No.887791
New chapter is out, translations soon.
No cuckshit
No.887799
Let the shenanigans of the last thread remain buried, for the love of God
No.887801
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Best chapter yet which of these three pages did you cum to?
No.887802
>>887801
>no underwear
Woah. That's pure sex.
No.887805
>>887801
>sweat
>tan lines
>spats
It's a god damn holy trinity.
No.887835
>>887801
The reveal page obviously.
No.887836
>>887835
>Nagatoro forcing Senpai to do cardio
>Cardio
Dropped until the next chapter.
No.887840
>>887838
Don't don't post it this thread, I got annoyed of the rage last thread when some sperg bloogposted about being cucked in highschool, please just don't.
t. The """comics""" author. Sage for off topic.
No.887844
>>887840
You created OC and contributed to shenanigans. Don't be ashamed of what faggots managed to fuck up.
No.887845
>>887836
You know that your five chins aren't actually "gainz", right?
No.887848
>>887838
Wait is that an American Psycho reference at the beginning?
No.887851
>>887844
I'm not it was fun but dragging it out past that one thread too soon kills it's value as an injoke.
No.887852
>>887836
Senpai needs to build up som Cardiovascular Endurance before he starts making gainz, otherwise he's going to have a heart attack if he tries to lift more than a pencil.
Besides, our Nagatoro is probably a Leg-girl, goes for rock-hard calved and toned thighs and glutes so there's actually some force behind those Pelvic Thrusts when Senpai finally breaks and those two boink.
>>887851
If you want to fix the problem, then you know what you need to do:
Make more OC for us to pay attention to instead.
No.887855
>>887852
>Make more OC for us to pay attention to instead.
Maybe you're right, maybe in order to prevent people from screeching out about NTR any longer I'll have to make some wholesome oc so the topic stops.
No.887856
>>887855
Exactly.
Also because it's a well-known fact that OC prevents threads from developing Cancer. You're contributing towards the continued health and wellness of Nagatoro threads.
No.887864
>>887855
You can fix your mistakes.
>sleepy-whore forced her little sister to watch the entire thing
>she sneakily recorded it
>gives the evidence to police
>senpai is released from prison
>sleepy whore arrested for murder, rape, false testament and bringing dishonour to the family
>sleepy whore's parents kill themselves over the shame
>attempt to poison sleepy-loli too, because growing up with a murderer for a sister would be too much for her
>loli finds out that the food was poisoned after a couple bites (because she heard senpai mentioning the drink tasting odd)
>doesn't continue eating and instead staggers for the door
>senpai came to visit the loli to show his gratitude
>senpai saves sleepy-loli
>senpai adopts sleepy-loli
>lives with daugheru until the end of their days
>occasionally they visit the graveyard together
No.887867
>>887864
No, I say he should avoid adding to that comic in any way. Trying to fix it now would only make it worse. Just let it die, and look forward to more heartwarming content in the future.
No.887873
>>887856
I might try doing a small little postcardesque scene where Nagatoro and Senpai are wrapped up in a blanket next to a fire place during winter later but I'm not sure when I'll have time to do it.
No.887878
>>887873
As long as it's done for Christmas or new-years, or valentine's day.
No.887879
>>887873
I'm going to give you a deadline: First strip by Christmas, a week off for New Years, and then we want 1 Panel/Comic a week.
No.887880
>>887879
>deadlining artists you didn't even pay
Unless the artist is a procrastinating piece of shit you are doing it wrong.
No.887882
>>887880
I just assume everyone on here is a procrastinating piece of shit when it comes to making OC. If they weren't, they'd be somewhere else.
No.887883
>>887882
You're not wrong but this is the one swf imageboard I browse that makes me feel safe making oc.
>>887878
Oh yeah definetly before Christmas. Hopefully before this Sunday since it's not pornographic in the slightest but I have limited computer usage in my life so there's that.
No.887884
>>887883
My apologies then. All the best to you, looking forward to seeing anything you produce.
No.887901
I think sleepy gal is dying. Is it brain aids?
No.887902
>>887901
>Sleepy gal looks like a Slowbro.
>Nagatoro is a hyper-possessive Salazzle
I need someone to draw this now, OC-Guy.
No.887911
About time, this is the hardest she's gone on him since chapter 2. And it was for a good cause. In fact, I don't think she's called him "maggot senpai" since she was Proto-Nagatoro
No.887958
>>887952
I want to lick it.
No.887964
>They're actually training together like I hoped they would.
Partner stretches soon, fellow Anons.
>All that talk about clinching, and grappling in the last omake
No way they're not gonna start ground grappling as part of their training regime at some point, 774s got that shit on his brain.
Now then, lets discuss this sweet, innocent, happy face she makes when she sees her Senpai motivated and striving to improve himself.
