.80123
>>80079
>>80082
ch11pg16 Doppelganger panel 4
I think it's "you'll die".
▶ No.80124>>80148
Repeating this, how are the chapters divided?
>>80018
>I don't know how the hell the scanner organized the raws into folders. The manga isn't divided into chapters.
▶ No.80148>>80149 >>80323
>>79529
>>79568
I'm around. Posting this to show that I'm working on it, but I'll be done with the chapter tomorrow.
>>80124
>how are the chapters divided?
Every time there's a big panel on a page with only one 4koma, which is in a 2x2 grid, instead of two columns of 4komas, that's the beginning of a chapter. So 89.jpg from >>79575 is actually the first page of chapter 12. The previous two pages, I assume they're just some kind of divider in the whole volume.
The folder divisions in the uploaded raws have nothing to do with the chapter breaks, I'm pretty sure.
▶ No.80149
>>80148
>Every time there's a big panel on a page with only one 4koma, which is in a 2x2 grid, instead of two columns of 4komas, that's the beginning of a chapter.
>He says, not noticing the page immediately after, or the many following pages that break the 4koma pattern
Disregard, I am retarded. What I meant by "done with the chapter" was being done with the six pages after those two, but I'll hold off on uploading to Mangadex for now.
▶ No.80157>>80158
ch11pg17
=1==========
[Tekuba Research Labs. Tekuba Clone Academy.]
=2==========
[Here the clones study about the aspects of human life.]
=3==========
>Besides us, are there any other clones?
>Yes there are.
>Do you want to meet them?
=4==========
<moo
=5==========
>Do you have any human clones…?
>The other students are in class at the moment.
ch11pg18
=1==========
>These cloned cattle were born before you all.
>Really?
=2==========
>Cow-nii (nii = older brother)
>They are female though.
=3==========
>Cow-nee (nee = older sister)
>Whichever way is fine for you.
=4==========
>For what purpose does cow-nee exists?
>These are part of a research to solve future food shortag…
=6==========
>I mean
>No particular reason.
<moo
>…..ok
▶ No.80158
>>80157
Pg18, panel 2, out of bubble text
Teacher repeats what the girl told her
<cow-nii?
▶ No.80323>>80324 >>80326
>>80148
Rest of the chapter.
▶ No.80326>>82377
>>80323
>pg81
Can you add a TN to explain the second punchline?
>TN: "hat" (帽子) and "unnamed/certain person" (某氏) are both spoken "boushi" (ぼうし)
If that sounds too specific, maybe add a redux version like
>"hat" and "unnamed/certain person" are homonims
▶ No.80613
>>80607
>playing any kind
meant "paying any mind to fourteenth or fifteenth."
I think I'll have some dedicated time to do translate this weekend, as opposed to rushed late night translating, to make up for the slow progress lately.
▶ No.80619>>80647 >>80664
Reupload because I think this is better.
ch11pg20
{Title} Dream
=1==========
>The dream I had this night was a bit scary.
>How was it?
=2==========
>In it, fourteenth was killed by someone.
=3==========
>Wait, no. It wasn't fourteenth, maybe it was fifteenth.
=4==========
>Did something happened to me in your dream?
>You had already died, so nothing happened to you.
>Whew, I'm glad.
{Title} Do clones have the same dreams?
=1==========
>I also had the exact same dream.
>Really!?
=2==========
>Do I get killed too? Or maybe fourteenth?
>I feel like maybe it was you, maybe fourteenth.
=3==========
>I'd like you too be more specific.
=4==========
>Did something happened to me in your dream?
>You had already died, so nothing happened to you.
>Whew, I'm glad.
▶ No.80647
>>80619
The translation for page 19 is missing.
Most of this is just spelling/grammar proofreading.
ch11pg20 Dream panel 4
>Did something happened to me in your dream?
<Did something happen to me in your dream?
ch11pg20 Do clones have the same dreams?
This title is a joke off the famous Philip K. Dick story title "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?" (in Japanese, "アンドロイドは電気羊の夢を見るか?").
<Do Clones Dream The Same Dream?
panel 3
>I'd like you too be more specific.
<I'd like you to be more specific.
panel 4
>Did something happened to me in your dream?
<Did something happen to me in your dream?
▶ No.80664>>80680
>>80619
Sorry about that. I changed some things on pg 20 and forgot about pg19.
ch11pg19
=1==========
[Clones' Student Dormitory.]
[Here, the clones eat and sleep together.]
=2==========
>Today's menu is steak.
=3==========
<munch
<munch
>Turning on today's news broadcast.
=4==========
>Tekoba City is producing, for the first time ever, cloned cattle aimed at consumption.
>As it has been clearing it's controversies on both quality and safety…
=6==========
>Cow-nii?
▶ No.80680
>>80664
Looks good, the stuff below is just spelling/grammar suggestions again.
ch11pg 19 panel 3
>Turning on today's news broadcast.
<And now for today's news.
panel 4
>As it has been clearing it's controversies on both quality and safety…
<Problems of both safety and quality have been addressed…
▶ No.80729>>80746 >>80748
Translatorbro posts in this thread so I might as well ask here before making an ass of myself by creating a thread and waiting for people to nod (I also considered posting in the Buy Thread but I choose this one).
Let's suppose for a moment that I were in "possession" of COMPLETE, good quality scans of a certain manga, said manga was object of many practical jokes for more than a decade, jokes that would often have "NEVER EVER" as a punchline, mind you, said manga is nothing extraordinary or shocking, it is still pretty unknown in the west, but it's considered a classic. Now, what would happen if I were to release them upon this board? What would people say?
Having said that, let's now suppose that I were to propose a translation project of that certain manga, which would need a translator, a typesetter and some proofreaders, moreso, such a project would be completely voluntary and non-profit i.e. the aforementioned team would do it for-no-monetary-compensation, nothing would be gained except for prestige and maybe more notoriety for the manga and other works from the author, which may or not may lead to the licensing of such a work/s in western countries. Considering that, what would happen if I were to propose that? How would people feel?
▶ No.80746>>80764
>>80729
Ask that question in the Rapeman thread, anon.
Post them anyway, it still brings things one step closer to a scanlation.
▶ No.80747>>80749 >>80808 >>82874 >>84097
ch4pg21
{Title} Yesterday's events
=1==========
>And that's how the dream Fifth and I had went.
>The contents of dreams ara always so interesting.
=2==========
>It is said that our unconscious desires manifest in our dreams.
>Do you remember anything that might have been the cause for it?
=3==========
[Yesterday, when we came back, Fourteenth and Fifteenth were in the lobby…]
=4==========
[And they were eating something that seemed really tasty]
=5==========
<staaaaare
>Are you hungry? Do you want some?
>Can we?
=6==========
>Try and get it.
[And that's how it went.]
[Ah… right… I suppose that was a bit annoying.]
TN: there's a pun on these last two panels. The word "ageru" means both "to give" and also "to raise". 14 and 15 asked "do you want us to give to you?", and on the next panel they say "raised", using the same word. It's a childish prank.
ch11pg22
{Title} Do clones dream the same dream? (2)
=1==========
[That night.]
=3==========
>I'm gonna have a dream in which Fourteenth and Fifteenth get killed.
=4==========
>And that's how we spent the night.
>That's quite the grudge you're holding.
{Title} Do clones dream the same dream? (3)
=1==========
>If that's the story, then I don't have any special connection to it.
>So why was I already dead then?
=3==========
>Who knows?
=4==========
>That's not important anyway.
>I'm gonna have a dream in which Thirteenth and Fifth get killed.
ch11pg23
{Title} Boarding and leaving
=2==========
>Opening doors, please be careful.
=3==========
>Please don't forget your belongings.
=4==========
>Closing doors.
ch11pg24
{Title} Meeting by chance
=1==========
<staaaare
=2==========
>What are you looking at?
>Oh? Whos that? Oh? Oh?
=3==========
>You all have the same face. Are you clones like me?
>You, a clone?
=4==========
>What's your average?
>Average?
TN: "Average" makes for a strange translation, it could also be "middle" or "inside" but those options would be just as weird and not tied to numerals at all. Scouting a few pages ahead didn't clarify this either so I'm leaving "average" in.
{Title} Eyes wide open
=1==========
>Your faces are identical, I can't tell you apart.
=2==========
>Do you not have numerals in your eyes like me?
>We do too!
=3==========
>Just use your eyes.
=4==========
>I can't see it.
ch11pg25
{Title} Countenance (I can't think of a better expression for "facial looks" and "expression" doesn't seem right either
=1==========
It's better if we do this.
=2==========
>It really is.
=3==========
>Who're you?
{Eye} Five
=4==========
>The same as you.
>Really!?
{Title} Left behind
=1==========
>We arrived, lets go.
>See ya.
=3==========
>Aren't you leaving too?
▶ No.80748>>80764
>>80729
Post a link to the raws. We have our hands full for now, but who knows?
▶ No.80749>>80808
>>80747
Fuck. Every time I read it I find something else I want to change. I won't reupload it again this time.
In this case it's the way something was said that ties with the title, I wrote:
ch11pg24
{Title} Eyes wide open
=3==========
>Just use your eyes.
Should have been
<Just open your eyes.
▶ No.80764
>>80746
>Ask that question in the Rapeman thread, anon
Yeah, I thought about the Rapeman raws still needing translation too, Rapeman is 13 volumes, while this series is 15 so it's a similar situation, guess this would add to the /animu/ scans queue.
>>80748
Fuck it, I'm making a thread to post and keep the raws just like the Rapeman one.
▶ No.80808>>80819 >>81001
>>80747
>>80749
ch4pg21 Yesterday's events panel 1
>The contents of dreams are always so interesting.
"Be that as it may about (ともかく) the content of the dream (夢の内容は), that is very interesting (興味深いですね)."
<Putting aside the content, dreams are quite interesting.
panel 6
Nice replacement for the untranslatable pun, looks good.
ch11pg24 Meeting by chance panel 2
>What are you looking at?
The kanji-eye clones tend to talk really casually (except Five) so consider throwing in a lot more contractions and such.
<What're you looking at?
>Oh? Who's that? Oh? Oh?
Here, やんのか is やるのか, literally "are you going to do it" but colloquially meaning "you wanna fight?"
<Oh? You wanna fight? Oh? Oh?
panel 4
>What's your average?
Not 100% certain but I think this is an ongoing reference to the combative attitude kanji-eye (Four) showed in panel 2. She's talking like a delinquent, who're famous for picking fights with other schools to see who "owns" the school/turf. 中 would refer to a middle school.
Directly translating it with this concept in mind ("What middle school you from?") doesn't capture the idea in English, so maybe
<Where's your turf?
<Turf?
ch11pg25 Countenance panel 1
>It's better if we do this.
Consider
<Just do this.
panel 2
>It really is.
As a follow-up to the suggestion from panel 1:
<You're right.
Also, for any potential translation notes,
<{Eye} Four
panel 4
>The same as you.
Four is referring to Five, so
<We're the same.
▶ No.80819
>>80808
ch11pg24 Meeting by chance panel 4
<Where's your turf?
<Turf?
I did some more looking around and found some more info. The delinquent angle is still there, but どこ中 is probably short for どこの連中, as in "Which group/gang [are you a part of]?"
<Which gang you in?
<Gang?
▶ No.81001>>81002 >>81061
>>80808
<We're the same
I'm not so sure about this one. I think the joke is that Fifth is asking Five(kanji) her name, and they are of the same number.
"Pics already exist in this thread." Which is weird since I could upload other repeats in previous posts, but can't do it now even after renaming the files. Anyway, here they are: >>8918
ch11pg26
{Title} Culprit
=1==========
>Which one of you broke down this vase?
=3==========
>I want you to be honest and come out.
=5==========
>As a matter of fact, I'm looking at the culprit right now. And I'll make sure to note down her number.
=6==========
>Everyone but Second are clear to go.
ch11pg27
{Title} Peculiar
=1==========
>Once again… Who broke this?
=3==========
>I'm looking at the culprit again, and this time it's the one who stands the least from the others.
ch11pg28
{Title} Third time
ch11pg29
{Title} Greetings
=1==========
>A while ago I taught in class the proper way to greet someone…
>And how did you greet me this morning?
=2==========
[Morning]
>Good morning.
=3==========
>Heyo.
=4==========
<you gotta be kidding me…
{Title} Greetings (2)
=1==========
>Listen! When greeting a superior or older person, you say "Good morning. How do you do?".
>Now follow my lead.
=2==========
>Good morning.
>Good morning. How do you do?
=3==========
>Good morning.
>Morning. How're y'doing.
=4==========
>Good morning.
>'sup
>It's turning up informal again!
ch11pg30
{Title} Greetings (3)
=1==========
>Morning?
>Good morning. How do you do?
=2==========
>Daytime?
>Good day to you.
=3==========
>When going back home?
>Farewell, I'll see you soon.
>Great, that's perfect.
=4==========
[At the end of class. ]
>Take care on your way back girls…
>See ya.
▶ No.81002
>>81001
ALTERNATE WEEB VERSION
We are well accustomed to japanese greetings, and since these are mostly vocal jokes, I thought I could include the romanised versions of what was being said. So here goes:
ch11pg29
{Title} Greetings
=1==========
>A while ago I taught in class the proper way to greet someone…
>And how did you greet me this morning?
=2==========
[Morning]
>Good morning.
=3==========
>Ou.
