/abdl/ - Adult Baby - Diaper Lover★

Even when something's happening it remains boring as shit

She's neither wet nor shit herself. I'm not convinced she even lnows what a diaper is for. I'm guessing because there are three pages out now, we won't be seeing anything new for at least two months.

Who is the fucking guy in the last page though??

>>57063

Someone that paid EXTRA for their OC to have a small role in the comic? The entire thing has been pandering to the people willing to shell out their hard earned cash to Star so I wouldn't even be surprised with how special snowflakey he looks.

>>57065

just found out, he paid for a role in page *53*. and now, 163 pages later he comes back.

>>57063

It's Uncle Matt. He's a blue animal that is infinity age.

Keep up with the lore chump. 😃

>>57078

She doesn't want constructive criticism in the comments. Do people think that not seeing criticism makes it not exist?

>>57172

On the one hand I can appreciate that the hardest part of getting better at art is keeping your motivation to practice, and criticism (even constructive criticism) doesn't usually help with that.

On the other hand, there hasn't been any improvement in her art over the past 200 pages so maybe she needs the criticism more than she needs the motivation.

>>57173

Given that she's getting paid for this (despite her very lax schedule), she should feel lucky people aren't hammering on her door in Lutton or whatever Uk shithole she lives in and telling her to just have Star shit herself already.

>>57174

If someone is deranged enough to pay money for this, maybe they're also deranged enough to enjoy the faux-realistic furry equivalent of watching paint dry.

So what is the issue with spanking anyway? Thought most of the people that knew her knpws she likes spanking.

Though I guess that is a common thing I see. I'll never get why people who rp being little will get all pissed off when someone treats them little.

Nice. I was getting pissed off. How long can a lifer be a lifer without turning into a total bitchy stoner-girl or a faggot.

>>57564

What's the issue with the /abdl/ community? :^)

>>57564

Because manchildren can't distinguish between fetish play and "child" abuse?

>>57578

It's okay, Bryce, just imagine him in a diaper…

OH NO HE'S HOT

>>57578

"That's right, kitty, I'm living YOUR dream!"

>>57578

I hate that this is the best thing that's come out of this comic in over a year

>>57679

>13

>nothing happens, the book

It's been four months since the last page of cottontail nursery. Too bad because I want to see the cute otter bitch in a diaper, could do without the sissy cow faggot though

>>57724

Yeah that cow thing was unappealing as everything.

>>57172

To be fair, I think she just wants it in PMs instead of public comments, but I dunno

>>57564

Because it was on the thigh where important blood vessels and nerves are closer to the skin. Makes sense, but this is a fucking furry comic for christ's sakes and I'm sure Sammy's got enough thigh to take that anyways so it doesn't matter

>>57748

Nothing kills a boner quite like the idea of a fat sissy bull literally fucking a dildo'd rocking horse to bits

>>57724

>>57819

A big problem with side projects like Cottontail is that star's just gotta rush into the ABDL content instead of spending twenty years to get into it.

>>57866

A shame it'll take 20 years anyways because she's busy taking 20 years getting to the fun stuff in Shine instead

Anyone know how many pages per month we've had for the past 6/12 months?

Might be fun to chart Star's activity over time.

>>57884

Pages where anything's happened or pages in total?

>>57933

Arguably there have only been a handful of pages where anything's happened in the entire comic, so total pages I guess?

>>57933

Well, one of those would be a flat line at y=0.

Where did op get the pages? The new ones aren't on her furaffinity page.

>>58087

Are you logged in?

They are marked mature, and you need to be logged in, and with the mature filter off.

>>59069

It just doesn't seem like Star has undergone any artistic growth.

>>59069

>Those diapers aren't cheap

They are if you cheat your Government into buying them for you.

>>59117

>She hasn't. She backslid.

She realized the gullible furries would pay for low-effort art just the same as putting in all the effort.

>>59117

Wow I totally forgot how much better it used to look.

>>59117

Damn I forgot this looked so much different and better. That's changed a lot.

>>59117

Chucks, I really forgot Shine used to look way better.

>>59117

When I first found this comic, I was so excited to see such high quality comics being made for our fetish. It even had pretty erotic undertones in the earliest panels. The comic started out with the main character Star coming to grips with her fetish. She was slowly being opened up by a cute couple that were already very open with their desires. Star wanted to feel the same way and became very excited about the prospect. It was a story of self discovery and erotic fantasies finally being fulfilled. But as time went by, the comics became less sexual and more about being an AB and it's community. The art style went downhill and became extremely gratuitous seeking to please an tiny niche audience while forgetting the wider audience.

I would be donating to her patreon if she kept up with the original story. What's sad is that she'd be earning a more respectful living had she kept to it's original intentions and art style that actually required skill and time.

>>59161

What is she even drawing that's justifying these delays?

She's getting paid monthly…

>>59169

words words words words

there's no way that the blue generic wolf thing is going to be anything other than a caricature dickass villain. star doesn't have that kind of literary skill

>>59171

>star doesn't have that kind of literary skill

bad artists using way too many speech bubbles in a shelnut

>>59243

I feel like Star has so much potential, but deliberately and willfully chooses the opposite of what would make a good story.

>>59171

>there's no way that the blue generic wolf thing is going to be anything other than a caricature dickass villain

Nah, he's gonna be harmless. Star's gonna freak out about it for 20 pages until someone finally tells her that everyone's here to get their rocks off in diapers, him included, so why worry? He wouldn't be here if he wasn't.

Callin' it now, he's got that gay russian cat with him completely sissified

>>59278

In before he owns the house, rents it out to this event every (whenever), and he has recordings of her engaged in 'degeneracy' he can use to slander her now.