No.887967
Just got started on said image ( >>887873 )
but I probably won't be able to continue it until tomorrow. I have no clue whether or not I should give them clothes under the sheets or not.
No.887969
>>887967
What about obscenely fluffy sweaters?
No.887975
>>887969
Yeah I thought about giving Nagatoro a Turtle Neck and Senpai a t shirt but I'm not sure. Either way I'm going to bed now.
No.887978
>tits is now trying to bully nagatoro
Noice.
No.887981
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The internet never forgets.
No.887991
>>887988
>>887989
>>887990
>Fucking up the picture order this badly
No.887993
>>887989
>>887988
>>887990
>5,1,2,3,4,10,6,7,8,9,13,14,11,12
No.887995
>>887993
>89,88,90
You're one to talk.
No.887996
>>887995
>Implying it wasn't intentional
No.887998
>>887988
>>887989
>>887990
One job.
No.887999
>>887990
She can still bully.
No.888002
>>887998
>>887991
>>887993
Is it me or did it still make sense after reading it all in wrong order?
No.888012
>new release
>all my fetishes
NECC
No.888014
No.888015
>>887997
My only gripe with it is that there is no cameltoe.
No.888029
>>887990
Nagatoro gets reminded that Senpai is still an M.
This felt more like a filler chapter, but my dick loved it.
No.888032
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No.888067
>>888032
At best, that is the outline of her pubic mound. Bulges are more distinct than that.
No.888146
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No.888180
>>888146
I'm sorry, but I don't recognize that bulge.
No.888214
Stop producing perfect banner fuel.
No.888331
At least the last tread has it in the wrong order... Good chapter.
No.888340
Work in progress, should be done hopefully before Sunday. The background needs to be done but so far this is what I have. Some places might be too monochromatic and Nagatoro's smile looks wider than usual since she's so glad.
No.888371
>>887988
>>887989
>>887990
If BO pulls through prepare too re-upload.
No.888610
>>888340
Are they fucking under the blankets?
No.888611
No.888631
>>888371
As always the maidus are doing solid work.
No.888739
>>888631
Postan in correct order.
No.888911
>>887801
The first one, muh dick
No.888934
Here's the finished product, paint bucket fucked up on me last minute while finishing the blanket so I could not be bothered to properly fix it and add in more details. Should I make an edit with some generic postcard Christmas catchphrase?
No.888935
>>888934
That's a nice home they are living in. Who earns the money though?
Does Nagatoro finance her good for nothing artist bullly-toy with her management job, or did Senpai make a killing as a successful manga author?
No.888936
>>888935
They strike me as the type of couple who would both rake in a lot of cash most middle class people would be jealous of for having a stable relationship while making that much.
No.888937
>>888935
What if she's his editor.
No.888939
>>888934
This is comfy. Good work, anon.
No.888940
>>888934
>her Christmas bullying consists of making him wear an ugly Christmas sweater with some goofy patterns like her cat face and her friends as elves/reindeer
No.888941
>>888940
Stop making me want to take up knitting, knigger.
No.888942
>>888941
Knitting is fucking relaxing. The only reason I stopped knitting is because you can't do it while browsing.
You can knit while watching animu though.
No.889272
>>888934
Cute. But why is Nagatoro drinking a mug of nuclear explosion?
No.889273
>>888739
>>888740
>>888741
Much better having them in order. Nicely done!
No.889288
>>889272
Nips have this curious obsession with nuclear explosions. Kinda weird if you ask me.
No.889718
Working on a festive drawing, should I post progress or wait till it's finished?
No.889722
>>889718
Sure, post what you have so far.
No.889736
>>888739
>I found Sensei~!
Wait. did she always call him that?
No.889780
File: 220bcc101e70b33⋯.png (Spoiler Image, 2 MB, 3727x2514, 3727:2514, [WIP]ijiranaide santa-san.png)
No.889785
>>889780
>It's bullying and not some lovedovey stuff
Very good.
No.889797
>>889780
>it's not Gimpfag
Oh shit, this is actually looking really good, I really like the idea and poses. Nice job.
No.889798
>>889780
What would senpai get when he's run around the world pulling the sleigh? A carrot?
No.889799
>>889780
Now this is the OC we need
No.889801
>>889798
Yes. But not as a snack.
No.889804
>>889780
Oooooh shit!
>>889798
a kissu
No.889845
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
>>889272
Looks like a Ned Flanders Hot Chocolate
No.890087
>>890081
>taco speech
Someone translate this to a real language.
No.890090
No.890095
>>890087
The absolute state of Americans.
No.890145
No.890157
>>890109
>mfw you know she's sweaty from running before that panel
>mfw those tan lines
>mfw she's slapping her ass
It's time for me to fap again
No.890305
>>890109
>If you're angry then catch me~
Pic related is the first thing that popped into my mind.
