[–]▶ ab7acc (5) No.340390>>340818 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]
Nothing is better than relaxing and taking a comfy read. What will you make for her to read?
This board has amazing writefags, and OC is the lifeblood of the board, however some people long to see stories about their waifus that writefags don't normally do.
In the same spirit as a Drawthread, this is for Violated Heroes to request stories they'd like to see written, or for new and old writefags to link their work for critique, or for others to enjoy.Shilling is encouraged!
If you have large amounts of text, or are running an update to stories, please consider posting it all to a pastebin and posting here when it is updated or finished.
Please keep things on topic. It's fine to talk about stories, characters, plots, etc, but keep the blog-posting out of here.
Thread 1: https://archive.is/eT2UX
Thread 2: https://archive.is/zZyJk
Thread 3: https://archive.is/yUCIq
Thread 4: https://archive.is/5e1Qr
Thread 5: https://archive.is/vWMc9
Thread 6: https://archive.is/O2ckz
Thread 7: https://archive.is/B7Hfg
Thread 8: https://archive.is/dxA9v
Thread 9: http://archive.is/SgT2c
▶ 69f997 (2) No.340397>>340461
can someone write a story about a guy who forces a monster girl to rape him but she just wanted to play video games?
▶ 85d52a (3) No.340398>>340409
Manticore Purification when?
▶ f8fb0d (2) No.340426>>340428 >>349805
https://pastebin.com/2vEerc7k
Just gonna repost my story link so I can get some proper critique and comments on it.
▶ 585f55 (1) No.340428>>340432
>>340426
Keep up the gud work,3-B.
▶ f8fb0d (2) No.340432
>>340428
Thanks
*But shush the fuck up*
▶ 3ef041 (5) No.340461>>340526
>>340444
>Guess what:
>https://pastebin.com/sHBVVhxK
>It's a WIP though, original story's about 44k words long so it's gonna take a while.
Nice. I'm looking forward to this. (from previous thread)
>>340397
I thought about something like this, but I've got too many open projects right now
New thread & all means I have to finish at least one story for this one.
▶ 45802b (2) No.340465>>340475 >>340519 >>341110
Are there any high orc stories out there?
And I don't mean the humorous, one-shot greentexts of the high orc thread, I mean genuine high orc fiction written in prose.
▶ 28a735 (2) No.340467>>340526
>>340444
Oh fuck I'm not ready for those feels all over again.
▶ 9fe369 (1) No.340475>>340553 >>340778 >>341428
>>340465
I'm the culprit behind a certain short and dumb green on that thread, and as promised, I've been working on something, it's nothing revolutionary and it's taking much longer than I thought, but it's there, feedback apreciated:
https://pastebin.com/LLx2nAfw
second half should include 2 sex scenes and even more talking.
▶ fdd284 (1) No.340519>>341428
>>340465
I did post the first part of this last thread: https://pastebin.com/e6y20ZU7
A biker gang lead by a high orc chases a jogger into a gas station. The orc doesn't speak, so not sure if that fits your criteria, but I'm still working on it though.
▶ 6e7a16 (1) No.340526>>341257
▶ e33f90 (2) No.340553
>>340475
Quite good. i hope for more, of it and high orc stories.
▶ 72d662 (11) No.340601
>>340600
I'm working on one. Nearly finished if I can be arsed to write the last chapter.
▶ f25827 (3) No.340626>>340631
>>340600
Counter to this,any stories where the girl rapes the guy and the guy gets into it? that's my jam,especially if he ends up overpowering her and loving her.
▶ 72d662 (11) No.340631>>340633
▶ f25827 (3) No.340633>>341044
>>340631
Ah shit,could somebody reup it on pastebin? i have a dark mode installed so it's easier on the eyes,wont work on the archive.
▶ 658671 (3) No.340675>>340757 >>340764 >>340776
Quick dumb thing I made involving new girl
>>340613
https://pastebin.com/rQ09EEjT
I''ll get back to serious writing soon
▶ a9e737 (1) No.340757
>>340675
Pretty good and simple funny short with a nice lovely ending. that paladin is gonna have a lot to think about after giving those worms some fuk
▶ 28a735 (2) No.340764
▶ f25827 (3) No.340776
>>340675
Will give a read.
▶ 23ef2f (1) No.340778
>>340475
Orcs aren't my thing but that was a really enjoyable read. Good stuff anon.
▶ 1bdd94 (1) No.340818>>340821 >>340828
>>340390 (OP)
Made some stories and still new to writing.
https://pastebin.com/xzkH1KHy
▶ 72d662 (11) No.340821>>340823 >>340830
>>340818
>his claymore at his side, his short-sword holstered at his back
>claymore at his side
>sword holstered at his back
Stopped reading there tbh
▶ 245332 (7) No.340823>>340828
>>340821
What, you don't bring explosives in case your sword can't handle things?
▶ 72d662 (11) No.340828
>>340823
I don't have either on a back holster where I can't get at them.
>>340818
In terms of some actual points on the story:
>He nods in agreement that his claymore at his side, his short-sword holstered at his back, and several daggers hidden within his leather bandolier are all present.
>An arrow whistles forth from the dimly lit forest and hits her squarely in the back.
Unless I missed it (which is entirely possible) he never had a bow or arrows with him.
>lines 7-13
These lines were in the past tense while the rest was in the present. I do this myself sometimes, just gotta watch out for it.
>The Familiar runs away crying, afraid that she will be next to succumb to her uncertain death.
Nothing wrong with this sentence in particular, but it's a decent example of a problem (a purely personal-opinion problem, mind you) that I had with your writing style. It's very clinical. You're just telling us through straightforward narration exactly what's happening. Obviously, since this is writing and not a film or something, that's necessary. But you could have just phrased it a bit more subtly to get the same point across but without simply telling the reader straight what is happening. For example:
>The Familiar runs away crying, afraid that she will be next to succumb to her uncertain death.
Consider:
>The familiar takes a shaky step backwards, her panicked breathing visible even from the concealment of the treeline. Her head darts to and fro, desperately scanning the trees. Finally, choking back a sob of fear, she turns tail and flees into the undergrowth, leaving her erstwhile comrades to face the threat alone.
In that one, the reader can still see that she ran away because she was afraid, but they can reach that conclision themselves from the available evidence (panicked steps, sob of fear) rather than just being told it. In my opinion, this is a more staisfying and engaging read than just 'she ran away.'
>"Did you really think…you could win against all of us…you pathetic human…" spouts the dying Ogre.
Apparently so?
>"She will take revenge upon us…and smite you down…"
If you mean that she will take revenge on the human, that should be 'she will take revenge upon you' or 'she will avange us'.
>"It would have helped our cause, yes, but, that is the reality of war. You win some, you lose some."
>"I…see…"
I liked this part, it's a good set-up for the character because you're instantly giving an interesting fact about her (she isn't bothered about losing the supplies, which she should be) without just telling the reader 'the leige was not bothered about losing the supplies, which she should have been'
>line 110
Shouldn't the MC have noted the reward for the quest, if he was a mercenary/bounty hunter?
>The most peculiar detail about this unknown figure was that there was minimal armor covering its chest area and practically no decent covering along her crotch area.
Again that clinical writing style. Could have said
>The armour was in the typical style of monsters, more revealing and enticing than protective clothing had any right to be. He gulped.
and left it to the reader's imagination.
>He slowly procures his claymore from his side-holster
Leaving aside the odd choice of the word 'procures', a claymore is a two-handed sword, meaning it's pretty long. At minimum, 47 inches long (wikipedia). Probably a bit long for a side holster.
>I am Sylvania the II
Probably either 'Sylvania II' or 'Sylvania the Second' is better. Props for including one of the new Fallen Knights girls though.
>My name is Hunter.
owtheedge.jpg
>Hunter is slightly taken aback at the speed of this Succubus and stills his respirations
Genuinely sounds like a doctor.
>“Impressive for a human, I’d wager that if you became an Incubus, you can serve as a very powerful vassal for my lord, dear Hunter.”
Good line.
>lines 234-236
A little reaction from Hunter as he's just been impaled would have been cool. A widening of the eyes or something.
Gotta be honest, plenty to criticise, but there's definitely potential there. Also please don't forget that this is 100% my own opinion of it, you might think I'm talking out of my arse, and you're completely within your rights to think so. I would go back over it and see if you can address that clinical, straightforward writing style. Instead of simply describing/telling the reader what's happening, see if you can have the characters' words and actions suggest to the reader what they're thinking or doing instead.
I'd very much like to read it again if it was touched up a bit.
▶ 6a7ba4 (3) No.340830>>340832
>>340821
>he doesn't have a halberd at his side and a tiny dagger holstered at his back
Pathetic. What next, you're telling us you hold a rapier at side and a bow at your back?
▶ 72d662 (11) No.340832
>>340830
>not having two boot pikes and a scabbard down the back of your neck
You disgust me.
▶ 19e3ca (1) No.340897
I have idea for setting where all human females suddenly turn into monstergirls. With the help of Mindflayers and/or some other Mamono Mana, extensive parole/probation programs are set up for both men and MG. Same thing is also used to put unemployed people into something useful. Anyway here are my ideas of what exactly I'd write.
1. NEET-guy is made to oversee group of monstergirls who used to be delinquent-level petty criminals when they were still 3DPD
2. NEET-guy is made to foster-parent orphan MGs with kitsune who has unspecified criminal history and is under house arrest with ankle monitor.
3. Delinquent-guy is forced to live with Ara Demon and her three daughters who apparently try to rehabilitate him with medium impact sexual bullying
4. All three above in the same neighbourhood
▶ 6de3ab (7) No.340927>>340931 >>340934 >>347982
>>340600
You requested a rape story?
'The Matchmaker'
https://pastebin.com/uknBKpt6
▶ 8f784a (4) No.340931>>340941
>>340927
Really good shit. Keep it up man.
▶ be1741 (2) No.340934>>340941
>>340927
You must deliver Anubis smut. Then make it a series.
▶ 6de3ab (7) No.340941>>341048
>>340931
Cheers dude. Means a lot.
>>340934
I'm not sure about making it a series, there's probably only so many ways a story like that can go. I might do the anubis though.
▶ 3ef041 (5) No.341044>>348167
I got sidetracked yet again and started writing a new story in addition to writing more of my two other unfinished stories. I hope I can do everything I want with it, cause it'll be nice to write a multi-ending story.
I haven't been reading much because of this. Truth be told, I really should just stick to one and finish it.
>>340633
Unfortunately Silent II deleted all their shit, also I have no clue as to why that anon wasn't looking at the last save to the pastebin. To me it doesn't feel right uploading someone else's stuff, even if I just do it under a guest account. I guess I can't get away from my chaotic good alignment.
Here's the last archive of Silent's pastebin.
https://web.archive.org/web/20170311082423/http://pastebin.com:80/u/Silent_II
▶ be1741 (2) No.341048
>>340941
Show it from the male side.
Then from the show Maker's side.
Then get crazy.
▶ 35c8f8 (1) No.341071>>342269
https://www.literotica.com/s/adventure-of-rekka-ch-01
For your consideration. To further the plot the main character isn't able to be just pushed down and raped for thirty chapters, but I'm trying to stay true to the hellhounds character otherwise.
▶ 6a0469 (1) No.341110>>341428
>>340465
I'm itching to make one, though I haven't written anything in forever so I'm not sure if I can deliver. I really dig KC's design though. Is there anything in particular you like about high orcs?
▶ e1961b (2) No.341120
I NEED GREENWORM STORIES!
MORE GREENWORM STORIES!
▶ 9a36af (3) No.341132>>341145 >>341178 >>341194 >>341205
For a while i've been having an image in my head of a drinking group of old friends, comprised of people turned into the wackier parts of the main lore, a dude who got turned into a cockspider, a mindflayer squid, an alp, a shota etc
seems like it would precipitate a lot of dumb shit
▶ 5ee0a2 (1) No.341145>>341178 >>341205
>>341132
The alp has a running gag of ordering the girliest drinks out of all of them, but spikes it after it arrives with something out of a hip flask that the others complain smells like acetone, gasoline, or ethanol.
▶ 9e1861 (1) No.341178>>341192
>>341132
>>341145
Throw in a skeleton as well, one who is married to a lich. And of course, they are all avoiding the matango.
▶ 72e769 (3) No.341192
>>341178
>they are all avoiding the matango
Because he's a perpetual pot head now, always spacing out and shit.
▶ dabb71 (1) No.341194>>341296 >>341422
>>341132
Why are we enabling Monsterboys?
▶ 6a7ba4 (3) No.341205
>>341132
>>341145
>girliest drink
Reminds me of J.D. from Scrubs, he would order one every time he goes to a bar. The only one sane and human is the Janitor, I presume.
▶ 01f469 (2) No.341213>>341307
>>>341132
Now I want to see some guy with a harem vonsisting of a wendigo, atlach-nacha, night gaunt, and mindflayer. He then gets in an orgy with all four at once and gets stuck mid-transformation between all four.
I wonder how much of an eldritch monstrosity he'd be?
▶ c53a27 (1) No.341257>>341716
▶ 9a36af (3) No.341296
>>341194
because it's really funny
▶ e33f90 (2) No.341307
>>341213
You probably just end up with the Shambler from Darkest Dungeon.
▶ 3ef041 (5) No.341422
>>341194
I thought the cockspider is the atlach-nacha's man, and the squid is the mindflayer's man.
From my perspective, no monsterboys
▶ 45802b (2) No.341428>>341526 >>341562
>>340475
Promising. Where's the rest of it?
>>340519
Kek.
>>341110
>Is there anything in particular you like about high orcs?