=4==========
<you gotta be kidding me…
{Title} Greetings (2)
=1==========
>Listen! When greeting a superior or older person, you say "Ohayou gozaimasu".
>Now follow my lead.
=2==========
>Ohayou.
>Ohayou gozaimasu.
=3==========
>Ohayou.
>Ohayou -su
=4==========
>Ohayou.
>-SU
>It's turning up informal again!
ch11pg30
{Title} Greetings (3)
=1==========
>Morning?
>Ohayou gozaimasu.
=2==========
>Daytime?
>Konnichiwa
=3==========
>When going back home?
>Sayounara.
>Great, that's perfect.
=4==========
[At the end of class. ]
>Take care on your way back girls…
>Abayo
And that's it for this folder. If typesetter wants to break this down in multiple chapters when uploading, I'll keep the count from where he leaves it. For now I'll turn to World of Moral Reversal ch15. See you tomorrow.
▶ No.81061
>>81001
>I think the joke is that Fifth is asking Five(kanji) her name, and they are of the same number.
I thought it was that Five and Four look totally different to Fifth because Five has such a contrasting serious attitude and expression compared to Four. It's up to you.
Didn't notice much off, just something minor.
ch11pg27 Peculiar panel 3
>I'm looking at the culprit again, and this time it's the one who stands the least from the others.
<I'm looking at the culprit again, and this time it's the one who stands out the least from the others.
▶ No.82291>>82377
How's typesetting going for this one? Is it getting uploaded on mangadex too?
▶ No.82377>>82387
>>82291
Typesetting it now, I think by tomorrow I'll have most if not all of it done. No Mangadex upload yet, I want to fix what >>80326 mentioned, as well as double check for other fixes (the out-of-order presentation of translations means that I won't be sure I've got everything right until I've properly caught up with the thread).
▶ No.82387>>82594
>>82377
Here's the final version with all the corrections done. Thanks for helping out.
https://files.catbox.moe/a3t6wu.txt
▶ No.82594>>82595
>>82387
Thanks.
Here's the rest of the pages. I'll handle the Mangadex uploading some other time (tomorrow, if I manage). I'll put the TN note in the end-of-chapter page like usual. I'll credit the translator, quality control, and raw provider as anon unless someone asks otherwise.
▶ No.82598>>82629 >>82678 >>82892
>>82597
Some questions/comments about the script:
>Page 98, wouldn't it be better to say "Last night" instead of "This night"?
>Page 99, I decided to render the pun as "We're giving it up" on the panel where the girls are holding the food out of reach.
>Decided to use the Romaji greetings as the canonical translation.
▶ No.82629>>82678
>>82598
It does say "this night". I think it means the girls are self aware of the origin of their dreams, that's why they that.
The pun only works that way if there is a TN attached to it.
Romaji version does seem better, as it doesn't require any kind of adaptation to it, and the expressions are common enough that any manga reader can recognize them.
▶ No.82678
>>82598
>>82629
For page 98, if you mean panel 1 it can be translated as "Today", which feels more natural:
"The dream I had today was a bit scary"
▶ No.82826>>82846 >>85894 >>86132 >>88964
Christ, I can't make sense of which pages belong to which chapters. Volume 2 has a chapter guide (pic related), but volume 1 doesn't. From the guide, we know that the last chapter in volume 1 is chapter 18. Chapters are also an even number of pages long, commonly 8 or 10, sometimes 6 or 12.
The arrangement for volume 1 has been fairly clear until chapter 10, which was the end of the last batch of translations. Chapter 11 starts at page 79 and ends at page 86, though you could call the end at page 88 to include the almost-blank pages. Working backwards from the end of the volume, chapter 18 is pages 151--158 (8 pages). I'm fairly sure that chapter 17 is 141–150 (10 pages) and that chapter 16 is 131–140 (10 pages). I want to call the pages from 119–130 (12 pages) chapter 15, but am even less sure about that one. That leaves pages 109–110 (10 pages) as chapter 14 and pages 101–108 (8 pages) as chapter 13. Then pages 91–100 (10 pages) are chapter 12. That'll have to do for now.
This leaves a range of pages in the middle unaccounted for---but they can probably just be considered omake pages as per >>79963. What I'll do is I'll upload the four pages from 87 to 90 as chapter 11.5 on Mangadex after uploading chapter 11.
▶ No.82827>>82846 >>82875
doublepost
Uploaded chapters 11 and 11.5 to mangadex, I intend to put chapters up once per week, and if I reach the end of the translation then I'll just keep pace. The TL note about the "boushi" mixup is on the relevant page instead of at the end, would have been too confusing for readers otherwise.
▶ No.82846>>83877
>>82826
Scanlator here. There was no chapter guide in volume 1, also thought that was weird.
>>82827
Do we have translations for the data page?
▶ No.82872>>82873 >>82874 >>83877
>>82597
>99
>we're giving it up
I don't get it
▶ No.82873>>83877
▶ No.82874
>>82872
the pun was changed, but will include a TN note. I think I prefer the original. check >>80747
▶ No.82875
>>82827
Mangadex is DDOS'd.
Loading images is slow as fuck right now.
▶ No.82892>>82894
>>82598
Does abayo mean anything or a mash of the words?
▶ No.82894
>>82892
Don't know it's origin, but it must be equivalent to "cya"
▶ No.83877>>83880
>>82846
>Do we have translations for the data page?
None AFAIK.
>>82872
>>82873
If two people said the pun didn't work, I might just use the original translation and explain the あげる meanings in a TN.
What I meant with "giving it up" was something like those two quitting the food, like how someone might say he's giving up smoking. Or the notion of someone giving up without a fight. That, along with the literal raising of the food, constitutes the pun (which mind you is not equivalent to the original Japanese pun)
▶ No.83880>>84097
>>79575
>>83877
TL here. Here's the data page
Height: 145cm
Body Weight: 35kg
B(ust): ordinary
W(aist): ordinary
H(ips): ordinary
Age: 0 years old (appearance of 11~13 yo)
Intelect: Average elementary schooler (with variations)
Physical abilitiy: Average elementary schooler
Hobbies: Eat. Sleep. Play.
▶ No.84097>>84104
>>83880
Thanks. I've edited that into chapter 11.5 on Mangadex (Pic related). Chapter 12 is now uploaded too. I've gone with the translation in >>80747 for the ageru joke on page 99, and put a TL note at the end explaining the Japanese pun.
▶ No.84104
>>84097
Nice, both for the data page and the solution for the joke.
Side note, poor 16.
▶ No.84720>>84726 >>84728 >>85894 >>87795
And we're back in business. I counted the pages left in this volume, and figured how to divide the remaining chapters so the next volume starts on ch19 as it should. Im gonna ask our typesetter to publish the remaining previous pages (8 pages in total, I think) as a single chapter (chapter 13). I'll continue working from that count, starting chapter 14 now.
Post with today's pages >>13418
14-01
=1==========
>In order to look more like a normal classroom, we need a class representative, right?
>Clas representative?
=2==========
>To put it simply, it's the class leader
>Got it.
=3==========
>In that case, it should be Seventh.
>That's no good, Eleventh seems more fit to it.
=4==========
>Do you think I would be qualified to be leader?
>If Eighth is going to be leader, then even I can do a better job at it.
{Sfx: やんや} commotion
{Sfx: やんや} commotion
=4==========
*What the…!? Just now they were fine with anyone taking it, but now…
14-02
{Title} Disaster Drill
=1==========
>Today we will perform a disaster drill.
=2==========
>Tiny breasts!!
>Your chest is unimpressive!!
>Sensei's torso is like a boy's.
>Stealth milk
TN: this is literally what she said
=3==========
>What a sorry excuse for a chest!!
>LOW-FAT MILK!!
>Pathetic!!
=4==========
>How come you girls got this injured in a disaster drill?
>By being disastrous.
TN: Another pun: "Hinan kunren/避難訓練" literally means "disaster practice", but "hinan/避難" (disaster) is homonym with "hinan/非難" (criticism).
14-03
{Title} Survival
=1==========
>Let's redo our disaster drill.
>In order to pull off an ppropriate response when facing disaster, practice is essential.
=2==========
>For now, let's practice for a hypothetical earthquake.
=3==========
>Phew, at least we're not practicing for a real earthquake.
>That kind of thinking is what worries me the most!
=4==========
>In any earthquake, at least some people always survive anyway.
>Please stop taking about reality for now.
{Title} Acronym
=1==========
>For starters, please memorize this acronym.
{chalkboard} ohashi (chopsticks)
>ohashi?
=2==========
>Read like this, it becomes a guide for an evacuation.
{Chalkboard}
Don't push
Don't run
Don't chat
Don't turn back
TN: no anon, YOU try translating a japanese acronym
=3==========
>Memorized it? Good, then let's move on to the next topic.
=4==========
>Don't run
>Don't push
>D-d-d-onlicious
>f-f-f-foood
TN: the joke is that "ohashi" made Third hungry, she barely gets the two letters of しゃべらない (shaberanai: don't chat) right, before saying "fish and seaweed". If you can think of food that starts with "do-" or "don-", speak up.
14-04
{Title} Under the desk
=1==========
>When the speaker announces an earthquake, I want you to act as if it were a real situation.
>Got it.
=2==========
>EARTHQUAKE ALERT, EARTHQUAKE ALERT
>An earthquake. Hide under your desks.
=4==========
<They're mostly uncovered.
{Title} Reward
=1==========
[Underground shelter]
>We could have escaped to this peaceful shelter.
=2==========
>In case of an actual disaster, I want you to move just like we did now.
=3==========
>What is it?
=4==========
>Since we did our evacuation practice so well, give us that candy already.
{Boxes, top to bottom}
Canned food
Water
Delicious noodle
>That's not a reward for the disaster drill.
▶ No.84726>>84727
>>84720
14-01
Title: "Leader"
panel 4
>*What the…!? Just now they were fine with anyone taking it, but now…
"What the…!? (はっ！？) It already/suddenly ( …つい) feels like they might say (って言いそうに…！) 'Anybody would be the same, right?' (「誰でも一緒じゃないですか？」)"
<What the…!? They're already about to say "It doesn't matter who does it, right?"
14-03 Survival panel 3
>Phew, at least we're not practicing for a real earthquake.
"Even if we don't practice (訓練しなくても) for something like an earthquake (地震くらい) [we'll be] fine. (平気)"
<We'll be fine in an earthquake even if we don't practice.
Acronym panel 4
Maybe
<Don't run
<Don't push
<D… donuts
<D… delicious!
14-04 Reward panel 1
>We could have escaped to this peaceful shelter.
"Without incident (無事に) we were able to escape (避難できました) to the shelter. (シェルターへ)"
<We have safely made it to the shelter.
▶ No.84727
>>84726
Oops, for 14-03 Acronym panel 4 the suggestion should be
<Don't push
<Don't run
<D… donuts
<D… delicious!
▶ No.84728
>>84720
>>84720
>Stealth milk
>literally
oops, a slight oversight on my part, it's
>stealth boobs
(motherly)milk and boobs are the same word
▶ No.84948>>84952
Pages 113 to 117: >>13419
14-05
{Title} "That's so true"
=1==========
>It has been raining a lot lately. But every time I take an umbrella with me, it doesn't rain.
>That's so true.
=2==========
>It's like it only rains when I don't have one.
>I so get that.
=3==========
>Tekoba town center station. Tekoba town center station.
=4==========
>If I don't sleep at night, I get sleepy in the morning.
>I so get that.
{Title} "That's so true" (2)
=1==========
>Let's make some conversation too.
=2==========
>When we play rock-paper-scissors, we all throw the same thing.
>tha's true
>tha's true
>tha's true
=3==========
>We all like the same things.
>tha's true
>tha's true
>tha's true
=4==========
>Talking to you all is boring
>understood
>understood
>understood
14-06
{Title} Being slow
=1==========
>Hey, it's those big sis'.
>Oh
=2==========
>What are you doing?
>Playing doctor.
=3==========
>You might be sick too, let me examine you.
>People tell me all the time there's somethingwrong with my head.
=4==========
>Looks like there's nothing wrong here.
>Really?
{Title} Sick
=1==========
>Let's play too?
=2==========
>Who's the doctor?
>I saw how it's done on television.
=3==========
>Who's the patient?
>I saw on tv.
=4==========
>I only like it when it's small children.
>Are you sick?
14-07
{Title} Quackery
=1==========
>I can't cure the crippled. It's ok to be different.
>Well, then I'll have an injury.
=2==========
>What happened?
>I was run over by a car.
=3==========
>My guts are spilling out. Please fix me.
=4==========
>Dissolve this medicine in some soup and take it.
>That'll work?
{Title} Sterilization
=1==========
>I'm gonna see a different doctor.
>Wait. Let just least disinfect you.
=4==========
>Done. You're good to go.
14-08
{Title} Too good to be true
=2==========
>Here
=3==========
>I just got this for free.
=4==========
>Everyone, get over here.
>What?
>They're giving out free stuff.
>Really!?
{Title} What's the catch?
=1==========
>Everyone got one?
>Yeah.
=2==========
>Well, let's go.
=3==========
>Thank you very much.
=4==========
>We were tricked!! They are collecting over there!!
14-09
{Title} System
=1==========
>Maybe you only have to pay a fraction of the price.
>I don't want to pay. I don't need this anyway.
=2==========
>If we don't pay they're gonna make a big deal out of it.
