No.66348
https://mega.nz/#F!qDBDUQAB!P0dq3j9sM4i8NuS4fDfdqw
Finally finished a demo for the game. I know I haven't posted here in a bit while I was working on it but here it is. It's a bit short as I've had to pay for a lot of it out of bi weekly paychecks but I hope you at least enjoys what there.
Obviously I have to work on a few things, and I plan on adding some side stuff as well as a prologue if I get the revenue to, but most important is unifying the art styles between sprites (need new sprite artist) and CGs (CG artist doesn't do sprites unfortunately).
Any and all criticism is welcome and appreciated, but please try to be constructive. Not too much to jack off to atm but it's a start.
Hope you guys enjoy it and I'll keep you updated on what I work on, though art really does slow the pace of it.
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No.66349
do you expect me do download a game i don`t even know what it is about?
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No.66350
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No.66353
>>66348
Not really liking how you've set up the story
Can't you just set the game at the Emperor's Palace on Terra so all the Primarchs can be present without any problems?
Also instead of a warp curse turning them all into women, just make all of them straight up women, including the Emperor, but all the other marines are males and are loyal to them like how a son is loyal to his mother.
The aim or goal of the game then, changes to just being a marine that is part of a crusade which aims to conquer a brand new system and while doing that, earn the favor of the various Primoms and the Empress at the Palace. This is where the gameplay comes in.
Of course, you are not an ordinary marine, but a brand new experimental marine created with the combined gene-seeds of all the Primoms and the Empress herself. Being recently created, you are kind of young compared to the typical marine, but they have given you a special marine armor that allows to equal or even surpass the capabilities of a typical marine while you are still at a young age.
All the Primoms and the Empress admit you are adorable and cute but have their own different ways of treating you as just another regular marine.
You then have to improve your relationship with each of them or just the ones that you like. And they all have different conditions that fit their personalities and character which ties into the gameplay. (For example, one of them could be impressed by winning more and more battles, while another could be impressed by giving her artifacts you find as spoils of war, and yet another becomes impressed only if you fight a certain way during battles)
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No.66357
>>66353
Or you could just play as a chaos worshiper working on corrupting them to becoming sex crazed maniacs
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No.66358
For the love of god do something about the UI its absolutely disgusting
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No.66360
Oh god you went with the second artist didn't you, jesus fuck why. The retards bitching about the first one looking anime while having about 10 times the detail are fucking retarded why would you ever pick the one with lower quality art
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No.66362
>>66357
I was going to add something like that to my post where you can pick and choose to improve your relationship with some of them the "wrong" way, eventually causing one type of endgame scenario where you have to choose between siding with the loyalist Primoms or the traitor Primoms, but I didn't because that would have just felt like more ideas-guy intellectual masturbation. However, since you already mentioned it…
We could even have a couple Eldar matriarchs sneaking around the palace, trying to collect info while badly disguised as humans (even though absolutely everyone except you is fooled by their disguises somehow) and you can improve your relationship with them too (you just want to live in a peaceful 40k universe with all your mommies)
A mature sisters of battle character wouldn't hurt either.
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No.66364
>>66349
I made it pretty accessible from a new person perspective, didn't put too much jargon in that that isn't obvious and confusing.
>>66353
Mostly did it this way to develop the individual characters more and have them semi-independent. I felt having them all start in a house would feel too generic harem-esque. There is going to be your ship / fleet which you can eventually have girls you complete join you own so they can interact with you / each other there. It is a bit ambitious but why not.
>>66357
Corruption is patrician and planned.
>>66358
I know this pain, but I can't afford much more than CGs atm or it will just be delayed more. I've tried making my own but it just doesn't work out. If you have any advice for it I'm all ears, but I really can't budget it atm.
>>66360
I went with the artist that did pic related, I do kind of want the faces edited a bit since they are a bit different from what I wanted but I don't have that edit money atm. The other guy was taking 3 weeks to do a sketch then kind of just vanished on me lol.
>>66362
Xenos / side girls will also be in it though much smaller roles (Also SoB didn't exist at the time, but time is irrelevant to the warp.)
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No.66365
>>66364
>I went with the good artist
Jesus christ did he get someone else to draw that image or is he just being a lazy nigger, everything about the models look like playdough and or someone who didnt use paint thinners on their models. Oh and the game crashes like a mother fucker
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No.66382
>>66365
What points does it crash? I went through it a few times and it isn't working out.
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No.66383
>>66382
And it wasn't crashing for me*
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No.66384
Here's a fixed version with arrows visible and the fade transition fixed, please report more stuff as you find it.
