/htg/ - Harlot Trainer General

this game probably sucks.

but this is exactly my kind of fetish, so thanks for posting it i guess. gonna try it out later

If the game sucks, would you be kind enough to explain me everything you dislike? Yeah, it might be a hassle but who knows? It might become something enjoyable with feedback : )

>>15023

I like this a lot. My favourite parts are the "BENIS IN BAGINA :DDD" tier writing and what looks to be stolen anime art. I could tell right away that this is a product of the highest quality.

Concept is good.

Execution is decent.

>>15064

Is the author finnish or something?

>>15079

Nope, French. Why Finnish? I tried to find a good stereotype in Urban Dictionary but did not find any.

>>15064

Half of mind is trying to see this as a compliment, the other one as a…sarcastic remark? ^^ Anyway, I know my English sucks and the art are not mine, but let us see them as momentary placeholders before something nice & sweet : D

>>15090

15064 was a reference to Spurdo, which is a Finnish meme.

>>15097

Oh ! I am all the wiser for that !

I just discovered the filiation of Spurdo with the Pedobear. Memes are incredible : O

Release of the day can be found https://www.patreon.com/posts/stretching-your-11190554 and https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/05/14/stretch-your-skill/

>>15064

>>15091

What he's saying is that we here at /htg/ want quality writing, story, and art; not generic repeatable text-game-level writing with a stolen generic anime porn picture.

I (personally and I don't think I'm the only one) want good story, unique characters and character development.

>>15540

I knew it. Sarcastic.

I understand what you are saying. I had to start somewhere though.

I am coming from the programming universe and I know no one becomes a good story teller in one day. I'd like to give it a try and your remarks are here to remind me what my ultimate goal is. Thanks : )

>>15539

DEPLOY THE NUDES!

>>15531

e-mail? That's a funny way of saying viagra ads.

>>14944

This releases is focused on new features. Money boosts are correctly applied, that is to say, your money boost will increase what you win and decrease what you lose. If you find anything suspicious, feel free to pm me!

I have finished the first room extension I wanted to do. Now you have several categories (inside, outside, basement room) and blueprints you can choose are restricted to specific categories. It will introduce garden area which will let you do fun things with humanoids in an upcoming release.

Following the new room mechanism, I added new blueprints, tools and gloves. That's not much but those tools will let you improve, from home your strength and stamina.

On the event side, I started reworking the existing events, for now I only fixed big inconsistencies and add time variants when you meet Cathy. Others will follow.

By the way, people directly made suggestion from within the game thanks to the community button (you know, the feather available each time a text is displayed). To you, Thank you so much. I fixed typos and wrong skill boost you picked up!

Finally, I added the hetero content disable button. It should work fine BUT there is not any canonical path at the moment so you won't be able to reach lv100 with lesbian or gay-only content.

New release :

https://www.patreon.com/posts/home-sweet-home-11294219 and

https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/05/21/home-sweet-home/

New version 0.3.10 available for all :

https://www.patreon.com/posts/11801366

and https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/06/18/symposium-prestor-is-giving-a-hand/

>>18223

>Java is cancer, but I guess for starters it's okay

A cancer… That's only a tool among others which was not intended for video games. I can hear that.

There is a small Q&A but I guess I could improve the *nix section.

>>18223

>damn, son.

Changelog. Might have forgotten it this time.

>>18223

>Going to draw on your own or do you plan paying for oc to later replace 'borrowed'?

I started commissioning a freelance for the different places around the town. Slowly but steady.

>>18223

>no furry'n'futa shit

I do not have an opinion on that, not my kink but if others enjoy, that's good for them. What troubles you with that? Chick with dick and humanized animals not feeling natural?

Thanks to the content mechanism, you will be able to disable it though. I do not intend to force anyone to see anything they do not enjoy. Some gays/lesbians were frustrated seing hetero stuff. I guess everyone is repulsed by something.

>>18223

> At least 'slave training' should be a thing, bc /htg/, you know?

Well, since the harlot is basically the player, I thought it was the right spot for the game. I guess hgg would have been a better fit ?

>>18223

So you rather see a guy with a dick , guess you're a closeted virgin faggot

New release is available https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/06/25/sybille-the-exhibitionist/ and https://www.patreon.com/posts/12078477 with direct download link.

Changelog :

New content for Sybille, preparing her for the Symposium.

Text styling and minor fixes.

>>18259

>If you maybe comission a 2nd artist for chars make sure it fits art style. Sometimes you find different styles for bgs and sprites, looks meh tbh.

As soon as I can do it, I will : )

>>18259

>Wishing you luck, dev.

I will try my best !