>To find our own replacements, we have to keep distributing these.
=4==========
>Really?
>Probably.
{Title} Smearing
=1==========
>By the way, isn't Sixth here?
>Sixth is in the dormitory, she's busted her stomach by drinking nothing other than milk.
=3==========
>Please help with my fund raising.
=4==========
>Sixth will be paying for these, later.
▶ No.84952>>84972 >>84982
>>84948
14-06 Being slow
"Too late (手おくれ)"
Title: Too Late
panel 4
>Looks like there's nothing wrong here.
"There's nothing that can be done/You're beyond help. (これはてのほどこしようがありません)"
手の施しようがない is a special phrase with this meaning.
<You're beyond help.
14-07 Quackery panel 1
>I can't cure the crippled. It's okay to be different.
"I don't know (わからない) the method of healing this (治しかた). Something else (違うの) would be good. (がいい)"
<I don't know how to heal that. Give me something else.
panel 4
>Dissolve this medicine in some soup and take it.
"I'll give you some medicine. (お薬出しときます)"
Another phrase with its own meaning, specifically used by doctors handing out medicine to patients.
http://archive.ph/FlPX3
<I'll give you some medicine.
14-09 System panel 3
The kanji on the boxes spell out 募金箱, "collection box".
▶ No.84972
>>84952
Usually the dictionary has some set phrases as well, didn't had those though.
>cripple
My bad, I just realiked I wrote down かたわ and and didn't notice it. That's where cripple came from
▶ No.84982
>>84952
>手の施し
>givin a hand/help
Fuck, reading this again and I know I could have done it right. Nightime mental capacity is the worst and should be left for anime/videogames only.
>お薬出しときます
This one however I would never have guessed. Especially because there's a literal mention of soup in there.
▶ No.85109>>85129
Last page of chapter 14 (first image of >>13420 )
I'll try to deliver a few more pages later.
14-10
=1==========
[That night]
=2==========
Earthquake.
=3==========
>Just a weak one. I wonder if the girls will be alright…
=6==========
>Don't push
=7==========
>Don't run
=8==========
>Delicious
=9==========
>Doughnuts
TN: can someone come up with another food starting with "D" or "Don". Since it's two girls making the mistake, doesn't make much sense that they are thinking in unison.
Alternatively, we go for a literal translation and a TN in the end. In which case the girls actually said:
>shishamo (a salt water fish)
>mozuku (seaweed)
I personally prefer both by having a joke in english and the TN.
▶ No.85129
>>85109
Unfortunately the only other common D foods I can come up with/find with a search are:
>Danishes
>Doritos
>Ding-Dongs
Not really a great selection to choose from…
It's not a big deal, but for panel 3:
>Just a weak one. I wonder if the girls will be alright…
<It's a bit strong. I wonder if the girls will be alright…
Really just suggesting it in case someone harps on the details.
▶ No.85146>>85370
>>13420 Second and third pics
15-01
{Title} Lost child
=2==========
>UWAAAAAANN
=3==========
>MOOOOOOOOOM, WHERE….
>MOOOOMYYYYY!!
=4==========
>He's too noisy, let's move away.
15-02
{Title} Decoi
=1==========
>Please wait.
>oh!?
=2==========
>If you see a little child in distress, then you should help.
>Why?
=3==========
>Because people help each other.
>Really!?
=4==========
>Then why did everyone run when I was attacked by a big dog?
>Please start helping from now on.
▶ No.85339>>85353 >>85370
>>13420 4th pic, page 121
>>13421 1st pic, page 122
15-03
{Title} Impossible
=1==========
[They are going to help the kid for now.]
>What's wrong?
>fueh?
=2==========
>Mother is… ueeh… mom is… UWAAAA!!
=4==========
>It seems to be an impossible task for clones. Can we go home now?
>You gave up way too fast.
{Title} Leave be
=1==========
[Calm him down, then listen to what he has to say.]
>A moment please?
>Fueeeh
=2==========
>She must be around here somewhere. So stop crying and talk properly.
=4==========
>He really stopped…
15-04
{Title} Representative
=1==========
>Mother is really gone…
>Hoo…
=2==========
>He's a missing child. He must have lost sight of his mom.
>I see.
=3==========
>So please help him look for her.
>Seriously!?
=4==========
>Weel then, we'll keep playing, so do your best Ninth!
>No, you are all going.
{Title} If I can
=1==========
>Is still difficult to search if it's only us four. Let's call everyone.
=2==========
>Hey, we need assistance. Come to the park.
>I will go, if I can.
=3==========
>I will go if I can.
>I will go if I can.
=4==========
>Everyone said they will come in they can. Now we wait.
>Uhmm, actually… That's how one acts when they are probably not coming.
▶ No.85353>>85370
>>85339
15-03
=4==========
>It seems to be an impossible task for clones. Can we go home now?
>home
it might be better to keep it less specific
>4==========
>It seems to be an impossible task for clones. Can we go back now?
▶ No.85370
>>85146
I don't see any problems (minor spelling issues but the typesetter will handle those).
>>85339
>>85353
15-03 Impossible panel 1
>[They are going to help the kid for now.]
Based on how it's written, this is the teacher telling them to do something.
"For now (とりあえず), help him (助けてあげなさい)"
<Anyway, go help him.
Leave Be panel 2
>She must be around here somewhere. So stop crying and talk properly.
I'm reading a different implication on who the subject is:
"[We] will be around here, so (そこらへんにいるから) when you're done crying (泣きやんだら) call out to us (声かけて)"
<We'll be around here, so when you've stopped crying come talk to us.
▶ No.85514>>85541 >>88964
>>13421 last 3 pics
15-05
{Title} Feeling like it
=1==========
[You four should split to look for his mother.]
>I'm going this way.
>Then I'm going this way.
=4==========
>Feels like I'll become a missing child!!!
{Title} Leadin the way
=1==========
>Going back home.
>Ah…
=2==========
>Excuse me. Have you seen a little boy around this area?
>I saw him!
>Where is he?
=3==========
>In the sandpit.
>Thank you! I'll be going then.
=4==========
>Wait, don't leave me alone…
>eh!?
15-06
{Title} Leading back
=1==========
>Mother!?
>Yuta!!
=2==========
>I'm very thankful to you all.
>Thanks onee-chan.
=3==========
>How's that? Helping other people isn't so bad after all.
=4==========
>Aside from that, haven't ther others come back?
>They haven't returned yet.
=5==========
>I've become a lost child too. Conne help me.
>I'll go if I can.
15-07
{Title} Let me see it
=1==========
> Oh no! I forgot my homework.
=2==========
>Don't worry about it. You can copy it from someone who has done it.
>That could work too.
=3==========
>So caring…
=4==========
[Next day]
>…First, a moment please.
=5==========
>I forgot ny homework, please show me yours.
=6==========
>I haven't done it
=7==========
>….riiiight
▶ No.85541
>>85514
15-07 panel 3
>So caring…
"That option [existed]… そんな手が…"
It's a shortening of そんな手があった or その手があった, an expression of wonder/awe at realizing a new choice or move.
<To think, that was an option…
▶ No.85834>>85906
>>13422 new chapter
16-01
{Title} First snow
=2==========
>Something started falling.
>That's snow.
>It's this the first time you girls have seen it?
=3==========
>I want to go outside.
>Sorry but we're still in class.
=4==========
>Well, in that case, I'm not feeling so good. I need to go outside to catch some air.
>Yeah, I'm not so sure about that.
16-02
{Title} Seasoning
=1==========
>So white!
=2==========
>So cold.
=3==========
>We're gonna eat it.
=4==========
>First, bring me sugar. Second, salt. Third, syrup. Fourth, shoyu.
>Now hold on right there.
{Title} Overheat
=1==========
>You shouldn't eat snow.
>Why?
>Because it's not very hygienic.
=2==========
>Then, we are gonna disinfect it by heating, so we can eat.
>It will melt back into water.
=3==========
>Then we are gonna freeze it, then eat.
>Wouldn't that just turn to ice instead of snow?
=4==========
Come on, don't turn blank on me like that.
TN: The same word used for "pure white" (まっ白, masshiro) previously used to describe snow, is now being used as "blank mind", to describe the girl's reaction.
16-03
{Title} Snowball fight
=1==========
>Forget about eating snow. How about we play some snowball fight?
>Snowball fight?
=2==========
>You make a snowball like this, then you throw it.
>I got you.
=5==========
>Nice snowball!
>WROOONG.
16-04
{Title} Idol
=1==========
>How about a different game?
>Like, we could make a snowman over there.
>Snowman?
>Yeah… that's right.
=2==========
>Well then, I'm going back now. Return to your classroom once Azuma-sensei returns.
=4==========
>We build it, now what?
=5==========
>Revere it?
16-05
{Title} Disposing of it
=1==========
>I'm bored.
=2==========
>I just had a great idea.
=3==========
>Come on girls.
>Back to class.
=4==========
>WHA-!??
▶ No.85840>>85894
I'd also like to make another observation:
The only reason I'm not editing my translations to the side of the pages anymore is because this, together with World of Moral Reversal, seems to have a greater following and dedication from the community, so they are pretty much guaranteed to be typeset.
I initially started editing pics with translations, all the way back with Torako, because I was pretty much sure they wouldn't be typeset and wanted to make it easier on the reader. But if some people find it critical that I start doing it for Number Girls as well, I'll get to it.
▶ No.85894>>86132
Chapter 13 (consisting of pages 101 to 108) now uploaded to Mangadex.
>>84720
>I counted the pages left in this volume, and figured how to divide the remaining chapters so the next volume starts on ch19 as it should.
Is your count in agreement with >>82826 ?
>>85840
I'd prefer if you kept the translations as text posted in this thread. Saves time copy-pasting into each bubble.
▶ No.85906
>>85834
16-01 First Snow panel 4
>Yeah, I'm not so sure about that.
"The meaning of 'in that case' (じゃあの意味) is one I don't understand (がわからん)"
<I don't see how that's "in that case".
▶ No.86132>>86186
>>85894
>Is your count in agreement with >>82826 ?
Yes. It's more or less what we expected, chapters average 10 pages each, with some a bit longer or shorter.
Pages: >>13424
16-06
{Title} Overeating
=1==========
[Monthly body measuring]
TN: I thought about using "Monthly physical exam" but it might sound too "medical" so I went with a literal translation
>Number 2, 145 centimeters
>Weight, same as number 1.
=2==========
>Tenth, Eleventh, Twelfth, let's step outside real quick.
>Why?
=3==========
>I brought this from the dormitory's cantina.
>If we eat it now, we're gonna have a different weight from the other clones.
>Really!?
=4==========
>I ate too much this morning, so I'm already full.
TN: lit.: "so it is difficult/forceful" I adapted it a bit, hope it fits.
>Eat even if it's difficult.
>Do you have shoyu?
=5==========
>Ninth to Twelfth aren't here. Do you know where they are?
>In the bathroom, vomiting.
16-07
{Title} What are you saying?
=1==========
>I noticed from your physical examination results that none of you are eating properly.
=2==========
>So, for one week, starting today…
>Each meal in the dormitory will be limited to a maximum of 800 kilocalories.
=3==========
>Did you get any of that?
>To put it simply: We ate too much, so no more second servings from now on.
=4==========
<Doh!
TN: "commotion", I suppose. But I didn't find a suitable entry for that sfx
>What is wrong with you?
{Title} Slim
=1==========
<Boo boo boo
>It's for your own good. Please be quiet.
=2==========
>As the class representative, I believe I should speak on behalf of everyone's opinion.
=3==========
>Had we not eaten plenty, we could turn like you in the future, with a slim chest, for sure!
=4==========
>Sixth and Seventh, please take Fifth to the infirmary.
16-07
{Title} Supper
=1==========
>Seconds, please.
>Does not compute.
=2==========
>That's not nearly enough.
>Let's all go eat dinner out.
>I have no money.
=3==========
>It's ok everyone. If we all pinch in some money we can eat something.
>Wow Seventh, how come you have such a good head on your shoulders?
=4==========
>Seventh, what is this?
>You said you wanted a good head, no?
TN: another pun hard to translate. You get the idea. (頭いい)Good head = smart. But it may also mean "a head is good/fine too".
{Title} Plan
=1==========
>This will be tough to divide.
=2==========
>Let's each take a bite in sequence, starting from First.
>Wait.
=3==========
>By the time it's my turn to eat, it will be entirelly gone.
=4==========
>Oh come on. It can't be helped then, let's divide it.
>That's what I was gonna do already?
16-08
{Title} Customer complaint
=1==========
>Excuse me, I found a hair in my…
>I'm so sorry for that!! I will get you another one right away!!
=3==========
[The next day]
=5==========
>There's a hair in my food, I want another one!
=5==========
>What are you taking about?
▶ No.86165>>86186 >>86607
Those evacuation drill puns on page 3 were pretty hard, but I thought of something. The acronym can be CHOP, standing for things to not do:
>don't chatter
>don't hurry
>don't obstruct
>don't push
Then the next panel can have two of the girls memorise "don't chatter" and "don't hurry", with the other two girls thinking "chopsticks" and "pork chops". The same puns can be reused for page 10. It preserves the joke about the acronym making Third think of food, and the chopsticks bit is a nod to the original Japanese too.
I wanted to think of something using the word "critical" for the title of page 2, but I couldn't think of anything.
▶ No.86186>>86607
>>86132
Mostly just some sentence suggestions.
