/htg/ - Harlot Trainer General

A pretty rough start. I like the basic idea of TARDIS-themed stuff. The ability to go anywhere and anywhen in time gives you a lot of creative freedom.

Focusing on one girl- with a lot of customisation- is a smart move. However, don't blueball with 1st/2nd base forever. Rather, have many different actual sexual experiences, not just teasing. The time/space aspect gives you limitless possibilities- alien tentacle rape, ancient roman orgies, robots, to name but a few.

Based on whats in the demo though, I'm not sure about the direction your heading. The appearance of the alien crime lord- even if meant to be silly- is a little too silly. The idea that you're going to recruit workers to build up a base on a shitplanet could work, but I can see feature creep becoming a problem.

I would suggest that you focus instead on providing different contexts to explore/deepen lewd connections with the main girl. Take her to places and times where she can get into peril, or you get into peril and she saves your bacon.

Make full use of the TARDIS and the girl. Don't get bogged down with some Orange Trainer-style resource management game.

>>38702

>ywn have a meme tabletop game

dammit anon, i came here to fap not feel.

>>38702

> If the girl puts her hand at that angle, her wrist should be broken.

ahhh, what?

why dont you try it irl to see what an idiot you are.

>>38699

played through it and the only complaints i have so far is that the take off system should be all in one go like pick the place it should instantly put you in the controls then you do the combination then land without having to go through all the menus also add lewd soon

>>38699

Solid stuff. Waiting for more content.

Agree that the tardis operation should be simpler, more reliable, and ideally visual rather than a menu.

>>38868

he may be wrong about the broken bones but that is an incredibly uncomfortable position to have your arm in

I'd also reccomend having some reward tiers on your patreon. Its encouraging and attracts investment if there's clear achievable rewards. e.g, at $500/a month votes can be taken on what content/scenes are implemented first etc.

>>38707

Wow, that's certainly a good perspective.

I'll get right on it thanks!

>>38737

Hmm I see what you're saying. I'll see what other edits I can make

>>38874

>>38915

Cheers lads, I'll work on something to make it simpler in the next release!

>>39019

Hmm fair enough, that's what I'll do right now!

Cheers for all the advice lads!

Actually the only ren'py game where the story interested me. Having both the power fantasy of having a tardis (and I assume being a timelord considering the A.I said the MC regenerated) and it being a porn game is a great combination.

Legitimately the only gripe I have is the same as everyone else, the many menus for TARDIS travel. Other than that I enjoyed it alot for what little there is so far.

Nice work OP!

>>39138

It is not invalid and not unwarranted if he's an artist that actually understands how the body is supposed to work.

The one thing that worries me about this game is the lack of a clear timeline of what's going into it and what's being done.

>>38707

I honestly liked the ayy pimplord though.