Could I add a suggestion or two about your writing? (It's gonna be long)

firstly, you should make multiple narrations to go with the sexual acts:

for example, for the same act like a blowjob to a male customer at the brothel, you could have multiple narrations that get cycled thru randomly

a.) (dominated by client)

>the client grabs the back of your head and holds it firm as he pounds the back of your throat, not caring about your pleading gags. he plunges deep and his cock spasms as he shoots hot ropes of semen directly into your stomach.

b.) (submissive client/ cock-worship)

>hands behind your back, you kiss the client's tip before looking him in the eye and plunging your mouth deep onto his shaft until your nose is pressed against his pubic bone. you pull yourself off his glistening cock and lick it from base to tip, pushing him over the edge as he cums in your [hair size and color] hair.

etc.

my second piece of advice

Please note I'm not qualified with an English degree or anything but I want to help you write better erotica using the rules and tricks I learned in English classes as a native speaker.

Here's your writing:

>You notice your client gazing at your mouth and decide to take advantage of it.

>You tell him you want to see his cock to see what you can do about it.

>The client happily complies and pulls out his foot-long cock.

>Well. That's something you didn't quite expect. At least it is already hard, good for you.

>Using your tongue, you start by playing with the head of his cock, alternating between licking and sucking. You quickly feel his body start to relax.

>But this is only the beginning…

>You open up your mouth and start taking more of his cock in, slowly swallowing more and more of his hard piece of meat.

>You start sucking his cock with everything you have, producing disturbing noises every time his dick leaves your wet hole.

>Neither of you really care about that. You're both consumed by lust.

>At some point he puts his hands on the back of your head, forcing the pace to become harder and faster.

>Your client uses your mouth as a fuckhole, violating your mouth and your throat.

>Finally, he comes in four long spurts that you hasten to spit out.

>He thanks you and exits the room, leaving you alone and with a sore throat.

>You will remember him and his giant cock for a long, long time.

Okay, so in English classes in school they often told us to "show not tell" in writing descriptive sentences. This line for example,

>Using your tongue, you start by playing with the head of his cock, alternating between licking and sucking. You quickly feel his body start to relax.

…has little erotic appeal, regardless of the scene described. think about how the action is being done. Here's a quick (and amateur) rewrite of the sentence:

>Using your tongue, you start playing with the head of his cock, licking it sensually before wrapping your soft lips around it and sucking. You quickly feel his body start to relax.

…see how you can really describe how the character is toying with the penis? it really adds to the value of the scene. (Also I'd tense up if I were in that situation, not relax lol)

>>18828

I think you're also having a problem with maintaining a consistent English tense. I'd recommend that you use the present continuous tense instead of the simple present tense that you're using currently. This really does matter in my opinion. The change goes like this:

>Your client uses your mouth as a fuckhole, violating your mouth and your throat.

Change "uses" to "is using" and keep "your client" as a pronoun.

>He is using your mouth as a fuckhole, violating your mouth and your throat.

Change the present continuous "he is" to "he's" for fluidity of speech. Remove the second "your" as in "your throat" as it is redundant, leaving us with the final

>He's using your mouth as a fuckhole, violating your mouth and throat.

Some lines are a bit clunky and unnecessary,

>Neither of you really care about that. You're both consumed by lust.

I'd smash these two sentences together and change it a little, make it more poetic:

>You're both too drunk with lust to care

Lastly, I think that some parts of the scene ought to be emphasised more than others. I think it's obvious to say that the climax is the most important part of a sexual experience, so it should be given special treatment. I don't think you gave it the special treatment it deserves:

>Finally, he comes in four long spurts that you hasten to spit out.

Personally, I would add some crescendo before the climax as well as keeping on the ejaculation itself for a bit. If it is four long spurts, why does the action hardly take up a sentence? My take on it:

>He's using your mouth as a fuckhole, violating your mouth and throat.

>He accelerates again, leaving you little room to breathe as his cock slams against your trachea

>He pulls your head tight against his crotch as he spurts four long ropes of hot cum into your mouth and onto your tongue

>Finally, he pulls his dick out of your mouth with a pop and you hasten to spit his foul tasting semen onto the ground

(I don't know about you, but I get off more on the cumshot than the scene itself, so I personally think the focus should be half and half.)

Altogether, I would have written the scene like this. I'll leave notes where I changed them and why.

>You notice your client gazing at your soft plump lips* and decide to take the initiative**.

>You ask to see his dick as you lick your lips in anticipation***

>The client happily agrees*** and pulls out his foot-long cock.

>Damn. It's huge! And it's already hard… You drool just looking at it.*

>Using your tongue, you start by playing with the head of his cock, alternating between licking and sucking. You quickly feel his body start to relax.

