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 No.54467

>What is it?

Manga about mecha and lewd antics

>Wait, I know that author!

Matsumoto Drill Kenkyujo does hentai. A lot of uncensored hentai. In fact, this manga is a sequel of sorts to another series with the very same premise, called Konohana. Turns out in that series he cranked lewdness up to 11 and got it cancelled for that. I couldn't find raws of it though. Another magazine picked him up, and although it's advertised as a sequel, this one has a separate story with different characters. Sharing only the premise and setting. So it probably won't be a problem.

>Are you gonna translate all of it?

We'll see about that. If all it has going for it is smut, then no. Plenty of porn out there already. If the characters are endearing, and if it manages to be the action comedy featuring mecha and tits I expect it to be, then I'll keep doing it.

>So the author toned down on the smut for this one?

I skimmed through some pages, and it is very, VERY lewd. So the madman probably pushed it over the line with his last series. This is pretty old too. Status is "ongoing" and I found 9 special volumes of it (which is already a lot). So who knows how things will turn out in the future?

This is probably also the only place you'll ever read this shit. As it hasn't been picked up by any other group.

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 No.54470

File: 5592d5800fe2ce6⋯.png (6.8 MB, 2500x1800, 25:18, TMTWFch1pg4&5.png)

INDEX POST

'First page of each chapter linked above"

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 No.54471

File: 6d5420a65529f53⋯.png (3.77 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, TMTWFch1pg1.png)

>>54470

Chapter 1

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 No.54472

>>54471

Oops, forgot the trascript

Ch1pg1

=1==========

<In my village, population is thin

<Even in the schools, there's almost no one

<It's located in the countryside

=2==========

<In the center of that countryside village, stands a tall cherry tree

<Said to be an impressive tree, with it's two trunks twisted together as a single one.

<Lately, it has gained notoriety in magazines and newspapers. We expect people to come to see the curtain of red and white it spreads. Spectators will come, drawn specifically to that spot.

=3==========

<It's under that cherry tree, that my story begins

>All right

Vocabulary

僕: ぼく, I, me

村: むら, village

いわゆる: what is called, as it is called, the so-called, so to speak

過疎る: かそる, to lose population (e.g. of active forum members, etc.)

学校: がっこう, school

生徒: せいと, pupil

ほとんど: mostly, nearly, practically, well-nigh, almost invariably, all but, just about, almost

居る: いる

ド田舎: どいなか, remote countryside, boondocks, the sticks

真ん中: まんなか, middle, centre, center, mid-way

大きな: おおきな, big, large, great

桜: さくら, cherry tree, cherry blossom

樹: き, tree, shrub, bush

Another way of writing: 桜の木 (さくらのき)

立つ: たつ, to stand, to rise, to stand up

荘厳: そうごん, solemnity, gravity, impressiveness

二本: にほん, two (long cylindrical things)

木: き, tree, shrub, bush

寄り添う: よりそう, to get close, to cuddle close together, to nestle close to, to snuggle up to

寄る: よる, to approach, to draw near, to come near, to be close to

添う: そう, to meet (one's expectations, etc.), to satisfy, to comply with

まるで: quite, entirely, completely, at all, as if, as though, just like

最近: さいきん, most recent, these days, right now, recently, nowadays

雑誌: ざっし, journal, magazine, periodical

紹介: しょうかい, introduction, presentation, referral, listing

される: する, passive

とか: among other things, such things as, or something like that

見物人: けんぶつにん, spectator, sightseer, onlookers

Verb+よう+に+なる: verb turned noun turned adverb +"to become" = to become verb

紅白: こうはく, red and white, colours for festive or auspicious occasions (colors)

幕: まく, curtain, bunting

張る: はる, to stretch, to spread, to strain, to tighten, to put up (tent)

場所: ばしょ, place, location, spot, position

以外: いがい, with the exception of, excepting

立ち入る: たちいる, to enter, to trespass

下: した, below, down, under, younger (e.g. daughter)

物語: ものがたり, tale, story, legend

はじまる: to begin, to start, to commence

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 No.54524

File: bf636567ae862d6⋯.png (3.44 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, TMTWFch1pg2.png)

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Ch1pg2

=2==========

>Tou

=3==========

>Hoi

=4==========

>Yo

=5==========

>Ho

>Hoi

>phew

>pugyu!!

=6==========

>Pugyu! Pugyu!

>Hahaha! Keep ip up, Poku!

>Pugyu

Ch1pg3

=4==========

>yo

=5==========

>phew

Ch1pg4

=1==========

>pugyu

=2==========

>pugyu

>pugyu

>Wah!

>Haha! Poku, you almost jumped through me!

>You're a weird guy

=3==========

>pugyu

>pugyu

>Haha

=4==========

>Yo- you're being too noisy! It was so difficult sneaking out.

>If my sisters find me, it will have been for nothing.

=5==========

>Why~y are you coming in stealthily from the back?

>So sudden…

>Hey! So I've been found out?

Vocabulary

ほっと: feeling relieved, (sigh of) relief

すぐ: immediately, at once, directly, OR to pass through, to pass by, to go beyond

僕: ぼく

飛びつく: とびつく, to jump at, to be attracted by

変: へん, strange, odd, peculiar, weird, curious, queer, eccentric, funny, suspicious, fishy

奴: やつ

静かに: しずかに, calmly, quietly, gently, peacefully

せっかく: 折角, with trouble, at great pains

裏: うら, bottom (or another side that is hidden from view), undersurface, opposite side, reverse side

回る: まわる, to turn, to revolve

回る: もとおる, to wander around

意味ない: いみない, meaningless, pointless

姉: おね, older sister

達: たら, pluralizing suffix (esp. for people & animals; formerly honorific)

見つかる: みつかる, to be found, to be discovered

こそこそ, sneakily, secretly

わっと: suddenly and in a loud voice (e.g. sobbing)

ほら: look!, look out!, hey!, look at me!, there you are!

こうなると: given the situation, now that it has come to this

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 No.54527

>piglet

pig disgusting

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 No.55377

Thanks anon.

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 No.55482

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Progress had been slower because I'm focusing on World of Moral Reversal, plus it has been busy lately.

Ch1pg5

=1==========

>Welcome back, Ryotaro

>Welcome

>Welcome

[These are my older sisters]

>Busted

[Our parents aren't here with us. So my sisters have been acting as mt caretakers]

=2==========

>Rascal, you're covered in mud. Get in the bath right now!

>Get undressed!

>In just a moment, I want to watch anime first.

>Not like this you won't.

>More playtime? What have you been doing until now?

=3==========

>I was picking sprouts

>You should start acting like a high school student. Instead of running around in the hills and watching anime…

=4==========

>So you want to watch anime, how…

=5==========

>… CARELESS OF YOU!

>Waaa!

>Asusa, I can undress myself, you don't have to do it like this!

Vocabulary

お帰り: おかえり, return, coming back

良太郎: Ryotaro

人達: ひとたち, people

僕: ぼく, I, me

姉: おね, older sister

ばれる: to leak out (a secret), to be exposed (a lie, improper behaviour, etc.) (behavior)

うち: inside, within, OR house, home (one's own)

両親: りょうしん, parents, both parents

親代わり: おやがわり, (one acting as a) foster parent

泥だらけ: どろだらけ, covered in mud, mud-caked

フロ, ふろ, 風呂: bath, bathtub

脱ぐ: ぬぐ, to take off (clothes, shoes, etc.), to undress

待つ: まつ, to wait

山: やま, mountain ????

あそび: playing

タラ: Japanese angelica tree (Aralia elata)

芽: め, sprout

とる: 取る, to take, to pick up, to harvest, to earn, to win, to choose

高校生: こうこうせい, senior high school student

野山: のやま, hills and fields, hill and dale

駆け回る: かけまわる, to run around, to bustle about

どうでもいい: inconsequential, indifferent, not worth worrying about, whatever you do is OK, trivial

どうして: why?, for what reason, how, in what way, for what purpose, what for

梓: Asusa

そうとする: to admire a person's courage, to approve of someone's ambition (but it's probably not what this sentence means)

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 No.55687

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Ch9pg6

=1==========

>That is because…

=2==========

>I love my little brother so much, I can't help it.

>You just love looking at naked boys! You're even into that BL stuff!

>Smells nice…

>You shouldn't target your little brother like that!!

=3==========

>Brother and sister… that's nice.

>W-why are you taking pics!?

>Because these sell very well.

>SELL!?

>That's what makes money nowadays.

>Don't commercialize your brother!!

=4==========

>Weh heh heh!

>Uoh

>Uoh hoh hoh

TN: nips have the weirdest laughs

>Gyaaaaaa!

Vocabulary

そりゃ: that is

弟: おとうと, younger brother, little brother, kid brother

愛す: あいす, to love

きまって: always, without fail, invariably, usually, regularly

きまる: 決まる, to be decided, to be settled, to look good in (clothes)

裸: はだか, naked, nude, bare

好きなだけ: all you want, as much as one wants

しかも: moreover, furthermore

系: けい, system, lineage, group

ニオイ, におい: odour, odor, scent, smell, stench

たまらない: irresistible, tremendous, out of this world, intolerable, unbearable, unendurable

対象: たいしょう, target, object (of worship, study, etc.), subject (of taxation, etc.)

なぜ: 何故, why, how

写真: しゃしん, photograph, photo, picture, snapshot, snap

高い: たかい, high, tall

売れる: うれる, to sell (well)

売る: うる, to sell

世の中: よのなか, society, the world, the times

金: かね, money

商売: しょうばい, trade, business, commerce, transaction, occupation

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 No.55688

>>55687

Forgot to add

TN: BL stands for faggy shit

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 No.55762

Based moonrune reader. You should find a typesetter though.

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 No.58020

F?

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 No.58024

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 No.66494

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>>58020

Hopefully not. I wanted to focus on our other project.

Ch1pg7

=1==========

>Stop it you two. You're going too far with that joke.

>Don't upset Ryo-chan.

>Kaede nee-san.

TN: Nee-san: older sister

=2==========

>I'm sure the sprouts he picked up are delicious.

>Thank you, Ryo-chan.

>Nee-san…

=3==========

>Especially this sprout right here, must taste very good.

<ara, so cute

=4==========

>WHAT DO YOU THINK YOURE TOUCHINー

>It was a joke. A joke (heart)

>Ara, what a soft pretty boy (heart)

TN: she mentions "pretty shirako" (白子: soft roe, milt), a fish's sperm sac. Look up some pictures. I couldn't think of a suitable pun.

>Aahnn!

>…Akane, your jokes are way dirtier!

>Isn't this how comedy works? I just used some audience participation.

>DON'T DECIDE ON THIS BY YOURSELF!!!

Vocabulary

あなた: you (referring to someone of equal or lower status)

達: たら, pluralizing suffix (esp. for people & animals; formerly honorific)

冗談: じょうだん, jest, joke, funny story

すぎる: to pass through, to pass by, to go beyond

困る: こまる, to be troubled, to be worried, to be bothered, to be embarrassed, to be stumped

楓: Kaede, her name means maple (tree) (Acer spp.)

姉さん: ねえさん, elder sister

タラ: Japanese angelica tree (Aralia elata)

芽: め, sprout

とっても: very, awfully, exceedingly

おいし: delicious, tasty, sweet

特に: とくに, particularly, especially

さわる: 触る, to touch, to feel

白子: しらこ, soft roe, milt

プリプリ: angrily, in a huff, in anger, tender (to chew) {my own input} but also "pretty pretty"? From puri puri prisioner, from OPM

下ネタ: しもねた, dirty joke, blue joke, erotic topic, sex talk, indecent topic

お笑い: おわらい, comical (story, song), comic

基本: きほん, foundation, basis, standard

客いじり: きゃくいじり, involving the audience (by talking to them, bringing them on stage, etc.)

楽屋: がくや, dressing room, green room, backstage

オチ: punch line (of a joke)

偏り: かたより, deviation, inclination, offset, bias, prejudice

偏る: かたよる, to be one-sided, to incline, to be partial, to be prejudiced, to lean, to be biased, to be biassed

Ch1pg8

=2==========

>Time for the final battle!!

<In the next, 25th episode, the final battle!!

TN, off panel text: I can identify "design" but not the other word. あっがい君 gives me nothing

=3==========

<sparkle sparkle

>Man this episode was great too.

>Next week, another extreme broadcast. *

=4==========

>Ryo-chan, you really like those robots, huh?

>eh?

>You even put those plastic models on the TV, right in the living room.

=5==========

>Yeah, they're cool!

>Grow up already, boy {on the side, same bubble}: What's with that serious and quick answer?

=5==========

>Especially the Super Robot kind!

>Look how big, strong and tough they are!

TN: I couldn't identify the kanji in the text at the bottom. Fix your handwriting, author!

>What a bunch of stupid gibberish that is… {on the side, same bubble}: start taking like an adult

Vocabulary

決戦: けっせん, decisive battle, deciding match, play-off

時: とき, time, hour, moment

デザイン: design

あっがい君: ??????

次回: じかい, next time (occasion)

第: だい, ordinal

話: わ, counter for stories, episodes of TV series, etc.

キラキラ: glitter, sparkle, glisten, twinkle

今週: こんしゅう, this week

おもしろい: interesting, fascinating, intriguing, enthralling

来週: らいしゅう, next week

過剰: かじょう, excess, over-

サービス: service, help, assistance, care, concern, discount, freebie, free gift

居間: いま, living room (western style)

上: うえ, above, up, over, elder (e.g. daughter)

プラモデル: plastic model

飾る: かざる, to decorate, to ornament, to adorn

だって: after all, because

大人: おとな, adult

に+なる

少年: しょうねん, boy, juvenile, young boy, youth, lad

真顔: まがお, serious look

即答: そくとう, immediate reply

系: けい, system, lineage, group

強い: つよい, strong, powerful, mighty, potent

堅い: かたい, hard, solid, tough

大っきい: おおっきい, big, large, great

こんな?じ: ??????

いやらしい: disgusting, filthy, repulsive, detestable, unpleasant, disagreeable

話: はなし, talk, speech, chat, story, conversation

ならんで: alongside, side-by-side, abreast

ならぶ: 並ぶ, to rival, to match, to equal

*Going to need some proofreading on this one. Something about "extreme serviceservice

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 No.66704

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Ch1pg9

=1==========

>Are you taking about giant robots?

=2==========

>I heard the army came with their robots to the community center square.

>Eh?

=3==========

>Robots from the army!?

>It must be their Humanoid Tank Division. Awesome!

=4==========

>Well, your Onee-chan can't tell them apart. In any case, there are robots there.

>Nice!!

=5==========

>I'm gonna go see them!!

>On dinner time? It's almost ready.

>I'll be back soon!

Vocabulary

公民館: こうみんかん, public hall, community center, community centre

広場: ひろば, plaza, (public) square, piazza, forum, open space

自衛隊: じえいたい, Japan Self-Defence Force, JSDF

式: しき, equation, formula, expression, ceremony, style

型: かた, model, type (e.g. of machine, goods, etc.)

戦車: せんしゃ, tank (military vehicle)

どれ: which (of three or more)

どれがどれだか: which is which?

とにかく: anyhow, at any rate, anyway, somehow or other, generally speaking, in any case, at least

僕: ぼく

もうすぐ: very soon

飯: めし, cooked rice

すぐ: immediately, at once, directly

帰る: to return, to come home, to go home, to go back

Ch1pg10

=1==========

>Whoa

=2==========

>Hey, it's getting dark already.

>I'll be back in a moment! Please let me go!!

=3==========

>Pugyu

>Pugyu

>Oops. Aw, come on Poku.

>We already played just now.

=4==========

>ara ara

>Ryotaro!!

=5==========

>What?

>The wind is very strong outside.

>Don't get yourself caught on the cherry tree's curtain and get sent flying away now.

>Understood!

Vocabulary

暗い: くらい, dark, gloomy, depressed, dispirited

おっと: uh-oh, oops, sorry

さっき: some time ago, just now

遊ぶ: あそぶ, to play, to enjoy oneself, to have a good time

あげた: brought up (e.g. topic)

上げる: あげる, to raise, to elevate

風: かぜ, wind, breeze, draught, draft

強い: つよい, strong, powerful, mighty, potent

どうせ: anyhow, in any case, at any rate, after all, at all, no matter what, at best, at most

なら: if, in case, if it is the case that, if it is true that, as for, on the topic of

荘厳: そうごん, solemnity, gravity, impressiveness

桜: さくら, cherry tree, cherry blossom

張る: はる, to stick, to paste, to affix

幕: まく, curtain, bunting

飛ばす: とばす, to fly, to fire, to hurl, to launch, to make fly

ないか: (used to ask a question in the negative) won't (hasn't, isn't, doesn't, etc.), (used to make invitations, express desires or give indirect commands) won't you

おいで: coming, going, being (somewhere)

What an ominous advice :^)

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 No.66779

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You can tell how idle my day has been by how many pages I put out.

Ch1pg11

=1==========

>I'm going then!!

>Come back quick!

>pugyu pugyu

>OK

=2==========

>He's so energetic.

>He'll be attending his school in Tokyo, starting next week…

>Do you think our feral child from the countryside will be ok there?

=3==========

>He'll be fine. He's a strong kid.

>I'm pretty sure of it…

=4==========

>Almost sure…

>Almost…

>Almost…

>pugyu

Vocabulary

元気: げんき, lively, full of spirit, energetic, vigorous, vital, spirited

来週: らいしゅう, next week

東京: とうきょ, Tokyo

学校: がっこう, school

通う: かよう, to go to and from (a place), to go back and forth between, to run between (e.g. bus, train, etc.), to ply between, to go to (school, work, etc.), to attend, to commute, to frequent

田舎: いなか, rural area, countryside, the sticks, hometown

野生児: やせいじ, feral child

丸出し: まるだし, bare, exposed, undisguised, broad (provincial accent)

かしら: I wonder

強い: つよい, strong, powerful, mighty, potent

きっと: surely, undoubtedly, almost certainly, most likely (e.g. 90 percent)

たぶん: perhaps, probably

Ch1pg12

=2==========

>hah…

>hah…

=3==========

>oh?

=4==========

>Hey wait up Ryotaro-kun, it's getting dark.

>Ah, teacher!

>You see… I heard the army showed up with their robots and…

=5==========

>Ah yes, for some training, I think. They were returning just now too.

>There, look.

=6==========

>Over there, I think that's their helicopter. Can you see it?

>The helicopter?

Vocabulary

ぼちぼち: little-by-little, gradually, slowly, soon

暗い: くらい, dark, gloomy

先生: せんせい, teacher, master, doctor

自衛隊: じえいたい, Japan Self-Defence Force, JSDF

訓練: くんれん, practice, practising, training

だって: after all, because

ちょうど: just, right, exactly

ところ, place, spot, scene, site

だろう: seems, I think, I guess, I wonder, I hope

Ch1pg13

=1==========

>The…

=2==========

>There it is!!

=3==========

>By the way, that's not the army, but the police. That's their riot squad I think.

>Wow

>It's walking… Amazing.

=4==========

>It's getting late, so please go home.

>Yes sir. But my sisters told me to go check on the big cherry tree.

=5==========

>Aah, You mean the red and white tents? So you're on that duty then. Well, take care.

>Okaaay

Vocabulary

ちなみに: by the way, in this connection, incidentally, in passing

自衛隊: じえいたい, self-defence force, self-defense force

警察: けいさつ, police

機動隊: きどうたい, riot police, riot squad

歩く: あるく, to walk

遠い: とおい, far, distant

前に: まえに, ahead, before, ago

僕: ぼく

荘厳: そうごん, solemnity, gravity, impressiveness

桜: さくら, cherry tree, cherry blossom

紅白: こうはく, red and white, colours for festive or auspicious occasions (colors)

幕: まく, curtain, bunting

当番: とうばん, being on duty

気を付けて: きをつけて, take care, be careful

Ch1pg14

=2==========

>It really got dark fast. I'f I'm not quick…

=4==========

>Nnng!!

Vocabulary

急: きゅう, urgent, sudden, abrupt, sharp, steep, precipitous, rapid, swift, fast

なきゃ (from なければ): unless one …, if one does not …

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 No.66781

>>66704

errata

Pg10, second to last bubble

Once again I messed up the passive form of a verb. In this case "To fly away". I should have been more sceptical of how specific her advice sounded to me. It actually reads:

>The wind is very strong outside.

>Since you're going, make sure the curtain tied to the big cherry tree doesn't fly away then.

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 No.66832

Some translation suggestions.

>>54471

Panel 2:

>荘厳桜という二本の木が寄り添ってまるで一本に見える桜だ

While 荘厳 does mean "impressive", it's being used like a name here (similar to names like "Grand Hotel"). Since it gets used later on in that fashion, consider translating it like:

<Called the Grand Tree, its two intertwined trunks look like one.

>最近何かの雑誌に紹介されたとかで見物人が来るようになちゃったので紅白の幕を張って見物人がその場所以外に立ち入らないようにしている

The grammar is pretty knotty here. "Recently because some magazine introduced it, (最近何かの雑誌に紹介されたとかで) it seems a lot of visitors [will be] coming, (見物人が来るようになちゃったので) so we put up a red-white curtain (紅白の幕を張って) so that visitors won't enter any other place. (見物人がその場所以外に立ち入らないようにしている)"

That's a huge mess. Cleaning it up turns out something like:

<We've been getting a lot of visitors ever since some magazine mentioned it, so it's been surrounded by a red-white curtain to keep them in that area.

>>54524

The pig's name is ぽーく, or Pork.

>>55482

For panel 2, consider "Playing in the mountains again?" instead of "More playtime?" to maintain the 山 in 山あそび .

>>55687

A small bubble missed on panel 3 just says やだ. While literally "nope", it's a refusal to the previous line, so instead of

>Don't commercialize your brother!!

switching it up to

<Stop selling pictures of your brother!!

with a follow-up

<Nope

would flow better.

>>66494

In panel 4, since the "soft 白子" refers to his limp penis, it'd probably be best to go with the standard mushroom joke (which also vaguely fits with "sprout") for reader comprehension.

<What a soft mushroom (heart)

For Ch1pg8 panel 3, the line about "extreme broadcast" is a direct reference to the previews of Neon Genesis Evangelion, where they'd promise lots of "service, service!" (fanservice, meaning panty shots and the like). I'd translate this similar to how was done back then to keep the reference, as

<Next week there'll be plenty of service!

For panel 5, the handwriting says こんな感じ!, so I'd go with the simple "like this!" The following line uses いやらしい to imply that his talk of "big, strong, tough" things sounds perverted. I'd go with

<Sounds like you're talking about porn…

and the side text as

<Don't end up like that kind of adult.

>>66704

Ch1pg9 panel 3, the robot is called a 0二式, or Type 02, which is another Evangelion joke.

<It must be the Type 02 Humanoid Tank then. Awesome!

>>66779

Just a note that Ch1pg13 panel 4 would read as

<But my sisters told me to go check on the Grand Tree

if you choose to adopt the term.

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 No.66839

>>66832

Thanks, those are all very helpful. I still haven't found that sweet spot between trying to include every idea a sentence has (and thus ending with a clunky translation) and an interpreted translation (and missing stuff like "mountain" and etc)

>reference to the previews of Neon Genesis Evangelion

I'd never have guessed then.

<Don't end up like that kind of adult.

Also good, but: I understand that ならん is an abreviation to ならない (makes more sense thanならんで that the dictionary sugested) but what's with でいい then?

<It must be the Type 02 Humanoid Tank then. Awesome!

Fugg I even forgot that 0ニ bit, I was gonna ask for help on that too. Thanks.

I'll probably do a couple more pages today then. Now I'm pumped to try more of this.

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 No.66840

>>66839

>でいい

nvm, it just dawned on me, I get it now

should have guessed ならない earlier, would have made the whole difference

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 No.66859

File: c4082fd10127dc7⋯.png (3.88 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg16.png)

File: c84bb90eba5bc00⋯.png (4.07 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg17.png)

File: b7886cd418a2690⋯.png (4.09 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg18.png)

Ch1pg16

=1==========

<People call it the Grand Cherry Tree…

*But it's real name is actually Shougon Tree.

TN: Ryotaro actually mentions the proper way of writing it's name. They've been calling it "shougon" all this time, but written 荘厳 (impressive/grand/solemn), while it's proper writing is 宗厳 (a proper name, not a real word, made with the kanjis for "pillar/principle" and "stern")

>Chiduru…

=2==========

>It's been almost a year…

<On that day, the cherry tree was also very beautiful, and the wind was strong too…

=3==========

<A year ago…

<That person…

=4==========

<My childhood friend.