Unlike KC's regular p'orcs, they look like they are actually strong like greenskin orcs, and I sure love my amazon-esque warrior characters. However, I also have a huge thing for gyarus, and KC's high orcs just seem like the perfect combination of gyaru and strong barbarian girl to me.
Sorry it took me forever to reply to you all.
▶ 75f68f (1) No.341440>>341444
Has anyone read some of the fanfics on the mge wiki? I was reading the one shot and their writing has a bit more spelling mistakes and they have some clever use of continuity showing that they take place in the same universe as each other but their stories feel short and half finished and they dont like to write smut and it always ends when it seems to start. Writing smut can be hard im sure but instead of jusr skipping over it they just end their story so it doesnt get a proper conclusion
▶ 245332 (7) No.341444>>341507
>>341440
Is there any rule against writing smut on the wiki?
▶ 7af3f1 (1) No.341507
>>341444
Yes there is, although I have seen some stories with smut in them still up, but a lot of the times the admins delete the smut.
▶ 41ea50 (1) No.341515>>341519 >>341521
https://pastebin.com/2vEerc7k
Hey guys, new update. This one was written in a bit of a rush, so don't be afraid to make a critique or comment if you have to. image unrelated
▶ ddd91f (1) No.341519
>>341515
Pretty good. When will a medieval army rampage through the lab?
▶ 58aaf1 (1) No.341521
▶ e4f772 (1) No.341526
Thank you to those who read and commented.
>>341428
>Where's the rest of it?
Here is a small update to it (little tweaks on existing bits and the first sex scene).
Sex scenes have never been my strong point, so criticism is welcome.
https://pastebin.com/LLx2nAfw (new stuff starts at line226).
▶ f10120 (1) No.341562
>>341428
>Kek.
Glad you liked it. I don't plan on any lewds in the second half, but the high orc in the story will appear in another story I'm working on.
▶ 4ed8e1 (2) No.341716>>342276 >>342304
▶ ab7acc (5) No.342136>>342192
Might wanna write a short story next week. Anyone got a suggestion?
▶ 9a36af (3) No.342192
>>342136
lewd cat and mouse
▶ 7c8329 (4) No.342269
>>341071
Not bad. I hope you continue it.
▶ c3144d (8) No.342276>>342304
>>341716
Man oh man if this is one of those that ends with them going their seperate ways and is just an account of his sorry ass life I'm gonna be mad
▶ 4ed8e1 (2) No.342304>>342392 >>343120
>>341716
>https://pastebin.com/sHBVVhxK
Chapters 6 and 7 out.
>>342276
Not really, but it gets much worse.
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▶ c3144d (8) No.342392
>>342304
Oof. I guess I'll have to see It through then. Hoping for a non tragic ending.
▶ 658671 (3) No.342543
https://pastebin.com/jBRLDcBb
Another quick thing I wrote Think I'll be going back to better stuff after this
▶ 3ef041 (5) No.342670>>342950
A while ago, there was a greentext story on /monster/ about christmas eve with dullahan wife. All I can remember about it was a crazy story about saving christmas, and there were possums in it. Does anybody have that saved somewhere?
▶ 0b823f (2) No.342870>>342886 >>343204
Sup /monster/
I've finally got around to finishing my MG pastebin aggregator. It only displays the latest 30 published/updated stories for now, but I hope to add filters and the possibility of browsing older records. Let me know what you think.
http://anubis.moe/
▶ 760ea6 (2) No.342886>>342887
>>342870
It's a good idea, I like the automation. But we've got tons of other threads with writefags that don't link pastebins to the writefag threads, it might be worth considering doing periodic updates boardwide (doesn't have to be as often). I know it's a pastebin aggregator, but that kinda misses out on the greentext stories in other threads that never get pastebinned.
▶ 0b823f (2) No.342887>>342949
>>342886
That's a good point. I considered doing something about greentexts (filtering posts with multiple > wouldn't be an issue) but there was just too much content. I might set that up in a different part of the site later, but for now I am only doing pastebins
▶ 00c570 (1) No.342949>>343017
>>342887
As far as a content aggregator I don't see how you could reliably automate the process of extracting quality greentexts from an image board. I usually save greentexts I've done if I particularly liked them but I'm not sure I'd want them published for posterity sake.
For a feature list It'd be cool if you could somehow sort stories by genre or origin board. Such a system might require authors apply tags to their work but looking at the Pastebin site there doesn't seem to be any way to tag works like that.
▶ 6a7ba4 (3) No.342950>>343204
>>342670
It was on archived thread 6 and got a pastebin.
https://pastebin.com/yWHMNUh3
▶ fe7fb9 (1) No.342974
https://pastebin.com/2vEerc7k
Updated my story some, albeit less story addition and more some grammar and word replacement updates. But I did make some changes to the story, let me know what you think!
▶ a01973 (4) No.343017
>>342949
Yep, quality is definetly the big issue.
I'm planning on adding a board filter soon, but I'm not sure I can do anything about the tags. I've thought of maybe grabbing the first paragraph in the story to show as a small blurb
▶ 6de3ab (7) No.343061>>343165
Play with fire and you get burned. The same holds true for succubi.
https://pastebin.com/KCkDCNun
▶ c9ea8e (3) No.343120>>343204 >>343278
▶ 668639 (1) No.343165
▶ 3ef041 (5) No.343204>>343219
>>343120
Keep it up!
Still thinking about writing the epilogue for this I hope?
>>342950
That's the one. Thanks!
>>342870
Definitely won't be lacking for pastebin stuff for awhile. It makes me want to finish my own shit more.
▶ c9ea8e (3) No.343219
>>343204
>Still thinking about writing the epilogue for this I hope?
Of coursh
▶ ab599e (3) No.343225
Is there a list of all the writefags and their pastes for these threads like the one for the 4ch thread?
▶ 153438 (1) No.343258>>343259
▶ 8f784a (4) No.343259
>>343258
Seems pretty basic but not every story needs to break boundaries and do something totally new. Go for it!
▶ c9ea8e (3) No.343278>>349002
▶ f620dc (1) No.343363>>343428 >>343476
Wrote something small about an old man and his Automaton. Enjoy!
https://pastebin.com/ZVR1TsrL
▶ 760ea6 (2) No.343428
▶ 835793 (4) No.343644
Linking a couple smuts I wrote a little while back, finally on a proper pastebin.
https://pastebin.com/QtscWfaA
https://pastebin.com/aggE5SEQ
▶ f6683a (2) No.343736>>343765
New episode added. I hope the update is presentable. https://pastebin.com/JSiHqsid
I have also been conducting a few experiments here: https://pastebin.com/LvbThTYZ
The story is a what-if scenario I wished to explore. Due to the nature of the premise, I'm not sure if it will be in everyone's interest, so I'll be keeping it unlisted for the time being. If it's good enough, I'd greatly appreciate feedback on what works and what doesn't regarding the formatting.
▶ c3144d (8) No.343765>>346273
>>343736
This is some good shit right here. Luke the orphans story but definitely am intrigued by the lizard one. Lizard folk are a definite plus
▶ 0c04c3 (1) No.343784>>343900 >>343946
Are there any good alp stories?
WIPs, anything?
▶ 01f469 (2) No.343900>>344527
>>343784
>There once was a chum named Earl
>who once wished to be a girl.
>Then one fine day, a monstrous babe came round
>and saw ol' Earl at the bar not making a sound.
>She sauntered up and put on her charm
>only to have Earl shoo her away with his arm.
>She huffed and called him a fruit
>while all Earl wanted was to not wear a suit.
>So along came some magic caused by the broad
>which would change up Earl and his rod.
>The next morn, Earl awoke to quick the shock.
>He was missing his cock.
>Earl got his wish. A dream come true.
>Everything in this body was new. From perky tits to a nice butt
>To the spaded tail swinging about and a desire to rut.
>However the excitement ended early when Earl went for a jog.
>Only for his buddies to hang him in a bog.
There you go, faggot.
▶ d768f5 (1) No.343946>>343974 >>344018 >>344055
>>343784
one of the better ones from cuckchan authors.
https://pastebin.com/cYB75fkc
https://pastebin.com/mpG7UyMd
and you can probably google for runt saga.
▶ c3144d (8) No.343974>>343983 >>353250
>>343946
What's runt saga? Apperently my Google skills leave something to be desired because I can't find something with that name.
▶ 6de3ab (7) No.343983
>>343974
>he doesn't know runt saga
Lurk and wait for it to be posted
▶ ed0c4d (3) No.344018
>>343946
>Alp hits guy in the jewels
wat
>2nd story: Turns a guy into a "communal cum pump"
WAT
Ok, fuck cuckchan. Just… Rrrgh, I'm just plain gonna stick to 8chan pastes from now on. This is disgusting.
▶ a1a86b (1) No.344049>>344972
Anything along the lines of a Manticore and Cheshire teaming up on a guy? If not I'm always up for good stories based on either.
▶ ceffa6 (1) No.344055
>>343946
>Alp story
Is that the magitech mechanic alp?
▶ f76da1 (1) No.344527
>>343900
Nice green text anon. I hope you do more in the future.
▶ 6de3ab (7) No.344955>>345085 >>345119
A devoted manticore pays her lover a little night-time visit.
https://pastebin.com/QMe0yUAp
▶ 86365e (1) No.344972
>>344049
Those two are kind of overdone though
▶ c3144d (8) No.345085>>345113
>>344955
Nice. Hope there's a follow up where anon isn't a bitch about this, manticore seems like she needs help.
▶ 4005d7 (1) No.345113
>>345085
Needs help claiming her husband.
▶ ab599e (3) No.345119>>345328
>>344955
I don't remember the last time I enjoyed a story as much as I did your kunoichi and salamander ones. Please never stop writing.
▶ 72d662 (11) No.345328>>345329 >>345345 >>345822
>>345119
Stop, you're making me blush.
Thanks though.
▶ 72d662 (11) No.345329
>>345328
Apparently I have two IDs in this thread.
▶ ab599e (3) No.345345>>345351 >>345356 >>345822
>>345328
I'm serious man.
To articulate better: the part I enjoy the most about your stories, I think, is the fact that before the sex there's *love*. This kind of head over heels love is precisely what this kind of escapist setting should be about imo, and what I absolutely adore about your stories.
Specifically in the two stories I mentioned, I think your rendition of a kunoichi unconsciously losing the autistic speech patterns when talking to the person she loves was very sweet and touching. In the same way a salamander completely forgetting about everything else in her life the moment she realized she was in love and literally burning with passion was also a really enjoyable read. I was kinda bummed out it ended abruptly but I get that it's difficult to keep writing the same story to great lengths, so I'm still very glad for what you wrote.
Overall I really appreciate your attention to making the story about love before sex, and the relationship be something I'd want for myself.
Even your two first manticore stories were really good to read, I wouldn't have guessed they were your first at all.
Unfortunately it seems most writefags nowadays seem to limit themselves to "you smell good let's fuck" and make the plot be reason for the smut, rather than have the latter come naturally as a consequence of the relationship. I wish more people wrote like you.
▶ c6b90c (1) No.345351>>345439
>>345345
Aaagh I just want more Anubis stories and smut. Nobody pays attention to Egyptian Girls. Pharaohs have turned to dust waiting on their tombs.
▶ 72d662 (11) No.345356>>345439 >>345888
>>345345
Well shit, dude. As long as people are enjoying what I write then I'll keep doing it.
Not to try and jack myself off but I quite like writing simple "Monstergirl and Anon fuck, the end" stories with some barebones narrative causation around them as very short (200-300 lines) lewds whenever I get a flash of inspiration. They don't need much explanation, they're just there to be what they are - fap fuel.
However, seeing as how vanilla lovey-dovey sex is the best fetish, that's where the long stories come in - the more you put in in terms of plot, character development and all that shit, the better the payoff when it becomes time for lewd. Plus it gives them a chance to become stories in their own right instead of mere narrative framing for the sex scene(s).
I have another long story in the works at the moment to play around more with the 'love first, sex thereafter' formula. Not sure when it's going to be finished. Soon™.
▶ 72d662 (11) No.345396
>>345388
Not sure it would work out that well, I doubt she'd want to be kept part of a harem, confined to the house or forced to wear a bin bag over her body.
▶ d40303 (1) No.345403
>>345401
Sounds retarded just like your first premise.
▶ 847c08 (5) No.345439>>345491
>>345356
>However, seeing as how vanilla lovey-dovey sex is the best fetish, that's where the long stories come in
The MGE universe and lore is perfectly ripe for interesting stories. The FUKA setting on /monster/ is also a pretty convenient setting. I really enjoy the longer stories that have a well-fleshed out narrative. Also really like the stories that incorporate their monstrousness in the smut.
>>345351
>Nobody pays attention to Egyptian Girls
I've also noticed this. I'd like to see some Egyptian-themed ones too. Stories of mummies, anubis, and sphinx guarding a pyramid would seem natural. But there's several desert-area monstergirls that would fit well in stories like this.
http://mgewiki.com/w/Category:Desert_Region
I only ever see the Egyptian girls in comics written in Cyrillic lately. Seems strange. I wonder why the Russians like them so much.
▶ ab7acc (5) No.345491>>345666
>>345439
FUKA?
There are Egyptian MG's in some of the larger stories/CYOA's
▶ 847c08 (5) No.345666>>345667 >>348132
>>345491
>FUKA?
TBH, I forgot what the acronym stands for. The setting was that a new continent suddenly magically appears one day on Earth. Monstergirls fill the new continent. The countries around the world slowly but surely become introduced to them and eventually begin exchange programs and the like in human societies. Let me see if I can find the thread that had the big breakdown of the timeline in the setting.
▶ 847c08 (5) No.345667>>348132
>>345666
Aha. It was FUK, the Free Umbral Kingdoms.