16-06 Overeating panel 3
>I brought this from the dormitory's cantina.
<I brought this from the dorm cafeteria.
16-07 Slim panel 3
>Had we not eaten plenty, we could turn like you in the future, with a slim chest, for sure!
"If we don't eat a lot (たくさん食べなかったら), in the future, (将来) we'll become thin even in our chests like you! (お前みたいに胸までやせてしまうだろが！)"
<If we don't eat a lot, we'll grow up as thin-chested as you!
16-07 Plan
Misnumbered, this is 16-08
panel 4
>That's what I was gonna do already?
You were doing it (してたの？) with the intent to do it? (やろうと)"
<You were planning on that?
>>86165
CHOP works well!
▶ No.86607>>86608 >>86617 >>86622
>>86186
Thanks. Funny that before learning japanese I found it weird that some translations sounded so clunky and artificial, I'm starting to see why though. But I'll get better.
>>86165
CHOP works perfectly, I vote to keep it as the official translation.
Sorry for the lack of updates yesterday. These have been a busy couple of days.
Today's pages: >>13425
16-09
{Title} Out of the ordinary
=1==========
>Recently we saw a dog being scolded by it's owner for eating something off the ground.
>Don't!
>That's because it's dangerous to go about eating anything. She was disciplining the dog.
=2==========
>Since we're humans and don't have owners, we are free to scavenge for food.
>Actually, humans don't do that in the first place.
=3==========
>Eh?
>Eh?
=4==========
>EH?
>Wait a minute, you haven't been eating anything out of the ordinary recently, have you?
16-10
{Title} It was growing there
=1==========
>You didn't happen to eat anything strange on your way to school today, did you…?
=2==========
>Oh?
=3==========
>Oh?
=4==========
>Just a strange mushroom.
>SO YOU DID EAT SOMETHING STRANGE!
{Title} Symptoms
=1==========
>The was such a thing?
>We ate it.
=2==========
>Are you feeling alright? Not even a stomachache or other ill symptoms at all…
=3==========
>I'm feeling alright for now, I guess?
=4==========
>GO TO THE INFIRMARY RIGHT NOW!!
16-11
{Title} Trash
=3==========
>What are you doing?
>Trash.
=4==========
>Eh?
>Trash.
'''{Title}
=1==========
>Aah, you mean something (trash) got in your eye. Let's go get some medicine from the school infirmary.
>Medicine?
=2==========
>If we apply it to your eyes, the trash will wash away.
=3==========
<medicine (薬)
<eye (目)
<applied… in the eye!? (目に…刺す)
=4==========
>It came out already…
>Is that so? I'm glad.
TN: A couple notes here, but nothing that needs to be put on the final work, they were translatable, so I'm mentioning these as a curiosity:
>"eye drops" is literally spoken as "eye medicine" in japanese.
>刺す (to be injected) and 差す(to be tinged with) are both spoken "sasu"
▶ No.86608
>>86607
16-11
Second title is
Eye medicine
I kept the literal translation instead of "eye drops" to keep it relevant to the joke.
▶ No.86617>>86619
>>86607
Looks good. Just to prove it's me I'll do some nitpicking.
16-09 Out of the ordinary panel 1
>Recently we saw a dog being scolded by it's owner for eating something off the ground.
<Recently we saw a dog being scolded by its owner for eating something off the ground.
16-10 Symptoms panel 1
>The was such a thing?
<There was such a thing?
▶ No.86619
>>86617
I needed a change of pace to something easier to translate. The typos however are still there.
▶ No.86622
>>86607
FUCK
I just noticed I kept the wrong page count. These should be numbered from 10 to 12. I'll keep the correct count from now on.
▶ No.87049>>87263 >>87795
>>86994
Minor correction on bottom right panel of page 111. Teacher says "taking" instead of "talking".
▶ No.87263>>87362
>>86994
>>87049
Looking good.
These are the last pages of this chapter. Ch17 starts next.
Today's pages >>13426
16-12
{Title} Reminiscing
=2==========
>…..fu
=3==========
>It's something wrong?
>Aah, sorry about that. I was just reminiscing about something.
=4==========
>Are you sure you're ok?
>This is not something to be sad or seriously worried about.
{Title} Thoughts
=1==========
>What were you reminiscing about?
>Some trivial, unimportant matters.
=2==========
>So you're reminiscing about your unimportant past?
>That's not a very respectful way of saying it.
=3==========
>Isn't the present enjoyable for you?
>Aren't you concerned about the future either?
=4==========
>What are you gonna do from now on?
>You girls are very difficult today.
16-13
{Title} Pushing on
=1==========
>This candy tastes terrible.
>Mine does too.
=2==========
>What are you doing?
>Sixteenth, want some candy?
>I do.
{Title} Everyone
=1==========
>So today..
=2==========
>Blood.
>Hmm, ah…
=3==========
>Must be a paper cut or something.
>Don't worry about it. With some saliva, it will heal in no time.
=4==========
>I MEANT MY OWN {handwritten} don't come any closer
16-14
{Title} Munch munch
=1==========
>Oh!?
=2==========
>What are you eating?
>A bug?
>Gum
=3==========
>What is that?
>It's somethin you can chew and chew, but doesn't end.
=4==========
>Is that some kind of miracle?
>Here, have some.
{Title} Gulp
=1==========
<chew
<chew
>gulp
>gulp
=2==========
>But it was over in an instant?
>You're not supposed to swallow. The flavor will keep on going.
=4==========
>It ran out of flavor, so I swallowed it.
>You two went too fast again with that gum.
▶ No.87362
>>87263
16-14 Gulp panel 4
>It ran out of flavor, so I swallowed it.
"It tastes too good, (うますぎて) so I [regretfully] swallowed. (飲んじゃう)"
<It tasted so good I swallowed it.
>You two went too fast again with that gum.
"For all of you, (お前らには) gum is (ガムは) still too soon, it seems (まだ早かったよう)"
<You're not ready for gum yet.
▶ No.87795
Chapter 14, pages 6 to 10.
I think the chopsticks thing is a misreading of the original Japanese. Chopsticks are はし (or おはし if you're putting the honorific prefix on), but the acronym is おはしも, not おはし as stated in >>84720. Still keeping the translation, though.
>>87049
Fixed on Mangadex.
▶ No.88016>>88021 >>88028
Chapter 17. Today's pages are >>13427
17-01
{Title} Goal
=1==========
>The pretty flowers are all blossoming.
=2==========
>Oh?
=3==========
>What are you doing?
<Who's that.
<No idea.
>Oh? Hey, it's been a while.
=4==========
>I'm holding this spot.
>Holding a spot?
=5==========
>How do you "hold" it?
>I dunno.
17-02
{Title} Spares
=1==========
>We are going to watch the flower's blossoming here tomorrow.
=2==========
>Flower watching?
<Who's that?
<No idea.
>It's a thing when you stay under a cherry tree and appreciate the flowers while enjoying a meal.
=3==========
>Forecast for tomorrow said it will be the best time for it, so we had Four hold a place for us.
>She's gonna stay there by herself until tomorrow?
=4==========
>I've brought her replacements, so it's alright.
>Aren't you going to help as well?
{Title} Heart breaking
=4==========
>WE WANNA GO HOME.
17-04
{Title} Cherry blossom viewing season
=1==========
>And that's why we also want to go for the cherry blossom viewing.
>Cherry blossom viewing…?
=2==========
>There was a cherry tree on the rooftop.
>We're in the middle of class, but maybe we could go see it?
>Let us go.
=4==========
>So pretty.
=5==========
>I've wanted to see it for some time now.
>So you girls also thought the same way too?
=6==========
>It beats sitting through some lame class.
>Wait… I get it that you find it boring, but why lame?
17-05
{Title} Company?
=1==========
>Oh!? Haven't seen you in a while.
=2==========
>Who're you?
>Uh? Maybe you are a different clone kid?
=3==========
>I must have talked to one of your other friends, then.
>Friend?
=4==========
>Did we had any friends?
>Who knows?
>Eh? Are you bad with relationships?
{Title} Purikura
TN: Purikura is a photo booth that prints out cards and stickers of the resulting photograph, which are then traded among friends
=1==========
>We were going to a purikura to take pictures. How about you go with us too?
>Purikura?
=2==========
>You can take pictures and make stickers out of them with this.
>Ooh, stickers.
=3==========
>Thank you. We're gonna use these on cardboard packing. {Handwritten} we can seal the lid with these stickers.
>USE THEM FOR SOMETHING MORE FUN!!
▶ No.88021
>>88016
>tfw too retarded to count to 5
sigh
I skipped the count for pg3, disregard the incorrect page counting, those are pages 1 through 4 from >>13427
▶ No.88028
>>88016
17-02 Spares panel 1
>We are going to watch the flower's blossoming here tomorrow.
This edit's just for consistency.
<We are going cherry blossom viewing here tomorrow.
panel 2
>Flower watching?
Same here.
<Cherry blossom viewing?
17-03 panel 5
>I've wanted to see it for some time now.
"[I] want to watch and stay here (みていたい) forever (ずっと)"
<I want to stay and watch this forever.
>So you girls also thought the same way too?
"Hm… (ほぉ…) even you all (君たちでも) have times when you think (思うこともあるのか) like that? (そんな風に)"
<So you girls think that way too sometimes?
17-04 Company? panel 4
>Eh? Are you bad with relationships?
Another specific meaning.
"Eh!? (え!?) Are you on bad terms with each other? (仲悪いの?)"
<Eh!? Are you on bad terms with each other?
If that's too long,
<Eh!? Not getting along?
or so on.
Purikura
I've seen these referred to as "Print Club" in English (just the filled-out version of Purikura), but I don't know if it's common enough to use without a translator's note.
▶ No.88105>>88330
17-05 for real this time
{Title} Boundaries
=1==========
>We took those pictures yesterday.
=2==========
>Should we go take a picture with everyone?
>Let's go.
=4==========
>10 people is it's limit.
{Title} Pulling
TN: 引き has other associate meanings: "pull, patronage, influence, tug, discount" so I thought about using an expression like "pulling strings" or "cutting corners" instead
=1==========
>Wait, I've got an idea.
>Seventh!
=2==========
>We can open the curtain like this, and everyone can line up in the back.
>How come Seventh is so brilliant?
=3==========
>Fifth and Eighth, move closer to the center.
>Thirteenth, more to the right.
▶ No.88233>>88330
Pages: >>13428
17-06
{Title} Inexcusable
=1==========
>I'm going out to buy clothes this sunday.
>Where?
=2==========
>I have a good sense of fashion, I could be your guide.
>Tenth?
=3==========
>Maybe the most fashionable of all the clones.
>REALLY!?
=4==========
>WHA-!? THAT'S TENTH!?
{Title} Model
=1==========
>Alright, I'll take you to the store I usually go to.
=2==========
>Is it ok if I go with you too?
>Oh?
=3==========
>How unsophisticated. Want to take some lessons on fashion from me?
>Eh!? Eehh… really?
17-07
{Title} Fashionable
=2==========
>Thank you for always shopping with us. We received some new products recently.
>Lemme try them.
=4==========
>Fashionable.
>EH!!?
{Title} Good taste
=1==========
>Please reconsider it. Let me take you to a different place.
=3==========
>This looks more normal. And it suits you better too.
=4==========
>Terrible taste.
>You're the last person I want to hear from.
17-08
{Title} Public opinion
=1==========
[The next day]
>Since you two are dressed so bad, let's go out today again.
=2==========
>Ah!
=3==========
>You're both dressed so cute today.
=4==========
>What exactly is C.U.T.E about those two?
>WHAT THE HELL, WHY DO YOU LOOK LIKE THAT!!?
=5==========
>You should dress more properly, you know!
ATTENTION
The following post has the order of its pages inverted.
Scanlator probably got then mixed when scanning these, since their filenames are also wrong.
Pages: >>13429
17-09
{Title} Going for some fun
=2==========
>I'm coming over to your house to have some fun.
>Yeah, right now.
=2==========
>Sixth, can I come over to your room to have some fun?
>Sure, I guess?
=6==========
>I'll be leaving now.
>Why did you come here in the first place?
17-10
{Title} Going for some fun (2)
=2==========
>What were you doing in Sixth's room?
>I was having some fun.
=3==========
[The next day]
=6==========
>We'll leave now.
>Really, why did you come here in the first place?
▶ No.88330
>>88105
Nice work!
>>88233
17-06 Inexcusable panel 4
>WHA-!? THAT'S TENTH!?
I think it's the teacher remembering Tenth's nasty fashion sense instead of being surprised at it.
<WHA-!? THAT TENTH!?
or
<WHA-!? FROM TENTH!?
etc.
17-08 panel 1
>Since you two are dressed so bad, let's go out today again.
"Today, too (今日も), I will lecture (説教するから) regarding the terrible taste the two of you have (お前ら二人のダサさについて) so let's go outside (外行こう)"
<I'll teach you about your terrible taste while we head outside today.
▶ No.88772>>88829
Chapter 18, today's pages: >>13430
18-01
{Title} Limits
=1==========
>Second!? What are you doing?
>I can't get down. Please help.
=4==========
>Can we get one more person on here?
>Absolutely not.
18-02
{Title} Priorities
=1==========
>Wait a bit. We're calling everyone over.
>Please do.
=2==========
>We are at the park now. Can I ask you a favor, Fifth?
>I'm at the park too. Can I ask you a favor, First?