<We used to play together…

<Her black hair…

Vocabulary

書く: かく, to write, to compose, to pen

本当: ほんとう, truth, reality, actuality, fact

名前: なまえ, name, full name

なんだって: Why?, Come again?

千鶴: Chiduru, her name means "a thousand cranes"

一年: いちねん, one year, some time ago

きれい: 綺麗, pretty, lovely, beautiful, fair

風: かぜ, wind, breeze, draught, draft

強い: つよい, strong, powerful, mighty, potent

一年前: いちねんまえ, one year ago

幼なじみ: おさななじみ, childhood friend, friend from infancy, old playmate

ちいさい: small, little, tiny

頃: ころ, (approximate) time, around, about, toward

一緒に: いっしょに, together (with), at the same time, in a lump

遊ぶ: あそぶ, to play, to enjoy oneself, to have a good time

黒髪: くろかみ, black hair

Ch1pg17

=1==========

<was so…

<very…

<beautiful…

=2==========

>Ryotaro- kun

Vocabulary

綺麗: きれい, pretty, lovely, beautiful, fair

なった

Ch1pg18

=1==========

>There's an old tale about this cherry tree…

>Do you know it?

=2==========

>N-no I don't…

=3==========

>It was said that a Tengu resided under this tree.

>It's a tale about a great swordsman.

TN: Tengu are mythical creatures from japanese folklore

=4==========

>After much studying, the swordsman discovered how to capture the Tengu. But to do that he had to cut the tree with a single strike of his sword.

=5==========

>But in the end, he did not find a Tengu in the tree.

>Such is the story.

[At that time…]

=6==========

[… I was completely fascinated by her beauty]

>Instead, the cherry-tree was separated into two trunks.

>They grew back, intertwined as one, as if they were a single tree again…

[And I couldn't pay full attention to her story at the time.]

Vocabulary

古い: ふるい, old (not person), aged, ancient, antiquated, stale, threadbare, outmoded, obsolete article

言い伝え: いいつたえ, tradition, legend

知る: しる, to be aware of, to know, to be conscious of, to cognize, to cognise

下: した, below, down, under, younger (e.g. daughter)

天狗: てんぐ, long-nosed goblin

修業: しゅうぎょう, pursuit of knowledge, studying, learning, training, completing a course

凄い: すごい

剣士: けんし, swordsman, swordswoman, fencer

お話: おはなし, story, tale

大変: たいへん, very, greatly

すえ: tip, top, end, close (e.g. close of the month), trivialities, future

ついに: finally, at last

とらえる: to seize, to capture, to arrest

一刀: いっとう, sword, blade, single stroke

のもとに, under the supervision of, on the basis of

Could also be の+もと+に

斬り倒す: きりたおす, to cut down, to chop down, to fell

(だ)けれど: formal of (だ)けど

実は: じつは, as a matter of fact, by the way, to tell you the truth, to be honest, frankly

斬る: きる, to kill (a human) using a blade (sword, machete, knife, etc.), to slice (off), to lop (off), to cut (off)

ではない: では無い, is not, am not, are not

樹: き, tree, shrub, bush

時: とき, time, hour, moment

見とれる: みとれる, to be fascinated (by), to watch something in fascination, to be charmed

二つ: ふたつ, two

分かれる: わかれる, to branch, to fork, to diverge

成長: せいちょう, growth, grow to adulthood

綺み合う: からみあう, to be(come) intertwined, to be entangled

一本: いっぽん, one long cylindrical thing, one film, TV show, etc., one goal, home run, etc., one telephone call

ように見える: looks like (appearance of)

彼女: かのじょ, she, her

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 No.66863

>>66859

He calls her Chiduru nee-san. I held back on the honorific, for now, because their relationship isn't entirelly known (I mean to me, I haven't translated anything about that yet) but I'm guessing they're not related, and nee-chan is being used as a lingo for "older girl". So to avoid making it seem like she's his sister, I'll hold back on nee-san for now.

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 No.66951

File: 2de8c441d171de3⋯.png (3.95 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg19.png)

File: 1fb06e46dcd999e⋯.png (7.3 MB, 2800x1800, 14:9, tmtwafCh1pg20&21.png)

Ch1pg19

=1==========

>That's why when I get married, I want it to be under this tree.

>Married…

=2==========

>Married…

=3==========

>That's why this tree-

>AH- But Chiduru, you don't need that kind of spell, really.

>Chiduru-chan is already so beautiful!

>As soon as you get to Tokyo, you'll find a boyfriend in no time.

=4==========

>Then, you will get married and…

>Married?

=5==========

>And… you will be very happy…

>Happy?

=6==========

>And you'll have kids…

>Kids?

=7==========

>And then…

>Then?

Vocabulary

縁結び: えんむすび, marriage, marriage tie, love knot

樹: 木, き

としても: assuming …, even if …

伝える: つたえる, to convey, to report, to transmit, to communicate, to tell, to impart, to propagate, to teach, to bequeath

伝う: つたう, to go along, to walk along, to follow

まじない: charm, incantation, spell, magic formula

必要: ひつよう, necessary, needed, essential, indispensable

綺麗きれい

東京: とうきょ

すぐに: instantly, immediately

彼氏: かれし, boyfriend

くらい: to (about) the extent that, (almost) enough that, so … that …, at least

結婚: けっこん, marriage

とか+して+しまって

幸せ: しあわせ, happiness, good fortune, luck, blessing

子供: こども, child, children

作る: つくる, to make, to produce, to manufacture, to build, to construct

それから: and then, after that

Ch1pg20&21

>But, Ryotaro-kun

>I…

<Love you

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 No.66987

>>66859

In general, English readers seem to prefer the Hepburn "zu" over the Nihon-Shiki "du" for names like Chiduru/Chizuru, mainly because they end up overemphasizing the "d" (so "du" sounds like "due").

Ch1pg18 panel 3

>このさくらの下で天狗と修業した凄い剣士のお話

"A tale (お話) about a great swordsman in training (修業した凄い剣士) and a tengu under this tree (このさくらの下で天狗)"

Panel 4

>大変な修業のすえついに剣士は天狗をとらえ、一刀のもとに切り倒すのだけれど

"Thanks to his harsh training (大変な修業のすえ), the swordsman had finally cornered the tengu (ついに剣士は天狗をとらえ) and would fell him in one stroke, but (一刀のもとに切り倒すのだけれど)"

Panel 5

>実は斬ったのは天狗ではなくこの樹だったというお話

"What he cut was not the tengu, but this tree. (実は斬ったのは天狗ではなくこの樹だった) Such is the story. (というお話)"

>>66863

Yeah, they're probably not blood-related (since she calls him "-kun", which would feel weird between real siblings), so it makes sense to drop the "-nee-san".

>>66951

>縁結びの樹としても伝えられているんですって

"It's also known as a Tree of Marriage."

Referring to it as a "Tree of Marriage" is very awkward so it does make sense to write the implied statement instead, but much like "Grand Tree" and "Shougon Tree" it might end up getting used a lot later. Maybe future pages will clear that up.

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 No.66999

>>66987

Reading that makes me wonder why I was having so much trouble with the Tengu story. Seems so obvious now.

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 No.67024

File: 1cc8deee2e1beee⋯.png (4.07 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg22.png)

Ch1pg22

=2==========

>Why did she had to say that right before going to Tokyo…

>I couldn't even give her an answer…

=3==========

<Chizuru-chan…

<I…

<am going to Tokyo too…

=4==========

[But I still don't know how to respond to that anyway]

<I get nervous around pretty girls. Do I tell her "I love you too"?

=5==========

>Hmm? This part here is twisted too tight… It even looks like a snare trap.

>Well, I guess it's not up to me to judge.

=6==========

>Huh!

>They already returned the key to the community hall!

>eh?

=7==========

>Aw come on! I knew I should have gone before! Humph!

>A girl?

>On the other side? Is she mad at something?

Vocabulary

すぐ: immediately, at once, directly

返事: へんじ, reply, answer, response

確認: かくにん, confirmation, verification, validation, review, check, affirmation, identification

とはいえ: とは言え, though, although, be that as it may, nonetheless

決める: きめる, to decide, to choose, to determine, to make up one's mind, to resolve, to set one's heart on, to settle, to arrange, to set, to appoint, to fix

きんちょう: tension, mental strain, nervousness

部分: ぶぶん, portion, section, part

随分: ずいぶん, very, extremely, surprisingly, considerably

ねじる: to screw, to twist

わな: snare, trap (for catching wild game, etc.)

問題: もんだい, question (e.g. on a test), problem

公民館: こうみんかん, public hall, community center, community centre

鍵: かぎ, key

返す: かえす, to return (something), to restore, to put back

わかる: 分かる, to understand, to comprehend, to grasp, to see, to get, to follow

先に: さきに, before, earlier than, ahead, beyond, away, previously, recently

女の子: おんなのこ, young woman

むこう: opposite side, other side, opposite direction

怒る: おこる, to get angry, to get mad

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 No.67035

>>67024

>Second panel, little box at theh bottom

[At work]

lit.: in the middle of checking

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 No.67090

File: 7f82cc0a9d8362f⋯.png (4.12 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg23.png)

File: cd46e4249a1f424⋯.jpg (654.92 KB, 1235x1800, 247:360, Img_028.jpg)

File: 56eb6b395b59a08⋯.jpg (617.79 KB, 1247x1800, 1247:1800, Img_029.jpg)

File: 6094d315512cafb⋯.jpg (723.18 KB, 1239x1800, 413:600, Img_030.jpg)

Ch1pg23

=1==========

>pugyu!!

=2==========

>Waaa! Pork!!

>You got off your chain.

>haha

=3==========

>pogyu

=4==========

>Ah! Wait!!

=5==========

>OH

=6==========

>Ooh!

=7==========

>oh

>o…

<SFX: zururururu…

=8==========

>OOHHHH!?

>how?

Vocabulary

鎖: くさり, chain, chains

ぬける: めける, to come out, to fall out, to be omitted, to be missing, to escape, to come loose

抜く: めく, to extract, to omit, to draw out, to unplug

やる: to do, to undertake, to perform, to play (a game), to study (bit I'm not so sure gifs is what he meant, maybe it's an abbreviation for a interjection)

なぜ: why, how

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 No.67130

>>67024

Panel 4, the handwritten part

>キレイになってキンチョーするケドそれは「好き」なのか?

"I get nervous because she's pretty, but is that really "love"?

Panel 6, 7

It reads like we're hearing only one half of a conversaion betwen Ms. Pees-In-Public and someone we haven't met yet, probably to show up shortly after the snare shenanigans. This is how it reads to me:

>もー なんで公民館の鍵返しちゃうのよ!

"Sheesh! Why'd you return the community hall key!"

>わかってるわよ!先に行ってていいわよ!フン

"Okay, fine! You go on ahead! Humph!"

>>67090

That is some To-Love-Ru level physics craziness going on there.

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 No.67131

>>67130

>It reads like we're hearing only one half of a conversaion betwen Ms. Pees-In-Public and someone we haven't met ye

I thought so too and checked ahead, it doesn't seem to be the case (at least there's no mention of showing of a cellphone or anything of the sort)

And I think "going" in this case refers to peeing. So she's saying she should have gone earlier. This wouldn't be a problem if "ahead" and "earlier" weren't the same word.

> is that really "love"?

yeah, I agree this is more like it. I wen't with "saying 'I love you' " because of the quotation marks he used, but there are no quotation particles there, so it threw me off.

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 No.67194

File: 3c8c9c0a1e271fe⋯.png (4.09 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg27.png)

File: 55af28532203bb1⋯.png (4.45 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg28.png)

File: f0ab550111f0c5b⋯.png (4.28 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg29.png)

Thank god for pages with little dialog

Ch1pg27

=1==========

>I'm… I'm sor-

>-ry!

>booff!

sfx: hachin

=2==========

>I'm sorr…

>Ah!

sfx: bechin

=3==========

>Sor-

>booff

sfx: bechin

=4==========

>-ry

sfx: bitaan

=5==========

>Ky… KYAAAAAAAA

<piripiripiri (tingling sound, becoming tense)

=6==========

>WAAAAAAAAAAAA

<dokidoki (accelerated heartbeat)

Vocabulary

ピリピリ: tingle, sting, smart, hot, burning the tongue, becoming tense

ドキドキ: to beat fast (of one's heart), to throb, to pound, to palpitate

Cg1pg28

=1==========

>KYYYAAAAAAAA

>I'm sorry

>I'm sorry

>I'm sorry

>I'm sorry

>I'm sorry

=2==========

>I'm sorry

>I'm sorry

>I'm sorry

>I'm sorry

=3==========

>I'm sorry

>I'm sohhhy

>I'm sohhhy

>I'm so…

=4==========

>I'm sohhhy

>pu!

>I'm sohhhyy

>pugyu!

=5==========

> I'm SOR-!

=6==========

>pugyu! pugyu!

>?

>A baby pig?

=7==========

>Hah!

<hanging

<drip drip

Vocabulary

ぶた: pig (Sus scrofa domesticus)

ポタリ: drip, fall drop-by-drop

Ch1pg29

=1==========

<she's

<figuring

<it

<out

=2==========

>Ah! I get it now!

=5==========

>YOU!

=6==========

>I'll let you know that…

>peeping and looking at "that" girl's part…

>IS A MAJOR CRIME!!

Vocabulary

状況把握: じょうきょうはあく, one's grasp of the situation, knowing how matters stand

あんた: you (familiar form of anata)

女の子: おんなのこ, young woman

のぞき: peep, peeping

覗く: のぞく, to peek (though a keyhole, gap, etc.)

立派: りっぱ, splendid, fine, handsome, elegant, imposing, prominent

犯罪: はんざい, crime, offence, offense

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 No.67195

File: 6941e53ccaf5188⋯.png (4.46 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg30.png)

Ch1pg30

=1==========

>humph

=2==========

>I'm sohhyy…

>I'm sohhyy…

>I'm…

<drip drip

>pugyu pugyu

=3==========

<glance

<hanging

=4==========

>Hey you

>What's your excuse?

>Are you gonna tell me you're trying to turn into a silk worm or something? … Actually, it looks like you're in a pinch.

<How did you get into that situation?

Vocabulary

ちらり: fleeting (glimpse, glance, etc.)

言い訳: いいわけ, explanation

みの: straw raincoat

実は: しつは, as a matter of fact, by the way, to tell you the truth, to be honest, frankly

事故: じこ, accident, incident, trouble, circumstances, reasons

どう: how, in what way, how about

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 No.67386

File: 2a56811f9f4b05d⋯.png (3.67 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg31.png)

Ch1pg31

=1==========

>Nope, I don't have an excuse.

>If I made a girl feel embarrassed, then it's all my fault.

=2==========

>My sisters always taught me that, first of all, I shouldn't make a woman feel embarrassed.

>And second, that a man shouldn't be making excuses. And I take those rules seriously.

<And third, that we shouldn't waste any money, but…

TN: I made up this last one, because of an unintelligible kanji there. But it is something about money.

=3==========

>That's why I'm decided, you can continue hitting my face…

>PLEASE!

>E-ENOUGH ALREADY! {Small handwriting} You pervert!

=4==========

>For now, I'll take you down from there.

>Really!? Thank you.

>Whatch your tone, kid.

=5==========

<pugyu

=6==========

<alright

>ahh

>Finally.

Vocabulary

恥ずかしい: はずかしい, shy, ashamed, embarrassed

悪い: わるい, bad, poor, inferior

一番上: いちばんうえ, topmost

女の人: おんなのひと, woman

恥: はじ, shame, embarrassment, disgrace

かかす: to miss (doing), to fail (to do)

だって: after all, because, they say, I hear, you mean

教わる: おそわる, to be taught

二番: にぶん, second, number two, runner-up

さんばん: 三番, third, no. three

お金: おかね, money

?しか言わない

気が済む: きがすむ, to be satisfied, to feel good

まで: until (a time), till, to, up to

殴る: なぐる, to strike, to hit

変態: へんたい

とりあえず: at once, first of all, for the time being, for now

下ろす: おろす, to take down (e.g. flag), to launch (e.g. boat), to drop, to lower (e.g. ladder), to let (a person) off, to unload, to discharge

チョーシ: ちょうし, tune, tone, key, pitch, time, rhythm, vein, mood, way, manner, style, knack, impetus, spur of the moment, strain

狂う: くろう, to go mad, to get out of order, to go amiss

よっと

やっぱり: too, also, likewise, either, as expected

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 No.67409

>>67386

The use of 一番上、二番目 and さんばんめ refers to the age of his three older sisters relative to him.

Panel 2

>僕一番上のお姉ちゃんに etc etc

"My oldest sister always taught me that I shouldn't etc etc"

>二番目のお姉ちゃんには男 etc etc

"My second-oldest sister said that a man etc etc"

>さんばんめの姉ちゃんはお金の事しか言わないケド…

"My third-oldest sister only talks about money…"

"Third-oldest" sounds weird but my brain's drawing a blank on alternatives.

Panel 3:

>だから!気が済むまで殴って…ください!

"So please hit me until you're satisfied… PLEASE!"

Panel 4:

>チョーシ狂うわね…

"You're a weird one…"

「調子が狂う」 means someone or something is unusual enough to throw you off-pace. I can't think of an English way to say that in a few words, so emphasizing his strangeness is probably best.

Panel 6:

These bits will probably have to be rewritten when we find out what the rest of his sentence is on the next page. Otherwise, I'd say it's

>ああ、やっぱり

"Yeah, I get that a lot."

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 No.67456

>>67409

>The use of 一番上、二番目 and さんばんめ refers to the age of his three older sisters relative to him.

Fuck, how would I know? Make's even more sense on the third "rule". Thanks again m8

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 No.68963

File: 81b307a18dcecf4⋯.png (4.04 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg32.png)

File: 8a1e5c94bb3febf⋯.png (4.27 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg33.png)

File: a1d0c9e1accbc99⋯.png (4.26 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg34.png)

I've decided to make an extra commitment to both this and World of Moral Reversal. I'll try to upload on average at least a page of each per day.

Ch1pg32

=1==========

>Hey, you're cute.

>oh?

=2==========

>I didn't quite noticed before, being upside down.

=3==========

>But looking at you straight, I can see you're pretty cute.

>eh?

>eh!?

Vocabulary

きみ: you, buddy, pal

さかさま: さかさま, inversion, upside down

わかりにくい: 分かり難い, hard to understand, incomprehensible, unintelligible

難い: にくい, difficult to …, hard to …

こうして: thus, in this way

まっすぐ: straight (ahead), direct, upright, erect

Ch1pg33

=1==========

>Cu…

>Cute…

>Me?

>Uhm

=2==========

>Sa… saying something like that

>So… suddenly…

=3==========

>Oh no!

>I'm…

>Calling me cute and…

=4==========

>Now I'm embarrassed…

>Nihi!

>Nihihihi

=5==========

<HAA!

Vocabulary

急に: きゅうに, swiftly, rapidly

やだ

照れる: てれる, to be shy, to be bashful, to feel awkward, to feel embarrassed

照る: てる, to shine

Ch1pg34

=1==========

>You just said that to trick me!!

>Huh?

=2==========

>Is this mud?

>What? It smells a little bit

<snif snif snow water?

=3==========

>Ah, sorry.

>I'm Asano…

Vocabulary

ごまかす: 誤魔化す, to deceive, to falsify, to misrepresent, to cheat, to swindle, to tamper, to juggle, to manipulate

地面: じめん, ground, earth's surface

泥: どろ, mud, slush, (wet) dirt, mire

におう: to be fragrant, to smell (good), to stink, to smell (bad)

ゆき水

僕: ぼく

浅野: Asano

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 No.69106

File: 6c3eb7c0b9bb9b4⋯.png (3.95 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg35.png)

File: da9a67bc2b89669⋯.png (3.94 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg36.png)

Ch1pg35

=1==========

>Why on earth are you barefoot?!! You insensitive twat!

>That's why you're still living in the country. I really really really

>HATE THIS!!

=2==========

>Sorry… I'm Ryotaro.

=3==========

>If it's ok, please…

>Tell me your name!

>humph

=4==========

>My name…

Ch1pg36

=1==========

>Persian Rose

TN: lit.: Rabian Rose. But wtf is "Rabian"? Dictionary and google give me a city in Iran. Similar stuff like Labian, Lavian, Ravian don't help either. I'm going with "Persian" for now.

=2==========

>Heh?

=3==========

>It's that your…

>It is! And you better remember it!!

Vocabulary

何で: なんで, why?, what for?

裸足: はだし, barefoot

デリカシー: delicacy, tact, considerateness, sensitivity, thoughtfulness

田舎: いなか, rural area, countryside, the sticks

大嫌い: だいきらい, very dislikeable, hate, loathe, abhor

よかったら: if you like

名前: なまえ, name, full name

教える: おしえる, to teach, to inform, to instruct

キミ: 君, you, buddy, pal

覚える: おばえる, to memorize, to memorise, to commit to memory, to learn by heart, to bear in mind, to remember

-ておく: something is done in preparation for the future

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 No.69111

File: 6e62757671f9c37⋯.png (4.05 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg37.png)

File: cd7e600000fec44⋯.png (8.91 MB, 2500x1800, 25:18, tmtwafCh1pg38&39.png)

Ch1pg37

=1==========

>Though I hope we won't meet again

>ANYTIME SOON!!

=3==========

>So that girl's name is…

>Persian Rose?

<she foreigner?

=4==========

>What the-?

Ch1pg40

=1==========

*Th… That's …

=2==========

>That's not a 02 model from the army. ..

>It is… That is…

=3==========

>That

>Is that girl… piloting it?

<THAT

=4==========

<IS AN EART DEFENSE FORCE'S

<BIPEDAL TROOPER ARMS

TN: "Arms" is an approximation from タヂカラ(tajikara) "arm strength" (I couldn't find タヂカラオ). It's the best I could think of for the occasion.

Vocabulary

会う: あう, to meet, to encounter, to see

だろう: seems, I think, I guess, I wonder, I hope

外人: がいじん, foreigner (esp. one of European ancestry), gaijin

自衛隊: じえいたい, Japan Self-Defence Force, JSDF

式: しき, style

バイペット: bipedal

トル一パー: trooper

タヂカラ: arm strength

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 No.69114

File: 5faba8d9fec1ca5⋯.png (4.15 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg40.png)

Last pic didn't fit

In any case:

EDF EDF EDF EDF EDF EDF EDF

I've never played EDF

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 No.69151

>>69114

>>69111

Here's an update about that robot's name.

カラオ (Tadikarao) returns nothing other than a character in a barafaggotry game. Yep you read that right. Looking into it I found out that that's an alternate way of writing タカラオ (Tajikarao), like an intentional typo that switches ヂ and ジ (different letters, but in japanese they have the same sound, di=ji, but ヂ(di) is seldom used).

What the fuck is Tajikarao, then? Well now that I know how to write it correctly, wikipedia has an answer.

>Ame-no-tajikarao (アメノタジカラオ) is a Japanese deity (kami) who appears in Japanese mythology. Ame-no-tajikarao is written as 天手力男神 in Kojiki, and 天手力雄神 in Nihon Shoki.

>The name Ame-no-tajikarao carries the connotation of a male god with great physical brute strength.

So that last panel should actually read:

=4==========

<IS EART DEFENSE FORCE'S BIPEDAL TROOPER

<TAJIKARAO

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 No.69161

>>69114

Go play EDF

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 No.69167

>>67409

Now that the next page was posted, I'd change my changes to Panel 6 to

>ああ、やっぱり

"Ah, I knew it."

>>68963

Just to fit the last page's やっぱり, I'd change the first bubble in panel 1 to

"You're cute."

for better reading flow.

>>69106

Panel 1

>これだから田舎モンなんでだいだいだい 大っ嫌い!!

「田舎モン」is a slangy version of 田舎者 , which politely means "country person" but is really an insult like "country bumpkin" or "hick". So something like

"This is why I really really REALLY HATE HICKS!"

pg36

"La Vie en Rose" is the name of an old French song that became permanently tied to giant robot history when it was used as the name of a story-significant mobile manufacturing plant in Zeta Gundam. It also has a general feeling of classy European-ness and has been used as a name in previous anime (mostly as a joke though, in Di Gi Charat). In the end it's meant to be an obviously fake European name that is a reference to giant robots.

