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Opinion on a file i made? Anonymous 01/09/19 (Wed) 04:18:11 No.53502

I admit im still learning. I made this file because i was inspired by the PABP

I want to get better and improve lol.

https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph5c079d73bce30

Anonymous 01/09/19 (Wed) 07:39:32 No.53513

It’s ok? I feel the rhyming should either be the focus, or used not at all, it really takes me out of it personally. Also, if you mention images the file should really utilize them, though I can see why you did not in this case. Keep it up though, not a bad sample but nothing really special however.

Anonymous 01/09/19 (Wed) 16:03:55 No.53540

Good start.

Anonymous 01/13/19 (Sun) 23:04:17 No.53768

Don't hesitate to post again, I'll follow your work for sure

Anonymous 04/17/19 (Wed) 11:30:27 No.58301

https://8ch.net/hypnoanarchy/