>>59298

No way, this story would never commit to something that eventful

There's higher odds that it was just someone who kinda looked like sarge and it was a coincidence

>>59301

Honestly, I can see her doing that but only because it would distract from the diaper stuff.

>>59304

This is actually kinda hot.

>>59321

I'll never expect any lewd or smut from this comic.

>>59983

What happens next? Place your bets now:

>a 20 page flashback into Star's traumatically boring past which somehow fails to flesh her character out in any way

>Star's fears are unjustified, and we get to enjoy a nice big wall of text about friendship and acceptance

>it was all a ruse. This guy doesn't know Star at all, and once again the plot goes nowhere

>>59986

Put me for friendship aka #2

>>59986

Put me in for Ruse aka #3, please.

>>59986

>we get to enjoy a nice big wall of text

boi that's going to happen in all of those scenarios and you know it.

>>59986

Wall of text and #2.

>>59986

I'm going for option 4 where he's just a bad copy paste of the villain from her other story.

>>60017

Was the villain the lumbering, hyper-masculine sissy bull? It certainly committed enough atrocities against good character design.

>>59986

Option 5: He makes fun of her ruthlessly but doesn't out her at the base, because he knows it'll lead back to him unless she's an absolute moron.

It triggers a lot of her kinks so even if she feels ashamed, she still orgasms.

Naturally, Star will draw this in a way that we can't enjoy it.

>>60029

No that other one with the uncle/dad/dream villain

>>60099

Love how it's implied it's kind of a Big Deal™

>>60099

Anyone know what really is going on?

>>60125

>>60106

>>60099

Theories (note I'm just going to call her Teca because I don't know much about them)

-Teca actually killed herself.

-Teca and Star had a fight

-Teca wanted a cut of Star's Patreon bucks because her character is her own intellectual property

-Teca was a sock puppet of Star all this time and Star is retiring her

-Teca found out about Star defrauding the NHS and wants nothing to do with her

-Teca killed Star and is sockpuppeting her

>>60099

I think i've said this a year or so ago, but this is why you don't base your characters on real life people.

>>60138

I'm actually willing to take Star at "her word".

Teca thought being in a fetish comic would be fun 4 years ago

And now Teca is in a purge cycle and probably self-loathing.

>>60153

>>60162

>>60138

>>60125

You'll all kind've right: Teca is obviously a mentally disturbed tranny. Probably doesn't bring in a ton of money/used to be super close to Star so what is a mongoloid to do? Probably ends up asking Lure/Manda for a place to stay, Star for money, etc. then boom, a fight breaks out and they split.

It's pretty obvious imo

>>60162

I dunno, I think it goes to a whole new level when you're basically 'outed forever'.

The binge/purge thing only works because of secrecy.

>>60099

Wow. I knew this comic was a clusterfuck of terrible decisions, but I never expected anything quite this ridiculous to happen.

This is one of the many reasons why fursonas and other similar avatars of real people are pure cancer. They just lead to shitty Mary-Sue writing and encourage a culture of egotism among artists and their cliques.

>>60138

>>60162

This. The simplest answer, assuming nothing in that "explanation" is an outright lie, is that Teca simply doesn't want her 'sona to be associated with a cringey fetish comic that Star's probably gonna lose a lot of money on from the book printing.

I think the moving away from the community is the most likely explanation - Teca has been pretty much completely inactive in all the usual places for the last few years. And possibly the Teca/Lure/Manda triangle has dissolved.

>>60099

i don't read shine comic but this image is so cutely drawn :3 especially that pink girl. she would be perfect print on a dipaer :P

>>60445

* or if the comic would be drawn like this i would be reading it. this style is so good and appeals also to non furry people :)

t. >>60445

>>60438

I was curious when the last time Star's obligations were mentioned, so I looked it up. Page 62. This is page 223. Somehow slow burn doesn't quite seem appropriate…

>>60438

Here's how this ends:

>wow, sorry for being so mean, I'm sorry Star I'll never bully you again

Or more realistically:

>Star, I was just teasing, I think it's kinda cute you're like this outside of work, don't take it so seriously! Oh, and don't worry, I won't use this against you at the base! Even though it makes for a fun dynamic between the boss and her underling, you'll end up romancing that white-haired OC we saw 200 pages ago that has ZERO personality :)

I feel bad for the autistmos that take this shit seriously.

>>60454

The only t hing that I take seriously about all this is that Star should have stuck to writing.

>>60454

In a real life situation, #2 would be more appropriate. If two people are both in a compromising position, at a fucking fetish orgy house no less, it would be suicidal for either of them to reveal that.

>>60459

What could possibly go wrong now

>>60456

Fucking this. It's the mutually assured destruction of blackmail.

>>60459

I've read every page of this comic and now I am no longer interested in reading the next one.

>>60459

this comic keeps finding new and innovative ways to be embarassing to look at it

Well this went from bland and boring to offputting and uncomfortable

>>60466

See, that would work but we're going to see one of 3 scenarios here:

Scenario 1:Star writes the boss as an evul Disney villian holding this shit against her at every turn.

Scenario 2: Star gets to make her boss feel sorry for her and gets to "defeat" the "bully"

Scenario 3: "Just a prank, bro", boss was just kidding and says "Hooray for Star, you're the best ever and now I can be your creepy uncle when not at work"

>>60459

Sir?

He's a Sergeant!

>>60466

While this edit makes him seem a bit creepy, it would work if that's what the author was aiming for, as it makes the situation more real. He has a lot more to lose being there than she does. He had to be vetted to get into that party, and caretakers I assume need to be vetted way harsher than babies, especially considering he's male and Star is female. But no let's watch her make a bad situation not only worse but completely out of the realm of reality.