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 No.69175

File: 9895c627e31dcbf⋯.png (4.89 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg41.png)

File: 4d3621002397e11⋯.png (4.34 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh1pg42.png)

>>69167

>La vie en Rose

>Rabian rose

Thanks m8. Searching for references of that song in japanese showed me that this is another name "mistyped", as the original is supposed to be spelled ラヴィアンローズ, which makes sense now.

For those who don't know kana, japanese doesn't have a native sound for "V", they can write it down however, in this case vi=ヴィ, but the colloquial pronunciation uses the consonant "B" instead, and bi=ビ.

Here's a final extra push, just because we're so close to the end of this chapter

Ch1pg41

=2==========

<This tree is also known as Tree of Marriage…

<Under it, the unforgettable parting between a man and a woman took place…

=3==========

<Destined to meet again one day…

<So they can then marry each other, for life…

Ch1pg42

<Such is the legend, told under this tree.

<Where my story began!

Vocabulary

桜: さくら

縁結び: えんむすび, marriage, marriage tie, love knot

樹: き

としても: assuming …, even if …

伝える: つたえる, to convey, to report, to transmit, to communicate, to tell, to impart, to propagate, to teach, to bequeath

Here's how I'm interpreting "Xとしてもつたえられる": "(also) about the assumption of X, is what was said to me" or "it is said/called X" for short

下: した

忘れられない: わすれられない, unforgettable, memorable, haunting, indelible

忘れられる: わすれられる, to slip into obscurity, to be forgotten

別れる: わかれる, to be divided, to part from, to separate (usu. for people), to bid farewell

別れ: わかれ, parting, separation, farewell, (lateral) branch, fork, offshoot, division, section

男女: だんじょ, men and women, man and woman, both sexes, both genders

必ず: かならず, always, without exception, necessarily, certainly, without fail, positively, invariably

巡り会う: めぐりあう, to meet fortuitously (e.g. running into an old friend), to meet by chance, to happen across

そして: and, and then, thus, and now

添う: そう, to meet (one's expectations, etc.), to satisfy, to comply with

添い遂げる: そいとげる, to remain married for life

言い伝え: いいつたえ, tradition, legend

言い伝える: いいつたえる, to send word

物語: ものがたり, tale, story, legend

始まる: はじまる, to begin, to start, to commence

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 No.69177

File: 213a727f7991d79⋯.jpg (226.16 KB, 1248x1800, 52:75, Img_047.jpg)

File: b4d8ff809fb8e1c⋯.jpg (377.81 KB, 1249x1800, 1249:1800, Img_048.jpg)

omake

And sorry but I don't feel like translating those character bios for now.

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 No.69487

File: eda2a39bdd19a30⋯.jpg (468.43 KB, 1245x1800, 83:120, Img_049.jpg)

File: a3b41603a7205f0⋯.png (3.22 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg2.png)

File: 9d3886ebce4ec24⋯.png (3.9 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg3.png)

File: 6b0430c99de01df⋯.jpg (721.44 KB, 1248x1800, 52:75, Img_052.jpg)

>>54470

=Chapter 2==

Ch1pg1

Lovesick

Ch2pg2

=6==========

>It's April already…

=7==========

>Ryotaro is going to Tokyo in three days…

>It's gonna get lonely around here…

Ch2pg3

=1==========

>Funfuー

=2==========

>Hey, where's Kaede?

<a popsicle… in april?

<it's just me here

>She went to town for a meeting.

>Ah, right.

=3==========

>Haa… I'm almost done packing Ryotaro's luggage…

>You seem worried.

>Unlike Ryotaro himself, don't you think?

=4==========

>What's that supposed to mean?

>Fu fu… I'm saying he's absolutely…

=5==========

>Lovesick

'Vocabulary "

窓わずらい: こいわずらい, lovesickness

四月か: しがつ, April

東京行き: とうきょうゆき, Tokyo-bound

寂しい: さびしい, lonely, lonesome, solitary, desolate

颯: かえで, Kaede, maple tree

姉: ねえ

自分: じぶん, myself, yourself, oneself, himself, herself

寄り合い: よりあい, meeting, gathering

寄り合う: ゆりあう, to gather, to meet

町: まち, town, block, neighbourhood, neighborhood

まで: to (a place), as far as

荷物: にもつ, luggage, baggage, package

整理: せいり, sorting, arrangement, organization, putting in order, adjustment, regulation

終わる: おわる, to finish, to end, to close

心配: しんぱい

本人: ほんにん, the person himself

それどころ: (usu. before a verb in negative form) (not) so much, (not) that much

絶対: ぜったい, absolutely, unconditionally

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 No.69578

>>69177

The nice thing about borderline ecchi manga is how the descriptions are all about breast and nipple specifics.

>>69487

pg3 panel 2

The second handwritten bit is

<自分だって半ソデじゃん

"You're wearing short sleeves, you know"

It's meant to be a counter to the complaint about eating ice cream in April.

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 No.69587

>>69578

<自分だって半ソデじゃん

<半ソデ

<Half-sleeve

I simply couldn't decipher this one. I went with 自分 alone, as you can tell.

And that much text can't possibly be all about teats. Now I want to read it some time.

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 No.69762

File: 85d04062e2ed342⋯.png (3.89 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg5.png)

File: dfa9caf6d01d491⋯.png (4.09 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg6.png)

File: 2e0791bb1c0895c⋯.png (3.66 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg7.png)

Ch2pg5

=1==========

>haa?

=2==========

>Could it be… "that" girl, Chizuru?

TN: I emphasized "that" since the word she uses may be used to address a rival.

>Chizuru? You mean Azusa nee-san's classmate?

=3==========

>Aahh, I see… She seems like a good girl. Good for all the wrong reasons…

TN: lit.: "she's pretty/proper, for many reasons, but wrong/different…" weird sentence

>Why do you have that look of superiority?

=4==========

>So Ryo-chan's crush is…

>Fuu

TN: I'm thinking about using normal human being laughs from now on, but idk

Ch2pg6

=1==========

*Tadikarao

=2==========

>She's a nice match for Ryo-chan!

>Hey

>I always thought he would prefer robots over girls. Robots!!

Ch2pg7

=1==========

>So Chizuru is causing trouble too…

<Gotta fix that

>You can do it, Ryo-chan!!

>What's with that reaction…

>Onee-chan is gonna help you out!!

>Really, what are you doing…

=4==========

*Bipedal Trooper

*Tadikarao

=5==========

*I got to see it up close, it was so cool!!

*I'm…

=6==========

>Ryotaro!!

Vocabulary

相手: あいて, other party, addressee, opponent (sports, etc.)

同級生: どうきゅうせい, classmate, classmates

彼女: かのじょ, she, her

綺麗: きれい, pretty, lovely, beautiful, fair

イロイロ: 色々, various

いろいろあって: what with this and that, for a number of reasons

-っぽい: -ish, -like

違う: ちがう

もったい: superior airs, air of importance

つく: 就く, to ascend (the throne), to accede

想い人: おもいびと, loved one, lover, sweetheart

らしい: -ish, like a …, typical of …, appropriate for …, becoming of …, worthy of the name …

やっぱり: too, also, likewise, either, as expected

女の子: おんあのこ, girl, daughter

より: rather than

苦労: くろう, troubles, hardships

編集: へんしゅう, editing, compilation, editorial (e.g. committee)

さんもな

応援: おうえん, aid, assistance, help, reinforcement, rooting, barracking, support, cheering

真近: まぢか, proximity, nearness, soon, nearby

まぢかい: near at hand

あんなに: to that extent, to that degree

凄い: すごい

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 No.69769

>>69762

<gotta fix that

Thats another weird one, I think it's

>編集: へんしゅう, editing, compilation, editorial (e.g. committee)

+

>-さ: normalizing suffix

+

>の (particle)+も(particle)

=

lit.: (The thing that is) edditing, too…

=

Gotta fix that

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 No.69816

>>69762

pg5 panel 3

>あーまー 彼女も綺麗だし イロイロあったっぽいけど 違うねー

"Aahh, well… she's pretty, and looks like she has a lot going for her, but nope."

イロイロあったっぽい literally means "has various things" but is probably a reference to her having a great body, so I tried to refer to that.

panel 4

About the "fuu", it looks like Ryo dreamily sighing at the sight of his robotfu, so maybe replacing it with *sigh* could work.

pg7 panel 1

>千鶴も…苦労するなぁ…

"Chizuru's… got it tough too…."

I'm reading the sentence as a casual form of「千鶴も苦労してる」. The なぁ remains that ineffable suffix that lots of people complain about translating.

http://www.jgram.org/pages/viewOne.php?tagE=naa

>>69769

As for the handwritten part, it looks like

>編集さんもな

which could be several things:

1. "The editors have it tough too" if we read the kanji like you wrote + さん to make it refer to the editors as people, with も referring to the previous 苦労する. It would then be a joke, referring to how the manga is pushing not-porn boundaries and giving the editors trouble.

2. "X-san has it tough too" if it turns out the kanji refer to someone else in the story that also has the hots for Ryo. If this is true, either we haven't met them yet or I forgot the name from earlier.

In my opinion you got the kanji right and it's #1 (a throwaway gag), but like you said earlier, it's hard to read handwriting sometimes.

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 No.69843

>>69816

>"Aahh, well… she's pretty, and looks like she has a lot going for her, but nope."

>イロイロあったっぽい literally means "has various things" but is probably a reference to her having a great body, so I tried to refer to that.

Yeah that's what I tried to do too. But that seems like a better way of phrasing it.

>"Chizuru's… got it tough too…."

Wouldn't that require a passive form of that verb? I interpreted it as "Chizuru is doing trouble too", because she sees Chizuru as a rival.

>As for the handwritten

That first interpretation is probably the correct one. I forgot about the context of this manga, I even wrote it down on the OP. It's most likely a reference to how troublesome the previous series was.

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 No.69876

>>69843

>Wouldn't that require a passive form of that verb? I interpreted it as "Chizuru is doing trouble too", because she sees Chizuru as a rival.

苦労する is used more for having trouble than causing it. Here are some example sentences:

http://www.romajidesu.com/dictionary/meaning-of-%E8%8B%A6%E5%8A%B4%E3%81%99%E3%82%8B.html

https://hinative.com/en-US/questions/813616

It seems the meaning of 苦労する went from simply "working hard" to "having a lot of trouble thanks to working hard". The common use of ご苦労さま generally implies the person had it rough thanks to doing something.

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 No.70068

File: bc268bb5773c0d5⋯.png (3.63 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg8.png)

File: 583006b55b4419a⋯.png (3.42 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg9.png)

Ch2pg8

=1==========

>Kiyao!!

>Yo

=2==========

>Good morning Amu-chan.

>Are you still climbing trees?

>You'll be a senior high schooler next week!

<that's ok, but…

=3==========

>Are you coming back from work?

>No, in fact…

=4==========

>Look at this!

>I just got my licence!

Ch2pg9

=1==========

>Does that mean you can drive your tractor on roads now?

>That's right! This is the first time in my life I got a licence! I'm so happy!!

=2==========

>So I figured I would take my little sister for a tour!!

>In any case, this thing's top speed is only 15km/h

=3==========

>Still, you can use it to go out to the city too.

>That's the spirit! You gotta have ambition, boy!

=4==========

>I've made a life goal for myself to have a thousand different qualifications!

>For now I'm starting with my driver's license, but I'm gonna be great someday!

=5==========

>Despite being a little stupid, you're quite skillful Kiyao, I'm sure you can do anything.

>Ni shi shi* You're pushing it a little there. But I'll let it pass this time, for the compliment.

*TN: I'm 98.3% sure that's supposed to be a laugh

>Wah, that's nice of you (棒)

TN: I didn't understand the inclusion of 棒 at the end there. I suspect Ryotaro is either still making fun of him somehow, or embarrassed for his comment.

=6==========

>Anyway, you're pretty cool, Kiyao.

>Hmm!

Vocabulary

あいかわらず: as ever, as usual, the same, still

木登り: きのぼり, as ever, as usual, the same, still

来週: らいしゅう, next week

高校生: こうこうせい, senior high school student

手伝い: てつだい, helper, assistant, help

手伝う: てつだう, to help, to assist, to aid

帰りかい: かえり, return, coming back

実は: じつは, as a matter of fact, by the way, to tell you the truth, to be honest, frankly

俺: おれ, I, me

免許証: めんきょしょう, licence, license, permit, certificate (of qualification)

取る: とる, to take, to pick up, to harvest, to earn, to win, to choose

公道: こうどう, public road

走る: はしる, to travel (movement of vehicles), to drive

人生初: じんせいはつ, (for the) first time in one's life

免許: めんきょ, license, permit, licence, certificate

嬉しい: うれしい, happy, glad, pleasant

妹: いもうと, younger sister

つれる: to lead, to take (a person)

ツーリング: touring

とはいえ: though, although, be that as it may, nonetheless

最高: さいこう, highest, supreme, the most

速い: 早い, はやい, fast, quick, hasty, brisk

しか: nothing else but [this]

都会: とかい, city

のに: although, when, and yet, despite this, in spite of, even though, but even so, but even then, however, nevertheless, for all that, notwithstanding that

乗る: のる, to get on (train, plane, bus, ship, etc.), to get in, to board, to take, to embark

野望: やぼう, ambition, aspiration, designs, treachery

第ー歩: だいいっぽ, first step

人生: じんせい, (human) life (i.e. conception to death)

目標: もくひょう, mark, objective, target

千: せん, 1,000, thousand

資格: しかく, qualifications, requirements, capabilities

取る: とる, to take, to pick up, to harvest, to earn, to win, to choose

かかげる: 掲げる, to publish, to print, to carry (an article), to put up, to hang out, to hoist, to fly (a sail), to float (a flag, kite, etc.), to tuck up (e.g. sleeves), to roll up, to tout (a principle, plan, etc.), to adopt (a slogan), to stoke a fire, to fan a flame

とりあえず: at once, first of all, for the time being, for now

運転免許: うんてんめんきょ, driver's license, driver's licence

コンプリート: complete

おきる: 起きる, to get up, to rise, to blaze up (fire), to wake up, to be awake, to stay awake, to occur (usu. of unfavourable incidents), to happen, to take place

器用: きよう, nimble-fingered, dexterous, dextrous, skillful (with the fingers), skilful, handy, clever, shrewd, ingenious

何でも: any, whatever one likes, by all means, anything, everything

っしっしっ: shh! (used to silence someone), sh!, shoo! (used to drive off animals, etc.) (But I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be a laugh)

一言: ひとこと, single word, a few words, brief comment

余分: よぶん, extra, excess, surplus

褒める: ほめる, to praise, to admire, to speak well

分: ふん, minute

分: ぶ, one-tenth, one percent (one-tenth of a wari), 3 mm (one-tenth of a sun), 2.4 mm (one-tenth of a mon, a traditional unit used to measure shoe sizes), 0.1 degree (one-tenth of a do, used to measure body temperature on any temperature scale)

分: ぶん, part, segment, share, ration, rate

許す: やるす, to permit, to allow, to approve, to tolerate

やる: 遣る, to do, to undertake, to perform, to play (a game), to study

心: こころ, mind, heart, spirit

広い: ひろい, spacious, vast, wide

棒: ぼう, pole, rod, stick

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 No.70126

>>70068

pg9 panel 3

IMO the right bubble is basically half a sentence, with the rest heavily implied. To break it down,

"Nice… but(へーしかし) since you're going to town (これから都会にいくのに), even if you're riding this… (これに乗れてもなぁ)"

It reads like Ryotaro is implying that there's no point in riding such a slow tractor into town. Maybe something like

"I see… but are you going to ride this all the way into town…?"

>いーんだよ!これは野望の第一歩ってヤツさ

ってヤツ is being used like "that sort of thing" rather than referring to a person.

"It's fine! It's the first step of my ambitions, sorta thing."

panel 5

"Ni shi shi" is indeed a laugh, sort of a mix between laughing and snickering.

棒 is a shortened version of 棒読み, or "monotone reading". Because it sounds like someone tepidly reading from a script, it comes off as sarcasm (he doesn't actually mean what he says). You're right that Ryo is making fun of Kiyao, but unfortunately there's no easy way to show sarcasm. Perhaps

"Yeah, real kind of you there."

though that comes off a bit harsh.

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 No.70140

File: 49de009248e6fbd⋯.png (3.95 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg10.png)

>>70126

Got it. I was wondering why 乗れてもなぁ was conjugated to the te-form, makes sense that it's a half sentence.

>ってヤツ

There are so many expressions based on this quotation form, it's not even funny. Noted, thanks for the lesson.

Ch2pg10

=1==========

>You're 16 years old and already have clear life goals, and this drive to do things.

>I think that's pretty awesome.

>Ahn? Well that's because…

=2==========

>Starting next week, we're both going to Tokyo, right!?

<Hick pride!!

>And I wanna stick it to those city folk!

=5==========

>Wh… WHAT THE HELL AMU!

>What if your big bro can't get an erection anymore, then what?!

=7==========

>hmm…?

Vocabulary

人生: じんせい, (human) life (i.e. conception to death)

目標: もくひょう, mark, objective, target

はっきりして: to be clear, to be definite, to be certain, to be exact, to become clear, to clear up

歳: さい, -years-old

だって: after all, because

俺達: おれたち

来週: らいしゅう, next week

東京: とうきょう

高校: こうこう, senior high school, high school

田舎者: いなかもの, countryman, provincial, person from the country, provincial person, bumpkin, hick, hillbilly

意地: いじ, stubborness, obstinacy, willpower, pride

都会: とかい, city

奴ら: やつら, they, those guys

舐める: なめる, to taste, to make fun of, to make light of, to put down, to treat with contempt, to underestimate

兄ちゃん: にいちゃん, familiar form of "older brother"

兄ちゃん: あんちゃん, (my) older brother

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 No.70391

File: 1f0f3afec2c9da7⋯.png (3.97 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg11.png)

Ch2pg11

=2==========

>Looks like Amu-chan will be lonely without her brother.

>Ah… I get it, but…

=3==========

>Listen, Amu. In life, there are moments of parting, and moments of reunion.

>It all happens on is own time. I care about you, and I need you to think of me too so…

TN: here's another half sentence that needed some interpretation on the use of 好き ("suki", something/someone that you like), it has a double meaning as both "like" and "love" and in this case sounds like a half assed excuse for a break up/parting.

=6==========

>By the way, Ryotaro.

=7==========

>Eh?

>You're already done with your packing to Tokyo, I hope.

Vocabulary

離れる: はなれる, to be separated, to be apart, to be distant

寂しい: さびしい, lonely, lonesome, solitary, desolate

いいか: Listen! (used to get someone's attention)

-には: for (in regard to), in order to

出会い: であい, meeting, rendezvous, encounter

別れ: わかれ, parting, separation, farewell, (lateral) branch, fork, offshoot, division, section

別れる: わかれる, to be divided, to part from, to separate (usu. for people), to bid farewell

てモ (もの): thing, object, article, stuff, substance

いつかは: sooner or later, in due time, in due course

だって: after all, because

ところで: by the way, incidentally, even if, no matter (who, what, when, where, why, how)

ちゃんと: diligently, seriously, earnestly, reliably, steadily, legitimately

東京行き: とうきょうゆき, Tokyo-bound

準備: じゅんび, preparation, setup, arrangements, provision, reserve

おわる: to finish, to end, to close

だろう: seems, I think, I guess, I wonder, I hope

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 No.70393

>>70391

ssshhhhhh

no one makes a sound, otherwise loli autist will show up

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 No.70520

>>70391

panel 3

Indeed, it's a half-assed excuse. 「好きなモンが出来る」 is "to be able to (have) someone/thing to love", or in other words, "to (be able to) fall in love". The sentence would thus go something like

"One day (even) Amu will fall in love with someone, and I (onii-chan) will too…."

Naturally, her reaction implies that she's already fallen in love with him.

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 No.70532

>>70520

>好きなモン

>to love someone

>not "the act of loving"

な makes all the difference here. It really bothers me when I miss it because of something so trivial that I should have known.

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 No.70617

>>70532

It happens to everyone, which is why even professionals have proofreaders.

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 No.70652

File: 76f361ce1e8c9e0⋯.png (3.77 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg12.png)

Ch2pg12

=1==========

>Packing?

>Hey, hold on tight.

=3==========

>This is faster than I thought… How fast does it go again?

>Ahn? 12 kilometers.

>That so? It feels pretty fast.

Vocabulary

準備: じゅうんび, preparation, setup, arrangements, provision, reserve

しっかり: tightly (holding on), firmly, securely

速い: 早い

結構: けっこう, splendid, nice, wonderful, delicious, sweet

感じる: かんじる, to feel, to sense, to experience

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 No.70687

>>70652

panel 1

「しっかりしてくれよー」 is being used colloquially as "Keep it together" or "get ahold of yourself".

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 No.70752

>>70687

That matches his expression and the situation better

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 No.70773

File: 790026f81dee432⋯.png (3.68 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg13.png)

Ch2pg13

=1==========

>This must be how a robot feels like too…

=2==========

>Oh, squirrel!

>Yeah, it really is a squirrel.

=3==========

>Seeing things like that gives off the real feeling of the countryside.

>That and the bumpy road without guardrails, are we in the sticks or just in the mountain itself?

>Hahaha

>Ah… I wanna go to the city already!

=4==========

>Squirrel squirrel!

>Hey, that's dangerous, be quiet now.

>If we go to my home, there's a baby pig there.

{Out of panel} is actually a mini pig

=5==========

>Pig?

>His name is Pork

>Pigs are not cuuute

>This one really is!

>You two look like brother and sister, you've always been in good therms like that…

Vocabulary

リス: squirrel (excluding flying squirrels)

つーか (abr ってゆうか): or rather (say), or better (say), or perhaps I should say, or, how should I put it,…, I mean

ああいう: that sort of, like that

田舎: いなか, rural area, countryside, the sticks

実感: じっかん, real feeling, actual feeling

道路: どうろ, road, highway

ボコボコ: holey, full of holes or dents, lumpy, bumpy

ガードレール: guardrail

山: やま, mountain, hill

そのもの: the very thing, itself

都会: とかい, city

危: き, danger

おとなしく: meekly, obediently, submissively, quietly, like a lamb

うち: 家, house, home (one's own)

居る: いる

兄妹: けいまい, older brother and younger sister

特に: とくに, particularly, especially

とこ: 常(prefix) constant, unchanging, eternal

仲いい: なかいい, close, intimate, on good terms

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 No.70775

I hope you guys find a type setter and upload it someday.

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 No.70825

>>70773

panel 5

>たしかにかわいくねーなっ

"Yeah, it really isn't cute."

Based on the lower-left bubble, this is Kiyao talking.

>キミら兄妹って特にそういうトコ仲いいよね…

"You siblings (キミら兄妹って) really are on good terms (仲いいよね) when it comes to things like this (特にそういうトコ)…"

This is probably Ryotaro speaking about how Amu and Kiyao suddenly agree with each other about Pork being not cute.

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 No.71930

File: e9d0b8a5ec67a3f⋯.png (3.72 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg14.png)

File: 102e231ef5d16ef⋯.png (3.84 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg15.png)

Ch2pg14

=1==========

>AH!

=2==========

>Piggy!

>Oh

=3==========

>Welcome Ryotaro

>Welcome

=4==========

>I'm home, sis*

>I'll pack my stuff for Tokyo

*TN: I didn't use "nee-san" in this case because he didn't refer to anyone by name. I'm going to use honorifics only if attached to a name, too keep the tone of a conversation.

<Excuse us

>It's all done already…

=5==========

>Really, your luggage is packed full, but I think it's good to go…

>We put it in the warehouse.

>Ok, let's go get it Ryotaro.

>Ye- the warehouse…

Vocabulary

僕: ぼく

東京: とうきょう

持つ: もつ, to hold (in one's hand), to take, to carry

物: もの

準備: じゅんび, preparation, setup, arrangements, provision, reserve

おじゃま: hindrance, intrusion

かさばる: to be bulky, to be unwieldy, to grow voluminous

スーツケース: suitcase

送る: おくる, to send (a thing), to dispatch, to despatch, to transmit

使う: つかう, to use (a thing, method, etc.), to make use of, to put to use

蔵: くら, warehouse, storehouse, cellar, magazine, granary, godown, depository, treasury, elevator

Ch2pg15

=1==========

>Why did you stutter there? Some sort of holed up trauma?