Here's the thread with all the info about that setting.
https://8ch.net/monster/res/332555.html
▶ ab7acc (5) No.345669>>345672 >>345739
Here's a short little story I wrote at work when half my patients no-showed at the end of the day.
Someone suggested Holstaur so it's sort of a Holstaur story. I'll edit it more later but I'll just post it here for now.
"Southern Cows"
https://pastebin.com/9fF4nVY4
▶ 847c08 (5) No.345672
>>345669
You know, it's ok to bump the thread when you add real new content like this.
▶ ab7acc (5) No.345674>>345779
Yeah but it's not edited and thus not really complete so I felt like eh. Did it deserve to bump this?
And besides, you bumped it for me :^)
▶ 847c08 (5) No.345779
>>345674
>you bumped it for me :^)
Yeah, it deserved a bump. And I included some girls to complement your story. So it's all good in the barn.
▶ 7c8329 (4) No.345822
>>345345
This is really well written, and really puts into words what I've been looking for in MG stories over the last couple years. I would absolutely love to see more >head over heels love. I would also like to see more stories incorporate themes of growth, learning and compassion between MG and humans.
>>345328
Open was an excellent story and I keep coming back to it when I feel down. Everything the other anon said is basically exactly what I enjoy about it (and your other stories) so much as well. I'll also add that you handled the "traitor" part well, and it genuinely seemed like you wanted it to come across as a "better than the alternative" end for everyone involved.
▶ f930ba (3) No.345887>>346221
I've polished this one very slightly, here and there, since I first Pastebinned it. I don't know if I'll ever write another MG story, at least with this much dedication; I probably wouldn't have bothered to write this one if Apsaras weren't smack dab in the middle of Magical Realm territory for me.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/12125667
▶ f930ba (3) No.345888
>>345356
>However, seeing as how vanilla lovey-dovey sex is the best fetish, that's where the long stories come in - the more you put in in terms of plot, character development and all that shit, the better the payoff when it becomes time for lewd. Plus it gives them a chance to become stories in their own right instead of mere narrative framing for the sex scene(s).
This is literally what I was after with my apsara story. I was aiming past "fap fuel" toward "erotica, mostly vanilla but with a few kinks to make it interesting" -- and I knew I had to take my time with the buildup if I wanted to achieve that. Not that I don't enjoy the occasional stroke story, but I felt like writing something good enough to show other people would require more work.
▶ f0e160 (2) No.346116
How goes the writefag content lately?
▶ f0e160 (2) No.346117
If ResonantDrunk is still around by any chance, will the next chapters of Twilight of the Gods be the final chapter in Sam's story?
▶ 72d662 (11) No.346221>>346599
>>345887
That was really nice. Absolutely nailed the love-then-sex thing. Descriptions of the apsara were spot-on as well, seemed like it was really written with admiration.
also:
>belly worship
>leglocking
>willing incubisation, complete with a new name
Fucking HHNNNNNNG.
▶ f6683a (2) No.346273>>346348 >>346477
>>343765
Thanks for reading.
The second story might feature less-than-romanticized violence as to maintain the theme, but nothing ridiculously extreme. I assure that everything will be done within reason. That said, I'll make it public if asked.
▶ c3144d (8) No.346348
>>346273
I definitely hope it's made public. Violence is understandable, despite my love for monstergirls the violent femdom that goes along with it is something that I could do with less of though.
▶ 7c8329 (4) No.346477
▶ f930ba (3) No.346599
>>346221
Thanks! Responses like that make me feel like my efforts weren't wasted.
▶ 2752be (1) No.347207>>347360
https://pastebin.com/ix0VnXYf
Another part of the crab saga. I swear I'm not dead, it's just writer's block.
▶ 011707 (13) No.347304>>347308 >>347321 >>347342 >>347392 >>347445 >>347471
We all know that the DotR would make SJWs go mental. But how would that take form? I was inspired by that idea to write this story in a kind of experimental style.
Enjoy.
https://pastebin.com/kYdbi0Mf
▶ 3bbcc8 (4) No.347308
>>347304
>that last article
▶ bfe52c (1) No.347321
>>347304
That was great, thanks for that.
▶ 72e769 (3) No.347342
>>347304
Don't forget to add a part about A Kike kvetching he was voted off the board of directors by a Danuki's hostile takeover of the bank.
>Monsterous antisemitism on the rise!
▶ 85d52a (3) No.347360
>>347207
Didn't see this get posted, I liked it looking forward to more
▶ 917a36 (1) No.347392
>>347304
Also gotta display the initial hopefulness when all of the new people are female, right before the realization that the patriarchy ain't got shit on monstergirls
▶ 8d599c (1) No.347445>>347465
>>347304
I really like it but I would fancy a further shift from almost all of their beliefs because the men are being taken.
>WHY YOU SHOULD WRITE YOUR SENATOR AND CONGRESSMAN TO PUSH THE ASSISTED ANTIRAPE ACT!
<Well of course rapes will go down if bystanders are armed and willing to act on a man's behalf!
>Why current Hate Crime laws go too far.
>Are schools really the right place for kids to learn about sex?
>Gender segregation in schools, the solution to pre marital sex?
>Why we should require background checks on immigrant monster girls.
>Ten handguns powerful enough to harm an Ushi-Oni but not break your wrists.
>Why you should forget a career and focus on homemaking.
>The practical values of polygamy in the modern age.
>"Yes, I do have a legitimate reason to own a M2 Browning", why congress should respect "SHALL NOT BE INFRINGED!"
▶ 011707 (13) No.347465
>>347445
Those are decent. If I ever come to redo the story I'll throw a few of them in.
▶ ed0c4d (3) No.347471>>347476 >>347482 >>348040
>>347304
>latest Star Wars
Was it good? Doesn't matter if it has monsters or not, what matters is if it was good or not. Fucking jews ruined Star Wars for me.
▶ cade3d (1) No.347476>>347482
>>347471
If you enjoy some or all of the marvel superhero movies you'll probably get some good entertainment out of it. If you hate those kind of movies you'll probably think it's shit. At least it's better than the first Disney SW imo.
▶ d792a9 (1) No.347482
>>347476
>>347471
All of Disney's movies were shit, and are getting gradually worse with each installment.
▶ 658671 (3) No.347517>>347522 >>347763
Anyone have a request for a short story?
▶ 85d52a (3) No.347522>>347763 >>349277
>>347517
Anything involving healing
▶ 7033ce (2) No.347763>>347826 >>349277
>>347517
A stronk species mamano listening to her new husband's music and inquires about a war ballad only to discover that it isn't fiction that so many men could die in a single battle let alone war.
>>347522
Maybe husband was a serviceman and she overreacts to this fact?
▶ b2def1 (1) No.347826>>347832 >>347841 >>349277
>>347763
This, I want to read about a ushi oni learning about wwii and losing her shit at the thought of 40 million dead men.
▶ 581661 (1) No.347832
▶ 7033ce (2) No.347841>>347847 >>349277
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
>>347826
How about WWI?
Just lost 5000 men in a pointless advance into arty and machine guns? Send in the next wave.
Maybe the song to make her inquire about it could be something like Motorhead's 1916?
▶ ff081c (1) No.347847>>349277
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
>>347841
The anniversary of passchendale is coming up, so there's also that to consider.
▶ 011707 (13) No.347964>>348015 >>348460
Some idiot decides to put a chastity belt on a wurm.
https://pastebin.com/0vpuHAsS
▶ 4df676 (1) No.347982
>>340927
Hopefully you continue this, enjoyed it a lot.
▶ ae135a (18) No.348007>>348008 >>348044 >>348050 >>348067 >>348098
Someone give me a monster, a theme, and a setting. Could be something common, or a personal favorite.
I'll try to have whatever it is out by tomorrow morning.
Need some practice.
▶ 011707 (13) No.348008>>348016 >>348105
>>348007
Jorou-gumo, slice of life, low fantasy.
▶ 8f784a (4) No.348015>>348017 >>348034
>>347964
Nice dude, honestly feel that you're the best writefag we've got atm, both in quality and quantity.
▶ ae135a (18) No.348016
>>348008
I shall do my research and see what happens. No guarantees on quality though, been years since creative writing.
▶ 9cc142 (1) No.348034
▶ 04540b (10) No.348040
>>347471
Welcome to the downward spiral of the West. Shall we continue?
▶ 04540b (10) No.348042>>348058
>>348017
Can someone explain to me this wojak thing. Why can some use it but others cant? Why do people go batshit over it?
▶ 04540b (10) No.348044>>348070
>>348007
Centaur. Any-type. Modern day. Store/hardware thing
▶ 15855c (1) No.348050>>348070
>>348007
Ushi-Oni, Defying stereotypes, Modern Day Plz
▶ 9fd323 (1) No.348058
>>348042
What you are referring is the retarded wojacks. You know, the ones that have deformed heads. Those are recent, annoying cuckchan/leddit pseudo-memes that should only be wiped off the face of the earth. Normal Wojack is a-ok, since he's been around for years.
▶ b9f986 (3) No.348067>>348070 >>348662
>>348007
Dragon, the love and trust needed between a couple to make consensual bdsm be enjoyable, modern day. Preferrably with the dragon on the submissive end.
▶ 0f20f0 (1) No.348070
>>348044
>>348067
>>348050
I'm not the fastest typist around, and with work scheduling I may not be able to get to these by tomorrow. I'll try though, just check every couple of days.
▶ e42cfb (2) No.348098>>348382 >>349273
>>348007
A slice of life around a vanilla lizardgirl who is also a NEET, meeting a guy who is also a NEET and instead of her choosing a mate through martial prowess she chooses him through vidya
▶ ae135a (18) No.348105>>348114 >>348460
>>348008
https://pastebin.com/KRC8pyFn
Something like this? Not as long as I'd have liked, but I tried.
▶ 011707 (13) No.348114>>348161
>>348105
Not bad, man. Not bad at all.
Plenty of little turns of phrase in it that made me smile, like
>It is a loom crafted from the finest oak, with intricate carvings said to ward off spirits who would cause snags and tears.
and
>An outfit begins to take shape. A luxurious gown is brought into this world, with a quality unmatched by normal silk.
If I had to make one criticism, it would be that your writing style is a little dry. It's not even that dry, as it's still plain as day that you put a lot of effort into thinking about exactly what was going to happen in the story, but there are a few points where the narration comes off as a bit detached. Almost as though I were reading about what happened in a history book rather than a piece of creating writing.
As an example, the closing paragraph.
The years go by, and the two grow closer. They start a business together, and for awhile it suffers. Humans are uneasy about Serena's nature and avoid her for a time. But as their clothing starts to become noticed, the little shop prospers. They use their newfound wealth to build a larger house and start a family. And in the end, the two find themselves perfectly content.
As it is right there, it's fine. Nothing wrong with it at all. But (in my opinion, this is all my own opinon) it could have a bit more flavour added to it. For instance,
The years went by. Alex and Serena's night of passion blossomed into a romance, and eventually a marriage. They started a weavery together, right out of the workshop where they'd met - for a while, the business suffered, both from its remote location and from the cityfolk's unease about Serena and her kind. However, none could argue with the quality of her work, or Alex's, and soon enough the customers were drawn to their little shop like bees to a flower. The two stayed like that, living together, working together, loving together, until their coffers were full enough for a larger house, a more impressive shop, and for children. In the end, they found their contentment.
Using the past tense rather than the present makes adding a bit of extravagance ten times easier.
Also, I was a little disapponted you skipped the lewd.
Overall, though, very nice. Especially since you were given a theme and a setting instead of being able to choose your own.
▶ de2e5b (1) No.348132
▶ ae135a (18) No.348161>>348167
>>348114
Thanks for the tips! Been quite a few years since I've tried writing anything really.
Lewds have always been odd for me, always comes out feeling clinical as opposed to enticing.
▶ 011707 (13) No.348167>>348219
>>348161
Best thing for that, I feel, is to read other people's work. Beardicus, MonsterGirlExaminer, and whatever of Silent's stuff is still here >>341044 .
▶ 388338 (2) No.348219>>348222
>>348167
Alright. May take a bit and research before attempting again. May write crappie while doing so. Who knows.
▶ 388338 (2) No.348222>>348296
>>348219
Damn auto correct.
▶ e42cfb (2) No.348296
▶ ae135a (18) No.348303>>348315 >>348317 >>348454 >>348608
I threw together a story. Modern setting, kind of a pay-per-view sport in which runners are pitted against monsters. Last man standing wins. It was supposed to be funny, but that failed. I still had fun writing it. If anyone is interested I will continue it.
https://pastebin.com/NQLV7euH
It ends on a cliffhanger for now. I didn't know if I wanted the MC to succeed or fail, or even make another run later in which he falls for a contestant. Input welcome.
▶ a01973 (4) No.348315
>>348303
Love it. Hope you can get around to the fate of the other contestants as well.
▶ c98ec8 (2) No.348317
>>348303
Keep it coming, writefriend.
▶ 72c1c8 (1) No.348382>>348406 >>348428 >>348437 >>348460 >>348618
https://pastebin.com/ZbxQ8B6B
>>348098
This is just a rough draft but i wrote most of it on my tablet while traveling around. Probably a little different than what you had in mind but I hope its enjoyable at least.
I'll clean it up later when I get home from vacation.
▶ 4aaa03 (1) No.348406>>348646
>>348382
Good shit as always Ace.
▶ c3144d (8) No.348428>>348646
>>348382
Lizard girls are criminally underrepresented. They almost always show up as supporting characters, not main heroines. This is slowly working to fix that. You're doing God's work.
▶ ae135a (18) No.348454>>348458 >>348460 >>348473 >>348559
>>348303
https://pastebin.com/NQLV7euH
Closing seemed too short, so I just added it to the first part instead of making a new entry. Next part will be another run.