>>60479

To be fair, if he's related to someone who runs the property, he's probably not vetted at all.

But I imagine that, as a Sergeant in the military, he's pretty stable.

If he wasn't, his weird fetish would be out already and he would have been quietly assigned to a shitty post until his EAS.

>>60480

I neglected to explain why his vetting matters. If he's vetted or is at least trusted enough, that means he's done this before. Multiple times most likely. He's in deeper shit than Star, who is lower ranked and could argue this is her first time.

>>60485

It doesn't matter how many times he's done it, though.

All he has to do is to produce evidence that she was engaging in behavior unbecoming of an NCO, and that'll basically fuck her good.

Especially in matters that don't rise to the point of a criminal trial, the military doesn't really have what we would call 'guilt beyond the shadow of a doubt'.

It's more like 'guilt if someone presents proof to a superior officer and he believes it'.

Mind you, it's not like Star would be drummed out of the military, she'd just be black balled.

>>60472

How about this?

Scenario 4: Star's friends come to her rescue and her boss and her trade places and pics are taken of him so if he rats Star out she can do the same.

>>60491

>All he has to do is to produce evidence

Way to completely miss the point.

"My subordinate is engaged in behavior unbecoming of her position!"

"How do you know that?"

"Because I was there, watching it."

"So, um, what were you doing there?"

"Me? Oh, yeah, I regularly go to these things. Anyway, she was wearing a poofy pink dress and a thick diaper and some other baby stuff, and I was hugging her. So, are you going to fire her or what?"

>>60498

He just needs a picture and an envelope that can be slid under a door.

>>60459

Jesus Christ how can you write something this awful

Star's mood swings make no goddamn sense, one page she's too embarrassed to say anything, the next she's fucking pissed off about a fart joke

How can anyone enjoy this, it's nothing more than second-hand cringe

>>60501

I think at this point I'm just here to shitpost with the lads every time she drops a new comic.

>>60500

You're still missing the point.

"Corporal, is this photo real or doctored?"

(outraged) "Oh it's real, all right, and I know who took it! It was my sergeant- he was right there with me!"

"Can you prove this?"

(with nothing left to lose) "Sure thing, which of the dozen eyewitnesses do you want to bring in first? I bet at least one of them took photos or video, too."

Never, ever, play chicken in a mutual blackmail situation.

>>60500

All the more reason for my Scenario 4 situation to happen.

Or just him not wanting to do it cause he is into it as well.

>>60503

No one at the party would cop to knowing anyone for fear of being outed.

>>60505

Not everyone cares about that, though. Sometimes, there's no one to out people *to*. Imagine trying to blackmail or out Chris-chan, for instance.

If you wanted a benefit of being a friendless, unemployable NEET, there it is.

>>60507

Yeah this. Imagine trying to blackmail someone who has less to lose than you doing the same thing. Here's a real life example: a senior in my high school found out another senior did gay porn. No one cared that person B did gay porn because the real question is how the fuck did person A find out the exact scene in an obscure as hell gay porno?

>>60488

Yeah, but because the author's a complete hack who doesn't have any comprehension of the real world, he's bringing real life into the fantasy and threatening to bring the fantasy into real life.

Everyone except the least competent participants- and they're quickly thrown out of such things- knows that you never do this, at least not in this way. It's fucking insane on several levels.

This was originally intended to be a "main character who lives in a world somewhat resembling reality goes through fetish experiences" comic and that is fucking gone now.

My prediction? He actually goes through with this - treating her like a baby at work - and everyone else just goes along with it, because the world was never realistic to begin with.

>>60512

I agree on this. It would make sense here to only amount to empty playful teasing. Maybe taking it too far because that's the character, but any further would be unrealistic.

>>60512

Realism went out the window the moment Manda agreed to take her to the fetish party before she could confirm Star didn't have severe psychological problems.

>>60518

What, like wanting to be treated like a baby or something?

>>60518

>implying they don't all have problems

>>60518

Except it's a little different when it's women. As was outlined before, males get way more vetting than females to join these types of events. This blue dog abomination had to be vetted hard in order to get a caretaker role if any real life conventions are taken to effect. But as >>60512 mentioned that went out the window.

>>60466

It's actually been so long since I last tuned out that I don't even know who this character is or why it's a big deal.

Can I get the CliffsNotes version?

>>60532

He's her boss from the army base, who she's supposed to be doing extra work for because she showed up late (and to make it worse, she didn't even have toast in her mouth either).

After some brief card game shenanigans, she wound up talking her sissy russian catboi friend into doing it for her.

>>60536

Holy crap, that shit happened three years ago. I went back into the archives to check. I remember now, but no wonder I forgot. Holy shit.

…Holy Shit. Have we really been living this same day for 3 goddamn years? No wonder I tuned out.

>>60452

Slow burn? For this to be a slow burn it'd have to be burning at all. This shit burns like a Home Depot bucket full of wet newspapers.

this is one of the only acts in town for an abdl comic of any kind that is still ongoing. I don't care how long it takes, I just hope it continues so I can read it all the way through at the end and have fun doing so.

I don't care about the art quality dropping or any of that shit. seen sketch-man's early works? they were terrible. he's improved, but good god he sure knows how to make something unsatisfying sometimes.

you think three years is bad to do out a single day's events? it took EGS to do a full week in 5 years and then the story magically went 6 months ahead. it's been months now and it's still finishing up the events from the current arc, all happening in one night.

tl;dr taking a long time to tell a story in comic form is normal. there is nothing wrong with it. the fact we even have such a comic, even one still continuing, is a gift from the gods themselves for some of us that enjoy this sort of thing, no matter how bad the art is.