>Nah… Is not that, but…

<pugyu

<gyu

<yuh-haa

=2==========

>My dad used to be in that place all the time.

=3==========

>When I was still a child, whenever he came here I-

<I… don't remember him very well

[I haven't seen my dad in… 10 years now]

Vocabulary

𠮟: しっ, shh! (used to silence someone), sh!

られて

閉じ込める: とじこめる, to lock up, to shut up, to imprison

そういう: such, like that, that sort of, very

父さん: とうさん, father, dad, papa, pa, pop, daddy, dada

いつも: always, usually, every time, (with neg. verb) never

居る: いる

場所: ばしょ, place, location, spot, position

子供の頃: こどものころ, as a child, when one was a child, childhood

近づく: ちかづく, to approach, to draw near, to get close

覚える: おぼえる, to memorize, to memorise, to commit to memory, to learn by heart, to bear in mind, to remember, to learn, to pick up, to acquire

年: ねん, counter for years

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 No.72081

>>71930

pg14 panel 3

I'd go with "Welcome back, Ryotaro" to get the whole お帰り effect, but it's not a big deal.

panel 4

>やっぱりまだだったか…

"So you haven't packed yet…"

panel 5

>んじゃかさばる物はスーツケースにでも入れて送っちまおうスーツケースはっと…

"Okay, (んじゃ) I'll put all the bulky stuff in a suitcase and send it. (かさばる物はスーツケースにでも入れて送っちまおう) The suitcase is…. (スーツケースはっと…)"

>あたしが前に使って蔵に入れたよ

"I put it in the storehouse after I used it last time."

I'd go with "storehouse" since warehouse usually means a really large commercial space.

>そうか じゃ良太郎持って来てくれ

"Oh, okay. Ryotaro, go get it."

pg15 panel 1

>なんだ叱られて閉じとめられたとかのトラウマか?

"What (なんだ), did you get traumatized over being scolded and locked up in there or something? (叱られて閉じとめられたとかのトラウマか?)"

That's pretty long so it would need to be shortened if typeset.

panel 3

>子供の頃父さんにはいつもここに近づくなっていわれてたしー

"When I was a kid (子供の頃), dad would always (父さんにはいつも) tell me not to go near there (ここに近づくなっていわれてたしー)"

The use of ここ implies that the father was in the storehouse and was telling Ryotarou not to go near "here", but I'm not sure how to get all that across.

>僕の父さんは10年前…いなくなった

"Ten years ago… my father passed away."

いなくなる is literally "disappeared" but is a common euphemism for death. I would go with "passed away" since that's used the same way in English.

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 No.72107

File: 93c69658395f04b⋯.png (3.76 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg16.png)

>>72081

Jesus that was bad. I better step up my game.

Ch2pg16

=2==========

>That's because Ryo-chan was too small then.

>hehe

>You used to get in a lot of trouble.

=3==========

>Well, I'll go get it then.

>Ah, wait.

=4==========

>This is a good opportunity to show you something in there.

>Eh?

=5==========

>Do you want to know what

>kind of person our father was?

Vocabulary

ちっちゃい: tiny, little, wee

いろいろ: various

苦労: くろう, troubles, hardships

取る: とる to take, to pick up, to harvest, to earn, to win, to choose

待つ: まつ

機会: きかい, chance, opportunity

中: なか

自分: じぶん

父親: ささおや, father

どんな: what, what kind of

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 No.72116

>>72107

panel 2

>イロイロ苦労してんな おまえ

Since Kiyao is saying this as someone hearing this for the first time, it's probably "you went through a lot of trouble, huh?"

panel 3

I don't know if it's one suitcase or multiple suitcases, so whether it's "them" or "it" will have to be determined later.

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 No.72126

File: 29ffdd543b3a8cc⋯.png (3.91 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg17.png)

Ch2pg17

=2==========

>What's this? Is this storehouse used to make something?

>It's more of a workshop than a storehouse actually.

=3==========

>Erm… About that suitcase…

>ouch

=4==========

>Hey, Ryotaro

>Don't stop so sudden-

Vocabulary

作り: つくり, making, producing, manufacturing, building, construction, make, structure

蔵: くら, warehouse, storehouse, cellar, magazine, granary, godown, depository, treasury, elevator

作業場: さぎょうば, works, workshop

急に: きゅうに, suddenly, abruptly, immediately

止む: やむ, to cease, to stop, to be over

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 No.72128

File: 1633fefa4b25c95⋯.jpg (862.86 KB, 1249x1800, 1249:1800, Img_066.jpg)

Might as well include the next page in today's quota

Ch2pg18

>this is…

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 No.72167

>>72128

Every dad should leave their kid a robot.

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 No.72193

>>72128

Robot'ws feet are screwed in backwards

This bothers me greatly.

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 No.72238

File: d0e27f0d8518b78⋯.png (3.68 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg19.png)

File: b3a803b8ceff1a0⋯.png (3.96 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg20.png)

File: ca24db366e7abee⋯.gif (1.91 MB, 640x360, 16:9, SpottedOffbeatElk-size_res….gif)

File: 7a2a73293ea60e8⋯.png (4.04 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg21.png)

Ch2pg19

=1==========

>This is what dad did for work

>Eh?

>See, father used to work in robot development…

>EEEHHHH!!

=2==========

>That's… I never heard anything about that…

>That's because he passed away 10 years ago.

>And we didn't want to over stimulate you.

>But you'll probably be ok now, Ryo-chan.

=3==========

>Besides, your consanguinity is undeniable.

>To think even Ryotaro would come to like robots so much.

<yeah

<yeah

=4===========

>Do you wanna ride it?

=5==========

…eh? Does it still work?

>Oh yeah… See…

>Right?

>Riiight…

<fu fu fu fu fu

Vocabulary

仕事: しごと, work, job, business, occupation, employment, vocation, task

開発: かいはつ, development, exploitation

全然: ぜんぜん, not at all (with neg. verb)

知る: しる

年: ねん

居る: いる

いなくなる: to disappear, to stop being, to leave

あんまり: remainder, rest, balance, remains, scraps, residue, remnant, not very (with negative sentence), not much

刺激: しげき, stimulus, impetus, incentive, encouragement, motivation, provocation, excitement, thrill

とはいえ: though, although, be that as it may, nonetheless

血: ち, blood, consanguinity

争えない: あらそえない, indisputable, undeniable, unmistakable

争う: あらそう, to compete, to contest, to contend

乗る: のる, to get on (train, plane, bus, ship, etc.), to get in, to board, to take, to embark

動く: うごく, to operate, to run, to go, to work

そりゃ: very, extremely, that is

Ch2pg20

=1==========

{Sfx} Zun

=2==========

>wa

>wa

>wa

>wa

=3==========

>WAAAAAAー

Ch2ph21

=1==========

>It's… it's a real

>ROBOT!!!

{Sfx} Gashun

=2==========

>But it's a small one.

>Looks lame.

>You and your sister know nothing about what looks good or not!!

>We rarely see Ryotaro get mad…

>Be nice Ryo-chan…

=3==========

>Yeah but…

>WHAT NOW!?

Vocabulary

しかし: however, but

小さい: ちいさい, small, little, tiny

かっこ悪い: unattractive, ugly, unstylish, uncool

かっこう: shape, form, figure, posture, pose

悪い: わるい

達: たら, pluralizing suffix (esp. for people & animals; formerly honorific)

兄妹: けいまい, older brother and younger sister

かっこ良い: かっこよい, attractive, good-looking, stylish, cool, smooth, neat, with-it, groovy

わかんない: not understanding, not knowing

分かる: わかる

めずらしい: unusual, rare, curious

怒る: おこる, to get angry, to get mad

優しい: やさしい, tender, kind, gentle, graceful, affectionate, amiable

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 No.72243

>>72238

>Ch2ph21

>You and your sister know nothing about what looks good or not!!

I adapted this one a little bit

lit.: You and your sister don't understand these good looks.

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 No.72245

>>72167

Every dad should leave their kid with his semen-thirsty older sisters.

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 No.72303

>>72238

>>72243

Looks good, the only issue I have is whether random readers would know what consanguinity means. For a more familiar phrase, maybe "The apple doesn't fall far from the tree".

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 No.72462

File: cfa1efda4426d2c⋯.png (3.78 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg22.png)

File: 4ae0c4ebd641557⋯.png (4.06 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg23.png)

Ch2pg22

=1==========

>I think your old man was pretty cool. Building something like this and all that.

=2==========

>Uh…

>Yeah?

>The tomatoes he grew were the best.

>And compared to that, this is just awesome.

<The tomatoes were great too though.

=3==========

>Yeah…

=4==========

>However…

>Uh?

=5==========

>I still think robots walking on two legs really make no sense at all.

{Sfx} "zurura" the best I found for it was "sneaky/cunning" (person)

=6==========

>OH YEAH WHY'S THAT!! {bottom of the bubble} Robots all the way!!

TN: I didn't quite understood 全ひてーか, or might be an abbreviation, so I went with what google gave me

>C'mon don't get so mad man…

>If that's the case…

Vocabulary

うち: 中, or 内, or 家 (house)

トマト

精一杯: せいいっぱい, the best one can do, one's best effort, with all one's might, to the best of one's ability

それに: besides, in addition, also, moreover

比べる: くらべる, to compare, to make a comparison

二本: にほん, two (long cylindrical things)

脚: きゃく, counter for chairs or seats

脚: あし, foot, leg

リアル: real

ナンセンス: nonsense

怒る: おこる, to get angry, to get mad

だって: after all, because

Ch2lg23

=1==========

>On your marks.

>Ready.

=2==========

[Thug of war]

>BANG

>Wah!

>Winner! Tractor!

=3==========

[Race]

>Wah!

>Winner! Tractor.

TN: Sfx doesn't seem to have any special meaning here, but it took a frontspace place so I had to include this note

Vocabulary

位置につく: いちにつく, to take one's place, to take one's position, to go into position, to line up

くらべ: contest, comparison, competition

勝者: しょうしゃ, winner, victor

競走: きょうそう, race

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 No.72465

>>72462

>random tomato reference

I looked to see if it could actually mean anything else, but I'm stumped. Kiyao really likes his tomatoes, I guess.

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 No.72472

>>72462

>>72465

精一杯: せいいっぱい, the best one can do, one's best effort, with all one's might, to the best of one's ability

It might be better to make reference to the effort put in raising tomatoes, instead of their quality.

>When your father grew his tomatoes, he put his all into it

>And compared to that, this is just awesome.

<The tomatoes were great too though.

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 No.72495

>>72462

HOLD THE FUCKING PRESSES

Kiyao is talking about his own father, he mentions "house" so I thought he meant Ryotaro's dad grew tomatoes at home, but of course he's talking about his dad at home. Fuck me.

>The best my dad can do is grow tomatoes.

>Compared to that, this is awesome

<His tomatoes are great too, though

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 No.72578

>>72462

pg 22 panel 5

The sound effect is probably meant to be "slip" or "slide", from ずるずる ("slither").

https://archive.is/UIRIJ

panel 6

ひてー is probably ひてい (否定), to deny or repudiate. ロボ全ひてーか thus means "Are you denying all robots?!", or something like "Are you anti-robot?!"

>>72495

The edit looks good.

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 No.72808

File: 749d2c1aedd9bc6⋯.png (4.02 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg24.png)

>>72578

Thanks a lot for sticking to help. This is being very good for me.

Ch2pg24

=1==========

>Let's age then, for the same size, four wheeled vehicles have the advantage in power and speed.

{sfx}

がく~: collapsing

するるる(or スルー): ignoring, looking the other way

=2==========

>I believe humanoid types have many disadvantages.

>Because of their legs, their center of gravity is too high and they are less stable.

>Across the ground surface difficulty varies too, that's why they are more susceptible to road conditions.

=3==========

>Oooh Kiyao-kun, you're pretty smart

<You don't look like it

>That's because machines are my specialty.

<I'm stupid

=4==========

>Yeah but, this one is particularly difficult.

>That so?

>Yeah, the seat is too small and I have to stay crouched all the time, it's hard.

>I see.

=5==========

>Besides.

=6==========

>Now that I have had some practice in moving it, maybe the result will be different don't you think?

>Wow, you don't back down do you.

=7==========

>Brother, I'm hungry…

>Oh, do you want to go back?

Vocabulary

同じよう: おなじよう, similar

同じる: どうじる, to agree

四輪: よんりん, four-wheeled

有利: ゆうり,advantageous, better, profitable, lucrative

型: かた, model, type (e.g. of machine, goods, etc.)

不利: ふり, disadvantage, handicap, unfavorable, unfavourable, drawback

脚: あし, leg

重心: じゅうしん, centre of gravity (center)

高い: たかい, high, tall

がちで: (slang) truly, in earnest

安定: あんてい, stability, equilibrium

悪い: わるい

接地: せっち, ground (elec), contact patch (between car tyre and road)

面: おもて, surface

面: づら, suffix, looking like a …, acting as if a ….

かかる: to span, to bridge, to cross, to straddle, OR to take (a resource, e.g. time or money), to come into view, to arrive, to have started to, to be on the verge of OR to suffer from OR to be the work of, to be the result of, to be done by

圧力: あつりょく, pressure, stress, coercion, arm-twisting

はんぱ: remnant, fragment, incomplete set, fraction, odd sum, incompleteness

路面: ろめん, road surface

状況: じょうきょう, state of affairs (around you), situation, circumstances

影響: えいきょう, influence, effect

受ける: うける, to receive, to get

やすい: action is easy, added to stem verb

なかなか: very, considerably, easily, readily, fairly, quite, highly, rather

鋭い: するどい, sharp (blade), pointed, perceptive, keen, quick (mind), astute, shrewd, discerning

外見: がいけん, outward appearance

ギャップ: gap

俺: おれ

機械: きかい, machine, mechanism

系: けい, system, lineage, group

得意: とくい, one's strong point, one's forte, one's specialty

難しい: むずかしい

座席: ざせき, seat

小さい: ちいさい, small, little, tiny

座る: すわる, to sit, to squat, to assume (a position)

すら: even, if only, if just, as long as, the only thing needed

大変: たいへん, very, greatly, difficult, hard

ふむ: hmm, I see, hrm

少し: すこし

練習: れんしゅう, practice, practising

うまく: 上手く(上手い), skilfully, skillfully, well, aptly, cleverly

動かす: うごかす, to move, to shift, to stir, to budge, to change position

結果: けっか, result, consequence, outcome, effect

違う: ちがう

かもしれない: may, might, perhaps, may be, possibly

めげる: to be discouraged, to shrink from

奴: やつ

おなか: stomach

空く: すく, to become less crowded, to thin out, to get empty

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 No.72858

File: 0a6dcf324c29f6a⋯.png (3.46 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg25.png)

File: 9ed05fc0ba90624⋯.png (4.22 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg26.png)

File: 897882a77736873⋯.png (3.98 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg27.png)

Ch2pg25

=1==========

>You're going?

TN: lit.: "are you going to eat?" But it sounds weird, nips really like to ask rhetorical questions back.

>My parents are in the town meeting, grandma is alone at home, so…

>Gotta go

>Alright

=2==========

>Bye bye!

>See ya.

=3==========

>I wanna see another squirrel!!

>Again? Wasn't the piggy enough to satisfy you?

Vocabulary

寄り合いで: よりあい, meeting, gathering

親: おや, parent, parents

りす: squirrel

豚: ぶた

満足: まんぞく, satisfaction, contentment, complacency

Ch2pg26

=1==========

>Something bothering you… about the robot?

>Hatsune nee-chan…

TN: This is the first time she's being mentioned by name, and there are other ways to read her name in kanji. I'm going with Hatsune for now.

=2==========

>Sort of… I was thinking about…

=3==========

>Tadikarao. I wonder why it was there…

Vocabulary

気になる: to be on one's mind, to worry one, to care about, to be bothered by, to feel uneasy, to be anxious, to be curious about, to feel like, to feel inclined to, to fancy, to like, to catch one's eye

初音: Uine, Haine, Hatsune

Ch2pg27

=1==========

>Ah, Tadikarao…

>Ryo-chan's crush… right?

=2==========

>My… crush…?

>Come on, is ok to have a crush.

>Sister.

=3==========

>It's only natural that it would be your crush, after all…

=4==========

>That robot is your father's creation.

>So that's why!!

>eh?

Vocabulary

片想い: かたおもい, unrequited love

当然: とうせん, natural, as a matter of course, justified, deserved, reasonable

なにせ: at any rate, anyhow

父親: ちちおや, father

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 No.73137

File: 487548ca239e62d⋯.png (3.9 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg28.png)

File: f9f30d5fd7aedbe⋯.png (3.75 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg29.png)

File: cce2f74e16c3d0a⋯.png (4.58 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg30.png)

Ch2pg28

=1==========

<eh?

=2==========

*eh?

=3==========

>EEEEHHHHHH?

>Right? Idon't think there are many people who can build such a thing…

>Wait, sis! You're dumping a lot of information on him…

=3==========

>It's all good, in any case…

>oh

>Ah, Kaede nee-san…

=4==========

>Ryo-chan!

Vocabulary

そりゃ: very, extremely, that is

何人も: everyone, all, nobody (with negative verb)

教える: おしえる, to teach, to inform, to instruct

どうせ: anyhow, in any case, at any rate, after all, at all, no matter what

楓: Kaede

Ch2pg29

=1==========

>What happened? You look distressed…

>It's Ookiribayashi-san's tractor, it fell out of the road.

>Eh? Kiyao?

=2==========

>I was passing by when it happened!!

>Quick, bring some rope!!

=4==========

>Kiyao!

Vocabulary

あわてる: 慌てる, to become confused (disconcerted, disorganized, disorganised), to be flustered, to panic

栗林: Ookiribayashi

路肩: ろけん, shoulder of a road, berm

おちる: 落ちる, to fall down, to drop, to fall (e.g. rain), to sink (e.g. sun or moon), to fall onto (e.g. light or one's gaze), to be used in a certain place (e.g. money)

たまたま: 偶々, casually, unexpectedly, accidentally, by chance

通り掛かる: とりかかる, to happen to pass by

はしご: 梯子, ladder, stairs,going to several places in succession (e.g. barhopping)

ロープ: rope

早く: はやく

Ch2pg30

=2==========

>Kiyao!!

>Stop, Ryotaro!!

=3==========

>But sis…

>He is hanging by a dead tree, it may break if you go there.

Vocabulary

枯木: かれき, dead tree, dry wood

引っ掛かる: ひっかかる, to be caught in, to be stuck in

折れる: おれる, to break, to be broken, to snap, to fracture

かもしれない: may, might, perhaps, may be, possibly.

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 No.73141

File: 786a59a52cbca0e⋯.png (3.88 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg31.png)

Ch2pg31

=1==========

>Yo, Ryotaro

>Kiyao!!

=2==========

>Man, I messed up, got distracted by a squirrel. This is just like me.

>Don't worry!!

>Alright alright, I'm calm.

=3==========

>But my legs are stuck, I can't move an inch.

>And your sister!?

<Yes, the situation is still the same as before.

=4==========

>She's in the truck's load cart. Unconscious…

>That thing is made of metal, we can't break it open.

>ah….

=5==========

<A person can't…? But this time for sure a robot can help!!

<Isn't this what it was made for? For this kind of situation!?

Vocabulary

まいった: I'm beaten, I give up

まいる: 参る, to go, to come, to call, to be defeated, to collapse, to die

俺: おれ

気を取られる: きをとられる, to have one's attention attracted (caught), to be preoccupied with

心配: しんぱい

脚: あし, leg

はさまる: 挟まる, to get between, to be caught in

動く: うごく, (intr) to move, to stir, to shift, to shake, to swing

妹: いもうと

まだ

同じ: おなじ, same, identical, equal, uniform, equivalent, similar, common (origin), changeless, alike, (adv)(usu. part of a 'nara' conditional) anyway, anyhow, in either case

状: じょう, shape, state

能: のう, talent, gift, function

後ろ: うしろ, back, behind, rear

荷台: にだい, (truck) load-carrying tray, (bicycle) luggage carrier, roof rack

中: なか

気を失う: きをうしなう, to lose consciousness, to faint, to black out

鉄製: てっせい, made from iron

力: ちから, りき, りょく

動かす: うごかす, (trans) to move, to shift, to stir, to budge, to change position

時: とき

こそ: for sure (emphasize preceding word)

こういう: such, like this

ために: for, for the sake of, to one's advantage, in favor of, in favour of, on behalf of

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 No.73199

>>72808

Sorry this is late, real life stuff.

panel 1

The sound effect is ずるるるる, "slide" or "slither" again.

panel 7

While he does end the sentence with か, it's more like "Oh, shall we go back then?" But that's nitpicking.

>>72858

page 25 panel 3

>やっぱり豚じゃ満足しなかったかー

"I knew the pig wouldn't be enough to satisfy you…."

panel 3

This reads to me more like "I wonder why Tadikarao exists?" It's a follow-up to the very sensible statements Kiyao made about robots being worse than four-wheeled vehicles.

>>73137

page 28 panel 3

>ちょっとー いいのー姉さん今教えちゃってー

Based on panel 4, it could be

"Wait, sis, is it okay to tell him that?"

page 29 panel 1

Maybe "fell off the road" instead of "fell out of the road".

>>73141

page 31 panel 2

Here the か is a question, so it's "Are you alright?!!"

panel 4

>鉄製だからな 人の力じゃ動かせねぇよ

"That thing is made of metal, a person can't move it."

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 No.73232

Where are the raws for this?

Also if someone could gather anon's translation and other-anon's proofreading/translation feedback, do some editing and saving it as document, it'd save me the trouble of script editing while typesetting.

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 No.73236

File: 21c810f39333031⋯.jpg (13.95 KB, 255x255, 1:1, hmmm.jpg)

>>73232

TL here. I'll do it then. After feedback, I'll make a post with the final version for each page as they are corrected. I'm thinking about tagging these posts with something you can easily ctr+F, like ##2-1 for example.

As for the pages already done, I'll organize what we already have later today.

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 No.73238

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 No.73240

>>73232

I forgot to ask if there's any kind of formatting on those documents you prefer. Is the usual format enough?

page

=panel=====

>in bubble text

<out of bubble text

*thought bubble text

Tell me if there are any suggestions you think may make the job easier.

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 No.73243

>>73240

That's fine.

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 No.73293

File: 6f21cdae214386d⋯.jpg (535.66 KB, 1920x1974, 320:329, bo-xun-lin-10.jpg)

>>73232

>>73243

Got all the pages we did so far organized in a single document, with all the corrections made. There are a couple notes about SFX there. My personal stance on it is that I don't care that much about SFX (unless when they are not real sfx, and instead are supposed to convey some sort of meaning, like an emotion or something)

https://files.catbox.moe/ljpzzj.txt

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 No.73347

File: fe26c0ebb0ef702⋯.png (3.88 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg32.png)

File: feb530b0f5867e8⋯.jpg (643.65 KB, 1246x1800, 623:900, Img_081.jpg)

File: fc6ec4effb9ea5b⋯.png (3.93 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg34.png)

Ch2pg32

=1==========

*But I still can't pilot it very well…

*Shouldn't we wait for an adult to come?

=2==========

>Ryotaro!

>What is it, Kiyao!?

=3==========

>hehe

>It looks like this tree is starting to break…

=4==========

>I'm fine, but I'm worried about my sister.

>ah…

=5==========

>Don't you think you could give us a hand with "that" robot soon?

>Please.

>Y…eah…

=6==========

>RYOTARO!

>What!?

=7==========

>This is not the time for a man

>To hesitate on helping his friends!

Vocabulary

うまい: skillful, skilful, clever, expert, wise, successful

使える: つかえる, to be usable, to be serviceable, to be useful

大人: おとな

待つ: まつ, to wait

支える: ささえる, to support, to prop, to sustain, to underlay, to hold up

樹: き

折る: おる, to break, to fracture, to break off, to snap off, to pick (e.g. flowers)

妹: いもうと

心配: しんぱい

早いとこ: はやいとこ, promptly, quickly

助けて: たすけて

たのむ: to request, to beg, to ask

どんな: what, what kind of

時: とき

友達: ともだち

迷う: まよう, to lose one's way, to waver, to hesitate, to be of two minds over, to be puzzled, to be perplexed

Ch2pg33

>Right!

Ch2pg34

=1==========

>All good, Ryotaro?

>Yes.

=2==========

>You won't be moving the robot with it's levers and pedals this time.

>eh?

