No.9324
Do you want demon pussy or not?
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No.9325
>>9324
>mystery box available
You had one job OP
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No.9326
>>9324
They where imprisoned
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No.9333
>>9324
i wANt a lot of things…
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No.9335
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No.9339
>blah blah blah now someone owns you boiiiiiii
GAY!
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No.9340
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No.9341
>all these nonbuilds
is reddit leaking? does that explains the shitposting? anyway.
>build
So you're saying that there's a demon laying siege to my mind, and that to repel it, I should sign a pact with another one. DID YOU AT ANY POINT SAY THIS OUT LOUD TO REALISE HOW UTTERLY HOPELESSLY MORONIC THAT SOUNDS. My subconscious is clearly a dumbass.
<roll 10
now I can have all of them as my loyal harem, and sculpt the multiverse and heavens to my liking. gg no re.
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No.9346
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No.9348
>>9324
Tok, I know you make a lot of cyoas but this one's shit. Stop calling them "Mana Points". Simply calling the currency you have "Magical Power" or "Magical Capacity" with the reason being you can't handle more than X Magics in your body makes the cyoa way better since it's now easier to believe that there is a limit. I don't understand what splitting mana up in 4 sections is. Why couldn't the subconscious split it up in 1 million sections?
Another thing is don't use "you" so much. It's bad practice to use the same word over and over again but also you don't know what the player will do, so it's far better to just say "X happens", rather than "You do X", as then the reader fills in the gaps in there heads. But with "you" being thrown around constantly, I can only think "I wouldn't do that".
The reject deal option is far better than any of the succubi because none of them seem like nice people to be around. The only good waifu is Lilliel and Selorah.
The world is also very closed. There isn't much left for you to think about after you take the deal because it seems like the Succubus is leading the show and you just force the player down a linear path, since there is no mentioning of fighting over demons or doing things together. Mundane actions like "Cuddling" don't count because anyone can cuddle, the succubus should have some negative quirk about them and also something to accomplish. A good example is the nightmare waifu cyoa, where there is a specific challenge to each waifu. If you're going for the standard create-a-scenario then there isn't enough options either, you should aim for the gentle femdom level of options at least.
About denying the player any agency, you've even told you what the player thinks/says on the reject the deal option. I don't swear like a 12 year old and just saying "No! Fuck you! Fuck this deal,…" is childish. Simply leaving it at "Reject the Deal" and having nothing else be there is good enough. Having more text on the screen does not make it better. What you want is a balance of something that is fun/interesting to read yet doesn't take half a page.
To add character to the girls. Give each of them a different colour. For Example Valkia would have crimson text. Look at Zodiac waifu if you want an example of it done well. Don't make the colours neon, and don't make them too bright, keep it at dark/pale shades.
Crappy cyoa tbh
>build
Saying that. I pick Lilliel, the 2 way trip ability from the top, and all Lilliel's powers. Just kidding, I rolled a 10
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No.9350
This thread has officially been shitposted into oblivion. Thanks Reddit.
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No.9351
>>9350
aren't you going to post your build sunny?
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No.9352
 | Rolled 7 (1d10) |
>>9324
My ancestors deserved a worse fate for being complete idiots and i'd rather not be a slave. I'm going to kill the "Gods" and maybe this clone of me because he'd rather be a slave. Rolling because i have to for some raisin.
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No.9353
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No.9358
| Rolled 2 (1d10) |
>>9324
Rolling for 10!
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No.9359
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No.9364
Unpleasable losers who will never get demon pussy.
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No.9366
| Rolled 10 (1d10) |
>>9324
give me a 10
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No.9367
| Rolled 10 (1d10) |
>>9366
get (polite sage)
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No.9368
>>9367
double ascended. cool.
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No.9369
>>9324
Boy it sure makes all these cyoas real easy not being into women and all
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No.9371
This cyoa is not as good as it could have been. Don't get lazy, Tok.
In other news, first fucking roll, rtdudes be blessed.
So, I guess, now I know there are demons? And I've unlocked 'true magic'? So I'll get rid of demons, because those are fucking demons, man, and we gots to kill some demons. Then I use my magic to be the next comedian/person levitator Copperfield type dude. Then I live a long prosperous life helping the people around me, trying to make the world a better place, and getting sweet gains.
tl;dr don't put omnipotence in an ADVENTURE game because doing whatever you please is not an adventure, adventure comes from overcoming adversity and finding ways to deal with problems.
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No.9378
>>9324
N'Kari. I like her attitude, and she's one of the most lewd options. I'll take her Lover's Touch power.
Azura. Again, great attitude, and exotic blue skin. I'll take Allure of the Sea.
Morathi. I always had a thing for female vampires. I'll choose Endless Wealth as a power.
I'll use the fourth point for two-way travel between the real world and a fictional world.
Can I take a mistress without taking a power? If so:
Selorah. I like the thought of being licked all over.
Cydaea, just for fun.
Glynevere, for some slightly more aggressive femdom.
Vaermina, because I can't resist a succubus who says she'll "violate my body" and "milk me dry" and promises to pleasure me better than anyone else. Might be fun to have she and N'Kari compete over who can fuck me better.
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No.9382
eh I feel like each of the succubi could have been a little more developed.
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No.10203
>>9324
The mystery box ruins it
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No.10205
>>9350
post a build you nigger
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No.10235
| Rolled 2 (1d10) |
>>9324
No I want A demon pussy (roll 8). Rolling is stupid in this CYOA though
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No.10269
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