>>60543

Not really

>>60537

Star's brilliant for switching to comics instead of just writing stories; she can drag this out forever.

When she wrote stories she actually had a fairly decent pace.

>>60543

>We should be grateful for substandard and poorly paced work

Nah man.

>>60543

The problem with this comic is that there's absolutely nothing good about it. The art isn't even that bad, but I find the story unappealing and dull in every respect.

I'm not reluctantly fapping to it while wishing it was better. I'm not curious to find out what happens next. I wouldn't be sad if Star stopped posting updates. I only click on these threads because the discussion and criticism is entertaining, and occasionally we get to see spectacular trainwrecks like >>60099 .

That said, I'm glad you're enjoying it. People are into this fetish for an incredibly wide variety of reasons, so it stands to reason that one man's unlikeable snoozefest is another man's top-grade fap fuel. For instance, I actually preferred a lot of Sketchman's early works despite the lower art quality.

>>60543

>Other people have made terrible decisions and low effort work with their comics, so that means it's ok for this one to be bad, too.

Okay man.

>>60459

holy shit this is real i kind of just read this and had to walk away from my pc like what is she trying to do this is a fetish party and you willingly said "yeah im going to act like a baby and let people treat me as such" so what

>>60593

I just find it amazing that the Sgt doesn't make her apologize.

She's the one who shows up late to work and has hair that is unprofessionally dyed. If she was a better employee, they wouldn't even have a beef in the first place.

Well I guess I was wrong with what I thought would happen. I'm quite cool with this though.

>>60585

Honestly I've only started to look at the comic now. I don't have any real issue with it.

Really what is the issue with the person who is making this anyway?

>>60598

Pretty cringey, abuses DMCA, defrauded the NHS, and used to actually be good when she wrote stories rather than trying to draw comics.

>>60592

>well he's here too

I'm pretty sure the author either got pimp slapped by someone with common sense or is reading this thread.

>>60459

>>60592

Are these two pages supposed to be consecutive? The tone shift from one to the next feels really weird. One second Star's about to murder him, the next she's letting him pat her head and bounce her on his knee.

>>60614

The pimp slap theory of >>60611 explains this tonal shift.

>>60615

Either that or the person who owns the Sergeant's character design whined.

>>60604

Endless online bullying for being cringey, I can fathom or condone, but c'mon, nobody gives a fuck about that NHS stuff

Let's stick with the entertainment mkay

>>60592

once again star is at a fetish event and making her own internal discomfort with her fetish everyone elses problem

“would anyone believe me?” believe you about what? that he’s treating you like a fucking baby? christ

>>60629

found toddlergirl

I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought there was a weird mood swing here. But I can't help but feel there's something wrong. Like this isn't how people act. Even if he's a hardass, this isn't the way to do it. In real life he'd probably take her to one of the break/ooc rooms and they'd talk it out. And as an anon said before, this wouldn't fly in a real situation. He even said he knew Manda for a while, so to behave this way would cause a massive drama issue.

>>60654

I think it's more a reference to the hair color.

>>60654

she's hideous.

>>60659

Yeah that

>>60698

She's not that ugly, she's just life-threateningly obese. There's a lot of fat fucks into diapers/little stuff. Die early of age-related diseases (diabetes, heart disease, cancer) while your fetish revolves around youth? Sucks to be you.

>>60598

Watch this and you'll know all you need to know:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VVIPfSgnetA

>>60707

>not that ugly

>life-threateningly obese

Pick one.

>>60707

Better to die young with this fetish than live to be old and wearing toddler styled clothing.

>>60716

When your income stream is patreon, it's actually better to live longer and get richer.

She's already revealed her real identity as it is, so…

>>60716

>getting old

>not using the first wave of rejuvenative biotechnologies to get rid of half of all age-related dysfunction

>not using the second wave to get rid of the other half

>not using the third wave to actually turn yourself into a kid again

>>60728

>stopping at being a kid

>>60707

this entire fucking board is dedicated to a fetish that revolves around diapers, a fucking thing for youth. fuck off.

>>60741

What I'm trying to tell you is that if you like being a young little kid, you shouldn't be killing yourself with old, you fat fuck

>>60716

>die young

except most people who die from obesity related complications live to at least 40-50 and experience years and years of slowly but steadily declining quality of life before then :) enjoy

>>60799

In all fairness life can fuck you over even if you are healthy. Personally I really don't want to live beyond my 60s myself. As far as I'm concerned I don't have reason to wanna stay around more than needed anyway.

>>60806

You will find a never-ending curiosity about the world as time moves you forward and eventually your statement won't reflect your feelings anymore. You will always want to see and do more.

If you can't do it now, set yourself up to do it later.

I think it's pretty obvious that this guy is going to get hurled out of the party and scolded as a lesson to the viewers that "ABDL parties do not tolerate creeps and you are protected and safe!"

Ignoring, of course, that preventing someone from showing up in the first is how that happens. But that doesn't have the emotional payoff of seeing a "creepy bully" get put in his place. They'll probably blackmail him into being easy on her at work too with some kind of pictures they've taken at previous meets.

>>61060

I wanna see her do some straight up military kung fu shit on that guys ass, all while dressed up in that outfit. Then she gets blamed for everything, causing that childhood flashback. Forcing her to completely seclude herself from everyone while becoming more work focused and ending the comic.

>>61067

I think Star's a Corporal. I remember seeing Corporal Bryce somewhere.