>Instead, your stance and motion will be picked up by the feedback sensors in the seat.

=3==========

>If you want to move forward, you'll have to lean your body forward.

>The robot will move his body with yours as one, that's how you steer it. By changing your balance on your seat.

=4==========

{Out of panel} In a crouching position

>Oh, I see.

>This way you are can to move your limbs freely.

>Got it. I'm gonna try it now!!

=5==========

*Move with the robot…

Vocabulary

レバー: lever

ペダル: pedal

動かす: うごかす, to move, to shift, to stir, to budge, to change position

乗る: のる, to get on (train, plane, bus, ship, etc.), to get in, to board, to take, to embark

人間: にんげん

姿勢: しせい, attitude, posture, stance, approach, carriage (of the body)

動き: うごき, movement, move, motion

座席: ざせき, seat

感知: かんち, perception, sensing, noticing

重心: じゅうしん, centre of gravity (center)

かける: 掛ける, to hang (e.g. picture), to hoist (e.g. sail), to raise (e.g. flag)

操縦: そうじゅう, steering, piloting, flying, control, operation, handling

者: もの

一体に: いったいに, generally, in general

体: たい, body

取る: とる, to take, to pick up, to harvest, to earn, to win, to choose

降着: こうちゃく, landing, touchdown, splashdown, demotion (horse racing)

ポーズ: pose

そうだったんだ: oh I see

そうすれば: if so, in that case, in that situation

手足: てあし, one's hands and feet, limbs

動く: うごく, to move, to stir, to shift, to shake, to swing

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 No.73385

>>73347

page 34 panel 3

>操縦者もロボットも一体になって体で動かすんだ 座席でバランスを取ろうとするな

"The robot will move his body with yours as one, that's how you steer it. Don't (するな) try to keep your balance (バランスを取ろうと) by sitting down (座席で)."

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 No.73388

File: 42d11d1b867d613⋯.jpg (58.22 KB, 400x393, 400:393, DMZ_20060626_040.jpg)

File: 3614edc961f58d5⋯.jpg (44.51 KB, 430x439, 430:439, DSC06197.JPG)

>>73347

Also, the 降着ポーズ handwritten part outside page 34's panel 4 is a reference to Armored Trooper Votoms- specifically, the pose in pics related. It's a position for the pilot to enter/exit the vehicle from the ground, so it's referring to panel 1.

I don't really know if there's a way to translate this.

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 No.73406

>>73388

You really know your mecha trivia, anon.

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 No.73409

>>73406

To be fair I'm relying heavily on Google. Would be nice if the story ends up mecha enough to get some serious fans involved.

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 No.73414

>>73409

I can see how googling 降着ポーズ will give Votom pics. But "La Vie en Rose" isn't immediately obvious. Good job.

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 No.73417

>>73347

>This way you are can to move your limbs freely.

I just noticed I let this slip by. It was "This way you are free to move your limbs freely", but in removing one of those "free"s it got worse.

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 No.73458

File: 8193c2655f5b80e⋯.png (4.26 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg35.png)

File: 7bc364ec9b50090⋯.png (4.31 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg36.png)

File: 480db4c9bfc2938⋯.png (4.03 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg37.png)

File: c955061175b16be⋯.jpg (953.79 KB, 1239x1800, 413:600, Img_086.jpg)

>>73388

How about making a direct reference to it?

>Votom pose

Ch2pg35

=2==========

>ooh…

>Smooth

=4==========

*I'm always climbing trees.

*My body

>Hut!

=5==========

*Knows this!!

Vocabulary

スムーズ: smooth

自分: じぶん

いつも: always, usually, every time

木: き

登る: のぼる, to ascend, to go up, to climb

体: からだ, body

こうだ: good hit BUT it's probably meant to be こう+だ

Ch2pg36

>That was awesome Ryotaro, you moved just like a person there.

>urgh

>Kiyao!

>My sister…

=2==========

*Open it, gently…

=5==========

*Next, I'm gonna get Kiyao

*This way-

Vocabulary

人間: にんげん

動き: うごき, movement, move, motion

そっと: softly, gently, quietly, secretly

開く: ひらく, to open, to undo, to unseal, to unpack

次: つぎ, next, following, subsequent

はさまる: 挟まる, to get between, to be caught in

Ch2pg37

=1==========

>hmm

>ah

=2==========

>Hyyy!

>Woah, that scared me.

>Yeah. Keep holding it tight for a little longer now.

TN for proofreading: I wonder if 良兄ちゃん refers to Ryotaro (because of 良), or if it's もうちょっと良+兄ちゃん. I went with the latter and omitted 兄ちゃん as I think he's referring to himself.

=3==========

>Can we go now, Ryotaro?

>Sure.

=5==========

>JUMP!

Vocabulary

あっ気: taken aback, dumbfounded

付く: づく, to become (a state, condition, etc.)

もうちょっと: a bit more, a bit longer

ぎゅって: tightly (squeezing), firmly, hard

飛ぶ: とぶ, to jump, to leap, to spring, to bound, to hop

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 No.73467

>>73458

Votoms pose works, I don't think the term got used anywhere else.

page 37 panel 2

>あぅ気が付いたね

"Oh, you woke up."

>おうもうちょっと良兄ちゃんにギュってしてろな

"Hey, hang on tight to Ryotarou for a little longer."

I think the sentence is meant to be read the first way you mentioned (where 良兄ちゃん = Ryotarou) Since we're not using honorifics I just used his name.

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 No.73548

File: 3c9d3c5a1c27812⋯.png (3.59 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg39.png)

File: b21fc5062ab5f00⋯.png (3.87 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg40.png)

HOT BLOOD ALERT!!

Ch2pg39

=2==========

>Thank you, Ryotaro.

>For saving me and my little sister.

=3==========

>But your robot was destroyed in the acciden-

>Waa!

=4==========

>Thank you, Kiyao! I get it now!

>Robots exist to help people!

=5==========

>Don't worry about the wreckage!!

>I'M FIRED UP NOW, UOOOOOOOO!

Vocabulary

おかげで: thanks to …, owing to …, because of …

助かる: たすかる, to be saved, to be rescued, to survive

壊れる: こわれる, to be broken, to break

為に: ために, for, for the sake of, to one's advantage, in favor of, in favour of, on behalf of

燃える: もえる, to burn, to get fired up

Ch2pg40

=1==========

>WAIT FOR ME, TAJIKARAOOO!

>Well, that's just like him.

<hot blooded

>Chizuru is gonna have a handful.

>Ara, Chizuru-chan won't be the only one don't you think?

>Keep it up, Ryotaro…

=2==========

>After all, Ryo-chan is so cute.

<He's always been like that.

>We can let him act cool for today, right?

>That kid is gonna build a harem once he gets to Tokyo…

Vocabulary

待つ: まつ

こうなる(と): given the situation, now that it has come to this

熱血: ねっけつ, hot blood, zeal, fervor, fervour, ardor

苦労: ころう, troubles, hardships

もてるな (持つ) もつ, to hold (in one's hand), to take, to carry, to possess, to have, to own, to maintain, to keep

ああいう: that sort of, like that

とこ: (prefix) constant, unchanging, eternal

東京: とうきょう

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 No.73550

>>73458

>>73467

Note to typesetter

So I'll be doing it like this then. I'll tag the final version for a page in a ##"chapter"-"page" format. I'm calling it "final version" but I don't mind further feedback on it, so if you have a suggestion, speak up.

##2-32

=1==========

*But I still can't pilot it very well…

*Shouldn't we wait for an adult to come?

=2==========

>Ryotaro!

>What is it, Kiyao!?

=3==========

>hehe

>It looks like this tree is starting to break…

=4==========

>I'm fine, but I'm worried about my sister.

>ah…

=5==========

>Don't you think you could give us a hand with "that" robot soon?

>Please.

>Y…eah…

=6==========

>RYOTARO!

>What!?

=7==========

>This is not the time for a man

>To hesitate on helping his friends!

##2-33

>Right!

##2-34

=1==========

>All good, Ryotaro?

>Yes.

{Out of panel, bottom} Votoms pose

=2==========

>You won't be moving the robot with it's levers and pedals this time.

>eh?

>Instead, your stance and motion will be picked up by the feedback sensors in the seat.

=3==========

>If you want to move forward, you'll have to lean your body forward.

>The robot will move his body with yours as one, that's how you steer it. Don't try to keep your balance by sitting down.

=4==========

>Oh, I see.

>This way you can move your limbs freely.

>Got it. I'm gonna try it now!!

=5==========

*Move with the robot…

##2-35

=2==========

>ooh…

>Smooth

=4==========

*I'm always climbing trees.

*My body

>Hut!

=5==========

*Knows this!!

##2-36

>That was awesome Ryotaro, you moved just like a person there.

>urgh

>Kiyao!

>My sister…

=2==========

*Open it, gently…

=5==========

*Next, I'm gonna get Kiyao

*This way-

=6==========

>kuy! {sfx} maybe change to "grab"

##2-37

=1==========

>hmm

>ah

=2==========

>Hyyy!

>You woke up.

>Hey, hang on tight to Ryotarou for a little longer.

=3==========

>Can we go now, Ryotaro?

>Sure.

=5==========

>JUMP!

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 No.73589

>>73550

>Note to typesetter

>So I'll be doing it like this then. I'll tag the final version for a page in a ##"chapter"-"page" format. I'm calling it "final version" but I don't mind further feedback on it, so if you have a suggestion, speak up.

I haven't started typesetting yet. I do it in dedicated sessions rather than short ones and haven't had the time. If you have any script changes, upload a new text file or a changelog for me to go back and edit the relevant pages.

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 No.73593

>>73589

Nothing changed. Just to make it clear:

>>73293

has the final version of all pages up to chapter 2 page 31

I'm making posts such as >>73550 for further pages. So far it has pages 32 to 37, as those weren't in the previous document yet.

If we change anything prior, I'll tag it as

##ERRATA

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 No.73680

>>73548

page 40 panel 1

>もてるなー良太郎…

「もてる」 is slang for "popular (with girls)", so something like

"Ryotarou sure is popular…."

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 No.73818

File: c19ef61069389e0⋯.png (4.19 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg41.png)

File: 541ff19e03f5456⋯.png (4.09 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg42.png)

Ch2pg41

=1==========

<Tokyo

=3==========

>Ok. Clear. Clear.

{sfx} gashuunn

>Lock!

>Maintenance team!

=4==========

>Fuuu…

{Sfx} Shuuuuuu

=5==========

>Thanks for your service.

>Appreciate it.

>As always.

TN: responding "thanks" with a different "thanks" is so japanese it hurts. Also, I'm not sure about あいよっ, probably an abbreviation of 愛用 (habitual use).

Vocabulary

オーライ: all right, OK

固定: こてい, fixation, fixing (e.g. salary, capital)

整備: せいび, maintenance, servicing

集合: しゅうごう, gathering, assembly, meeting

おつかれ: thanks (e.g. for coming, helping, etc.), glad you could make it

お願いし: request, wish

Ch2pg42

=1==========

>I got this tired just from walking straight back…

<sweating

=2==========

>Ah!

<she's so pretty

>Th- thanks!

=3==========

>Your hometown was… beyond unpleasant.

TN: she also mentions 聞ってた (was being said/heard) but it's not clear if the person she's talking to was the one who said it before, so I'm omitting it for now.

=4==========

>Really, if there isn't anything there, then…

>hmm?

>Nothing! I was just passing by, so of course I wouldn't meet anyone.

=5==========

>ahh…

>Well, to tell the truth, there was this one odd guy there…

Vocabulary

ただ: 直, straight, direct OR 只, ordinary, common, usual

歩く: あるく, to walk

帰って来る: かえってくる, to return, to come back

疲れる: つかれる, to get tired, to tire

汗だく: あせだく, dripping with sweat, bathed in perspiration

びくん (ビクン): beautiful women

田舎: いなか, rural area, countryside, the sticks, hometown

聞く: きく, to hear, to ask

以上: いじょう, not less than, … and more, … and upwards, beyond … (e.g. one's means), further (e.g. nothing further to say), more than … (e.g. cannot pay more than that), since …, seeing that …

とんでもない: unthinkable, unexpected, outrageous, offensive, terrible, absolutely not!, not at all!, far from it!, impossible!, preposterous!, what a thing to say!, no way!, bullshit

なんにも: nothing at all (with neg verb)

別に: べつに

通る: とおる, to go by, to go past, to go along, to travel along, to pass through, to use (a road), to take (a route), to go via, to go by way of

誰: だれ

とも: (prefix) together with, (suffix) both, all, neither, none

会う: あう, to meet, to encounter, to see

そういえば: which reminds me …, come to think of it …, now that you mention it …, on that subject …, so, if you say …

一人: ひとり

変: へん

奴: やつ

Ch2pg43

>He made girly faces, and walked around barefoot!

>He was even walking a pig… Say, is everyone in your hometown like that?

=2==========

>Hmm? And he called me cute. Speaking of which, I wonder why I acted funny there.

=3==========

>Tsk! What am I saying!?

<gah!

>Humph!

>That's it, I'm heading to the showers! So long!

=4==========

>Ah…

=5==========

>I'll return the towel after washing it.

>Erm…

>Thanks for recepting me…

{Sfx} doki doki doki (ba-dump ba-dump)

=6==========

>Humph!

>Fu fu…

Ch2pg44

=1==========

>Ryotaro-kun…

<We'll meet again

=2==========

<Soon

{Off-panel, left} Lovesick / END

=3==========

>Tajikarao….

>Yep, Chizuru is gonna have a handful of trouble.

TN: no specific mention of ンク or ソク in the dictionary, but I'm guessing he's playing with his own little trooper. And no idea about ホニト (left side in the last bubble) the only thing that came up was number counting (5th, 4th, 7th)

Vocabulary

顔: かお, face, visage

裸足: はだし, barefoot

連れて: つれて, as, in proportion to

連れる: つれる, to lead, to take (a person)

田舎: いなか

言えば: speaking of

言わす: to be able to say, to get someone to say, to induce someone to say, to let someone speak out

あびる: to suffer (e.g. an attack), to draw (e.g. criticism, attention, praise), to have heaped upon, to be showered with, to dash over oneself (e.g. water), to take (e.g. shower), to bask in (e.g. the sun), to bathe in, to be flooded with (e.g. light), to be covered in

洗う: あらう, to wash

返す: かえす, to return (something), to restore, to put back

出迎える: でむかえる, to meet, to greet

出迎え: meeting, reception

もうすぐ: very soon

会う: あう, to meet, to encounter, to see

恋わずらい: こいわずらい, lovesickness

完: かん, The End, Finis

苦労: くろう, troubles, hardships

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 No.73819

File: a80f40e8281d007⋯.png (4.12 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg43.png)

File: d8643723cf1ed4b⋯.png (4.21 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh2pg44.png)

ALART ALART

She's no love interest. She's…

A rival!

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 No.73820

>>73680

>>73548

##2-39

=2==========

>Thank you, Ryotaro.

>For saving me and my little sister.

=3==========

>But your robot was destroyed in the acciden-

>Waa!

=4==========

>Thank you, Kiyao! I get it now!

>Robots exist to help people!

=5==========

>Don't worry about the wreckage!!

>I'M FIRED UP NOW, UOOOOOOOO!

##2-40

=1==========

>WAIT FOR ME, TAJIKARAOOO!

>Well, that's just like him.

<hot blooded

>Chizuru is gonna have a handful.

>Ara, Chizuru-chan won't be the only one don't you think?

>Ryotaro sure is popular…

=2==========

>After all, Ryo-chan is so cute.

<He's always been like that.

>We can let him act cool for today, right?

>That kid is gonna build a harem once he gets to Tokyo…

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 No.73886

>>73818

pg 41 panel 5

>あとお願いします

Here it means "Please take care (お願いします) of the rest (あと)", as in shutting down the robot and so on.

>あいよ

This is a casual はい, so something like "Sure."

pg 42 panel 2

>ビクン (SFX)

This means "twitch", like when someone is surprised and suddenly jerks their body in shock.

panel 3

To keep the 聞いてた in, consider

"Your hometown… even more unpleasant than I'd heard."

panel 4

>まったく なんにもないったら…

「ったら」 is an expression of irritation, usually used for emphasis. Maybe:

"There's absolutely nothing there at all…."

>>73819

page 43 panel 2

>んー?まぁかわいかったって言えば かわいいカンジだったかな

Based on how she's saying it, she's holding a conversation with Chizuru but we aren't told exactly what Chizuru says.

Well, (まぁ) if you were ask if he were cute (かわいかったって言えば) I guess he seemed cute (かわいいカンジだったかな)." Cleaning that up,

"Hmm? Well, I guess you could call him cute."

panel 5

Instead of "Thanks for recepting me…", perhaps "Thanks for coming to see me…." would feel more natural in English.

page 44 panel 3

The handwritten bits continue to be annoying. The bits near Ryotarou are ソワソワ, or "fidget" in eagerness. The bit in the last bubble is ホント, which is slangy 本当 or "really".

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 No.74543

File: 13f64b9c9335cfb⋯.jpg (530.47 KB, 1250x1800, 25:36, Img_095.jpg)

File: 179b0f238d2b8e7⋯.png (3.99 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg2.png)

File: bbf1eb479d2708a⋯.png (3.91 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg3.png)

File: 06da5c76769d114⋯.png (3.81 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg4.png)

I'm not dead yet. Just had to take a short break.

>>54470

Chapter 3

Ch1pg1

A boy's dream

Vocabulary

第: だい

話: わ

少年: しょうねん

夢: ゆめ

Ch2pg2

=1==========

<Special vehicles corps

=2==========

>We have to finish here.

>Move faster!!

TN: lots of guesswork for these two bubbles. Bad handwriting.

Vocabulary

特: とく, special

科: か, department, section, faculty, school, arm

車両: しゅりょう, rolling stock, railroad cars, wheeled vehicles

隊: たい, company (of troops), corps, unit, squad

?一から

??果てます

果てる: はてる, to end, to be finished, to be exhausted

いそぎ: haste, hurry, expedition, speed, dispatch

Ch3pg3

=1==========

>Sigh…

=3==========

>Piloting aptitude… 78 points…. huh…

>It went down again…

=4==========

>If it goes down even further, I just might lose my job…

>Uugh…

=5==========

>Hey you lot of…!

=6==========

>Today you can kiss the Special Vehicles Squad barracks goodbye!!

>I don't want to see a trace of any bird there!! Now make it spotless!!

>YESSIR!

TN: さん (san) threw me off there. But he couldn't possibly be talking about a person, it must be a way to refer to "barracks ", like how mt. Fuji is often called Fuji-san.

Vocabulary

操縦: そうじゅう, steering, piloting, flying, control, operation, handling

適合: てきごう, conformity, compatibility, adaptability, congruity, congruence

点: てん

下がる: さがる, to come down, to go down, to fall, to drop, to sink, to get lower

以上: いじょう, not less than, … and more, … and upwards

クビ: 首, dismissal, discharge, firing (from a job)

特: とく

車: くるま, しゃ

隊: たい, company (of troops), corps, unit, squad

舎: しゃ, hut, house

お別れ: おわかれ, farewell

立つ鳥: たつとり, bird taking flight

後を濁す: あとをにごす, to leave a bad impression behind

跡: あと, trace, tracks, mark, sign

濁す: にごす, to make muddy (a liquid), to make cloudy, to make turbid, to roil

綺麗: きれい

Ch3pg4

=1==========

>Nekota-hanchou

TN: Hanchou = group leader

>Nhya? Tsundere-chan.

=2==========

>Let me help too.

<And don't call me tsundere

>Nhya? No no no.

=3==========

>Tsundere-chan has pilot work to do.

>You don't have to worry about us.

=4==========

>Leave this kind of work to us old men. Tsundere-chan has her own burden, and carries it all by herself.

>Haaa…

=6==========

>I can't see in front of me!

>You're carrying to much, stupid.

Vocabulary

猫田: Nekota

班長: はんちょう, squad leader, honcho, team leader, group leader

手伝う: てつだう, to help, to assist, to aid

仕事: しごと, work, job, business, occupation, employment, vocation, task

気を使う: きをつかう, to pay attention to another's needs, to attend to, to fuss about, to take into consideration

使う: つかう

こきたない

俺達: おれたら, we, us

おっさん: middle-aged man

任せる: まかせる, to entrust (e.g. a task) to another, to leave to

自分: じぶん

荷物: にもつ, luggage, baggage, package

まとめて: in one go, all at once, altogether, all in one piece

ちょ: (suffix) person who is …, thing that is …

前見えねえつス

持ち: もち, hold, charge, keep possession, in charge, wear, durability, life, draw

持つ: もつ, to hold (in one's hand), to take, to carry

すぎ: すぎる can be used in it's stem form for the same effect

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 No.74548

>>73886

>>73818

Thanks again for the help.

##2-41

=1==========

<Tokyo

=3==========

>Ok. Clear. Clear.

{sfx} gashuunn

>Lock!

>Maintenance team!

=4==========

>Fuuu…

{Sfx} Shuuuuuu

=5==========

>Thanks for your service.

>Please take care of the rest.

>Sure.

##2-42

=1==========

>I got this tired just from walking straight back…

<sweating

=2==========

>Ah!

{sfx} twitch twitch

<she's so pretty

>Th- thanks!

=3==========

>Your hometown was… even more unpleasant than I heard.

=4==========

>There's absolutely nothing there at all…

>hmm?

>Nothing! I was just passing by, so of course I wouldn't meet anyone.

=5==========

>ahh…

>Well, to tell the truth, there was this one odd guy there…

##2-43

=1==========

>He made girly faces, and walked around barefoot!

>He was even walking a pig… Say, is everyone in your hometown like that?

=2==========

>Hmm? Well, I guess you could call him cute.

=3==========

>Tsk! What am I saying!?

<gah!

>Humph!

>That's it, I'm heading to the showers! So long!

=4==========

>Ah…

=5==========

>I'll return the towel after washing it.

>Erm…

>Thanks for coming see me…

{Sfx} doki doki doki (ba-dump ba-dump)

=6==========

>Humph!

>Fu fu…

Ch2pg44

=1==========

>Ryotaro-kun…

<We'll meet again

=2==========

<Soon

{Off-panel, left} Lovesick / END

=3==========

>Tajikarao….

>Yep, Chizuru is gonna have a handful of trouble. {handwritten, to the side} really…

TN: no specific mention of ンク or ソク in the dictionary, but I'm guessing he's playing with his own little trooper. And no idea about ホニト (left side in the last bubble) the only thing that came up was number counting (5th, 4th, 7th)

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 No.74573

>>74543

page 2 panel 4

I can't really read the first bubble either. 「〇一からK〇来てます」 is all I can get. The second one looks like 「いそぎですって」 which works out.

page 3 panel 6

The second part of the rightmost bubble has a proverb in it, 「立つ鳥跡を濁さず」, which basically means "clean up when you leave". The closest English proverb I can think of is "Cleanliness is next to Godliness" but that's pretty far off.

page 4 panel 4

>こきたない仕事は俺達おっさんに任せて ツンデレちゃんは自分の荷物でもまとめてちょ

"Leave this kind of work to us old men. Tsundere-chan (ツンデレちゃんは) should get her own stuff (自分の荷物でも) together (まとめてちょ)".

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 No.74575

>>74573

>立つ鳥跡を濁さず

>lit.: flying birds don't leave a bad impression

Makes more sense when you put it the way you did.

>together (まとめてちょ)

Got it. I put too much focus on "in one go, all at once"meanings

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 No.74783

File: c2294ff31141b49⋯.png (3.65 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg5.png)

File: b673882b733fcfd⋯.png (9.19 MB, 3000x1800, 5:3, tmtwafCh3pg6&7.png)

Ch3pg5

=1==========

>Can I carry some of that?

>Wha- It's ok, really!

=2==========

>No way. I can't ask a girl to carry something this heavy.

>That's right. If you carry heavy things like this your arms are gonna grow thick.

=3==========

>This is no job for pretty girls.

>P… pretty…

=4==========

>Hihihi. She talked to me!

>Cute, right?

>Right.

=5===========

>Load these equipment parts!

>Alright!

=6==========

>Doyaaaaa!

>Woah sempai, awesome!

>Hahahaha.

>Dumbass.

Ch3pg6&7

=1==========

>"Cute", "Talked to me"…

>Are the kind of cutesy things you say regarding small children…

=2==========

>I knew it. When I'm not aboard threat thing, I'm…

>Just… a girl…

Ch3pg8

=1==========

>Everyone around me is an adult…

>Recently, I haven't even talked to someone around my age…

=4==========

>DUMBASS!

