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File: c9756b6655a2081⋯.jpg (195.62 KB, 1200x900, 4:3, undergrads.jpg)

 No.1025157

Undergrads creators trying to fund a series finale movie through kickstarter. Assuming this thing gets funded and made what are some things you'd like to see from it?

http://archive.is/Wby4l

 No.1025158

Never heard of it. So no. Don't care to see more base on just that image.


 No.1025159

>>1025157

Heavy criticism on modern Leftwinged college politics without the creators apologizing one bit for any faux-journalist that gets offended over the show. As well as Gimpy's take on the shitty new Star Wars films.


 No.1025191

Oh shit, I loved this show. Now I cringe hearing the theme song but…damn if they had way to support other than shitty fucking KS I'd probably donate. I'd be like 80% ashamed I did but I would.

The show was really tied to the time with the music and the tech. And the college experience is so irredeemably fucked by SJW bullshit now I can't imagine the show working at all in current year+x.

Nitz would have been booted out by a 300lbs demigender RA for 'stare raping' Kimmie in the first week.


 No.1025246

>>1025159

Holy shit, THIS.

The movie should overall be a well presented argument against modern campus politics and activism and how they are ruining both education and the "college experience" of old. Meanwhile Gimpy goes off on a B-plot one man quest against the Disney Star Wars and the new "fans". The two plots reconnect with Gimpy making an unhinged and epic rant against progressive politics invading and ruining his hobby, but it doubles as the capstone of the argument against progressive politics invading and ruining the school.


 No.1025247

>>1025246

>>1025157

I love both of you.


 No.1025252

File: 09cd851bd2cb633⋯.jpg (209.35 KB, 1013x1200, 1013:1200, 1491185007271.jpg)

>>1025246

>>1025191

I decided to try writing a quick treatment.

Nitz is the main protagonist and audience surrogate so we see the unfolding madness of Progressivism through his eyes; his normal campus life and efforts to win over Kimmie (or maybe Jessie) is interrupted by new students arriving who are all majoring in various Feminist Dance Theory type majors and start shitting up the campus with wild accusations and activism over nothing. Kimmie was always a bleeding heart and gets swept up in it and so naturally Nitz gets dragged along for the ride too, without really committing to any it apart from some lip-service to fit in.

Quickly the accusations start flying; The Dougler gets accused of sexual assault and gets hauled off, never to be seen again. This strikes Nitz as out of character and he is skeptical, but the Dougler was always sort of an annoying douche so he doesn't object. Nitz encounters Cal naturally drawn to the grouping of mostly-females and is already parroting the typical feminist talking points, having been talked into labeling himself as an "ally" by some reasonably-attractive pink hair looking to get into his pants.

Then Rocko runs afoul of the progressive brigade and seconds after he's opened his mouth to say something about fat chicks, he's been ordered into mandatory consent training classes. Rocko proves hilariously impervious to their indoctrination: the sexism simply runs too deep in him, and the feminists are soon pulling their hair out in frustration.

At the second act, the leader of the pink-haired feminists corners Cal away from the others to get some of his D. Cal isn't interested but obliviously falls into sex with her as he always does… but when they are caught post-coitus by the other progressives, the Pinko panics and loudly accuses Cal of raping her. Cal denies it but doesn't have any way to change the mob's mind. Shortly after Rocko applies his newly acquired consent training in the worst way possible and is also accused of sexual harassment, even though he did nothing technically illegal beyond making a woman feel grossed out. Finally, bowing to sheer peer pressure (because she's always been quite weak willed) Kimmie is convinced that even Nitz, the guy who would walk over coals for her, has sexually objectified her and deserves to be cast out of the school. Around this time Gimpy suffers his own misadventure with the old SW fans facing off against the new SW fans, and returns to find his friends all facing expulsion and maybe criminal charges. At this low point the guys, who are in their senior year, cross paths with a similar looking group of highschool grads getting a campus tour and considering apply to this college. After seeing the sorry state of our heroes and what they've been reduced to, they immediately change their minds and declare that they are going to look for work in a trade, do a year abroad, sign up for the army, ect. Our protagonists muse that all they have to show for their years at the school is a mountain of looming debt. A brief cut to Kimmie and the other female characters has them wondering aloud why there aren't any boys to dance with at their school social, and annoyed by the lesbians making vulgar advances towards them.