=3==========
>meow
>meow
=4==========
>We need to help the kitty.
>meow
>It's kinda like the same situation Second is in.
{Title} Other side
=1==========
>I have an idea.
=2==========
>If we use everyone for the foundation, we can reach it.
>Seventh really is a genius.
=3==========
>Ok, Sixth can go on the top.
>Understood.
=4==========
>Which reminds me, I've stepped on a weird bug recently.
>Why didn't you say that earlier?
18-03
{Title} Jumping
=1==========
>Can't reach it. I need a little bit more height.
=2==========
>Fifth, let me stand on your shoulders, then stand up.
>Understood.
=3==========
>NOW JUMP, SO I CAN REACH IT!
>UNDERSTOOD!
{Title} Help
=1==========
We even lost two blockheads, now.
=2==========
>We need teacher's help.
=3==========
>Eh? Wouldn't it be better to just call a rescue squad?
<call 119
=4==========
>Are you some sort of genius too?
18-04
{Title} Concern
=2==========
>That wasn't anything like a clone.
=3==========
>By the way, didn't Second needed help too?
=4==========
>I couldn't possibly ask for your help twice, that would be wrong.
>I'm sure Second will be fine.
{Title} Dusk
▶ No.88829
>>88772
18-02 Priorities panel 4
>It's kinda the same situation Second is in.
"The situation to rescue Second (2助ける場合) isn't here (じゃねぇ)"
<This is no time to be rescuing Second.
18-03 Help panel 1
>We even lost two blockheads, now.
"Even normally we don't have enough (ただでさえ足りないのに) and we lost two more people (2人もいなくなってしまった)"
<We didn't have enough before and now we've lost two more people.
18-04 Concern panel 2
>That wasn't anything like a clone.
"Something like a clone (クローンなんか) wasn't needed. (いらなかった)"
<Clones were no help at all.
>By the way, didn't Second needed help too?
"As an addition, (ついでに) should we have them rescue Second as well? (2もたすけてもらう？)"
<Should we get them to rescue Second too?
>We couldn't possibly ask for your help twice, that would be wrong.
"Having them rescue twice (2回も助けてもらう) would feel bad (のは悪いから)"
<We couldn't possibly ask for their help twice, that would be wrong.
▶ No.88835>>88907
Today's pages: >>13431
18-05
{Title} Toothbrush
=1==========
>I lost my toothbrush.
=2==========
>First, I need to borrow your toothbrush.
>Sure.
=5==========
>Thank you.
18-06
{Title} "I so get that" punchline
=1==========
>Some time ago, when I was walking around the neighborhood by myself…
=3==========
{Plaque} Bus stop. Tekuba Building
=4==========
>I noticed that no one makes the same facial expression as me. That's so weird.
>Ah
>I so get that.
18-07
{Title} Binge eating
=2==========
{Poster}
Challenge
Gigantic chinese styled fried rice
¥3000
Eat under 30 minutes and win 5000 yen prize.
=4==========
>Alright, you got 30 minutes. Set. Start!
18-08
=1==========
<glimpse
<glimpse
=5==========
>urgh!
=6==========
>URGH!?
[Disqualified]
TN: there's no actual translation for おえ (lit.: oe) so I went with "urgh" but if anyone can think of something better to use here, please speak up.
Sorry for the slow updates this week.
▶ No.88907>>88913
>>88835
18-06 "I so get that" punchline panel 4
>I noticed that no one makes the same facial expression as me. That's so weird.
The translation is correct but it's a bit of a joke; here, 同じ顔 literally means "has the same face" since they're all clones.
<It feels so weird when no one else has the same face as me.
▶ No.88913
>>88907
Makes more sense, I thought she meant that everyone was laughing or had casual expressions, instead of her blank face.
I'll be done with those omake pages soon, finishing this first volume, and will probably go back to Edgy Kemono Friends next, to finish that volume as well.
Unless anyone has other more appealing suggestions.
▶ No.88964>>88965
Translator anon, I'm confused by your numbering scheme. In >>85514 you have 15-07 and there's no 15-08. That would be the sole departure from chapters having even numbers of pages. On top of that, your chapter 16 goes all the way up to 14 pages, which would also be the only time I've seen that. I'm quite tempted to just stick to the allocation I put up here: >>82826
I think the manga sometimes just includes two story arcs in one chapter, making it no end of confusing.
▶ No.88965
>>88964
That could work.
Somehow I missed your post back then. You got the right idea there. I don't mind changing chapter division, tbh.
▶ No.88990>>89043
Today's pages: >>13432
afterword
あとがき: postscript
It has been 3 years since Number Girl has been published for the first time on Daiou Dengeki. Since then it has been republished 10 times over. After being serialised, it finally got its own special volume. I think it won't take long for the next volume. I want to keep on making lots of dirty jokes. It would be great if you could stick with us from now on.
omake
=1==========
>How about we practice some self introduction today?
>Introduction?
=2==========
>When you meet someone for the first time you say things about yourself. Like your name.
=3==========
>First
>Second
>Third
>Fourth
>That's passable. But don't you have anything else to say beside your names?
=4==========
>For example, what kind of person you are?
TN: the literal translation is a bit weird, it can be read as "for example, oneself is (this kind of) human(person)" so the girls repply with "we are clones" on the next panel.
>Understood.
=5==========
>As you can see, I am a clone.
>No… well… I can guess that much just by looking at you.
=6==========
>Then how about talking about hobbies, things you like and etc?
>Things we like?
=7==========
>Eating
>Lazing
>Playing
>……. and you, Ninth?
=9==========
>Eating
>Why did you took your time to respond?
=10==========
>As you can see, we are clones.
>Maybe they are even more clone-like than they think they are. I guess we can skip explaining for this second time.
=11==========
>If you think about it, shouldn't we be introducing ourselves individually instead of doing it as a group?
End of Volume 01
▶ No.89033>>89043 >>90131
Final document for chapters 15~18
https://files.catbox.moe/m6ozs7.txt
The only thing of notice I kept was the title Purikura on pg 17-05. Everything else is as corrected by PR.
Thanks for the hard work anons. I think I'll go back to Edy Kemono Friends now to finish it's second volume now.
▶ No.89043
>>88990
afterword
>It has been 3 years since Number Girl has been published for the first time on Daiou Dengeki.
The "official" English name is Dengeki Daioh (the website is daioh.dengeki.com).
<It has been 3 years since Number Girl was published for the first time in Dengeki Daioh.
>I want to keep on making lots of dirty jokes.
"In Number Girl, (ナンバガールでは) I think I want to try hard (がんばっていきたいと思いますので、) without relying too much on dirty jokes, (あまり下ネタに頼らず)"
<I want to keep at it without relying too much on dirty jokes.
omake panel 3
>That's passable. But don't you have anything else to say beside your names?
"…That's too simple, so (……シンプルすぎるんで) more than your name is fine? (名前以外もいいですか？)"
<…That's too simple. Anything else besides your name?
panel 5
>As you can see, I am a clone.
Another odd saying that only got odder due to the way slang works. こう見えて looks like the opposite of こう見えても, which means "even though I look like this", and normally it should be. However, just like how people these days say "I could care less" when they mean "I couldn't care less", こう見えて still carries the こう見えても meaning.
https://detail.chiebukuro.yahoo.co.jp/qa/question_detail/q12130231777
http://archive.ph/puJAA
<Despite my appearance, I am actually a clone.
panel 10
>As you can see, we are clones.
Same thing as panel 5.
<Despite our appearance, we are actually clones.
>Maybe they are even more clone-like than they think they are. I guess we can skip explaining for this second time.
"You all are probably (多分自分達が) more clone-like than you think you are (思ってる以外に皆さんクローンぽいので) so explaining it twice (2回も説明しないで) is alright (大丈夫です)"
<You're all more clone-like than you think so there's no need to say it twice.
panel 11
>If you think about it, shouldn't we be introducing ourselves individually instead of doing it as a group?
"If you think about it (よく考えたら), everyone shouldn't do introductions (みんなで紹介しないで) [but] if one of us self-introduces (誰か一人自己紹介すれば) that'd be fine? (いいのでは？)"
<If you think about it, instead of everyone introducing themselves, wouldn't one be enough?
>>89033
Nice work as always, お疲れ様.
▶ No.89573>>89574 >>89617
Chapter 15 is on mangadex now.
▶ No.89617>>89710
>>89573
>>89574
>>89575
The lost 10 and the devoured god. Good stuff in this chapter
▶ No.89710
>>89617
probably the funniest yet
▶ No.90131>>90466
▶ No.90466>>90471
>>90131
Tejina Senpai
It's pretty funny, but apparently scanlators dropped it.
However, it's a getting an anime sometime this year.
▶ No.90471
>>90466
there are a few more pirate chapters in mangalife
▶ No.90658>>90659 >>91791
Chapter 16 is now on mangadex
▶ No.91791
▶ No.91864
One week more, and it is the end of vol. 1!
▶ No.92489>>92490
Chapter 18, the final one
▶ No.92493>>92494 >>92656
The entire scanlation process from gathering the raws to putting out the final product was done on this board, and it's good to see this volume completed after a year and a month. This marks the end of the translated text. If I have the time in the future, I'll be happy to get to work on volume two whenever the translator anons return.
t. typesetter
▶ No.92494>>92495 >>92656
>>92493
That was some top notch work, anon. Thanks for doing this. I might get back to this too, but I plan on finishing at least volume 2 of Gory Kemono Friends first. If anyone is willing to try continuing the translation in the meantime, I won't stop them. But if it's still on hiatus by the time I'm done, I'll puck this one up again.
▶ No.92495
▶ No.92656
>>92493
>>92494
Thank you all for your work.
▶ No.93501>>93906
How many chapters to go until this whole series is completed?
▶ No.93906
▶ No.94073>>94076 >>94112
==Volume 02 baby==>>17357
As usual, thread contain the images I need. I've made on the side translated pics however.
=vol02color-01==
=4==========
{On elevator} Maximum capacity reached. To the last person to enter, please step outside.
=5==========
>Nope, Sixteenth…
=6==========
>Fatties have to get out.
vol02color-02
{Title} Decoy
=1==========
>May I take your order?
=2==========
>You go first, Sixteenth.
>Cow stamina special.
=3==========
>You mean beef stamina special, right?
=4==========
>Beef stamina special.
>Beef stamina special.
>Alright, 3 stamina orders!
{Title} Kind
=1==========
>I get the feeling everyone is being mean to me.
>How so?
=2==========
>I don't understand it very well to be honest. Lets drink some milk to calm down.
>Thank you.
=3==========
>I like this lukewarm sour taste.
>I'm sure they'll get back to being kind to you in no time.
=4==========
>Are you alright?
▶ No.94076
>>94073
>fucked up formatting
>fucked up link to the post
>fucked up what I was trying to say
Man I'm sleepy.
Volume 02, baby
As usual, thread contain the images I need >>17357 . I've made on-the-side-translated pics however. Let me know if this format is any better or worse than what I was doing before.
▶ No.94112
>>94073
New volume!
vol02color-01 panel 2
"チン"
<*ding*
panel 4
>{On elevator} Maximum capacity reached. To the last person to enter, please step outside.
<{On elevator} Maximum capacity reached. Last entrant, please step outside.
vol02color-02
>{Title} Kind
<{Title} Kindness
▶ No.94260>>94261 >>94301 >>94573 >>95420
Guys I fucked up. I fucked up and only noticed it when I was editing these pics. Because filenames (page numbers) are not all two digits, pages 5 through 9 (corresponding to pages 1 through 5 of chapter 19) were thrown to the end of my folder, and instead I started at pg10. I didn't suspect anything because last chapter had a snow theme so I thought it just followed from that. I'm posting these here anyway since they're done already, but starting tomorrow I'll go back to the beginning of ch19.
▶ No.94261>>94301
>>94260
1906
{Title} Staying up at night
=4==========
>Go to sleep you loafer!
{Title} Merry Christmas
=2==========
>This means Santa does exist.
<munch munch
=3==========
>By the way, I haven't seen Ninth to Sixteenth, where are they?
>They're still in bed.
2001
{Title} Letter
=1==========
>I'm going to buy a book, wait here for a bit.
>Got it.
=2==========
>Excuse me…
=3==========
>I want you to have this…
=4==========
[At the dormitory]
<I've always been admiring you from here. I want us to be friends. I'll be waiting at the same spot again tomorrow.
=5==========
[Next day]
>TOO MANY!
2002
{Title} Friendship
=1==========
>Eh? What… clones?
>That's right
>I see…
=2==========
>Are you ok with being friends with any of us?
>Eh? Well… yeah…
=3==========
>Erm… that's….
=4==========
>Wanna go make a sand castle in the sandpit with us?
>No… that's not…
{Title} Carp-person
=1==========
>Ah, I see.
=2==========
>This isn't referencing a normal friendship really. Clearly he wants to have a special relationship with Second…
>He meant to say he wants to be her lover (koibito).
=3==========
Lover (koibito)= person(bito) + carp (koi)
=4==========
>Why be fish…?
>Fish?
2003
{Title} Dressing up
=1==========
[This is so precious. If you plan on meeting him, how about getting yourself pretty?]
=2==========
{Plaque} Magazines
=3==========
>Get me as many pretty clothes as you can.
=5==========
>So dangerous. You're looking super nice.
>Really?
▶ No.94301
>>94261
>>94260
No big deal, good thing you noticed.
