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Needs drawback for extra choices, as every fucking CYOA has. It may be cliché, but it works. There are so many munchkin min-maxed builds I can pretty much take over the world with that just lack one level one or two power.
Other than that, good idea and good content though. No typoes or shit either. Nicely laid-out content. As I said; add sort of drawbacks or ways to get more choices and perhaps add more powers and this'll be top-notch.