>>61068

>My prediction: Moar Talking

Man that's like predicting the sun is gonna come up.

>>61089

The sun will quit before this comic quits having words/words/words.

I think Star should have stuck to writing stories.

>>61100

Well now that we have some non-consensual knee-bounce action, it will be 500 pages of meditation on permission.

>>61664

So we finally get a wetting scene and its this.

It feels so weak.

>>61667

This comic is worthless as fap material anyhow.

>>61664

>every saturday

You don't actually believe that, do you?

>>61690

Pfft fuck no

>>61667

There's an almost empty feeling about this. Like we got what we were hoping but instead it's this

>>61667

Why are we still here? Just to suffer?

>>61664

The really unfortunate thing is that this scene would actually be hot to me were it not for the disturbing and boner killing undertone. I actually initially missed the page where she tells him to fuck himself with a chainsaw… wtf? We go from happy fluffy “realistic” abdl land to suddenly actual nonconsent shit. Is he supposed to be as sinister as Star is making him out to be? Are we supposed to focus on and buy into the implication that she really is a huge annoying brat and deserves whatever happens? Idk man

>>61766

I know how it's going to end up, but I'm almost willing to stop reading just so I get to 'keep' the image that the Sergeant being a decent guy who is only really pissed at Star because she doesn't do her fucking job at work.

>>61770

What do you think is going to happen? Star runs to Manda and offbrand Teca and tells them all about the evil man and they go “oh yes we totally believe you random stranger we met in a coffee shop that one time, let us ignore the fact that you have been disruptive and obnoxious the entire time you’ve been at this event with us and go trash our years long friendship and chase him out of the community because you are a Victim?” Bc I could definitely see that

>>61786

Of course that's what's going to happen.

But can't I pretend that it won't?

>>62081

This is heading into uncomfortable territory fast.

>>62081

Yep, Star's going for full Disney villain!

>>62106

Have we ever left the area, honestly?

>>62115

>and o yeah we will still be at this one fetish party.

Most predictable plot twist would be to find out they were all on the same bus that rolled down a cliff and they're all in purgatory.

>>62116

>Have we ever left the area, honestly?

Not sure. In a different comic this would be alright, but the mood swings from one page to the next leaves me thinking this guy is a creep. Plus bringing real life into it is even weirder. As I think I mentioned before, it should have been played straight: they know each other, they didn't expect either of them to be there, they meet up later on in an OOC room or something. Manda should have been there, Star could have been nervous about seeing someone she thought she knew, maybe they get introduced later as their ABDL selves. You know, like how it should probably happen in real life? The tension seems off putting in a way.

>>62118

Also to continue, it feels rushed. Star suddenly wetting herself like that? I'm all for actual diaper use finally, but not like this.

>>62118

More importantly, at this point either Star or Marellis should have just broken character.

They're both retards, and they both they deserve each other.

(And Star really should have just been doing her job better up until this point so Marellis wouldn't hate her).

>>61690

>You don't actually believe that, do you?

She already missed one Saturday!

What a pathetic waste of oxygen Star is.

>>62623

Ah, so the assassination of Marellis's character begins, when Bryce started it by being shit at her job.

>>62623

Matt's eyes are fucking bloodshot, and I have no idea if this is intentional or not.

The writer really has no clue as to what sorts of things people actually say and do at these conventions, not does she understand the sorts of things that daddies say to get into little girls' diapers.

This is what happens when you write to archetypes. You get really obviously designated villains with no coherent motive.

>>62623

What a surprise, dude is a cartoon villain. Very similar to Found. Someone tell Sammy her actual fetish is this victimization bullshit.

>>62634

Try reading her AB/DL story Promoted sometime. All her villains are cartoons and make no logical sense.

>>62662

Yeah but her written stories do something bizarre; they actually get to the good stuff sometime this life time.

>>62634

>The writer has no clue

It's funny because she claims to go to conventions almost every month

So she was late last week, she claimed she was gonna post the next page on friday to make up for it. Not only did she miss friday, she missed saturday as well.

Why even bother putting a date if you can't uphold it?

This entire scenario is so fucking uncomfortable in general and there is no logical progression that we can go from here without it going actually super dark at this point.

“YOU VIOLATED THE SAFE SPACE RULES SO YOURE BANNED FROM FUTURE GATHERINGS MR. SUPER GENERIC VILLAIN!”

Okay? This guy is clearly established as a sociopath at this point that seems willing to blackmail Star for his own personal gain. With this in mind we’re left three routes when we finally get off Namek.

1.) Generic villain apologizes for making her uncomfortable and swears he’d never mention it to anyone. Leading to a ridiculous 180 that ends in warm fuzzies that aren’t fitting of the tone anymore.

Or

2.) This character gets literally killed off somehow so the secret dies with him.

3.) The only other route that I REALLLLLLLY hope it doesn’t go because it makes no real-world sense even slightly is he tries blackmailing Star, she calls his bluff and accepts her fate, everyone accepts Star for who she is and they all ostracize Mr Villain for outing her in the first place eventually leading to him being fired so he’s metaphorically killed off but still technically wandering around out there with a vendetta against Star now that the readers are just expected to never think about.

As bad as it is to say, a literal killing him off leaves the least loose ends and that is just so off theme for a fetish comic that it won’t happen.

Knowing Star though, it’s most likely going to be option three assuming we ever make it out of this never ending arc. So glad we needed to throw a fucking villain and internal strife into a comic about being an ABDL. /s

>>62623

I like how that edgy teenager just spawned out of nowhere and somehow fully grasped the entire situation and Star's thoughts. Although, given the quality of the perspective, it is quite possible this room is several times wider than a regular room is, so he could have been creeping around for god knows how long.

