/htg/ - Harlot Trainer General

The edges of the textbox are too sharp, round them. Its background is gay as fuck, but most importantly the color is too bright, it's literally the first thing that catches my eye. As suggested elsewhere, add also a bit of transparency.

Vitiligo is OK, Joker's smile is not.

I don't know shit about 3D, but sometimes it looks like characters and backgrounds have been rendered separately: lights and shadows are weird.

>Group Sex (FFM and MMF)

I smell cuckshit.

>>46985

>start game

>this scene

Stopped playing right there.

You need to go back to cuckzone you piece of trash.

>>47029

Fuck off you retard. No one wants to talk about your cuck fetish.

>>47031

Now I want to play this game.

>>47031

It's a reference from the Office. If you're offended that quickly, and the fact that the main character might get cucked (he won't) then just don't play.

This game WILL definitely have a cuckquean in it though.

>>46985

- Releasing a tech demo that isn't complete as "1.0" comes across as cheap, and fucks up the versioning. I'd either go with 0.1.0 or do the whole "release 1, release 2, release 17" thing from now on.

- Get rid of the default main menu GUI as soon as possible (by embedding the options into the strip on the right with a custom font, for instance), and at least make the quirky windows 95 cursor optional

- I'd use a popup dialog for naming the main character with "Miles" already filled in, and since you already limit the entry to 10 characters, telling the player that is kinda redundant (my mind immediately went to "will the game crash if I don't do that", but maybe that's just me)

- Using real Android design elements for making a phone UI that look like it was made in PowerPoint triggers my autism fucking hardcore, the whole thing is a PNG so you have no excuse. Add a clock, change the size of the battery indicator, fix the size and spacing of the navigation buttons, literally just take a screenshot in a 4.x Android emulator and scribble over that.

- I admit I don't know shit about how Ren'Py screens work, but using NVL mode to create an automatically scrolling box with the previously displayed phone messages still in it should definitely be possible, and would be a huge plus for both immersion and usability

- Pic related, what the fuck is this and how did it happen. Proofread your game fam.

- The "move your mouse to zoom in on the image" idea is nice, but use it sparingly and let people actually zoom in or something. Maybe change it so you move the image around by clicking and dragging, because it feels weird as fuck right now. It's also enabled for a lot of images that don't need it, causing you to scroll them off the screen (which is especially jarring when the image itself is cut off halfway, so you end up with a torso that's been cut in half moving across the screen)

- Using transparent sex scenes with just your characters floating in the middle of the room is weird as shit. You're using 3D, so at least render them with the bed visible

- Fix your timings, "do that thing with your finger" doesn't work when the character has been doing that thing with her finger since 7 lines of dialogue (it's 3D, so creating a new sprite where she doesn't do that takes thirty seconds)

- Shrink down the images you get sent on your phone, and let people get a popup by clicking on it (or just show and hide a fullscreen version after that line)

- The game doesn't have lolis, /ss/, bestiality, existing characters, furries, superpowers or an interesting setting so I don't give a shit. totally-not-cuck-because-it's-girls content would be a start though.

>>47045

Oh yeah, make the text white or some other color. Black-on-neon rarely works well. You could also use an .rpa with only the compiled scripts in it so the game looks more professional.

Basically what >>47044 said. Plus: disable choices leading nowhere, such as "Genuflect". Oh, and, in that scene, it looks like the sentences are centered but the boxes are not (I suppose it depends on the window resolution).