>But this is only the beginning…

>You open your mouth and start taking more of his cock in, slowly swallowing every inch of his hard piece of meat. **

>You start sucking his cock vigorously, producing lewd noises every time his dick leaves your wet hole. ***

>You're both too drunk with lust to care.

>At some point he puts his hands on the back of your head, forcing the pace to become harder and faster.

>He's using your mouth as a fuckhole, violating your mouth and throat.

>He accelerates again, leaving you little room to breathe as his cock slams against your trachea

>He pulls your head tight against his crotch as he spurts four long ropes of hot cum into your mouth and onto your tongue

>Finally, he pulls his dick out of your mouth with a pop and you hasten to spit the foul tasting semen onto the ground

>He thanks you and exits the room, leaving you alone with a sore throat and a bitter taste in your mouth. ****

>You will remember him and his giant cock for a long, long time.

* I think that lips, especially those with the aforementioned qualities, would be admired if one wanted a blowjob, not the mouth in general

** The character is taking initiative by deciding to initiate fellatio before the client does

*** This line has to relate to cocksucking because the character said they'd take advantage of the situation

**** "complies" to "agrees", complying has a connotation of obeying a command, so it doesn't fit the scene.

* having this line be snarky breaks the erotic mood IMO

** removed "up" in "open up" because it's redundant. "every inch" is more descriptive (& more erotic IMO) than "more and more".

*** replaced "with everything you have" with the adverb "vigorously". replaced "disturbing" with "lewd" for erotic value

**** grammar and adding the bitter taste from the client ejaculating in the character's mouth

Really hope this helps, good luck dev!

>>18829

Many thanks for your advice! I really appreciate your feedback as I am a complete beginner trying to tell stories in a foreign language!

I will try my best and follow your advice, thanks : )

>>18854

Once found the dog rumor location with the guy taking it in the ass, the button remain but it does nothing, bug?

Also it would be possible to replace the guy with a woman if gay is disabled? Female of those creature for an hetero male character?

Does the persuasion mini game even work? I hacked the save setting stat to max and even beyond and it still always fail. also how about corrupting the guard with money?

>>19052

>Once found the dog rumor location with the guy taking it in the ass, the button remain but it does nothing, bug?

Definitively! I was unable to reproduce the bug. Did you disable any content ?

>>19052

>Also it would be possible to replace the guy with a woman if gay is disabled? Female of those creature for an hetero male character?

It was a commission, but I will think about an alternative as there will be a small story around this encounter : )

>>19052

>Does the persuasion mini game even work? I hacked the save setting stat to max and even beyond and it still always fail.

Good thing you hacked!

It depends. Which one was not working?

If you use stats which are opponent's strengths, you will always lose. Weakness should work.

If you are referring to the persuasion mini game in the Rich District, you have to have at least 50 in corresponding stat (or the right item on you).

>>19052

>also how about corrupting the guard with money?

It was planned and it will be added when I do the Persuasion mini-game v2.

>>19118

>Definitively! I was unable to reproduce the bug. Did you disable any content?

Originally i disabled menxmen content, still saw the gay scene, thinking the event may be related to it i reloaded a save before the encounter and re-enabled all content, same result, the button is there when visiting the market but do nothing, just return to selection screen as nothing happened

>It was a commission, but I will think about an alternative

Good to know, it wouldn't harm the commission and we get some more complete content, it would be interesting add a female of them option, if you play as a male, could change your reputation or something, add a pack quests to help or whatev

>Good thing you hacked!

After savescumming to redo persuasion in the rich district for the 5th times in a row and failing, i decided to take matter in my hands and see why i couldn't proceed, set all relevant stat to 100 by also increasing the limit, the stat where correct in the UI, but still failed every time, tested more then 10 times and had enough

>It was planned and it will be added when I do the Persuasion mini-game v2

Will also be the chance to slip away? Using agility or something, maybe the pack in the dog even can help if you know them?

HOW DO I GET THIS TO RUN ON WINDOWS 10!?!?

>>19206

>Originally i disabled menxmen content, still saw the gay scene, thinking the event may be related to it i reloaded a save before the encounter and re-enabled all content, same result, the button is there when visiting the market but do nothing, just return to selection screen as nothing happened

Thanks for the explanation. It should be fixed in the next release.

>>19206

>After savescumming to redo persuasion in the rich district for the 5th times in a row and failing, i decided to take matter in my hands and see why i couldn't proceed, set all relevant stat to 100 by also increasing the limit, the stat where correct in the UI, but still failed every time, tested more then 10 times and had enough

That's definitively not good. If you send me the general.log file (located at the root directory of the game) once you fail once, I can investigate the issue.

>>19206

>Will also be the chance to slip away? Using agility or something, maybe the pack in the dog even can help if you know them?