2002 Friendship panel 2
>Are you ok with being friends with any of us?
"べつに友達になってやってもいいが?"
The が? is similar to ending a sentence with "but…?" or "and…?", it's a leading ending. Here it sounds rude, so I substituted something with a similar feel.
<We don't mind if you want to be friends or whatever.
2003 panel 1
>[This is so precious. If you plan on meeting him, how about getting yourself pretty?]
<[This is a good opportunity. If you plan on meeting him, how about some pretty clothes?]
panel 3
>Get me as many pretty clothes as you can.
<If you want pretty clothes, I have lots of them.
panel 5
>So dangerous. You're looking super nice.
やべー does come from やばい but it's really just slang the clones learned from the latest issue of Bitch's magazine.
<No waaay, you're lookin' super nice.
▶ No.94416>>94437 >>94531
Sometimes image-to-text software picks everything up right away and it's super convenient. Sometimes I have to do most of it by hand. That's life I guess.
1901
{Title} Christmas
=1==========
>Christmas is coming soon
>I'll have to explain Christmas to them some day…
>Should I tell them Santa is real?
=3==========
>In all fairness, I'm more concerned about the costs of buying them presents…
=4==========
*I know, I'll tell them right from the beginning that Santa isn't real!
>Good morning.
=5==========
>So apparently in Christmas we get presents.
>You have to place your socks beside your pillow.
>I'm wearing my socks now, is that ok?
*Why now, of all times, they already know something beforehand!?
1902
{Title} In socks
=1==========
>Is Santa coming to our dorm?
>Erm… well… yyyeah sure…
=2==========
>By the way, what kind of presents do you girls want?
>I want food.
=3==========
>Food? Candy isn't that expensive…
>What kind of food do you want?
=4==========
>Sashimi.
>I mean aside from animal products! Things like candy, for example.
{Title} Auctioning
=1==========
>In that case, I want some expensive chocolates I saw on a store on the way to school.
<Variety chocolates 5000 yen
>But chocolates could melt, I'm not sure Santa would go through that trouble.
=2==========
>Then I want a can of assorted cookies.
<Cookie Can 3000 yen
>Those cans are too big, I find know if it would fit in your socks.
=3==========
>Then a boot filled with candy
<Christmas boot 1500 yen
>And in that case, if you could choose, what kind of candy would you want?
=4==========
>Takenokonosato?
TN: Some brand of chocolate cones shaped like bamboo sprouts
<Takenokonosato 180 yen
>Yes, that's it! Santa received your feelings just now, Fifth!!
▶ No.94437
>>94416
1901 panel 3
>In all fairness, I'm more concerned about the costs of buying them presents…
<Honestly, I'm more concerned about the cost of buying them all presents…
panel 5
>I'm wearing my socks now, is that ok?
<Are the socks I'm wearing now ok?
>*Why now, of all times, they already know something beforehand!?
<*Why now, of all times, do they already know about it!?
1902
>{Title} Auctioning
<{Title} Reverse Auction
panel 1
><Variety chocolates 5000 yen
<High-Quality Chocolates 5000 yen
panel 2
>Those cans are too big, I find know if it would fit in your socks.
>Those cans are too big, I don't know if they would fit in your socks.
panel 4
>Takenokonosato?
<Takenoko no Sato?
><Takenokonosato 180 yen
<Takenoko no Sato 180 yen
▶ No.94531
>>94416
The downsides of having a big family....
Good too see that translation continues.
▶ No.94573>>94610
OK, with these we're up with the pages on >>94260 meaning I'll continue chapter 20 from where I was.
19-03
{Title} Present's contents
=1==========
>Excuse me, could you help me out with the presents for Christmas?
>Aah... come to think of it, I did this last year too...
=2==========
>The day for the presents is coming soon, have you decided on them already?
>More or less...
=4==========
>Second, gum. Fifth, Takenokoto no Kito. Fourteenth, welsh onion... Even for them this looks awful.
>Yeah, that... I'm paying from my own pocket, so I had to drive a bargain before they knew what was going on...
>I can pinch in too, you could have done a little better than this.
{Title} Existence
=1=========
>Seems like Santa might come before Christmas.
>Really!?
=2==========
>Then, starting today I'll be leaving my boots beside my bed.
=4==========
[At morning]
>Who's there!?
19-04
{Title} Discovery
=1==========
>To make it easy for Santa to understand, we should put our boots on the entrance.
>Good idea.
{Title} Consequence
=1==========
>Second, there's something in my boot.
>Really!?
=2==========
>Also, my boots look a little prettier too.
>Santa really came.
=3==========
{Label} moisture absorbing, deodorizer, charcoal
19-05
{Title} Bedtime
=1==========
[Christmas, AM 0:00]
>Alright, let's split up to deliver these.
>Azuma-sensei, please take care of First to Eighth.
>What's the point of these costumes?
=2==========
>Let's start with First's room...
{Title} Suspicious person
=1==========
>It can't be helped, let's go to the next floor.
=4==========
>What are you doing in that costume this late at night?
>Why are you girls still awake? More importantly, why are you moving away from me?
▶ No.94610
>>94573
19-03
>{Title} Present's contents
<{Title} Present contents
panel 1
>Aah... come to think of it, I did this last year too...
<Aah... come to think of it, we did this last year too...
panel 2
>The day for the presents is coming soon, have you decided on them already?
<Have you picked the presents yet?
panel 4
>Second, gum. Fifth, Takenokoto no Kito. Fourteenth, welsh onion... Even for them this looks awful.
<Second, gum. Fifth, Takenoko no Sato. Fourteenth, a welsh onion... even for them, this is awful.
>Yeah, that... I'm paying from my own pocket, so I had to drive a bargain before they knew what was going on...
<Well... I'm paying for it all, so I kept cutting costs and this happened...
>I can pinch in too, you could have done a little better than this.
<I'll pitch in too, so get something a little better.
19-04 Discovery panel 1
>To make it easy for Santa to understand, we should put our boots on the entrance.
<To make it easy for Santa, we should put our boots by the entrance.
>{Title} Consequence
<{Title} Parting gift
panel 3
>{Label} moisture absorbing, deodorizer, charcoal
<{Label} moisture-absorbing deodorizing CHARCOAL
▶ No.94722>>94755
Typesetter here, not dead, just Australian. If time permits, I'll get a start on volume 2 this week.
▶ No.94755
>>94722
Thanks for the update, see you then.
▶ No.94989>>94991 >>95008
>>94987
This is gonna be tough on the proofreader, I'm already finding some stuff I'd like to correct. Both on broken english but also on 20-06 last panel, I must have slipped there and used the same expression from before without noticing. It should be
20-06
Last panel
>No way, she's super funny to look at.
▶ No.94991>>94995 >>95008 >>95670
>>94989
Never mind. There was too much that bothered me, I had to redo a lot of stuff.
The only page I didn't change was >>94988
20-04
{Title} Beauty on the outside and inside
=1==========
[The next day]
>I kept you waiting
=2==========
>There's something different about you isn't it?
>I got myself prettied up.
=4==========
>Wanna go make a castle on the sandpit?
>I see that much stayed the same.
{Title} Masaru (see TN, I'm not sure about this one)
=1==========
>Ah I just remembered, thank you for this
=2==========
>What is it?
>That's from two weeks ago...
=3==========
>You lent me that book the first time we met.
{Book} A Dog of Flanders
TN: An english novel, popular in japan as a children's classic. There are several animated adaptations of it.
=4==========
>A Ma... Masaru (monkey?) of Flanders?
>Dog. I guess that's not such an uncommon mistake?
TN: I probably spent more time researching this (and found no good answer) than translating these pages. No word spelled "masaru" uses use the kanji for "dog" (犬) or the similar kanji for "big" (大). I think Masaru (as a proper name) might be written with 大, but haven't found that in any name dictionaries, it's a hunch from having heard that somewhere before. "Masaru" also means monkey, so maybe Second is just very very stupid.
20-05
{Title} Encounter
=1==========
[Two weeks ago]
>It's raining a lot
=2==========
>Nello and Patrasche only had each other in the world.
>And that made them very close friends.
>Eh!?
=3==========
>They lived together and spent most of their time with each other.
>What's up with this girl?
>But, she has a pretty voice...
=5==========
>Wanna read it?
>I can lend it to you.
>Eh!?
=6==========
>Since then, I've been thinking about you...
>Ah... Oh yeah, that time...
=7==========
>Eh?
{Bubble sfx} pon
{sfx} turn turn
20-06
{Title} What now?
=1==========
>I've been observing while you read your books here, but until now I never had the courage to talk to you...
>That so?
=6==========
>No way... she's looking super funny...
20-07
{Title} Room temperature
=2==========
{Bubble exposition} Room temperature 18°C
>It's hot, so make it very low.
=3==========
>Good morn...
>COLD!?
>What is going on!? Please put it back to how it was!!
=4==========
>I knew it. Aren't you cold because you dont have boobs (fat)?
=5==========
[Room temperature 4°C]
20-08
{Title} Frozen
=1==========
>So damp and hot
TN: the expression means "humid", made with both the words for "steam" and "hot", so I broke it up.
=2==========
>I made an awesome discovery.
=3==========
>Frozen oranges are both chilly and delicious.
>Really!?
=4==========
>Then let's freeze everyone's snacks.
=5==========
>Which one of you froze my monja
TN: a traditional batter used in monjayaki
▶ No.94995>>95008
>>94991
>no text
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
▶ No.95008>>95012 >>95670
>>94988
>>94989
>>94991
>>94995
Luckily, I was too lazy to see your original post, so it all works out!
20-04
The whole thing (including the title) is a bad joke, so I'll write what I know, then provide a suggestion.
In slang terms, 小 (small) and 大 (big) are similar to "#1" and "#2" in English- they mean "piss" and "poop" respectively. It's a classic joke that the book A Dog of Flanders is often misread as A Poop of Flanders because 犬 (dog) and 大 look similar to young readers.
This old joke is changed here because Second somehow misreads 犬 as "Masaru" (a rare way of reading 大) instead of the more common "poop" misreading. She somehow both missed the difference in kanji and read it in such a rare way instead. The title is therefore referencing the joke.
All of this is impossible to explain without some notes.
>{Title} Masaru
<{Title} Dog Poop Masaru
panel 4
>A Ma... Masaru (monkey?) of Flanders?
<A Ma... Masaru of Flanders?
>Dog. I guess that's not such an uncommon mistake?
This is that use of the negative + question mark also seen in the recent chapter of World of Moral Reversal (there, it was まずくない？).
<"Dog." Isn't that mistake harder than the usual one?
<TN: Instead of the common children's misreading of "Dog" as "Poop", Second misreads it as the name "Masaru".
20-06 panel 1
>I've been observing while you read your books here, but until now I never had the courage to talk to you...
<I've always watched you read here, but I never had the courage to talk to you until now...
▶ No.95012>>95053
>>95008
Nice, that's the kind of stuff I don't even know how I would find on my own.
Maybe we should make it straightforward and ignore the nuances for the TN. That would require a non-literal translation of the title, but I think it preserves the joke.
{Title} Poop of Flanders
=1==========
>Ah I just remembered, thank you for this
=2==========
>What is it?
>That's from two weeks ago...
=3==========
>You lent me that book the first time we met.
{Book} A Dog of Flanders
TN: An english novel, popular in japan as a children's classic. There are several animated adaptations of it.
=4==========
>A Poo... Poop of Flanders?
>"Dog". Isn't that mistake harder than the usual one?
TN: Second misreads the kanji for "dog" as a slang for "poop", but does it in a terribly crass and dumb way.
▶ No.95053>>95253 >>95670
>>95012
The last comment would have to be changed since the mistake would be the usual one instead of something weird. I'd prefer keeping the joke at its original "You Must Be This Japanese To Get The Joke" levels, but maybe the typesetter and other readers can pitch in and come up with some ideas.
▶ No.95252>>95280
21-01
{Title} Swimming
=1==========
>Today we'll be having swimming lessons.
=2==========
>First we'll get you used to the water, until you're all capable of swimming.
=3==========
>Let's start by covering your face in the water.
=4==========
>There is no need to be afraid. On my signal, just cover it.
>Get ready, do it.
=5==========
>Sorry, I didn't made myself clear. Please dive underwater.
TN: the joke here is that tsukeru (つける) is the verb used to describe "putting" your face in the water, but it also means "to apply", so the girls applied water to their faces. I used the word "cover" (not in the original text) to help the joke make sense.
21-02
{Title} Tricked
=1==========
>On "three", you're going to submerge your faces into the water.
>One, two...
=2==========
>And three!
=4==========
>Just do it already.
{Title} Bullied again...
=1==========
>You've got pretty used to the water haven't you?
=2==========
>What's wrong, are you scared of it, Sixteenth?
>We can help!
=4==========
>Stop that you morons!!
>cough cough
21-03
{Title} Let's go have fun
=1==========
>Listen here! Stop scaring her!
>Sorry.
=2==========
>We won't do it anymore, so let's go in together.
>No way.
=3==========
>You're gonna be cold. Let's go have fun together.
>I'm good
=4==========
>I bet going number one in the pool must feel great, so let's go have fun together.
>What the hell kind of invitation is that? I mean, if you really do that I'm gonna hit you again!
21-04
{Title} Tidying up
=1==========
>As our last activity, I'll throw these rocks for you all to gather, we'll be over when you get them all.
