>>14023292
Here's why it's shit, OP(And why you're a faggot):
>Failed to tell us what kind of game this was
>Impossible to know if it's a tree or tower without you having to explicitly state that
>No key/legend so we can know what your stupid colors and symbols are supposed to represent
>Looks pointlessly non-linear and like the player will just skip all the unimportant stuff by accident or choice(Most cases will likely be the former)
Here's a better idea than fucking about in MS Paint, OP. Download a free engine like Unity, Godot or GameMaker Studio and start greyboxing. Download a template character and import it if you have to. The result will at least be cleaner and more readable then this shit you've drawn with a trackpad.