▶ 2fb3ba (1) No.348458
>>348454
Hellhound still has the guy's scent…
▶ f27add (1) No.348460
>>348382
>>348454
>>348105
>>347964
Every time I see people making updates, I get a little more pissed at myself. That's especially true with all of the good updates here. Real life shit is pissing me off.
I have to finish my own shit.
Thanks for the motivation
▶ a01973 (4) No.348473
>>348454
Nice. Poor tuxedo man, taking that seal was a baaaad idea.
▶ b94d83 (2) No.348559
>>348454
Just gave it a read, and that was pretty enjoyable.
▶ ae135a (18) No.348608>>348615 >>348720 >>349936
>>348303
First half of part two is up. Will finish it tomorrow.
https://pastebin.com/kwGSmM29
Will our hero make it to the next match, or will he be disqualified?
▶ 767a11 (1) No.348615
>>348608
If she rapes him now, there will be no pride left. She will be known as the hellwan that let a man go on TV forever.
▶ 0653fb (2) No.348618>>348646
>>348382
I never realized how much I wanted a NEET Lizardgirl waifu in my life. I'm excited to see the final draft.
▶ 9a2b35 (2) No.348646>>348835
>>348618
>>348437
>>348428
>>348406
Aww geez thanks y'all. Guess I have no choice but to clean it up. Its just going to be cleaning up grammar and probably elaborating/clearing up a few things so the main story won't change.
Oh and while I know a story i need to do, Id wondered if there were any of my stories people would want sequels or more of?
▶ a87f3d (2) No.348662>>348669 >>349170
>>348067
I gave this prompt a try, it kinda deviated from the exact idea, but I hope you like it.
https://pastebin.com/HTFitmgx
As usual, criticism is welcome.
▶ ae135a (18) No.348720>>348826 >>348924 >>348961
>>348608
https://pastebin.com/kwGSmM29
Part two complete. Part three will be finished when it's posted. No more half story posts.
▶ 011707 (13) No.348826
Bloody hell boys we're getting stories left right and centre.
>>348720
This is downright engrossing. I need to know how it finishes.
▶ 693f58 (1) No.348835>>348838
>>348646
>if there were any of my stories people would want sequels or more of?
Yeah, wizard quest 3
: ^}
▶ 9a2b35 (2) No.348838
>>348835
BEARDICUUUUSSSSSSS
No but seriously. Wizardquest 3 will come when my ennui returns and I feel meaningless without hurting myself.
▶ d5114b (1) No.348854
I had an interesting idea for a story, however I have no skill in writing and I cringe whenever I think of my attempts.
Anyways, my idea is thus; The MC, a nice enough guy looking for a gentle waifu is captured by a wild pack of wans. The alpha female claims him as her husband, much to the dismay of the smaller females. The alpha female is haughty, dominant, and loves to cuddle. There's a gentle and motherly beta female who teases the MC whenever she gets a chance, a small upstart one who wants to claim the MC as her own, a smug one who just so happens to have the most tempting body and constantly flaunts it, and a dutiful proper one who tries to resist the MC cock.
Infighting and hilarity ensue. The MC stays true to the alpha so she won't fight any of the thirsty betas.
Are there any existing stories that explore a pack dynamic? I'm in the mood for something like that myself.
▶ b94d83 (2) No.348924
>>348720
Another good one, I'll be interested to see how it plays out.
▶ 7b13e6 (1) No.348960>>349052
https://pastebin.com/2vEerc7k
Finally updated my story some! now my job is to figure out how to continue it from here… as always feedback and critique is welcome! Let me know what you liked/disliked and enjoy!
▶ ae135a (18) No.348961>>348976 >>349008 >>349099
>>348720
Aaaand part 3.
https://pastebin.com/h4LRkxGA
If anyone wants more I can pick it up again. It's been fun trying to get back into writing.
▶ 7c8329 (4) No.348976>>348980
>>348961
I liked it! I'd love to see more at some point in the future.
▶ ae135a (18) No.348980
>>348976
Well, there is still a debt hanging over his head. I may work on something tomorrow.
▶ 576c98 (4) No.349002>>349205 >>349289
▶ 011707 (13) No.349008>>349021 >>349024
>>348961
>Sadie agrees to hold off on raping MC
>MC gets raped by another mamono
Let that be a lesson to hellhounds everywhere.
▶ ae135a (18) No.349021
>>349008
It's the thought that counts?
▶ 2da0dd (1) No.349024>>349028
>>349008
I feel bad for sadie. Bitter incel life and mo9k awaits.
▶ ed0c4d (3) No.349028
>>349024
Get the fuck out of here, you leddit bitch
▶ e1961b (2) No.349052
▶ ae135a (18) No.349099>>349149 >>349211
>>348961
Part 4 is short.
Last bit having to do with the Manhunt. If I continue it, we will have the Barstool Adventures!
https://pastebin.com/bb0ADqLp
▶ 67fa4e (1) No.349149
>>349099
Nice. Poor Sadie though, I hope she has luck at the meetup.
▶ b9f986 (3) No.349170>>349395
>>348662
Muh heart. Though I was hoping for the sex to hit the kinky end a bit more. Good stuff anon.
▶ 79f098 (1) No.349205>>349289
>>349002
Great, thanks man, I really love this one.
▶ 0e5efe (2) No.349211>>349216
>>349099
I'm curious. What made you switch from the Manhunt angle to managing a bar?
▶ ae135a (18) No.349216>>349218
>>349211
MC got eliminated. Rules prevent him from returning. So I thought a new angle would be fun to write.
(First time back writing for several years, just trying different things.)
If I did pick the Manhunt back up it would probably be from a different perspective.
▶ 0e5efe (2) No.349218>>349239
>>349216
I meant why you decided to write him getting eliminated, but you answered that in the next sentence. It's always good to try new things out.
▶ ae135a (18) No.349239
>>349218
Honestly, the elimination was unplanned. I was writing and it just kinda happened.
▶ dc0e10 (1) No.349273>>349277 >>349284
>>348098
I think all the requested stories were done/ dont wanna dig through the thread. If anyone can make a request in 45min I might do it here while on the train.
▶ 65655a (1) No.349277>>349868
>>349273
Don't know if this one is in the works but no one has posted a result yet.
>>347522
>>347763
>>347826
>>347841
>>347847
▶ 245332 (7) No.349284
>>349273
A man decides to go on a family outing with his Baphomet wife and daughter.
▶ 576c98 (4) No.349289>>349412
▶ a87f3d (2) No.349395>>350155
>>349170
Writefag here, hypothetically speaking, if I were to write a sequel, how far in the BDSM kinks would you like it to go?
I did enjoy writing this, because I'm a sucker for softcore bondage, as you perhaps noticed. That said, I do like challenges. So do not hesitate to tell me what changes you'd like to see.
▶ 576c98 (4) No.349412>>349468 >>349697
▶ b35d8d (1) No.349468>>349697
>>349412
My heart is continuing to get sucker punched every single chapter. I love it.
▶ 576c98 (4) No.349697>>349745 >>349972
>>349412
Chapters 14 and 15 out:
https://pastebin.com/sHBVVhxK
>>349468
ABLOOBLOO MUH NUALA
t. kovac
▶ 835793 (4) No.349745>>349758
>>349697
Wait since when have you been remastering the tale of Fairyfucker 5000? Been a few years, what motivated you to revisit it?
▶ db7745 (6) No.349758
>>349745
I wanted to get into writing again, so one day I kinda felt like revisiting the whole story. When I'm done I'll finish it with the epilogue I promised.
Been doing other stories as well, but those are just WIP and nowhere near completion/publishing stage.
Also I've been remastering the story since about two months ago. Took a month-long break for no particular reason though.
▶ c913a5 (4) No.349805
▶ 1d0d8a (2) No.349837>>349838 >>349849
Manhunt anon here. I think I'll just let that story lie as is. No Barstool Adventures.
I do still want to practice wring, so if anyone has a request I'll try to accommodate.
Just let me know if you want Lewis (I'm not particularly good at those. Feels too clinical.) And what perspective it will be told from.
▶ 1d0d8a (2) No.349838
▶ 245332 (7) No.349849>>349853 >>349884
>>349837
A lonely man who has adopted a lot of stray cats over the years tries to get a girlfriend. Unbeknownst to him, all of those cats are nekomata with a fierce rivalry between one another.
▶ 2f5dc6 (1) No.349853
>>349849
I'll see what I can do.
▶ 4aa141 (1) No.349868>>349869
>>349277
I started it on the train but didnt get the chance to finish it until I got on my first plane. I didn't really want to write about WW2 tbh so I changed the request up and incorporated the healing request.
I don't know if its what people were looking for, but here's the unedited version cause yay tablet.
https://pastebin.com/NMyy5fiN
Oh and the MG was an Ushi-Oni.
Now I have s 4 hour layover and a 16 hour flight ahead of me… what to write…
▶ 8d2fa5 (1) No.349869>>349878
>>349868
Modern day. Man meets Shog. Shinnigans ensue.
▶ 62c300 (1) No.349878>>349883
>>349869
You literally asked for this to happen
https://pastebin.com/nC6kJ233
▶ ae135a (18) No.349883>>350008
>>349878
My favorite monster wanting to be a clown? Thank you very much good sir.
I have a weird thing for female clowns.
▶ ae135a (18) No.349884>>349899 >>349905 >>349917
>>349849
A bit short, and my brain fizzled out towards the end.
https://pastebin.com/KbkzL9aq
Feels like the prologue to some fantasy rom-com.
▶ 245332 (7) No.349899
>>349884
It's cool, thanks!
▶ 011707 (13) No.349905>>349921
>>349884
Solid. Now write the lewd.
▶ 8f784a (4) No.349917
▶ ae135a (18) No.349921>>349926
▶ 011707 (13) No.349926
>>349921
Obviously all of them.
▶ 011707 (13) No.349934>>349988
https://pastebin.com/UZMkZUHH
Freshly written life, everyone take a slice.
▶ 8d5a31 (1) No.349936>>349938
>>348608
I love this.
Do you mind if I make this a thing in my setting?
▶ ae135a (18) No.349938>>349977
▶ db7745 (6) No.349972>>350049
▶ e34282 (3) No.349977>>349978 >>349986
>>349938
great.
I'm the author of the Monster Girl 2020 setting
▶ e34282 (3) No.349981
▶ c913a5 (4) No.349982>>349987
If that's the case, then I will admit laughing quite a lot at parts. November 19th, 2018 Baron Trump is seen with a Danuki, holding her hand.
November 22nd, 2018 The Great American Wall is finished. Mexico declares it will cease to trade with the USA, and calls on others to join it. No one does.
November 27th, 2018 Sweden falls to civil war. Reasons and particulars are not reported on
November 30th,2018 France falls to civil war. Reasons and particulars are not reported on.
July 10th, 2019 The FUK rescinds the cultural exchange programs in India and Saudi Arabia, this causes many memes as the internet revels in the fact that even Monster-Girls can’t stand Pajeets and Kebabs.
▶ 3d1253 (1) No.349986>>349987
>>349977
Can't wait to see what you do with it.
▶ e34282 (3) No.349987
>>349982
Thank you. I tried to be humorous.
>>349986
Don't know yet, I'll have to change it a bit to fit the setting.
▶ e6d632 (1) No.349988>>350023
>>349934
>Willingly throws the game and gets saddled with extra chores just so that he can blow his load
Your main character is a pussy. Seriously. The format's fun, but his submissiveness gets old fast.
Not to mention that's a dickish move on the sore loser's part
▶ 570dde (2) No.350008
>>349883
Glad you enjoyed it!
I don't know what possessed me to do that but whatcha gunna do.
▶ 011707 (13) No.350023
>>349988
Fair point, man. That's an issue I had in some of my very first stories - what I was trying to convey was, the fact that the MC gives into his waifu isn't a statement about him (because, at the end of the day, the real star of the show is the waifu) but it's a statement about her - that she's good enough to make her husband submit to her. I'll make sure to try and get that across more clearly in future pieces. Thanks for reading.
▶ db7745 (6) No.350049>>350126 >>350329
▶ c913a5 (4) No.350126>>350329
>>350049
I know writing takes time but i want more. Good shit.
▶ b9f986 (3) No.350155
>>349395
I see you are also a man of fine culture.
How far? I'd like to see them start getting into the S&M aspect a lot(see first post I made) as well as a lot of restraints(even if they may not be much on dragons), and toys too(eg. blindfolds, gags, and vibrators.) Don't forget some kind of embarrassing tagged collar on Laevateinn
▶ db7745 (6) No.350329>>350529
▶ 6ce487 (1) No.350374
had some harem sin story about a guy marrying an ant colony floating around in my head for a while, anything like that exist already?
▶ db7745 (6) No.350529>>350687 >>350707
▶ db7745 (6) No.350687
▶ 0653fb (2) No.350707>>351179
>>350529
Damn bratan you're churning these out like it's your job; I know this is a remaster but still.
▶ 04540b (10) No.350709>>350733 >>350896
Got a little story, either gonna change or just this
>be me
>own a spaceship
>enjoy travelling the galaxy
>head to spaceport
>see advertisement
>"Experimental Warp Drive at Tau-23-B. Travels the galaxy in 1.5 Terran Days. Expires on GST 12.56 20684"
>mfw free warp
>Head out
>Meet person
>Weird cat girl with purple hair
>Probably modified herself at Tectoz-2
>Acts like a complete cunt for the whole deal
>I want to punch her face with gauntlet
>Accepts deal
>50,000,000 credits
>Damn my wallet but worth it
>Upgrade warp drive
>Activate but ship doesn't move
>I swear to go if this is a scam I WILL…
>See options
>Interdimensional Travel System Ver. 2.654"
>Wait what
>"To Activate Normal Travel, Say "Activate Normal Travel"
>"To Activate Dimensional Warp, Say "Activate D-Warp"
>Say the latter
>Portal opens
>Enter the portal
>Looks like terra
>Wait, what?