Would Nuggatoro do this to Senpai?
No.890326
>>890109
I'd ram that so hard if I missed either hole I'd open up a new one.
No.891219
>>890305
Maybe that's who 774 will introduce her brother in the manga.
No.891239
>>890157
I just realized for the first time that that's Asuka's chest in the background.
No.891285
>>891284
Nice. You could've maybe picked a better background color though.
774 would probably enjoy this too if you tweeted it to him.
No.891288
>>891284
Very nice, like it a lot. Will you colour it and send it to Nanshi?
No.891289
>>891284
That is beautiful Anon, accurately captures the sweet/funny/bully mix that makes the Manga so enjoyable as well. Seconding >>891285, 774 would get a kick out of this.
No.891291
>>891284
>tweeting it to 774
I really think that would be a nice christmas present.
No.891304
>>891284
10/10
Merry fucking Christmas to you too.
No.891307
No.891308
>>891285
What color should the background be then? I don't have any social media accounts, someone else can do it.
No.891317
>>891308
Bright red could work.
No.891319
>>891284
In any case, that's beautiful, anon. I love it.
I can tweet it out as a last resort if some other anon doesn't do it first, but it will be autistic if I do.
No.891321
>>891319
You may end up having to do it, since I doubt many people here have Twatter accounts.
Is 774 a freetard? I wonder if he or any manga artists have accounts in fediverse instances. I've seen a lot of weebs but no idea if actual artists.
No.891328
>>891319
I'd do it but I got permabanned.
No.891332
>>891284
Can someone please tweet it to 774?
No.891336
>>891321
>>891332
I could do it. What should I say?
No.891338
>>891336
How about just:
"Merry Christmas from your fans!"
"Art by an anonymous artist (not me)." In case you aren't the drawfag.
No.891344
>>891336
"An artist without a Twitter asked me to share this for him. Merry Christmas from your fans!"
Something like that probably.
No.891348
>>891284
And a merry Christmas to you, Anon. Nice job.
consider uploading to Twitter Pixiv or whatever, though. I'd like to follow your work
No.891349
>>891338
>>891344
How's this sound?
これは無名のファンからの先生に送れって頼まれました絵です。私達は長瀞さんの毎回すごく楽しんで読んでますので、このプレゼントで先生に少しでも喜ばせたら嬉しいんです。
いつも素晴らしい作を与えてくれるありがとうございます。外国のファン達から、メリークリスマス！
Too sappy? Any fuckups?
No.891355
>>891349
Alternative short version if we want to keep it concise:
これは無名のファンからの絵です！私達は長瀞とセンパイが大好きです。外国のファン達から、メリークリスマス！
No.891359
Sent it.
Had to reduce the character count a bit so I ended up saying
>片言日本語ですみません。
>これは無名のファンから先生に送れって頼まれました絵です。私達は長瀞さんの毎回すごく楽しんで読んでますので、このプレゼントで先生に少しでも喜ばせたら嬉しいんです。
>いつも素敵な作でありがとうございます。外国のファン達からの、メリークリスマス！
No.891366
>>891284
Great job anon, Merry Christmas
No.891395
>>891359
Post link so we can look at the replies, faggot.
I am not going to search through twatter for your shit.
No.891402
>>891284
Post transparent, pls.
No.891428
>>891284
Wonderful anon, glad you were able to deliver
No.891454
>>891395
Yeah, he didn't actually Tweet it.
No.891486
>>891455
25th of December AD 2018: the day /a/ made 774 very happy.
No.891492
>>891455
>>891486
It's a Christmas miracle!
No.891495
>>891486
What the fuck is that theme? And that lack of effort?
No.891496
>>891455
>Anons putting their japanese to use by making nips happy
No.891504
>>891495
Much better, I was going to do that if you hadn't.
No.891523
>>891495
I use Amber, because it saves power and is good on the eyes at night. Chodemonkey apparently fucked up the screenshot feature so it fucks up when you use any theme other than the standard one.
I was too lazy to switch themes and do it again. ありがとう.
No.891556
>>891455
>Anon produces great Festive OC that strikes that fine Nagatoro balance of cute/lovey/bully/funny
>774 sees it and it brings him Christmas joy.
A true Christmas miracle. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year /a/!
No.891572
>>891455
Now I'm very happy. You guys did a good thing.
No.891603
>>891455
>とても嬉しいです
I'm glad 774 liked our drawfag's art. Mission accomplished.
No.891679
When he will do porn of her?
No.891681
>>887978
I hate this faggot artist
No.891682
>>891681
Why and who is it?
No.891688
>>891681
Looks like decent art to me.
No.891694
>>891455
HEAVENS STATUS
[X] PIERCED
[X] CREATED
[X] CHECKED
No.891696
>>891681
>Not liking well animated pixel art.