Great thing about requiring several months to finish one single moment is that we don't lose track of anything, like how many years has this party been going on for already.

>>63214

Edgelord's been in the room the whole time, and given how much the thread keeps talking about how obviously creepy the blue guy is, is it really so much of a stretch for a moderately observant person to notice this dude might be making Star uncomfortable?

>>62623

This would be grounds for near immediate expulsion from the party for the blue furry thing.

>>63113

It's obvious she may not, because this is some weird as shit behavior.

>>63207

This exactly. If it were any other ABDL story with this type of thing I'd be all for it, but Star spent about 2 years making this universe all for the tone to completely swing so hard that no one finds this okay, even people who are ripping on Star for being a shit artist.

>>63236

It might be that Star herself is reading this thread or other comments about this and this is her eject button out of this badly executed subplot. It's not a bad thing to have the character come across someone they know irl. Hell it's something I myself prepare for when I go to meetups (though they are way more mundane). It's bad when neither character acts normally.

She wrote herself into a corner and has no idea wtf to do now.

I’m still mad at the potential for this scene compared to what we got. “I’m wetting my diaper in baby clothes on my boss’s lap” would be so hnnng without Sammy ruining it like this

>>63398

>>63412

I didn't even get the impression he was trying to blackmail her.

Hell, he doesn't have to.

You aren't allowed to 'trade work' in the military (practically speaking, you won't get in trouble if you don't get caught and the work gets done)

Star's up shit creek without a paddle because she didn't come to the base this weekend and Sergeant found out.

>>63440

>if you say anything about this to anyone, I'll-

Do absolutely nothing. Marellis has her and he doesn't even have to prove she was doing anything weird; she was told to show up on base on the weekend, and she ain't there.

>>63442

Somehow knowing that someone keeps up with this plot is more autistic than the newest page.

>>63440

>cue sixteen years of NHS nappies and interminable discussions of aftercare, consent, and propriety at fetish/age-play parties

>>63449

You'd figure that it would be going faster since Found concluded, but it has been slower than ever before.

>>63440

I like how she's completely ignored that she's 4 days late on posting this.

>>63440

Again, how the fuck is he going to tell people? He would be revealing himself as well.

The side character has pissed himself more than star has. All we get with star is buildup one panel of payoff if even that.

>>63440

If she's a smart story teller, which hasn't really panned out so far, she'll use this conflict for more subtle humiliation keeping star on edge. She'll hate him, but still feel turned on.

Small things like leaving a pacifier in her belongings and escalating things slowly. Not only allowing her to type long diatribes about her feelings, but will provide some sort of fetishy tension without having to be explicit.

But my prediction, because Star doesn't seem to plan the plot beyond a general idea and writes emotions seemingly how she feels that day, that Manda or uh… whoever the fuck replaced the bear that could have been written out already if this story had any sense of momentum, will just make a remark smirking about something they have on the boss and none of this will matter.

>>63440

what is marellis writing in that last panel?

>>63442

Except, in real life, he'd never even consider doing that at this point.

Not when she could flip her shit at any moment and start talking about the fetish party she was at and who she was with. It'd end her career for sure while ending his right along with it.

The author still does not get this.

>>63496

Cringey.

>>63496

I have now repeatedly failed to meet my own deadline. Instead of taking responsibility for my choices, I will now remove the deadline and blame my fans for it. It was wrong for them to expect things that I promised them.

Typical.

>>63496

Also I don’t buy that anyone actually threatened her. Feeling threatened by people holding her to her word fits with her victim world bpd crap though, makes sense

>>63490

The author also does not get that her strength isn't in a long running story.

She was good when she just wrote stories that were posted all at once.

>>63496

>make promise to fans

>fans hold you to your word

What a shocking development!

I think we can all agree the fans are in the wrong here.

>>63496

>my no alcohol/diet plan is an excuse to not meet my concerns

I'm glad I never fell for the patreon meme

>>63496

Yaaa…. I don't believe this for a second.

Also, that post invalidates the signature she puts at the bottom. If she isn't ready to put up with comments of the "slightly disappointed" nature of her fans on her missing the deadline, and we get "It just ended up making me feel ill" it just implicating herself as weak.

Can't put up with disappointed fans? Then either don't make them disappointed or don't put yourself in a position to have fans.

>>63518

>can't put up with disappointed fans? Then-

Exactly.

Being accountable to the public (even a small subset of it) is a miserable job for people prone to anxiety, especially when you don't keep your word.

>>63490

This. In real life even if you met someone you didn't particularly like in a compromising situation, you'd both probably just agree to not talk about it. It's like pulling a grenade pin in a car you're both riding in.

>>63530

Especially in the military.

Nevermind that Bryce has basically proven that she can't handle military life. Leveling accusations like this against Marellis could backfire so heavily.

>>63496

LMFAO, SHE'S the victim here who can't keep to the schedule SHE set, TWO WEEKS IN. God damn, no wonder this cunt was dumb enough to admit to defrauding the NHS!

>2018

>main character still hasn't pooped her diaper

WHATS THE FUCKING POINT

>>63496

>set a deadline of your own choosing

>fail to meet it

>call everyone else entitled

jesus fuck

>>64199

EVERY character's only motivation is related to this asshole. This really is the manifesto of a sociopath.

>>64199

Fuck sake I just want to see some furry dick

>>64199

jesus fuck she's acting like she was raped. no star, you wet your diaper at a diaper fetish party. this guy you just met is at the party because of kink, not because you're an sjw snowflake who never jacks off or any shit like that. Fuck off with this.