>This is a gold mine O my stars
>Ask if there is any UN station
>No reply
>Huh??
>Also see something odd
>Some flying creatures
>Is this the Desti system
>They're humanoid
>If this an Edenite planet…
>They attempt to enter, turrets take care of that
>"Activate Rocket System"
>Enter the orbit
>This isn't terra, or this system
>The continents are completely different save for some lights on the other side
I'm gonna either take this seriously but if not then….
>Realize I have a new planet
>Head down to the earth
>People worship me as a person from the stars
>Apparently the "Order see me as a heretic
>Tech seems 1300 E.S.D
>Take them all out with gauntlet
>Scour planet for info
>Apparently creatures known as mamono, creatures engineered with hypersexualized features and an inability to create males
>This is gonna be like the Asark all over again
>Apparently under a pseudo-hive mind under a Demon Lord
>Read about the past
>WTF
>What the actual fuck
>Demons turned the badass monsters into sex-beasts, and cumdumps?
>Lame, lame, lame, lame, lame lame!!
>Given their parasitic nature, opt out on either engineering a plague or dicking around
>Dick around
>Find Communist manifesto
>By this point Human Communism has been proven to be impossible to apply
>Non-Terran species can make it work, but not humans
>Attempts to engineer a Communist humanity ended up with……………
>No, not gonna remember the Hive of Marx
>Translate it into native tongue.
>Similar to 16th ESD Terran English
>Along with works that I created using their info
>Basically overthrow the order for being feudalistic theocrats that hold back socialism and more crap like that
>PRINT 5,000,000,000 copies and spread it
>Also dick around with Fascism and Vanatism (A fascist ideology that makes INGSOC look like hippies)
>Help overthrow the Zipangan states, and help kill the lanadlords and force the ryus to join or die
>Help create the Asiatic State, a genocidal state committed for inter-species cooperation, but civilizing them or killing
>Hellhounds and other violent species are killed insantly
>Also create a plague that allows for human sons, but made incubi sterile
>Also mamono are less psychologically nymphomaniac, but more nervous
>Sit back and enjoy the fuckery I made
>Also a mamono turned communism into INGSOC 2.0, called Uhan Thought
>Basically requires total control of the mind and body to 'show the true path by the party to socialism'
>Basically help create a dystopia
>All because some fucking cat decided to sell her products to me
>mfw she finds out what I did
▶ a90ce7 (1) No.350732
I edited those stories I did as requests here while on vacation. They were fun to do and I'm glad at least one of the OR's liked them in the rough form at first.
Lizardman NEET:
http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=while-you-studied-the-blade
Shoggoth Clown:
http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=learn-to-laugh
Ushi-oni and injured veteran
http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=not-a-waste
▶ 1aea38 (1) No.350733>>350781
>>350709
The fuck did I just read
▶ 04540b (10) No.350781>>350782
>>350733
A guy in the MGE world messing around with it, after a Cheshire sold him a warpdrive.
▶ 04540b (10) No.350782
>>350781
This is in the future and the guy was sold a device that can send him to the mge world, and he fucked around with it.
▶ f33783 (3) No.350785>>350790
I've never written anything for here before but I thought I would contribute to /monster/ in some small way. I know the ending is weak but I'm throwing it out there regardless. Feedback appreciated, but not necessary because I know its a bit weak in general.
https://pastebin.com/sC9PFZFj
▶ f8620f (1) No.350790>>350801
>>350785
Not a bad concept, but there were a few points that made it worse than it could have been. Mainly that the writing kept jumping between past and present tense, and first person and third person.
Like this:
>Her tail shifts behind her and I’m struggling to keep it all in his field of vision
Choose a tense and POV at the very start and stick to it.
(I get that it's your first effort though. Don't be discouraged, keep practicing.)
▶ f33783 (3) No.350801
>>350790
its appreciated that you read it though! I wrote it in the first but changed it to the third after I finished and I guess its an editing flaw on my point on my part.
▶ edc999 (1) No.350807>>350835
I'm new to writing, this is the first story I ever wrote. Feedback is appreciated, thanks!
https://pastebin.com/kiHPLa0C
▶ 04540b (10) No.350827
Make a story from this map. It's the Mamono Rights Map in 2050:
Dark Blue- Full Political, Social, and Economic Rights. No type based discrimination
Light Blue-Full Political Rights, Limited Social and Economic Rights. No type based discrimination
Dark Green-Limited Rights, yet still protected. Some type based discrimination
Light Green-Restrained Rights, less protected.
More type based discrimination and separate-but-equal laws
Orange-"Rights", Socially Marginalized and Discriminated on type
Light Red-Limited "Rights", Right to Discriminate, persecuted based on type. Jim Crow Laws
Dark Red-socially Persecuted. Mandated Persecution and Limited Rights in general. Coerced Sterilization
Darkest Red-Slave Status, Sterilization and Executions Common. Forced and Pervasive Persecution
▶ 8a98c7 (1) No.350835
>>350807
That's really good for a first story! Thanks for sharing anon. Just one pointer for you, I think your sentences are running a bit long in places. For example:
>Putting his regular clothes on, he was on his way to the armory, getting supplied with his personal set of armor and weapons - a medium sized kite shield with the cities' crest on it, a spear and a small dagger, including its signature sheath which marked it as his family heirloom, the last piece of evidence he actually had any family before growing up.
I feel that'd read better if you split it:
>Putting his regular clothes on, he was on his way to the armory, getting supplied with his personal set of armor and weapons. A medium sized kite shield with the cities' crest on it, a spear and a small dagger, including its signature sheath, which marked it as his family heirloom. The last piece of evidence he actually had any family before growing up.
▶ bdbf36 (4) No.350863>>350864 >>351121
A knight's quest takes a nasty turn.
https://pastebin.com/G8xcUyW0
▶ bdbf36 (4) No.350864
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
>>350863
I forgot to add, for best results, I humbly suggest reading with some kind of ambient rain noise on in the background.
▶ 0a1743 (1) No.350866>>350897
Anyone know this series of one shots about a Jinko named Vanessa and her husband named Art? They're not on touchfluffytail anymore but they were my favorite and I'm wondering if the author had a pastebin or something? The first story in the 'series' was called 'Pornstar for a day'
▶ 04540b (10) No.350896>>350903
>>350709
Better version
>Be me
>Living in the standard year 27583 Earth Standard Year
>Enjoy travelling the galaxy, having fun and partying.
>Warp to Spaceport T-23B in the Orion Sector
>Head out for Supplies
>Find old paper document. Looks old as hell
>"Experimental Warp Drive on Sale at Estziw-4 Station 5. Capacity for intergalactic travel and instantaneous Warping. Expires in ESY 27583-23-8
>mfw powerful warp
>Head out once supplies are gathered
>Dock at spaceport
>Inside looks feudal ass hell. Gothic style is their taste
>Meet seller
>Human, yet have cat ears and paws. Weirdly purple,
>Probably modded herself
>She acts like a complete ass the whole deal.
>I want to smash her head in
>Still accepts deal
>Wallet fucked but hey……who couldn't resist
>Get it installed
>Waiting………….I SWEAR TO GOD IF THIS IS A SCAM……….
>Notification
>System updated…..
>Look at warp options. See a special option
>For Inter/D travel, activate it by saying "Initiate D travel"
>Say "Initiate D Travel"
>Portal Opens
>Oh my stars I hit a gold mine
>Head into portal
>Exit portal, see blue skies and a moon
>Am I back on Earth
>"Request Landing on Earth by the United Nations. I seek to land"
>Nothing……
>Attempt again…………
>Nothing
▶ 2b513e (2) No.350897>>350969
▶ 04540b (10) No.350903
>>350896
>Is this a new planet?
>"Activate Orbital Rockets"
>"System On"
>Blast into space like an old rocket
>Head to the main deck and inspect the surface
>This……this isn't earth
>The continents aren't anything like earth
>No Orbital rails, not elevators, no scrapyards
>Nothing. Not even city lights
>Head to aircraft yard and exit through the runway
>Fly down to earth in 2 minutes
>Terrain is similar but different in some traits. It is mostly greener
>Land on the surface near a village of around 5000 people
>People are at awe, and see me as a god, albeit with their god alongside me
>Interact with the locals for some days, until 10 armored men came
>"You godless heathen. Your heretical magic has been seen and has been reported. Thou shall be punished in the name of the Chief God. Destroy this heresy and you shall be spared
>Reply with "There is no god you idiot. You really are that naive. I come from places your mind cannot comprehen-"
>"Enough, thou shan't repent, thou shall suffer"
>They charge, but some bullets deal with them, and people run away.
>Head back into the jackal and escape
>Not before carpet bombing the area of all life to prevent any signs of notion that I was here.
>Head somewhere else
>Before a village told me where to find information. Apparently in a city called Lescatie
>Land 1 km near it due to purple cloud. Chem-readings are off the charts!
>So many toxic chemicals
>Instead I use a drone to head in
>Head to the gates and was allowed to enter
>The city is disgusting. Not from the architecture, but from the people
>Orgies, sexual acts, little children raping and getting raped. The smell of sex is everywhere
>Head into library
>Ask for information on the world
>Head out and study
>So in the simplest terms: There are genetically engineered humans with heightened sexual characteristics under a hive mind called the Demon Lord, combined with a parasitic relation to man due to their singular sex based nature.
>And when I read about the past, it is more disgusting……Badass creatures turned into cumdumps and sex-maniacs by some succubus, a demon of sex.
>God……I think about destroying the city more and more
>Some male who is nude with 3 dicks enter and tries inviting me to their orgy
>Refuse
>"Come on, you wont regret it……..Escape to the ecstasy of man"
>"I have standards unlike you, you degenerate piece of filth"
>"My oh my. We'll have to loosen you up"
>A winged girl comes and tries to get me in
>Refuse again
>"What part of no don't you get, you troglodyte?"
>Her tail tries to get in the drones pants
>When she finds nothing she is scared, and tries to alert
>Slices her throat, and then his. Leave the building and more come after me.
>"Get him, for he must learn."
>"Activate offense mode"
>"COME AND GET IT YOU WHORES!!!!!!"
>It becomes a killing fields left and right
>None of them can get me
>Attempt to flee, but is bogged down by demons
>Slicing and dicing them gets tiring, so I opt for automatic gun
>End up killing 79 before…….It's lower half is taken off by a demon
>They try and fuck the drone. Really?
>Opt out of this hell
>"Try me"
>Denote antimatter core
>Wake up
>See a mountain growing……
>That's no mountain
>The city is being lifted from ground by the force of that bomb
>Oh god
>GO GO GO
>Running as fast as possible
>Cracks are forming as I run
>Then they grow to chasms
>"Run you piece of shit"
>See demons escaping, and some try and come near me
>"Activate defense turrets!"
>Jackal fires at them
>Jump to jackal
>Activate Jackal
>"Thrusters need heating before firing at maximum capacity"
>Debris falling near me
>30% warmed up"
>Come on come on
>I'm gonna die from the rocks
>Activate engine
>80% percent
>"Now!!"
>"Are you sure about this? Thrusters might not work at full capacity"
>"Yes!!"
>Oh god, the ground is falling to me, and getting closer
>Get moving, but still slow though
>Dodge falling rocks less and less
>More are falling to me
>Come ON. "Full power!"
>Boost, and leave the falling rocks
>Still not at full power….
>"Now!!"
>"Boost Activated"
>3Gs of force isn't fun, but still I was able to escape the collapsing ground
>Some rocks did hit the craft, but didn't damage it enough
>From space, I understood the damage I caused…….
▶ 245332 (7) No.350931
>>350925
I don't think people would be too happy if this "already good" monster eats a good girl. Actions are opposite of the stated trait in that situation. Maybe have it most effected by the current mental state of the one it's devouring. Of course, it would be most familiar with fear, but the nice girl could bravely sacrifice herself to save the man, which would give it a strong sense of affection, or a desire to protect.
▶ a5ee32 (2) No.350954>>350967 >>350984
How does a beginner begin to write decent stories?
▶ 1eccb0 (2) No.350967>>351165
>>350954
practice I suppose is really what it comes down to. It seems like a supportive enough environment here so you'll be bound to get constructive feedback on where you can improve and what you need to work on. But practice and experiment with tenses, concepts, and characters is what really makes it I feel.
▶ 1eccb0 (2) No.350969>>351060
>>350897
oh cheers man, thanks a bunch. Is it asking too much to see if you know where I can get the rest?
▶ bdbf36 (4) No.350984>>350987 >>351080 >>351165 >>351511
>>350954
Keep reading. There is a direct correlation with how much you read and how well you write.
http://anubis.moe/
▶ 570dde (2) No.350987
>>350984
Ah hell i need to update my pastebin then. I keep forgetting it's scraping my rough drafts.
▶ 642a16 (1) No.350993>>352505 >>352869
Some of you fellas might recognize this from the previous thread. I decided to rewrite some parts of it, and to hopefully continue on it later this time.
I don't usually do anything romance related, and I suspect it's a bit hefty on the edge factor on the main character. Still, had some positive responses last thread so I might as well post the redone version here.
The executioner, day one
https://pastebin.com/hhPhERCT
The executioner, day two
https://pastebin.com/2myC1Qdc
▶ 2b513e (2) No.351060
>>350969
http://cc.bingj.com/cache.aspx?q=Noizy+boy+touch+fluffy+tail+the+tigers+boyfriend&d=4975802950621939&mkt=en-CA&setlang=en-US&w=-_gIM1c3YHDWu9D4m5q5Bo-tRzglPGQf
Heres one more. Just look up the story names, author and site and look for a cached version of the page. Try different search engines, some will have pages cached that the others won't.