You are the faggot.
No.891697
>>891688
>>891682
>>891696
But he makes lolis too fucking thick, that's my only complaint.
No.891698
>>891455
And it was thus:
The degeneracy of the last thread was redeamed by the birth of the christ-child.
No.891699
>>891697
>lolis too fucking thick
Any examples? I like lolis kind of soft-looking personally but there is a clear line beyond which it isn't attractive.
No.891700
>>891697
Lolis with a bit of chub is nice too.
No.891701
>>891679
When he makes the last chapter.
No.891704
>>891701
consensual sex in the missionary position with leg-lock, interlocking fingers and both of them wearing their wedding rings.
No.891707
>>891402
ok
>>891455
I'm glad 774 liked it
No.891708
No.891897
>>891859
>Huge oppai Nagatoro
If 774 doesn't deliver I will, we need this.
No.891900
>>891899
>The thing the author just tweeted out and teased us with isn't needed
No.891903
>>891859
>>891897
>>891899
>>891900
Hate to break it to you anons, but I think that's 774's fate waifu.
No.891904
>>891900
No. Sakura from FSN isn't related to Nagatoro.
No.891953
>>891903
OPPAI WINS AGAIN!
No.892056
No.892067
>>892056
>It’s… really nice. Like a miniature hug with someone.
No.892201
No.892415
>>892413
This doujin really is just Senpai and Nagatoro but with cowtits.
No.892416
>>892415
Nagatoro is really just Yupiel-sama but without the vampirism.
No.892432
>>892415
>>892416
The characterization and depictions are quite similar for both. It's quite easy to subplant them.
No.892902
>>891707
>>892865
Western artists > nip artists.
No.892909
>>887791
>No cuckshit.
Sorry, but you'll have to have that talk with 774, not us.
No.892942
>gets so engrossed in bullying senpai that makes a music about him
If that's not love i don't know what is.
No.892956
>>892909
Successfully subverted, and to thunderous applause.
No.892966
>>892942
>gross gross gro-gross
>dun dun du-dun
Is she singing the Wedding Chorus?
No.892974
Does 774 lurk these threads for materials to tease us with?
No.892980
>>892964
Yoshi doesn't loose a single chance of messing with senpai hair, she must be part of the sheep fan club too.
No.892996
>>892963
>anon's NTR fanfic will become reality
I do not want this.
No.893009
>>892964
Yoshi is a treasure.
No.893037
I want to marry sleepy-chan
No.893067
>>892956
This is how democracy dies
No.893075
>>893009
She is 100% pure, and fears Niggatoro witha a passion, eventhough she constantly gets dragged into indirectly bullying her thanks to Best Wingwoman.
No.893512
Girls getting NTRed is good to the same degree as guys getting NTRed is bad.
No.893526
>>893512
No, NTR is bad all the time.
What this manga's doing is only fun because it's not real, and is only meant to accelerate things for the proper couple.
No.893757
>>892909
>>892956
>>892974
I was thinking the same thing.
What if 774 is posting in these threads?
No.893762
>>892942
>>892966
>so engrossed in bullying senpai that makes a music about him
>sings it to the tune of wedding bells
No.894082
>>892963
I like how Yoshi autistically repeats what crazy eyes says.
No.894097
>>894082
I thought that the blonde twintails and the autistic parroting of sentence subjects was supposed to make us believe she was a foreigner/exchange student/whatever that didn't speak Japanese all that well. Her name being Yoshi kinda shot that theory in the foot, though.
No.894106
>>892963
Look at these five pages in order. In the first page, Sleepytime Gyaru is quite plainly wearing slouch socks. No big deal, standard issue for gyaru.
In the third page, she's suddenly not wearing any socks at all. For that matter, neither are Yoshi, Lazy Eye, or Nagatoro. Then, magically, in the fourth page it's pretty clear that Yosh is wearing standard whites and Lazy Eye is sporting some konhai.
To be fair, I'm used to Nanashi's magical disappearing/reappearing clothing fuckups in this manga, but this is the first time I've noticed it related to my fetish. I demand satisfaction.
No.894115
>>894106
>fapping to socks
No.894117
>>894115
Yes, that is correct.
No.894145
I want to see some more orf sleepy gal. I hope she has a full body tan.
No.894157
>>894115
>2019
>not fapping to socks
Your shit taste lowers the quality of this board.
No.894170
>>894115
>not fapping to smelly girl socks
No.894184
Please excuse my faggotry, but I have to ask this. I see a lot of Furigana on these pages and I would like to know a good source for untranslated manga (I don't mind low quality jpegs) and some recommendations for other manga with Furigana.
No.894193
>>894184
Lhscan got a lot of different manga, I don't have any manga to reccomend at the moment.
https://lhscan.net/
No.894198
>>894193
Appreciated.