=5==========

>Aaahhー chooo!

Vocabulary

少し: すこし

持つ: もつ

重い: おもい

腕: かいな, arm (esp. upper arm)

太い: ふとい, fat, thick

育つ: そだつ, to be raised (e.g. child), to be brought up, to grow (up)

可愛い: かわいい

仕事: しごと

声かけ: こえかけ, saying something (to someone), greeting, approaching (someone)

備: び, equip, provision, preparation

パーツ: parts

乗っける: のっける, to place on (something)

先輩: せんぱい

子供: こども

に対する: にたいする, regarding, in, to, towards, with regards to

対する: たいする, to be directed toward (the future, etc.), to be in response to, to be related to

乗る: のる, to get on (train, plane, bus, ship, etc.), to get in, to board, to take, to embark

周り: まわり, circumference, girth, surroundings, neighbourhood, neighborhood, vicinity

大人: おとな

最近: さいきん, most recent, these days, right now, recently, nowadays

同い年: おないどし, the same age

話す: はなす, to talk, to speak, to converse, to chat

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 No.74784

File: b991fc01e8359e8⋯.png (4.18 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg8.png)

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 No.74785

>>74783

>When I'm not aboard threat thing, I'm…

When I'm not aboard that thing, I'm

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 No.74787

>>74783

page 6 panel 1

>かわいいって言われたって

>それは子供に対するかわいいなんだもんな…

IMO this is using って in two different ways.

Check out the first answer here: https://archive.is/hu743

Applying that to this and the next bubble in the panel, it would literally be "Regarding the way I was called 'cute', that is the cute used when dealing with children", or to clean it up:

"He called me 'cute', huh…"

"He meant it in the way you say it to kids…."

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 No.74790

>>74787

Got it. And that link got exactly the same problem I just had, very useful.

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 No.75209

File: 0f14c099487d7d2⋯.png (4.04 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg9.png)

File: 6843d5a443cd954⋯.png (3.75 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg10.png)

File: b9a7297666c7a34⋯.png (3.62 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg11.png)

Ch3pg9

=3==========

>You seemed in good shape when we left.

>Did you catch the flu or something?

>Ah… no I'm fine!

=4==========

>In fact, PUMPED!!

>Yeah… you look like it. Right?

Ch3pg10

=2==========

>Our seats are apart from each other… because it's so crowded. Since there's 3 of us…

>I wanna look outside.

>It's my first time in a bullet train, but I guess that's alright.

=3==========

>Over here… and there…

>Young man.

=4==========

>Let's switch places.

>You can turn the seat around to face each other.

TN: lit.: "You can turn it around and make a box seat." I'm guessing box seat is an expression for that kind of seat placement.

>Are you ok with that?

>I don't mind.

=5==========

>That's great. Thank the man.

>Thank you sir.

>No problem…

Ch3pg11

=1==========

>AAAH-CHOOO

>Gyaaaa, it got on me!

>Use your hand! Your hand!

=2==========

>Sorry, sorry! I'm causing you a lot of trouble, but I don't mean it…

>Ryotaro, aren't you wearing too many clothes?

>Maybe you're getting cold from your sweat.

=4==========

>You see… This is my sister's doing. All of them!

=5==========

Listen to me!

=6==========

>I don't care if you think it's getting warmer, it's still early April.

>Dress up! Dress!

>But it is warm… I'm sweating…

>If it gets hotter, you can take some of it off, so there's that.

景気: けいき, condition, state, business (condition)

風邪: かぜ, common cold, cold, influenza, flu, ague

元気: げんき

席: せき, seat

ばらける: to come apart, to unravel, to come loose, to become disarrayed (e.g. hair)

混む: こむ, to be crowded, to be packed

外: そと, outside, exterior

外: ほか, other (place, thing, person), the rest

初: ほつ, first, new

新幹線: しんかんせん

しょうがない: it can't be helped, it is inevitable, nothing can be done, there's no point (in doing something), there's no reason (to do something)

少年: しょうねん

交換: こうかん, exchange, interchange, switching, reciprocity, barter, substitution, replacement, clearing (of checks, cheques)

回転: かいてん, rotation (usu. around something), revolution, turning

かまう: 構う, to mind, to care about, to be concerned about

お礼: おれい, thanks, gratitude

手: て, hand, arm

使う: つかう

イロイロ: various

キンチョー (きんちょう): tension, mental strain, nervousness

着: ちゃく, counter for suits of clothing

汗: あせ, sweat, perspiration, moisture, condensation

汗をかく: to perspire

冷える: ひえる, to grow cold (from room temperature, e.g. in refrigerator), to get chilly, to cool down

それが姉さん

達: たち

あったかい (あたたかい): warm, mild, genial

いったって: 言ったって, even if I told you

四月: しがつ, April

始まる: はじまる

ばかり: only, merely, nothing but, no more than

着る: きる, to wear (in modern Japanese, from the shoulders down), to put on

暖かい: あったかい/あたたかい

暑い: あつい

脱ぐ: ぬぐ

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 No.75223

>>75209

Looks good to me!

>page 11 panel 1

What the hell is she eating?

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 No.75372

>>75223

>What the hell is she eating?

>ギャアアア

>Gyaaaaaaa

Whatever it is, it's still alive

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 No.75378

File: caee78b040f9b30⋯.png (4.11 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg12.png)

File: e557bd5178aa0df⋯.png (3.76 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg13.png)

Ch3pg12

=1==========

>I knew it, it's too hot… And aren't you wearing short sleeves yourselves?

>But then your sisters would be worried about you…

>It would be really strange if the weather were hot, too…

>But after about 10 years of "weird" weather, that would be the new normal, right?

=2==========

>Here, Ryo-chan.

=3==========

>What? An old key…

=4==========

>We were told that's the key for the place you'll be living in.

>We spoke well of you to the residents, so you'll get along fine.

>Residents?

Ch3pg13

=1==========

>You'll be living alone.

=2==========

>You'll be able to do "it" as much as you want!!

<kuku kuku

>What the-!

>Huh?

=3==========

>Ah, but you're only allowed to do it with female company, alright?

>Ah! That rules out a lot of troublesome things!

>Yep, that'd be dangerous.

=4==========

>Since a strange woman might take you, then I'll be your first!!

{In between bubbles}

>What do you think you're doing!?

>Really, now?

>I need my camera. Camera!

>No pictures!!

>Ara, he snatched her camera… does that mean you're really gonna fuck?

=5==========

<Kaede nee-san, that wad way too dirty~~~~

=6==========

>And that's how I got this key.

<Oy

>I'm pretty sure you included that last part just to make this hard to listen!!

Vocabulary

暑い: あつい

自分: じぶん

達: たち

半: はん, half, semi-

ソデ, そで: sleeve

心配: しんぱい

としては: as (for), for, in the capacity of

異常気象: いじょうきしょう, abnormal weather

異常: いじょう, strangeness, abnormality, disorder

年: ねん, year (e.g. AD)

くらい: approximately, about, around, or so

続く: つづく

正常: せいじょう, normalcy, normality, normal

あと: behind, rear, after, later, after one's death, remainder, the rest

古い: ふるい, old (not person), aged, ancient, antiquated, stale, threadbare, outmoded, obsolete article

鍵: かぎ, key

て+おく

住む: すむ, to live (of humans), to reside, to inhabit, to dwell, to abide

住人: じゅうにん, dweller, inhabitant, resident

伝える: つたえる, to convey, to report, to transmit, to communicate, to tell, to impart, to propagate, to teach, to bequeath

伝う: つたう, to go along, to walk along, to follow

仲良い: なかよい, close, intimate, on good terms

仲良く: on good terms with, on cordial terms with, getting along well with, happily, peacefully, to make friends with, to be good friends with, to get along with

一人暮らし: ひとりぐらし, a single life, a solitary life, living alone

放題: ほうだい, as much as you would like to, as much as one likes

つれる: つれる, to lead, to take (a person)

込み: こみ, including, inclusive of

大: だい

切ない: せつない, painful, heartrending, trying, oppressive, suffocating, miserable

失う: うしなう, to lose, to part with

やべえ: dangerous, risky

よそ: another place, somewhere else, strange parts

取る: とる, to take, to pick up, to harvest, to earn, to win, to choose

まず: first (of all), to start with, about, almost, anyway, well, now

かばと: suddenly, all of a sudden, quickly, emphatically, energetically

撮る: とる, to take (a photo)

奪う: うばう, to snatch away, to dispossess, to steal

ハメ: fucking, screwing, having sex

下品: げひん, vulgarity, meanness, indecency, coarseness

肝心: かんじん, essential, fundamental, crucial, vital, main

わざと: on purpose

話: はなし

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 No.75503

>>75378

pg12 panel 1

>こうも暑いとホント異常気象と思うわねー

"When it's this hot out (こうも暑いと), it really does seem like unusual weather…(ホント異常気象と思うわねー)"

pg 12 panel 4

>住人の人にはよく伝えてあるから仲良くね

Kaede is using には and ーてある as well as the self-contained phrase 仲良く so the sentence got tricky.

"I often speak (よく伝えてある) to the residents there (住人の人には) so get along well, okay? (から仲良くね)"

Whether 住人 refers to one person or several is unknown.

Some info on には that I can't fit into this translation:

https://archive.is/vaJ0F

And some info on the ーてある form:

https://www.imabi.net/tearu.htm

pg 12 panel 2

>コキ放題?

The handwritten portion in the bubble (and Kaede's hand motion) clears up what she means by "it"- コキ refers to 手コキ, or male masturbation.

"Rub it out?"

<ワクワク

The handwritten portion outside the bubble indicates excitement. ワク is synonymous and often paired with ドキ, so the sound of a heartbeat would work.

<ba-dump, ba-dump

panel 3

>あ でも 女の子をつれ込み放題でもあるわけよね

"Oh, but he'll be able to bring in as many girls as he wants."

>あーソレはイロイロ大切なモノ失うねっ

"Ah, all sorts of important things will be lost."

Of course she's talking about virginities.

panel 4

>ナニでしょ?

Nitpicking but maybe "What indeed?" would flow better from the previous line.

>あらカメラ奪って…ハメ取り?

「ハメ取り」 is slang for taking pictures of sex.

"Ara, you snatched the camera… you'll be photographing this?"

I switched it to "you" because that tiny picture makes it hard to tell if she's talking about her now-nude sister or Ryotarou.

panel 6

>今肝心なトコでわざと話切ったろ!!

Literally "Right now, at the most important part (今肝心なトコで), you stopped talking on purpose, didn't you?! (わざと話切ったろ!!)" So something like:

"You quit talking at the best part on purpose, didn't you?!"

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 No.75568

File: fb0115764c38ba6⋯.png (3.29 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg14.png)

File: 9f6c4ce9a09b4ea⋯.png (3.19 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg15.png)

>>75503

>あーソレはイロイロ大切なモノ失うねっ

Fucking 切な is a weird word. Most entries it has have a negative conotation. 大切な人 is positive, but only applied to people, so I ended using "parting with trouble" rather than "parting with important things"

>今肝心なトコでわざと話切ったろ!!

Context really is everything in japanese. Without some sort of negative word I wouldn't guess that he meant "stopped talking".

Ch3pg14

=2==========

>It's an old type of key…

>How old is the house then?

=3==========

>Who cares, as long as I can live in it it's fine!

>You… Aren't you at least a little nervous about going to the big city?

=4==========

>What? Nah, the thing with Tokyo…

>Is that…

=5==========

>If I go there, I think I might meet Tajikarao…

>And I really want to see it again!

<What a cute face

>Again with the robot… So you're not really excited about the city itself then…

>I…

Ch3pg15

=1==========

>Have been thinking about setting a goal for myself.

>So from here on forward, I want to become Tajikarao's pilot!

=2==========

>You have a goal too, right Kiyao? To have a ton of qualifications.

>So I've planned on leaving for the city with a goal too!

=3==========

>So, what do you think?!

>Eh ah! A life goal! Yeah, it's good isn't it?

=4==========

>I mean, of course it's a good thing, yes.

>A goal, right? Uhmm… a goal!

Vocabulary

古い: ふつい

鍵: かぎ

家: いえ, house, residence, dwelling

住む: すむ, to live (of humans), to reside, to inhabit, to dwell, to abide

高い: たかい, high, tall

都会: とかい, city

キンチョー( きんちょう): 緊張, tension, mental strain, nervousness

会う: あう, to meet, to encounter, to see

もう一度: もういちど, once more, again

またロボか

ワクテカ (WKTK): being excited, having the jitters (with expectation)

目標: もくひょう, mark, objective, target

資格: しかく, qualifications, requirements, capabilities

いっぱい: full

取る: とる, to take, to pick up, to harvest, to earn, to win, to choose

都会: とかい, city

考える: かんがえる

どうかな: how about …?

えっあっあ

人生: じんせい, (human) life (i.e. conception to death)

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 No.75575

>>75568

pg14 panel 3

>お前…なんか今日はテンション高いな都会にキンチョーしてんのかー?

「テンション高い」 means being hyped, pumped up, or generally really energetic.

"You… you're really hyper today. Nervous about going to the big city?"

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 No.75590

##3-1

A boy's dream

##3-2

=1==========

<Special vehicles corps

=2==========

>We have to finish here.

>Move faster!!

##3-3

=1==========

>Sigh…

=3==========

>Piloting aptitude… 78 points…. huh…

>It went down again…

=4==========

>If it goes down even further, I just might lose my job…

>Uugh…

=5==========

>Hey you lot of…!

=6==========

>Today you can kiss the Special Vehicles Squad barracks goodbye!!

>Get to work!! I wanna see this place clean as a whistle!!

##3-4

=1==========

>Nekota-hanchou

TN: Hanchou = group leader

>Nhya? Tsundere-chan.

=2==========

>Let me help too.

<And don't call me tsundere

>Nhya? No no no.

=3==========

>Tsundere-chan has pilot work to do.

>You don't have to worry about us.

=4==========

>Leave this kind of work to us old men. Tsundere-chan should get her own stuff together.

>Sigh…

=6==========

>I can't see in front of me!

>You're carrying to much, stupid.

##3-5

=1==========

>Can I carry some of that?

>Wha- It's ok, really!

=2==========

>There's no way I would ask a girl to carry something this heavy.

>That's right. If you carry heavy things like this your arms are gonna grow thick.

=3==========

>This is no job for cute girls.

>C-cute…

=4==========

>Hihihi. She talked to me!

>Cute, right?

>Right.

=5===========

>Load these equipment parts!

>Alright!

=6==========

>Doyaaaaa!

>Woah sempai, awesome!

>Hahahaha.

>Dumbass.

##3-6&7

=1==========

>He called me 'cute', huh…

>He meant it in the way you say it to kids….

=2==========

>I knew it. When I'm not aboard that thing, I'm…

>Just… a girl…

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 No.75592

##3-8

=1==========

>Everyone around me is an adult…

>Recently, I haven't even talked to someone around my age…

=4==========

>DUMBASS!

=5==========

>Aaahhー chooo!

##3-9

=3==========

>You seemed in good shape when we left.

>Did you catch the flu or something?

>Ah… no I'm fine!

=4==========

>In fact, PUMPED!!

>Yeah… you look like it. Right?

##3-10

=2==========

>Our seats are apart from each other… because it's so crowded. Since there's 3 of us…

>I wanna look outside.

>It's my first time in a bullet train, but I guess that's alright.

=3==========

>Over here… and there…

>Young man.

=4==========

>Let's switch places.

>You can turn the seat around to face each other.

>Are you ok with that?

>I don't mind.

=5==========

>That's great. Thank the man.

>Thank you sir.

>No problem…

##3-11

=1==========

>AAAH-CHOOO

>Gyaaaa, it got on me!

>Use your hand! Your hand!

=2==========

>Sorry, sorry! I'm causing you a lot of trouble, but I don't mean it…

>Ryotaro, aren't you wearing too many clothes?

>Maybe you're getting cold from your sweat.

=4==========

>You see… This is my sister's doing. All of them!

=5==========

Listen to me!

=6==========

>I don't care if you think it's getting warmer, it's still early April.

>Dress up! Dress!

>But it is warm… I'm sweating…

>If it gets hotter, you can take some of it off, so there's that.

##3-12

=1==========

>I knew it, it's too hot… And aren't you wearing short sleeves yourselves?

>But then your sisters would be worried about you…

>When it's this hot out, it really does seem like unusual weather.

>But after about 10 years of "unusual" weather, that would be the new normal, right?

=2==========

>Here, Ryo-chan.

=3==========

>What? An old key…

=4==========

>We were told that's the key for the place you'll be living in.

>I often speak to the residents there so get along well, okay?

>Residents?

##3-13

=1==========

>You'll be living alone.

=2==========

>You'll be able to do "it" as much as you want!! {Handwritten, left side} Rub it out?

<ba-dump, ba-dump

>What the-!

>Huh?

=3==========

>Oh, but he'll be able to bring in as many girls as he wants.

>Ah, all sorts of important things will be lost.

>Hey, that'd be dangerous.

=4==========

>Since a strange woman might take you, then I'll be your first!!

{In between bubbles}: fast

>What do you think you're doing!?

>What indeed?

>I need my camera. Camera!

>No pictures!!

>Ara, you snatched the camera… you'll be photographing this?

=5==========

<Kaede nee-san, that was way too dirty~~~~

=6==========

>And that's how I got this key.

<Oy

>You quit talking at the best part on purpose, didn't you?!

##3-14

=2==========

>It's an old type of key…

>How old is the house then?

=3==========

>Who cares, as long as I can live in it it's fine!

>You… You're really hyper today. Nervous about going to the big city?

=4==========

>What? Nah, the thing with Tokyo…

>Is that…

=5==========

>If I go there, I think I might meet Tajikarao…

>And I really want to see it again!

<What a cute face

>Again with the robot… So you're not really excited about the city itself then…

>I…

##3-15

=1==========

>Have been thinking about setting a goal for myself.

>So from here on forward, I want to become Tajikarao's pilot!

=2==========

>You have a goal too, right Kiyao? To have a ton of qualifications.

>So I've planned on leaving for the city with a goal too!

=3==========

>So, what do you think?!

>Eh ah! A life goal! Yeah, it's good isn't it?

=4==========

>I mean, of course it's a good thing, yes.

>A goal, right? Uhmm… a goal!

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 No.75829

File: e48e4c93022afd2⋯.png (3.59 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg16.png)

File: 2e139a03ec2db0c⋯.png (3.97 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg17.png)

Ch3pg16

=1==========

>Ah… Uh~~~

=2==========

>Say, you… How did you pass the aptitude examination then?

>Eh? Aptitude examination?

>What is that?

=3==========

>You know, for bipedal troopers..

=4==========

[Bipedal troopers]

[The Earth Defense Force, being a branching organization from the United Nations, allows the use of humanoid robots for a particular function. ]

Ch3pg17

=1==========

[However, people possessing the ability to pilot them are extremely rare. ]

[So for the past 8 years our country has had a mandatory testing for everyone at age 14, looking for that kind of compatibility.]

=2==========

[That's done through a blood test.]

[Compatible people are notified when they are 15 years old.]

[That result greatly affects the rest of their careers from then on.]

=4==========

>People selected are supposed to be notified, so…

>If that were your case, it should have come already…

=6==========

>It's like he's sleeping with his eyes open!

<He fainted

>Aahhh, well.

>That's supposed to be our city's responsibility. And it has a reputation of provide the best people for the job too…

Vocabulary

適正: てきせい, reasonable, suitable

検査: けんさ, inspection (e.g. customs, factory), examination, scan (e.g. MRI, PET, etc.)

訳: わけ

訳: やく, translation, version (e.g. "English version")

国連: こくれん, UN, United Nations

関連: かんれん, relation, connection, relevance

機関: きかん, agency, organisation, organization, institution, organ, body

貸与: たいよ, loan, lending

特殊: とくし ゅspecial, particular, peculiar, unique

用途: ようと, use, usefulness, utility, service, purpose

人型ロボット: ひとがたロボット, humanoid robot, android

操縦: そうじゅう, steering, piloting, flying, control, operation, handling

者: もの

適正: てきせい, reasonable, suitable

持つ: もつ, to possess, to have, to own

極めて: きわめて, exceedingly, extremely, decisively

極める: きわめる, to carry to extremes, to go to the end of something

少ない: すくない, few, a little, scarce, insufficient, seldom

我が国: わがくに, our country, our land, one's own country

年: ねん

適合: てきごう, conformity, compatibility, adaptability, congruity, congruence

探す: さがす, to search (for something desired, needed), to look for

検査: けんさ, inspection (e.g. customs, factory), examination, scan (e.g. MRI, PET, etc.)

歳: さい: -years-old

全て: すべて: everything, all, the whole

義務: ぎむ, duty, obligation, responsibility

化: か: action of making something, -ification

血液: けつえき, blood

採取: さいしゅ, picking, collecting, harvesting

行われる: おこなわれる, to be done, to be practiced, to be practised, to take place, to be held, to be prevalent, to be in fashion, to be in vogue, to be current, to come into use

本人: ほんにん, the person himself

通知: つうち, notice, notification, report, posting

その後: そのあと, after that, afterwards, thereafter

進路: しんろ, route, course, career, university choices, course (of future life)

大き: おおき

影響: えいきょう, influence, effect

与える: えいきょう, to give (esp. to someone of lower status), to bestow, to grant, to confer, to present, to award

合格者: ごうかくしゃ, successful applicant

ハズだ (はずだ): be supposed or expected to (do), be sure to (do), ought to (do)

もし: if, in case, supposing

とすると: if we make …, if we take …, if we assume …

あく: 開く, to open (e.g. doors)

まま: 儘, condition, stateas it is, as one likes, because, as

寝る: ねる, to go to bed, to lie in bed, to lie down

気絶: きぜつ, faint, swoon

俺ら: おれら, we, us

村: むら, village

後: ご, (suffix) after

第一: だいいち, first, foremost, number one

号: ごう, number, edition, make, model, issue, part of that group

適格者: てきかくしゃ, qualified or eligible person

出る: でる

評判: ひょうばん, fame, reputation, popularity, rumour (rumor), talk

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 No.75830

File: 6feab6275ffb379⋯.jpg (840.89 KB, 1131x1590, 377:530, 29549.jpg)

>>75829

By the way, those two girls that appear on pg17 are from the previous, cancelled, story. Konohana.

Description(from Mangadex)

Mankind faces its toughest threat at the hands of mysterious alien invaders while revolutionaries go wild across the Earth and the planet's only hope of survival is a giant perverted robot and the two lesbian girls that pilot it.

The series was cancelled due to conflicts between the author and the editors of Champion Red Ichigo, but was continued with a different main cast as Kono Yo wo Hana ni Suru Tame ni in a different magazine.

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 No.76049

Sorry this is late, 'tis the season.

>>75829

page 17 panel 6

>俺らの村から義務化後 第一号 適格者が出たって評判だったじゃねぇか…

"And our village is famous for having the first qualified candidate after they started mandatory testing…"

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 No.76138

File: 6349bf560d7d8b5⋯.png (3.78 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg18.png)

File: e56ef29277db5d3⋯.png (3.76 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg19.png)

File: 5bfc6cff34e41dc⋯.png (4.1 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg20.png)

>>76049

Hope you had a good time.

Ch3pg18

=1==========

>Why hello there!

>I'm Kiyao's mom's younger sister, Ririn!

=2==========

>Well be staying under care of Ririn oba-san

TN: oba-san means aunt, but just like in english it's often used to refer to any older woman.

>Heh

>I was starting to wonder, why Amu-chan had come too?

=3==========

>Noooo Kiyao, not oba-san.

>Eh?

=4==========

>"Oba-san" is no good. After all, Ririn is still a 28 years old maiden, right?

>ah…. {handwritten} that's enough to be called oba-san though?

=5==========

>So, when referring to me, use "ane-san"

TN: ane-san is just a slang misspelling of onee-san (older sister)

>Ah, ok then… Ririn ane-san?

>Yeeeeah

>TRACK 14, DEPARTING NOW

>Is that really ok…?

Ch3pg19

=2==========

>So the are connections here too…?

>fu fu…

=5==========

>Since you rarely come to Tokyo, we could do some sightseeing!

>Go! Go!

=6==========

>Ueno!

=7==========

>Ameyoko!

=8==========

>Saigo!

