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This story has something for nearly every type of diaper fetishist. It was buried in a story request thread. You all should read it.
https://abdlstoryforum.info/forum/stories/board-member-stories/118152-breaking-the-girl-a-novel
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▶ No.89602
I'm an editor. The prose are pretty good, but the author needs to kill their darlings. Most of these paragraphs are 50-75% too long (especially for fap fiction). They need to trust their readers
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