>I don't have any manga to reccomend at the moment.
No problem, it looks like there's plenty of options so I'll help myself.
No.894205
>>894198
If you are trying to get better at reading moonrunes and know basic kana, then the common recommendation seems to be yotsubato.
No.894238
>>892964
>that first panel of the first image
No.894244
>>894238
What if she just went full noodle limb?
No.894246
>>894238
It was a midair shot of her jumping through the air and slamming the door open.
No.894249
>>894246
Do you actually believe that?
No.894254
>>894097
She's half nip and half numbnuts. And 150% cute.
No.894277
>>894238
The perspective is off since there's no established floor in that panel but yes that's how she would pose, like a crab.
No.894289
>>892415
>with cowtits
Sold.
>>894117
That massive GIF pains me. Have 15.9480235 times smaller and 1080p.
No.894291
>>893757
It was obvious from when she was introduced that she was going to be an affectionate character, essentially being romantic competition for Nagatoro (as opposed to bullying or possibly sexual competition as the two other friends are). It's not NTR; it's 774 forcing Nagatoro to start being more honest or risk losing Senpai to the affectionate and nice girl. That or the new girl is going to turn out to actually be a yandere that fools people by acting affectionate, but I would bet on the former.
No.894293
>>894289
Does this poor girl have epilepsy?
No.894312
In future Nagatoro will try to make Senpai jealous with some ikemen Chad as revenge but goes too far in her bullying. As a result Senpai will end up with Sleepy Gyaru while both him and Nagatoro with her Chad will be unhappy and wondering about what ifs. Bad End confirmed, all the romantics were only to make final result more depressing.
No.894314
>>894313
That is a picture of Takagi using Nishikata to demonstrate what Nagatoro needs to do to Senpai. Nagatoro is freaking out because she is trying to let Takagi know the condom ripped. That picture is actually showing Chi's conception.
No.894316
>>894293
No it's infinitely worse: Chuunibyou.
No.894318
>>894316
Anime pretty much confirmed?
No.894319
>>894318
Who would voice Nagatoro and Senpai? Senpai sounds a bit beta in my imagination but not too feminine. I’m not sure about Nagatoro. The voice choice would make or break the anime.
No.894320
>>892963
>>892964
Sloppy shirt sleepy slut gyaru makes my dick twitch.
No.894328
>>894238
I don't know why, but this is really amusing. Nice catch.
>>894205
I'll check it out, thanks.
No.894329
>>894328
>>894238
Naga's just taking a page from /fit/ and doing deep squats to assert dominance.
No.894331
>>894328
Did you draw that pose outline? I was thinking of doing that but that one looks very nice.
No.894334
>>894331
>Did you draw that pose outline?
Yep
>I was thinking of doing that but that one looks very nice.
Thanks. Maybe the proportion is not totally right, but it gets the job done.
No.894342
>>894328
I RECOGNIZE THAT POSE!
No.894347
>>894291
Agreed and good point all jokes aside. I want more bullying too but it's clear 774 has a plan and he's sticking to it. This isn't just a SOL romantic comedy with daily gags, at least not at its core. This is a story with actual character development and I assume an already planned ending.
It's really new to me to see something like this in the genre. This is great!
No.894350
>>894313
>>894314
I like your interpretation best
No.894351
>>894347
>actual character development
There's development in their relationship but the characters are still pretty flat.
No.894357
>>894351
>crazy eyes is revealed to be a cunning wingwoman
>twintails is revealed to just be going with the flow
>Nagatoro is outed as only being able to lewd when Senpai is whimpy or else she can't even get clutched
But of course Senpai himself is really the main star. Being a no-name reader-insert you'd think it would just be him/you on Nagatoro's bullying adventures but in reality he has the most development of the cast. Each milestone is seen in his candor, his responses and even his internal monologues.
Whereas once his mind held a mantra of ducking low and letting abuse roll over him, now he's growing bolder piece-by-piece, taking charge when need be for Nagatoro's sake and striving harder instead of crumbling when given a challenge.
We are seeing less bullying not simply because the friends are getting more involved but because Senpai is slowly growing to be eye-to-eye with Nagatoro. Her hard work is paying off.
No.894372
>>894313
There is literally nothing wrong with cuckquean
No.894374
>>894372
Isn't that NTR too, as she's cheating on the MC of her own series?
No.894376
>>894374
Bully bait MC's coalesce into a single being when they enter the same universe.
No.894400
>>894312
>Senpai will end up with Sleepy Gyaru
I'm telling you, we're witnessing one of those rare cases where secondary characters lay waste to stories because they're simply too good.
Sleepy is neither abrasive as the other gyarus, nor abusive like Niggatoro, and beats them all in sex appeal.
