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▶Anonymous 10/27/18 (Sat) 17:31:59 No.86529 [Watch Thread][Show All Posts]

Is it good?

▶Anonymous 10/27/18 (Sat) 19:53:19 No.86537>>86658 >>86681 >>86682

starts out good, writing and pacing wise, but turns into kind of a clusterfuck near the later chapters. i suppose the author did it to keep it interesting but the tone of the earlier chapters gets thrown out the window. all the set up she did to have it seem realistic and then it just turns into animals fighting for w/e. it's still interesting at the beginning though. worth giving it a try

▶Anonymous 10/29/18 (Mon) 11:54:25 No.86658

>>86537

Spot on. I'm hopeful for the new arc, though

▶Anonymous 10/29/18 (Mon) 15:14:31 No.86661

O MY MEATY LEG

▶Anonymous 10/29/18 (Mon) 18:17:21 No.86667>>86669 >>86709

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A DULL ACHE FROM THE HUNGER OF FLESH

▶Anonymous 10/29/18 (Mon) 18:34:11 No.86669

>>86667

A DEEP BURNING INSIDE FOR HOSECOCK.

▶Anonymous 10/29/18 (Mon) 22:15:13 No.86681>>86709

>>86537

The new arc where he's living next door with the sheep is looking to be really good though

▶Anonymous 10/29/18 (Mon) 22:42:04 No.86682

>>86537

it's alright but it keeps jumping between characters/plotlines/genres/tones in the most frustrating and confusing manner

▶Anonymous 10/30/18 (Tue) 14:00:16 No.86709>>86711

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>>86667

yeah see this is one of many parts that it starts to get ridiculous. it's basically dbz type shit, and they dont even manage to keep the fight going in a serious tone so it throws it all off. frustrating when you just want this climax to conclude in a satisfying way, which it really didnt.

>>86681

legosi lives next door to pina now? i frantically read thru and up until the end of the fight and stopped there. i guess i should pick it up again since i like pina-kun

▶Anonymous 10/30/18 (Tue) 15:09:46 No.86711

>>86709

Nah, a female sheep.

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