Ch3pg20

=1==========

>Sakura! (Cherry Trees)

>Wha- The Cherry Blossom Viewing! {Handwritten} that's not Tokyo sightseeing!

<Ya-hoo!

<Ya-ha!

=2==========

>Ah ha ha!! It's the Japanese Sakura Revival!!

>You're getting drunk in the speed of light! How are you going to drive the car!?

>We'll ask someone!

=4===========

>Wah, Pork!

>pugyu

妹: いもうと

俺達: おれたち

叔母さん: おばさん

やっかい: 厄介, trouble, burden, nuisance, bother, worry, care, dependence, support, kindness, obligation, staying (with a person)

そういや: which reminds me …, come to think of it …, now that you mention it …, on that subject …, so, if you say …

歳: さい

処女: しょじょ

呼ぶ: よぶ, to call out (to), to call, to invoke

番線: ばんせん, track number

はっしゃ: 発車, departure of a vehicle

縁:

ふち, rim, brim, edge, brink

ゆかり, related to (some person or place), affinity, connection

へり, edge (of a river, woods, etc.), shoulder (of a road)

よすが, someone to rely on, relative

セッカク(せっかく): 折角, rare, valuable, precious, long-awaited, with trouble, at great pains

見物: けんぶつ, sightseeing, watching, viewing

花見: はなみ, cherry blossom viewing, flower viewing

さいこう: 再興, revival, restoration, resuscitation

光の速さ: ひかりのはやさ, the speed of light

グデグデ: dead drunk

車: くるま, car, automobile, vehicle

だいこん: 大根, daikon (variety of large white Oriental radish, Raphanus sativus var. longipinnatus)

だいこう:

代行, acting as agent

乃公, I, me

代講, substitute lecturing, substitute lecturer

頼む: たのむ, to request, to beg, to ask, to call, to order, to reserve, to entrust to

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 No.76178

>>76138

>1st pic

There really needs to be more buttcleavage in manga.

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 No.76225

>>75830

Champion Red publishes Jinrouki Winvurga, which features a ton of nudity, rape, and giant robots in an oppressive despotic future, what could they have possibly had against this series?

>>76138

page 19 panel 2

>これも何かの縁かな…?

「縁」is fate/destiny/etc., which is indeed a connection. Consider:

"Is this also fate…?"

page 20 panel 2

>あっはっはー!!ニッポンシュ・サクラサイコーね!!

ニッポンシュ refers to 日本酒 (にほんしゅ), which is what the Japanese call sake ("sake" is a general term for liquor in Japan). サイコー is 最高, "best/awesome". Which turns into:

"Ah ha ha!! Sake and sakura are the best!!"

(Is this chick even Japanese??)

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 No.76235

File: 76a47a247519e40⋯.png (3.59 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg21.png)

File: e53005d6862597f⋯.png (4.2 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg22.png)

>>76225

>what could they have possibly had against this series?

I wanna know that so bad! Skimming through some pages from later volumes of this one, there are some crazy sex scenes not implied sex, literal sex that borderline an h-doujin. Like, "foggy censored penis goes into low-on-details vagina". He must have gone overboard in his nervous series somehow.

>Consider: "Is this also fate…?"

I almost went with "relatives" but that would be too specific, and settled for "connections". But I'm gonna go with"fate" then, it's less likely we'll fuck up that way.

>Is this chick even Japanese??

Doesn't seem like it. That's probably why she speaks in katakana.

>>76178

Not enough indeed. For all the love ass gets in anime and manga, butt cleavage still seems to be overlooked by most authors.

Ch3pg21

=1==========

>Oy oy, you brought your pig?

>Ah, I almost forgot. My sister did mention something about emergency rations…

>pugyu?

>can I eat you…?

=2==========

>OH! PIG!

>I heard a pig's "thing" looks like a drill!

>Pork is female though…

=4==========

>I'm sorry, Ryotaro…

>Eh?

=5==========

>I talked too much earlier, I didn't mean it.

>Ah… it's fine, really.

=6==========

>Being told that I can't pilot it…

>It was better to find that out now than later on, I think…

>But I'm a bit shocked from it still…

=7==========

>I guess I really am just a stupid kid.

<Don't say that

>Oh? Did something shock you?!!

Ch3pg22

=1==========

>For times like that!

=2==========

>Nothing beats dancing like you don't care!!

>Why are we naked!?

つれる: 連れる, to lead, to take (a person)

忘れる: わすれる, to forget, to leave carelessly, to be forgetful of, to forget about, to forget (an article)

非常食: ひじょうしょく, emergency rations

食うのかよ

ドリル: drill

聞く: きく

メス: 雌, female (animal)

よけい: 余計, too many, too much, excessive, superfluous, superabundant, extra, spare, surplus, unnecessary, needless, uncalled-for, otiose, abundantly, excessively, needlessly, all the more

乗る: のる, to get on (train, plane, bus, ship, etc.), to get in, to board, to take, to embark

後で: あとで, afterwards

ショック: shock

世間知らず: せけんしらず, ignorant of the ways of the world

ワレを忘れる: われをわすれる, to forget oneself, to lose control of oneself

踊る: おどる, to dance (orig. a hopping dance)

にかぎる: に限る, nothing better than

裸: はだか

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 No.76236

>>76235

>nervous

*previous

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 No.76304

>>76235

PLEASE SHOW THE PENISね

>Pork does a full spread

page 21 panel 1

>食うのかよ…

I think this is a tsukkomi more than an actual comment, something like

"You're gonna eat her…?"

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 No.76454

File: 00033bdcd1fa485⋯.png (3.67 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg23.png)

File: a489c9f8de98123⋯.png (4.03 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg24.png)

Ch3pg23

=1==========

>Ah ha ha! Everything is safe-safe, since I'm wearing my pasties!

>OWOW! THEY DON'T COVER ENOUGH! NOT ENOUGH!

<Nice, Nee-san!

{sfx} ぽいーん: poi-n

{sfx} やー: yah-

=2==========

>Oops, my bottom part is spilling out.

<golden hair!

>WRONG! VERY VERY WRONG!

=3==========

>Alright, let's go, young men!

>Dance like youre in the finals at the Koshien Stadium! The counter-uniform dance!

TN: "counter-uniform": I suppose she's talking about a politically incorrect dance, but I don't know how to put it in a natural way. Maybe "DANCE THE DANCE OF THE HEATHEN GODS" :^)

<Here?

=4==========

>Ha-yah!

<party

>Yeh!

<party

>Someone is making a fuzz, right on a weekday…

Ch3pg24

=1==========

>Hey!

>Yes!

=2==========

>We are going to meet with the traffic regulation team at Ueno.

>Since we can't go any further beyond here.

>Ok, the I too…

=3==========

>S'allright

>You can leave it to us old men.

>Miss tsundere-chan should wait here and enjoy the flower viewing.

=4==========

>Understood

>Take care, then.

=5==========

>us old men… miss…

=6==========

I'm being treated like a child again…

Vocabulary

ニプレス: pasties, adhesive nipple covering

的: てき, -like, typical

隠れる: かくれる, to hide, to be hidden, to conceal oneself, to disappear

下: した

はみ出る: はみでる, to jut out (of bounds), to be crowded out, to be forced out

きんいろ: 金色, golden (colour, color)

コゾー (こぞう): 小僧, young shopboy, errand boy, apprentice, youngster

めざす: 目指すto go toward, to head for, to aim at, to have an eye on

制服: せいふく, uniform

対抗: たいこう, opposition, antagonism

甲子: きのえね, first of the sexagenary cycle ?????????????

園: そのgarden (esp. man-made), orchard, park, plantation

甲子園: こうしえん, Koshien (location of Koshien Stadium, where the Japan National High School Baseball Tournament is held)

決勝: けっしょう, decision of a contest, finals (in sports)

出場: でば, one's time (e.g. to go on stage), one's turn, source, origin, place of production

どんちゃん騒ぎ: どんちゃんさわぎ, merrymaking, high jinks, spree

平日: へいじつ, weekday, ordinary days (i.e. non-holiday)

もり: ?????? Nothing useful for this

上: うえ

がる: to show signs of being, to feel, to think, to behave as if one were, to pretend, to act as if, to want, to desire, to be anxious to, to be eager to

上がる: あがるto rise, to go up, to come up, to ascend, to be raised, to enter (esp. from outdoors), to come in, to go in, to increase

俺達: おれたち

上野署: うえの, section of Tokyo

交通: こうつう, traffic, transportation, communication, exchange (of ideas, etc.), intercourse

規制: きせい, regulation, (traffic) policing, control, restriction

挨拶: あいさつgreeting, greetings, salutation, salute, polite set phrase used when meeting or parting from somebody, polite set phrase used to express apology, sympathy, congratulations, etc.speech (congratulatory or appreciative), addressr, eply, response

この先: このさき, beyond this point, from now on, after this

くぐる: 潜るto go under, to pass under, to go through, to pass through, to dive (into or under the water), to evade, to get around, to slip pastto survive, to surmount

進める: すすめる, to advance, to promote, to hasten

進む: すすむ, to advance, to go forward

おい: old age, old person, the old, the aged

任せる: まかせる, to entrust (e.g. a task) to another, to leave to

嬢: じょう, unmarried woman, Miss

花見: はなみ, cherry blossom viewing, flower viewing

待つ: まつ

ちょうだい

長大: very long, great length

頂だい: receiving, reception, getting, being given

了解: りょうかい, comprehension, consent, understanding, agreement, roger (on the radio)

お気を付けて: きをつけて, take care, be careful

子供: こども

扱い: あつかい, treatment, service

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 No.76615

>>76454

page 23 panel 1

I'm not certain on this (couldn't find proof via search), but I believe the ニコニコ的 Ririn mentions refers to broadcast requirements on Nico Nico Douga. Maybe edit it to:

"Ah ha ha! Everything is safe-safe for broadcast, since I'm wearing my pasties!"

>アウアウ!隠れてない!隠れてないよ!

アウアウ is short for アウトアウト (Out-Out), which uses baseball terms to contrast Ririn's "safe-safe".

"OUT-OUT! THEY DON'T COVER ENOUGH! NOT ENOUGH!"

panel 2

>しまって!イロイロしまって!

しまう here is to shut or close. Since English does have the phrase "shut your legs", perhaps:

"Shut it! Shut your all of it!"

panel 3

I'm pretty sure I'm missing some sort of reference here, but I don't know it. If I find anything I'll post again.

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 No.76793

File: 302374c5d64c6ed⋯.png (4.03 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg25.png)

File: 8c6d78c65d213d2⋯.png (3.85 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg26.png)

File: d35326c9ff0b67d⋯.png (4.06 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg27.png)

Been a bit lazy lately, due to end of year's shenanigans. See you guys in the next current year (tomorrow probably)

Ch3pg25

=1==========

>Whatever…

=2==========

>I guess I'll enjoy myself then.

>At the flower viewing.

Ch3pg26

=1==========

>Ah ha ha! Careful, if you don't cover yourselves well you'll get arrested for indecent exposure, boys!

>Wah! Nee-chan, you're not covering it "there"!

>They're throwing money at us…

=2==========

>You know.

>Hmm? What?

=3==========

>Dancing naked like this actually feels so carefree, don't you think?

>You sure that's not desperation talking? {Handwritten} it did get pretty lively though

=4==========

>YEAAH! See, I'm a dancer in a pub show at Ueno.

>I'm a pro hip-shaker! Here let me show you!

Ch3pg27

=1==========

>I can write "butt" in the air.

>Writi~ing. Writi~ing. Done!

>THAT'S JUST YOUR OWN ASS!! {handwritten} what does a "pro ass-shaker" even do?

>AHAHAHA

=2==========

>Aha! Amu can do it too.

>OH NO YOU WON'T!!

>pugyu

>pugyu

=3==========

>Ahahaha!

*This… is fine too. Even if I can't board it…

*I can be a mechanic, or an operator. There are many jobs involving Tajikarao that I could take.

>hm?

=4==========

<I can be of use to the people piloting it.

<That can be my goal…

Vocabulary

堪能: たんのう, proficient, skillful, enjoying, satisfaction, satiation, having one's fill (of)

ちゃんと: diligently, seriously, earnestly, reliably, steadily, legitimately

隠す: かくす, to hide, to conceal

ワイセツ: 猥褻, obscenity

物: もの

列: れつ, queue, line, row, column, sequence, string, train

陳列: ちんれつ, exhibition, display, show

罪: つみ, crime, sin, wrongdoing, indiscretion, penalty, sentence, punishment, fault, responsibility, culpability, thoughtlessness, lack of consideration

たいほ: arrest, apprehension, capture

隠る: かくる, to hide, to be hidden, to conceal oneself, to disappear

おひねり: wrapped offering (of money)

飛ぶ: とぶ, to fly, to soar

こうして: 斯うして, thus, in this way

裸: はだか

踊る: おどる, to dance (orig. a hopping dance)

たしかに: surely, certainly

色々: いろいろ

どうでもよい: どうでも良い, inconsequential, indifferent, not worth worrying about, whatever you do is OK, trivial

やけくそ: 自棄糞, desperation

元気: げんき

実は: じつは, as a matter of fact, by the way, to tell you the truth, to be honest, frankly

ショー: show

パブ: pub

ダンサー: dancer

プロ: professional

腰: こし, back, lower back, waist, hips, lumbar region, ごし, posture, position, pose, attitude

使い: つかい, errand, mission, going as envoy

使う: つかう, to use (a thing, method, etc.), to make use of, to put to use

オシリ: お尻, bottom, buttocks

字: じ, hand-writing, penmanship

どうかく: the same rank, equality, apposition

かく: 書く

文字: もじ, letter (of alphabet), character

乗る: のる

整備士: せいびし, mechanic

オペレーター: operator

周り: まわり

仕事: しごと

他に: ほかに, in addition, besides

人達: ひとたち, people

応援: おうえん, aid, assistance, help, reinforcement, rooting, barracking, support, cheering

目標: もくひょう, mark, objective, target

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 No.76981

>>76793

Happy New Year!

page 26 panel 3

Handwritten part

"If it (それで…なら) cheered you up (元気になる) then fine, I guess (いいケドよ)"

page 27 panel 1

>尻文字じゃねーか!!

"That's just writing with your ass!"

Just a small adjustment.

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 No.77114

File: 3703783c46e2a0e⋯.png (7.79 MB, 3000x1800, 5:3, tmtwafCh3pg28&29.png)

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 No.77115

File: 23fa049eec8c6be⋯.png (4.38 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh3pg31.png)

File: 70c28afee287cfb⋯.png (4.14 MB, 3000x1800, 5:3, tmtwafCh3pg32&33.png)

Ch3pg28&29

=1==========

<As I pondered, dancing in those winds

<Thoughts of resignation crossed my mind momentarily.

=2==========

<However

<As far as I'm concerned

<I was already

<Completely

<Charmed

Ch3pg30

=1==========

*Tajikarao!!

*once again

=2==========

*Just as I remember…

=3==========

*It is so…

*Cool

=4==========

<I still

<want to

<RIDE IT!!

=6==========

>Y-YOU!!

Ch3pg31

=1==========

<And so…

=2==========

<Amidst the crowd, enveloped by the warm sunray and falling petals…

<Fate had us meet again.

=3==========

<Light glittered as it bounced off of her.

>La Vie en Rose-san…

<Her chestnut colored hair was so pretty…

Ch3pg32&33

<This time

<Like on that other occasion

<We found ourselves in another similar unexpected situation.

<I never thought that could happen.

TN: these last couple pages turned into a word salad when I did them literally. Maybe playing with sentence order could make it better.

<A boy's dream / END

Vocabulary

風: かぜ, wind, breeze, draught, draft

風: ふう, method, manner, way, style, appearance, air, tendency

踊り: おどり, dance

ながら: while, during, as

考える: かんがえる

一度: ひとたびonce, one time, on one occasion, temporarily, for a moment

あきらめる: 諦める, to give up, to abandon (hope, plans), to resign oneself (to)

あきらめる: 明らめる, to elucidate, to shed light on, to clarify

にとって: に取って, to, for, concerning, as far as … is concerned, regarding

あまりにも: 余りにも, too much, excessive, too

魅力的: みりょくてき, charming, fascinating, attractive

乗る

牛後: ぎゅうご, rump of cattle (NOTE: "one of/among the rest" might be a better way to put it)

暖かい: あたたかい, warm, mild, genial

日差し: ひざし, sunlight, rays of the sun

舞い散る: まいちる, to dance down (leaves, petals, etc.), to fall as if dancing

花びら: はなびら, (flower) petal

中: なか

彼女: かのじょ

再び: ふたたび, again, once more, a second time

出会う: であう, to meet (by chance), to come across, to run across, to encounter, to happen upon

キラキラ: glitter, sparkle, glisten, twinkle

光: ひかり

反射: はんしゃ, reflection, reverberation

栗色: くりいろ, chestnut-color, chestnut-colour

髪: かみ

綺麗: きれい

とんでもない: とんでも無い, unthinkable, unexpected, outrageous, offensive, terrible

もする: 模する, to imitate, to copy, to mock, to replace, to model after

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 No.77116

File: 2b31b7998bdf7aa⋯.jpg (243.16 KB, 600x842, 300:421, __christina_sierra_and_fel….jpg)

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やっぱり is quickly turning into my least favorite word in the entire japanese language.

>>76981

>page 27 panel 1

>>尻文字じゃねーか!!

>"That's just writing with your ass!"

There's something I forgot to include in my vocabulary list about 文字, it's that it may also mean "literal", which is what I was going for there

>Lit.: isn't that literally your ass

I thought it was a pun. If you think that's too far fetched we'll keep your version.

Also, I might try doing a double take on this and Number Girls next.

Also (x2) here's some works from the author

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 No.77174

YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.

>>77114

>>77115

page 28&29 panel 1

>そんな風に踊りながら考えてた

風 is being used as "like that" or "in that style".

https://hinative.com/en-US/questions/15299

Maybe we can mix it in with the second part of the speech, like:

"While caught up in my dancing,"

>>77116

>re: ass-writing

I figured Kiyao meant it literally because she's actually ass-writing like in embed related (skip to 2:28).

>re: Number Girls

That series needs some love, and the translator has been gone for a while.

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 No.78178

File: 8bb77b18b14fc48⋯.jpg (344.56 KB, 1244x1800, 311:450, Img_129.jpg)

File: 488e44178b88d5a⋯.png (3.76 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg2.png)

File: 37ddc957538e9e1⋯.png (4.04 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg3.png)

I'm not dead! But I had to go by the last week without internet. I also didn't translate as many pages, because of alcohol.

>>54470

ch4pg1

<A threat to mankind

人類: じんるい, mankind, humanity

脅威: きょうい, threat, menace

ch4pg2

=4==========

>What is this?

>Hmm? That's a generator. It's a refurbished engine, to make electricity.

>Don't touch it, it's hot.

=5==========

>Here's your bonus castella cake.

>Thank you.

>OH COME Oー WHY ON EARTH WERE YOU BUTT NAKED?!

ch4pg3

=1==========

>Ah-mm soh-hee

>I got caught in the moment…

=2==========

>I can't believe it!

>Dancing naked is a crime of public indecency! Don't you know that?!

>ahahaha

>Ah-mm soh-hee

=3==========

>Indecent… exposure?

<even my boobs?

>You're exposing the most! You were the worst of all back there!

TN: チン (陳?) and いったん (いった+の? but I used いったん as the dictionary said it was) made for a weird phrase, either that or I got it all wrong. In the end I put it in a way that fit the context.

=4==========

>Ha ha ha, yeah that was an awful thing to look at, Ryotaro.

<Want some takoyaki?

>Kiyao…

>YOU DID THE SAME THING! {handwritten} don't pretend this is someone else's problem.

=5==========

>What's with the cute girl… have we met her before?

>How're you connected?

>ahh…

<cute?!

=6==========

>You see, the thing is… I… I've also seen her butt naked before so…

ch4pg4

>YOU'RE MAKING IT SOUND LIKE IT WAS SOME NORMAL MISUNDERSTANDING!

>Ufuuuuu

>SOH-HEEE

=2==========

>By the way, Lady-san.

>How should we call you then?

>Uhh… a name?

=3==========

>…..

>What now?

ch4pg5

=1==========

>La Vie en Rose-san

>right?

>Eh? Wait, you…

>La Vie… is that even japanese?

>Y-you actually believed that!?

=2==========

>Eh…?

>That obviously was an alias!

>it was?

>I only said that because I never thought I'd see you ever again…

=3==========

>So you don't know her name, but you've seen her butt.

>My, what a scandalous relationship.

>Yeah… that's right.

=4==========

>I'M…

>I'M NOT SAYINGIT!

=5==========

>Why…

>I don't like my name, that's why!

>Really?

>REALLY!

>hyyy

=6==========

>Besides…

ch4pg6

=1==========

>It's a weird…

>name…

>so…

=3==========

>You're gonna laugh…

>for sure…

{Sfx} ドキッ, doki, ba-dump (heartbeat)

=4==========

>GYAAAAA! She got me! The titty monster got me!

>And don't call me tsundere!

=5==========

>Haha, she's such a cute kid. Right Ryotaro?

>Y- yeah

ch4pg7

=1==========

<She really is… cute…

<Like my sisters and Chizuru-san, but different…

<How can I put it…?

<Uhmm…

<oh, right…

=2==========

>What's a tsundere?

>You… don't tell me you really don't know.

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 No.78179

File: ccd01379bf9cbb1⋯.png (4.16 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg4.png)

File: fb741d5071dc61a⋯.png (3.98 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg5.png)

Vocabulary

発電: はつでん, generation (e.g. power)

器: き, device, instrument

回す: まわす, to turn, to rotate, to gyrate, to circulate, to send around, to surround, to put something to a new use (e.g. leftovers)

電気: でんき

作る: つくる

さわる: 触る, to touch, to feel 障る, to hinder, to interfere with, to affect, to do one harm, to be harmful to

熱つ: ねつ, heat

カステラ: castella, type of sponge cake

一個: いっこ, piece, fragment, one (object)

おまけ: freebie (e.g. with a purchase), something additional, bonus, an extra

下: した

裸: はだか

チョーシ: 調子, impetus, spur of the moment, strain

乗る: のる

信じる: しんじる, to believe, to believe in, to place trust in, to confide in, to have faith in

裸: はだか

おどり: 踊り, dance

公然わいせつ罪なん: こうぜんわいせつざい, (crime of) public indecency

チン列: 陳列, ちんれつ, exhibition, display, show

罪: つみ, crime, sin, wrongdoing, indiscretion

なのに: and yet, despite this, but even so, but even then, however, nevertheless, for all that, notwithstanding that

いったん: 一旦, once, for a moment, temporarily

とむ: 富む, to be rich, to become rich, to be abundant (with), to abound (with), to be rich (in)

同罪: どうざい, same offense, same offence

ひとごと: other people's affairs, somebody else's problem

いつのまに(か): 何時の間にか, before one knows, before one becomes aware of, unnoticed, unawares

カンケイ: 関係, relation, relationship, connection

実は: じつは, as a matter of fact, by the way, to tell you the truth, to be honest, frankly

このあいだ: この間, the other day, lately, recently, during this period

彼女: かのじょ

おしり: お尻, bottom, buttocks

勘違い: かんちがい, misunderstanding, wrong guess

ところで: by the way, incidentally

名前: なまえ

呼ぶ: よぶ, to call out (to), to call, to invoke

日本人: にほんじん

信じる: しんじる

偽名: ぎめい, alias (false name), assumed name

きまって: 決まって, always, without fail, invariably, usually, regularly

決まる: きまる, to be decided, to be settled, to look good in (clothes)

だって: after all, because

二度と: にどと, never again (with negative verb)

会う: あう, to meet, to encounter, to see

知らない: しらない

尻: しり

タダレタカンケイ

ただれる: 爛れる, to be sore, to be inflamed, to be bleary, to fester, to be dissipated, to be dissolute, to indulge in

かんけい: relation, relationship, connection

それに: besides, in addition, also, moreover

笑う: わらう, to laugh

変: へん

くっつく: 食っ付く, to adhere to, to stick to, to cling to

おばけ: monster

可愛い: かわいい

達: たち

違う: ちがう

意味: いみ, meaning, significance

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 No.78180

File: 976de48c497295c⋯.png (4.17 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg6.png)

File: 2ab32d2a76c5f7d⋯.png (4.22 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg7.png)

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 No.78254

>>78178

Welcome back!

page 2 panel 4

>発電器だな エンジン回して電気作るんだ

Here, 回す literally means "rotate" (and also means "reuse") but is used the way English speakers say an engine "runs".