No.894401
>>894291
>It's not NTR; it's 774 forcing Nagatoro to start being more honest or risk losing Senpai
I figured this as well when she got introduced, there was no need for a new bully friend so she got brought back in as competition. She might also just be a tease and a flirt, getting some flirty banter going with Senpai because thats how interacts with guys, despite not having eyes on him. End result either way is Nagatoro's jealousy forces her to confront her feelings for senpai and be honest, at least with herself.
>>894334
Its good stuff anon, thanks.
>>894314
I will use this interpretation to banish this foul image in future.
>>894342
>Kiryu and Tatsu-Chan have a semi romantic tryst in the years Between Yakuza 0 and 1
>Tatsu figures out shes pregnant with a Yakuza Lieutenants child and panics
>Gives up debt collecting, leaves Tokyo and cuts ties with the underworld, has her first born and settles down with a boring but kind, loving and dependable business man.
>He also has a young son from a previous marraige
>Kiryu and Tatsu's child goes on to be an ass kicking tomboy with a bit of a mean streak(if you piss her off), backed up by the natural fighting ability inherited from her mom and dad, but a heart of solid gold buried underneath it all.
>This would actually work if the presence of modern phones didn't date the story.
SUP SENPAI! READY TO GO BEAST MODE!?
No.894402
I can't remember a time where Senpai has caught Nagatoro showing her feelings in any way except maybe the fireworks festival. But we have this as far as Nagatoro knowing Senpai likes her.
No.894421
>>894401
>>894314
>Chi was an accident
I hate this. Chi needs to be the result of Takagi gently bullying Nishikata into cumming inside her and then also gently bullying him into taking responsibility. The kind of bullying that isn't really bullying but makes him blush anyway. The kind of bullying that tricks him into doing what he wanted to do the whole time.
No.894429
>>894421
Their relationship seems like the kind where she goads him until he "snaps" and physically dominates her. I could also believe that they're one of those families that has a kid, waits a few years, and then pops out a bunch more kids once the oldest is mature enough to help mom with their care.
No.894436
>>894402
I'm really looking forward to her eventual confession to Senpai. Considering how bashful shes becoming around him, I can honestly see it being an inversion of the pre-serialization confession, though to be honest a more straight forward recreation with some of the more intense bullying cut out would work too because that shit was cute as fuck.
No.894438
>>894436
I want the old Nagatoro back.
No.894442
>>894438
I dont, she was bitch.
No.894513
>>894442
Understatement of the year. Original was definitely meant to be published for GirlsforM mags if it didn't get an official publication.
No.894518
I think it's important there is growth in these sort of stories, it just depends on the direction it takes. I dont see it going full Watamote where its totally unrecognisable but hey we are at an entire harem of bullies now.
No.894522
>>894518
Plot twist: Japanese government wants to spread anti-bullying message and asks 774 to alter the manga. As result the ending will be Senpai growing a spine and having Nagatoro and other bullies expelled while enjoying his future as art student at uni.
No.894540
>>894522
That is only acceptable if he goes full Asanagi on her and her friends.
No.894613
>>894540
>full Asanagi
I don't know about that. Not the biggest fan of his works. I like the rape and ryona but he was always a bit too gay for me. It became really obvious in that saki doujin but he always puts way too much effort into the males. About half the focus is on big rough manly, men and describing how they smell. Especially their arms and hands almost get more screentime than the girls.
Hell, his last two works focused on a big black bull rapists and I'm not shitposting.
No.894624
>>894613
> About half the focus is on big rough manly, men and describing how they smell. Especially their arms and hands almost get more screentime than the girls.
Only a fag wouldn't like that.
No.894629
>>894624
Too each their own, I guess. I just wish he'd put that level of detail into the girls and that he'd stay away from that "blacked" stuff. A bit less sameface would be nice too.
No.894675
>>894624
Only a homosexual would make this post.
No.894681
>>894522
>Senpai takes revenge and expells them
>Happily walks away from the whole thing
>Nagatoro looks at him, hurt and confused, but he doesn't look back
>Few weeks later
>She shows up at his house
>Playing it cool and lightly bullying him
>"You just gave me a free vacation, baka"
>He immediately gets a restraining order, citing the expulsion as grounds
>She breaks down in court and cries
>He gives her a one-liner about fake tears
>Never sees her for the rest of highschool
>Graduates
>Gets accepted to art school
>Graduates
>Gets accepted as an animator in a big name studio
>Works full time
>Moves into his own apartment
>Starts dating
>None of them really click with him
>Gets older
>Moves up to doing Key Frames
>Doing well for himself
>Gets older
>Dad dies
>Goes home for funeral
>Sees old house
>Old town
>Old school
>Old memories resurface
>A now wiser Senpai can see the flirting in the bullying
>Fondly remember Nagatoro
>Remember rejecting her with spite and fury
>Remember dates in his 20s that never worked out
>None of them clicked with him
>Not like she did
>Sorrow overwhelms him
>Even if he knew HOW to find her, what would he say?