>>64199

The comments on FA are so horrible. Everyone's eating this shit up, they love it.

>>64227

Of course they are, she's a verified girl that is a diaperfur. She's basically a deity to those cretins.

>>64297

Isn't she married, though?

She's worse than a man, if so.

>>64308

She is married, yes. And she also makes shitty music.

>>64340

>he doesn't make preschool-teir music about needing to piss.

Some diaperfag you turned out to be.

>>64403

I totally do, but it's not that dumb folk shit. I compose prog-rock concept albums about needing to piss… Ugh, why do I love being called a diaperfag?

>>64532

good minecraft setting, kinda ruined by the slightly shitty exposition

>>64532

>dressed like this in a soggy diaper

>it's a little much to take in

THAT ISN'T THE PROBLEM YOU SILLY BITCH!!

>super glistening eyes

Oh for fuck's sake.

Is there a special level of hell for shitty writers?

>>64539

Ironically, Star's old stories were good.

But I don't think she has any business comic writing.

"That was my boss, he was being abusive. " There, problem solved, now do something interesting. The protagonist is such a piece of shit you can see literal devil horns coming out of the antagonist.

>>64542

>Ironically, Star's old stories were good.

Really? I can't imagine any half-competent writer coming up with characters this one-dimensional and stupid.

Maybe the pacing and emotional consistency was better, but I don't believe Star was ever any better than a mediocre fapfiction writer.

>>64561

I mean at this point the working theory is that Star is more interested in milking the audience than producing something that could be misconceived as "art" by accident. It's pretty easy to vomit walls of text and panels for a webcomic if you don't care at all about any standard of quality.

I don't know whatever it was Star was doing before this, but I find it hard to believe the complete lack of anything worthwhile in this comic truly eludes the author. Not that it would sugget that she could do something noticably better; only that she's not that invested.

>>64559

“abusive”

Anyway don’t know what to say about this. At this point it appears the entire party and all the fetish elements were actually just a set up for Star to be “victimized” - not allowed to talk, can’t walk in her outfit, even the diuretic bottle. Kind of disgusting honestly.

>>64532

"My boss had me on bouncing on his knee, wetting myself, and then threatened to out me."

Is it that hard to sum this shit up? Now it's going to be ten pages of hemming and hawing before Star flips out and everyone has a ten-page report on consent to read.

>>64561

Back then, Star wasn't working on a 'patreon' schedule.

Therefore, she just focused on making the story good.

Her posting rate was not incredible, but she did post.

I wouldn't say she was an incredible writer, but she was good in an environment where a lot of people can't even use spell check.

>>64563

Yeah, uh, the party failed on so many fronts to actually be safe for guests. Laxatives and diuretics can interact badly with other medications, and the former can actually cause severe dehydration.

>>64563

>At this point it appears the entire party and all the fetish elements were actually just a set up for Star to be “victimized”

Well obviously. But it would be too simple for this to be the fetish fantasy that it is, instead the artist needs to shoehorn in as much social commentary as possible because furries are retarded

what is this comic? where can I see the full thing up to date?

>>64596

>full thing

yeah wait like fuckin 10 years and maybe star will have used her diaper another time or two

>>64596

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/13064945

Go to the first few pages and the most recent ones, the art style /quality/ has gone downhill.

also:

Bottom of page 9

"So those two were like me after all"

No. You are a professional victim. They just wanna live their life, and i guess help out people with similar interests.

How long until Manda wants out of the comic and has to be replaced with Milly?

>>64600

ah shit yeah, I had this confused with a different gay furry diaper comic. stuff actually happened in the one I saw

does babystar get fucked at any point?

>>64631

I'm keeping reading and holy shit it really just is repressed mommy issues the comic

the most risque thing I've seen so far is babystar touched her diaper. oh man

I'm so not surprised something this bad exists though, fucking furries. it even uses the Hobo STD font.

>>64633

Yeah the comic has been going on for four years and she just wet her diaper a few months ago.

>>64634

classic "I've spent all my time as an artist on the internet in one place where people will feed me praise" syndrome. hard for people to get in the mentality to improve when they already think they're the shit

>>64532

FUCK YOU STAR

>>64637

It's pitiable.

The worst thing that can happen to a person is stagnation. The only difference between that and being in the grave is that you haven't died yet.

>>64811

He's actually right, and it refers to sexual/intimate situations of any kind, not specifically diaper fetishism.

But we've already pointed out how unrealistic this is, over and over again.

>>64813

>>64811

>mentions how the military has rules about no fraternization

>fails to mention that if you disobey an order from a superior (up to and including having someone else do the job for you) that you can get in trouble

>now at a point where we're discussing military fraternization code

wow what a fun comic

>>64823

This is one of the downsides to the patreon model; it encourages 'web comic syndrome'.

>>64823

In my opinion, Web comic syndrome is essentially violating a very key storytelling and writing principle:

Say not what you can in ten words what you can in three.

The reason why this idea is violated in web comics is because update schedules can be very, very hard to keep (either by attitude, failure of planning, or bad luck), even if they're relatively reasonable at the time you make them.

While Star doesn't really post often enough for this to be an issue (a weekly update schedule is not exactly stringent in the slightest, especially when you don't do anything else), she loves to pad things out.

I've never heard of the artist you're posting an image of, but you sound disgusted with them.

Why?

>>64811

I feel like Shine is going to be an X to the Z Xzibit in a court case against Star at some point. More than likely when her husband gets sick of her shit and has her commuted to a mental institution.

>>64920

I was talking about Shine, my bad.

I agree with you entirely this comic is too wordy not enough visual

>>64924

What does her husband even get out of her?