▶ 5d6eba (1) No.351080>>351125
>>350984
I had forgotten about that website, but it's so cool!
Big thanks to whoever made it.
▶ 69f997 (2) No.351082
how about a story about a farmer thats neglecting her wife's needs so she takes matters into her own hands?
▶ 80f4d9 (1) No.351121
>>350863
So, when will you stop writing femdomfaggotry? Or will you go the extra mile and start adding prostate tickling?
▶ a01973 (4) No.351125
>>351080
Thanks anon, I appreciate it!
▶ eb1221 (1) No.351157
Not sure if many people remember this from last thread, or if anyone cared, but here's more Pillars stuff.
https://pastebin.com/wGvp7gdC
Edgy as hell raiju, I know. But it fits with her backstory.
▶ a5ee32 (2) No.351165
>>350984
>>350967
Thanks for the advice. I'll try to write a story and post here to get some feedback.
▶ e3e217 (1) No.351179
>>350707
You're right, I better take a break :^)
▶ f33783 (3) No.351424>>351433
Short bit about a Kiki and her soon-to-be lover. Still working how how to do lewd so be gentle in your criticisms.
https://pastebin.com/WB4LsPnb
▶ bdbf36 (4) No.351433
>>351424
As far as lewds go, they were fine. No issues there.
As with your last story, plot and characters were decent, but the constant switching between tenses and perspectives is really quite jarring. Sometimes it even happens in mid-sentence.
>wrapping her arms around me and crushing her lips against his
>she grabbed at his crotch and begins to rub
Proof-read it afterwards to stop this happening and it will be far better.
▶ 04540b (10) No.351476
Here's an idea. What if the monster world is actually in the future, and the planet was bought by someone to create his dream world from the MGE story?
▶ 57bacd (1) No.351511
>>350984
>anubis.moe
Yo this website's the shit. I hope it sticks around forever.
▶ 3bbcc8 (4) No.352499>>352507 >>352528
Currently writing up a short greentext in the yandere thread and I was wondering if I should switch to a generic greentext or stick with the dialogue-only format I was already writing in for the continuation. The generic greentext makes it easier to present minor details and things characters otherwise wouldn’t mention, however it feels weaker in establishing atmosphere than the dialogue-only which lets the reader fill in the blanks. Plus switching narration styles in the middle of a story is weird.
For a comparison of what either look like from me:
>Shears in hand, I prowled the outside of her office.
>Patiently, I waited for my target to leave the building.
>With the squeak of a door in the distance, I peeked out from my corner to see her moving in my direction.
>”Almost there…”
>As Ms. Goldleaf approached my hiding area, I sprinted up and tackled her.
<Someone! Help!
>She struggled initially, but upon seeing the sharp object in hand she quickly figured out she should stop struggling.
>With her pinned on the sidewalk, I went to my dirty work.
>I moved down her body and began clipping the her of the fluff on her calves while she screamed.
<You’ll pay for this, boyim!
>With my bounty, her humiliation and weakness out in the open, I bolted home.
>There, began to weave a lampshade with using my spoils.
>It would make for a nice “gift” to send her in the future.
vs
>You’ve ruined men’s economic situations for the last time, Ms. Leafowitz. Come out already…
>There she is. C’mon, just a bit closer…
<Is someone there?
<Eek! Ah! Help! Poli-mmf!
>Miss, I’m gonna have to ask you to sit still and quiet or this is going to be messier than it needs to be.
<What are you… No! Put those blades away!
<P-please! Stop! Ah! C-cold…
>Not so hot now, are you? Maybe those smooth calves will make you think twice before taking someone’s money.
I’m probably overthinking this for a simple greentext that is my second attempt at writefaggotry.
▶ c3144d (8) No.352505
>>350993
Pretty good shit anon. While the edge is present it's acceptable. Better get a happy ending though. Cause if it's loss upon loss then I'll be salted.
▶ dbbfef (1) No.352507
>>352499
I would say that the basic greentext format is probably superior. There's only so many blanks the reader can fill in before what's actually meant to be going on can get lost.
▶ 835793 (4) No.352528>>352555
>>352499
Why not incorporate both?
▶ 3bbcc8 (4) No.352555>>352557 >>352563
>>352528
Because that would require me to suddenly switch between periods of including and excluding all important details and thoughts irregularly which looks weird.
>detail
>thought
>detail
>speech
<speech
>action
>detail
<speech on action
vs.
>speech
>detailed speech
<speech on unmentioned action (i.e “let go of my arm”
>speech
<detailedspeech
vs.
>speech
>detail
>action
>thought
>detail
<speech
>speech
<detailed speech
>speech on unmentioned action
<speeched detail
The point of having the speech only is its exclusion direct details and making the reader picture what is happening. To flat out mention what a character is doing half the time and not mentioning actions later seems very odd.
Try reading one half of one of the examples I provided and then the other half of the other for what I mean.
▶ 3bbcc8 (4) No.352557>>352563
>>352555
>Try reading one half of one of the examples I provided
I mean the danuki ones, not the template ones
▶ 835793 (4) No.352563
>>352555
>>352557
Yeah I see what you mean now, it is sort of strange to jump focus like that.
▶ 8530d2 (1) No.352869
>>350993
Don't feel bad about "edge". Having a character who's gone through shit isn't edgy.
Great story though. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
▶ e75f1a (3) No.352913>>352914 >>353041 >>353044
Seeing some other threads bring up genies such as Shantae or the ones in Magi I became inspired to write a story taking place after Half Genie Hero, in which our protag arrives in Scuttle Town looking for work.
I want it to branch into two routes-one for Shantae, a half-mamano(?), and Rottytops, a zombie.
Would anyone be interested? I started writing the first parts and am having fun.
▶ d643b8 (1) No.352914>>352918
>>352913
I don't know much about Shantae but the premise sounds decent enough. If you're having fun writing then keep at it.
▶ e75f1a (3) No.352918
▶ 57eb2f (6) No.352926
A living armour girl gets an upgrade.
https://pastebin.com/4e9tfTup
(This one's slightly longer than I usually do, more like "Open" and "A Knightess' Tale")
▶ e75f1a (3) No.353041>>353044 >>353320
>>352913
I'd also like to add I'll try to tie it into the MGE universe as best as I can
▶ 37bdf7 (3) No.353044>>353322
>>352913
>>353041
>character specific
>Shantae + MGE
I’m very wary about this becoming a bit too much into fanfiction territory.
▶ 11c225 (1) No.353255
>>353250
I can't stand this story. Femdom is horrible.
▶ 34f946 (1) No.353307
I just finished a whole buncha life-critical things this week so I'm going to try and get back into writing. One question I had though, does anyone use any special writing software, like Nimble Writer? One problem I always had was keeping track and starting stories, so I'm trying to force myself to be organized first.
Debating whether to do a story about a horseshoe crab girl I've got brewing for a while, or a red oni/ blue oni pair of siblings.
▶ b6c2f5 (4) No.353317
The sea brings a mermaid to her lover's arms.
https://pastebin.com/iJVAXEjY
▶ 5b8bfd (3) No.353318
>>353250
>Alping into a hellhound is possible
▶ 72575d (5) No.353320
>>353041
>Shantae uses Rottytops' spider-based equivalent of internet
>accidentally discovers /monster/
How does it go?
▶ 45d091 (1) No.353322
>>353044
Yeah that's my main concern.
Will be good writing practice either way-will definitely try to work on original stories.
▶ dcf44e (2) No.353331>>353354
TFT had a contest to feature Kikimora and Satyros in it. Judging is still going but this was my entry in case anyone wanted to read it.
I didn't really go in expecting to win, I just wanted to write this goofy story.
http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=kiki-and-brianna
▶ d7baf4 (1) No.353334
>>353250
>abusive femdom
>forced transitioning
>no revenge
▶ 8a8628 (1) No.353335
>Shilling is encouraged!
In that case, I got a book series I'm working on that takes place at a magic school in rural Canada loaded with monster girls. The main focus is more the character interactions than the fact there are monster girls. I try to stick more to real world mythology or my own interpretations of things than any monster girl setting. As such, there are males and humans mixed in. However, it does feature:
>Half-dragon loli
>Fluffy tails loli
>Witch loli
>Dullahan
>Yuki-onna school nurse
>And More!
No lewds, most of the cast is lolis. More Mitsuboshi Colors or Little Witch Academia than Monster Musume no Iru Nichijou. Curious to see what you guys think. Check out the first chapter below:
https://www.banditgang.com/maplecrest-sample-chapter
▶ c19351 (1) No.353373>>353374 >>353401
God these threads have gotten so slow
▶ e310f8 (1) No.353374>>353407
>>353373
>(1)
This is actually pretty fast tbh. Lots of stories.
▶ 133809 (1) No.353401
>>353373
Then you should write something of your own, or give another writefag some constructive criticism.
▶ 7dfb65 (1) No.353407
>>353374
posting just seems sparse
▶ 57eb2f (6) No.353415>>353417 >>353418 >>353431
Hello everyone. -Sacrifice- here.
I've got an arachne story just about finished that I'll post soon, and two more stories planned - one involving a lava golem, the other a nurarihyon. Out of those two, which would people rather have first?
▶ 72575d (5) No.353417>>353419
▶ 0bf48f (1) No.353418>>353419
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▶ 5b8bfd (3) No.353425>>353443 >>354342
Got a little idea for anyone wanting one.
Entry 264. 5-24-19. Arkansas
2 years ago. 2 fucking years since hell was released. 2 years before the US was a junta. 2 years ago before the Amazon Campaign. 2 years ago I was just in my house, worrying about the things a grad from Jonesboro would expect. Moving out, getting a job, and having a life. I was just getting ready to pack my things when it happened. Mom always wanted me to get on with it. You know, the adult life. Heh, I was always that one who just acted like a child for the hell of it. Maybe it was just me wanting to not grow up. I would've if I knew what would happen. I don't worry about that anymore. I'm an adult, but still……….
"What's the point of writing? I know, but……."
That's when it happened. Weeks ago there were reports of strange creatures. Creatures that blurred the line between man and monster. It seems those stories could be true. It could be that those monster boards have a point. But hey, that was on the forums, where quality bullshit was made en masse. Yet it became more…pronounced. The Arkansas National Guard warned via television and email of disappearances in the North, and advised travelling in groups. Some just threw it off as some pedo alert, they wouldn't target adult males. Hey what can ya expect? People coming and disappearing, followed by all those fucking seminars and lectures every month. We would brush it off as we 'learned better', but now the feds are getting into it. It wasn't until later on.
4 days before the 24th was when it intensified. Stories from Syria told of massive creatures obliterating entire towns in a minute spread. How entire armies were swallowed up. Idlib was the site of two massive creatures just demolishing city blocks. It sounds like some sci-fi story. It wasn't until a fucking artillery company came and took it down, when we saw it. It was the size of several city blocks. It was covered by massive plates and armor tougher than steel. And inside…inside was a pink female This is what they were telling?! Maybe those fucks had a point, but things became even more odd. How the fuck were the feds not listening. Russia didn't investigate, nor did the UN? How?!
Then there were emails, articles and images, that were written in some fuckin' odd gibberish. Luckily some bloke deciphered it. Turns out it was some rune from a really obscure series. It spoke of some new age between man and 'mamono?', and synthesis of two worlds, harmony, peace, love (a lot of love) and some other bs. It felt like some hippie cult ripped straight from a comic book. It also had pitches of these creatures. Spidergirls, snakegirls, and 'it', the Idlib Creature. It was there. They were Photoshop-level realistic. Almost too realistic….
3 days before the event, and reports of odd instances started to increase across the South. These monsters began to pop up, more often, especially in isolated cities. Apparently it was part of the emails, saying this was some way to 'prevent chaos' Another message came. It stated that this world had no 'magic', and that modern tech had to be used? Why were they spewing their operations, and wait..magic? Really? Their world had magic but ours doesn't? Well that fantasy ended. Soon the board began to flare up with people. some wanting help, and others, wanting to join them. Most were branded off as just 'newfags' but some did give advice. They reluctantly explained it all, and soon the info spread. May put it off as some Dark Web bs, but a lot believed it.
1 day before he event, and ohhhh boy. Unrest was occurring in the East Coast. Riots and protests demanding the government reveal the 'truth'. Not some Illuminati-Rothschild-Soros bs, but the truth about these creatures. What did you fucking expect?! Creatures that were from another world craving your dick? Weird creatures the size of buildings? Eldritch abominations? Oh come on, when you've only heard that humans are the only 'sentient' species, that magic isn't real, and that monsters are just stories, you kinda of buy into it, but now…..now it all was coming apart. That now our safety net, and our ignorance was coming apart.
Then it came. Synthesis.
▶ e8a6c1 (1) No.353426
▶ 3d0cd1 (1) No.353428
>>353419
Nurarihyon. Haven't seen anything of them yet.
▶ 37bdf7 (3) No.353431
▶ 27a338 (1) No.353443>>353446
>>353425
I like the sound of this. I'd say keep going and post a pastebin of the final result
▶ 5b8bfd (3) No.353446
>>353443
I'm wondering if I should keep it in journal form or not
▶ 57eb2f (6) No.353503>>353537 >>353555
Arachne done. I tried to stay somewhat faithful to the MGE description of her, both in terms of her appearance and her dominatrix tendencies. Enjoy
https://pastebin.com/T7mYkj0p
As for the other two stories, I'll write the lava golem first as I've got a bit more of an idea of what should happen. The nurarihyon will take a bit longer, but I will get around to it. Probably.