>Would she forgive him?
>SHOULD she forgive him?
>Did she find someone else?
>Is she even still alive?
>Haircut walks through the Cemetery with her family
>Sees Senpai at funeral
>Walks right past him
>She doesn't even remember who he is
No.894684
>>894681
Jesus, it's like half of you want 774 to pass the manga over to Shindol or Tsukumizu at some point.
No.894698
>>894681
Oh god, it's him again
No.894702
>>894681
You are my favorite poster in these threads. 774 needs to take notes.
>>894629
That looks pretty fappable to me.
No.894709
No.894715
>>894681
Wow I never thought I could ever find something that actually offends me after years on the internet, I ever drew your last greentext shit post but you portraying Senpai as an unapologetic asshole towards Nagatoro and the rest actually angers me because you not only gave it a bad end but you directly malformed the core nature of a character in a fashion that ruins him worse than any deal of physical damage could.
No.894716
>>894681
Nice of you to wait until the thread's over to torpedo it. Put me in the screencap
>>894715
That just makes it sound more realistic
No.894718
>>894716
It's not like I have a file of bad feelings ready to go at a moment's notice. I only typed anything out because of >>894522 posting about changing the ending so that it was a triumphant anti-bully story. It got me thinking about what that would mean for them, and I decided to share my dark thoughts with all of you.
No.894737
>>894613
Those are clearly just generic anime tans. The facial features are not really African at all.
No.894746
>>894737
The thing about tans in anime always cracked me up, since you have to draw your characters in highly racial ways to make your audience think that they're anything but a normal Japanese person.
He might be thinking that dark skin male degrading light skin woman = BLACKED, since a big part of their gimmick is having their men insult the race of their women while yelling about muh dick.
No.894756
>>894681
This is a happy thread for happy Anons, stop being a nigger and be happy and have fun instead. Every time you do this from now on Im going to post a counter Greentext until I successfully turn your frown upside down. Not like a direct counter just a cute story of any description involving them to balance out your negative vibes.
>Senpai and Nagatoro have been running together for a while now
>One friday Nagatoro calls him after school and says shes sick and will be staying in tomorrow to rest
>Teases him about being allowed a day off from training and how hell probably do "gross stuff" like play video games or draw
>Senpai fully intends to sit on his ass all day, falls asleep dreaming of a lie in
>Wide awake at the usual time because hes used to it.
>Gets ready to go for a run, cursing Nagatoro under his breath
>Goes for the usual route.
>Starts to feel fatigued and is ready to give in after half the distance.
>Suddenly sees Nagatoro in his head taunting him and calling him gross
>Shit she never said to him, shes just that deep into his head and he knows her that well that he can formulate he reactions to his laziness
>Pushes himself super hard and finishes the route.
>Cant stop thinking of how much she teases him in general while he runs, thoughts start to drift to general frustrations
>Keeps running long past the original route, goes off course
>Eventually fully tires out and takes a long break.
>Realises he ran all the way to Nagatoros Neighborhood. Totally coincidental, not as though he was thinking about her and worrying or anything...
>Figures it cant hurt to check in on her.
>Turns out shes all alone due to some contrivance that took the family away
>She seems impressed at how well he did running all this way, but quickly reverts to teasing him about checking in on her because hes perverted or something, and how hes all sweaty and gross.
>Eventually he asks if shes ok all alone
>She puts on a brave face but shes struggling to even stand up
>Senpai insists on sticking around to look after her, his sudden assertiveness catching her off guard as it normally does
>Gets her a drink and sets about making her some packet soup. or something.
>At her urging he makes lunch for himself too
>They sit on the couch and watch TV while eating lunch together, Nagatoro teases him some more
>She pans out afterwards and uses his lap as a pillow, theyre both blushing profusely, but she insists shes just using him for warmth because shes cold, compares it that scene in Star Wars where Luke gets shoved into the belly of his mount, in terms of warmth but also wrigglyness and grossness.
>They just chill for a while and she dozes off.
>Senpai is stricken by an overwhelming desire to Pat her head
>The absolute mad man does it, just gently strokes her hair while she rests
>Gets really ashamed after a bit and stops.
>"I didnt say you could stop Senpai..."
No.894760
>>894756
LEWD!!
It looks like we passed bump-limit again.
No.894809
>>894756
You're making this world a better place.
