/htg/ - Harlot Trainer General

>>37087

Pretty solid groundwork I have to admit. Like the Teen Titans. The animation is ok as are the drawings, but it seriously needs more than that to even be considered a game.

The fighting part is meh.

>>37087

>Another attempt at Teen Titans game

I'm ready for it to be abandoned.

why does Starfire look like she has down syndrome?

>>37127

It matches her voice and mannerisms.

Pretty bare bones, but if you keep at it, we might just have something worth supporting.

Get a decent artist to improve the art, and put effort into the dialogue and such. Starfire didn't always talk like a retard in the show.

Looking forward to the next update.

>>37087

the eyes and overall limbs are like 1% out of place and its really freaking offputting

tits are weirdly too round, and raven has like a tumor coming out of her vagina

>>37095

Yeah I've been working on the groundwork as you say to be better lately.

>>37119

Haha I hope not.

>>37149

It's hard to find a talented/dedicated artist. I would prefer to keep the art style the same but I doubt I'll replace a lot of the portrait art as of now. In terms of the dialogue for Star I referenced the show/comics and at the time I did the writing to make sure it was faithful while consistent with her though maybe I will go back and make some minor changes(or extended etc).

>>37150

I've spent long periods drawing the characters so some of the errors/mistakes I have made I notice less. Something for me to keep in mind. The "tumor" is due to the way I did her vagina which looks like I made it too pronounced looking at it.

>>37170

>but I doubt I'll replace a lot of the portrait art as of now

I don't have a lot of criticism right now except that one. At least fix Starfire's eyes and breasts and maybe everything else the other anon mentioned. I can tell there was more effort into Raven than Starfire. If you're not an artist, it's a decent work. You can only improve from here.

Any list of things you think about adding? Better to have a solid vision than to add things up as you go on.

>>37170

>It's hard to find a talented/dedicated artist. I would prefer to keep the art style the same but I doubt I'll replace a lot of the portrait art as of now.

I understand that, but you should keep in mind that sex and titties are pretty much the focal point of porn games. Find a decent artists, stay determined, and frequently update. You'll have people lining up for you smutty game in no time.

Also a comprehensive story.

New version when?

>>51613

Fucking Res-fag

Awful "art"