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No.66385
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No.66389
>>66364
>artist's sign
>on a game art
cuck
>ren'py
>crashes
fag
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No.66414
>>66364
i believe your heart is in the right place
come what may, stay stronk based 40kdev
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No.66427
>>66389
That one wasn't game art, none of the game art does. And I'm pretty sure I fixed the crashes but if I missed something tell me.
>>66414
Thanks friend
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No.66610
I like what you have done so far and am looking forward to how your project develops.
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No.66925
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No.66930
>>66925
That's a shame. What I liked about the previous artist was the attention to detail. Gonna be hard to replaced.
Okay, so I got comments.
1. is already drawing a comic and has commissions closed.
Lighting is okay but I'm worried about proportions and details like the face and legs.
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No.66932
>>66930
2. is an experienced artist making 2.5k on patreon. And their art is a good blend of western animu ascetics but still has enough detail to be sexy. This would be a good choice if you can get em.
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No.66933
>>66932
3. is a Brazilian artist not accepting commissions again and while they can do the line art of a character quite well, I'm concerned about the shading, specifically the red on the feet, knees and breasts. Doesn't look like natural skin color.
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No.66934
>>66933
4. is a Russian artist who also does furry shit. Colouring is fine but worried about line art. Something about the face structure stands out to me. It's passable but I wouldn't pick it.
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No.66935
>>66934
5. Is a furry artist who's draws alot of WoW porn. Commissions currently open. They're pretty fucking good at what they do to be honest, good lighting, line art, color and shading and so forth. My only complaint would be the body proportions as this artist tends to draw BBW. Has some that arn't but you know what you're in for.
So IMO: Get 2 if you can, they seem the perfect replacement and can probably draw OP Lion >>66348 like this again, which means you might not notice the change in art plus I like his style. If can't get for long term project, 5 seems good if you want the detailed characters. Otherwise maybe 4? But get 2.
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No.66937
>>66930
>>66932
>>66933
>>66934
>>66935
Thanks for input, I tend to agree with you. 4 is a bit odd in some but has a lot of styles. 3 I do agree with the shading, which some artists tend to be bad with. 2 I do hope responds but he is a popular artist. and 1 is decent but its one of the ones I can afford better. 5 I do like but I agree a lot of it is thiccer, so I'd have to see how they do slimmer girls.
TY for input though.
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No.66953
>>66383
Just downloaded it and clicking gallery will crash game.
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No.66954
>>66953
Also after being told that you can go to rest you will say "As you wish, insert_here_your_name"
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No.66957
>>66953
And there is some sort of error when you try to continue hunting.
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No.67011
>>66935
I love cupcake's art. She is one of the few that does the very specific kind of chub I prefer, that being short and cutesy.
Every time I see an 8-foot-tall obese woman with a comically small head, I want to punch the artist. Why is so much BBW like that?
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No.67015
>>67011
Very cute, the fat one needs a strong dicking.
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No.67018
This is kinda shit, there's nothing to do.
It needs a UI tracking her stats at the very least.
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No.67019
>>67018
Actually the game is fucking shit.
It's very boring repeating the same shit over and over wondering if it's having any effect at all.
Fuck you and fuck your game.
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No.67022
>>66954
>>66957
Will look into this, thought I had fixed the second one and the first I havent heard of.
>>67018
It is very short unfortunately, but it will always start that way. There is a way to track stats, with the book on the table in your room.
>>67019
I do have to add what series of events so it's a bit easier. Again, it is short so there isn't all that much to do at the moment as I try to work on it. The goal is each event has 3 tiers which are different dialogues and pictures. I do plan on adding GUI and what not when I can, but again, I'm trying to do the best with what I have.
I do appreciate the criticism though.
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No.67023
>>67022
You're an ok guy, good luck.
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No.67024
>>66953
Gallery I thought I disabled, but I plan on implementing it next patch, though it may not be the prettiest.
>>66954
Do you happen to remember where this happened, there are a few it applies to and Im having difficulty finding it.
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No.67096
>>67024
>Do you happen to remember where this happened
It's in the introduction, last thing you say to her before going to sleep and getting to control your character.
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No.67448
The concept has been visualized, that's more than most so called "devs" do before quitting. Proud of you OP.
This has potential now that it has feet.
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No.67645
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No.67761
based 40k dev making the game a thing, let it be known i don"t have my hopes up for anything but i wish you to go far my nigga.
Also robot gf when ?
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No.67767
>>66364
I've been playing the demo and have a few suggestions/feedback.