▶ f188cf (1) No.353537>>353538
>>353503
Spooky. So the setting for this is modern day war?
▶ 57eb2f (6) No.353538
>>353537
More or less. For such a short story, I tried to keep the setting ambiguous so that the reader could fill in the gaps themselves.
▶ 321029 (1) No.353555
>>353503
that was really good
▶ b6c2f5 (4) No.353819
Lava golem story done. She just wants to warm her hubby up.
https://pastebin.com/ygw3c539
Nurarihyon story might be a while. I've started it, but I've got other deadlines and shit to take care of. It'll get done at some time in the not-too-distant future.
▶ 1a0e61 (7) No.353947>>353954 >>354162
http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=monster-girls-2020-monster-date-the-newest-dating-app#comment-7873
Hey ya'll! I'm back with a new story! It was going to be in the writing contest, but that didn't happen. I took too long. Its set in the Monster Girl 2020 setting I made, and its the first of an anthology series I'll be doing in the world.
If anyone is piqued at my setting, don't hesitate to write a story set within it, just make sure its accurate!
▶ 57eb2f (6) No.353954>>353957
>>353947
Nice and cute. I like how it really gives the impression that it grew completely naturally out of the setting, it really fits in well.
▶ 7f9615 (1) No.353957
>>353954
Thank you. Originally the guy was younger and it ended the typical way, but that just felt too forced.
▶ d8fa19 (2) No.353972>>354016 >>354040 >>354151 >>354156
Hey, gonna be writing a somewhat short story. I have here a glorified premise but I'll finish the rest in a few days if anyone's interested:
https://pastebin.com/De5GrQmG
You have received a letter, familiar, yet dripping with slime. Could this really be from your estranged cousin?
▶ d2ef7d (1) No.354016>>354188
>>353972
I like the premise, but the ending seems a little… off. It's like he didn't have anything to write about interacting with the shoggoth or anything after meeting with it.
It's just that what happened to the cousin had to happen before he wrote the letter, so why wouldn't he tell more in the first letter?
▶ 9c2d9d (4) No.354039>>354041
Not quite sure if this is appropriate in thread, but figured some might enjoy it
Stumbled on his author Michael Scott Earle. He writes fantasy themed erotica for guys.
I tried his series Tamer: King of Dinosaurs - it's about a guy who gets kidnapped by aliens and dropped off on a dinosaur filled death world for shits and giggles.
He is pretty quickly picked up into a group of 1 amazon cat girl, 1 spider girl (fully female body with spider legs attached to back), 1 … what would probably pass for an earth elemental girl.
There is romance, there is sex, there is harem and all of it is set into a pretty brutal quest for survival. Each book more girls drop in, promptly fall in love with MC etc…
MC is way over powered and there is a relatively small LITRPG element (apparently aliens implanted a computer into everyone)
So not really based on any of the primary sources of monster girls - but these come seemed to come pretty close due this board's purpose - sexy girls, strong physical likeness to some monster girls, strong emphasis on sex.
The sex is kind of vanilla with a slant of male-dom.
I am also in middle of trying his other series Dragonslayer that so far seems to be about collecting a harem of Dragon-girls - mostly same deal as above.
And by the way, if there are any resources / lists of books that have above elements of sexy monster-girls and actual erotic content - would appreciate links/mentions.
▶ 7c128b (1) No.354040
>>353972
I will wait until your work is complete for a fair review. Until then, I must say that your writing skill is commendable. You deserve more views.
▶ 1a0e61 (7) No.354041>>354043 >>354044
>>354039
I saw some of his work when I was browsing on Amazon for an erotic book where the women are the strange "other" it didn't seem to go very deep into that like I wanted and have seen for a female audience.
Would you recommend his books? The whole "LITRPG" thing is kind of weird and seems to be the only genre where what I'm looking for exists
▶ 9c2d9d (4) No.354043>>354096
>>354041
i've yet to find a litrpg novel that wasn't made significantly worse by everything related to RPG - that said, the Tamer series has relatively little of that. Everyone on the planet gets one power and that power is informed about via an interface. They are softly defined, no serious structure or rules. The same readout has some basic stats but those are more like a basic way to evaluate physical aptitudes.
There is nothing like 'X did Skill 1 attack on enemy. Enemy takes 5 damage' - all the action is portrayed just like your standard action adventure.
So overall, the LITRPG elements are minor and easy to ignore.
As for recommending - well they grabbed me pretty well. The books are 50% tool / base building, 40% action and 10% flirting with a few sex scenes that get 1 to 3 paragraphs of descriptions.
I wouldn't really say the writing stands out in quality compared to stories I've read for free on TFT or literotica but any specific faults there that come to down personal tastes more than some objective critique. One of the girls is comically tsundere (warms up later), the MC is crazy overpowered (takes a while for him to realize), the sex is about 1.5 on a 1 to 10 perversion scale of absolutely vanilla to utter deviancy.
I would recommend it to guys who are interested in pulp adventures with a liberal sprinkling of soft core erotica.
▶ 9c2d9d (4) No.354044
>>354041
The dragonslayer series has no litrpg elements at all - just plain fantasy action adventure with a lot of flirting and a few PG-14 sex scenes.
▶ c36fcd (1) No.354096
>>354043
Curious accidental handjob was the nicest sex scene in the series so far.
▶ 37bdf7 (3) No.354156
>>353972
I’m interested, but don’t let all these (You)s make you overconfident.
▶ 2174b6 (2) No.354162>>354167
>>353947
that hit to close to home at the beginning
mira rip another good waifu CYOA
▶ a01bda (1) No.354167>>354220
>>354162
Sorry, I just chose that name randomly, I don't know the CYOA of which you speak.
So, for those who read it, I have a few other stories I want to write, wondering which should come first
1. Divorced Dad is called up by his ex-wife who is worried about their son dating a monster (Arachne or Girtablilu) the Dad ends up marrying his son's girlfriend's single mom. Son therefore ends up dating his stepsister
2. Empress Desdemona instructs a new assistant who can't stand the vile mana of the many politicians that they meet. (showcases how Mamono can tell a good person from a bad one at a glance)
3. a more direct continuation of Monster Date, but with a focus on new characters, Mr.Wilson and his Special Education (actually all bullies and trouble makers) class in Desdemona High, a finishing school in Texas on the FUK compound
4. In-universe secret document revealing more about the world, the context being that an American spy is sending back sensitive information about the Free Umbral Kingdoms
▶ d8fa19 (2) No.354188>>354334
>>354016 >>354040
>>354151 >>354156
Thanks for the feedback and the advice. Here's the next two letters: https://pastebin.com/ibVzhQZ3
Hopefully the next part will finish this little story.
▶ 7333f7 (1) No.354190>>354194 >>354196
Hey, look. I wrote another story. https://pastebin.com/7vsgtGsQ
It's a bit shorter than my last one, but I still have some ideas left over that I might use for a second part sometime later, who knows.
▶ 1d4a97 (1) No.354194>>354196
>>354190
The language seems a bit stiff and unnatural. Try saying the dialogue out loud. It helps detect when the word choice might be unnatural. Usually its okay to have a character speak that way if its considered an idiosyncratic quirk
▶ 3045c9 (3) No.354196
>>354190
this
>>354194
Apart from that though, it was pretty damn good. I see potential.
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354220>>354238
>>354167
Why not a terrorist one? Or some civil war? Or just a war one? I want to see how they would react to terrorism.
▶ 08145f (1) No.354238>>354245
>>354220
I'm doing the 2020 setting. The terrorist thing might be a good story, but it'd be sad
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354245>>354247
>>354238
I really want to see it, because it'd be interesting. Monsters who have only known 'love' and peace are being blown up by terrorists who don't care about finding a husband, or loving. It'll be a class of ideas and peoples which I'll enjoy.
I find it annoying that these stories are 'the monsters come and happily integrate, and have some free sex'. There's no conflict, tension and anger. No emotion or realism. They all peacefully integrate and no one is unhappy. That's now how it happens. Still, in the world there's no human nationalist groups, segregation or even cultural hatred. Realistically, the monsters would be seen as degenerates who would degrade the values and many extensive decency laws would be passed to control them, causing conflict. The FUK would be the target for conversions, terror attacks, Islamist funding. Most Middle Eastern countries would execute them for even stepping foot due to their degenerate culture and unholiness. Most of Africa as well would segregate them. Even liberal countries would hate them for being too 'whore-like' and 'filthy'. They wouldn't get a free pass. Either they would have to adapt or bad things would happen to them
▶ 1a0e61 (7) No.354247>>354248 >>354249
>>354245
No one is allowed in the FUK at this time, and in the future tourism will only be allowed by specific individuals. The FUK is fully aware of the problems. Also, there is a World War 3 going on in what used to be Europe. The whole population of MGs is not going out to every place imaginable. They are wholly absent from Africa and the Middle East. They tried their trade there and left when they found out it was going nowhere.
MGs stay primarily in places whose culture maked them popular, America, Canada, and the Orient.
If I write a terrorist story, it would be in America or Canada
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354248>>354249
>>354247
Wait. WW3 in Europe. Is this a migrant war? with Putin.
But will there be culture clashes? Will the monsters try and degenerate the society they are allowed to be in, until it is hollow, sexual and vapid.
▶ 1a0e61 (7) No.354249>>354251 >>354258
>>354247
Also, as far as human nationalist groups, this is still mostlt based in real life, the closest thing to that is going to be the altright, and they're just barely holding on to white nationalism I don't think they'd be teaming up with jealous women or violent jihadis to exterminate MGs. If anything they'd bleed members like crazy as they're own members abandoned ship as the world around them fell apart and MGs offered a personal solution.
I could explore that aspect too, as I imagine their biggest opponents would be feminism, not nationalism. But I'm more interested in showing that aspect in the background than front and center. In all of these stories I'll reference real life and how it sucks. But the point of MGs is how they take away the suck. I created the 2020 setting to better orient modern day settings that often ignore what's happening to the world at large. 2020 keeps that perspective, but still focuses on smaller stories, as opposed to the larger geopolitical conflicts.
>>354248
I made a setting, here have a look
touchfluffytail.org/?story=monster-girls-2020
http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=monster-girls-2020-kingdoms
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▶ abbc3a (5) No.354258>>354273
>>354249
I would be more worried about the Christian Right.
Just because your Monsters are anti-abortion and stay pure until marriage doesn't mean that Pastor Jones is going to tell his congregation to get along with literal demons from another dimension.
I mean it's your barbecue and a lot of the stuff like Le God Emperor is meant to be a joke so just keep doing what you do.
▶ 157f99 (6) No.354273>>354276
>>354258
the christian right is technically a leftist boogeyman at best, infact if you read between the lines. in the bible God technically sends demons to test his followers. The vatican does talk about this and they prefer to not torture the thing or whatever is possesing a person with a continuous exorcism, since its an intelligent being under their own definitions.
So any low IQ leftist faggot and post modernist retards are going expect them to do anything but Christianity is way more complex than most ex leftists think. They will run tests, establish scientific methods and if there is a discrepency between demons melting or not melting in the presence of the cross there might be a future reconciliation of sorts. Because the point of christianity is to make more Christians, and get people to live a life that is less about being a selfish nigger and more about charity and following the words of Jesus.
▶ abbc3a (5) No.354276>>354277
>>354273
>the christian right is technically a leftist boogeyman at best
I'm not saying that there's a NWO pushing an insidious Christian agenda, just that there are large bodies of people particularly in the USA who will aggressively force their religious views into politics and society.
>associating Christianity entirely with the Vatican and mainstream Catholicism
>ignoring witch-hunts in Africa, years of violence from the American Religious Right, the entire "we need to give Israel to the Jews in order to start Armageddon" death cult that has taken root in mainstream American Christian thought
> in the bible God technically sends demons to test his followers
Occasionally. At the same time the Apostles warn Christians against spirits explicitly sent by the Devil in order to lead them astray. (1 John 4:1) The notion of "testing" spirits has only one purpose, seeing if they're from God and if they're not they're fundamentally evil. Also let's not forget that early Christians saw the gods and mythological monsters of the Pagan world as demons that happened to be worshiped by unenlightened people, so I doubt that things like Satyrs, Harpies etc will go down well even with the most tolerant of Christians.
I mean you can say what you want about the Vatican, they're cool with aliens and non-Christians at the moment. But millions of other Christians won't exactly look kindly on spooky looking demons and catgirls.
Just my thoughts on why it's easier to write in bullshit sci-fi/fantasy settings instead of bringing modern politics into fiction.
▶ 157f99 (6) No.354277>>354278
>>354276
>I mean you can say what you want about the Vatican, they're cool with aliens and non-Christians at the moment. But millions of other Christians won't exactly look kindly on spooky looking demons and catgirls.
ah and this is where you fail to understand christanity.
Christians are not militant, its been deprogramed out of them if you actually believe that they will take the muslim route then you will see outliers flee these so called extremist groups to go to another congregration that does not want trouble.
Christianity has gotten its enlightenment but if you believe that all religions will react like the muslims then you are hopelessly naive.
▶ abbc3a (5) No.354278>>354279
>>354277
>Christians are not militant
Christianity as a religion isn't militant. However Christianity has been used countless times to justify violence over and over again and there are many people who still do that without a second thought. For a clear example look at the ongoing anti-abortion violence in the USA and other Western nations.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anti-abortion_violence#United_States
I know that you have a murder boner over Islam, but saying that anyone who thinks that some Christians don't commit murder and other violent crimes because of their religion is just a misunderstanding. It's like saying that Islam isn't a religion which has and is used to incite and justify violence against non-believers just because a lot of Muslims, like most Christians, don't commit any acts of religious violence.
