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The Fire Rises
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Bane?

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 No.137466

ITT: We novelize the intro scene by adding a few paragraphs at a time. I'll start the ball rolling.

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The day was cold and crisp, with a hint of fear in the air. CIA stood upright with his men, hands on his buckle, thumbs hooked underneath. Where are they? We're almost past schedule, he thought to himself. He had been selected as the agent to bring Dr. Pavel back in one piece. It wasn't exciting work, not the kind he'd expected to do when he joined the agency, but nonetheless, it was work. And if this goes right I might be able to get that promotion.

In the distance he saw a few birds in the grass fly away. He soon found himself thinking of his wife, his daughter, his life back home. Maybe I should have stayed in the military. He had a purpose there, a sense of belonging. Life was simple. Take orders, patrol with your unit, go home to your barracks. That all changed though after the accident. He was discharged and had few options, so he joined the agency. Working at the CIA brought him nothing but misery, but it was secure. He watched the birds grow smaller and smaller as they flew into the distance. He smiled and said, "Soon we’ll be flying", to no one in particular. His men gave him an odd look.

The soft rumble of the plane engine comforted him as he waited, contemplating his life up to this point. His wife was pregnant with their second child, and despite his low status at the agency, things were shaping up. The rumble of the engine seemed to be growing louder and louder, until he realized that it wasn’t the plane engine, but a distant sound. He squinted hard across the meadow, and spotted a truck approaching them. They’re here. It was time.

 No.137574

He had difficulty making it out at first, as the rising smoke from the signal fires that surrounded him still stung at his eyes. However, as the lumbering Jeep drew nearer, he peered through the windshield and recognized the face of Barsad, his contact. CIA knew very little about the man, only gleaning a few details from the dossier he had read on the flight over. Nevertheless, he gestured to his subordinates to fetch the briefcase full of unmarked bills the agency had prepared, as he knew that while soldiers of fortune speak in all different tongues, they are universally well-versed in the language of money.

The next face he recognized was that of the good Dr. Pavel, the man he had been charged to protect. Despite the distance between them, CIA could discern from the doctor's furrowed brow the weariness his ordeals had burdened him with. Unlike many of his compatriots within the agency, primarily steely-eyed G-men who threw themselves into their work and detached themselves from the trappings of civilian life, CIA felt a pang of sympathy for Pavel. The agent was a military man, after all, and understood that suffocating wastes of blood and ash were no place for a civilian.

What puzzled CIA the most were what appeared to be large black duffel bags in the backseat of the vehicle. Pavel couldn't have had an opportunity to pack that much luggage, could he? But wait - these weren't bags at all! They were men! Bound, and with bags placed over their heads! CIA was taken aback by this new development, and his confidence slowly gave way to a creeping feeling of unease. Nevertheless, he was a professional, and as the Jeep drew to a halt, with Barsad, Pavel, and even the three hooded men making their departure from the vehicle, he endeavored to put on a brave face and welcome the good doctor.


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>>137466

Already exists as a bonus in the Dark Knight Rises novelisation, but it's a bit short.




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