Gimpy gives his rousing anti-SJW screed to kick off the third act, thinking that his friends are just as upset about Star Wars and missing the point that they take his rallying speech to be about their campus situation. Lead by Nitz, the boys do some activism of their own and organize a tiki-torch lit rally to stand up for themselves and the other maligned old guard of the school. With a little detective work they also get evidence that show the Feminazi basically raped Cal without any sort of consent. As the mob of feminists meet and clash with the mob of maligned male students, Cal grows a spine (and a brain) long enough to publicly call out his rapist in front of her followers, causing the feminist mob to turn against each other and eat itself.

In short cut aways to Gimpy's side story, he finds help in an unlikely ally… his old nemesis "Spud", the leader of the Trekkie nerds. They now have a common enemy: JJ Abrams, who has ruined both of their franchises. They unite (at least temporarily) and win back their campus from the Disney-Wars kids, declaring their abritrarily determined golden age of fandom to be supreme forever more.

In the wrap up, with the feminist leader shamed out of town and the marxist professors fired, the witless female students return to their senses and make peace with their old boyfriends and romantic interests. They declare that they'll put all this nonsense behind them and focus on what matters: desperately cramming for the final exams so that they don't all flunk.


 No.1025292

>>1025252

This is amazing. You're amazing, anon. Please submit this to the show writers.


 No.1025303

>>1025252

Maybe during Rocko's mandatory consent training classes, he hits it off with a lesbian and they both bond over their mutual desires for not-fat chicks.


 No.1025395

>>1025252

Genuinely enjoyed it Anon.

I know it could never be but I love it.

Man…with all the garbage Teletoon shat out in the years after the fact Undergrads never got a second season was a fucking crime. The Dating Show and Crash Canyon were some the biggest steam piles ever. Like dating show was so bad it hurt to watch.

True facts I was in talks with Teletoon about co producing an adult action/drama type cartoon a few years after Undergrads aired. We lost our studio in BC part way through and it all folded. Was cool while it lasted though.


 No.1025531

>>1025395

>>1025292

Thanks dudes. Shame about your studio, there was a brief period around 98-2003 or so when Canadian animation actually seemed like they could produce quality content. I don't know what turned it into the trainwreck that it is today. I'd blame the usual American brain-drain buuuuut…

Other ideas that occurred since my last post:

-Kimmie turning against Nitz is a bit heartless, but you could justify it by having her treat the whole affair as a performative art piece. Show her dragging a mattress around with her for several scenes and it means she never had any cruel intent towards Nitz, just her usual self-centered obliviousness towards how much trouble she causes for Nitz.

-Gimpy's showdown against the DisneyWars faction could be resolved by demonstrating that for him (and Spud for Trek) his devotion to his fandom is a way of life that defines who he is, which forces the Disney kids to admit that their interest is at best a fad only a year or two old and when pushed on it they drop it to go play Fortnight or something. Thus Gimpy is able to secure a "win" without needing to actually punch kids for liking something he doesn't like.

-Having a lesbian show up in Rocko's training class is good, as it sets her up to be a recognizable face in the later dance hall scene when there's no boys for the girls to dance with, only lesbians. It doesn't vilify her just for being gay, but it still underlines what a hellscape an all-female campus would actually look like.

-Just to be clear, Cal's "rape" is only a rape in the sense that he never explicitly gave consent, which is the bizarre progressive standard that the protagonists are being held to. When confronted, Pinko gasps that she assumed that men always want sex and so consent is automatically implied, phrased such that it makes her sound like even more of a horrible monster and double standard. But Cal was not actually held down at knife-point or anything like that.

Anyway, been fun sharing ideas with you lads, I'd be interested to hear what you'd do with Jessie, Rocko's frat brothers, Mung and the nerds, and Kimmie's gay friend whatshisface.


 No.1025699

>>1025246

>>1025252

I would love it if this happened. Good post man.


 No.1025718

>>1025303

>he's wierded out or confused at first

>it clicks that they just both like hot chicks and suddenly it's easy to understand

>they wingman each other, swap booze stashes, etc.

>hit up a strip club he didn't know about together for a lapdance and exchange thumbs up

Yeah, I could see it.


 No.1025863

>>1025157

the time has passed, I gave up onanythign more a long time ago




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