>outliers
Not in Middle America and the rapidly growing African and Latin-American Fundamentalist Christian Churches.
▶ 157f99 (6) No.354279>>354280
>>354278
are you really going to use this terror route? look at the muslims there is no such thing as moderates in their group. Christianity is more diverse than you give it credit for there are more moderates and tollerance within its ranks, its the reason why its the most persecuted religion outside the civilized parts of the globe.
You can cry about sunday school faggots being mean but america is way more of a complex situation due to its behavioral sinks and diverse political schemes. That place is a crucible and if you think Christianity is the main reason for these things then you are just being retarded. There is race politics, a surge of automation, militant political atheism, and encroachment of more violent religion taking over the already fragmented christian faith.
▶ abbc3a (5) No.354280>>354281
>>354279
>murder is being mean
>he most persecuted religion outside the civilized parts of the globe
> encroachment of more violent religion taking over the already fragmented christian faith
For someone who seems to think that I'm being naive, you really don't understand much of what occurs outside of the little bubble that's created by your internet ecochamber.
Good luck with your writing bro, but you sincerely need to read a bit more broadly instead of listening to people who only tell you things that you want to hear.
>you think Christianity is the main reason for these things then you are just being retarded
It isn't, but it's certainly a factor and more importantly a means by which violence can be justified.
▶ 157f99 (6) No.354281>>354282
>>354280
you have to remember that the us as it stands has a bad lugenpresse desperate to justify the war on terror, anti christian values, anti society values, inciting race wars, and actively feeding off anti gun narratives.
Understand sometimes a guy that shoots up a place is just a meth addict suffering from a messiah complex. If you actually believe that christians can organize a war against their enemies then you are going to be thoroughly dissapointed.
But continue to be naive, look at all the abortion bombings and you will mostly see lone wolves doing autistic things. No congregration encourages this shit.
▶ abbc3a (5) No.354282>>354284
>>354281
>No congregration encourages this shit
>you will mostly see lone wolves doing autistic things
Calling some one a "lone wolf" or "crazed gunman" is the easiest way to make them and their perspective lose credibility, making it about individuals and not a reflection of society as a whole. Yes, there's certainly a link between mental illness and this violence but people for the most part don't just come up with these ideas on their own, it's a product of the culture and the fundamentalist congregations they're brought up in.
>If you actually believe that christians can organize a war against their enemies then you are going to be thoroughly dissapointed.
Google "The Troubles," if you doubt that people won't use religion as a way to differentiate friend from foe.
▶ 157f99 (6) No.354284
>>354282
there hasn't been anything like the troubles for decades. since the atheists have made it clear that christian apologetics will continue to be a a trend towards the future of the christian faith.
Just face it already the world with its information distribution has gotten more complex and its now easier to find a falseflag if people are capable of seeing the signs,. its now harder to convince a whole demographic to commit mass murder when one of the commandments is to not kill.
There is more convenient mentally ill lurking within the outliers, people who want change by pushing the group towards more violence, Just by looking at the history of the people committing the atrocities you will see a troubled pattern. Drug addiction, snapping due to unemployment, poverty, a history of mental illness within their family history and possibly American government agencies trying to catch radicals by baiting them only for it to backfire and hurt US citizens.
Religion is one of the excuses for these people, but when you have organized terrorism within a demographic then its a whole other thing, man. This is leaning towards Americas complex collection of problems. its gotten easier to just isolate the mannerisms of a demographic and the personal history of retards committing murder in the name of god.
▶ 3045c9 (3) No.354286>>354287 >>354300
Guys, it's a writefag thread. Go somewhere else if you want to talk politics.
▶ 157f99 (6) No.354287>>354298
>>354286
hey the situation is way more complex than people think. the real hilarious hypothetical would be undead actually being healed by crosses only to have the christfags scream in terror as they face a new existential dilemma with their faith.
▶ a00af6 (1) No.354300
>>354286
hola me gusta writing
▶ 5a9b48 (1) No.354301>>354399
>>354298
As my ID changes often, I think it necessary to point out that my last post was the link to my setting and I was not the one arguing about the christian right.
Although honestly I have to agree with 157f99, Christians have their hands full fighting the gay, and have expended almost all of their social capital doing so.
But disregarding that for the moment I've decided to write number 4 first, then number 2, then number 1, and then number 3.
▶ 6e2a40 (3) No.354304>>354305 >>354308
>>354298
I like the idea of the lich being Catholic, but now I'm wondering what Eastern Orthodox and Protestant monstergirls would be. My vote is for Salamander being Protestant due to the work ethic, and for Dark Mages to be EO, since they look like wizards and everyone forgets that they exist. No sectarianism please, this is meant to be in good fun
▶ 72575d (5) No.354305>>354306
>>354304
What would protestant cheshires be like?
▶ 6e2a40 (3) No.354306>>354316
>>354305
They would probably poke your ribs or blow into your ear from half a building away during hymns to trip you up and then to feign innocence when you glare at her.
▶ 1c8403 (2) No.354307
y'all gunna make me have to make a new thread during lunch break
▶ 9c2d9d (4) No.354308>>354315 >>354318
>>354304
I really want someone to write a story about an angel, dark angel and maybe some other celestial kind of monster girl that have been impacted by monster girl mana and converted into semen craving monster girls, but are still trying to put in good faith effort into serving the the core ideals of the original religion.
As in basic preset of the setting would be modern world with MG influx, where god went AWOL long ago and it's not quite certain if he existed in the first place, and there is a dwindling angel cadre that spent last several millennia trying to keep watch over humans via 'individual guiding / guardian angel' kind of effort, sometimes helping, but frequently failing. Than suddenly monster girls show up and the few remaining angels that were still in play are now manifested into physical bodies, desperately lewd, but don't want to give up serving the ideals to which they devoted their entire existence.
So they would all of a sudden have to reconcile trying to help people be better, deal with some of the basic problems of having physical bodies,the MG's constant desire for sex and companionship etc…
I think the concept would be a good setup for a nice mix of serious, erotic and humorous elements.
Like you could have one girl be trying to focus on an average guy she picked as her next guardian angel target, but now she can't just sort of hover in the ether around him, and needs to infiltrate his social circle - and from there it makes sense to seduce him because she needs an outlet for her MG needs… but what if he doesn't handle sudden availability of easy sex and care taking all that graciously?
Another angel might be more of a 'punishment and just desserts' kind of focus and to her it just occurs that delinquents will have a lot less energy to be delinquents when they get 'proactively dated' to exhaustion - so she has her own target and he suddenly has issues with finding a way to get anything done around all the spontaneous rapes that are coming out of nowhere from this crazy chick.
a cupid that is overjoyed that they can now directly get involved to get people together and directly deal with all kinds of bullshit reasons that would make potential romances fizzle out, which as an non-physical angel they couldn't do anything about… but than finds out being originally a 'love' kind of angel and combined with the changes that mamono magic did to her, she ended up being an MG angel on steroids in some respects and has serious trouble restraining herself from raping both sides of the potential couple at the worst possible moment, usually in a way that's traumatically kinky for the relatively inexperienced potential couples she is drawn to.
a dark angel that was trapped for thousand of years out of reach of the human world - and is eager to corrupt the world now that she is free, but quickly finds the world has done way better job than she could ever dream off, to the point of constantly having the reaction like 'okay there is being evil and than there is taking this shit way too far'… And than has a rebel without a cause kind of identity crisis when she is constantly wanting to actually fix some of the bad stuff she keeps finding.
There is so much unexplored territory on the intersection of 'semen craving monster girls' and 'angels trying to be angels'
▶ 1c8403 (2) No.354315
>>354308
Sounds like you got it planned out.
Go listen/read to a good novel then suck up that inspiration and write.
▶ 72575d (5) No.354316>>354317 >>354325
>>354306
What about a puritan cheshire that wants to play pranks on others really bad but has to be really careful about it/hold in her urges because practical jokes are illegal in her society?
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354317
>>354316
>cheshire is made to do jokes but must hold it back
>cheshires have to do it or something will happen
Sounds like a ticking time bomb
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354318
>>354308
See, this is what I want. Conflict, change and growth. Not just happy integration in one step. They have to adapt and can't force their ideas, or else no one would like them.
▶ 6e2a40 (3) No.354325
>>354316
Puritans get a real bad rap. It was actually considered marital abandonment if you didn't have sex with each other enough. But in that scenario, a good prank would be replacing all the Geneva Bibles with KJV editions which would just annoy the shit out of everyone.
▶ 3045c9 (3) No.354334
>>354188
Nice. I like how you've established the narrator's elaborate, florid manner of speaking in order to get away with fully developed prose in the format of a letter.
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354342>>354343
>>353425
Entry 1. 5-26-17.
Huh, everything was just fine….
No it isn't. It wasn't
Everything was, until that final message. That final fucking message!! That one single message just had to….just had to…just had….to…
Keep it together
The final message, before power went out was 'We are coming. Portal construction complete. Synthesis shall begin. We will become one………Your skills and our determination will guide………..humanity and mamono…….prepare yourselves'. The boards were lighting up with activity. Men were, celebrating this. Mostly those fuckers on the monster boards were. Meanwhile evryone else were shocked. Everyboard were trying to figure this shit out. Hell local news agencies reported on these messages. So much for keeping the newfags out huh? Hell the government was starting to tell more after the Nuna Report.Riots slowed down, but still. No one group could do this. No one person could do this……
We were still sure of our grasp that we………we..didn't expect it…
Soon power went our in the South. I had to use flashlights borrowed from Mr Hynes, just to see in my own fucking house. Radios were given around, and the town called a meeting. We were to distribute supplies. Everyone was armed with something, and then…………….
And then it happened. We heard screams from the outside
"Everyone grab a weapon!! We won't fall to these unholy creatures!" That was the pastor, with his trusty shotgun. He was the ballsiest church goer I've seen. He would make it, at least I hoped.
"The south doors have been breached!"
"Get the women and children to safety, unless we want god knows what to happen to them."
"You, James, and Steve, you'll be with me guarding what remains of the doors. We need more time to get them to safety!"
Soon the women and children had weapons, and with some men tried to escape. We didn't know how many were there. We heard massive screams….
"DEMON!"
Immediately I was ordered to accompany the children. "Change of plans, get with the children and find a way out." Really?? I was gonna protect some of the worst brats who were better of……
"Listen Harvey!! I'm not gonna let these kids suffer because of our dumbaseery! I wont let god have to accept little children who never had a life to live. Now pick up a rifle and get killin!!"
We then headed out. We accompanied the kids. They were so young. We thought of dumping them, but we saw their faces. They were either blank or just..sad. They had tears, some blood.
'Good god, am I that shit?"
"No you're not. You've done some things that are shit, but you aren't shit."
Yeah, James was the guy who could make anyone feel better. Hell he helped some of us in our worst time. He better fuckin make it.
Steve was the muscle. The guy who could kick your ass and still be ithcin for one. Never knew why he was our friend, but hey.
The apocalypse doesn't allow beggars of choosers.
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354343
>>354342
I'm gonna add errors purposefully for the sake that it is a journal and will have mistakes. Is that a good idea?
▶ 1a0e61 (7) No.354399>>354406 >>354409 >>354436 >>354437
>>354301
Here are the documents that were intercepted by Mamono before they could get back to America
▶ e2343e (1) No.354406>>354417
>>354399
So its just modern MGE with the same failings
▶ 2174b6 (2) No.354409>>354417
>>354399
What's this sudden spike in quality. Your putting a lot of effort lately
▶ 0419cb (1) No.354417
>>354406
Not exactly. They can have human sons. They fixed it, at the end. But it was a phyrric victory. They came here to solve that. But now they have to navigate geopolitics.
>>354409
I want for people to see my setting the way I do. So I'm making more material
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354436>>354452
>>354399
Please let this leak to the world. I can't wait until humanity realizes what they're really dealing with. It'll be very interesting.
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354437>>354452
>>354399
What program did you use?
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354438>>354452
WW3: The War for the Future
▶ f929f4 (1) No.354449>>354451
Gracious hosts, please hear my requests
1. There was an old alt WW1 type story where a human was stuck sort of helping an enemy centaur after a battle. if this rings a bell and you have a link, please provide it.
2. Are there any stories where a sherohibi is out-sherohibi'd? The human watches her from afar for some time and then works up the courage to talk to her, presenting cookies or something like that, laced with spirit energy. when she bites the cookie he exclaims that she has been claimed by him and laughs maniacally while she looks on all befuddled and perhaps a little upset with herself for falling for it.
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354451
>>354449
>Out-sherohibi'd?
Is that even possible??
▶ 1a0e61 (7) No.354452>>354465
>>354438
while there is a WW3 scenario going on. that's not the alliances present.
>>354437
Photoshop
>>354436
If it leaks, you can bet there will be more of the grit and grime as so many people in this thread want to see happen, as the knowledge that they wiped the humans from their own world (even if it was totally by accident) would see those anti-monster sentiments rise up into a coherent movement, which there are none right now. Only general superstition in Africa, disdain for scantily-clad women in power in the middle east, and hatred for exotic women taking away men from Feminism.
So I'm probably not going to let it leak in the official setting unless I write a whole long story about it.
▶ b6af81 (12) No.354465
>>354452
This is if the paper releases. 20 years after the event
▶ dcf44e (2) No.354496
I was late to making a new thread but someone got me.
https://8ch.net/monster/res/354457.html
Please make a new thread for the religious discussion because it drowns out the stories.
▶ e872d8 (1) No.367429
Anyone binned/capped that one alp story? I only remember the Alp being described (by pic) as Etna from Disgaea.
I think the title included "my friend XXXX" but that's about all i recall so I cant quotesearch it in google