"Hmm? That's a generator. The engine runs to make electricity."

page 2 panel 5

>ほいカステラ 一個おまけしちゃうよ

There is a bonus, but this refers to getting one extra as a bonus.

"Here's your castella cake. I gave you one extra as a bonus."

page 3 panel 3

This entire panel is a dumb joke so the context is pretty out there. The term for "exposure" is 陳列 (ちんれつ), and the crime is 陳列罪. Auntie is a pervert so she immediately thinks ちん/チン refers to ちんちん or ちんぽ, which of course means penis. She pauses between ちん and れつ to make this joke. The handwritten part follows up with "but these are boobs" (パイ, from おっぱい), meant to be a contrast to チン.

La Vie en Rose then says "don't stop for a moment (いったん, or 一旦) after saying 'chin'! Also, cover those up!"

None of this will translate at all so one option would be to stick in a similar joke. Something like: Auntie: "Indickcent exposure?" "But these are boobs…"

La Vie en Rose: "InDEcent! And cover those up!"

>>78179

page 4 panel 1

>そういう勘違いされるような事言うなああ

"DON'T SAY IT IN A WAY PEOPLE WILL MISUNDERSTAND!"

page 4 panel 2

The four bits of handwritten parts go as follows:

>死ぬな

>死ぬと

>ねるぞ

>逆…

The first three are a reference to the saying "寝るな!寝ると死ぬぞ" ("Don't sleep! If you sleep, you'll die!") which is said to people freezing to death. Amu reverses the sleeping and dying, so Ryotaro says "逆" or "reverse".

"Don't die!"

"If you die"

"you'll sleep!"

"That's reversed…"

>>78180

page 7 panel 2

>ツンデレ!?

>おまえ意味わかっていってねーだろ

"You, (おまえ) you didn't (ねー) say that while knowing what it means (意味わかっていって), did you (だろ)."

Ryotaro says "tsundere" in an attempt to finish his thinking about how La Vie en Rose is cute, but in a way different from his sister/Chizuru. Kiyao wonders if he said the term without knowing what it meant.

"…a tsundere!?"

"Dude, you don't know what that means, do you."

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 No.78477

File: 50d4ad79f5f0439⋯.png (4.18 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg8.png)

File: e9b86b416ab36d9⋯.png (3.88 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg9.png)

>>78254

I knew there was a dick joke there somewhere.

ch4pg8

=1==========

>Well…

=2==========

>Guess we should go back to our picnic then.

<TN: something about some Nekota-san coming back, must be a reference to something/someone

>sure

=3==========

<(じっ: jiiii…) Stare

=4==========

>Uhmm…

<It's been so long since I met someone my age. We can talk about a lot of things…

=5==========

*Today is gonna be so much fun! If we have a good time we can do this again sometime…

>Ah… uhhh

>?

>She wants to say this

<Bad at acting "dere"

=6==========

>Ah, that reminds me.

=7==========

>Wh-what is it.

>You came here piloting this didn't you?

=8==========

>Y-yeah that's right.

>I'm it's pilot after all.

=9==========

>I knew it. That's cool.

>Didn't I tell you?

>Very cool! And you seem to be young like us, that's even more unusual.

=10==========

>That's awesome. Wish I had been selected. I can't ride it, for sure.

>I- I guess!

>Awesome! Awesome!

>pugyu

ch4pg9

=1==========

>Yeah, awesome! Because you got selected, that's why!

>Smugness

[Gets carried away easily]

=2==========

>You see, originally, bipedal troopers are meant to be piloted by two persons.

>But I can do it by myself!

>Yeah that's me! The prodigy pilot! Morino!

TN: 森野: Morino, I think it means "hidden forest "

=3==========

>Morino?

>Morino-san, is it?

>That's cute.

>Cute!

>GYAAAAAAAAA

Vocabulary

ゴチ: ごち, treat, banquet, feast, entertainment, goodies

そろそろ: slowly, quietly, steadily, gradually, gingerly, soon, momentarily, before long, any time now

戻る: もどるto turn back (e.g. half-way), to recover (e.g. something lost), to be returned

猫田: Nekota

?戸し

久しぶりに: ひさしぶりに

歳: とし, age, years

近い: ちかい, near, close, short (distance)

いろいろ: various

楽しい: たのしい

よい

うまい: 上手い, skillful, skilful, clever, expert, wise, successful

デレる

そういえば: which reminds me …, come to think of it …, now that you mention it …, on that subject …, so, if you say …

やっぱりコレ

操縦: そうじゅう, steering, piloting, flying, control, operation, handling

そりゃ: very, extremely, that is

俺らと

あんま: not very (with negative sentence), not much (with negative sentence)

歳: さい-, years-old

変: へん

選ばれる: えらばれる, to be elected

とくいまんめん: 得意満面, triumphant air, smugness

やすい: easy

本来: ほんらい, originally, primarily, essentially, naturally, by nature, in (and of) itself, proper, legal

二人: ふたり

必要: ひつよう, necessary, needed, essential, indispensable

たった一人: たったひとり, just one person, only one

動かす: うごかす, to inspire, to rouse, to move (e.g. feeling), to influence

天才: てんさい, genius, prodigy, natural gift

森野: Morino, I think it means "hidden forest "

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 No.78479

File: e333907092f20f2⋯.png (3.98 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg9.png)

>>78477

How did I mis that last pic? I thought I saved the finished version

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 No.78497

>>78479

errta

first panel, first bubble, I didn't realize that was Morino talking, I thought it was one of the other kids. It should read

>That's not all, having being selected isn't the only thing about me!

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 No.78509

>>78477

page 8 panel 2

>さてジュースもゴチになったしそろそろ戻るわ

"Well, (さて) I received some juice (ジュースもゴチになったし), it's about time I return (そろそろ戻るわ)". Cleaning that up:

"Thanks for the juice, I should get back."

The handwritten part by Ryotaro just says 猫? "Neko?", so he doesn't know who Nekota is.

page 8 panel 4

>久しぶりに歳の近い子といろいろ話できて…

"It's been a while (久しぶりに) since I could talk about things (いろいろ話できて…) with someone close to my age… (歳の近い子と)"

page 8 panel 5

>今日はたのしかった!よかったらまた…

"Today was so much fun! (今日はたのしかった!) Maybe we can do this again sometime… (よかったらまた…)"

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 No.78567

File: c706773a2aff5b2⋯.png (4.12 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg10.png)

File: 00c3505b6b21df3⋯.png (3.59 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg11.png)

File: 9e7337c35b2753b⋯.png (4.27 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg12.png)

>>78509

Not forgetting about the past tense would have helped me there. Fuck me.

And Nekota is probably a character that will be introduced later. But I'm not sure.

ch9pg10

=1==========

>That's right…

=2==========

>It was made to be operated

>by two pilots…

=5==========

>Fufun. You shouldn't feel bad for not being selected.

>The chances are astronomically low anyway.

>Yeah, I guess so…

[TN: damn this handwriting. Some future chapters have an even lower resolution btw]

=6==========

>Say, suppose someone who wasn't selected tried riding it. What would happen then?

ch4pg11

=1==========

>That means death.

>DEATH!?

=2==========

>Well, actually, there are no records of someone dying like that. But that's what we're told.

>"If you're not suitable, you're gonna die" as they say…

>So it's at least a very unpleasant ride.

>I see…

=3==========

>But, I still don't get it. What's the point of this guy?

>Haa?

>I know that, Kiyao.

=4==========

>It's helping people. He can get to any disaster area.

>You were helped by a robot before like that too, remember?

>But, look at the size of that thing…

>Pfff…

=5==========

>AHAHAHAHAHA

ch4pg12

=1==========

>Disaster area? You think bipedal troopers are only good for things like removing rubble and such?

>Bipedal troopers actually have one simple job.

=2==========

>To wage

>War.

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 No.78568

File: 3a7707a11c43797⋯.png (3.94 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg13.png)

File: fe4c1c514f237a1⋯.png (4.26 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg14.png)

File: 763bb6ad26101a6⋯.png (3.89 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg15.png)

ch4pg13

=2==========

>War?

>Robots do…?

=3==========

>But… why?

=4==========

>I see. Then for that purpose, I guess this size is on point.

=5==========

>I'm surprised…

>You guys really don't know anything then…

>Bipedal troopers have to battle the…

ch4pg14

=2==========

<Ah…

=3==========

>He…

ch4pg15

=1==========

<Moves…

<Fast!!

<Amazing!!

=2==========

<And we're so

<CLOSE!!

<eh

<this is

<what?

<eh

<ehー!

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 No.78569

File: 2dac25b76f4f497⋯.png (8.92 MB, 2500x1800, 25:18, tmtwafCh4pg16&17.png)

File: 9dd99043b8f4f7e⋯.png (4.32 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg18.png)

ch4pg16

Forgot to put these on the image, but it's just them screaming

>WAAAAA

>KYAAAA

ch4pg18

=3==========

>Uhh… Hurts…

>What the…

>{sfx} goriri

=4==========

>Ow ow ow!

>Are you ok!?

>Ryotaro!

>{sfx, I think} split split

Vocabulary

名前: なまえ

選ばれる: えらばれる, to be elected

悔やむ: くやむ, to mourn, to lament, to be sorry, to regret, to repent

確率: かくりつ, probability, likelihood, chances

天文学的: てんもんがくてき, astronomical

数字: すうじ, numeral, figure, digit, numeric character

以外: いがい, with the exception of, excepting

動かす: うごかす

実際: じっさい, practicality, practical

聞く: きく

適正: てきせい, reasonable, suitable

極: ごく, quite, very

端ない: はしたない, improper, immodest, disgraceful, shameful, vulgar, low

何の: どの, which, what (way), なんのwhat kind, what sort

ために: for, for the sake of, to one's advantage, in favor of, in favour of, on behalf of

人助け: ひとだすけ

災害: さいがい, calamity, disaster, misfortune

現場: げんば, actual spot, scene, scene of the crime, site, location, setting

そうやって: like that, that way, thus

瓦礫: がれき, rubble, debris, wreckage

撤去: てっきょ, withdrawal, revocation, repeal, demolition, removal

仕事: しごと

一つ: ひとつ

戦う: たたかう, to make war (on), to wage war (against), to go to war (with), to fight (with), to do battle (against)

背: せい, height, stature

高いたかい, high, tall

マト: 的, mark, target

あきれる: 呆れる, to be amazed, to be shocked, to be astonished, to be astounded, to be disgusted

知る: しる

動く: うごく, to move, to stir, to shift, to shake, to swing

凄い: すごい

ていうか: I mean (used at the beginning of a sentence)

近: きん, near, close

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 No.78571

File: ca9938b17578b44⋯.png (4.06 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg13.png)

>>78568

Something happened with pg13

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 No.78573

>>78567

Tsk, I also forgot the out-of-bubble dialog on pg10, first bubble

<Morino, that's a cute name

<Stop calling me cute

<Gocha (either literally as a sfx, or engrish for "gotcha")

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 No.78592

>>78567

Yeah, I bet Nekota is that glasses guy from earlier, but we'll find out eventually.

page 10 panel 5

The handwriting is definitely hard to read. The first two kanji are probably 逮捕, for "arrest", but the last eludes me- I'm guessing the whole thing is 逮捕術, or "arrest technique", something a soldier like her would be trained in.

>>78568

>>78571

page 13 panel 3

>なに…と?

The と is probably "with" so maybe:

"Against… who?"

>>78569

page 18 panel 4

>へーきへーき

It's 平気 (へいき), so:

"I'm fine, I'm fine"

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 No.78974

File: b8824478e5c2b3c⋯.png (4.11 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg19.png)

File: d0bcdc8ac4f0094⋯.png (8.74 MB, 3000x1800, 5:3, tmtwafCh4pg20&21.png)

ch4pg19

=1==========

>The cherry tree's…

=2==========

>They came all down…

=3==========

>Ouch. What happened?

>pugyu

>I don't know. Maybe a gas explosion? Or a terror attack…

>Terror?

>Oy! Look there!

=4==========

>There's something in the smoke!

>It's huge!

ch4pg20&21

=3==========

>It's big. Like, about 30 meters high!

>A meteorite?

>We have to help the wounded!

=4==========

>Are you alright?

>uh!

>Hang in there!

>It's burning!

=5==========

>That's not it!

>It's a…

ch4pg23

=1==========

>eh?

>ah…

>ah…

=5==========

>GAOOOOO

ch4pg24

=2==========

>That's an Asura!

>ASURAAAA!

>Asura!?

=3==========

>Run! It's an Asura!

>That rock, it's a

>PILAR!

>kyaaaa

Vocabulary

桜: さくら

散る: ちる, to fall (e.g. blossoms, leaves)

爆発: ばくはつ, explosion, detonation, eruption

テロ: terror

煙: けむり, smoke, fumes

中: なか

でかい: huge, big, gargantuan

くらい: approximately, about, around, or so

隕石: いんせき, meteorite

ケガ人: けがにん, wounded person, injured person

しっかり: 確り, tightly (holding on), firmly, securely

タンカー: tanker

But it might be tanka: 炭化, carbonization, carbonisation

違う: ちがう

アスラ

逃げる: にげる

石柱: せきちゅう, stone pillar

ピラー: pillar

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 No.78975

File: d430d255fa7b219⋯.png (4.78 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg23.png)

File: 6c3d1006b1270d9⋯.png (4.55 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg24.png)

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 No.78978

>>78974

page 20&21 panel 4

Turns out タンカ is 担架, "stretcher/litter".

"I need a stretcher!"

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 No.78979

File: c4685e5ad815469⋯.jpg (841.9 KB, 1252x1800, 313:450, Img_150.jpg)

>>78978

Thanks, there are a lot of words that read タンカ, and burnt was one of the top so I went with that.

Also, I forgot page 22 since it didn't had anything to translate

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 No.79189

File: 553836f90fc9234⋯.jpg (218.87 KB, 600x600, 1:1, 1470416895900.jpg)

I'll typeset it soon™, I promise.

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 No.79528

File: 0669237bff9774d⋯.png (4.27 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg25.png)

File: 6bd4555b5144c8f⋯.png (4.32 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg26.png)

File: 43f1c27ae947f5b⋯.png (4.39 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg27.png)

>>79189

Thanks man, much appreciated!

>>78592

Shame on me, Nekota is her boss and he was introduced earlier.

ch4pg25

=1==========

>Waaaa! Run!

>Aaaahh!

>Hurry!

>Asura?

>Asura?

>Kyaaa!

=2==========

>Oy, Ryotaro! I don't know what's going on but it looks dangerous!

>Let's run!

>Ah, ok.

=3==========

>Morino-san!?

>You two get out of here quick!

>What about you? (Alternatively, "And you?", to fit the bubble)

=4==========

>If that's really a Pillar…

=5==========

>Then a poison sphere is about to come out!

>Entering it is certain death. The Toxic Space!

ch4pg26

=1==========

>Toxic…

>You're going in!?

>Of course!

=3==========

>We're gonna do what needs to be done!

=4==========

>And that's fighting, for sure!

>That's our duty! Tajikarao's and mine!

ch4pg27

=2==========

>Tsundere-chan!! Pillar!!

>Nekota-hanchou!

>Yes, I know!

=3==========

>ah!

=5==========

>Alright!

>Let's go, Tajikarao!!

<ACTIVATE!!

=6==========

>Eehhh she's going!? Just like that!

>Bu… wha… without weapons or anything!

She's not gonna wait 'till the last minute to get

to work?

=7==========

>Monsters!? Asura? I don't know what's what. What is happening…?

=8==========

>Bastard!!

Vocabulary

I'm trying to save time, so instead of compiling a vocabulary list, I'm just making a list of words that I can input on a dictionary if I need to review later. I can include it back here if anyone wants, just ask.

Also I started working on Number Girl if proofreader-sensei hasn't noticed yet.

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 No.79565

>>79528

I forgot Nekota's mention too, whoops.

page 25 panel 1

The second "Asura" should be "Pillar"

page 27 panel 6

>あーもー武装もないのにっ あくまで時間かせぎだかんねっ

"Bu… wha… without weapons or anything! The most she'll be able to do (あくまで) is buy time (時間かせぎだかんねっ)!"

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 No.79770

File: 4bd6212c88d3f78⋯.png (4.16 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg28.png)

File: 6a4bf05c4119185⋯.png (4.47 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg29.png)

ch4pg28

=3==========

>It's trying to correct the pillar's angle?

>Tsundere-chan, don't let it get straight!

=4==========

>It's ignoring us. Hey look at me!!

>I won't allow this!

=6==========

>She won't make it!?

==ch4pg29

=3==========

>A black sphere!

>WAAH, IT'S HERE!

>kyaaa!

ch4pg30

=2==========

>Waaah

>Waah!

=3==========

>You have to run, quick!

>Shit! My store!

=4==========

>Birds!?

ch4pg31

=1==========

>HEY! You, have to run fast! You can still make it! Hurry!

>Y-yes!

>Let's go, Ryotaro!

=3==========

>Tajikarao's interior is the only place one can fight from.

>That's what it was made for!

>Alright!

=4==========

>Let's start fighting already, I'm not afraid!!

>We are bringing that pilar down!!

=5==========

>Uh!

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 No.79771

File: 4ad2a46ebb27adf⋯.png (4.58 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg30.png)

File: 9ad17e1310aa5cd⋯.png (4.24 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg31.png)

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 No.79807

>>79770

>>79771

ch4pg30 panel 3

>You have to run, quick!

あなた/あんた does mean "you" but is often used by wives to affectionately refer to their husbands.

<Dear! We have to run!

ch4pg31 panel 3

>Tajikarao's interior is the only place one can fight from.

"ダヂカラオは… この中で唯一の戦闘機"

"Tajikarao is…(ダヂカラオは…) the only fighting machine (唯一の戦闘機) that can fight inside this [area] (この中で)"

<Only Tajikarao… can fight in this space.

ch4pg31 panel 4

>Let's start fighting already, I'm not afraid!!

"初戦闘だからっておじけづいてちゃ!!"

"Even if this is my first battle (初戦闘だからって), [I must not] lose my nerve (おじけづいてちゃ[いけません])!!"

<This may be my first battle, but I'm not afraid!!

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 No.79810

>>79807

>first battle

I should have gone with my gut feeling on that. Almost went with that at first.

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 No.80150

File: 013c94bc700dd0b⋯.png (4.66 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg32.png)

File: 5899cae578c17cd⋯.png (4.21 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg33.png)

File: 2fe35793d97f3ec⋯.png (4.47 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg34.png)

ch4pg32

=2==========

>Kyaaaa

=3==========

>Ryotaro!?

ch4pg33

=1==========

>Ah (crying )

>Ah (crying )

=2==========

>Ah (crying )

>Ah (crying )

=3==========

>Ah (crying )

=4==========

>Oy, Ryotaro!

>You go first!

=5==========

>Wha… Wait…

>Kiyao!

>Ah… shit!

>We're going ahead then!

ch4pg34

=1==========

>Ey!

=2==========

>It's black but…

>It's not dark inside!?

>But it's silent!

=4==========

>Dark… light!?

*It's shining?

*There!

=6==========

>Cough!

>Cough!

>Blood!?

ch4pg35

=1==========

>The black area is spreading a lot further…

>How am I supposed to breath in here?

TN: I adjusted this to fit a question. Lit.: I need to breathe in here?

=2==========

>Tajikarao!

=3==========

>Hurry!

>Morino-san!

=7==========

>hm!

>hmmm!

>Hold on just a little longer!

>Activate forced exhaustion!

=8==========

>Pugyu!

<puah

>Pork!? {Handwriting} where were you?!

ch4pg36

=1==========

>Ah!

=4==========

>Waaaa!

>Nyyyy!

ch4pg37

=4==========

>Gyaaa!

ch4pg38

=1==========

>Guh…

>Fuh!

=3==========

>Gih!

=4==========

>Gyaa!

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 No.80151

File: 9883f7bc38afbc1⋯.png (4.34 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg35.png)

File: b7563c828a693c0⋯.png (4.62 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg36.png)

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 No.80152

File: 010674ebeb21dea⋯.png (4.38 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg37.png)

File: 08ddd9c7540f042⋯.png (4.57 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg38.png)

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 No.80177

>>80150

>>80151

ch4pg35 panel 1

>How am I supposed to breath in here?"

"At this rate (これじゃ) my breath won't be enough (息が持たない!?)", cleaning that up and retaining the question mark:

<Will my breath hold out!?"

ch4pg35 panel 7

>Activate forced exhaustion!

"Exhaustion" is technically correct but "ventilation" fits better here since that's usually used when talking about air quality.

<Activate forced ventilation!

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 No.80427

File: 9d49d2fa9e32d16⋯.png (4.12 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg39.png)

File: fdbf397299fc657⋯.png (4.01 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg40.png)

ch4pg39

=1==========

>Haa

>Haa

>Moving feels so heavy! I can't move like I want to!

=2==========

>78 points on piloting aptitude really isn't enough then!?

>Is it that or…!

=3==========

>Is it that, or because I'm alone?

>Can't I do this by myself?

>Chizuru!!

=4==========

>Chizuru!?

>pugyu!

=5==========

>SHIIIIIIIIIIT

=6==========

>Guh!

ch4pg40

=4==========

<AAAAAA!

ch4pg41

=1==========

>Damage to the shoulder!

=2==========

>Nekota-hanchou!

>Pilot's synchronization is going down!

>The feedback is transmitting pain sensation to the pilot!? Morino! Morino!

=3==========

>She's fainted…?

>That's…!

=4==========

>tsch… I… tssch! I have to take a chance… tsch!

>There's someone in the cockpit!?

>Who is this!?

=5==========

>That voice…

=6==========

>I'm…

ch4pg42&43

>Asano…

>Ryotaro!

<To Make This World a Flower (1) / END

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 No.80428

File: d7fa083c69f72ea⋯.png (4.09 MB, 1800x1800, 1:1, tmtwafCh4pg41.png)

File: 703a16b4e0fdfe8⋯.png (8.13 MB, 3000x1800, 5:3, tmtwafCh4pg42&43.png)

Another chapter finished, and the end of the first volume. I'll turn to the next chapter of World of Moral reversal next, before coming back to this title in the future.

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 No.80430

>>80427

The things I only consider after uploading something in a rush

くそおおおおお while technically meaning SHIIIIIT might be better translated as "DAMN IT!", unless we're going for a more ethnic dialect.

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 No.80466

>>80427

>>80428

Looks good to me. Only issue is if you want to translate "Nekota-hanchou" or not, personally I'm cool with it as-is.

>>80430

Regarding curses, some people believe Japanese should never be translated with curses, others disagree. Generally I'm on the disagree side, contextually and personality-wise there are plenty of times a Japanese person is clearly "cursing" in the Western sense.

Specifically (as in, this instance) I'm okay with it since I don't think it goes against her character or the context: she has a very aggressive personality and she's losing in a fight for her life. Whatever you're comfortable with.

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 No.80468

File: 26e5631a5306566⋯.webm (2.91 MB, 1280x720, 16:9, HUGE OPPAI.webm)

>>80466

I usually prefer literal translations for curses too. It's just that pic related came to mind.

And hanchou has been bothering me too. I like translating honorifics because it gives a feel for the relationship between the characters better than "miss" and etc do.

But hanchou isn't really a honorific (unless maybe we were talking about high schoolers in a gang, but even then it could be replaced by boss without any loss). So I'll probably translate it in the final doc, for an eventual typesetting.

Thanks for helping too. I hope you'll stick around.

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 No.80469

File: 0799f874bc97bbc⋯.png (219.49 KB, 501x373, 501:373, ClipboardImage.png)

>>80468

>pic related

>posts wrong pic

SHEEEEEEIT

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 No.80479

>>80468

>>80469

Glad I can help. If I have to quit for whatever reason I'll mention it.

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 No.81122

File: a36bb45ee526b7c⋯.png (2.55 MB, 1200x900, 4:3, ClipboardImage.png)

Here's a document collecting all the translations done for the first volume

I've finally organized all the corrections, and put them all in a single file.

Note to self, for future documents: remember to zeropad the numbers for chapters and pages, makes ctr+f a lot easier.

https://files.catbox.moe/1icoxe.txt

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 No.94582

Reviving from page 15.

Don't wanna let it fall off.

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 No.97526

Bump.

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 No.102716

bump

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