=2==========
>How are we supposed to collect them?
>Clearly, the only way is to dive in order to gather them, right?
>Can you show us how it's done?
=5==========
>See, this is how you do it. Now go find them all.
=6==========
>Hmm? Ooh. Right, how about you get all the rest then.
▶ No.95253
>>95053
Yeah you're right. It would like to hear other anons on this, or maybe go with the more literal translation then.
▶ No.95280
>>95252
21-01 panel 3
I agree with using "cover", the edits are just proofreading.
>Let's start by covering your face in the water.
<Let's start by covering your face with water.
panel 4
>There is no need to be afraid. On my signal, just cover it.
<There's no need to be afraid. On my signal, just cover your face.
>Get ready, do it.
<Okay, let's do it.
21-02 panel 1
>On "three", you're going to submerge your faces into the water.
>On "three", you're going to submerge your faces in the water.
21-02
>{Title} Bullied again...
"But (のに…) the same thing (同じこと) was done to us... (やられた)"
<{Title} You did it to us, though...
21-03
>{Title} Let's go have fun
<{Title} It feels great
panel 3
>You're gonna be cold. Let's go have fun together.
<It's cool and feels great. Let's go.
panel 4
>I bet going number 1 in the pool must feel great, so let's go have fun together.
<I bet going number 1 in the pool must feel great, so let's go.
▶ No.95409>>95420
Did you guys miss page 10 of chapter 19 or am I a retard?
>>17360
▶ No.95420
>>94260
>>95409
Sorry I messed up the order
▶ No.95421
>>17357
Another thing also came to mind. I didn't bother with volume 2's cover and intro page because I wasn't translating them, but our typesetter might miss them if he's just going by my posts. So remember that volume 2 starts on >>17357 and has a few pages that I didn't address
▶ No.95539>>95554
That's the end of chapter 21. I wanted to average at least 3 pages per day, but things have been going slow lately.
21-05
{Title} Really?
=1==========
>You can easily use sunlight during summer to light a fire.
=2==========
>Let us try it.
>Sure, as long as you don't do it to a person.
=3==========
>You're joking right?
>No, I'm dead serious.
=4==========
>Then what's the point?
>You girls are very difficult today.
{Title} Drop down
=2==========
>We want to pick that bug, but how?
>It might come down with a kick.
=4==========
>Obviously, I meant the tree!
>You just went for me right away!!
21-06
{Title} Planning
=1==========
>You're going into summer break after this, but I want you to make a day plan for me.
=2==========
>Done?
=3==========
{Upper left} Summer Vacation Planning
{Pie chart, from すいみん, clockwise}
Sleep
Routine (TN: something about "old remaining customs)
Breakfast
Studying
Lunch
Volunteering
Studying
Dinner
Reading
Studying
Apprenticeship
=4==========
>You're obviously lying.
{Title} Timing
=2==========
>Why are you still here? Go back home at once.
>It's still too hot, it's not the right time to go home.
=3==========
>But this afternoon's weather might...
>Ah! Look...
>It's here!!
=4==========
>NOW!!
>Wai... Stop right there!!
▶ No.95554
>>95539
21-06 planning panel 3
>Routine
よ習 is 予習, preparation for studying.
<Pre-study
>Apprenticeship
ふく習 is 復習, after-study review.
<Reviewing
▶ No.95670
Typesetter here. Not dead, but my situation is that I'm a freeter who's having somewhat more work than before, and so this week went by before I knew it.
>>95053
>I'd prefer keeping the joke [in Chapter 20, pages 4--6] at its original "You Must Be This Japanese To Get The Joke" levels
I'll do that, so I'll take >>94991 and the corrections >>95008 as the text for those pages.
▶ No.95914>>95915 >>95994
I'm not dead yet! I'm ready to make a comeback greater than Ebola's. Get ready for
Chapter 22
22-01
{Title} Summer Vacation
=1==========
>Even if for a short period, our school is also going into summer vacation, starting tomorrow .
>I hope to see you full of energy on the next term.
=2==========
>And please don't forget to do your summer vacation homework.
{Book cover} Summer Vacation Companion
>Understood, we will not forget.
=3==========
>That's all, take care on your way home.
22-02
{Title} Shock
=1==========
>oh!
>oh!
=2==========
>What are you doing?
>We're gonna catch bugs! Wanna come?
=3==========
>Nah, I'm good.
>EH!!?
=4==========
>...Can't be. I didn't think you would refuse...
>Really?
{Title} Asking questions
=1==========
>But why?
>Why would you catch bugs?
=2==========
>To keep as a pet!
>Why do you want a pet?
=3==========
>I dunno...
>What is the meaning of a living creature keeping another living creature as a pet?
=4==========
>What does it mean to be alive?
>I dont know... I don't know anything...
22-03
{Title} G (TN: I don't know either)
=1==========
[They went along in the end]
>These woods have lots of bugs.
=2==========
>If you dig under a tree root, lots of bugs (beetles) will come out.
>Wow
=3==========
>I can lend you a shovel so you can start digging.
>We are gonna go over there.
>Understood.
=6==========
>There were tons of it, so we filled the box.
>Here.
>Really!? I'm gonna show off at the dorm!
[It was a disaster]
22-04
{Title} Tree shade
=2==========
>Maintenance is schedule for today, from 13 to 16 o'clock. Entrance in the dormitory will be forbidden at that time. Students who remain inside will be promptly asked to leave the premises.
=3==========
>Let's go find a refreshing spot.
=4==========
>Refreshing.
22-05
{Title} Headache
=1==========
>And here's your melon flavored one.
=5==========
>Cancel our shaved ice, we want oden please.
▶ No.95915
>>95914
Increase the filesize limit, Jim!
▶ No.95948
That's ot for this chapter. See you tomorrow.
22-06
{Title} Cold and warm
=3==========
>Welcome
=4==========
>What is going on with you girls?
{Title} Fireworks
=1==========
{Sfx} purururu
=2==========
>How's summer vacation going? What have you been doing these days?
>Eating, sleeping.
=3==========
>Holidays are precious, so why not go out with everyone? I'm sure there's got to be some fireworks going on in the neighborhood.
>Fireworks?
=4==========
>That, and I hope you're also doing your homewor-
>What is "fireworks"?
22-07
{Title} Firework Display
=1==========
>And so, we'll be doing our firework display.
>Everyone, give some money to Fifteenth so she can buy fireworks.
=2==========
>What's this?
>I bought the cheapest I could find, so eveyone would get to enjoy doing it.
22-08
{Title} End of vacation
=1==========
[Summer vacation came to an end]
=4==========
>Want some bugs?
>NO I DON'T.
{Title} Start of the second term
=1==========
>Well, you're all full of energy now (I guess?).
=2==========
>So, did you do your summer vacation homework?
=3==========
>You still haven't realized bringing that up is a futile effort.
=4==========
>Is hell beginning again today?
>Nah, only if you do it to me.
▶ No.95994>>96122
>>95914
Great, thanks for continuing!
22-01 panel 1
>Even if for a short period, our school is also going into summer vacation, starting tomorrow.
<It may be shortened, but our school also has summer vacation, starting tomorrow.
>I hope to see you full of energy on the next term.
<I hope to see you full of energy next term.
22-03
>{Title} G
G is a shorthand way of referring to ゴキブリ ("gokiburi"), cockroaches. Since this is the core of the joke (they found a bunch of cockroaches and passed them off as beetles), it'll have to be translated.
<{Title} Cockroaches
panel 6
>There were tons of it, so we filled the box.
<There were tons of them, so we filled the box.
22-04 panel 2
>Maintenance is schedule for today, from 13 to 16 o'clock. Entrance in the dormitory will be forbidden at that time. Students who remain inside will be promptly asked to leave the premises.
<The dormitory will be undergoing maintenance today from 13 to 16 o'clock. No one is permitted entry during this time. Remaining students should leave the premises promptly.
22-07 panel 1
>And so, we'll be doing our firework display.
<And so, we'll be having a fireworks display.
>Everyone, give some money to Fifteenth so she can buy fireworks.
"Fifteenth, (15) bring out (出して) the fireworks you bought with everyone's money (みんなのお金で買った花火)"
<Fifteenth, bring out the fireworks you bought with our money.
22-08 Start of the second term panel 1'
There's another bubble on the left, filling it in.
<...So,
panel 2
Adjusting to fit the extra bubble in panel 1. Also adjusting to fit panel 4.
>So, did you do your summer vacation homework?
<did you finish your summer vacation homework?
panel 4
>Nah, only if you do it to me.
"No, (いや) if you did it (やってくれば) it would be fine, that's all (いいだけでしょ)"
<All you had to do was finish it.
▶ No.96122>>96229
>>95994
Thanks for sticking too.
23-01
{Title} Autumn
TN:
Japanese pun intended (I think): 秋 when read as "aki", means "autumn/fall" (season), but it's also an unusual way of refering to "time" or "timing" when it's read "toki" (most commonly written with the kanji 時). I might be digging too deep for this one though.
23-02
{Title} (Blank) of Autumn
TN: alternatively "Things from Autumn"
=1==========
>Good morning.
>It seems autumn is finally here.
=2==========
>Speaking of which, it's such a varied season with so much to offer, like it's caracteristic foods, arts, literature, etc...
>What do you girls like the most about autumn?
=3==========
>It's foods, right?
>Yeah, I guessed as much...
>I couldn't care less for autumn and it's stuff.
=4==========
>I couldn't care LESS!
TN: She just repeats herself, maybe change to "Fall can suck my ass, 0/10 worst season, don't talk to me or my clones ever again". No? Ok then.
>Did something happened?
{Title} Chestnut
=1==========
>This is a chestnut.
>Not some lethal weapon?
=2==========
>No, it's edible. The nut is inside.
>How do we eat it?
=3==========
>It can be boiled or roasted, among other ways to cook it.
>Oooh
=4==========
>Somehow I don't feel like eating that demonic fruit.
>Demonic fruit?
23-03
{Title} Just a joke
=1==========
>We should pick these up to eat later.
=2==========
>Some that aren't sharp are falling too.
=6==========
>Cut it out.
=7==========
>I'll kill ya.
>Sorry.
23-04
{Title} Explosion
{Title} Dead or alive
=4==========
>When does this death game ends?
>Once they are all cooked.
23-05
{Title} Death flag
=1==========
>The last person to survive will get to eat all the nuts.
>Why are you making that a rule!?
=3==========
>If I get to the end, I want to take these back to the dorm and eat my fill of...
=6==========
>Ah... There was something I wanted to tell you Sixteenth. I'll tell you after we come back safely from this game.
23-06
{Title} The taste of victory
=4==========
>How's it?
>Is it good?
=5==========
>meh
▶ No.96229
>>96122
23-02 (Blank) of Autumn panel 2
>Speaking of which, it's such a varied season with so much to offer, like it's caracteristic foods, arts, literature, etc...
<Speaking of which, it's a varied season with so much to offer, like characteristic foods, arts, and literature.
panel 3
>It's foods, right?
<Food?
>I couldn't care less for autumn and it's stuff.
<I couldn't care less about autumn.
panel 4
>Did something happened?
<Did something happen?
23-04 Dead or Alive panel 4
>When does this death game ends?
<When does this death game end?
23-05
>{Title} Death flag
<{Title} Collecting death flags
23-06 panel 4
>How's it?
<How is it?
panel 5
>meh
パサパサ is something dried out. The added っ is there for emphasis.
<Really dry.
▶ No.96338>>96355
24-01
{Title} Halloween
=2==========
>Lately I've been seeing these suspicious hollowed out pumpkin ornaments.
>That's because Halloween is close.
=3==========
>Halloween?
>I don't quite understand it myself. It's a time whe children visit houses dressed in costumes...
=4==========
>They ask "trick or treat" around.
>Then, of you don't get a treat, you play a prank or something...
=5==========
>So we can set their house on fire, if we don't get sweets?
>THAT GOES BEYOND WHAT A PRANK IS.
24-02
{Title} Costume (1)
=1==========
>So this thing called Halloween is a day when it is ok to go around begging?
>No, only sweets are allowed.
=2==========
[And it seems there's going to be a costume parade this time. So how about joining?]
=3==========
>Well, let's go buy clothes for our costumes then?
=4==========
>Let's go.
<Social clothes
=5==========
>But you don't really need to buy any new clothes, Tenth?
>Are you unsophisticated bunch calling my clothes a costume...?
24-03
{Title} Costume prices
=2==========
>We were given a little bit of spending money.
>If we waste it, we won't be able to buy clothes, so be careful.
=3==========
>Got it.
=5==========
>We can't buy anything but cloth...
>Shut up and pick a costume now.
24-04
{Title} Couldn't buy anything nice
=1==========
>I bought some good stuff.
>Me too.
=2==========
>Well, let's go.
▶ No.96355
>>96338
24-01 panel 2
>Lately I've been seeing these suspicious hollowed out pumpkin ornaments.
Adjusting this for the bit by the teacher's head.
<Lately I've been seeing these suspicious gouged pumpkin ornaments.
There's a missing bit by the teacher's head.
<Gouged...
panel 3
>I don't quite understand it myself. It's a time whe children visit houses dressed in costumes...
<I don't know the details, but it's a time when children visit houses dressed in costumes...
panel 4
>They ask "trick or treat" around.
<They say, "Trick or Treat! Give us candy or we'll trick you!"
>Then, of you don't get a treat, you play a prank or something...