Yes, I was thinking more about a generic way of slipping way. If there is room around you and if you have enough agility/dexterity you can flee. Alternative ways like external help could be interesting.

>>19538

>HOW DO I GET THIS TO RUN ON WINDOWS 10!?!?

The easiest way is to download the window version and start the game with naohr.exe. You might need it to run as admin.

If/when it crashes, could you send me the file called general.log please? I will investigate the issue.

>>19690

do the attributes about how tall, thin, and what color your hair is actually appear in anything?

P.S. when you get art drawn, you should add a character portrait based on those attributes with *continuity* throughout the day. For example if you get cummed on early on in the day your character will have semen on their face until the next time they sleep

>>19749

>do the attributes about how tall, thin, and what color your hair is actually appear in anything?

originally it was planned. For the moment only breasts size modify some encounters but I am not really happy with the current system.

Love your idea of portrait. I added it to my backlog.

Latest release :

https://www.patreon.com/posts/symposium-is-12766250 and https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/the-symposium-is-about-teamwork/

Changelog : Simple closure for Symposium event with Sybille and Prestor. New event in the church area with a dominant slaver.

>>19542

By installing windows 7

can you play as trap?

>>19803

>can you play as trap?

Nope. There is nothing specific right now and you cannot customize enough your character to make him look like a girl.

I keep this idea in my backlog.

New version is available with a brand new calendar, the first periodic events in the farm (beware of the monsters) and bug fixes!

https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/07/16/bera-sernat/

https://www.patreon.com/posts/13033397

Feel free to share feedback : )

>>20322

How does one make use of furniture? The only slot I can find in my home is the bedroom, which only accepts the normal kinds of bed.

>>20337

>How does one make use of furniture? The only slot I can find in my home is the bedroom, which only accepts the normal kinds of bed.

You have to build a room using a blueprint and money. Those blueprints are automatically discovered with profession (that's something I will rework). For the moment only prostitute profession has some.

>>20322

Does the monster event happen only once?

Exploring the farm this tentacle monster even happened, the character managed to run away and i never saw the event again

Will your character ever be able to fuck this wolf creatures in the events? The one you find in the marketplace the first time knotting someone, then later a t the farm with a girl

>>20420

This event only happens once, but the monster will continue chasing you on other moon day(not yet implemented).

You will be able to get some intimacy with Sylvian but since it is a commissioned work, it might take some time.

A new version is available : https://www.patreon.com/posts/13236565 or https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/07/23/quest-all/

Changelog : Speed up loading (~20%), modal reworks and quest screens (quests are not yet available. It will take time.)

Slave design continues. I am working on the data representation now.

On the menu for this week you will be able to get two new skills which should greatly ease the persuasion mini-game (you can find them in the trait view under the "General" tab), two items that increase beauty and charisma and the Symposium quest (done to 60%) that should simplify the "implicit" Symposium quest. I also fixed the scrolling issue on large text, some highlight focus on in-game messaging popup and some trouble saving the settings.

Like previous weeks, I dedicated my time implementing the Slave extension. It will be more than just a profession with few special actions and traits. The data infrastructure and the core restriction mechanism are implemented in their first version. For the moment the PC can become a slave after a special event but that's hidden for now as there is no gameplay. The restrictions will be applied on the inventory (dress code & consumables), the room (decoration), the money usage and supervised trip. Hopefully next week there will be a very simple version to show!

Links :

https://www.patreon.com/posts/13703640

https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/08/06/first-slave-milestone/

Good day to you! New release 0.4.6 is available.

Short changelog:

Slave job is under progress

New locations : basement, main floor, canteen with dedicated events.

New NPCs : Jahiem (kinky stuff), Carol and Sebeett (kinky stuff).

New relationship mechanism, new food mechanism.

Now, as a slave you have content from 8AM to 2PM.

Sylvian road : new events.

Finished quests' implementation for Symposium (hetero sigil, gay sigil, hetero female partner and hetero male partner)

Upcoming : doing afternoon events, adding quests for morning events.

https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/08/27/lunch-time/ and

https://www.patreon.com/posts/14073733/

Here comes the release 0.4.7.

Short changelog:

Lending mechanism (a customer will rent you for few hours)

New customer : Lance, the Booty Shake sleazy bar owner.

Beginning of a lesbian path for prostitute.

Now, as a slave you have content from 8AM to 8PM.

Upcoming : more customers, more rules in the internal engine.

https://naohr.wordpress.com/2017/09/03/booty-shake/ and

https://www.patreon.com/posts/booty-shake-14198837

>>15023

>Namefaging

>emailfag

>prob a roastie

>shilling for her shitty game

Jesus fucking christ, kill yourself .