She's very sensitive, so I imagine if he says anything she doesn't like, he doesn't get laid for a week.

>>65199

Just have the stupid girl shit herself already so I can say I was there, jerk off and then and ditch this fucking comic.

>>65199

At this point she’s never going to make a good enough comic to redeem herself with.

>>65199

Wow, it really feels like this is Toddlergirl's idea of a perfect world were, the only consequences she has to face for her actions are ones that she wants, and everyone caters to whatever need she has for that fleeting moment.

>>65199

you know it's art because it shows a shot of fish in an arteficial pool at the end

Look at the second panel. I think shes trying to make her artwork as unappealing as possible.

Holy fuck. This shit is still going? This comic has gone from mildly arousing to inverse boner inducing. Holy fuck. My only hope now is that in a few years there will be enough good shit mixed in there to boil down a decent 10 page supercut.

>>65256

She jumped the shark a long time ago. Just write your own fanfiction of it, even if you're unable to pass English 101 in college, you can write better than Star is writing right now.

Which is sad, because her old fics were good enough to wank to.

im trying to understand why its annoying sure… its slow and sometimes melodramatic and dumb…. but i think its not bad of a comic…. im guessing most of you fags just want to use it as wank material

>>65266

The thing that annoys me the most is the lack of consistency between pages. It seems like she writes dialog based on how she's feeling at the time rather than how the characters are meant to be feeling. That's what takes it from boring and unrealistic to actually bad.

If she wants to write a realistic comic about someone's first steps in the fetish scene, well-written characters are essential. Instead we get comic book villains and a protagonist suffering from second-by-second mood swings.

I'm not just looking for fap material either. Well written characters are far more interesting than yet another heap of furry porn. Unfortunately this is neither.

>>65267

ahhhh i see now… for some reason i didnt see it that way…. i guess im retarded and cant read between the lines or something

>>65267

>I'm not just looking for fap material either. Well written characters are far more interesting than yet another heap of furry porn

See: Mister D's comic. He took absolute trash cartoon characters and rewrote them so well that I don't even give a shit about the porn.

>>65266

It's pretty bad of a comic from a porn perspective and a general perspective. The addition of "porn" doesn't make the comic appealing or wank material, nor does it save the comic itself. For instance, Oglaf is often sexual, but I wouldn't fap to it, and I still read the pages that aren't sexual at all. Because it's a good comic.

>>65266

The main character is unsympathetic and unlikeable. The comic cant seem to decide what it wants to be, a “realistic” fetish comic or a furbaby melodrama. The art is mediocre, which you might not care about, but the wonky faces often even farther take away from any emotional impact the story might have.

It’s shit no one should pay for especially given the artists attitude toward her fans

>>65305

>The main character is unsympathetic and unlikeable.

This is also a huge problem.

Good protagonists struggle against adversity and demonstrate courage and determination in pursuit of worthy goals.

Star gets everything handed to her on a plate, fails to make good use of it, and spends her time in whiny internal (and sometimes external) monologues.

>>65199

FIN

Bump

trashbag posted an art the other day with comments auto-closed by the looks of it, was there a shitstorm then they were closed, or what?

Anyone know?

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28778544/

>>65305

"unsympathetic and unlikeable"

…so you're complaining that the comic is basically a reflection of… well… you.

>>66120

Well they say a work is reflective of its author Sammy. But I didn’t write it. Hmm

>>66150

Actually what they say is that the criticism you apply to others is most often more easily applied to yourself. You tend to attack others with projected aspects of yourself that you hate or don't want to acknowledge. This one is probably my favorite…

>>65223

"idea of a perfect world were, the only consequences she has to face for her actions are ones that she wants, and everyone caters to whatever need she has for that fleeting moment"

…this from someone posting anonymously so they can say whatever they want without consequence and when everyone (Star) isn't catering to whatever YOU demand… you all throw a screaming, unending tantrum over it.

I mean, there's a lot of shit in this world I don't care for, from TV shows to movies to anime to books to you name it… but if I spent even HALF as much time as you pathetic losers do bitching and moaning about some random, off the fuckin wall DIAPER WEB COMIC… fuck me, I'd probably have to take up living in my parents basement and being a smarmy, indignant, vile little complainer would become a proverbial full time job!

I think about half you speds either have a serious manbaby crush on Star, desperately hoping that if you tug on her virtual pigtails hard enough she'll pay attention to you and the other half of you whiny speds have some kind of deranged homoerotic fixation on Jim.

It's like you're in love with Jim, but you can't accept the fact that he thinks you're all a bunch of fuckin degenerate LOSERS so you desperately try and emulate and attack shit that he's attacked, under the delusion that it somehow exonerates or excuses your own batshit insanity. If Jim were here right now though, you know what he'd tell you spergs? Get fucked!

>>66157

Who the fuck is Jim?

Also I don’t know if you realize this but I (and anyone else reading this) can tell you’re the same person. Check the ID.

The best part is that you spent way more time, effort and emotion trying to criticize me than I have spent criticizing your shitty webcomic. And if you’re serious about making the argument that criticizing someone or something just means you feel that way about yourself… what does that say about your unhinged rant?

>>66192

Cry more, loser.

>>66193

Bye Sammy

>>66408

>Pedofurs complain about comic.

>Pedofurs complain that there's no new comic to complain about.

…you freaks really are eating your own shit filled Pampers.

Want to guess who's a guest of honor at confuzzled (main UK furry convention)?

https://2019.confuzzled.org.uk/guests-of-honour/

>>67578

Guess what Sammy? No one cares.

So, did she died?

>>69210

nope she is still posting stupid ass commissions on fur affinity