This is largely obvious stuff, but it's what I noticed.
What's up with the long delay between waking up in the morning and being able to click anything?
Get some better-looking arrows bruh.
Get rid of the outline around marines' bodies.
I know the gift shop is WIP, but please make conversation selections loop back to the main menu, OR return to the gift list if you're buying something. It's tedious to keep re-entering the shop.
Make Lynn's stats visible, or add dialogue cues that you're making progress, i.e., increasing love/obedience by one. (separate from unlocking tiers)
Add unique dialogue lines for failing to meet obedience checks for the sexual acts, instead of a boilerplate "Get. Out. Now." Maybe even a bad/death ending.
Lynn's love is currently way too easy to accumulate. By repeating Talk Two, I can just farm up love and make her "happily" call me darling. She should not be willing to call me darling; I basically did nothing to build our relationship so far, and she doesn't respect me in any other situation. (e.g., I can call her "darling", but not by her first name???) Love progress should be made much more difficult, not reaching a top level until you've nearly finished with the character.
Make the "User Input" option the highest difficulty. It's just a cheat, basically. If you screwed up spelling your own name at the start of the game, that's on you. Players should not have the ability to type in "My Lord", if she's not willing to say it otherwise.
I don't know what you're planning, but having to click on the throne to talk to Lynn is just redundant. There's literally nothing else to do in this room.
Add dialogue flavor to the "Offer Gift" option in the menu based on Lynn's anger, and the value of your gift. If her anger is 6 and was on the verge of killing you outright the day before, you should not be able to walk in and start handing her chocolate bars until she incrementally calms down. It just feels like a button that says "Decrease anger -1".
Have her reject low quality gifts when angry, and generally have more personality about it.
You say that you have three tiers for each action planned, and that's great for a sense of progression. But it needs some replayability. If you changed the dialogue of the Tier 1 action as soon as the Tier 2 action is unlocked (Tier 1 becomes normalized somewhat as Lynn is desensitized), it would actually reward you for choosing Tier 1 actions again. Right now, why would I ever choose the Tier 1 action again if the next tiers are hotter?
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No.67876
>>66383
>>66385
"TypeError: The Gallery object is not callable"
Gallery crashes the build
Intro section: "Honor guard approaches, you can tell by the decorations on his armor"
Sprite has no decorations at all. It's just fucking black armor.
Wait what? I attacked them? *confusion*
"I don't look like one of the traitor legions" Riiight. This is a civil war, and there were individual defections. Not wearing the wrong armor shouldn't give me enough goodwill to see the Primarchess.
If this is during the Heresy why would Lynn accept being suborned to some no-name? I suppose being turned into a woman might cast suspicion on the Primarchs but still…
Immediately before being dismissed the following exchange occurs:
Lynn: For now, you may rest
Lynn: I shall see you tomorrow for our first meeting
[Name]: As you wish, [Name]
That is…probably not intended.
There is a delay between the broom closet image loading and the ability to select things during a new day. Please look at that section and recode it to not have a delay. The delay is skipped when the Skip function is used so I think it's part of the fade-out animation getting in the way
In the shop selecting the Clothes option closes the store
Also Rumors and Nevermind in the Shop Select and Gift Select menus, all of these should return to the previous menu instead.
If you purchase a Calibinite Dagger with 30 coins you will buy the dagger and then get yelled at for not having enough money. This won't happen if you have 40 coins. This means that the 'check coinage' code is bugged slightly, the 'not enough money' text triggers After the line reducing your money.
I'd suggest simply moving it up above the purchase successful lines.
When I use Tongue1 and stop the first time the image stays with her tongue out and "Image 'Lynn annoyed2' not found" appears in the top left. This is clearly just a typo error or forgetting to put the image into the folder
The debug menu sends you back to the 'choose debug or leave' option. This is stupid, add a 'go back' option to the Debug menu itself and have it send you back to the start of the question.
Also either remove the 'debug menu or go back' menu or add a third option. It's just pointless clicking, same with the Throneroom.
Add a '[Obedience/Anger/Love] has increased by X' notification. Fuck going into the debug menu and checking to see what changed.
Chastisement One, if you berate her further and then allow her to leave, the picture won't be removed yet the small picture will appear. Pic related
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No.70919
Well, that didn't last long.
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No.71092
Is this still being developed?
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No.72862
>>71092
I hope so; Lynn a cute
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No.72863
>>71092
He is working with Soul, the guy that left the dumpster fire of the KND game but apparently he has been unresponsive as of late due to Corona.
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