No.894830
>>894756
>senpai falls asleep as well
>he completely forgot to take a shower after running and is still wearing his sports shorts
>rather chilly because sweat and cold room
>she is in some lazy clothes, but wears a mask to not infect anyone opening the door
>nagatoro has her head on his lap
>he starts dreaming about her
>dream inevitably turns lewd
>boner
>against her cheek
>this wakes nagatoro
>jumps up
>proceeds to bully senpai for popping a rod just because a girl used him as a pillow
>"Haha, senpai! You are so gross, all you can think about is sex!"
>[door slides open in the background]
>it's Nagatoro's older brother
>"Oh, I see your boyfriend is already taking care of you. I will be leaving the soup in the kitchen for later then."
>he got home from school/work early to check on his sick sister
>Nagatoro is too embarrassed to answer immediately
>[door slides closed]
>"I would never date anyone this gross!"
>storms into her room, but trips on her way up the stairs, because ill
>senpai hears her falling, comes running along the hallway
>attempts to help her up the stairs
>brother, who was in the kitchen, comes around to help him
>they put her into bed
>sit down in the livingroom afterwards
>"So you are that gross boyfriend she keeps talking about. How is that manga of yours coming along?"
No.894838
>Anon praised me for simple drawing >>894331
>I felt guilt for not doing something better
>Decided to give anon a gift and since you guys like socks (and they're easier to draw)... here you go
No.894842
>>894838
Face looks a bit weird and Nagatoro looks like she lost her labia but otherwise nice.
No.894843
>>894842
I apreciate the feedback
>Face looks a bit weird
How so? Is the angle weird? Perspective? Anatomy? I gave her uneven eyes on purpose like some other artists do, maybe this is the problem.
>looks like she lost her labia
I didn't want to give too much details in that area, better puff it up.
Also, is the thread in auto-sage, just when I post the drawing? Damn...
No.894846
>>894843
I think the face is just a bit too tall and narrow compared to the way 774 draws her. Now that you mention it I think the eyes might also be a bit too uneven given the angle we're seeing.
Don't take what I say too seriously, though. I don't know shit about drawfagging.
No.894876
>senpai get depressed from all the bullying
>nagatoro doesn't see senpai for a few days decides to go check room
>opens door to find senpai hanging from the ceiling
No.894877
>>894876
>he's doing pull-ups
No.894879
>>894876
>she didn't know she was actually hurting him
>she thought she was just being playful
>she fall to her knees weeping
No.894888
>>894877
Senpai is gonna be /fit/ by the end of the series, Nagatoros gonna push him to all sorts of exercise. And reap the benefits of hot, sweaty sex with her well built, athletic boyfriend later on. All part of her master plan.
No.894902
>>894888
Takagi and Nagatoro would probably have an extremely fruitful friendship. Their styles are distinctly different, but perhaps they could learn from each other.
No.894913
>>894838
What are they pulling on? Is that a leash? The perspective makes it hard to interpret it as such. Maybe adding a choking or coughing sound effect to the background would make it a little clearer.
>>894843
>How so?
The angles look fine to me. I think it's mostly the eyes. The eye closer to the observer is open wider than the one further away (or at least that's how it should be with Nagatoro), which exaggerates the perspective. Maybe that is missing a little
The eyebrows also appear to be a little too short.. Also: her hairline appears to be a little too far backwards. It looks a little bit like she is balding is the only way I can put it into words.
Overall I like it though. Solid work. Keep improving, anon.
No.894914
>>894902
>that image
What have you done!?
No.895020
>>894902
What a horrible night to have a cursed image.
No.895031
>>894838
Heh, nice.
>>894914
>>895020
It looks fine.
No.895304
>>894838
>tfw my praise made anon draw a nice picture for all of us
Very nice
No.895886
>>895703
Yes, we've seen it.
No.895966
>>895703
And yet it continues to become more and more fitting
>Nagatoro is Eddy
>Senpai is Edd
>We new have 3 friends who bully them both to stand in for all 3 Kankers
Were just missing Ed, though it could be argued that, Senpai is a mash up of both if his training goes well and he becomes stronk.
No.895991
>>894613
Better than fat old men.
No.896164
>>895991
I prefer Oji-san to blacks, myself. Probably because I've been overweight and relate more to them (though I'm not old). I don't like either one though.
No.896448
>>896164
To be honest, most of the darker skinned men in nip porn and hentai aren't niggers. It's more of a beauty standard (I hate that phrase nowadays) and class thing.
In most of Asia, including glorious Nipan, pale skin is an amplification of beauty because it means you don't work in the sun all day. It's like a few hundred years ago in the west where people would paint themselves white to be pretty. The rapists, NTR-enthusiasts, etc. may be lower class and have a darker skin complexion because of it, but they usually aren't actual nogs.
No.897599
No.897653
>>897599
Hopefully anon makes a new thread since this one is in autosage.
>>896448
Right, that's a fair point.
No.897690
>>897599
Please make a new thread, this thread is past bump-limit.