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 No.7713

Another pocket one but tell me what the dimension would be like.

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 No.7717

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This CYOA needs a bit of work. I get that you want us to describe our world to you but the options here are so basic that it doesn't really get the imagination up and running.

It's not "this, that, or the other thing", it's just "how much of this, how much of that, and how much of the other thing?"

Can't say I didn't have fun with it. The fun's just a bit limited, is all.

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 No.7718

>Transportation: Portal

Seems safe enough, and it'll let me bring things/people with me if I ever want to.

>Magic: Common

It's fun. I don't want as much combat magic as I want fun little enchantments or quality of life stuff.

>Tecnology: The World of Tomorrow

Better tech never hurts, maybe it'd be a post-scarcity sort of society where I can just be a neet having fun all day.

>Dangerosity:Comfy

Comfy.

>Lewdness: Perfume of Eroticism

Just make everything look good while keeping the attitude towards it mostly the same

>Population: Humans+Lewd Races

Give me catgirls, do these even count as lewd races? I just want something that purrs while getting fugged and goes in heat sometimes, NO CAT BOYS!

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 No.7719

I think the options here are perfectly fine, but I am left wanting for something to *do* in my new world. This needs addition, not revision.

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 No.7721

>>7719

This TBH, it's a decent piece so far, but it could do with a little more. Keeping it more or less as it is and adding a few plots/goals (either as a pick your own, or have them chosen with a points total assigned to the choices) and it would be significantly improved. That being said though.

>Portal

>No magic

>The world of tomorrow

>Bright

>Ambient Depravity

>Humans, lewd Creatures

OK, so it's basically a fetishy star trek, but hey, if I'm moving there I can definitely think of worse places to live.

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 No.7723

play with the dlc wtf >>7722

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 No.7724

>>7719

>>7721

Just letting the player pick their own role in the world would make it go a long way.

>God: You rule the dimension, and the world bows to your every whim and fancy. Worship optional.

>Observer: You can choose to view the world from a macromanagement perspective as though you were playing god, or micromanage individuals. Watch relationships unfold. Watch wars play themselves out. Watch how people evolve over the course of millenia.

>Citizen: You are nothing more than an average person in your world. Or maybe you're an exceptional individual (in a good way) who leads the way to riches and glory. Or maybe you're an exceptional individual (in a bad way) who gets raped by monster girls every hour of every day. The world may or may not be your oyster.

>>7723

Oh shit, we thought the same thing.

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 No.7734

>transportation

portal

>magic

common

>technology

tomorrow

>danger

grey

>lewdness

depravity

>races

humans, fantasy, droids, lewd (just copy and paste from Coc)

not bad, but kinda lacking.

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 No.7736

Hmm, I agree this needs something a little more… position in the world is one thing, but I think another good addition would be to add a 'gain powers' CYOA onto this, powers that only work in the pocket dimension most likely, but something so that you can change things around after the world is created, or get a head start at being a great hero or whatever sounds good. As it is at the moment you create the world like you want it, but don't necessarily have anything to do in it. Maybe add a 'quests' section or the like?

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 No.7770

>>7736

Maybe give us some antagonists?

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 No.7781

>portal

I want to take things through with me and I could secure either end like the gate room in SG1

>standard magic

Mages are seen as valuable but potentially dangerous, lots of different disciplines and schools, a few of them dangerous. Most magic is more subtle than blasty.

>ancient tech + future tech

The ancient tech is a mix of the ship they landed in, and the ruins of several other civilizations more advanced than the current tech level. The stuff people know how to make more of is standard cyberpunk stuff, some biopunk stuff, some cthulhupunk stuff that most people don't have access to, a few random inventions from other universes (feelies, personality transcription, repulsorlifts). Technology is usually designed to be practical because people aren't all idiots (so land battleships are rarely if ever built because they eff up roads and are huge targets for close air support, non-enchanted armor has realistic coverage and no spikes to grab onto or restrict movement, etc.). Aesthetic varies between nations, manufacturers, factions and subcutlures, baseline stuff looks like retro-80s future gear, made less bulky where applicable.

>grey dangerosity

There are good, bad and ugly people, most are just trying to do their thing. Lots of competing governments, systems of government, other factions.

>perfume of eroticism

Lotsa shortstacks, amazons, nerdy girls and milfs. The action's pretty vanilla but there's lots of it.

>humans, fantasy races, xenos (Vulcans, Trill, Twi'Leks, some aliens that aren't for sexual but look cool), robots (AI is a crapshoot, some models rebel more than others, there aren't as many of them as in most settings because of the broader range of organic abilities), lewds (almost every kind of monstergirl, lots of kemonomimi)

An alien ship that was collecting samples from multiple worlds crashed there, the survivors and natives eventually (like millennia later) made peace and built a society/ecosystem. So a ton of variety without it having to make sense in terms of evolution and ecological niches. Some places there's discrimination, some places not. Most sociopolitical systems or species have a place either to themselves or where they're the favored group, although in the case of species, most of these places are small and not very powerful.

technology could use dieselpunk and age of sail options

needs options for divine magic/nature of the gods too

shape of the world/overall physics would be good too (globe, flat, multi-tiered, torus, etc.)

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 No.7826

>entrance: portal

>magic: none, or maybe rare (but really rare)

>technology: forgotten technology/medieval/industrial (electricity can't work, but used to with a level of "modernity", but afterwards it can't develop further)

>world: grey (normal), but comfy for me (role DLC)

>lewdness: average, or maybe perfume of eroticism (maybe people are more beautiful, but only 50/50 and it depends, especially on the region)

>humans, mostly (mixed with vast swathes of terra incognita which make it be "I am legend")

>role: first class citizen (I am immortal, every time I die I can resurrect. I also have a way of always having food) (a thing that gives me 1kg/s of matter, any matter, including food, plus it can change shape a.k.a. be a sword or whatever, but the matter can't be alive)

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 No.10583

>>7713

>Portal

>Common Magic

>World of Tomorrow

>Comfy

>Perfume of Eroticism

>Races

Lewd

Aliens

Droids

Fantasy

No humans

In terms of world design I usually wouldn't choose "comfy". It's boring. However, given the high magic, high tech, and the fact that I don't have any of it myself, it's simply too dangerous to pick anything else. There's plenty of ways I can BENEFIT from high magic and tech, especially in a comfy world, but there's nothing in the CYOA to give ME magic, and I have to acquire any tech the hard way.

Thanks to the magic and tech, I fully expect most of the CYOA basics (be the girl, immortality, waifu etc) will be available to me. Maybe someone can polymorph me or brew up an eternal youth potion, or maybe someone can stick me in a droid body. Whatever the case I should be able to find what I'm looking for here.

No "boring" races. Absolutely no humans unless they come in through my portals. No elves, dwarves etc unless they overlap with the lewd races coming straight out of the MGE (but remember it has to be comfy too).

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 No.10605

as the creators of this new pocket dimension do we get extra powerful magic or longer lifespans?

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 No.10607

>>10605

You create nothing, you're just the idea guy. Anyway, it doesn't say you get anything so assume not. However, you can at least have magic/tech used ON you. With a comfy world and high magic/tech you can get whatever you want one way or another.

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 No.15236

Welcome to GOR

Transportation: Virtual Reality

Magic:Rare

Technology: FERAL world

Dangerosity:BRIGHT

Lewdness:Ambient Depravaty

Population: Lewd races

All the fun of being a sexy Odin like being that have knowledge from the future.

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