<Then, if you don't get a treat, you play a prank or something...
panel 5
>So we can set their house on fire, if we don't get sweets?
<So if we don't get sweets we can set their house on fire?
>THAT GOES BEYOND WHAT A PRANK IS.
<THAT'S WAY BEYOND A PRANK.
24-02 panel 4
>Social clothes
<Finest fashion
24-03 panel 5
>Shut up and pick a costume now.
<I'm picking a costume right now, shut up.
▶ No.96559>>96572
24-05
{Title} Which way?
=1==========
>Before going to the parade, let's ask for candy.
=2==========
>What do we have to say again?
>Tric... torik... or... trea...tori...?
=3==========
>Hello
>Ara (TN: keep it or change to something ara-ara-esque to your liking)
>So cute, is it Halloween already?
=4==========
>Tottori* or Torii**
*a japanese prefecture
**shinto shrine archway
>Eh?
TN: clearly the girls had a hard time remembering "trick or treat". The japanese "engrish" pronunciation should sound like "torikku or torito" so you can see how they got it wrong.
{Title} Leftovers
=1==========
>Trick or treat
>Sure I'll give you candy. One moment please.
=2==========
>Trick or treee~
>Yes, welcome. Just a moment.
=3==========
>Tri... or... treaa...?
>Erm... you see...
=4==========
>I've been visited a lot, I have no other choice but give you this. Sorry.
<shredded kombu (kelp)
24-06
{Title} Not very thoughtful
=2==========
>Trick or treat.
>Oh, what a coincidence meeting you here.
=3==========
>That's unfortunate, but I dont have any candy on me now.
>Or anything to give you girls.
=4==========
>If that's the case, you can go buy something right now.
{Building} Kombini (short for convenience store)
>You're killing me you know that.
TN: japanese can be compact with its expressions. I think the word means "to knock down" so I adapted it.
{Title} Ending
=1==========
>Al right, let's get in the parade.
{Plaque} Halloween Parade waiting line
=2==========
>You're here to participate in the parade, right? Please hand me your registrations.
>What is that?
=3==========
>In order to participate, you had to make your registration beforehand...
>We didn't do it.
>Well.... Then in that case...
24-07
{Title} Light and darkness
=1==========
>Ah!?
>You came.
>Oh!
=2==========
>You're looking very beautiful today.
>Really?
=4==========
>That guy gave me a love letter the other day.
{Title} Angel and demon
=1==========
>I'm going to the toilet real quick.
>Dont eat the candy, ok?
=2==========
>Let's eat the candy while Sixteenth is in the toilet.
>Poor Sixteenth, it would be bad if we did that.
24-08
{Title} Kappa
=1==========
>It came. The scary guy who takes the ball.
TN: Here's a weird trivia about kappa. It was believed that humans had a "shirikodama", a small ball literally located inside your anus. And that kappa would kill their victims in order to get that ball, by sticking its hand in their asses.
=4==========
>Being rejected by an acquaintance hurts so bad.
{Title} Costume (2)
=1==========
>Halloween was a lot of fun.
>And we got candy.
=2==========
>Where is Tenth? I didn't see her.
>She said she was going back early so she wouldn't have to walk with unsophisticated people.
=4==========
>Aaah I forgot today was Halloween! No wonder I thought everyone looked stranger than usual.
▶ No.96572>>96574
>>96559
24-08 Costume (2) panel 1
>Halloween was a lot of fun.
そこそこ is "kinda".
<Halloween was kinda fun.
panel 4
>Aaah I forgot today was Halloween! No wonder I thought everyone looked stranger than usual.
<Aaah, I forgot today was Halloween! No wonder I thought she was dressed strangely.
▶ No.96574>>96711
>>96572
>real time proofreading
nice
▶ No.96703>>96711
Short update, because I just got home.
Chapter 25
25-01
{Title} Kotatsu
=4==========
>There's something strange in the lobby, what is it?
>A kotatsu. It was installed due to the cold weather. Please use it freely.
=5==========
>How do we get warm with it?
>Dunno
>Please get under it.
25-02
{Title} Being drained into
=1==========
>I'm gonna try going under.
=4==========
>It seems like the kotatsu is draining her life force, is she gonna ge alright?
{Title} Mummy removal (TN: Don't ask, I don't know either)
=1==========
>Next is my turn to go investigate.
>Be careful.
▶ No.96711
>>96574
Didn't even realize, I should stick around next time....
>>96703
25-01 Kotatsu panel 1
The bits by the flying blimp thingy.
<10 degrees, 10 degrees
panel 5
>Please get under it.
<Please get inside.
25-02
>{Title} Being drained into
<{Title} Draining away?
panel 1
>I'm gonna try going under.
<I'm gonna try going in.
panel 4
>It seems like the kotatsu is draining her life force, is she gonna ge alright?
<It seems like the kotatsu is draining her life force, is she gonna be alright?
Mummy removal
>{Title} Mummy removal
TN: A reference to "ミイラ取りがミイラになる" / "If you take a mummy, you will become one". The history of the phrase is all over the place and not worth going over, here's a link:
https://biz.trans-suite.jp/8605
Basically it means becoming your enemy. The closest English version I can think of is Nietzsche's quote, "Beware that, when fighting monsters, you yourself do not become a monster... for when you gaze long into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you."
<{Title} Gazing into the Abyss
▶ No.96811>>96818
25-03
{Title} No response
=2==========
>Move over.
=5==========
>Are they dead?
25-04
{Title} Hidden
=1==========
[Next morning. ]
>We'll have to endure until we come back from school.
=3==========
>Where's second
>Wha-!?
=4==========
>That sneaky...
>She's gonna heve the kotatsu all to herself!!
TN: There were a couple expressions here that I wasn't sure about, including what is probably クローン (clone), but in case it's some other way (pejorative?) of refering to Second, I used "sneaky"
{Title} Punishment
25-05
{Title} I have a feeling
=1==========
>I haven't gotten in there yet, not once.
>I want in.
=2==========
>Then let's play a game, and the loser has to leave the kotatsu.
>Sixteenth, go fetch us some game.
>Got it.
=3==========
>Here.
>I don't feel like doing this on an empty stomach. Could you go buy us a snack?
<dumpling
<chocolate
<Steamed buns
=4==========
>Got it. I'm goin-
>....
>hey
>wait a minute
{Title} Rock Paper Scissors
TN: or maybe go with "Janken"
=1==========
[They decided on playing rock, paper, scissors.]
=2==========
<If we look only at the possible outcomes of this game, "victory", "defeat" and "tie", the possibilities are split in 1/3 for each.
<However, when it comes to clones you can't take that at face value. When playing this game, if we don't think about anything, then the chances of a draw are 100%...
=3==========
<In short, If we're not thinking about anything, then in normal circumstances if I throw "rock" then certainly Seventh will also throw "rock"...
<In this case, I should play paper... But what if this is a feint, is it going to be scissors then? In that case I should deliberately play rock... Wait, no...
=4==========
>Just play already. You're still in the first round.
25-06
{Title} Baking clay
=2==========
>You haven't come to school. Just what the hell are you doing!?
=3==========
>Get out!
=4==========
>You came all the way to here, even though you only have that much chest fat to protect from the cold outside?
=7===========
>Right, get going already!
25-07
{Title} Standing up
=1==========
>kotatsu (x3)
=2==========
>All right, let's start at once!
>Fifth, begin.
TN: "gourei" (号令) is the ritual of bowing at the start and end of class
=3==========
>Ko... kotatsu!
=5==========
>Hey, this isn't amusing at all.
>Now sit down already.
25-08
{Title} Late night kotatsu
=1==========
[At night.]
▶ No.96818>>96841
>>96811
25-04 Hidden panel 4
>That sneaky...
<That sneaky clone...
>She's gonna heve the kotatsu all to herself!!
<plans to hog the kotatsu!!
25-05
>{Title} I have a feeling
ノリ does come from 気乗り, "to get into the spirit of things", but given the contents, a better translation might be "to get caught up in the flow" .
<{Title} Caught Up in the Flow
25-06
>{Title} Baking clay
The title "Yaki-Dogeza" is a reference to a torture device in Kaiji, where a man is forced to bow (dogeza) onto a burning-hot plate. It's been translated as "Roasting Kneeling" so I'll just copy that.
<{Title} Roasting Kneeling
panel 2
The bit by Sixteenth's head wasn't translated.
<Let me in...
25-07 panel 5
>Now sit down already.
<Now bow and sit down already.
▶ No.96841
>>96818
<{Title} Roasting Kneeling
I thought of going with the literal translation, but google translate gave me "clay baking" and I thought it was an expression. Good to know it's real origin.
▶ No.97013>>97026
Don't forget the cover on >>24294
Chapter 26
Data page
Height: 145cm
Weight: 35kg
Bust: ordinary
Waist: ordinary
Hips: ordinary
Age: 0 years old
Intelect: Average elementary schooler (with variations)
Physical abilitiy: Average elementary schooler
Hobbies: Playing. Raising Bugs. Surveying.
26-01
{Title} New year
=1==========
>Congratulations on this new beginning.
>Best regards for this new year.
TN: alternatively, "treat me well this new year" as it's a common translation of "yoroshiku", I'm not fond of it in this context but I'm open to opinions.
=2==========
[January 3rd]
>What was it? Congratulations?
>That's a new year's greeting, I suppose! You say it too!
=3==========
>What do you want to be congratulated for?
>Eh!!?
=4==========
>I don't know...
=5==========
>Come to think of it, my pet bug died this morning...
26-02
{Title} Coming of Age Day
TN: second monday of january
=1==========
[January 10th]
>Three days from now will be "Seijin" (Coming of Age) Day, then we'll go into a holliday.
>"Seijin"?
=2==========
>It is a day used to celebrate the "seijin" (coming of age into adulthood).
>People assemble to perform a number of rites in a ceremony.
>That seems interesting.
=3==========
>Really? It's just a big crowd gathered to listen to some dull stories.
<You girls will participate in it some day too.
=4==========
{Plaque} "Seijin" (Alien) Ceremony
TN: fucking puns I swear to Crist... "seijin" can mean "adult" (成人) but also "person from the planet of..." (星人), essentially "alien".
{Title} Newer aliens
=1==========
>During the ceremony fiddling with your cellphone or talking amongst yourselves is viewed as bad manners.
<That's just basic for any meeting.
=3==========
>There were people of questionable morals in the past, leading to trouble with other participants.
26-03
{Title} Last day of winter
=1==========
[February 2nd]
[Lottery for last day of winter]
=2==========
>Demon (x2)
26-04
{Title} ...In with good fortune
=1==========
>Hey, can you throw me one of those?
=2==========
>But you're a demon, so you should be outside.
=4==========
>Out with the demons...
=5==========
*Demons....!
▶ No.97026
>>97013
The puns are getting out of hand... no way to get around adding translation notes for these.
26-01 panel 1
>Best regards for this new year.
<Best regards for this new year!
I like "Best regards" for "yoroshiku" when it's used like this too.
26-02 Coming of Age Day panel 1
>Three days from now will be "Seijin" (Coming of Age) Day, then we'll go into a holliday.
<Three days from now will be "Seijin" (Coming of Age) Day, so there'll be consecutive holidays.
26-02 Newer Aliens panel 1
>During the ceremony fiddling with your cellphone or talking amongst yourselves is viewed as bad manners.
<During the ceremony, a lot of people with bad manners fiddle with their phones or talk to each other.
>That's just basic for any meeting
<It's basically a gathering of idiots.
26-04 panel 1
Missing translation on the right side of the panel.
<Oh, the oni.
▶ No.97303>>97324
26-05
{Title} Valentines Day
=1==========
{Post} Staff parking
=2==========
>She's here!
=5==========
<Give me chocolate (multiple times)
=6==========
>That's not how Valentines day works.
26-06
{Title} Made to be given
=1==========
>It seems you got the wrong idea about valentines day, so today we'll try making some chocolates.
=2==========
>Then we eat them?
>Not really.
=3==========
>You're supposed to give them to someone you like.
=4==========
>As a matter of fact, I've always liked you Fourteenth.
>I've always also liked you Fifteenth.
>Please don't start colluding among yourselves like that.
{Title} Manufacture
=1==========
>In Japan it's the norm for a woman to gift chocolates to a man in this day.
=2==========
>Is there such an event?
>Well, I suppose it's also ok to give it to friends of the same sex...
=3==========
>This time, however, we'll give some to a man.
>I know, how about we give some to Azuma sensei? I'm sure he'll be glad to receive it.
=4==========
>Aahhh.... yeah... sure... let's do it.
<sigh
*You're being so transparent...
▶ No.97324>>97325
>>97303
26-05 panel 1
This probably doesn't need to be translated, but just in case, the upper left sign:
<February 14th, morning
26-06 Made to be given panel 1
The sign:
<Kitchen
Manufacture panel 2
>Is there such an event?
"It was (だったの…？) such a (そんな) shitty event (くそイベント)...?"
<It's that dumb an event...?
▶ No.97325
▶ No.97332>>97333 >>97463
Chapter 19 (First of this volume) typeset. Sorry I've been so slow lately. I want to wait until I have a backlog built up and I am back into the rhythm of one chapter a week before I start uploading to Mangadex.
▶ No.97438
BTW we have a new thread
>>97389
▶ No.97463
>>97332
>>97333
Thanks for your hard work. See you in the new thread.